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Lesson 4
Posted by cheryl croasmun on March 1, 2025 at 9:02 amReply to post your assignment.
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Copper … Lead Characters.
1. Transformational Journey Logline: Kim, a transgender woman rejected by society, discovers reality is a prison. With the help of an enlightened mentor, she must embrace her evolution and awaken others before it’s too late.
2. The Change Agent (The one guiding transformation) Liam believes that certain individuals (like Kim) are meant to evolve. Liam’s Past Experience Fits This Vision: He remembers past lives, including being transgender, intersex, and other forms.
3. Transformable Character (Kim’s Role) Why Kim fits this role: She starts off doubting herself, feeling lost and powerless. She’s been gaslit by society, making her question if she’s the problem.
4. The Oppression (What’s keeping them trapped?) Oppression: Society exists within a digitally controlled belief system, where corporations, religion, and technology have merged to dictate reality. Those who deviate from the system are corrected, erased, or exiled.
5. The Betraying Character (Someone who turns against Kim/Liam?) Kim’s Brother → He loves her, but is manipulated into betraying her by their father or the oppressive system.
6. What I Learned Doing This Assignment Is …That betrayal often comes from those closest to us, adding to Kim’s emotional struggle. And this story is bigger than Kim—it’s about waking up her world. -
Copper … The Change Agent and Transformable Character
“What I Learned Doing This Assignment Is …That betrayal often comes from those closest to us, adding to Kim’s emotional struggle. And this story is bigger than Kim—it’s about waking up her world.
1. Transformational Journey Logline: Kim, a transgender woman rejected by society, discovers reality is a prison. With the help of an enlightened mentor, she must embrace her evolution and awaken others before it’s too late.
2. The Change Agent (The one guiding transformation) Liam believes that certain individuals (like Kim) are meant to evolve. Liam’s Past Experience Fits This Vision: He remembers past lives, including being transgender, intersex, and other forms.
3. Transformable Character (Kim’s Role) Why Kim fits this role: She starts off doubting herself, feeling lost and powerless. She’s been gaslit by society, making her question if she’s the problem.
4. The Oppression (What’s keeping them trapped?) Oppression: Society exists within a digitally controlled belief system, where corporations, religion, and technology have merged to dictate reality. Those who deviate from the system are corrected, erased, or exiled.
5. The Betraying Character (Someone who turns against Kim/Liam?) Kim’s Brother → He loves her, but is manipulated into betraying her by their father or the oppressive system.
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I put an assignment in the wong lesson. I fixed it. I must’ve been tired to have done that
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