Lesson 16

[Sunil Pappu]

Sunil Pappu’s Profound Map Version 1

“What I learned doing this assignment is…how everything finally comes together to form a profound map that is full of profound moments with gradients of change and transformational journey to reveal the profound truth.”

SHINICHI – THE DISCIPLE: PROFOUND MAP VERSION 1

TITLE: SHINICHI – THE DISCIPLE

WRITTEN BY: SUNIL R PAPPU

1. What is Your Profound Truth?

A change in one single individual can bring about a change in the destiny of the world.

AUDIENCE CHANGE: Inspired to become the one in their own lives.

2. What is the Transformational Journey?

Old Ways: Innocent & gullible. Glamorizes war. Lost. Poor. Weakened by illness. Constrained by societal norms. Distrustful.

Journey: Meets his lifelong and eternal mentor Toda (change agent) whom he can trust. Toda teaches him the correct philosophy to live by. He vows to fulfil his mentor’s vision for world peace and becomes a change agent himself. He conducts dialogues for peace, culture and education and creates global solidarity.

New Ways: Wise. Determined. Hates war and conflict. Rich in heart. Fights through his illness. Encourages one-on-one to change tenets of a person’s heart right in front of him. Fights betrayal and corruption. Builds trust and empowers people. Creates a global movement spearheaded by ordinary people with stand-alone spirit.

Transformational Logline: A disillusioned Japanese nation and Soka Gakkai members in particular reeling from the devastating war seek world peace and annihilation of nuclear weapons and awaken to the profound truth that a change in one single individual can bring about a change in the destiny of the world to join their mentor Daisaku to spearhead a movement for global peace.

3. Who are Your Lead Characters?

Change Agent (the one causing the change): Josei Toda, Daisaku Ikeda

Transformable Character(s) (the one who makes the change): Young Daisaku, Soka Gakkai members, Japanese nation & SGI members worldwide

Betraying Character (if you have one): Soka Gakkai Attorney Masatomo Yamazaki; In collusion with: Soka Gakkai Vice President Genjiro Fukushima and Soka Gakkai Study Department Leader Takashi Harashima

Oppression: Nichiren Shoshu Priesthood, Warmongers, Geopolitical forces that threaten nuclear war & the Cold War.

4. How Do You Connect With Your Audience in the Beginning of the Movie?

Character: Young Daisaku (TC)

A. Relatability:

Young Daisaku and his brother play hide and seek with broken mirror shards.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: Children often find discarded things fun to play with.

B. Intrigue:

Young Daisaku wants to join the Army and secretly tries to enlist without his parents’ approval.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: Teens often want to be like their peers and would often hide things from their parents fearing their disapproval.

C. Empathy:

Young Daisaku is diagnosed with Tuberculosis and the doctors predict he may not live to the age of 30.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: Illness that robs loved ones, especially at a young age is something we can all empathise with. We want to root for him to beat his odds.

Young Daisaku’s home is bombed twice leaving nothing more than a suitcase of dolls and a pink umbrella in their possession, but his mother cheerfully remarks “We will be able to display the dolls once we rebuild our home again.”

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: Anyone who has been evicted from their home, lost all their possessions or, lived in a war-torn country.

Young Daisaku witnesses a US pilot parachute off his plane that’s caught fire being beaten up by people on the streets when he lands and gets taken away in a military van. The pilot is a young boy of not more than seventeen who looks scared and helpless and nothing like the enemy he’s imagined. He shares this incident with his mother who says: “Oh dear, the boy’s mother must be so worried for him.”

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We often see the world as US vs THEM while we forget the humanity of the other. Mothers on the other hand have an innate instinct to protect life and are not coloured by Jingoism and are often peacemakers.

D. Likability:

Young Daisaku, is a caring son who helps his mother in the family business of collecting seaweed by waking up at 3 am and diving into the cold seawater. He loves his grieving mother and feels helpless to ease her pain when his elder brother is killed in Burma. He dutifully serves his ailing bedridden father and takes care of his younger sibling while trying to be the man of the house and joins a munitions factory to eke out a living once his father’s thriving seaweed business collapses. Daisaku write a poem on the Morigasaki beach for his friend who feels lost and rudderless in life.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: A caring loving son, brother and a sincere friend.

Character: Soka Gakkai members (TC)

A. Relatability:

Ordinary hardworking people are affected by the war and the facing daily challenges of jobs, finances, relationships, and sickness while being misled by corrupt leaders and greedy politicians.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: They are one of us. We can relate to their daily struggles.

B. Intrigue:

Soka Gakkai members remain undefeated in the face of extreme challenges including being ridiculed by corrupt priests and ostracized by Unions and boycotted by their neighbours and co-workers. They still continue to fight and win their respect and become community leaders.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We are intrigued by the machinations of the Unions and priests to destroy the lives of sincere ordinary people and root for them to win.

C. Empathy:

The extreme injustices faced by the Soka Gakkai members for not toeing the line at their places of work, from their neighbours and in their communities is heart-breaking to see.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We can relate to these injustices in our own lives.

D. Likability:

Soka Gakkai members are optimistic and cheerful. They respect everyone and treat them as unique and irreplaceable comrades. They act as a “good friend” to even those who have been marginalized and ostracized and forgotten by society.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We all like having genuine sincere and cheerful friends who can always give us hope and be there in our times of need.

Character: Josei Toda (The Mentor – CA)

A. Relatability:

Young Daisaku meets Josei Toda for the first time, and he sees that he can trust this man who went to prison to uphold his principles and not succumb to the militarist government. He doesn’t try to sidestep his questions on “the meaning of life?” and “How to live the best life?” using intellectual babble like many leaders in society often do and comes across as sincere and honest and respectful. Daisaku relaxes in his first meeting and soon they converse like old lost friends.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We all feel nervous and out of place the first time we are in a large gathering and when we have to introduce ourselves. Most of us can sense the sincerity and genuineness of people in our first interactions with them. Many leaders in society rarely practice what they preach.

B. Intrigue:

Josei Toda is an educator with more than 40 businesses which all go bankrupt after the war but he is focused on rebuilding Soka Gakkai, an organization made up of volunteer ordinary people with the vision of wiping out the misery from their lives and making them happy. He has strong convictions in his vision and mission, but we are left to wonder how he will be able to do this when there is a clampdown by the government on all businesses and people are barely able to make ends meet with even government ration in short supply. He restarts his business waiting for the right time and creates a correspondence course for the youth who are out of school. He partners with his friends who betrayed him before the war, knowing that they are only interested in profits and do not really care for the cause. Will this be enough to change the tragic destiny of the nation? How can he turn this situation around? Will he be betrayed again?

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We want Toda to succeed but we are intrigued by his methods.

C. Empathy:

Toda decides that on principle he wants to pay back his investors even though the government doesn’t honour even the fire insurance on his old office building that has been razed to the ground by the bombings. Even his business friends think he’s being too idealistic, no one expects to recoup their investments before the war, but Toda is adamant. The investors, however, hound him and abuse and embarrass him for being late on his payments. Young Daisaku faces their wrath silently while seething with anger on the inside.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We can empathise with injustice and greed when someone is trying to do the honourable thing.

D. Likability:

Josei Toda has a great sense of humour and in an early morning lecture trying to illustrate how important thoughts and words are asks someone in his class “Do you want a dog?” When the man nods. Toda draws the image of a dog on the blackboard and asks him “What is this?” The man replies: “It’s a dog.” Toda says: “Okay then, take it!” He once tells Young Daisaku while taking a stroll at the university campus “One day we will build our own University that will have students from all over the world but for now, all I can treat you to is a subsidized cup of coffee at the student cafeteria!”

He calls Daisaku to his home on Sundays to teach him every subject he can think of and tells him he will be the foremost scholar in the world and able to hold a conversation with the world’s leading thinkers and leaders one day.

When Daisaku is arrested on false charges, Toda in his frail health rushes to the airport before his interrogation and pleads with him “Daisaku please don’t die. You have to live for me.”

Before his death, he tells Daisaku “I had a dream that I went in Mexico. Daisaku, I want you to travel the world on my behalf. There are people waiting everywhere for you.”

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: To have a mentor who really cares for you and sets impossible dreams in life that allow us to surpass them is a rare and unique thing.

Character: Daisaku Ikeda (CA)

A. Relatability:

Daisaku joins the Boys Magazine, and he knows nothing about the publishing world and feels like he doesn’t belong. He struggles to learn on the job and has to quit night school in order to help his mentor rebuild his businesses when he steps down as Soka Gakkai president to protect the organization from any bad press associated with his business failings.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We all had the fish-out-water experience in our first jobs where you need to learn things on the job that you were not aware of.

B. Intrigue:

Daisaku is arrested on false charges and is forced to confess to the charges to save his mentor – The Osaka Trial. He reluctantly assumes the presidency of Soka Gakkai after Toda’s death when the media predicts a collapse of the organization even with the Osaka trial still hanging over his head. He meets with scheming Nichiren Shoshu priests to have a dialogue and protect the members. He is betrayed by his own attorney. He steps down from the presidency to alleviate the situation, but it only gets worse. He journeys to China and Russia even as the Japanese politicians view this with deep scepticism. He meets with US and Russian counterparts during the Cuban Missile Crisis and is warned by an influencing politician to call off his meeting with President Kennedy. He stands outside the Berlin Wall and vows to bring it down. He meets the world’s leading philosophers and leaders as an ordinary citizen. How will he transform the deeply divided nations and bring them together? How does he do it just as an ordinary citizen?

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We want Daisaku to succeed and live to change the world. We are intrigued by how he plans to accomplish such an impossible goal of a world free from hatred, violence, and nuclear weapons.

C. Empathy:

Daisaku pushes himself beyond his physical limits despite severe tuberculosis and runs a high fever on most days but never allows his frail health to stop him from meeting people and encouraging them. He uses his time even while travelling and resting to dictate notes for his articles and books, constantly thinking about the future.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: We have all pushed ourselves physically but to do it on a sustained level for decades is not easy but relatable especially those sleepless nights trying to finish an important project or meet a deadline at work.

D. Likability:

Daisaku Ikeda is charming and treats even the people behind the scenes with immense respect. He always goes to meet them first before entering any event or building. He thanks everyone he meets. He loves children and plays with them with zeal. He is a photographer who captures nature in all its stunning natural beauty, he plays the piano to warm the hearts of members who are not allowed to meet him, and he sends thoughtful poems and messages to people he meets hoping to spark a fresh start in their lives.

CONNECT TO AUDIENCE: He values people and listens to them. He seeks out those not just in the limelight but the ones toiling away behind the scenes unnoticed by everyone. He genuinely cares for everyone.

5. What is the Gradient of the Change?

The 3 Gradients: Desired Change (for Young Daisaku)

Emotional Gradient: Excitement

Action Gradient: Daisaku wants to enlist like his brothers in the war. He believes the military propaganda.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: He doesn’t get his parent’s permission.

W: He has tuberculosis

Emotional Gradient: Doubt

Action Gradient: Japan loses the war. Daisaku’s home is bombed twice. The warmongers turn pacifists to save themselves. Brother dies in Burma.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: Doesn’t know who to trust anymore?

W: Doctors say he won’t live to 30. Doesn’t know how to help his mother grieve her sons.

Emotional Gradient: Hope

Action Gradient: Daisaku meets his mentor Toda. Decides he can trust him and joins Soka Gakkai. Drops out of school to support Toda’s business and gets private lessons from him.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: What is the meaning of life?

W: Ignorance

Emotional Gradient: Discouragement

Action Gradient: Toda steps down from presidency as his businesses go bankrupt… Daisaku imprisoned on false charges… Toda dies… Media predicts the collapse of the organization.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: How to reinstate Toda as president? How to protect Toda and members? Who will succeed?

W: Self-doubt

Emotional Gradient: Courage

Action Gradient: Daisaku assumes the presidency. Begins his worldwide journey for peace.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: First Priesthood issue. Asked to step down.

W: Gives in to the demands if it will quell the injustices to members but they only intensify

Emotional Gradient: Triumph

Action Gradient: Dialogues with world leaders. Establishes SGI and becomes the president. UN peace proposals. UN treaty to ban nuclear weapons.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: Excommunicated by Nichiren Shoshu

W: Running out of time. Turns 96

3 Gradients: Forced change (For Soka Gakkai members, Japanese nation, SGI and the world)

Emotional Gradient: Denial

Action Gradient 1: Soka Gakkai members who betrayed Toda’s mentor Makiguchi to save their families and businesses are unapologetic.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: Soka Gakkai members seek Toda’s help

W: Betrayal

Action Gradient 2: Media predicts a collapse of the organization after Toda’s death

C: Soka Gakkai members seek a mentor

W: Lost

Action Gradient 3: The nuclear explosion on Hiroshima ends the war

C: Nuclear nations deem it a necessary evil

W: Fear of the other

Emotional Gradient: Anger

Action Gradient 1: Senior leaders protest when Toda restarts the Organization and doesn’t consult them.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: Toda doesn’t trust his business partners, but they are all he has

W: Mistrust

Action Gradient 2: Soka Gakkai members harassed by Nichiren Shoshu; Daisaku is arrested on false charges

C: Maintain Unity of Laity and Priesthood; To protect his mentor Toda and prove his innocence at trial

W: Priesthood jealous of Soka Gakkai; Confesses to false charges to protect Toda

Action Gradient 3: Japanese nation is devastated, and people are angry with food shortage and inflation

C: United Nations formed

W: Cold War begins

Emotional Gradient: Bargaining

Action Gradient 1: The members are only looking for their selfish motives.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: Toda uses the excuse of drinks and dinner to reeducate them on the philosophy

W: Self-serving

Action Gradient 2: Nichiren Shoshu makes unreasonable demands; Yubai Coal Miners Union harasses workers who are Soka Gakkai members; Osaka members rally against the corrupt police

C: Maintain Unity of Laity and Priesthood; Innocent are persecuted

W: Priesthood jealous of Soka Gakkai; Righteousness

Action Gradient 3: Cold war and nuclear arms race begins

C: Nuclear nations amass weapons

W: Deterrence

Emotional Gradient: Depression

Action Gradient 1: Toda’s businesses fail and all his employees bad mouth him and desert him

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: Toda is all alone and decides to step down from his post to save the organization

W: Lonely

Action Gradient 2: Daisaku steps down as president of Soka Gakkai

C: To protect Soka Gakkai members from harassment by Priesthood

W: Priesthood tries to create a wedge between Daisaku and Soka Gakkai members

Action Gradient 3: Berlin War erected and Cuban Missile Crisis

C: De-escalation to prevent a third world war

W: Mistrust and lack of communication

Emotional Gradient: Acceptance

Action Gradient 1: Toda takes up presidency again and vows to increase membership to 750000 Households in his lifetime and asks members to join him; Daisaku is the only one who makes his mentor’s vow his own and fights alongside.

Challenge / Weakness Gradient:

C: He makes a powerful vow that he alone will accomplish; Who will succeed him?

W: Frail health and dead; Successors to fulfil his vision

Action Gradient 2: Daisaku assumes the presidency of the worldwide organization SGI

C: Priesthood excommunicates the Soka Gakkai organization

W: Soka Gakkai members celebrate their spiritual freedom and trust their mentor Daisaku

Action Gradient 3: Daisaku initiates dialogues with world leaders on either side, writes peace proposals every year to the UN and Soka Gakkai with the help of Hibakusha launches a campaign for the elimination of Nuclear weapons

C: Nuclear weapons annihilation petition signatories

W: Security Council states remain non-committal

6. What is the Transformational Structure of Your Story?

MINI-MOVIE STRUCTURE:

MM1: (Status Quo)

1941, Tokyo – Two boys, Daisaku and his elder brother Kiichi play with broken mirror shards from their mother’s dressing table.

War breaks out. Military propaganda in schools. Elder brother is enlisted in the Japanese Army. Educators Toda and Makiguchi are arrested.

Daisaku tries to enlist without telling his parents.

Air raids in Japan destroy Ikeda’s home twice. Daisaku and his younger brother salvage a doll house and a pink umbrella. His mother still remains cheerful. Daisaku’s bedridden father finds out and fights to keep Daisaku at home.

Daisaku joins the munitions factory.

Daisaku is diagnosed with tuberculosis doctors say he won’t live until 30. Daisaku is lost and defeated. Meets his friend on Morigasaki beach to discuss their path in life and feels helpless to guide his friend correctly.

Meanwhile, Educator and founder of Soka Gakkai, Makiguchi dies in prison, Josei Toda vows revenge by rebuilding Soka Gakkai.

US Pilot, a young boy of 17, parachutes onto the streets and gets beaten up – Daisaku shares the incident with his mother. Her immediate reaction and worry for the boy despite him being an enemy opens his eyes to the magnanimous heart of a mother and her immense compassion.

World Events: World War 2 breaks out. Japan faces devastation and suffering. Yalta conference. Japanese Occupation.

Turning Point (Call to Adventure): Daisaku encounters his mentor, Josei Toda, who awakens him to the mission for world peace.

World Event: Indian Independence.

Change Agent: Josei Toda (The Mentor)

Transformational Characters: Young Daisaku, Japanese nation, Soka Gakkai members.

Old Ways: Buys into the war propaganda of the state; youth are enlisted; schools are converted to munitions factories; Loss of young people and family members in war; Air raids and bombings that destroy homes and devastating atomic bombings; Angered by the spiritual void and betrayal of warmongers turned pacifists overnight; Nation faces food shortage and high inflation and occupation forces; Youth question the meaning and purpose of life while school are closed; Mistrust fraudulent intellectuals and politicians who sang praises of war and drove large numbers of youth to their deaths

The Vision: Toda vows to rebuild Soka Gakkai and says “I will eradicate misery from the face of this earth”

Challenges: Daisaku doesn’t get his parents’ permission to enlist. A nation whose youth have lost purpose and meaning in life

Weaknesses: Daisaku has tuberculosis; Ignorance and suffering

MM2: (Denial of Call)

Daisaku Ikeda, struggling with his illness and feeling betrayed by the nation’s leaders, initially doubts his ability to bring about change in a world devastated by war.

He loses his elder brother to war and seeing his mother’s pain and grief shows him the futility of war and he avows to stop the next war at all costs.

He recalls his brother’s words on the barbaric nature of war on the frontlines.

World Event: Daisaku’s brother dies in Burma, highlighting the personal impact of the war.

Turning Point (Locked into Conflict): Daisaku witnesses the suffering of his nation while grieving the loss of his brother, decides to join Toda to create a world free from misery and war.

Challenges: Doesn’t know who to trust anymore?

Weaknesses: Doctors say he won’t live to 30. Doesn’t know how to help his mother grieve the loss of her son.

MM3: (Hero tries to solve problem)

Daisaku and Toda work together to rebuild the organization Soka Gakkai to empower ordinary people for a peaceful world.

Daisaku drops out of school to support Toda’s business. Joins Boys magazine.

World Events: Cold War and Space race begins.

Turning Point (Standard Ways Fail): Daisaku’s efforts face opposition from arrogant priests and calculating warmongers. Toda goes bankrupt and steps down as president of Soka Gakkai.

Change Agent: Daisaku – drops out of school to stick with his mentor Toda while everyone else quickly forget their promises and leave their mentor.

Toda’s Vision: “Ordinary people are great. Those who have suffered the most have the greatest right to happiness.”

Daisaku’s Vow: Tells Toda: “I have chosen to follow you till my last breath of life.” Asks Toda: “Will you still be my mentor?”

Old Ways: Members mistrust warmongers turn pacifists to save their hide from the occupation forces.

New Ways: Finding a mentor whom one can trust

MM4: (Hero Forms New Plan)

Daisaku realizes that he needs a larger, better plan to counter the oppression and betrayal. Daisaku stays with Toda and gets him back on his feet while facing the wrath of the investors. He takes private tuitions from his mentor and calls it Toda University.

He gets Toda reinstated as president of Soka Gakkai. Toda vows to introduce 750000 households in his lifetime and establish correct teachings in Japanese society.

Kasahara incident – Priesthood reprimands Toda and asks him to resign from his post as head of the lay believers of Nichiren Shoshu.

Toda’s declaration against nuclear weapons resonates globally as the world faces the potential of nuclear conflict. He hands over the baton to his youthful successors, especially Daisaku.

World Event: Cold War tensions escalate, and the nuclear arms race intensifies.

Turning Point or Mid-point (Plan Backfires): Daisaku is arrested on false election violation charges. Daisaku confesses to save his mentor who is frail from illness. Toda dies fulfilling his mission as Soka Gakkai membership reaches 750,000 households.

New Ways: Fights in local elections to root out corruption; Daisaku schooled at “Toda University” – private tuitions by his mentor Toda; Takes the baton of world peace from Toda

Challenges: How to reinstate Toda as president? How to protect Toda and Soka Gakkai members?

Weaknesses: Self-doubt; Daisaku gets arrested

MM5: (Hero Retreats & Antagonist prevails)

Daisaku assumes the presidency of Soka Gakkai as the media speculates a collapse of the organization after Toda’s death.

Arrogant priests impose restrictions on Soka Gakkai, causing internal conflict and setbacks.

Yubari Coal Miners and sincere Soka Gakkai members face a boycott from their communities while Ikeda rushes to support them fight for their rights.

World Event: Berlin Wall is erected, symbolizing the divisions in the world.

Turning Point (The Decision to Change): Geopolitical forces continue to justify the existence of nuclear weapons despite the declaration. Daisaku vows at the Berlin wall to bring it down.

New Ways: peace, culture and education as tools to express mentor’s vision; Fighting back the priesthood and Yubai Coal Miners’ union

MM6: (Hero’s Bigger, Better Plan)

Daisaku and Soka Gakkai members unite to challenge the oppression and betrayal by the trio led by Soka Gakkai’s attorney Yamazaki.

Soka Gakkai and SGI led by Daisaku undergo a period of rapid global expansion from 1980-2000.

World Events: Daisaku’s global dialogues with China and Russia coincide with significant events like the Cuban Missile Crisis and JFK Assassination. He regrets not meeting President Kennedy after cancelling his trip to placate a prominent Japanese Politician.

Turning Point (The Ultimate Failure): Daisaku steps down as president of Soka Gakkai while he continues his dialogues with world leaders. SGI members from 55 countries meet and establish Soka Gakkai International in Guam and appoint Daisaku as their President.

Betraying Characters: Soka Gakkai Attorney Masatomo Yamazaki; In collusion with: Soka Gakkai Vice President Genjiro Fukushima and Soka Gakkai Study Department Leader Takashi Harashima

New Ways: Dialogues for peace with neighbours and community

Challenges: First Priesthood issue. Daisaku asked to step down; Daisaku is barred from attending meetings and encouraging members of Soka Gakkai.

Weaknesses: Daisaku gives in to the demands if it will quell the injustices to members, but they only intensify; Soka Gakkai members who rely on their mentor feel lost; Soka Gakkai leaders remain silent as Daisaku is silenced.

MM7: (Crisis & Climax)

Daisaku starts writing UN peace proposals in 1983 and building institutions to promote peace, culture and education which win international recognition.

SGI members unite with their mentor Daisaku despite severe attempts to create a schism between them by the Nichiren Shoshu priests.

Soka Gakkai is excommunicated by Nichiren Shoshu but the members are unperturbed as they celebrate it as the day of Spiritual Independence.

World Events: Cold War ends, and Berlin Wall comes down, marking a shift in global dynamics.

Turning Point (Apparent Victory): Daisaku’s resilience and support from Soka Gakkai members lead to a surge in global membership.

New Ways: Dialogues with world leaders and thinkers; Exhibitions for peace, culture and education; Soka schools to foster the next generations of global citizens.

Vision: Daisaku tells Soka Gakkai members to celebrate their ex-communication from Nichiren Shoshu as the day of Spiritual independence.

Challenges: Soka Gakkai is ex-communicated by Nichiren Shoshu.

Weaknesses: Soka Gakkai refused a chance to have any dialogue with the Nichiren Shoshu priests. Daisaku Ikeda running out of time due to old age turning 96.

MM8: (New Better World)

Daisaku conducts over 8000 dialogues for peace and completes writing 30 volumes of his novel series The New Human Revolution.

SGI has 12 million members in 192 countries and territories. Youth vow to carry on his legacy of peace with the spirit “I am Shinichi.”

Ikeda receives receiving 390 honorary doctorates and over 800 honorary citizenships. He establishes world-renowned Soka Schools, Soka University, Min-On Concert and Fuji Art Museum, and many other institutions. Ikeda is awarded as World Poet Laureate.

Daisaku makes every dream of his mentor Toda a reality even the ones he said to him half-jokingly.

Daisaku’s relentless efforts culminate in Soka Gakkai’s support for the UN treaty to ban nuclear weapons.

World Event: SGI supports ICAN on the UN treaty, reflecting a global push for nuclear disarmament.

Epilogue: (New Status Quo)

Daisaku Ikeda is awarded the Nobel Peace Prize, cementing his legacy as a change agent for a better world.

The world acknowledges the profound truth that a single individual’s transformation can shape the destiny of a nation and the whole of mankind.

World Event: Daisaku’s global impact and peace efforts continue as the world faces ongoing challenges.

Final Turning Point: Daisaku Ikeda’s journey for peace continues through his writings and the global impact of his dialogues, leaving a lasting legacy. Soka Gakkai members work together for a more peaceful, sustainable future.

New Ways: Building a global solidarity of more than 12 million worldwide; SGI partners ICAN to petition nations to sign the UN treaty to ban nuclear weapons

Profound Truth: A change in one single individual can bring about a change in the destiny of the world.

7. How are the “Old Ways” Challenged?

A. Challenge through Questioning

Old Way: Buying into the war propaganda of the state

Question Challenges: Elder brother questions the war. There is nothing just about the war. It’s not honourable.

Question Challenges: Air raids destroy the homes and raze the school buildings.

Question Challenges: Atomic bombs destroy Hiroshima and Nagasaki

Question Challenges: Occupation forces take over the country.

Question Challenges: People face food shortages and high inflation.

Old Way: State Shinto religion will protect our soldiers and win us the war.

Question Challenges: Toda and his mentor refuse the Shinto talisman and get locked up in jail as thought criminals.

Old Way: We need priests to conduct religious rituals.

Question Challenges: Soka Gakkai members question: Why do we need to respect priests and listen to them when they are going against their own teacher and teachings of respect for all life?

Old Way: Soka Gakkai members wait for their mentor’s instructions.

Question Challenges: When Daisaku is banned from meeting members he writes poems, songs, and plays piano to encourage them

Old Way: nuclear weapons are necessary as a deterrent.

Question Challenges: Cuban missile crisis brings the world to the brink due to a misunderstanding and scepticism and mistrust between the cold war nations.

Question Challenges: Ikeda sends concrete peace proposals to the UN since 1983 every year reiterating his mentor’s stance on nuclear weapons.

Old Way: Daisaku tries to pacify the Priesthood by giving in to their demands

Question Challenges: Priesthood continues to mistreat members and places even more restrictions on the members and leaders of Soka Gakkai

B. Challenge by Counterexample

Old Way: Youth enlist for the ‘just war.’ Others join munition factories.

Counterexamples: US pilot parachuting down from his burning plane is beaten in the streets as the enemy – is a mere 17-year-old helpless youth who is taken by the military police as a war criminal. Daisaku feels sorry for the boy and tells his mother about it. She worries for the mother of the boy instead.

Counterexamples: Warmongers turn pacifists overnight to save their skin and avoid persecution by the occupation forces.

Counterexamples: With schools’ shutdown, youth seek correspondence courses even as they fight to stay alive

Old Way: Daisaku has Tuberculosis and the doctor predict he won’t live to see 30.

Counterexamples: Daisaku seeks a mentor he can trust as he searches for the best way to live life.

Counterexamples: Daisaku drops school to join Toda University and support his mentor’s businesses.

Counterexamples: Daisaku meets the world’s leading philosophers, leaders and thinkers conducting over 8000 dialogues for peace and winning over 200 honorary doctorates and 390 honorary citizenships around the world. He is alive at 96.

Old Way: State Shinto religion will protect our soldiers and win us the war.

Counterexamples: The Emperor steps down to let the Occupation forces take over their country

Counterexamples: Occupation forces pass laws that allow people freedom of religion

Old Way: People of the nation mistrust the politicians and intellectuals.

Counterexamples: Toda rebuilds the organization Soka Gakkai to empower people and eradicate misery from their lives.

Old Way: We need priests to conduct religious rituals.

Counterexamples: Priesthood turns corrupt and refuses to bury a Soka Gakkai member’s relative in a family-owned plot on the temple premises unless they denounce their faith in Soka Gakkai.

Counterexamples: Soka Gakkai builds a memorial ground for Soka Gakkai members to use freely. They conduct the funeral rituals with sanctity and respect.

Old Way: Soka Gakkai members wait for their mentor’s instructions.

Counterexamples: Osaka members stage a protest outside the detention centre demanding the release of Daisaku by the police who harshly interrogate him for three days.

Counterexamples: Yubari coal miners refuse to vote for the union candidate in the elections even at the cost of losing their jobs and being ostracized from their communities.

Old Way: nuclear weapons are necessary as a deterrent.

Counterexamples: Toda’s nuclear declaration states that anyone who supports the nuclear weapons is “a fiend and a monster”

Old Way: Daisaku tries to pacify the Priesthood by giving in to their demands

Counterexamples: The Corrupt Soka Gakkai Attorney plays both sides to make money and stokes the fires between Gakkai and Nichiren Shoshu priesthood

Counterexamples: Daisaku steps down as Soka Gakkai president but is made the honorary president of Soka Gakkai International and he continues to travel the world conducting dialogues for peace

Counterexamples: Daisaku declares the day of their ex-communication as one of Spiritual independence and celebrates their freedom from the narrow-minded corrupt priesthood.

C. Challenge by “Should Work, But Doesn’t”

Old Way: Daisaku’s friend comes to him desperate to find answers.

SWBD Challenge: He trusts Daisaku but what he’s seeking is a new way of life. Daisaku tries to convince him, but he has no real solution. He fails his friend who decides to join one of the spurious religions that crop up right after the war ends in Japan that misleads young people.

Old Way: Toda wants to restart his businesses after the war and takes advice from his politician friend to time the launch of his new venture.

SWBD Challenge: Toda’s business ventures fail despite getting the timing right. He realizes that he needs to first rebuild the Soka Gakkai organization and then focus on his businesses. Toda regularly holds evening guidance sessions after his office hours and even takes study lectures in the morning for his staff before they begin their work. They hit their first subscription milestone in record time.

Old Way: Toda steps down as President of the Soka Gakkai to protect the organization from his business failures.

SWBD Challenge: Daisaku worries that he no longer has a mentor but Toda tells him he will always be his mentor even if he is no longer the President. Daisaku vows to reinstate him and rebuilds his businesses after dropping out of night school. Toda repays his business debts and is reinstated as Soka Gakkai president.

Old Way: Soka Gakkai members rally outside the Osaka detention centre while the police harshly interrogate Daisaku on false election charges.

SWBD Challenge: Daisaku is released after he makes a false confession to protect his mentor Toda. The lawyers see his case as hopeless. Daisaku continues to fight the case in court for over four years and finally proves his innocence and gets acquitted of all charges two years after his mentor has passed away. Daisaku vows to always carry his mentor in his heart and fight against injustice.

Old Way: Mistrust between US and Russia during the cold war as they begin the arms race and the space race.

SWBD Challenge: The regular channels of communication increase their misunderstanding and mistrust and the rhetoric becomes increasingly hostile on both ends during the cold war and leads to the Cuban Missile Crisis.

Old Way: Daisaku steps down as President of Soka Gakkai to appease the Soka Gakkai leadership and the Nichiren Shoshu Priesthood

SWBD Challenge: Nichiren Shoshu priests impose more restrictions on the members and ban Daisaku from public appearances trying to create a rift between him and the Soka Gakkai members. Daisaku feels helpless as he can’t see the members’ pain and suffering and writes songs, and poems and even plays the piano to members who wait outside the building trying to catch a glimpse of him at the window. He finally launches a counterattack and meets pioneering members all over Japan and creates a new groundswell of resistance as members fight back the priesthood in their local communities.

D. Challenge through Living Metaphor

Old Way: Daisaku’s friend seeks answers that Daisaku cannot provide and both feel lost and helpless.

LM Challenge: Daisaku writes a song about his friend titled “Morigasaki beach,” reminiscing their time together. The beach represents their youth and hope while beyond the sea lies a vast world, they must journey each in their separate ways. He wishes he had the answer he has now to give his friend and tell him about the path he took. It is the right path and wishes he knew about it then. He searches for his friend after many years and reunites with him.

Old Way: Soka Gakkai members in Yubari are intimidated by the Coal Miners Union to vote for the union candidate in the local elections.

LM Challenge: The Soka Gakkai members and their families are ostracized and ridiculed by their community. Daisaku rushes to support them and reminds them about Daishonin’s exile on Sado Island. Yubari is their Sado Island and they stand strong and remain undefeated. In the end, the Union apologizes, and they get their jobs back and win the trust of their community.

Old Way: Soka Gakkai members save up to sincerely contribute to the building of the Grand Reception Hall at the head temple.

LM Challenge: The High priest destroy the buildings constructed from sincere members’ contribution on flimsy pretexts. The Members continue to support the temples despite harsh treatment for being Soka Gakkai members. The Grand Reception Hall represents their sincerity and commitment to the harmonious unity of the priesthood and laity.

Old Way: Berlin Wall is erected dividing the world into two.

LM Challenge: The hostility on both sides leads to the separation of many families who are trapped on opposite sides of the wall. The world because increasingly divided as nations take sides to create a new geopolitical landscape. Daisaku vows to bring the Berlin Wall down and conducts dialogues with world leaders on both sides and brings them closer eventually bringing down the Berlin wall after 28 years.

Old Way: nuclear weapons are necessary as a deterrent.

LM Challenge: Nuclear states oppose the treaty to ban nuclear weapons. Numerous summits and proposals are signed but the nations are entrenched in their positions. Soka Gakkai partners with the NGO, ICAN and uses powerful personal stories of the Hibakusha who have experienced the tragedy of nuclear weapons first-hand. The nuclear weapons ban treaty is supported by more than 150 countries and requires the nuclear states to join for it to be passed into law.

Old Way: Soka Gakkai members wait for their mentor’s instructions

LM Challenge: Daisaku asks youth to lead a song “Song of Comrades” for their mentor but they are scolded. Daisaku makes them practice the song again and again and sing aloud so their voices reach their mentor. The song is a metaphor for their determination to win for the sake of their mentor. Another time they make a little to carry their mentor and get scolded that they would lose in battle if they were to carry such a large litter. Toda confides in Daisaku later that he is moved by their sincerity but it’s still too big to be of practical use.

Old way: Daisaku drops out of night school to support his mentor’s business

LM Challenge: Daisaku is constantly humiliated by creditors and he feels lonely and defeated. Toda starts taking private tuitions for Daisaku and quizzes him about the books he is reading. Daisaku proudly calls it “Toda University.” He goes on to hold dialogues with thinkers and philosophers in various fields and at a lecture in Harvard declares that 99% of everything he is today is because of his mentor. He receives more than 200 honorary degrees from the world’s renowned universities and institutions.

8. How are You Presenting Insights through Profound Moments?

A. Action delivers insight

New Ways and Insights:

War always hits mothers the hardest.

Mothers are resilient even in the face of war.

There is no enemy or ‘US Vs Them’ – in a war, everyone is a victim.

There are no victors in a war.

War is a tragedy that should be avoided at all costs.

Destruction takes no time while reconstruction takes a lifetime or more.

There are no good and bad people only good and bad deeds.

It’s better to stick with a known devil at least you know what you’re dealing with.

spirit of not compromising one’s beliefs – Although I might obey in body, in my heart I could never comply.

Having a good mentor in life is the greatest good fortune.

There is no greater joy to awaken to one’s mission in life.

Anyone who justifies using nuclear weapons is a fiend and a monster.

Think global, act local.

Frank and sincere dialogue opens hearts that are closed and lead the way to trust.

People who have suffered the most deserve the greatest happiness.

A real mentor is someone who wants his disciples to surpass him.

A single individual can change the course of history a nation and all mankind.

Action #1:

Daisaku’s home is destroyed in the air raids. From the rubble of their home, they salvage a suitcase. Daisaku quickly pries it open to discover a set of pink dolls. Her mother smiles with glee and cuddles them. Daisaku kicks the suitcase in frustration. His mother dusts the dolls and gently places them back in the suitcase. She hands the suitcase over to Daisaku. Daisaku drags the suitcase along amongst the destruction all around. His mother remarks “The dolls will make a fine display for their new home.”

Action # 2:

Daisaku watches a US pilot parachute down from his burning plane and land on the streets in front of him. The pilot is a young boy of barely 17 who looks scared. The crowd on the streets rushes to capture and beat up the boy while Daisaku stands by helpless. The military police van comes around to arrest the pilot as a prisoner of war. The crowd chants for the enemy to be executed. Daisaku relays the story to his mother when he gets home. His mother responds: “Poor mother, she must be worried for her son.”

Action # 3:

Toda entices his colleagues who betrayed their mentor before the war to join him in rebuilding the organization and saving the people suffering from the aftermath of the war. But his businessmen friends are interested in is to find a way to quickly make money and get rich. They agree to meet him for drinks, but Toda lays a condition that they will discuss the reconstruction first and then open the bottle after dinner. He meets them repeatedly until they can see his seriousness about carrying on their mentor’s legacy and genuinely feel remorse for abandoning their mentor. They seek Toda’s forgiveness and join him in helping rebuild the Soka Gakkai.

Action # 4:

Daisaku reluctantly agreed to accompany his friends to a Soka Gakkai meeting after months of excuses to get out of it. He ambles into the home where the meeting is already underway and hears genuine laughter coming from the dimly lit room. He cautiously enters it and sits in the back so he can easily slip away if needed. He locks eyes with the man who is leading the meeting Mr. Toda. Toda puffing away at his rolled cigarette sits on the edge of the table ready to take any questions. He seems jovial and genuine. After a few raised hands and humorous exchanges Daisaku raises his hand to ask a question. Toda nods. Daisaku asks: “What is the genuine path one should take to lead a good life?” Toda smiles but responds sternly “Rather than deciding intellectually what the true meaning of life is. Why don’t you try to live your life in the best way possible? Would you like to try doing that? I can teach you how?” Daisaku is struck by his frankness and feels he can trust this man. He returns ten days later to join Soka Gakkai and takes Toda as his lifelong mentor.

Action # 5:

Daisaku is abused and spat on by a credit and the doors are banged shut on his face. He returns to the office dejected. He sees Soka Gakkai members waiting outside to meet Toda and they all look lost and defeated. A member emerges from Toda’s office feeling refreshed and ready to fight. Toda notices Daisaku and lets him in. He goes over the books and sees everything in red. He tries to cheer Daisaku up. Toda tells him: “I know what you’re thinking. How the hell did I ever run forty businesses? How can you be so honest and still do business? Why should we pay the creditors when the losses can be written off as forces of god, like every other businessman? I will tell you why? Because this is my destiny – my karmic reward if you will. So, it’s a debt I would rather pay. Do you understand? I know it is frustrating when the creditors abuse you and spit on your face acting all high and mighty like they deserve it. We must look at this with a smile and rejoice because we are receiving our retribution in a lighter form. So let’s go back to them again and again and cheerfully take on their abuses with a smile. Daisaku goes back and continues to apologize to the creditors for only making part payments to their debt and promises to return again with more. Over a period of time, they are no longer in the red and while Toda continues to hold guidance sessions, more and more Soka Gakkai members feel empowered after being rekindled by Toda’s guidance and awaken to their mission to work for the happiness of others. Daisaku reinstates Toda as the Second President of Soka Gakkai.

Action # 6:

Daisaku stops over at the Haneda airport on his way to Osaka to get arrested on false charges of election violations by the police. Toda frail from illness rushes to meet Daisaku and tells him “You must live. For my sake.” Daisaku is paraded in handcuffs in front of the local Osaka members as he’s taken for interrogation. Daisaku is harshly interrogated without food and sleep to admit to the false charges or they will put Toda in jail. He spends three sleepless nights and decides to confess to the crimes to protect his mentor. Osaka members rally outside, and Toda joins them in protests to get Daisaku released. Daisaku emerges in the evening of the fourth day walking out in the pouring rain and stands with Soka Gakkai members drenched in the rain to give them hope and encouragement. He later fights the charges in court over four long years and proves his innocence. He reports his win in front of his mentor’s grave as it pours down heavily.

Action # 7:

Toda is interrupted to say there is a phone call from the Japanese Prime Minister Mine. The prime Minister having been warned by his own cabinet members decides to cave into their demand and declines the invitation to attend the Soka Gakkai youth gathering that Daisaku and 6000 youth have spent months making painstaking preparations for on the day of the March 16 event. Toda slams the phone on the prime minister even as he apologizes making excuses and agreeing to send his wife and son in his stead. Toda goes ahead with the event as planned and makes a powerful declaration for the elimination of nuclear weapons. Daisaku standing in the audience resolves to carry on his mentor’s legacy. Decades later he starts writing peace proposals to the UN every year including the path to elimination of nuclear weapons. Many of his proposals are put into action by the United Nations and he is a recipient of numerous international honors including the United Nations Peace Medal (1983), the International Tolerance Award from the Simon Wiesenthal Center (1993), the Rosa Parks Humanitarian Award (2008), and the Gandhi International Peace Prize for Social Responsibility (2014). The lay organization Soka Gakkai International is also nominated for the Nobel Peace Prize in 2015.

Action # 8:

Daisaku faces the media as he embarks on his trip to Russia at the height of the cold war. Top Japanese politicians condemn this trip and ask why does a Buddhist leader want to visit a country that doesn’t believe in religion? Daisaku answers a reporter at the airport: “I’m going there to meet people. … I’m making this trip to build bridges of friendship linking people’s hearts.” He meets Aleksey N. Kosygin and asks him frankly if Russia plans to attack China. Kosygin assures him “The Soviet Union has no intention of either attacking or isolating China.” He asks if he can share this with Chinese diplomats on his next visit. Kosygin tells him he’s counting on him to do so. Daisaku shares this with Vice Premier Deng Xiaoping on his next visit. This eased the ideological differences between Russia and China and led to the normalization of bilateral relations between China and the Soviet Union when Mikhail Gorbachev met Deng Xiaoping.

Action # 9:

1962 was a time of intensifying conflict between East and West. The previous year, the Berlin Wall had been built, dividing Germany’s capital city, and in October, the Cuban Missile Crisis, a nuclear standoff between the United States and the Soviet Union, took place. The threat of nuclear weapons being fired struck fear in the hearts of people around the world. In this state of anxious uncertainty, many Japanese media outlets issued predictions and commentaries on the likelihood of a nuclear war or a third world war.

Daiasaku was not interested in such speculations. His determination as a disciple of Toda, who had denounced nuclear weapons as an absolute evil, remained unshaken: “We must never allow a third world war to break out!” Chanting fiercely with that resolve in those tense times, the Soka Gakkai members vowed to one another to open the way to world peace.

Daisaku began the year 1962 by visiting Hokkaido still in the depths of winter. Then, following a trip to the Middle East, he traveled extensively throughout Japan—to Chugoku, Shikoku, Tohoku, Kanto, Kyushu, Tokaido, Chubu, Kansai, Shin’etsu and Okinawa.

In Kanagawa, he said, “Let’s become the pillars of Japan and make Japan a truly wonderful, happy place to live!”

In Aichi, he said, “Whatever others might say, let’s win without fail and keep working for peace and security!”

In Kansai, he said, “Let’s fight to create a society where everyone can live with a sense of security and peace of mind!”

Action # 10:

On his first European trip in 1961, Daisaku visits the newly erected Berlin Wall a symbol of the cold war. At the wall, he silently prays and said to one of his translators who asked him what he wished for. He told him it wasn’t a wish but his conviction, “I am sure that in thirty years this Berlin Wall will no longer stand.” The berlin wall came down 28 years later.

B. Conflict delivers insight

A. An argument provokes the person, to tell the truth.

President Toda gets off the phone with Prime Minister Mine who apologizes for not being able to attend the event due to a sudden change in his travel plans but he assures him that his wife and son will join on his behalf. Toda controls his temper and tells him it’s not me you have to apologize to the youth and slams the phone down. The youth representatives in the room look at him and ask if they should cancel the event. Toda fires back at them that we don’t need these fickle politicians – we will go as planned. “No matter who attends or doesn’t attend, we’re going to hold this ceremony for our young people!” 6000 youth assembled, unaware they were to make history. hungry and cold, they enjoyed the hot pork soup Mr Toda had prepared for them out of his great love and concern. To support their ailing mentor, who was too weak to stand, the young Daisaku Ikeda had a litter built to carry President Toda through the crowd. He then delivers a scathing speech in which he tells them he can only count on the youth present here. One of them will be the next Soka Gakkai president who will change the world and when that happens, they should all support him. All these arrogant leaders will come crawling then, to watch them on their grand stage of mission as champions of the people. He entrusts world peace to the youth of Soka. “Today, I want to bequeath this mission to you young people. I entrust the future to all of you. I’m counting on you.” As the event drew to a close, President Toda gazed intently at Daisaku, calling out to him, “Let’s fight!” On April 2, 1958, 17 days later, Mr. Toda’s noble life came to an end.

Daisaku starts his meeting with Soviet Presient Gorbachev saying “I have come to have an argument with you.” Mr. Gorbachev’s interpreter Victor Kim, seemed somewhat puzzled by Daisaku’s remark. The interpreter accompanying Daisaku, a graduate of Soka University, jumps in and skillfully conveyed his words with the intended nuance. Soon there were smiles all around. Daisaku continues: “Let’s make sparks fly, and talk about everything honestly and openly, for the sake of humanity and for the sake of Japan–Soviet relations!” Mr. Gorbachev, his face flushed with color, replies without missing a beat: “I am well acquainted with your extensive activities, but I didn’t realize you were a man of such passion. I, too, am fond of straightforward dialogue.” He then lets out a hearty laugh. The Soviet president continues: “I feel as though you and I are longtime friends. It is as if we are old and dear friends rejoicing in their first face-to-face encounter.” Daisaku says: “I am a supporter of perestroika and the ‘new thinking’ you seek to foster. Our ideas have much in common. In fact, this is only natural, as we both focus on the human being. Our humanity is the great common denominator.” “New ideas tend to be looked upon at first as absurd,” Mr. Gorbachev states emphatically. “Reformers are always in the minority in the beginning. Therefore, it is a mistake to immediately dismiss budding plans or fresh ideas as outrageous.” Sitting upright, Mr. Gorbachev vigorously continues: “When I proposed constructing a world free of nuclear weapons and resolving conflict through dialogue rather than violence, many people laughed this off as utopianism. But look at what is happening; these ideals are now being actualized.” The president then says: “The first step in perestroika was to give everyone freedom. However, the question now is how to put that freedom to use: . . . Perestroika has reached a decisive stage. This is a time of change not only for the Soviet Union, but for the entire world.” Their discussion turns to relations between the two countries, and Daisaku changed its direction by commenting that Gorby’s courtship with his wife Raisa was well known. He humorously retorts that that was something he had started to forget, adding: “Since Moscow State University Rector Logunov is present, and it was when my wife and I were both students at that school that our romance began, I think it would be inappropriate to discuss the matter now.” Amid everyone’s laughter, Mr. Logunov gives a friendly shrug. On November 20, 1997, a day of brilliant autumn colors, Daisaku welcomes the Gorbachevs to Kansai Soka Junior and Senior High School in Katano, Osaka. On that occasion, Raisa Gorbachev, herself an educator, makes an impassioned appeal to the students: “You will experience all kinds of hurts in life. Not all of them will heal. Nor can you always realize all of your dreams. But there is something that you can achieve. There is a dream that you can make a reality. Therefore, the person who triumphs, in the end, is the person who gets up after each fall and pushes onward. The ability to keep on fighting is a matter of the spirit.”

B. Conflict uncovers a secret.

Nichiren Shoshu priests attend the Soka Gakkai general meeting in which they hear the youth chorus sing “Ode to Joy.” It is a wonderful rendition, and everyone has worked tirelessly to prepare for the performance. After the meeting, one of the Nichiren priests comments while Daisaku is seeing them off even as the youth holler to catch a glimpse of their mentor. Daisaku asks if he enjoyed the performances and the priest comments: “How could you allow Christian songs to be sung at a Buddhist gathering? This is outrageous and insulting to the high priest.” He walks away without waiting for a response A week later the lawyer Yamazaki is furious in Daisaku’s office. They receive a letter from the priesthood asking for an explanation for the disgraced behaviour at the Soka Gakkai meeting and personally hold Daisaku responsible for trying to insult the high priest by inviting him to the event. Vice President Fukushima agrees with Yamazaki who are both colluding in secret with the priesthood to create a rift within Soka Gakkai. Later their plot is revealed when the Study department chief drafts doctrines for a new religious body for disgruntled leaders of another religious organization where Yamazaki sees a schism, he can profit from by helping legally establish this new religious body.

Yamazaki makes a strong case for why Daisaku should step down as President and some of the top leaders join him as a way to quell the harassment towards members by the Nichiren Shoshu Priests. Daisaku announces to Members at a meeting that the rumours are true and that he is stepping down. The true colours of Yamazaki come through when he plays both sides against each other and the priesthood imposes more restrictions on Daisaku and try to create a schism between him and the Soka Gakkai members. Daisaku undeterred writes poems and plays piano for members waiting to see his outside the Kansai headquarters. He decides to fight and meets pioneer members at their homes one on one and travels across Japan. The priesthood intensifies its ill-treatment of members, but they are strong and undefeated.

C. Conflict brings out the true nature.

Toda just seven months before his death issues his historic declaration calling for the abolition of nuclear weapons on Sep 8 1957 at a meeting in Mitsuzawa stadium in Yokahama where 50,000 Soka Gakkai youth gather. Toda issues this declaration at the height of the Cold War between East and West. Both Eastern and Western blocs were frantically engaged in developing nuclear weapons and conducting test blasts. Just one month before, the U.S.S.R. had successfully tested an intercontinental ballistic missile, and the United States had developed what it claimed were “clean” hydrogen bombs which maximized destructive capacity with less radioactive fallout. Nuclear weapons, capable of destroying all human life, cast a dark and terrifying shadow over the destiny of all humankind. The myth of nuclear deterrence was based on the view that since mutual destruction would be assured in the event of an attack, nuclear weapons could be seen as a deterrent to war. Toda saw such thinking as a product of the darkest aspects of human nature. Nuclear deterrence was founded on an equilibrium of terror and created a vicious cycle which fuelled the endless escalation of the arms race. He felt that people who placed their hopes on the idea of nuclear deterrence were entering a devilish labyrinth. Toda’s declaration, however, was a radical departure from this way of thinking. His stance was that nuclear weapons and their use must be absolutely condemned, not from the standpoint of ideology, nationality or ethnic identity but from the universal dimension of humanity. In condemning nuclear weapons as an “absolute evil,” Toda was seeking to stress that behind the existence of nuclear weapons lurks the devilish aspect of human life that seeks to subjugate, control and ultimately destroy others. As a Buddhist, Toda was a staunch opponent of the death penalty but his call for the death penalty to be applied for those using nuclear bombs was calculated to shock and awaken his audience to the utterly unequivocal nature of his opposition to nuclear weapons. His proposal of the death penalty was thus not a simple or literal proposition. Todaʼs striking call for the death penalty was aimed at countering the tendency within peopleʼs minds to find justifications for the use of nuclear bombs. He wished to pass a sentence of death on the destructive tendencies within human life. He hoped that by allowing this idea to penetrate deeply into the hearts and minds of people throughout the world, it might serve as an internal restraint against the use of nuclear weapons and for the abolition of war.

Osaka police interrogate Daisaku on false charges of election interference for three days and even parade him in front of Soka Gakkai members in handcuffs like a common criminal. They deprive him of food and sleep. Finally one of the interrogators tells him to confess or they will arrest Toda as the President of Soka Gakkai who is frail from his illness. Would he be able to endure prison a second time around? Daisaku is in a dilemma as to what he must do: confess to protect his mentor or refute the false charges that are brought only to bring down the organization. He decides to confess for now and fight it in court.

D. Conflict uncovers an emotional issue.

Young Daisaku and his elder brother Kichii are playing on the beach, Kichii hides among the bamboo racks (hibi) used to dry the seaweed. Kichii sees the sun reflected off a shiny object and picks it up. It’s an old mirror glass. He uses it to spot Daisaku and wins the game of hide and seek once again. Daisaku discovers the mirror glass in his brother’s back pocket. They fight for it rolling on the beach until Daisaku falls on the glass and breaks it into two pieces. His brother looks upset but before he can scold his Daisaku their mother calls them inside for early dinner. His brother stays in his room packing to leave for his posting while Daisaku asks her mother why he can’t go and fight in the war too. She tells him because he’s the only early riser in their family. Besides who will carry on the family legacy of his father and tells him to go to bed as they have an early day? She rises at 2 am and packs food for her son and wakes him up. As Daisaku reluctantly gets ready and peeps into his brother’s room to see his bags packed. His brother is awake and calls him in. Kichii flourishes one of the mirror glass pieces and tells him it’s for him. He shows his own piece. Now they both have a piece each and every time he wants to see him, he can just look into the mirror and see him at the other end of the world. His mother is waiting for him by the boat. Daisaku rushes out into the freezing cold to join her. They row into the cold water and Daisaku dives into the freezing water to retrieve seaweed. Two weeks later, Kichii is on the frontlines in Burma taking fire, finally, there is a lull and he pulls out his portion of the mirror and sees in it: Daisaku running around the bamboo racks on the beach playfully and he smiles… the shelling begins again and he puts away the mirror to get back to his post.

Daisaku returns home after he has been inaugurated as the third President of Soka Gakkai to a home that seems to be in mourning. Kaneko, his wife, showed no sign of being in a celebratory mood. When he asked her why, she replied that there would be no celebration since the day marked the funeral of the Ikeda family. This sobering remark was at one level a tacit declaration of her resolve to completely support her husband on the new path that their lives had taken.

C. Irony delivers insight

IRONY: Japanese occupation forces take over the country as the emperor steps down from power and pass a law that guarantees freedom of religion

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: It takes a terrible defeat to win one’s rights and freedom!

IRONY: Schools are shut as Japan reels from the aftermath of war Toda thinks it is the perfect time to launch a correspondence course for the students

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: Learning never ends!

IRONY: Doctors predict Daisaku will not live to age 30 but he goes on to live to 96 in high spirits still writing and publishing at a feverish pace.

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: You can even prolong your life if you can give it a purpose.

IRONY: Yubari coal miners’ Union which should stand to protect the rights of all workers threatens the jobs of workers who are Soka Gakkai members because they don’t support their endorsed candidate in elections violating their basic rights and freedoms.

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: Soka Gakkai members are harassed for being good workers and upright members of the community.

IRONY: Daisaku a religious leader is criticized by the media and political leaders for wanting to visit a communist country that is atheist ahead of his trip to Russia during the cold war.

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: Daisaku believes that it’s his duty to go because there are people there.

IRONY: Daisaku meets Gorbachev who envisioned Perestroika, which ultimately ended the cold war era of the Soviet Union. He says to the young Daisaku, I want to be your student and learn from you today.

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: Great leaders and thinkers are always thirsting to seek and learn from everyone.

IRONY: Daisaku visits Okinawa a place of a bloody land battle during WWII in which countless lives were lost and decides to start his novel The Human Revolution which begins with the lines: “Nothing is more barbarous than war. Nothing is more cruel.” Then in 1977, Soka Gakkai opens its Okinawa Training Centre on the former US missile launch site.

NEW WAYS / INSIGHT: We can use symbols of the foolishness of war to transmit the message of peace to the world

9. What are the Most Profound Lines of the Movie?

Pattern A: Height of the Emotion

Emotional Moment # 1: Daisaku’s elder brother Kiichi is drafted in the war. He doesn’t want to leave, and his younger brother knows something is not right

Essence: We will always remain connected in our hearts.

Profound Line: Kiichi gives one-half of the broken mirror to Daisaku and tells him leaning over to look into it: “This is no ordinary mirror Dai, see… when you feel lonely… use it… you will always find me… and I have the other half so I can always be with you.”

Emotional Moment # 2: Daisaku’s home has been destroyed in an air raid once again. Daisaku rummages through the rubble and manages to pull out a suitcase that survives. He opens it only to find that it’s stuffed with pink dress dolls and nothing of any practical value. Daisaku cries holding the dolls, but his mother picks up the dolls and smiles nostalgically.

Essence: Everything has meaning for someone. There is always hope.

Profound Line: Daisaku’s mother looks at the dolls and carefully rearranges them back into the suitcase and says: “Huh! I almost forgot we still had these… Did I tell you I came with only one suitcase when I came to live with your father after marriage? This was my mother’s gift. Thanks for saving it Dai. They will look wonderful on display at our new home.”

Emotional Moment # 3: A US pilot parachutes off his plane when it catches fire and lands on the streets. Passerby crowd around and Daisaku pushes through them to get a closer look. It’s a frightened American boy barely 17 who asks for help. The crowd becomes an angry mob and starts beating him up – the enemy. The Military police pull up in their van and take the boy away in handcuffs. Daisaku shares this incident with his mother when he reaches home.

Essence: War divides people. Mothers have a vast heart.

Profound Line: Daisaku’s mother hears the story and shakes her head to say: “Poor boy, I’m sure his mother must be so worried…”

Emotional Moment # 4: Daisaku rushes out of the munitions factory to join his friend on the Morgasaki beach. His friend tells Daisaku that he wants to join a religion and asks Daisaku for his advice.

Essence: A good friend and a good philosophy is essential to living a full life

Profound Line: Daisaku feels helpless as he has no answers for his friend and expresses his pain in a poem with the lines: “My friend in lonely sorrow / I too /but with one boundless aspiration:/ Make a promise with me / we’ll face life / whatever pain it brings! / My friend smiles / “I’ll go along with that!…”

Emotional Moment # 5: Young Daisaku is earnestly searching for a sound life philosophy and a mentor to guide him, yet, like others his age, he had lost all trust in authority. Daisaku meets his mentor Josei Toda and asks him several questions including “What is a true patriot?” and “What is the correct way of life.” Instinctively he feels he can trust Mr Toda and recites an impromptu poem.

Essence: Sincerity builds trust and inspires others

Profound Line: Toda replies to Daisaku: “When I think of our family, our country and our turbulent world,” Mr Toda continues, “I want to eliminate all misery and suffering from the face of the earth. This is what the movement for kosen-rufu is all about. Will you join me?”

Emotional Moment # 6: Toda in his frail condition rushes to meet Daisaku at the Haneda airport before Daisaku presents himself voluntarily for questioning by Osaka police and is interrogated for false charges of election interference.

Essence: A true mentor is willing to give his own life to protect his disciple

Profound Line: Toda said to him: “Shin’ichi, should death overtake you, I will rush to your side and throw myself upon you and accompany you in death.”

Emotional Moment # 7: January 8, 1945—Mr. Toda is summoned to an officer’s room and is urged once again to discard his faith. He refuses. The officer tells him that there is not a single Soka Kyoiku Gakkai member other than him. “No,” Mr. Toda responds. “It’s me and Mr Makiguchi!” The officer coldly shoots back, “Makiguchi is dead!” Listless, Mr Toda returns to his cell and weeps all night.

Essence: Toda vows to avenge the death of his mentor

Profound Line: Toda makes the following determination: “I will be like the Count of Monte Cristo! Should I ever leave this prison, I will avenge the death of Mr Makiguchi. Striking a blow for justice against those who persecuted him, I will prove to all the world his greatness!”

Emotional Moment # 8: Toda at the memorial of his mentor Makiguchi

Essence: Toda is grateful to his mentor

Profound Line: Toda says: “In you vast and boundless compassion, you let me accompany you even to prison.”

Emotional Moment # 9: Toda on his deathbed recalls his dream to Daisaku

Essence: Daisaku must fulfil his mentors’ dreams

Profound Line: Toda says: “They were all waiting. Everyone was waiting. They were all seeking Nichiren Buddhism. I want to go—to travel the world on a journey for kosen-rufu” urged his young disciple to carry on in his stead. “[Daisaku], the world is your challenge; it is your true stage. It is a vast world”

Emotional Moment # 10: Daisaku Ikeda is appointed as the third president of Soka Gakkai

Essence: Daisaku Vows to fulfil his mentor’s vision

Profound Line: Daisaku in his inaugural speech begins with: “Though I am young, from this day I will take leadership as representative of President Toda’s disciples and advance with you another step towards the substantive realization of kosen-rufu.” He then reiterates Toda’s vow: “This I will state. Let the gods forsake me. Let all persecutions assail me. Still, I will give my life for the sake of the Law.”

Pattern B: Build Meaning Over Multiple Scenes

Line # 1: “Nothing is more barbarous than war. Nothing is more cruel.”

Arc & Essence for the Line:

Beginning: Lamenting

Scene Essence: Daisaku is eager to speak to his elder brother whose been on the frontlines of the war. Kiichi outwardly portrays a heroic front but when Daisaku keeps pestering him to share details says: “Dai. There is no glory in war. Nothing is more barbarous than war. Nothing is more cruel.”

Middle: Justification

Scene Essence: Daisaku with his friend gets into an argument about the occupation by US forces when Daisaku repeats his brother’s words in the end: “It is what it is. We lost they won. Nothing is more barbarous than war. Nothing is more cruel. There is no glory in war, is there?”

End: Determination to stop it all costs

Scene Essence: Daisaku visits the US missile base on Okinawa and sits at his desk in the Okinawa Culture Centre to write his novel The Human Revolution. He begins the first chapter with: “Nothing is more barbarous than war. Nothing is more cruel.”

Line # 2: “Let the gods forsake me. Let all persecutions assail me. Still, I will give my life for the sake of the Law.”

Arc & Essence for the Line:

Beginning: Skeptical

Scene Essence: Daisaku walks into the tiny living room where Mr Toda is giving a lecture on Buddhism and hears these words for the first time. He seems cynical and doesn’t understand the profound vow that the Buddha is making with these words.

Middle: Inspired by his mentor

Scene Essence: When he hears Mr Toda repeat these words when he is reinstated as the second president of Soka Gakkai while Daisaku looks on from the floor of the auditorium that is overflowing beyond capacity and feels inspired by his mentor’s call.

End: Makes it his own vow with conviction

Scene Essence: At the inauguration of as the third president of Soka Gakkai Daisaku recalls his mentor’s vow and makes it his own with a powerful conviction.

Line # 3: “Nothing is more precious than peace. Nothing brings more happiness.”

Arc & Essence for the Line:

Beginning: Despair

Scene Essence: Dialogues with world leaders during the Cold War. In search of a way to unite humanity, Shin’ichi engaged in dialogues with many leading world thinkers, not least the historian Arnold J. Toynbee. At a moment of heightened tensions between the Soviet Union and China, he made repeated visits to both countries, meeting with Soviet Premier Aleksey Kosygin and Chinese Premier Zhou Enlai. He traveled to the United States, where he met and spoke with U.S. Secretary of State Henry Kissinger. Later, he also met and spoke frequently with Soviet President Mikhail Gorbachev, with whom he developed a warm friendship.

Turning point: Resonance & Hope

Scene Essence: Daisaku visits the UN headquarters in New York on 14 Oct 1960, where he recalls the lines on the UNESCO charter “Since wars begin in the minds of women and men, it is in the minds of women and men that defences of peace must be constructed.” These lines resonate with his conviction that “Nothing is more precious than peace. Nothing brings more happiness. Peace is the most basic starting point for the advancement of humankind.”

Middle: Remonstration

Scene Essence: When the Nichiren Shoshu tries to subjugate the lay organisation of Soka Gakkai and issues a call to disband after a notice of excommunication.

Turning Point: Self-doubt

Scene Essence: Daisaku struggles to chronicle his journey, each day was a battle into which he poured his heart and soul. Calling to mind precious fellow members in Japan and around the world striving so earnestly in faith, he tapped the deepest recesses of his being to write my tale, as if he were sending a letter of encouragement to each one of them. At the same time, he was also engaging in an inner dialogue with his mentor as he wrote. His voice would echo in Daisaku’s mind, urging him to transmit the Soka Gakkai spirit for posterity and fulfill his mission in this life. That would sweep away all weariness and fill him with courage.

End: Determination and Legacy

Scene Essence: Daisaku completes documenting his journey for peace for posterity in 30 volumes of The New Human Revolution beginning with the words “Nothing brings more happiness. Peace is the most basic starting point for the advancement of humankind.” He starts writing the novel on 6th Aug 1993 48 years to the day the world and Japan witnessed the devastating nuclear weapons and brings it to completion exactly on Sep 8, 2018, the anniversary of the day his mentor Toda made his declaration calling for the abolition of nuclear weapons in 1957 – marking the starting point of Soka Gakkai’s peace activities.

10. How Do You Leave Us With A Profound Ending?

A. DELIVER THE PROFOUND TRUTH PROFOUNDLY

SGI and ICAN work together to rally all member states. The UN treaty on the elimination of nuclear weapons is brought to the floor at the UN general meeting and must have a unanimous vote to pass into law.

It’s a tense scene when all nations must ratify the bill including the security council and all eyes are on Russia, China, India and the US.

After a tense pause before the final nation votes – the bill is passed unanimously.

The Indian Ambassador credits his dialogue with Dr Daisaku Ikeda a few months ago who reminded him about his grandchildren and the world they will inherit. His decision was the right one for not only his country but the future of all humanity. He is proud that as a nation that coined the phrase “Vasudevakutumbhakam” – The world is one family, India is also home to the Buddhist philosophy of respect and dignity of all life.

B. LEAD CHARACTER’S ENDING REPRESENTS THE CHANGE

Daisaku Ikeda, the SGI president receives the Nobel Peace Prize for working over six decades tirelessly for peace to bring about a world free from nuclear weapons.

SGI members chant “I am Shinichi” as they go out into society to take the baton from their mentor Daisaku Ikeda.

C. PAYOFF KEY SETUPS

SGI members who are poor and downtrodden with no voice become leaders in their communities and workplaces.

SGI members who are constantly waiting for direction from their mentor and feel stuck when he is not allowed to speak to them are the ones that reach out to others in their communities on their own volution without waiting to be told what to do. In India they launch BSG for SDG, in the US Soka University students become pioneers in their field, in South America they receive the Red Cross Award, in Africa the women, carry on the work of Wangari Mathai to create a tree plantation movement, etc.

Soka Gakkai members in Japan, start a petition drive on eliminating nuclear abolition, they bring stories of the Hibakusha – people affected by the atomic bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki – in the form of short films and exhibitions that tour the world.

One of the hibakushas makes a rousing speech before the UN general council before the bill is brought to the floor.

D. SURPRISING, BUT INEVITABLE

Soka Gakkai members save up to make meagre contributions to the building of Nichiren Shoshu temples and the Grand Lecture Hall at Taiseki-ji Temple.

Soka Gakkai members face harassment and humiliation at the hands of the local priests at their local temples – they are denied funeral rituals for the deceased and burial in the family plots.

The Grand Lecture Hall is demolished by the High Priest Nikken.

Soka Gakkai builds a cemetery for members to bury their deceased.

Nichiren Shoshu refuses to hold dialogues with Soka Gakkai leaders and sends a letter of ex-communication.

Daisaku attends a large gathering and declared their day of Spiritual Independence.

Daisedo is built for SGI members to visit and renew their vow to work for peace.

Soka Gakkai members are scorned when trying to collect names for petitioning the UN to ban nuclear weapons.

They tie up with an NGO and create awareness through films on the Hibakusha and the exhibition makes a world tour.

ICAN brings the bill to the UN general meeting floor.

Hibakusha shares her moving story at the UN.

The bill is put to vote and there is tense anticipation that member states – Russia, China, India and the US won’t ratify the bill and kill it.

The bill passes unanimously.

Daisaku Ikeda is awarded a Nobel Peace Prize for his tireless efforts to ride the world of nuclear weapons.

E. LEAVE US WITH A PROFOUND PARTING IMAGE/LINE

On August 6, 1993, the 48th anniversary of the atomic bombing of Hiroshima, Ikeda decided to write The New Human Revolution, the sequel to The Human Revolution, in the belief that nuclear weapons “threaten the most basic of human rights, the right to life,” and in the hope that the voice of his mentor would resonate deeply within the hearts of future generations. He wanted to record the extent to which kosen-rufu had progressed since Toda’s death in 1958 as a true tribute and testament to his mentor’s spirit. To do so, he describes his own struggles and those of pioneering Soka Gakkai members to carry out their mentor’s mandate to better their own lives and to strive in the service of humankind as Nichiren Buddhists.

Parting Image/Line: Daisaku Ikeda using a calligraphy pen in broad strokes writes the theme of the New Human Revolution on a large blank canvas, dates and signs it with his pen name:

“A great human revolution in just a single individual will help achieve a change in the destiny of a nation and, further, will enable a change in the destiny of all humankind.” – 6 Aug 1993, Shinichi Yamamoto

[Deb Johnson]

Sunil,

If you would like me to provide feedback, please reply and let me know. I’d be glad to get your feedback on my work if you are interested and have the time.

Deb

[Sunil Pappu]

Hi Deb,

I would love to exchange feedback.

Thanks

Sunil

[Robert Kerr]

Sunil: I have now posted my assignment. Do you want to exchange feedback? The reality of this assignment for me is the script has not been written. I have a working outline that I will create the script with by focusing on the lessons in this class and The Profound Map.

[Sunil Pappu]

Hi Bob,

I’m exchanging with Deb at the moment. I would be happy to do round 2 with you if that’s okay.

BTW, I’ve done the same thing with my story as well. I’m still not sure I have a working outline yet.

Cheers

Sunil

[Robert Kerr]

Sunil:

Thank you. I will be happy to do Round 2 with you. The easiest way I have found in Hal’s classes is to exchange email addresses and communicate that way. In looking at my schedule for this week, I should be able to get my comments and feedback to you by Friday Noon PDT.

My email address is : kerr9606@comcast.net

Hope to connect with you soon.

Bob Kerr

[Sunil Pappu]

Hi Bob,

Thanks for your reply.

Sure you can email me at sunilrpappu@gmail.com

I’ll try and get my feedback to you once I’m done with Deb’s.

I am not sure I can get to it before the weekend though as I have producer’s notes on a script to get to before Friday.

Looking forward to your feedback.

Cheers

Sunil

[Robert Kerr]

Sunil:

No worries. If it makes it easier on you, you can wait till next week to do the review. Paid work always takes precedent over class work. Good luck.

Bob

[Deb Johnson]

Sunil, I will post my notes to you in this forum – or if you would like me to email you – that’s fine too. My email is ddomm1130@hotmail.com. I hope to get back to you by this Friday 9/1.

Deb

[Sunil Pappu]

Hi Deb,

I think email would be less of a clutter. You can email me at sunilrpappu@gmail.com

I’ll try and get back to you with my feedback end of the week as well.

Cheers

Sunil

[Deb Johnson]

TITLE: The Treasure of Deserti

WRITTEN BY: Deborah Johnson

What is Your Profound Truth? Forgiveness is a priceless treasure. When you have forgiveness, you have everything.

What is the Transformational Journey?

Old Ways: hard-hearted; turned in on self, seeks his own happiness, thinks he can atone for past sins, thinks he’s good enough, unforgiving; refuses to give or receive forgiveness.

Journey: Jack’s father Bram sends him after the fabled treasure of Deserti. Jack wants to find the treasure to appease his family and atone for his sins against Bram, his son, and his wife. When he finds the treasure, he realizes that he is unable to mend his past and must receive forgiveness, if they are willing to give it.

New Ways: admits his own weakness; can’t make up for past sins, turns outward, receives forgiveness, can and does forgive.

Transformational Logline: Jack, a self-serving treasure hunter, searches for a priceless treasure and gives up everything he owns to obtain it… including his pride and finally understands what forgiveness is both by receiving and then giving it.

Who are Your Lead Characters?

Change Agent: Bram Roe (Jack’s father)

Transformable Character: Jack Roe

Betraying Character: Eva Roe (Jack’s wife)

Oppression: Cancel Culture

How Do You Connect with Your Audience in the Beginning of the Movie?

• Relatability – They Are Us!

Bram is nostalgic and keeps everything. His son, Jack, who now cares for him, must sort through endless piles of “stuff” to find what’s important and what can be tossed.

• Intrigue

The questions: What is this Treasure of Deserti? Is it real? Can it be found? How will it be found?

Why is Bram convinced this priceless treasure exists? Why wasn’t he able to find it?

• Empathy

Jack accidentally caused his father’s blindness, and he also must deal with his father’s dementia. He walks a fine line as he becomes his father’s caretaker. Bram can, at one moment, be completely cogent and the next be lost. It’s difficult to watch him struggle.

• Likability

Jack is persistent and humorous even though he’s manipulative. The quest means nothing to him (at first) but he takes it on because it means so much to his father, son, and wife.

Bram is like a child; completely dependent on his son, Jack, for his care, however, he doesn’t let it bother him and takes most things in stride and with a sense of humor.

What is the Gradient of the Change?

Gradient 1. The Emotional Gradient: Forced Change. Jack is forced to shift from being unforgiving and hard-hearted to forgiving, receiving forgiveness, and reconnecting with his family.

We watch him go through these stages:

Denial: I am self-sufficient. I haven’t done anything to offend anyone, and I don’t need forgiveness. My father’s accident was not my fault.

Anger: His father wishes he could go and look for the treasure but can’t (blames Jack). He forces Jack to take up the mantel.

Bargaining: Jack must consult with past associates whom he has offended, must negotiate with his wife, Eva, whom he has alienated, and placates his son by taking him on the journey.

Depression: Burdened by life – going through the motions. When he finally admits that he’s responsible for others’ pain – he feels guilt.

Acceptance: He gives up everything to obtain the treasure and receives forgiveness from his father and his son. Accepts that his wife will not forgive him but won’t give up on her.

Gradient 2. The Action Gradient

Setup:

• Jack finds Bram’s notes that detail the Treasure of Deserti, a priceless treasure. Bram says he couldn’t find it, is disabled and not able to look for it, and wants Jack to search for it.

• Eva, Jack’s wife, encourages him to go and his son, Able, wants to go with him. All his associates discourage him and tell him it’s a waste of time.

Journey:

• Jack discovers fool’s gold; he thinks he’s wasted his resources and his time for no reason.

• Jack meets someone who is experienced in the terrain and is given new resources. He can find the “X” that marks the spot.

• Able almost dies (due to Jack’s negligence) as they close in on the treasure. When he finds it, he realizes that to obtain it, he must purchase the vast wasteland. He must give up all his wealth and possessions.

• Jack tells his wife and associates about the treasure. They don’t believe him and challenge him as he begins to sell off all his assets. His wife and associates try to stop him.

Payoff

• Jack realizes Bram did, in fact, find the treasure – and Bram sent him to find it for himself. Jack asks Bram for forgiveness. Bram helps Jack sell his stuff.

• Jack buys the land and obtains the treasure.

• Eva refuses to forgive Jack – but he resolves to win her back at all cost.

Gradient 3. The Challenge / Weakness Gradient

Challenge: Jack’s decision to go after the treasure will upset the status quo

Weakness: Ignorance

Challenge: Jack has no support from his associates, his resources are exhausted

Weakness: Doubts his decision – feels like a fool

Challenge: Jack must give up his ‘reason’ and trust the new way to read the map

Weakness: Jack’s pride and self-sufficiency stand in the way

Challenge: Jack has put his son’s life in danger and must save him – causing him to reflect on his responsibility for his father’s injury.

Weakness: Jack has never been able to admit his culpability

Challenge: Jack faces the rejection/ridicule/challenge of his wife/peers

Weakness: Overconfidence in how he will be received

What is the Transformational Structure of Your Story?

Mini-Movie 1 ­ Status Quo and Call to Adventure

Jack Roe is self-sufficient and proud of it. He believes if he just works hard enough, he can be happy and get everything he wants out of life. His father, Bram, was a great treasure hunter and taught Jack the trade. Jack brings in a decent amount of money, but his wife spends it all.

Due to Jack’s negligence at a dig sight, Bram was blinded and, due to age, suffers from early dementia. Jack has taken over his care and keeping and is frustrated over his new role… increasingly dissatisfied with his work and family – it seems he can never get ahead.

To pay for the ever-increasing expenses, he needs to sell his dad’s house and must get rid of the vast amount of junk Bram has accumulated over the years. As he’s looking through old stuff, he comes across notes and clues that his father saved about the priceless treasure of Deserti.

Mini-Movie 2 ­ Locked into Conflict

His initial reaction is dismissive, reasoning that if his father couldn’t find it, why would he bother? His wife, however, is fed up with his “moping” and tells him he needs to, “get out there again.” And besides, they need the money. His 12-year-old son, Able, is also itching for adventure and wants to go. Jack feels that maybe going after the priceless treasure will be a way to make up for what happened to Bram. Bram’s dementia prohibits him from providing concrete resources to back up his notes but encourages Jack anyway… hinting that Jack, at least, owes him this.

Mini-Movie 3 — Hero Tries to Solve Problem ­ but Fails.

Jack and Able have a map, a notebook, and a few relics to begin their search. They go to Jackson’s associate, Jade, another seasoned professional who is highly skeptical of the mission. Jade examines the clues and says there is nothing to the quest and he should give it up. Two or three others, who also have some or little knowledge of the treasure, concur with Jade. They meet with one last associate, Daze, who is hostile to the whole idea. Jack, in one way or another, owes all these people money and/or favors and he tells them that he will find the treasure – if only to pay them back. Nobody holds their breath.

Mini-Movie 4 ­ Hero Forms a Plan

Jacks and Able try to piece together clues based on what Bram left behind and the “failures” of past associates. Maybe if they do the opposite, they will have some luck. They don’t realize it, but they are reading the map upside down and backward. They travel to Bountiful, where they believe the treasure to be, and start digging. The treasure they find is “fool’s gold.” Many people buy and sell this gold and they are offered some profit, but both Jacks and Able agree that this was not what they were looking for and are discouraged.

Mini-Movie 5 ­ Hero Retreats & Antagonist Wins

The people at Bountiful try to convince him that the fool’s gold is the real treasure and make it difficult for them to leave. Jack reviews Bram’s notes and is convinced that there is something more. He meets another person from Deserti who laughs at his map and shows him he’s reading it wrong. Normally, Jack would scoff at such a notion because he’s prideful and a map expert, but he realizes that if he’s going to find the priceless treasure, he’s got to change his ways.

Mini-Movie 6 ­ Hero’s Bigger, Better Plan!

Jack and Able set off for Deserti. When they arrive, they are devastated to find a vast desert… almost uninhabitable. They exhaust all their resources and Able is almost killed. Jack thinks this is punishment for his sin against his father. He admits he is responsible for Bram’s injury.

Mini-Movie 7 ­ Crisis & Climax

Jack and Able, all resources used up and only their shirts on their backs, finally discover the priceless treasure. They marvel at it – and realize (somehow, TBD) that Bram has already been there. They are unable to take the treasure with them and aren’t even sure they can make it out of the wasteland alive. Jack realizes he must buy the land to obtain the treasure.

Mini-Movie 8 ­ New Status Quo

Jack and Able return home to tell Eva and Bram about the treasure. Jack asks for forgiveness from Bram. Jack does the math and realizes, to buy the land, they must sell everything they own. Eva is against it. She doesn’t believe the treasure is worth it. He must work around her and sell everything that belongs to him. He is ridiculed by everyone who knows him. Jack and Able decide to make Deserti inhabitable so others can share in the priceless treasure.

How are the “Old Ways” Challenged?

What beliefs are challenged that cause a main character to shift their perspective…and make the change?

A. Challenge through Questioning

Jack refuses to accept blame for his actions – yet when he does something good, he wants to take the credit. Eva refuses to give him any credit for good and challenges him, “Why do you take the credit when you don’t take the blame?” She also asks him, “Why is it so hard for us to admit when we’re wrong?”

Bram insists he did everything ‘right’ in his life; followed all the rules, dotted all the I’s, crossed all the t’s, and yet here he is poor, blind, and losing his mind. He asks Jack if that’s fair.

When Jack considers peddling fool’s gold in Bountiful, Able asks him, “If you can’t stand a phony, why is it okay for you to sell this stuff?”

The man from Deserti challenges Jack by asking him “When you look around, do you see a world at peace or a world that is fractured? If the world is fractured, how do you find peace?”

B. Challenge by Counterexample

Bram is poor, weak, and dependent, yet he is at peace; a direct contrast to Jack who is dissatisfied and unsettled.

Jack’s associate, Jade is easily offended – Jack can’t say or do anything right around her. When he goes to see her – a cake she just baked doesn’t turn out. She flies into a rage over it.

In Bountiful, snow is beautiful and fun, but in Deserti, it’s a deadly storm. In Bountiful the water is warm, welcoming, and wonderful; in Deserti, it’s a deadly rip current.

For Jack to obtain the priceless treasure, he must give up everything he already has.

C. Challenge by “Should Work, But Doesn’t”

Jack is a master manipulator, but his actions increasingly cause him more trouble… and ultimately leads him to “fool’s gold.” Until he admits his sins, he remains blind to the real treasure.

Jack is usually encouraged and given help by his associates, but for this journey, he gets no approval or help.

Jack can’t make his wife happy, no matter what – it’s never enough.

D. Challenge through Living Metaphor

Bram’s blindness is a symbol of Jack’s inability to see the truth. Bram knows this world is not enough yet is at peace. Jack still holds out hope and is dissatisfied.

Bram – who was once strong and vibrant – is now disabled and dependent.

Jack’s son Able has a hamster that runs on a wheel… always running but never getting anywhere.

Castor, one of Jack’s associates who he goes to for help at the beginning, is incarcerated. Yet, despite overwhelming evidence, continues to claim his innocence.

The priceless treasure (what Jack thinks will make him happy) is clouded in darkness and obscurity (a vast wasteland) – a place where he doesn’t think happiness can be found. And the people he encounters in this place seem to live rich, deep, vibrant lives.

Jack’s vehicle (which he meticulously cares for – a symbol of resilient durability) breaks down and will not run.

When Jack and Able set out for Deserti they must travel by boat on a wave-tossed sea (precarious, unstable, and out of their control). They will lose all their resources and make it to shore with only the clothes on their back.

How are You Presenting Insights through Profound Moments?

A. Action delivers insight.

Action: The map expert from Deserti patiently shows Jack how to read the map

Insight: Jack doesn’t know everything – he must trust someone else (a person he can’t manipulate)

Action: Jack goes to an old associate, Daze, for help. Daze is incredibly wealthy but miserable.

Insight: Happiness is elusive and not guaranteed. (If “gold” is not the answer, what is?)

Action: Eva refuses to see that her spending has contributed to their troubles – and she has no faith in her husband to make the right decisions. She continues to put her faith in her stuff.

Insight: Old ways don’t always die.

Action: Jack must sell everything he owns to buy the land that holds the treasure

Insight: It’s in losing your life that you find true life

B. Conflict delivers insight.

Conflict: A variety of ways – throughout the story – where people offend and are forgiven/not forgiven.

Insight: There are different degrees of forgiveness

Conflict: Jack is amazed to see the people of Bountiful profiting from fool’s gold – the racket they’ve set up to sell it… the deception they peddle.

Insight: What most people peddle as good is artificial.

Conflict: Jack looks back on his journey and realizes it was accidents and coincidences that brought him to the treasure – not anything triumphant or heroic that he did.

Insight: Our lives are not what we make them.

C. Irony delivers insight.

Irony: REASONS: Jack’s initial reason for the quest is to appease his wife, help his son, and atone for his sin – these are all the wrong reasons for doing the right thing. However, midpoint, Jack realizes that he just wants the treasure for himself. (Again, the irony is – this is still the wrong reason). Finally, at the climax, the reason will shift to: I find the treasure because the treasure is to be found (bigger than our own reason or strength).

Irony: CREDIT: Jack strives for the treasure and gives up everything for it, but the irony is the coincidences and circumstances beyond his control that led him to it. He can’t take the credit for finding it. Rather, he can state confidently that the treasure found him.

Irony: IDENTITY: Jack has discovered the priceless treasure – this is his new identity – he no longer cares for the affection, praise, or affirmation of his wife/friends. (The very thing he thought the quest would bring him.)

What are the Most Profound Lines of the Movie?

Pattern A: Height of the Emotion

Bram talks about the treasure: “It’s a delicate thing, really. A puzzle. It’s not something you talk about.”

Jack wonders what is enough: “I remember when we talked about being millionaires. Now we’ve got to be billionaires.”

Jack admits his guilt: “True. All true. But so is the treasure.”

Pattern B: Build Meaning Over Multiple Scenes

“I can see. I see it.” – This will go from a naïve undertaking of the journey to disappointment over fool’s gold to confirmation of the real thing.)

“King me” – A phrase used in checkers that will mean finding a place of position and power in the story (or losing that place)

How Do You Leave Us with A Profound Ending? (Note: By the time the script is written, the ending may change completely – this is my best guess so far)

A. Deliver The Profound Truth Profoundly

By the end of this scene, we understand that Jack wants to share the treasure with others. He is no longer self-sufficient and unforgiving. He values forgiveness above all else.

B. Lead Characters Ending Represents the Change

In the beginning, Jack is incredibly concerned about what his wife and friends think/believe. While at the same time, holding onto his self-sufficiency and disregard for forgiveness. The final scene is him throwing off that concern – an “I don’t give a damn,” moment… while he basks in the freedom he now has after having received forgiveness.

C. Payoff Key Setups

Will Jack and Eva stay together? How will Jack find the treasure? What will Jack’s friends do to stop him? Is Bram crazy or is he a liar or does he have true wisdom? Is there a chance for Jack to find the treasure and then reject it… because he knows how much it will cost him?

D. Surprising, But Inevitable

Jack gives up everything to obtain the treasure.

Jack and Eva split up – but we know Jack will do everything to win her back.

Jack’s friends reject him, but he doesn’t care.

E. Leave Us with a Profound Parting Image/Line

Jack and Able resolve to make Deserti inhabitable – so others can join them.

Jack says something to the effect of “I now own the treasure, but it’s the treasure that bought me.” (Needs work, but the idea is that the quest saved his life.)

[Robert Kerr]

Profound Script: Assignment 16

“23 Days”

Written By Bob Kerr

1) Profound Truth: No matter the obstacles, you must never give up to achieve your dreams.

2) The transformational journey : The true story of a losing football team rising from the worst tragedy in the history of college football to playing in college football’s finest moment.

Old Way: College freshmen are not physically, emotional or mentally capable of playing

varsity college football.

Journey: Taking a team made up of mostly freshmen and sophomores and preparing them to

play the #9 ranked University of Arkansas and believe they will win.

New Way: Freshmen are capable of playing varsity football and marks the first time in

history this has happened.

TRANSFORMATIONAL JOURNEY LOGLINE: The true story of how a college football team

overcomes the tragic loss of 14 starters and their head coach to create college football’s finest moment when they face the #9 Arkansas team in just 23 days.

Transformational characters with an issue: John Yeros and the entire football team.

Transformational character takes a journey that challenges them deeply: The entire football team must grow up from care-free college students to the heavy responsibilities of adults that typically are not thought of till after college.

Transformational characters concludes with the transformation: The entire football team, now made up of mostly freshmen and sophomores, gains the respect of the Arkansas fans and players by showing up and giving 100% regardless of the score.

CHANGE AGENT: Coach Bob Seaman

TRANSFORMATIONAL CHARACTER: John Yeros and the rest of the Wichita State football team.

OPPRESSION: The death of 14 teammates and their head coach in the plane crash in route to a football game against Utah State.

I CONNECT WITH THE AUDIENCE with;

RELATABILITY – we’ve all had experiences dealing with death of a close family member or friend.

EMPATHY – these young men are struggling to fulfill the expectations of finishing the season,

INTRIGUE – how are they going to continue this journey and fulfill their destiny.

THE EMOTIONAL GRADIENT: This is a forced change initially. The team feels it has no choice but to continue . This changes to a desired change once the team votes to continue the season.

THE ACTION GRADIENT: The team intends to face #9 Arkansas but lost all their equipment in the crash. They start practices, after a week of attending funerals, with no equipment. They must fold in the freshmen, and eight practices later they arrive at War Memorial Stadium to a standing ovation of 40,000 Arkansas fans.

THE CHALLENGE/WEAKNESS GRADIENT: Initial challenge is folding in freshmen and not having enough

equipment to fully practice. The weakness is no one gives them a chance against a ranked

Arkansas team aiming for a national title.

TRANSFORMATIONAL STRUCTURE:

1) The plane carrying the Wichita State University first team starters and the head coach crashes in the mountains of Colorado killing 31 people on board.

2) The surviving members vote to continue the season and will face the #9 ranked Arkansas team when they resume their season.

3) John Yeros is serious and in mourning when he calls his roommates to pick him up at the airport. They are clowning around and have moved on with the reality they have a football game to prepare for and must look ahead.

4) Seaman forms a plan to focus on winning and not just showing up against Arkansas.

5) Seaman must start 2 freshmen qb’s and the initial practice is lousy. The stark reminder of empty lockers from their dead teammates causes the team to emotionally not want to practice.

6) Seaman tells his coaching staff they must rely on their speed and passing game to beat Arkansas.

7) The team arrives in Little Rock with high hopes of pulling the greatest upset in college football history.

8) This game is widely known as college football’s finest hour. Builds a foundation for the future.

THE OLD WAYS ARE CHALLERNGED in three specific ways.

1) Freshmen are more than capable of playing and competing in college varsity football.

2) The old ways of relying on a punishing ground game are replaced by speed and the arms of freshmen qb’s.

3) In modern times, if this kind of tragedy happened, the season would be halted without discussion from the players.

WHAT BELIEFS ARE CHALLENGED THAT CAUSE THE MAIN CHARACTER(S) TO SHIFT THEIR PERSPECTIVE AND MAKE THE CHANGE

A) Challenge through questioning: the team must adapt to lack of equipment initially and maintain focus on winning the game. When will the equipment be replaced?

B) Challenge by counter example: the freshmen are granted a waiver to play but may be risking their senior year eligibility since the NCAA has not provided a waiver for them to play 4 years. The freshmen decide to play regardless of that risk.

C) Challenge by should work but doesn’t: prior to the crash, the WSU offense was led by the conference’s leading rusher. He is injured and can’t play. The new offense doesn’t work with the substitutes.

D) Challenge through living metaphor: perhaps the most famous photograph of the crash site is of a charred helmet and a pair of cleats. The new helmets don’t arrive until the day of the game. All their practices have been held with shared helmets and replacement gear provided by a variety of regional college programs.

HOW AM I PRESENTING INSIGHTS THROUGH PROFOUND MOMENTS:

A) The action of attending funerals for a week and then facing the sad reality of empty lockers of their dead teammate’s amps up the seriousness of what they are doing to honor their dead teammates and head coach.

B) The conflict is the upperclassmen want to dedicate the game to their fallen teammates but are not named to the traveling squad in favor of 19 freshmen.

C) The irony is the team is the only ones who think they have a chance. Local media and a chunk of the student body believe they will be annihilated at the game. Perhaps they should have chosen a different game to restart their schedule.

WHAT ARE THE MOST PROFOUND LINES OF MY MOVIE:

Pattern A Height of emotion: “ Screw the NCAA. We’ll play regardless. Also, “We can’t lose you too”

PATTERN Building meaning over multiple scenes: “Get ‘er done” Catchphrase of Coach Bob Seaman that is adopted by the team.

HOW DO I LEAVE US WITH A PROFOUND ENDING:

A) Deliver the Profound Truth Profoundly: As the WSU players enter WAR MEMORIAL STADIUM they are greeted by a standing ovation from 40,000 Arkansas fans.

B) The Lead Characters Ending represents the Change: The WSU football team was devastated by the loss of 14 starting players and their coach. Of the 9 survivors of the crash, only 1 will resume their football career next year. The team has been molded and reshaped and play their remaining games wearing their “All Black” home jerseys for all games, home and away. They are a new team when they enter WAR MEMORIAL STADIUM wearing their all black jerseys.

C) Payoffs Key Set-ups: At the campus wide memorial service, Kelly Cook, the representing member if the football team, tells the crowd, “we were not the best team in the country but we were a team of brothers. One day we will return to this field.” The team fulfills that promise when they show up for the game in Arkansas.

D) Surprising but Inevitable: All the talk of pulling the greatest upset in college football history is destroyed as WSU loses 62-0. Instead, they provide college football with its finest hour when the 40,000 Arkansas fans gave WSU a standing ovation with every play and every time they entered the field.

E) Leave us with a Profound Parting image/line: Freeze frame on a WSU helmet raised to the heavens during a standing ovation from the 40,000 Arkansas fans and the V.O. of Kelly Cook’s quote at the campus Memorial Service.

[ray Moore]

Ray’s Profound Map

What I learned doing this assignment is how to connect all the dots to make an ironic, emotional, surprising, and satisfying script.

My Script (Version 3)

1) Profound Truth: Exhibit JOY (Jesus – Others – Yourself) in every area of your life and always keep moving forward.

2) Transformational Journey:

Old Ways: Sad. Hopeless. No sense of purpose.

Journey: Eve is heartbroken with the death of her husband. She feels like she cannot complete the plan they had started. Along comes Ava, who has her own set of problems. Together, they must decide to look to the future with hope and love.

New Ways: Eve and Ava regain hope, get over heartbreak, and start two businesses.

Transformational Logline: A brokenhearted woman seeks God during her time of tragedy. God reveals himself to her in an unimaginable way to help her deal with Satan and his plans to keep her away from her purpose.

3) Lead Characters:

Change Agent: Eve Transformable Characters: good dolls Oppression: Death of Husband

Change Agent: Ava Transformable Character: Eve Oppression: Death of Parents

Change Agent: Caleb Transformable Characters: bad dolls Oppression: Death of Mother

4) Connect With the Audience:

a. Relatability: An ordinary lady dealing with the loss of her recently acquired husband.

b. Intrigue: Has to move into her husband’s mansion alone.

c. Empathy: Having to begin a journey of starting their business on her own.

d. Likability: Takes in Ava even though she doesn’t get along well with children.

5) Gradient of the Change:

Emotional Gradient: Forced Change. Eve is forced to shift from Happily Ever After to starting a business on her own.

Denial: I cannot continue on my own

Anger: Lord, why did you take him away from me

Bargaining: Mom, let me stay with you until I resolve the mansion situation

Depression: Eve sitting at her husband’s gravesite crying

Acceptance: Eve moves into the mansion

Action Gradient:

Setup

Adam and Eve are soon to be married

They make plans to start a business together

Adam dies on their wedding night

Journey

Eve loses her confidence and her faith

God talks to her and she regains confidence

The little boy finds the bad dolls that try to foil Eve’s plans

The good dolls reveal themselves to Eve and encourage her

Ava is dropped at her doorstep

The good dolls teach her how to draw Ava close to her

The little boy and the bad dolls sway Ava to their side

Eve and the good dolls bring Ava back into the fold

The little boy and the bad dolls wage a war with Eve, Ava and the good dolls

Payoff

Good triumphs over evil

Eve and Ava get the business up and running

Challenge/Weakness Gradient

Challenge: Making a life-changing decision Weakness: Ignorance of the future

Challenge: Starting a business on her own Weakness: Feeling hopeless without her husband

Challenge: To continue on with life while grieving the loss of her husband Weakness: Self doubt

Challenge: Rise above the obstacles and create her business Weakness: Unclear where to start

Challenge: Pick up the pieces and meet her deadlines Weakness: The little boy and the bad dolls

C/W Gradient: C: Bad dolls throw up several obstacles W: The little girl that she adopts turns against Eve

6) Transformational Structure

Mini Movie 1 – Status Quo and Call to Adventure

We start with a date between Adam and Eve where Adam asks Eve to marry him. Eve says yes and immediately shows Adam her dolls.

They come up with an idea for a business venture together. They begin plans for the business as they prepare for the wedding. They get married and go off on their honeymoon where Adam is killed in a fatal accident. Eve is left mourning during her honeymoon.

Mini Movie 2 – Locked Into Conflict

While dealing with the stages of grief, Eve cannot imagine living without Adam let alone starting the business alone. As she is visiting Adam’s gravesite, God communicates to her that she is not alone. He told her to return to her first love and he will send her a miracle that will see her through.

Mini Movie 3 – Hero tries to Solve Problem = But Fails

Good dolls present themselves to Eve and encourage her to start the business. Just as Eve cracks down and gains focus, she is presented with Ava, her niece who suddenly lost her parents and have to move in with Eve.

Mini Movie 4 – Hero Forms a New Plan

Eve adjusts to living with a child in her custody and regains focus on her business adventure when the little boy finds the bad dolls who are sent by the devil to prevent Eve from starting her business.

Mini Movie 5 – Hero Retreats & The Antagonism Prevails

Little boy turns Ava against Eve and they scheme to set Eve behind in meeting deadlines, with the help of the bad dolls.

Mini Movie 6 – Hero’s Bigger, Better Plan!

Eve convinces Ava that the little boy and his dolls are trying to turn them against each other so they will not start the business.

Mini Movie 7 – Crisis & Climax

Eve and Ava work together to start the business. The little boy and his dolls attack Eve and her dolls.

Mini Movie 8 – New Status Quo

Eve and her dolls defeat the little boy and his dolls. Ava apologizes for her part in everything and admits that she wants to stay with Eve.

7) How are the Old Ways challenged?

Question Challenges to old ways

1. Why should I try trust you?

2. Why shouldn’t I trust the boy?

3. What makes the dolls so good?

4. Why are the dolls trying to help us?

5. Why do we continue to fail?

Counterexamples to old ways

1. The boy is always getting into trouble.

2. The boy does things trying to prevent Eve from starting her business.

3. God requires Eve to study the Bible first and not think about the business.

4. Eve adopts a child even though she doesn’t get along with children.

5. Starting a business on her own.

Challenge by “Should work, but doesn’t”

Being nice to Ava should work, but she doesn’t trust adults

The little boy should stay out of her business, but he is too angry

Challenge through living metaphors

The good dolls = faith, love, hope

The bad dolls = discord, hate, deceit

Starting a new business = hope for the future

8) Insights through Profound moments

A. Action delivers Insights

1. Eve realizes the Butlers lost faith in God so she invites them to church.

2. Eve realizes Ava doesn’t know about God so she tries to teach her about the Bible.

3. Eve sees that Ava doesn’t know how to pray so she shows her how.

4. Love realizes Eve is not good with children so she shows her how to draw her closer.

5. Eve realizes that Ava feels hopeless about her future so she adopts her and helps her start her own business.

B. Conflict delivers insights

1. New Way/Insight – Eve tries to convince Mr Butler and his wife to go to church with her.

Conflict – Eve argues with the Butlers about taking Caleb to church.

2. New Way/Insight – Love shows Eve how to bring Ava closer.

Conflict – Love makes Eve realize that Ava just wants to be wanted.

3. New Way/Insight – Eve tries to study the Bible with Ava and Caleb.

Conflict – Eve argues with Ava about Caleb’s activities.

4. New Way/Insight – Eve teaches Ava and Caleb to pray.

Conflict – After discussing a Bible verse, Ava wants to learn more about God.

5. New Way/Insight – Eve teaches Ava about dolls and enlists her help with starting the business.

Conflict – Ava is feeling hopeless about a life without family so Eve shows Ava that she is her fam – I – Love – You

C. Irony delivers Insights

1. New Way/Insight – Eve tries to convince Mr Butler and his wife to go to church with her.

Eve tells them she wants to take them to see a movie but take them to a church event.

2. New Way/Insight – Love shows Eve how to bring Ava closer.

Ava is in her room crying because someone snuck in and trashed her room. When she opens her eyes, the room has already been straightened out. Ava asks Eve how she cleaned up so fast. Eve says, “the dolls did it”, and laughs.

3. New Way/Insight – Eve tries to study the Bible with Ava.

Eve tells Ava that she has a good book to read. She is telling her about some of the things that happens in the book. Ava is so excited to see the book. Eve gives Ava the Bible.

4. New Way/Insight – Adam wills his house to Eve.

Adam’s brother shows up with an old will that says he gets the house. Then, Eve produces a new will giving the house to her.

5. New Way/Insight – Eve teaches Ava about dolls and enlists her help with starting the business.

As Eve is teaching Ava about the business, she is setting it up so that she is starting her business, but also starting a business for Ava. Her faith not only led to her business being started, but also for Ava, as well.

9) Profound Lines

a. Find somebody else.

Eve was very unsure about Ava living with her

b. The dolls did it.

Meaning built over multiple scenes. Goes from an excuse to a realization that there were also bad dolls

c. We are family

Meaning built over multiple scenes. Goes from a question to a declaration of love – We are FAMILoveYou

10) Profound Ending

A. Express the Profound Truth: By the end of the scene, Eve has started her business and adopted Ava

B. The Change: Eve has regained her confidence and hope for the future, gotten past her heartache, and settled into her mansion.

C. Payoffs: Answers to: Will Eve ever love again? Will Eve get her business started? Will Ava accept Eve and remain at the mansion?

d. Surprising: we think the bad dolls will prevent Eve from starting her new business. The dolls thwart several attempts, but in the end Eve regains her faith which allows her to get the business going.

e. Parting image/Line: Eve and Ava walk into the mansion arm in arm, each carrying a reproduction of one of the good dolls. This has profound meaning. We see that Eve is comfortable calling the mansion home. We see that Eve and Ava have become close and we see the first reproduction of the dolls.