Lesson 5

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Jeffrey Glatz Elevated Dialogue

What I learned from doing this assignment is…? I tweaked a few lines, but also I am aware the next module is completely dialogue so I did not do too much here. Well… I could not find much wrong, but I am sure there is a lot that needs to be elevated, and look forward to Module 8.

[Anna Maganini]

MODULE 7 – LESSON 5

MY VISION – To write cutting edge, unique, human, soul-inspiring, Oscar-winning scripts that have commercial success and producers line up to buy to make into multi-million dollar movies. Which makes me a Force in the Hollywood Entertainment industry -as a writer, actor, producer, and director.

What have I learned doing this assignment – It took me a while to get going on this lesson and get the pace of it, but once I did, wow, just changing certain lines have completely given me new insights and twists into the scene action. Another lesson I love, but again not enough time. I am barely finishing up my protagonist’s lines. I will have to save doing the antagonist’s lines for later. So I don’t get too far behind. Please, more days needed!

[Anna Maganini]

WHERE ARE THE MODULE 8 FORUMS???

Is anyone else getting them? Here we are, ready to go on the the last Lesson – Lesson 6, and I haven’t been able to post one single lesson in Module 8, because I don’t see the Forums for it!!