• Anna Maganini

    Member
    May 30, 2023 at 10:41 pm

    MY VISION – To write cutting edge, unique, human, soul-inspiring, Oscar-winning scripts that have commercial success and that producers line up to buy and make into multi-million dollar movies. With me in important leading roles. Which makes me a Force in the Hollywood Entertainment industry – as a writer, actor, producer, and director.

    WHAT I LEARNED FROM DOING THIS ASSIGNMENT IS… Ah…it feels nice to get writing. But I thoroughly have enjoyed setting my story up for better success with so many interesting lessons and brainstorming and angles I wouldn’t have thought of before.

  • Anna Maganini

    Member
    May 30, 2023 at 10:45 pm

    P.S. – To anyone who wants to exchange emails, would you mind leaving your email on this forum post? I found it was hard to contact anyone in the short amount of time we had between assignments, since we don’t have each others’ contact info.

    Just in case, we ever want to trade (and I’m not even sure, since I am doing my script mostly privately), but I am including my email at the end of this post. I hope to get yours as well, since I am trying to do what Hal said and do more critiques for others than they do for you, as you can learn a lot doing that.

    Hope to hear from you!

    annamaganini@sbcglobal.net

    😀

  • Cameron Martin

    Member
    May 31, 2023 at 2:38 am

    Cameron Martin’s First Scene

    Vision: Write a story that connects with audiences on a spiritual level, while prioritizing quality time with family.

    What I learned doing this assignment is…Get a composition notebook and make it your mission to trust that your story will get there in time. Just put words to paper; that’s all that matters right now.

    P.S. Cameron.Ross.martin@gmail.com is my email. Don’t know if anyone else has had difficulties with the forums or not. If you want to reach out for feedback or exchanges, I’m happy to help!

  • Anna Maganini

    Member
    May 31, 2023 at 7:20 am

    Hi Cameron,

    Great to get an email at least from somebody. Right now it’s too late to get feedback on an outline since we are already into writing our first draft, but maybe after we write the first draft when we are asked again to share feedback?

    • Cameron Martin

      Member
      June 7, 2023 at 12:59 am

      Hey Anna,

      Sounds great! Looking forward to it!

  • Pam Ewing

    Member
    May 31, 2023 at 5:34 pm

    My Vision: Professional. Produced. Prolific. Popular.

    Just getting started writing but confident I can address any holes.

    Pam

    Pam.ewing1@yahoo.com

  • jeffrey jeff glatz glatz

    Member
    May 31, 2023 at 7:09 pm

    My Vision:

    To create commercial studio size films that move people. To create characters that can live forever and bring electrifying memories to those that have watched one of my films.

    What I learned from doing this assignment – Follow the outline – don’t go down a rabbit hole with new ideas at this point

    email:

    jeffreyglatz@icloud.com

    I am open to reviewing anyone’s material. I thought most people disappeared from the class😀

    • Anna Maganini

      Member
      June 2, 2023 at 4:08 am

      Nope, still here. It’s good to have several people’s email.

Log in to reply.

Assignment Submission Area

In the text box below, please type your assignment. Ensure that your work adheres to the lesson's guidelines and is ready for review by our AI.

Thank you for submitting your assignment!

Our AI will review your work and provide feedback within few minutes and will be shown below lesson.