Lesson 4 – Partner up for feedback

[Marcus Wolf]

Marcus’ Feedback Exchange 1

I’m ready to swap scripts. Who’s interested?

Email me at:

marcus.wolf1@comcast.net, and we’ll work out the trade.

[Renee Miller]

Renee’s Feedback Exchange 1

If anyone is ready to swap scripts you can email me at rmiller0911@gmail.com

I have a horror/thriller.

[Monica Arisman]

SUBJECT: Monica’s Feedback Exchange

I’m ready to swap.

Email: marisman@shaw.ca.

[Lisa Paris Long]

Lisa’s Feedback Exchange 1

I’m looking to exchange scripts now. My script is a coming-of-age drama about a 12-year-old dancer.

Email me at: llongmolly@gmail.com

Thank you!

EXCHANGE ON HOLD 3/3: I’ve had two exchanges and I’m working on both updates. It will take me a few days to complete.

[Erin Ziccarelli]

Erin Ziccarelli’s Feedback Exchange

I’m ready to swap! My script is a drama about counterfeiting and cocaine hustling in Boston in the 1990’s. Send me an email at eeziccarelli@gmail.com.

[Marcus Wolf]

Marcus’ Feedback exchange 2

I did one script swap and am ready for another.

By the way, mine is in the Drama/Action genre (specifically, a western). It’s about a desperate builder who takes his crew to a ghost town to dismantle it for lumber. There, they run into a vicious gang of outlaws who use the place for a hideout.

[Frances Emerson]

I’ve been a whole week updating, upgrading an old screenlay I believe in and want someone to take notice of. I heard chuck lorre was looking for a restaurant script. My screenplay is a restaurant comedy, right up his alley. I worked so hard on it using your methods. I also wrote a pitch letter to him using your method and sent it out. And I’m going to put it in the ISA golden script contest, because I BELIEVE IN IT. It’s good and it’s funny. That’s what I’ve been doing. So, wish me luck.

Fran

[Frances Emerson]

I’ve partnered up with my film director, producer friend. He’s going to let me know what he thinks. Once he’s finished, it’s off to the contest.

[JOEL STERN]

Hi Everyone,

I know I’m running late but I’m ready to exchange scripts.

My story is the thriller (with hints of Hitchcock) called, “Death Voice”.

Jim McCarthy, a young decorated WWII hero with a dark war past, returns to civilian life in his Las Vegas hometown with aspirations of becoming the next Edward R. Murrow. But he soon faces challenges that rival what he faced in war-torn Europe.

I can be reached at: puckvoice@yahoo.com.

I look forward to reading your script!