Lesson 3

[jeffrey jeff glatz glatz]

Jeffrey Glatz Elevated Emotion!

What I learned from doing this assignment is…? I found this one challenging from the perspective I ended up making small action and dialogue tweaks to attempt to build in a little more emotion, no major changes or problems found. I did not keep track of how many, but probably about 10 tweaks.

[Anna Maganini]

MODULE 7 – LESSON 3

MY VISION – To write cutting edge, unique, human, soul-inspiring, Oscar-winning scripts that have commercial success and producers line up to buy to make into multi-million dollar movies. Which makes me a Force in the Hollywood Entertainment industry -as a writer, actor, producer, and director.

What have I learned doing this assignment – I changed a couple of scenes somewhat radically in doing this emotional lesson, and I added little changes in several others that ramped up emotion a bit more. There were still a couple more scenes I wanted to work on, but I feel I should go on to the next lesson and then circle back around on this one at the end of Module 7. Again, the changes surprise me when I thought there wasn’t much more to change. My script keeps getting new layers! But one scene I think I did not improve for the better. Not sure. Maybe sometimes you can overdo, and maybe shouldn’t fix it if it ain’t broke? Sometimes not sure where the happy medium is. But I may be doing some overkill in that scene. I might change it back.