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Lesson 4
Posted by cheryl croasmun on January 25, 2024 at 8:54 pmReply to post your work.
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Shelley Darling Character Profiles
These are the improved character profiles.
“What I learned doing this assignment is the importance of building a character with strong profiles that can fulfill and elevate their roles more effectively in each scene.
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A. Name: Mollie
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B. Role in the Story: Protagonist
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C. Core Traits: high-spirited-optimistic, brutally honest, indecisive, escapist
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D. Motivation: Want/Need: Fulfillment, love and freedom
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E. Flaw/Wound: Trust betrayal. Her need for intimacy and intolerance for falsehoods drives her impulsive decision-making,
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F. Secret/Hidden Agenda: To discover and reconcile the suspicion of childhood abuse with her father.
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G. Internal Dilemma: lack of trust in herself and others
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H. What makes this character perfect for their role in this story? Based on a true story, a universal journey to reach our full potential.
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A. Name: Moses
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B. Role in the Story: He’s a catalyst for Mollie to learn what she needs to fulfill her character arc as she works out her issues with her father.
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C. Core Traits: Withholding, Dogmatic, Charmer, Virtuous
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D. Motivation: Want/Need: Fulfillment-accomplishment, to be on control
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E. Flaw/Wound: – Being adopted in a white fundamentalist Christian family-being native. Deep insecurity of not being enough-.
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F. Secret/Hidden Agenda: To discover his roots-
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G. Internal Dilemma: validation-As a dogmatic, fundamentalist Christian his values creates friction with his over sexual drive.
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H. What makes this character perfect for their role in this story? He resembles and has so many of Mollie’s character traits. His charm and rock-solid-decisive presence immediately captivates Mollie, however this undermines her attempts at self-discovery and unraveling the truth of the mystery of her dreams. His withholding and need to control continually clashes with her obsession with truth.
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A. Name: Emeline
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B. Role in the Story: Mollie’s steadfast best friend who supports and speaks her truth-keeps Mollie honest.
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C. Core Traits: dependable, steadfast, practical, defensive
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D. Motivation: Want/Need: to prove herself and recognized for who she is and her purposeful life.
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E. Flaw/Wound: Marginalized and feels unappreciated, loyal to a fault
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F. Secret/Hidden Agenda: to be seen as a protector of Annie and the water.
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G. Internal Dilemma: Her desire to be respected versus the desperate need for validation from others-entitlement
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H. What makes this character perfect for their role in this story? Long term best friend of Mollie, and opposite of Mollie, grounded and dependable.
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