Lesson 26

[Benita Cullingford]

Benita lesson 26 I have looked hard at my main characters. Think all is Ok. My task is being made easier because I am adapting a published novel

[michelle patnett]

I realized that my protagonist Monique is too one-dimensional. Need to add more believable character traits. She needs to struggle a bit more in her journey, but I also need additional minor characters for her to play off.

Jack, the antagonist, also needs to be better-rounded. I need to provide the “why,” for his character – what is the motivation for him to keep pulling these scams.