Lesson 28

[Kenneth Johnson]

Kenneth Johnson – Chronological Edit

What I learned in this assignment is how much more work my script needs. I am loving the story overall, but it is still short of a full script. I also need to strengthen the conflict between protagonist and antagonist. I like the process!

Here is where improvements were made:
A. Improve the flow. I am still improving the flow as I add to scenes and add additional scenes.
B. Improve the clarity. Clarity was good from the start, but I have made more of the dialogue into images that convey the idea.
C. Improve the description. I’m good with the descriptions
D. Improve the dialogue. I have improved the dialogue and will continue to improve the dialogue over the next week.