Lesson 2

[Lloyd Shellenberger]

Lloyd Shellenberger Visually Appealing Bible

Working hard everyday to become the best writer I can be and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.

What I learned from this lesson was how to put pictures and text together in Word and what to put together.

Module 2 – Lesson 12: Creating Beautiful TV Bibles

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I am looking for others who would like to exchange feedback. Please e-mail me at lloydshellenberger@yahoo.com

I will need the Title, Genre, Concept. Thank you for your time.

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Lloyd Shellenberger

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[Lloyd Shellenberger]

Lloyd’s Amazing Inciting Incident

What I learned from this assignment is… I am not sure I am trying to structure this and struggling through it I must admit LOL!

1. What is the “Inciting Incident” of my series?

That is how Col. Benjamin Greene is recruited into the puzzle works and the mission they are given that seems unsolvable.

Col. Benjamin Greene must work for an off- grid Pentagon agency in order to save his son and crew from certain death. He steady decline is temporarily halted after the sudden death of his wife to fulfil his missions.

2. Give us the main beats of that Inciting Incident:

Intriguing Concept: The Puzzle works is a shadowy agency that has a reach into every facet of Greene’s life and Army Career. He must complete their missions or face the certain death of his son.

Act 1: Col. Greene comes home from a late night of binging to discover Puzzle works Agents waiting for him at his Ft. Bragg home. They kill the women he is with and threaten his son if he does not comply.

Midpoint: Reese and his crew arrive at the office the next day to discover a safe and clock were installed overnight.

Lock In: Reese and his men accept the mission and board a C-150 headed to Afghanistan where the must end the drug flow. The mission has begun.

[CJ Lyons]

CJ’s Amazing Inciting Incident

What I learned from this assignment is… how to decide where to put the building blocks of the pilot (although I’m still not sure about what to use for the teaser!)

1. What is the “Inciting Incident” of your series that this pilot needs to deliver powerfully?

Rossi/Patient X must trust her diseased mind and her new psychic powers to save the girl and find the killer—which also means admitting she’s ill and discovering what’s wrong with her

2. Give us the main beats of that Inciting Incident:

Intriguing Concept: Patient X, the first infected with a man-made plague that could end humanity

Act 1: Rossi in ER, treats Ryder for a scalp laceration, banters with ex-husband

Midpoint: Rossi cracks chest of gunshot nun, holds her heart in her hand and hears the flat-lined nun commanding her to “find the girl, save the girl”

Lock In: Rossi and Devon search tunnels for Esme and he sees Rossi in a catatonic state, forcing her to admit there’s something seriously wrong with her, and then they stumble upon a serial killer’s lair