Lesson 18

[Jacqueline Escolme]

Jacqueline’s precise description

What I learned doing this assignment is how many words I can take out or improve upon to make the script read faster. Very helpful exercise!

[Connie Barr]

Connie’s Precise Descriptions

What I learned from doing this exercise is… the questions to ask of each line of description: Necessary? Clear? Need more meaning? Can it be reduced? are useful in creating a fast and easy-to-understand read for potential readers and producers.

With this pass, I was able to pair down descriptions in many scenes that speed up the read. I also deleted one of the montages from the script.

[Monica Arisman]

SUBJECT: Monica’s Precise Description

What I learned doing this assignment is the guidelines helped me tighten up even more description to keep the script flowing.

[Robert W. Daniel]

[Pro-Rewrite] Lesson 18 Assignment Robert Daniel – Precise Description

What I learned doing this lesson is that it improves the readability of script.