Lesson 28

[Laurie Reilly]

Laurie has completed the chronological edit. I learned that the script can always improve. I particularly focused on improving and tightening the narrative description and the dialogue, which of course helps the clarity and flow!

[Margaret]

Margaret’s Chronological edit.

What I learned: Still missing some description that would improve clarity.

I read the script backwards, realized that what I took for grant wasn’t always clear. Able to improve the clarity of the script.