• Benita Cullingford

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    December 22, 2022 at 5:25 pm

    Benita lesson 24 Missing scenes. It was good to fill up the gaps.

    ACT 1….. 3 scenes added showing build up to robbery and police investigation.

    ACT 11…. 2 extra scenes showing Tracy’s warming relationship with her mother and Jim.

    ACT 111.. 2 extra scenes with Tracy’s sister, and a return visit to the lock-up.

    AVT 1V…. Extra scenes were added to show a montage journey to Scotland.

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  • michelle patnett

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    February 24, 2023 at 9:35 pm

    Act 1, Scene 1 – scene added to show the dysfunction of Steven and Monique’s marriage.

    Act 1, Scene 2 – scene added to reflect the hostility and dismissiveness Monique shows to her coworkers.

    Act 2, Scene 3 – scene added to expand on the anger and resentment felt after Monique abandoned her mother and sister.

    Act 3, Scene 1 – scene added to show Jack’s complex, multi-layered scam

    Act 4 – Scene 3 – multiple scenes added to show Monique’s growing empathy and maturity amid numerous setbacks and letdowns.

    Act 4, Scene 5 – scene added to show Monique’s return to her family, and the airing of their grievances. Also shows their reconciliation to her impending death.

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