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Lesson 4
Posted by cheryl croasmun on May 21, 2025 at 5:30 pmReply to post your assignment.
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Karen Christine´s Villain´s Track
What I learned doing this assignment is:
I learned that a strong villain track isn’t just about creating obstacles for the hero—it’s about making the villain’s motivations and plans as compelling and dynamic as the hero’s journey.Villain Track Questions
A. What might be the Villain’s plan to accomplish an evil outcome or to annihilate the hero?
Sylvia’s pre-existing plan is to destroy the lie detector and cover up her crimes. When Charlie accidentally ends up with the device, she shifts to a Version 1 plan, using her resources to track him down, retrieve the device, and eliminate anyone who knows about it.Her ultimate goal is to ensure the lie detector—and the truth it can expose—never sees the light of day.
B. How many ways can the Villain attack or destroy the hero?
Sylvia uses a combination of direct attacks and psychological tactics to dismantle Charlie:Mercenary Teams: She sends operatives to retrieve the lie detector, escalating their tactics with each failure.
Smear Campaign: She frames Charlie as a thief and a criminal, turning public opinion against him.
Kidnapping Sophie: She uses Charlie’s love interest as leverage to force him to surrender.
Manipulation: Sylvia exploits Charlie’s insecurities, planting doubts about whether he’s capable of protecting the lie detector.
Surveillance and Tech: She uses AI-powered surveillance to track Charlie’s movements and predict his next steps.C. What advantage does the Villain have, and how can they exploit that in this movie?
Sylvia has:Government Resources: As a high-ranking official, she can mobilize agents, manipulate law enforcement, and access cutting-edge technology.
Corporate Allies: Her partnership with the CEO of Veritas Corp gives her additional resources, including mercenaries and AI surveillance tools.
Charisma and Public Image: Sylvia is seen as a philanthropist and reformer, making it easy for her to discredit Charlie and maintain her power.
Strategic Thinking: Sylvia is a master manipulator, always staying one step ahead of her enemies.D. What would be a “fitting end” for this Villain where they pay for what they’ve done?
Sylvia’s fitting end is a public downfall where her lies and crimes are exposed in front of the world. During the climax, Charlie uses the lie detector to force her to confess on live television. Her carefully constructed image crumbles, and she’s arrested, losing her power, reputation, and freedom.Villain Track: Sylvia’s Plans, Decisions, and Actions
1. PRE-EXISTING PLAN: Destroy the Lie Detector
Before the story begins, Sylvia learns that Dr. Eleanor Vance has stolen the lie detector from the government lab. Sylvia hires mercenaries to retrieve it and eliminate Dr. Vance.
Action: The mercenaries fail to find the device, as it ends up in the park where Charlie’s dog retrieves it.2. DISCOVERY: Charlie Has the Device
Sylvia’s operatives track the device to Charlie after he accidentally activates it.
Decision: Sylvia orders her team to retrieve the device quietly to avoid drawing attention.3. FIRST ATTACK: Mercenary Ambush
Sylvia sends a team of mercenaries to Charlie’s apartment.
Action: The mercenaries raid his home, but Charlie escapes with the lie detector and his dogs.4. ESCALATION: Smear Campaign
Realizing Charlie is more resourceful than she thought, Sylvia launches a public smear campaign.
Action: She frames Charlie as a thief and a dangerous fugitive, releasing fake evidence to the media. This forces Charlie to go underground.5. KIDNAPPING: Sophie as Leverage
Sylvia identifies Sophie as Charlie’s weak spot and decides to use her as leverage.
Action: Sylvia’s agents kidnap Sophie and threaten to harm her unless Charlie surrenders the lie detector.6. CAPTURE: Charlie Falls into the Trap
Sylvia sets a trap for Charlie, using Sophie as bait.
Action: Charlie is captured and brought to Sylvia, where she tries to manipulate him into giving up the device by preying on his insecurities.7. FINAL PLAN: Public Event
Sylvia organizes a high-profile event (e.g., a political fundraiser or press conference) to frame herself as a hero while discrediting Charlie.
Action: She plans to destroy the lie detector during the event, ensuring no one can use it against her.8. FITTING END: Public Confession
During the climax, Charlie crashes the event and uses the lie detector to expose Sylvia’s lies on live television.
Action: Sylvia tries to spin the situation but is forced to confess her crimes as the lie detector exposes her in front of the audience.
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