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Lesson 8: Dialogue 1 – 2
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Lloyd’s Dialogue 1 and 2
Working hard every day to become the best writer I can be and as a result I do become the best writer in Hollywood.
What I learned from this assignment is to continue to tailor your dialogue to the characters and their profiles. This is an ongoing process for the streaming and TV pilot for Benjamin Greene. I also deleted and removed all of the profanity on the TV pilot. The dialogue is designed to be aired on national TV. The Streaming was toned down a bit. The TV pilot was edited at 45 pages while the Streaming ended up being 58 pages. Irony, sarcassim, banter were all added.
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CJ’s Dialogue 1 and 2:
I was relieved to find that I already had most of this in my draft–but I need to keep working on banter, so hard to make it feel real and effortless!
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