• Lloyd Shellenberger

    Member
    October 18, 2023 at 1:26 am

    Lloyd’s Completed P/S Grid #2

    What I’ve learned from all these assignments is to trust the high-speed process to edits later since the first writes are horrible.

    Working hard to become the best writer I can and as a Result I do become the best writer in Hollywood

    Alot of logic and scene issues corrected.

    Added more open loops and clues as well as mysteries. I will add more in lesson seven when I start it tomorrow.

    I had originally planned to write two opening episodes for my pilot. I found a way to put everything in one episode 44-45 pages. I will write the streaming version of 55-60 pages from this. Found a lot of structure errors and problems I fixed.

  • CJ Lyons

    Member
    October 30, 2023 at 6:11 pm

    Okay, that went pretty good! I want to take another pass at the end for irony and subtext (my main weaknesses so far) but I’m pretty pleased so far!

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