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Lesson 4 Assignments
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What I learned doing this assignment is that I thought I knew the story that I wanted to tell but realized that I had not opened up my mind to the endless opportunities as to where this story could lead. I’m so excited to find that there is much more buried beneath to what I thought was the original story.
Jack Young’s Episode List Rough Draft for Season I of “STREAM”
SEASON I: Michael Must Die
EPISODES:
1- Michael Crosses Over
Bullets:
– As child, Michael almost drowns and has vision of the Seals
– Michael repossess the home and car of an old woman client at work
– SEC issues warrant for Michael for illegal stock deal
– Michael breaks off affair with secretary
– Michael’s headache’s intensify
– Michael has visions of the Stream and Professor
– Michael finds out he has terminal brain cancer
– Michael meets the Professor and Thomas
– Michael dies to enter the Stream
2- The Sorcerer’s Story.
Bullets:
– King sends sons to investigate darkness over kingdom
– Sons find Sorcerer summoning darkness and creating monsters
– Sorcerer dies during fight and is drawn into portal to planet of Sacred Seals
– One son kills his brother over affair during chaos
– King kills traitor son for other son’s death
3- Alien Invasion
Bullets:
– Aliens arrive on planet of seals
– Aliens discover the seals as a source of strange/dark power
– Aliens discover it is evil and try to escape
– Aliens find they are trapped on planet
– Evil infiltrates ship and causes pregnancy of human and other specimens
– New kind of evil/dark creatures are born
4- Cronus is born
Bullets:
– Cronus is born of human woman and grows to take control of the aliens
– Cronus discovers the body of the Sorcerer near the Seals
– Sorcerer is brought back to life and becomes aid to Cronus
– Cronus develops plan to raise the 6 Sacred Seals
– The Sorcerer devises methods with Aliens to bring workers to planet
– Sorcerer and Aliens develop The Stream to steals souls for slave workers
– The City of Seals is built around the seals
5- The Professor’s Story
Bullets:
– A group of college students dabble experiment with astral projection
– Professor Darlington becomes aware of their activities
– The Professor approaches the students and mentors them on Astral Projection
– Professor reveals his origin and dark secrets of Astral Projection
– Professor and students discover the “Stream” in the Astral plane.
– Professor makes connection to no-birth and is ridiculed by science community
6- I’m In Heaven?
Bullets:
– Michael arrives in the Ocean of Souls (Heaven)
– Michael is plucked from the Ocean of Souls and is given a new “Skin”
– Michael is assigned work in the Black Forest
7- Keeping Michael Alive.
Bullets:
– Michael’s wife escapes with Michael’s preserved body
– Thomas steals equipment to maintain Michael’s body
– Police implement a wide are search for Michael’s wife.
8- The Professor’s Secret Experiments.
Bullets:
– The Professor has breakthrough discovery on human soul/body connection
– Police confers with FBI on Professor’s work
– FBI hones in on Professor’s research
– Professor flees with his team
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MADELEINE VESSEL’S Episode List Rough Draft
What I learned doing this assignment is that it is possible to flesh out a season by using Hal’s step-by-step method. I found it complicated and difficult at first. It’s still rough, but I do find that my mind continues to percolate. I can see the first season starting to make sense but also changing from what I originally envisioned.
Walking In Shadows
Season 1: The Hidden Hoard
Episode 1: Zhora and Falisa are attacked by Russian Thieves
· Zhora and Falisa are attacked by Russians.
· Zhora, the lone survivor of the attack, believes the assailants were enemies from his past.
· Bill steps up to protect Zhora and Sophie.
· After seeing Zhora in the hospital, Sophie returns home to find burglars in her house.
Episode 2: Russians burglers in Sophie’s house escape being caught.
· Sophie suspects the burglars were looking for Falisa’s fourth painting.
· Sophie and Bill break into Falisa’s house and find all her paintings gone.
· Sophie and Bill search Falisa’s storage unit, where Sophie finds an art thief’s diary.
· One of the Russian art thieves, Falisa’s murderer, is found dead, floating in San Francisco Bay.
· Sophie is kidnapped by the remaining Russian art thieves.
Episode 3: Sophie is ransomed for Falisa’s fourth painting.
· Bill chases the car with the kidnapper and Sophie inside.
· Bill captures and arrests the kidnapper, but he’s not the big boss.
· Sophie loans the fourth Old Master to the Russian Exhibition to keep it safe from thieves.
· Bill and Sophie go to the Russian Art Exhibition together. They make a good-looking couple
Episode 4: Bill suspects the kidnapper will attend the Russian Art Exhibition.
· One of the exhibition guests is the director of Moscow’s Tretyakov Gallery.
· Vitaly Burundukov recommends Sophie for a summer job at the Tretyakov.
· It’s against the rules of witness protection to travel to Russia, but Sophie goes anyway.
· One of Burundukov’s men follows Sophie the minute she lands in Moscow
Episode 5: Sophie gains access to Russian archives and works at the Tretyakov
· At the Russian Archives, Sophie identifies Russian nobles victimized by Lenin.
· Sophie visits a victims’ home and runs into one of the donors to her San Francisco exhibition.
· Sophie authenticates and appraises paintings for wealthy Russian collectors.
Episode 6: Sophie finds part of The Immortal Movement Hoard
· Sophie visits a wealthy art collector’s home, finds Immortal Movement paintings.
· Russian thugs break into the house, kill the collector, and shoot Sophie.
· Burundukov’s bodyguard finds her near death and calls an ambulance.
· Her life hangs in the balance.
Episode 7: Sophie’s death notice is published
· Thought to be dead, Sophie secretly returns to the U. S.
· She discovers that her friend Olivia is accepting stolen Russian paintings at her museum.
· Sophie learns that the paintings are going to go on display at a San Francisco art gallery.
· Sophie forces Olivia to take her to the gallery exhibition
Episode 8: Sophie finds the Immortal Movement Hoard
· At the exhibition, Sophie and Olivia find the Immortal Mortal Movement Hoard on display.
· The Art Thief recognizes Sophie and realizes she’s not dead.
· The Art Thief chases Olivia and Sophie with a gun.
· Sophie and the art thief confront one another. She gets the upper hand
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Eric Humble’s Episode List (Rough Draft)
What I learned doing this lesson is: that I can generate tons of ideas that can fill up an entire season and beyond. I was initially worried that both of my concepts just didn’t have enough story to make it as tv shows… but after using these techniques, I was able to brainstorm/collate more ideas that I could use in one season. It’s a rough draft and is a little too wordy for the bullet points asked, but for both concepts I’m really starting to see two shows here, which is exhilarating.
CONCEPT 1:
Episode 1: Jude discovers the cure for Catherine’s cancer is embedded in Dres’s DNA… but someone’s trying to kill Dres!
Jude skips an award dinner where he’s being honored to complete a test… and get closer to curing cancer.
Catherine is diagnosed with inoperable cancer. Jude chooses to hide this from her, believing he can get the cure developed before it’s too late.
Marks is a Big Pharma CEO whose decisions can move markets… and he wants Jude on his team. But Jude doesn’t like the idea of cures as big business.
Jude has a lead on a cure – from the DNA of a blood sample from a well-to-do businesswoman.
Jude finds the woman’s address – she’s squatting in a vacant lot. It’s Dres, a homeless con artist. Before he can question her, someone tries to kill her.
Marks is involved in a shadowy cabal – and he’s in deep shit for failing to have Dres killed.
Episode 2: Dres discovers Jude is getting kickbacks and tries to con the money out of Catherine… when together they kill an assassin who is trying to kill Dres!
Jude looks for Dres, can’t find her anywhere…
…and the trail leads him to some dangerous places in the seedy underbelly of the city.
Jude investigates the attempted killing, uncovers fringe theories about a cabal.
Dres, meanwhile, is researching Jude – and discovers he’s getting kickbacks from insurance and Big Pharma companies to slow his research.
Dres involves her partner into a plan to con Jude’s money – from Catherine.
Dres starts the con on Catherine – when another attempt is made… and Dres and Catherine kill the assassin together!
Episode 3: Jude takes Marks up on his offer to work for the Big Pharma conglomerate so that he can infiltrate the cabal.
Dres and Catherine cover up the murder using Dres’s underworld contacts.
Jude traces the rumors of the cabal to the Big Pharma company Marks works for.
Catherine falls ill and Jude gaslights her to dissuade her from going to the doctor.
Cabal Leader orders Mr. Jacques, the Europe Section Chief, to “aid” Marks in finding and killing Dres – it’s a competition.
Marks suspects he’s being watched/targeted by his own cabal.
Jude takes Marks up on his offer so that he can infiltrate the cabal.
Episode 4: Jude has to prove himself to get invited into the cabal.
Jude gets the attention of Marks and others who may or may not be involved at a conference.
Jude is contacted anonymously – with a request/threat to prove his intentions.
Jude arrives at the meet in a park after dark… where he’s instructed to destroy all his research on cancer. He does so – and gets no response from the darkness.
Jude has to announce the failure of his research at another conference – it’s a huge career hit and he is berated by Marks.
Dres wants to call off the con against Catherine, but her partner won’t let her.
Episode 5: Marks catches Jude trying to access data he shouldn’t be within the company.
Jude discovers there’s a database only available to executives at the Big Pharma company… which might give him a line on Dres.
Dres tries to head off her partner from continuing the con – but he gets to Catherine when she’s sick and vulnerable, and gets her to trust him… and shut Dres out.
Jude stages a plan to get into the database… but Marks catches him.
The cabal assassins drag Jude, bound and blindfolded, to a meeting – where the Cabal Leader interrogates him on why he’s trying to access their group.
He’s almost killed when he is saved… by Dres.
Episode 6: Dres cons Marks to learn the cabal’s secrets… so she can avenge her mother’s death!
Dres helps Jude get off-grid and recover from the beating he took. She warns him against her partner making moves on Catherine… and has learned of Marks as a way into the cabal.
Jude doesn’t understand why she would want to get closer to the cabal… and can’t ask, because she disappears again.
Jude returns to intercept Dres’s partner… only to find Catherine unconscious and needing the hospital…
…where he still won’t be truthful about what’s wrong with her.
Marks gets caught trying to access files that the Cabal Leader has locked away, has to bluff his way out. Turns out these two have a father-son, mentor-protege relationship.
Marks’s daughter is dying of MS. He’s still being watched by the cabal… has to make a move soon or he’ll be a target.
Episode 7: Jude is let into the cabal, but there’s a rigorous series of tests he must undergo to prove his loyalty to the Cabal Leader.
Jude is let into the cabal, but there’s a rigorous series of tests he must undergo to prove his loyalty to the Cabal Leader.
Marks is in a dangerous spot within the cabal, so in his public persona, he announces his intentions to enter into a deal with an emerging tech company to ensure all Big Pharma companies thrive going forward.
But he doesn’t have a deal lined up. That was just to buy him time to have Drea killed. But he has to deliver in order to have leverage with the cabal.
Dres sets herself up as a tech company genius and gets Marks’s attention… but Marks seduces her to sign the deal right away.
Dres is doing this because the same cabal that’s hunting her killed her mother… and she wants revenge.
Episode 8: Dres’ partner is accidentally killed in her stead… prompting her to return to Jude to combine forces.
Dres’s partner gets to Catherine while Jude is away being tested by the cabal, and cons her into giving him their bank account information.
He’s about to steal their money, when the cabal makes another attempt – and, thinking he is Dres, kills him.
Dres finds the body, is spooked enough to return to Jude. Wants to combine forces to take the cabal down. In return, he can test her blood.
But Jude is being indoctrinated into the cabal and can’t work in the lab until or unless his job is reinstated.
Episode 9: Dres confesses to Catherine that she’s 100 years old and her mom was killed thirty years ago, even though she herself looks 20. Catherine doesn’t believe her… but has memories of history a full century before that.
A detective comes sniffing around the trail of the dead assassin… and has linked the remains to Dres and Catherine.
Jude has to carry out his first assignment for the cabal–erase the data at his old job so no one picks up where he left off and arrives at the same conclusions.
Jude does so – but it pains him. The Cabal Leader points to the kickbacks and comfortable lifestyle he’s used to – he’s been putting profits ahead of the common good for years.
Dres takes Catherine to a museum–to shake their tail, who is either police or cabal. Here, she confesses to Catherine that she’s lived through some of the events before them. She is 100 years old and her mom was killed thirty years ago, even though she herself looks 20.
Catherine acts like she doesn’t believe her… but has memories of history a full century before that… including a fling with the Cabal Leader seventy years ago!
Episode 10: Jude discovers the cabal’s secret: they’ve known about the immortals curing cancer for 100 years – and have been systematically exterminating them to keep the business of cancer in the red.
Catherine confronts Jude about not telling her she has cancer… and it leads to a rift.
Jude is fully accepted into the cabal. They’re all global insurance and Big Pharma execs.
Jude discovers why Dres is the target: the cabal has known immortals can cure cancer for a hundred years… and have been killing them to keep the business of cancer in the red.
Cliffhanger: Catherine rekindles her romance with the Cabal Leader to find out why she’s sick – but it’s a trap to ferret out the traitor in their midst: Jude!
CONCEPT 2:
Episode 1: Darren is a by-the-book FBI Agent, won’t tolerate any of his men violating the rules. Is ethical and moral. Scoleri is a ruthless mob boss about to torture and kill a rat in his organization then go to war with Darren and Feds… when Darren is ordered to stand down, because someone has arranged for Scoleri to enter the presidential race!
Darren discovers his hands are tied by a new law prohibiting federal investigations of people currently running for or holding office.
The law is the brainchild of the sitting POTUS.
Darren quits, leaving Bender to handle the fallout… including restructuring of the Organized Crime Unit, which Bender wants to take control of.
Scoleri and his son/family can’t go anywhere without press hounding them… impossible to run the family crime empire.
Darren visits an injured kid who is struggling physically and financially… has some kind of relationship with him. It seems friendly but there’s a tenseness to it.
Eco is a timid mob lawyer for Scoleri’s business – the only one trustworthy enough and privy to enough of the secrets to run the empire from the shadows and insulate the family. He’s overwhelmed and Scoleri Jr. sees a rival in him.
Darren is depressed, Rebecca his powerful Congresswoman wife feels helpless for him…
When Darren gets the idea to work for POTUS’s campaign and take down Scoleri and POTUS (for creating the law) all in one swoop.
Episode 2: Darren tries to get the campaign to go a certain way, finds he has no power… and the chief of staff won’t let him advance. Scoleri comes to DC and meets the party elite… and doesn’t fit in at all.
Rebecca counsels Darren that politics is like the wild west – the only rule here is don’t get caught.
Darren gets the job and pitches a strategy, only to be shunted aside by the chief of staff.
Scoleri comes to DC and meets the party elite… doesn’t fit in at all.
Darren has Bender keep him in the loop – they continue the investigation off the radar.
Eco struggles to keep the empire running when reports come in that a rival gang is poaching Scoleri’s territory.
Episode 3: Darren tries to find common ground with the campaign chief, but the chief smears him to the press, giving him an out to fire Darren. Scoleri and Scoleri Jr. set about getting dirt or creating it on every member of party leadership to blackmail them.
Darren tries to find common ground with the campaign chief.
The chief smears him to the press, giving him an out to fire Darren.
Bender goes to his and Darren’s old informant—Eco. Wants to know Scoleri’s moves… not realizing Eco is now the de facto leader.
Scoleri and Scoleri Jr. set about getting dirt on every member of party leadership to blackmail them.
But the majority leader is untouchable… so Scoleri uses mob-syle intimidation to get his endorsement.
Only to learn that he’ll need more than party support – the people, particularly in a waterfront city Scoleri himself has decimated, will need to vote for him. And they love the presumptive nominee.
Rebecca chairs a hearing on foreign influence in American businesses… and grills Eco.
Episode 4: Eco must quell a takeover by a rival gang. Scoleri gets the idea of revitalizing the waterfront he himself corrupted for decades. Darren goes around the chief of staff to clue reporters into his own strategy for the President… and is caught.
Eco must quell a takeover by a rival gang, and uses cold logic to keep the peace… which appears to work at first.
Until the rival gang decimates Scoleri’s crew and takes claim of the location… and sets a high rate for Eco to do business as usual.
Darren goes around the chief of staff to clue reporters into his own strategy for the President… and is caught.
The chief of staff is about to fire him when Darren reveals this was all a blind for Darren to access the campaign funds—he’s transferred millions from POTUS’s fund to the presumptive nominee on the other side to prop him up… and he did it under the chief’s access. Uses this as leverage to stay.
Scoleri wanders the waterfront, holds the people in contempt… until he and his bodyguards are robbed by a kid in with a group of hooligans who reminds him of himself.
Eco meets with Rebecca. They know each from sometime in the past… and they enter into an affair.
Episode 5: Scoleri’s rival tries to intimidate him… and succeeds. Darren decides to play dirty – takes down a drug dealer off-duty… and rips off his drugs.
Scoleri’s rival tries to intimidate him… and succeeds.
Darren decides to play dirty – takes down a drug dealer off-duty… and rips off his drugs.
Bender has a gambling addiction. Gets in deep and has no choice but to go to a loan shark.
Eco swoops in to clear Bender’s debt—in return for Bender raiding the rival gang and arresting them, which he does.
It’s a boon for Bender’s career—except Eco owns him. Bender is now his informant within the FBI.
Scoleri’s in danger of having to drop out—when he changes gears. He’s not playing anymore, wants to know who put him in this spot and why.
Episode 6: Scoleri chases down a lead as to who set up this presidential run. Darren does the same… but it’s a setup – they’re on a collision course.
Scoleri chases down a lead from an IT guy on his campaign staff s to who set up this presidential run.
Darren, through Bender, does the same.
But it’s a setup – they’re on a collision course.
The rival gang escapes FBI custody and are gunning for Eco.
Eco tries to use Rebecca to get info on the from Darren’s sources. But she sets a boundary—spouses and business are off limits.
Eco confronts the gang… and ruthlessly kills the crew and torches the drugs they brought in. Then insists that the leader, the only one remaining, works for him and will continue deliveries as scheduled—even though he’s just destroyed a six month supply.
Episode 7: Scoleri is bringing in businesspeople to revitalize the waterfront when he steps into the life of a kid who reminds him of himself… and, moved, decides to go further. Cuts off his drug supply and erects a drug rehabilitation clinic. Shoos away the investors who seek to gentrify – this neighborhood belongs to these people.
Scoleri is brings in businesspeople to revitalize the waterfront…
…when he steps into the life of thekid who robbed him. Gets him out of a gangland jam.
But the kid hates him for what he’s doing. He decides to go further.
Scoleri shoos away the investors who seek to gentrify – this neighborhood belongs to these people.
Eco uses Bender to discover
Episode 8: Darren uses the stolen drugs to set the campaign chief of staff up for drug trafficking, of which he’s innocent. Scoleri sets up a youth center, ceases use of the waterfront area for drug trafficking, and establishes a rehab clinic. Brings businesses in to revitalize but not gentrify. Is seen as a hero… and wins the nomination.
Darren is stonewalled from speaking to the president…
… so he plants the drugs on the chief of staff. Gets him arrested and takes his job. Has the President’s ear. And is exhilarated at the power and freedom.
Scoleri sets up a youth center, ceases use of the waterfront area for drug trafficking, and establishes a rehab clinic.
Scoleri brings businesses in to revitalize but not gentrify.
Is captured on social media and is seen as a hero… and wins the nomination.
Cliffhanger: The one behind all this is Rebecca – flashback shows she’s a Russian spy who was supposed to get intel on the FBI through her husband. At gunpoint, execution for failure, she proposed this plan… to get a puppet in the White House in the form of Scoleri.
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Cathryn Atkinson’s Episode List Rough Draft for RUN ANGELITA
What I learned doing this assignment is to tell the story. And since I am adapting a feature into a series, I had a lot to move around
Episode 1: Run Angelita
· COLD OPEN: Angelita hiding in the panic room as Luis is being attacked by the cartel and Nana walks in on it, Angelita’s perspective (black, limited vision, sound)
· Angelita escapes the room after they go. Finds Nana wounded, tells her to head north to America because her (long-lost) mother is in LA. Asks about the medallion Luis gave her for her birthday. Take it!
· Angelita as an anonymous migrant walking to America among many others. In Oaxaca she thinks she sees Enrique, who killed her brother Luis. Enrique aims at her.
· Angelita awakes from this nightmare and is in detention in Texas
· She is attacked in prison by two boys, beats the hell out of them, which creates a riot and multiple escapees, including her
· Chance has a fight with his father
· Angelita takes Chance hostage
· He takes her to El Paso bus station – where hundreds of released migrants have just been dumped by ICE.
· Veronica doing story on migrant grape pickers and winery shows how unhappy she is
· Chance takes her to his ex-stepmother Veronica, journalist and retired marine, who listens promises to help her find her mother.
· Enrique arrives in Texas
Episode 2:
· COLD OPEN: Flashback – Target practice in San Salvador, Angelita and Luis
· Flashback: Enrique is waiting outside shooting range and talks to Luis. Angelita shows her contempt.
· Luis drops her off home and she helps Nana make dinner
· Nana goes out and Luis turns up and hides Angelita in the panic room. The door is battered down
· Present day – Angelita tells Veronica SOME of her story/Veronica promises not to publish it until after she has found her mother and is safe
· Veronica helps Angelita and Chance leave for LA, refuses to give Angelita a weapon
· Veronica’s editor freaks out that the winery story isn’t ready, she tells him about Angelita and Chance. He orders her to write it
· Enrique goes to the prison. Kills the boys who attacked Angelita
· Tremblay turns up at the bus depot, still packed with migrants now getting help
· Angelita and Chance avoid pulling over at checkpoint
· Angelita has taken Veronica’s handgun; Chance makes her show him she knows what to do
· Target practice in the desert
· Veronica publishes Angelita and Chance’s story as a feature
· Someone pings Enrique and he sees the story
Episode 3:
· COLD OPEN: Flashback – San Salvador. Comes home after shooting range. Makes pupusas with Nana, talk about birthday/present, medical school
· Angelita catches Chance taking medication for his cancer treatment
· Angelita and Chance go to the fair as they wait for Veronica and get into a fight with locals.
· Veronica tells Angelita and Chance that the story is published, asks them to wait for her
· As she packs her gear, her ex-Tremblay shows up for Chance. They argue, he threatens her and leaves
· Enrique turns up, tries her door. Locked. She calls out to him, thinking it is Tremblay. He shoots through the door, and she shoots back, nicking his face.
Episode 4:
· COLD OPEN: Flashback – San Salvador. Luis starts to steal from Moneda, siphoning the cartel’s funds away from him. Reveals why he wanted to do this.
· Angelita and Chance stop for food at a diner/gas station – Chance goes inside to order
· Enrique is inside, eating, and being threatened over his phone by Moneda. He realizes Angelita is with chance
· Enrique chases them having not filled his car up with gas and nudges their car, his spins hits rock. Face off. Enrique tells Angelita they need to talk. She drives away backward
· They meet Veronica in the desert. Angelita attacks her and runs off into the dark.
· Angelita drops the medallion; it bounced off a rock and opens. There are etched codes on the side.
Episode 5:
· COLD OPEN: San Salvador Flashback – Luis tracks down Angelita and her best friend Freya at a mall and gives her a birthday present, the medallion
· Veronica and Chance look for Angelita in the dark
· They find her quickly. Angelita has stumbled over the corpse of a migrant who died in the desert.
· Veronica apologizes, and surprises her with saying she has found Angelita’s mother.
· Angelita and her mother talk on the phone. Emotional.
· Angelita studies the etched codes but does not tell the Americans what happened.
· They arrive in Los Angeles
· Angelita calls her friend Freya back home to tell her about her mother.
Episode 6:
· COLD OPEN: The Border – Angelita finds out from the authorities she is being incarcerated and probably sent back to Mexico, despite being an unaccompanied minor.
· Angelita sneaks away from Veronica and Chance, using instructions her mother gave her while on the phone.
· Veronica and Chance can’t find her. Think of going to the FBI or border services.
· Angelita’s “mother” is Enrique’s deputy Daria. What happened to her mother?
· Daria holds her hostage. Angelita finds out that Luis had stolen money, then realizes that the medallion she has it the key to access it.
· Chance and Veronica track her phone.
· Angelita knocks Daria out, after Daria tries to kill her, and escapes.
· They escape together.
Episode 7:
· COLD OPEN: Angelita in the detention center. Noticing Tremblay watching her, she gives him the finger.
· Chance and Veronica believe it is time to bring in Tremblay and US authorities.
· Angelita is depressed and distraught that her mother is missing, too. She agrees to meet with the authorities and Tremblay promises her protection
· They go to meet him near San Diego and when wait at the location at night, and Enrique arrives and takes Chance hostage. Angelita and Veronica watch from a hill.
· Then three anti-migrant vigilantes take Enrique and Chance hostage, turning the tables
· Veronica makes Angelita wait while she goes to negotiate.
· She negotiates the release of Chance and they meet Angelita at the car. As they drive away, they nearly hit another vigilante with three migrants he has captive. One a young woman has been raped. Angelita kills him.
· They escape and call the police on the vigilantes and Enrique, then they take the migrants to a refuge.
· Enrique kills the three vigilantes and hears the police coming. He prepares for a shootout
· Tremblay arrives, they have been working together, and they drive away in Tremblay’s car.
Episode 8
· Dawn: Angelita, Veronica and Chance pull into a small town and decide to have breakfast before going to the local police station. But they see Tremblay and Enrique together, going to the same diner. They hurry away
· Daria calls Angelita and says she wants to talk to her about her family, and calls Moneda. Moneda tells Enrique to back her up. He and Tremblay hurry to meet her.
· Daria tells Angelita it will cost her, if she wants the info. Angelita says she has no money and Daria laughs and tells her it is half a billion, just as Enrique turns up. Daria shoots him in the leg.
· Angelita learns that Enrique is Enrique Alves, her oldest brother.
· Angelita kills Daria, Enrique offers to be her family. To use the money to help them get a new life.
· Angelita shoots him in the other leg and disappears.
· Enrique is arrested, has no prior convictions, and is repatriated to El Salvador. Moneda is on the charter plane that brings him back.
· Back in El Salvador Moneda and his team regroup, and he fears that his boss Aguila will find out he lifted the money. At that point, Aguila only blames Luis, and he thinks it’s for less.
· Veronica gets fired
· Angelita tells Chance and Veronica that she has money, won’t say how much, and that they can come with her, but she is going to give it away.
· Angelita (VO) remembers and misses her dead Nana as Moneda opens a locked door for Enrique, who sees that inside is Nana, who survived the shooting and is Moneda’s prisoner.
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George Petersen – EPISODE LIST ROUGH DRAFT
What I learned doing this assignment is elevating the plot, that is, creating more motion in the plot, should definitely be done during the outline phase.
THE ART OF SECRECY
THE RED BALLOT
1 – Kate and Pinkerton discover who is behind the plot:
Kate’s acting ambition, her desire to be on the stage: You’re a chameleon. A what?
Pinkerton working as a Cooper trainer in the Underground Railroad (character searching for meaning) (identifies with the slaves for having lost their homeland as he has lost his beloved Scotland – undeserved suffering)
Lincoln alone at Willy’s grave, the heartbreak, he speaks to Willy about winning the Presidency and how much it would have meant to him before, but not now, not with the pain of leaving his grave, of losing the ability to be close to him. (Undeserved suffering)
Ferrandini busts up a Blood Tubs dunking of a political opponent in a slaughterhouse tub of pig’s blood. He emphasizes to them that they need to stop this foolishness, they need to commit to a cause, they need to join the KGC and make something of themselves. Clyde of the Blood Tubs ridicules Ferrandini. The Blood Tubs laugh at him. (Antagonist goal/transformation from seeking power to becoming all-powerful through recruitment)
Kate applies for the detective job, marriage counselor, I’m a chameleon. A what? (Fish out of water) (loss of husband, undeserved suffering)
Fenton hires Pinkerton (mystery)
Lincoln meets with his security detail. He adds Lamon. (Intrigue)
Ferrandini announces, at a top secret KGC meeting, that Lincoln will be coming through Baltimore and they’d better get ready (intrigue)
Kate meets with Pinkerton about plans for Mobtown (intrigue)
Kate and Pinkerton find themselves in torchlight parade, featuring a hanging effigy of Lincoln, banners, speeches, and songs and fireworks. Pinkerton meets Rhett of the Black Snakes. (intrigue)
Kate meets Ferrandini and Miles of the KGC (intrigue)
Pinkerton gets a haircut, pumps Ferrandini for information. Pinkerton meets Jack of the KGC (mystery)
Pinkerton tells Kate that Ferrandini knows a lot about the city and he should be a mark for information. They plan a set up. (intrigue)
Lincoln and Mary – she wants to appoint cabinet members (conflict)
Ferrandini “protects” Kate from Pinkerton’s unwanted moves. Jude of the Rip Raps offers to support Ferrandini, but he dismisses him. Now alone, Kate “confides”in Ferrandini — and he with her (intrigue)
The assassination of Lincoln in the carriage by being ripped apart as narrated by Ferrandini, which morphs into a dream that Kate awakes from, horrified (intrigue, mystery)
Kate tells Pinkerton that Ferrandini is the leader of the plot (intrigue)
Ferrandini meets with the heads of the gangs. He’s challenged by Rhett of the Black Snakes and Whit of the Plug Uglies. Ferrandini needs to make peace among the gangs if the plot is to work (intrigue) (conflict)
Ferrandini wants to know what Pinkerton’s intentions are with Kate. Pinkerton plays the part of the spurned lover. Pinkerton: Promise me you’ll take good care of her. Ferrandini makes an investment with Pinkerton (intrigue)
Pinkerton goes through the harrowing KGC initiation. Gage of the American Rattlers is his escort. (mystery)
Lincoln and Mary close down the house. Sad. (conflict)
Kate and Pinkerton have it out in a public display at the hotel. Ferrandini is impressed. (intrigue)
Pinkerton gives big cash payout to Ferrandini; Ferrandini invites Pinkerton to the Drawing (intrigue) (mystery)
Lincoln visits Willy’s grave for the last time. (Undeserved suffering)
Kate and Ferrandini go on a first date – two spies on a date, each trying to hide their spy status from the other (intrigue)
Lincoln – Leaving Springfield (inner and outer conflict)
Mack of the Bloody Eights (hand signals) escorts Pinkerton to the drawing.
Drawing the Red Ballot with Pinkerton present, intercut with Lincoln’s farewell address in Springfield.
The “winners” of the drawing: Rhett of the Black Snakes, Whit of the Plug Uglies, Clyde of the Blood Tubs, Jude of the Rip Raps, Gage of the American Rattlers, Mack of the Bloody Eights, Miles of the KGC and Jack of the KGC. (intrigue)2 – Kate and Pinkerton discover when the plot will happen:
Bomb on the Tracks. Who did this? (Mystery)
Pinkerton discovers Miles of the KGC and his plans for his method of assassination.
Ferrandini counsels the gang members and the KGC on respect for the winner of the drawing. He alone will chose the method of execution. Gunshot or hanging or knifing or bombing (of train bridges).
Kate and Ferrandini’s second date
Pinkerton discovers Jack of the KGC as he envisions and plans his method of assassination.3 – Kate and Pinkerton discover where the plot will happen:
Pinkerton discovers Clyde of the Blood Tubs as he envisions and plans his method of assassination.
The Presidential Train arrives in Buffalo
Kate discovers Jude of the Rip Raps as he envisions and plans his method of assassination.
Kate and Ferrandini’s third date4 – Kate and Pinkerton put together the details of the plot and decide to take action:
Hattie brings information to Kate about Gage of the American Rattlers and his plans for his method of assassination.
Train arrives in New York – the Chief of Police starts investigating.
Ferrandini expands the assassination plot to include burning the bridges outside Baltimore to prevent Union troops from entering the city.
Kate and Ferrandini’s fourth date wherein he pressures her to attend a special KGC initiation for female KGC spies
Pinkerton discovers Mack of the Bloody Eights and his plans for his method of assassination.5 – Kate goes to New York City to see Judd and warn the President:
Pinkerton discovers Rhett of the Black Snakes and his plans for his method of assassination.
Ferrandini: Where’s Kate? She doesn’t show up for the initiation.
Hattie brings information to Pinkerton about Whit of the Plug Uglies and his plans for his method of assassination.6 – Change of Plans in Harrisburg as Kate prepares for the secret train ride through Baltimore:
Leaving Harrisburg abruptly
Two independent sources of information, corroborated, influence Lincoln to act
Kate makes arrangements for the train trip through Baltimore7 – Kate brings Lincoln through Baltimore safely:
Train Ride through Baltimore
Kate makes arrangements for her sick brother
A drunken Rhett of the Black Snakes sings on the platform outside Lincoln’s window
Ferrandini and KGC members board the train for a routine inspection
Pinkerton monitors the tracks and bridges8 – The goal of Lincoln’s Inaugural address fails and Baltimore explodes:
Pinkerton and Kate deal with Lamon and the Press. The results spill into Lincoln’s Inaugural Address (conflict)
Buchanan: “I thought I might be the last President of the United States.” Lincoln looks up at the military snipers on the rooftops
The inaugural address intercut with Baltimore exploding at the arrival of Union troops, a ferocious Ferrandini leading the riots as well as Pinkerton and Kate’s efforts at dealing with the Press, the published images of a “frightened“ Lincoln “sneaking” through Baltimore.
Mary: “Will the mobs attack the Capital?” -
Module 2, Lesson 4: David Quinns Episodes
What I learned doing this assignment is that it takes effort to be precise with the layering… but it feels like it will really pay off with obsession, FUN.THE CHEAT SHEET
1. Beginning……………………………………………………………………….Season End/Cliffhanger
Question A: What is the Beginning of the season and the End of the season?
Blythe kills creatures of the night masquerading as human – for revenge. They killed her lover, Ian. Blythe is ruthless, angry, traumatized – and for reasons we don’t understand yet, only she can see the creatures hiding among the human herd.
Question B: What possible cliffhanger could be in that last scene of the season, thus demanding that we watch the next season?
A major answer rips the floor out from under Blythe’s feet: Alice James betrayed Blythe, for Ian – who is alive, the creatures never killed him; he hid from Blythe and continued his experiments, while manipulating creatures against Blythe.
2. Season 1 Mystery Set up…………………………………..………………Season 1 Mystery Solved
Question A: What is the mystery?
Why does Blythe keep remembering her lover, Ian? (PTSD) What caused the “sisterhood” to transform? Why do they want to kill Blythe?
Question B: How could the mystery be set up? What parts will be left out that must be solved?
Blythe has obsessive memories – like pieces of a complex puzzle. Early on, she relives a memory that is vivid, mysterious, painful. At a private girls school, the students sneak into a pool at night for a vicious game of sharks, the water war game. This was what the creatures once were – students at Ian’s school.
Through the season, the questions simmer: Why does Blythe keep remembering her lover, Ian? (PTSD) What caused the “sisterhood” to transform? Why do they want to kill Blythe?
Question C: What it the ultimate solution that the characters must work to discover?
Ian is alive, in hiding, and manipulating everyone – how does this awareness change everything Blythe knows, feels and does?
3. Journey begins……………………………………………………….Journey peaks, but continues.
Question A: Where does the Lead Character journey begin and end for this season?
Blythe begins wounded and obsessed with righteous revenge – and ends knowing she has been betrayed and misled, which confuses and torments her.
Question B: Think about where this character goes in future seasons. That might give you an idea also.
Ultimately, she will face painful truths, but accept herself and claim her own agency and peace.
4. ……Layer….…Layer………Layer………Layer………Layer………Layer………Layer……Layer
Question A: What layers have you already discovered in your BW Framework?
PLOT LAYERS – Story beneath the story.
How many will Blythe kill? What collateral damage? And when she finally faces Ian, what?
Alice James revealed as Blythe’s former lover
Blythe hides empathy for the sisters she huntsSisters conspire with Alice James to try Blythe for her crimes
Does Blythe have a hidden plan/scheme, too?
Betrayals– Ian manipulates Blythe’s sister creatures, manipulates her; Alice James betrays Blythe
CHARACTER LAYERS – identity beneath the identity.
Secrets – Ian, Alice James, Blythe – all wounded; all hide need to be loved ; Ian nurses failure’s shame
Blythe surrenders to ruthlessness – collides with her own humanity and its loss
Character intrigue – Ian’s manipulations endanger Blythe; would he let her be destroyed? Ian / Blythe – Adversarial love, fight for dominance
Hidden relationships and conspiracies – Blythe attempts to use Alice James / risks her own downfall
Hidden Character history – Ian and Blythe both need love; Blythe hides secret empathy
Question B: Are there any other layers that you could think of?
Ever since they used to compete at sharks midnights in the school pool, Blythe was always the last to be caught and killed, brought to the surface and forced to breathe. In the final layer, Blythe will make peace with her place with the sisterhood and lead them to something new.
5. Make a list of the Major Story Lines.
Question A: What main characters have story lines that affect everyone else?
Blythe, Ian, Alice James
Question B: What are the most important story lines of this show?
Can Blythe (and creatures) stay hidden?
Will Blythe understand her obsessive need to kill creatures?
Will creatures kill her?
Will Blythe discover Ian’s alive? Will she confront / kill him?
Will Alice James betray Blythe?
Will Blythe’s internal (sick love) conflict be her downfall?
When Blythe is forced to accept – she and ALL monstrous sister creatures were caused by a sexually transmitted virus seeded by Ian, what will she do?
Will Ian’s final experiment succeed?
2. Turn those answers into a list of 8 to 13 Episodes with one sentence explanations. Add bullets for each episode.
Episode 1: Blythe stalks, plays at seducing and ultimately kills a creature of the night masquerading as a human woman.
· Blythe almost flees as she detects hints that this woman knows what Blythe is doing, knows who she is…
· But as the seduction reaches its conclusion, Blythe kills her ruthlessly, “For Ian.”
· Mystery: Blythe hears references to “the farm” and burns to check it out.
· Killing doesn’t soothe her anger and obsessive memories, PTSD.
· And for reasons we don’t understand yet, only she can see the creatures hiding among the human herd. Why?
Episode 2: At the farm, Blythe looks for a hidden pack of creatures, but finds only one insane recluse, who puts up a much – and her child.
· Blythe fights and kills woman, finds…. No one else but a child.
· Facing the child, Blythe confronts her own buried human feelings avenging her murdered lover, and remembers disturbing things about her origin
· There is a clue here that she has to follow up – what is it? Alice James?
· Blythe is followed by a couple of young thugs, who steal her car
Episode 3: Heading into Boston forces Blythe to remember her days with lover Ian… we perceive clues that the days of their affair were a century ago, something Blythe seems to ignore.
· Blythe uses her car’s systems to trap them and burn them alive before they can complete their 911 call… she hopes
· Remembered love with Ian…. Idyllic…
· Turns tragic, as creatures trap him and burn him alive in his home
· Blythe flees the burning farm to Boston
Episode 4: Back in Beacon Hill, Blythe hunts twin sisters, the Dyre Beastes, who she feels like she has
met before, but discovers it is another one of her missing, fragmented memories.
· Hunting Alice James, who will be revealed in the episode to be both competitor creature killer and former lover / mentee,
· Blythe crosses paths with the Dyre Beaste sisters, singing sirens who lure victims to follow them into alleys and dark corners of the colonial streets
· Clues about Ian’s death
· Dispatching the weird sisters, Blythe is too distracted that she too has been hunted tonight, by Alice James!
Episode 5: Blythe and Alice James team up to stalk and kill a Combat Zone urban legend — a killer armed with spines that grow from her skin
· Blythe and Alice James are a good hunting team, avoiding human interference and tracing their victim
· woman passes as a club performer in one of the last underground clubs left in the once infamous neightborhood,
· And its obvious that they are, or were, more than a hunting team, we see how Alice James was mentored by Blythe
· and they were lovers
· Clues about Ian’s death lead them on a new mission – to hunt the Harpy and the Mindworm
Episode 6: Blythe’s mechanic ally, Franco, has another car for her and she and Alice James arm themselves a enter what’s immediately the worst battle situation so far.
· The friendship with Franco really irritates Alice James, who practically threatens him
· The high flying Harpy has deadly talons…
· And the Mindworm has the ability to confuse them and make them hallucinate.
· Clues in the hallucinations – Ian and Alice James conspiring
· Cliffhanger – ?
Episode 7: Blythe and Alice James survive the assault on the Harpy and the Mindworm but l
· Blythe forces Harpy to kill Mindworm – which makes her suicide
· Clues about Ian
· Blythe learns that Alice James has betrayed her
· Surrounded by creatures, Blythe is captured.
Episode 8: Blythe learns that Ian lives and it changes everything.
· A major answer rips the floor out from under Blythe’s feet: Alice James betrayed Blythe, and she is surrounded by creatures
· Ian is alive, the creatures never killed him; hid from Blythe and continued his experiments, while manipulating creatures against Blythe
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Rafal’s Episode List Rough Draft
What I learned doing this assignment is that the more complicated are the assignments the more I need to work on it in my native language. Later I will translate. Also I learned to write down even the ideas that seem to me weak, because when I read them later on, they appear to be just a step to a better idea. I understand now better why Hal emphases so much the importance of the easy way of doing the assignments.
Ep. 1 – Chora Arkadia gotowa na śmierć decyduje się żyć, żeby ratować Krysię
Ep. 2. – Konkurencyjne metody leczenia. Arkadia potajemnie przed Mateuszem odrzuca jego leczenie i stara się zinfiltrować Krysi kontakty z terapeutą. Przewiduje, że za namową Mateusza Krysia dostanie blokery dojrzewania, zna tego psychoterapeutę. Postanawia powstrzymać ją, bo to oni powinni się leczyć, a nie ona za ich zaniedbania.
Ep. 3. – Akcja karania rodziców za kłamstwo przeprowadzona przez Krysię z inspiracji Arkadii. To pasuje Krysi, wreszcie ma poczucie misji, bo sposób zarządzania szpitalem przez rodziców przyczynia się do niszczenia klimatu. Arkadia próbuje przyhamować Krysię, ale ona widzi w tym brak zrozumienia. Uważa, że jest uwięzionym w ciele dziewczyny homoseksualistą. Ich akcja powoduje straty szpitala.
Ep. 4. – Wojna Arkadii z psychoterapeutką Krysi napędzana wyrzutami sumienia w sprawie dawnej pacjentki. Krysia żąda szczerości i Arkadia przyznaje się do własnego błędu lekarskiego motywowanego odsuwaniem ryzyka biznesowego. Backstory jej biedy i ambicji materialnych. Prosi Krysię o pomoc w jego naprawieniu przez co zyskuje sympatię wnuczki.
Ep. 5 – Nowa metoda leczenia Arkadii przynosi kryzys zdrowia. Kontratak Mateusza o metodę leczenia. Proces Krysi przeciw rodzicom o ustalenie płci, zamienia się w walkę.
Ep. 6 – Arkadia czuje się lepiej. Instruuje Krysię jak przeprowadzić śledztwo w sprawie relacji Mateusza i Ewy. Arkadia wspomaga odbudowanie relacji Krysi i jej chłopaka. Nelly przyjmuje tą samą metodę co Arkadia, odrzuca leczenie Mateusza. Arkadia tego nie zaleca. Zaczynaja się tym interesować inne pacjentki.
Ep. 7 – Arkadia tuż przed Krysią odkrywa, że małżeństwo jej rodziców jest fasadowe i czekają na śmierć Arkadii, a Ewa praktycznie już większość czasu spędza ze swym nowym partnerem. Próbuje to jednak ukryć przed Krysią.
Ep. 8 Arkadia oskarża Mateusza, że nie walczy o swoją rodzine tylko zajmuje się szpitalem i przez to Krysia ma problemy, bo on żyje w wyparciu. Ale Mateusz oskarża Arkadię o pełne zakłamanie (rodzina zmarłej pacjentki wytoczyła sprawę sądową, a ile rodzin zmarłych tego nie zrobiło, a szpital pod kierownictwem Arkadii zarabiał na nieefektywnym leczeniu pacjentów)
Ep. 9 Krysia odwraca się od Arkadii, rodziców a swego chłopaka bije do krwi za to że odrzuca ją jako potencjalnego gay’a. Nelly ma się gorzej.
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3. With each episode, make a list of bullet points that describe the most important events of that episode.
Ep. 1
– Narada lekarska Arkadii z synem Mateuszem, wniosek, że podtrzymują kosztowne leczenie, ale raczej wkrótce umrze. <div>
– Arkadia czyta swoje pamiętniki, postanawia się wyspowiadać, na wszelki wypadek. (pamiętniki są wersją samousprawiedliwienia, dlatego je pisała)
– Dzieli się niektórymi informacjami z inną pacjentką Nelly, wyśmiewa jej podejrzliwość co do sposobów leczenia.
– Pożegnalne informacyjne spotkanie rodzinne z wnuczkami w szpitalu – babcia wkrótce dołączy do dziadka.
– Krysia przeżywa atak agresji, która zamienia się w autoagresję.
Arkadia ją ratuje.– Arkadia przepytuje Mateusza i Ewę w sprawie Krysi, oni tłumaczą to kłopotami w szkole.
– Krysia jest zamknięta w sobie, nie chce rozmawiać z Arkadią.
– Arkadia czuje się gorzej, porównuje badania innej pacjentki ze swoimi, metody leczenia i efekt. Pacjentka umarła.
– Arkadia zaczyna szukać błędu w postępowaniu wobec zmarłej pacjentki.
– Opowieści, o których czyta Nelly, która prenumeruje pismo „Czego lekarze ci nie powiedzą.” tylko ją denerwują.
– Arkadia zbiera siły, żeby odwiedzić szkołę Krysi w tajemnicy przed rodziną. Nauczycielka nie chce udzielić informacji, bo nie zna Arkadii, a rodzice Krysi nie umieścili babci na liście osób upoważnionych. Prosi jednak o przypomnienie, że wizyta rodziców jest konieczna.
– W szkole Arkadia ma chwile słabości, pomaga jej miły chłopak, ale jak się dowiaduje, że jest babcią Krysi nabiera dystansu. Nie chce powiedzieć czemu.
– Krysia w domu z rodzicami i rodzeństwem. Rodzice przekonują, żeby dzieci utrzymywały wizerunek dobrej rodziny, do czasu śmierci babci, żeby jej nie martwić. Potem zaczną nowe, lepsze życie.
– Arkadia prosi o jeszcze jedno spotkanie rodzinne.
– Mateusz kłóci się z Arkadią, na temat odrzucenia przez nią zapisanego leczenia, a ona chce wiedzieć, co przed nią ukrywają.
– Kiedy pyta wnuków, Krystyna wpada w kolejny napad agresji i atakuje rodzeństwo, rodziców i Arkadię.
– Arkadia decyduje, że nie umrze tak łatwo, będzie walczyć, żeby ratować swoją wnuczkę przed swoimi dziećmi, zaczyna studiować pisma Nelly.
Ep. 2.
– Mateusz odbiera dostawy leków, sprawdza i podpisuje raporty do Funduszu Zdrowia, wpisuje należne szpitalowi kwoty. Konkurencyjnego dostawcę odprawia z kwitkiem. </div><div>
– Krysia (będąc na kontroli w szpitalu) przychodzi do Arkadii przeprosić ją, za swój atak. Arkadia nawiązuje z nią kontakt, („Nic nie dzieje się bez powodu. Zakazali ci mówić? Ale ja się wszystkiego dowiem”.)
– Krysia interesuje się pismami Nelly, bo przecież lekarze kłamią, jej ojciec kłamie, wszyscy kłamią.
– Personel informuje Mateusza, że już dwie pacjentki odstawiły zalecane, rejestrowane i kosztowne leczenie.
– Arkadia studiuje sprawę sądową z rodziną swojej zmarłej pacjentki.
– W medycznych pismach Nelly Krysia znajduje artykuł o dysforii płciowej, zaczyna interesować się tematem.
– Krysia wyjawia rodzicom swoje niepokoje dotyczące płci. Rodzice zakazują jej o tym mówić.
– Mateusz rozmawia na temat Krysi z jej psychoterapeutą.
– Arkadia otwiera się na lekturę Nelly. Arkadia weryfikuje polecane przez Nelly sposoby z własną wiedzą i doświadczeniem.
– Arkadia testuje na sobie nową metodę.
– Krysia znów u psychoterapeuty, a potem szczęśliwa i pełna nadziei. Arkadię to niepokoi.
– Arkadia próbuje od psychoterapeuty dowiedzieć się skąd taka radość Krysi.
– Mateusz znajduje medykamenty, których szpital nie stosuje.
Arkadia próbuje włamać się do systemu, ale jest zablokowany przed nią.– Personel szpitala dostaje premię, a Arkadia, jako dawny ordynator, życzenia od firmy dostarczającej blokery.
Ep. 3.
– Arkadia odkrywa, że Krysia interesuje się sprawami klimatu. </div><div>
– Arkadia chce nawiązać kontakt z Krysią, żeby jej pomóc i pokazuje jej grzeszki ojca, co szpital robi z odpadkami, chce wciągnąć ją w pracę nad poprawą sytuacji.
– W zamian Arkadia Krysia ujawnienia, że rodzice kazali kłamać, że w rodzinie wszystko jest dobrze, a rodzice myślą tak naprawdę o rozwodzie.
– Dowiaduje się, że czekają na jej śmierć, żeby się rozwieść i podzielić majątkiem.
Krysia donosi na tatę i ściąga kontrolę.– Krysi, wreszcie ma poczucie misji, bo sposób zarządzania szpitalem przez rodziców przyczynia się do niszczenia klimatu.
– Arkadia próbuje pohamować Krysię, ale ona widzi w tym brak zrozumienia. Powiadamia jakieś fundacje ochrony środowiska.
– Odwraca się od Arkadii i rozmawia tylko z psychoterapeutą.
– Kontrola szpitala nakłada kary finansowe.
Mateusz przekupuje urzędników, żeby nie nagłaśniali sprawy.– Krysia u psychoterapeuty uznaje, że jest uwięzionym w ciele dziewczyny homoseksualistą.
– Krysia w relacji z Michałem, chłopakiem, który je się podoba, myśląc, że jest uwięzionym w ciele dziewczyny homoseksualistą czuje się pewniej, swobodniej.
– On dostrzega w niej coś intrygującego. Zaczyna ją lubić.
Ep. 4. –
– Zmarły mąż we śnie podpowiada Arkadii, że wygrała proces z rodziną zmarłej pacjentki niesłusznie, </div><div>
– Arkadia weryfikuje to w dokumentach i zaczyna mieć duże wyrzuty sumienia.
– Rodzina pacjentki nie chce jej znać.
– Wojna Arkadii z psychoterapeutką Krysi napędzana wyrzutami sumienia w sprawie dawnej pacjentki.
– Krysia żąda szczerości i Arkadia przyznaje się do własnego błędu lekarskiego motywowanego odsuwaniem ryzyka biznesowego.
– Backstory jej biedy i ambicji materialnych.
– Arkadia prosi Krysię o pomoc, chce dotrzeć do i przeprosić dzieci pacjentki przez co zyskuje sympatię wnuczki.
– Kiedy docierają do dzieci tamtej pacjentki i Krysia mówi o wyrzutach sumienia Arkadii, okazuje się, że ciagle mierzą się ze skutkami jej błędu,
– Arkadii zdrowie podupada, kiedy traci kontakt z rzeczywistością, wpada w świat tamtych wydarzeń. Mąż uprzedzał ją, że krzywdzi nie tylko pacjentkę, ale całą rodzinę na lata.
Ep. 5
– Arkadia wyznaje Krysi co powinni zrobić tamci ludzie, żeby uzyskać dostęp do dokumentów i odszkodowanie. </div><div>
– Nowa metoda leczenia przynosi kryzys zdrowia Arkadii.
– Arkadia tłumaczy to walką organizmu.
– Kontratak Mateusza o metodę leczenia.
– Krysia bez wsparcia Arkadii zaczyna przyjmować blokery i czuje się gorzej, ale nie rezygnuje
– Krysia poznaje procedury, odkrywa skalę wyzwań związanych ze zmiana płci. Między innymi proces przeciw rodzicom o nierozpoznanie płci dziecka.
– Mateusz potrzebuje, żeby Krysia przeszła ten proces, żeby się uwiarygodnić i wierzy psychoterapeucie.
– Arkadia wyznaje Krysi, że ona też wierzyła we wszystko co przynosi mu korzyści.
– Zaczyna się proces Krysi przeciw rodzicom o ustalenie płci,
– Proces zamienia się w walkę. Bo oni coś ukrywają. Krysia ma podważa, że jest ich córką.
Ep. 6
– Arkadia czuje się lepiej, wspiera Krysię w jej wątpliwościach
Nelly zapatrzona w Arkadię chce tej samej metody leczenia, popada w konflikt z Mateuszem. </div><div>– Inne pacjentki też zaczynają zadawać trudne pytania.
– Arkadia i Krysia przeprowadzają śledztwo w sprawie relacji Mateusza i Ewy.
– Ewie udaje jej się wszystko ukrywać przed Krysią. Ale Arkadia widzi więcej.
– Mateusz prosi, aby Arkadia przemówiła do rozsądku pacjentek. W zamian Arkadia chce prawdy o jego relacji z żoną.
Mateusz opowiada o swoim wyparciu romansu żony i że nie chcieli martwić Arkadii.– Arkadia znowu ma słabszy moment, wspomina kłótnie z mężem o wychowanie Mateusza. Ale czegoś sobie nie mówią, a mąż pije zbyt dużo alkoholu.
– Arkadia przejęta umawia się z kolegą Krysi i próbuje wspomóc budowanie ich relacji, opowiada o niej jaka to fajna dziewczyna, że potrzebuje wsparcia.
– Interwencja Arkadii przynosi fatalny efekt.
– Na procesie Krysia żąda powołania biegłego, czy jest córką swego ojca. Arkadia przeżywa szok.
Ep. 7 –
– Krysia jest przekonana, że Mateusz dlatego jest „tak złym ojcem”, bo ona nie jest jego córką. <div>
– Po szoku w sądzie odnawiają się choroby Arkadii.
– Krysia jest wściekła, że babcia za jej plecami i rozwala jej związek, ma kolejny atak agresji, tym razem z powodu babci.
– Arkadia odkrywa przed Krysią, że małżeństwo jej rodziców jest fasadowe
Ep. 8
– Arkadia oskarża Mateusza, że nie walczy o swoją rodzine tylko zajmuje się szpitalem i przez to Krysia ma problemy,
bo on żyje w wyparciu. </div>– Mateusz oskarża Arkadię o pełne zakłamanie (rodzina zmarłej pacjentki wytoczyła sprawę sądową,
a ile rodzin zmarłych tego nie zrobiły, a szpital pod kierownictwem Arkadii zarabiał na nieefektywnym leczeniu pacjentów– Krysia nienawidzi wszystkich, ucieka.
– Arkadia błaga o pomoc jej chłopaka, razem szukają Krysi
– Krysia pojawia się w sądzie. Biegły potwierdza, że Krysia jest dzieckiem swoich rodziców.
– Krysia załamuje się.
– Krysia swego chłopaka bije do krwi za to że odrzuca ją jako potencjalnego geja.
– Nelly ma się gorzej znacznie gorzej, nowe leczenie ją morduje.
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Eloise Healey’s Episode List Rough Draft
What I learned doing this assignment is to keep chipping away and asking questions to generate story possibilities.
EPISODE 1
Ellen leads a group of women to establish a female-only colony.
– Ellen gets her ticket of leave, learns about sailors taking people to the mainland.
– Ellen barters with sailors to transport her and others.
– Sailors try to renege on the deal.
– Women reach new home but survival is harder than expected.
– Into the camp comes an escaped male prisoner.
EPISODE 2
The decision about what to do with James divides the colony.
– Ellen wants James gone; others want his male strength.
– Ellen banishes James to protect the colony.
– Ann works to discredit Ellen as a leader.
– Ellen must humiliate Ann or ceded leadership.
– Ellen makes a permanent enemy of Ann.
EPISODE 3
An altercation with Indigenous people forces Ellen to make an unpopular choice.
– Ruth is revealed as a trans-woman.
– Ellen allows Ruth to stay, although others want her gone.
– Mary is hiding James; they’re in love.
– Confrontation with Aboriginal people leads to a man being injured.
– To keep the peace, Ellen lets them spear the culprit.
EPISODE 4
Ellen is overthrown as Ann takes control of the colony.
– Colony in uproar about Ellen taking the “black’s side”
– Mutiny builds – some women try to leave, Ellen reveals she stole to get them here so if they return they’ll face the gallows or years back in prison.
– Ann holds a coup and imprisons Ellen – she is now leader.
– James is returned to the camp.
– Reveal to the audience that James is a spy for the British army.
EPISODE 5
Mary and Ruth reinstate Ellen as a humanitarian leader, but when she discovers James is a spy she kills him.
– Reveal James’ motivation and backstory
– Ann is a cruel leader – uh oh…
– Mary, Ruth and Sarah free Ellen
– Ellen is reinstated as leader
– Ellen discovers James is a spy and kills him!
EPISODE 6
Ellen tries to stop the soldiers discovering the colony but fails.
– Ellen tries to hide James’ body and lies to the colony about his absence.
– Mary discovers the soldiers uncovering James’ dead body.
– Ellen is forced to confess and holds the horrified camp hostage.
– Instead of hiding from the soldiers, Mary goes to them for help.
– The soldiers discover the colony, arresting everyone, but Ellen refuses to be taken alive.
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