Lesson 22

[Dawn Greenfield]

Dawn Greenfield’s Act 4 Climax – Lesson 22

What I learned doing this assignment is keeping the structure tight.

1. Outline Key Scene 3.

Jack’s day in court arrives. He’s nervous, angry and filled with fear of losing Elsie.

2. Write Key Scene 3: Climax – The Ultimate Expression of The Conflict.

INT. COURT – DAY

ADD DIALOGUE

Jack stands up to the social worker and speaks his mind in court.

Jain holds Elsie. Jack’s new boss is there to lend support. Big Nose Sam and wife are there.

Jack wins in court.