Screenwriting Mastery Forums Writing Incredible Movies Module 9 Lesson 4 – Partner up to exchange feedback.

  • Lesson 4 – Partner up to exchange feedback.

    Posted by cheryl croasmun on February 25, 2023 at 9:02 pm

    Make requests and agreements to partner up for feedback.

    Lori Lance replied 2 years ago 16 Members · 37 Replies
  • 37 Replies
  • Jenifer Stockdale

    Member
    February 25, 2023 at 9:09 pm

    I have a thriller and am ready to exchange

    • Andrew Kelm

      Member
      February 25, 2023 at 9:53 pm

      Hi Jenifer. I have a drama. Would you like to exchange?

    • Tom Wilson

      Member
      March 2, 2023 at 4:30 pm

      HI, Jennifer:

      I have a Thriller. Let’s exchange. Send yours to wilsontomj@gmail.com.

  • Ian Greenham

    Member
    February 25, 2023 at 10:05 pm

    I have a drama – a family drama – and I am ready to exchange feedback.

    • Linda Anderson

      Member
      February 25, 2023 at 10:20 pm

      Hi Ian, I have a family drama too and am ready for feedback. I sent a request to you at Member Connect if you want to exchange information. My nickname is @linda-anderson. Thanks.

  • Farrin Rosenthal

    Member
    February 25, 2023 at 10:05 pm

    I’m ready to exchange feedback. I have a thriller called, TRAPPED.

    I can possibly read one script today 2/25, but if not, I’m leaving for a work trip and will be available starting March 8.

    • Tracy Lawson

      Member
      February 25, 2023 at 11:20 pm

      Hi Farrin!

      Want to exchange again?

      Tracy

  • Tom Wilson

    Member
    February 25, 2023 at 10:10 pm

    I have a Thriller and welcome any genre I can give you Feedback on. Please send me a PDF of your script. wilsontomj@gmail.com

    • Rebecca Sukle

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 12:18 am

      Hi Tom,

      I have and Action/Drama I’d like to exchange.

      Concept: A World War 1 Citation Star veteran, done with war, conflict, and killing, must learn to control his anger to execute, without detection, the rabid police commander who violently dominates their community and plans to massacre mine families working a picket line.

      • Tom Wilson

        Member
        February 26, 2023 at 1:14 am

        I look forward to reading it. I will send you mine as soon as I get home.

  • Jane Turville

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 1:21 am

    I have a parody of a tea cozy mystery and would like to exchange scripts for feedback. My email address is jcturville@gmail.com. Looking forward to reading your script.

  • Eclipse Neilson

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 1:22 am

    I have a mystical /sci-fi /drama THE NUN AND THE WITCH and I am ready to exchange

    • Jane Turville

      Member
      February 26, 2023 at 2:31 am

      Hi Eclipse,

      Would you like to exchange with me?

  • Eclipse Neilson

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 11:15 am

    Jane yes, Our genres are different but that should make it interesting.

  • Jeff Chase

    Member
    February 26, 2023 at 5:12 pm

    Hi gang,

    I have a Psychological Thriller titled, Shards.

    • Tracy Lawson

      Member
      February 27, 2023 at 3:10 pm

      Hi Jeffrey!

      I have a period drama entitled Revolutionary Anna.

      If you’d like to exchange, my email is tracy.s.lawson@gmail.com

      Tracy

      • Jeff Chase

        Member
        February 27, 2023 at 4:49 pm

        I’ll send mine to you shortly. 🙂

    • Robert Smith

      Member
      February 28, 2023 at 2:38 am

      Hi, Jeffrey!

      Want to exchange again? My screenplay is ANGELS IN GANGLAND. A Gangster-Comedy.

      I am polishing off the script a bit more and will have it ready in a day or so.

      Best Always,

      Bob

      Robert R. Smith

      RobertRSmith4646@comcast.net

      • Jeff Chase

        Member
        March 2, 2023 at 3:17 am

        Robert,

        If you’re available for an exchange, I’d love to. I’m out of town until next Monday/Tuesday but may have time to get it read before then. Lemme know.

        jeff@chaseinternet.com

    • Tom Wilson

      Member
      March 2, 2023 at 4:31 pm

      Hi, Jeffrey: Let’s exchange Thrillers. Send yours to me at wilsontomj@gmail.com.

      • Jeff Chase

        Member
        March 3, 2023 at 1:52 am

        I’ll send it to you shortly!

  • Robert Smith

    Member
    February 28, 2023 at 2:35 am

    I have a gangster comedy: “Angels in Gangland.” Want to partner up?

    Robert R. Smith

    RobertRSmith4646@comcast.net.

    • Joseph McGloin

      Member
      February 28, 2023 at 10:11 pm

      Hi Robert,

      If you don’t have a partner yet, I have a RomCom I’m ready to exchange, if you are interested.

    • Tracy Lawson

      Member
      March 11, 2023 at 8:45 pm

      Hi Bob!

      Sent you my script via email. Look forward to reading yours!

      Tracy

  • Joseph McGloin

    Member
    March 1, 2023 at 1:07 pm

    I’m ready to exchange my Romcom.

  • Leona Heraty

    Member
    March 1, 2023 at 8:25 pm

    Hi Everyone!

    I have a family sci-fi comedy. I’m working on the 2nd draft, and with the high-speed writing techniques, I will be able to finish my fourth draft by tomorrow, Thurs, March 2, if anyone would like to partner up? Thanks!

    Leona

    • Jane Turville

      Member
      March 2, 2023 at 2:33 pm

      Hi Leona, I love family scripts and would enjoy reading yours. I have a comedy/mystery if you’re interested in exchanging.

  • Lori Lance

    Member
    April 17, 2023 at 1:35 pm

    Hi everyone!

    I got behind in class, and I am now looking for feedback if anyone is interested. I have a family comedy called A.I. Mom.

    Lori

    lori.lance@comcast.net

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