Lesson 5

[Lynn Vincentnathan]

I’m ready to exchange scripts.

I have a Rom-Com, WEATHERING IT, about two college students who try to overcome family fights about global warming and get married during the worst ever Texas freeze.

[Joe Donato]

I have a Rom Com too. A 1st floor son of Italian immigrants pizza shop owner and a 2nd floor ex-broadway dance teacher have to learn to work together to defend themselves and their livelihoods from their two-faced landlord. They fall in love in the process. Let me know if you want to exchange.

[Lynn Vincentnathan]

I can exchange. My email is lynnvinc@hotmail.com

[Andrew Boyd]

Hi Lynn,

I’ve just completed the 2nd draft of Hitler’s Choirboys and am ready to exchange. I’d love to see where you’re up to with your screenplay. (Not likely to get to it before Christmas, though…) Have an excellent break!

andrewboydconsultant@btinternet.com

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[Marcus Wolf]

I’m going out of town for a couple weeks. But my script is almost ready. I’ll get back to you when I return.

[Marcus Wolf]

Please scroll down and see my next post…

[Dana Abbott]

I recently received high marks on a screenplay I wrote for PS81 from two professional screenwriters, and I am currently rewriting that script for competition and representation January 1, 2023. I have had to place my script for WIM2 aside for a few days, but I will be back on track and be ready to exchange by end of weekend.

[Monica Arisman]

SUBJECT: Monica’s Script Exchange 1

I’m ready to exchange.

My script is an action/drama entitled TIME GUARDIANS.

Email me at marisman@shaw.ca when anyone is ready.

Thanks.

[Renee Miller]

Renee’s Script Exchange

I will be ready to exchange scripts after this weekend. Mine’s a horror/thriller entitled Something’s in the Woods.

[Monica Arisman]

Hi Rene,

Would you like to exchange? My email is marisman@shaw.ca.

Title: TIME GUARDIANS

Genre: Action/Sci-fi

If so, just email me and I’ll email you back. Thanks.

Monica.

[Renee Miller]

Hi Monica,

I am sooo sorry. I just saw your reply. I’ve been super busy with family in town and the holidays. If you still need someone to read your script and provide you feedback please send your script to me, I promise I will get to it the day you send it and have feedback to you within 24 hours.

Renee

[David Holloway]

I’m willing to exchange with anyone who’s up for it. I’ve written a drama.

Dave Holloway

[ROBERT Ingalls]

Dave, do you still need an exchange? My script is not where I’d like it to be at this point but time to push forward.

Rob

[David Holloway]

Sure, Rob, I’d like to exchange. My script is only about 90% finished, but I’ll be glad to send what I have and read yours. My email: dlit@comcast.net

[Marcus Wolf]

Hi –

I’m a little late with this, but I’ve got my script ready to exchange if anyone is interested.

Contact me here or my email: marcus.wolf1@comcast.net.

[JOEL STERN]

Hi Marcus – I read your first draft and would be happy to read this one if interested.

Thx,

Joel Stern

[Frances Emerson]

Still waiting for feedback. Have exchanged, but no word yet. Have’t been able to give feedback either. My writing partner just hasn’t gotten back to me yet. No matter. I can’t wait any longer. I need to carry on and work on my writing. When I sit like this and not write, I atrophy and things just don’t get done. So, I’m moving on whether we should or not.

[Marcus Wolf]

Marcus’ Script Exchange

I got some good and useful feed back from my first exchange.

[Joyce Davidson]

Joyce’s lesson #5: exchange

WIL: Life events took away my will to write–three heartbreakers in a row. I can’t exchange.

Vision: To create memorable movie scripts that actors want to perform.

[Dana Abbott]

Sorry. I wasn’t able to exchange feedback this module. I have been hustling to complete the rewrite of my previous script based on the evaluation from two pros. Now that it’s done, I am seeking management and/or production.

I will be playing catch up during the next module.

[JOEL STERN]

Joel Stern WIM Module 6 Lesson 5

My Thriller: “Death Voice”

My Vision: To write eight blockbuster screenplays and to get a speaking line in at least one.

What I learned from this assignment: To use numerous techniques to make my script cutting edge.

Finally finished this draft after working like a madman at my job during December.

I know I fell behind, but I don’t want to get sloppy!

I’m ready to exchange feedback:

A WWII hero with a dark war past returns home to Las Vegas and gets the chance of a lifetime to realize his version of the American Dream only to face a series of gut wrenching challenges.

I can be reached at broadcastingtutor@gmail.com

Thanks!

🙂

[victor Valleau]

Vic Valleau Module 6 Lesson 5.

I’m ready to exchange a modern romcom. Here’s the logline:

Losing his last ditch job as a sperm donor and a failure at dating, a desperate young man will lose his inheritance unless he becomes a father soon.

[victor Valleau]

Bob’s Baby is 77 scenes, 92 pages, completely formatted in Final Draft.

A true to life comedy about a man who, despite his well- informed reluctance, marries his high school sweethearts identical twin sister.

Vic Valleau

[JOEL STERN]

Hi Victor,

I’d be happy to read your script and send you mine if interested.

Thx