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Lesson 4
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H. Vince’s Script Exchange
WIM Module 9 – 2023
Lesson 4: Partner Up to Exchange Feedback
My Vision: I will be a professional screenwriter.
TITLE: DREAM VACATION
WRITTEN BY: H. Vince
GENRE: DRAMA/THRILLER
HIGH CONCEPT: When a retired couple finally take their dream vacation, the husband starts showing signs of rapid dementia and leaves his wife in distress in a foreign country.
MAJOR STORY HOOK: Imagine thinking you can trust your doctor to prescribe you something to block your anxiety and instead you become a guinea pig for a clinical trial drug that causes extreme memory loss while you’re in a foreign country on your dream vacation!?
Hello WIM Group! Let me know who wants to exchange. I’m thinking someone I haven’t exchanged with before or not for a while would be good if possible.
Thank you!😃
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Vince, I’d be happy to exchange feedback with you.
My info: Title: Berlin Rendezvous?
Written by: Lenore Bechtel
Email Address: lenorebechtel33@gmail.com
Genre: Drama/Suspense
High Concept: Keeping her promise to Zhores, the Russian soldier she loved until the
Berlin Wall went up in 1961, Libby—flying to meet him when the Wall is coming
down in 1989—is stunned to learn how her seat-mates lives intertwine with theirs.
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Subject Lloyd Feedback Exchange!
“What I learned doing this assignment is a script is a living and breathing document that will change right up to the day of the shoot. I can improve it every day”.
Working hard every day to become the best writer I can be and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.
Title: Left Behind Letters from Baghdad
Written by Lloyd Shellenberger
Email address: lloydshellenberger@yahoo.com
Genre: Action Drama
High Concept: An Iraqi interpreter is murdered while on patrol, SFC Reese and his unit must risk their lives and careers to save the widow and her children from certain death at the hands of a vengeful terrorists.
Based upon a true story.
Script 98 pages
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Lloyd, would you be willing to exchange with me? Margaret
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Margaret’s Feedback Exchange
Title: The Rock of Cashel
email address: silebi@hotmail.com
Genre: Faith-based Fantasy
High Concept: A slave becomes a priest and fights druids
and creatures from Ireland’s otherworld to save the king and change the
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Yes,
I would If you want how would you like to do this and would you want to do it one week from now. I am finishing up as much of it as I can. Minor stuff but I have someone else that is reading my stuff as well. It might not be PG rated as this is about soldiers and the war? How do you feel about that. You can call me at 747-210-1983 and speak to me directly and let me know if you are comfortable with the concept.
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Hi!
I was intrigued with your concept from the first time I read it. Definitely interested. I sent you an email with my script. When you are ready, send yours. 🙂 Thanks!
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