Lesson 2

[jeffrey jeff glatz glatz]

Jeffrey Glatz Dramatic Reveals!

What I learned from doing this assignment is…? I tried to analyze my reveals. Many of the important “big” reveals are subtly referred to throughout until the “hopefully” major reveal/twist.

I added 2 major deeper layers and subtexts. These went hand in hand with last lesson and they seem to work.

• This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by  jeffrey jeff glatz glatz.

[Anna Maganini]

MODULE 7 – LESSON 2

MY VISION – To write cutting edge, unique, human, soul-inspiring, Oscar-winning scripts that have commercial success and producers line up to buy to make into multi-million dollar movies. Which makes me a Force in the Hollywood Entertainment industry -as a writer, actor, producer, and director.

What have I learned doing this assignment – I was feeling tired because, again, I had to list all the reveals in my script plus the demand (which was a very intriguing and fruitful concept for me to consider and led to a lot of discoveries), and how it was presented dramatically. Again, this part of it took a while, an entire night to do just to list the reveals, since I have a thriller, so there are LOTS of reveals. But once I had all of it listed, it was amazing to look at it all, and see which were the most important and where certain reveals were lacking. So just as I thought, well, I wouldn’t find anything new to work on in my screenplay, I kept finding new things and new ways to reveal things, and to and create the demand more excitingly, and make it play out more dramatically for highest effect. I also added another scene that ramps up a certain reveal in the 3rd act. It has been one epiphany after another. But WE DON’T GET ENOUGH TIME! I don’t think we got the four days promised in the last two lessons, so now I am behind on Lesson 3. But I am happy with my progress, though a little behind.

[jeffrey jeff glatz glatz]

hi anna

I don’t think you (we) are really behind, I think we are very far ahead actually. You’re probably receiving the emails as I am for the lessons. It seems the web version is still wrapping up module 6. In other words, don’t stress 😀

we also may be the only two still taking this particular course right now. I have not seen any other posts coming thru in quite a while from anyone else.

cheers

jeff

[Anna Maganini]

Well, we do seem to be the last ones standing – at least for the time being. Yes, I feel OK about being a little behind. I still have not finished Lesson 3, and we already got Lesson 4. But I am not stressing. I feel I will finish it when I finish it, and then move to the next one. Cheers and congrats to you too, and to me, for hanging in there and finishing all these drafts, and continuing to make it better. 🙂