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Lesson 9
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Word to my classmates. This exercise is laborious, but very critical. You may first be asked for an outline or treatment of your story by a producer or agent before they ask for the script. This exercise will come in handy.
Ken Wood’s Horror Outline Version 1
What I learned: Detailed Outlines with action descriptions and purposes for the action work to make the story fit the genre and also achieve a viable, original story! This was the first script that I spent several months just mulling over the outline, learning about the horror genre, and creating the story from beginning to end with actions that a rich in purpose and horror elements. Once I had this detailed outline essentially worked out, the story started flowing with much more intensity and speed. I have finished my first draft and have been tweaking the script with each new lesson. Hal seems to come up with one skill after another to help elevate a story and get it marketable.
Script Title: I LOST THE SPIDER
Genre: This is a horror-genre story with a mix of mystery and international thriller mixed in.
Logline: The longer an arachnologist keeps a mysterious, new, highly-venomous Amazonian spider alive, the more it kills and multiplies, and the questions remain, “How did this monster come to exist?” and, “Should it be allowed to live?”
ACT 1
EXT. SHIPPING PORT, BRAZIL – DAY p.1
A CAPTAIN and four family CREWMEN finish loading an old cargo boat with bananas. One of the crew finds some SPIDER webbing and finds it is unusually sticky and tough. We see the leg of a large spider disappear into the banana shipment.
EXT. SHIPPING PORT, U.S.A – DAY p.1
DOCK The old cargo boat slams into the dock, bounces and keeps slamming into the dock. The PORT SUPERVISOR and PORT ASSISTANT try to get the hysterical Captain to turn off the engine to no avail. Port Assistant goes down into the SLEEPING BIRTH, finds four Crewmen’s dead bodies, and is horrified. Port Supervisor goes down into the ENGINE ROOM to turn off the engine. The Spider kills him. Port Assistant watches the death and is horrified again. The Captain comes and shuts the engine room hatch and locks the Spider in.
INT. PORT AUTHORITY OFFICE – CONTINUOUS p.7
The distraught Captain sits in a chair blurting out, in Portuguese, details of the deaths to state medical examiner KEATON and Port Assistant.
EXT. DOCK/BOAT – CONTINUOUS p.9
SHERIFF MAUER investigates and gives us a closer look at the dead Crewmen in the sleeping birth. He gets halfway down into the engine room when Keaton comes running warning that the killer Spider is still down there. The Spider tries to catch him with a silk strand. The Sheriff has to cut the silk off of his pants to escape.
INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – CONTINUOUS p.12
White light with a blurry, out-of-focus, dark thing suspended in air. A spider comes into focus. DR. REXY LAMBERT, arachnologist, and two lab assistants, REESE ROBBINS and CALI ANN NICHOLE are in a venom extraction process as Keaton’s call comes to Rexy to assist him in this “killer spider case”.
INT. MORGUE – DAY p.15
Keaton and Rexy must visit the CORONER to get a tissue sample from the deceased in order to identify the genus and species of the spider. This is a gross out moment. They identify similarities with the Phoneutria Feras , the most poisonous spider in the world, but also realize the venom and digestive juices are many times more toxic and corrosive.
INT. KEATON’S AUTOMOBILE – CONTINUOUS p.17
Driving. Rexy chatters away while Keaton drives. They talk about their former love lives and why they broke up. Rexy eludes to a deep dark secret, but does not divulge it to Keaton.
EXT. BOAT DOCK, PARKING LOT – DAY p.21
Keaton meets up with Rexy, who lugs a suitcase out of her vehicle and shuts the door. ATTICUS XANDERMAN, arachnologist from Brazil, mysteriously shows up and dispels any thought of killing the spider on sight, claiming the spider, while new, is a protected species. A tense-filled search produces nothing. The spider is in the clothes of the Port Supervisor. They use rope to get the body of the Port Supervisor out. His knife belt gets stuck on a ladder rung. Keaton goes back down to unhook the body, thinking the Spider is gone. The body falls on Keaton, pinning him to the floor. A head bump causes him to be in a daze. The Spider stalks him. Dread/Suspense. At the last second Rexy catches the Spider in a mechanical net. Terror.
ACT 2
INT. UNIVERSITY ENTOMOLOGY WING – DAY p.32
Walking down the HALL to the ANTI_VENOM LABORATORY Atticus references the gruesome closeup poster-sized photos of Spider faces, calling it the Hall of Horrors (Another gross out moment). We finally get to see the Spider in all its grotesque features. When Reese and Cali Ann arrive, a venom extraction is attempted and almost goes awry. Tension and terror.
INT. UNIVERSITY HORSE STABLE – DAY p.43
Rexy takes the venom to JACK(60s), the HORSE BARN manager. Atticus goes with her and learns which horse, GEORGIE, is used to produce the anti-venom. We learn that Atticus is working for CIA Operatives who want the venom but absolutely no anti-venom. Atticus is there, not to help, but to get the Spider back at all costs.
INT. REXY’S CAR – CONTINUOUS p.45
A text message from Keaton pops up on her cell phone. DINNER? The “B” story of Keaton’s love interest is furthered.
INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT p.45
Keaton finally gets Rexy to explain why she decided to not pursue a Pathology Degree with Keaton and, instead, transferred to another college to get a degree in Entomology. Rexy reveals she is the cause of her sister’s death at the fangs of a killer spider.
EXT. COUNTRY FARM – DAY p.47
Rexy describes, with an accompanying flashback, how she had purposely aggravated a MOTHER SPIDER with a rock. When sister, DARLA, pushes Rexy back, Rexy pushes Darla onto the egg sac. A thousand baby spiders being to swarm Darla, and the Mother Spider attacks her.
INT. COUNTRY HOUSE – CONTINUOUS p.48
She runs up the stairs, into her bedroom, and cowers in the closet. Rexy froze and ran back to the house and hid in her closet. She didn’t tell her parents about the Spider’s attack until an hour later, when it was too late. Terror, horror, shock.
INT. RESTAURANT – CONTINUOUS p.48
Keaton consoles her, “You were a young child, too young to realize consequences.
EXT. RESTAURANT, VERANDA – CONTINUOUS p.49
The night is warm. String lights and large potted plants make this a romantic spot. Keaton asks for a second chance at the relationship. They kiss.
INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – NIGHT p.51
Reese and Cali Ann are tasked with feeding the lab creatures, including Teras. After Reese feeds Teras, he gets interested in making out with Cali Ann and fatally forgets to put the weight back on the lid of Teras’s enclosure. Teras gets out and kills Cali Ann. Teras blinds Reese with irritating urticating hairs. These also restrict his breathing. We feel the additional terror of fighting off a deadly creature while blind. Teras finally kills Reese. In a gross out display we see Teras spray Reese with digestive juices which dissolve his face. He then plasters his head to the wall with silk.
INT. UNIVERSITY HORSE STABLE – NIGHT p.55
We see a pen light down at the end of the corridor going from one stall to the next. It’s Atticus. He uses a Brazilian bamboo poison to kill Georgie.
ACT 2 MIDPOINT
INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – NIGHT p.56
We see Teras use her pedipalps to break glass. Then, in a display of raw aggressiveness and superior fighting and killing abilities, Teras takes on the other venomous creatures in the lab, starting with a spider and ending with the King Cobra. In the morning Rexy discovers Reese and Cali Ann and all of the lab creatures dead. She calls Keaton. She also hears from Jack that he has given George, the horse, an antidote which reverses the bamboo poison. Rexy is so distraught, Keaton tells her to go home while he and Atticus find the “lost” spider again. The spider escapes the lab in Rexy’s large purse.
INT. REXY’S VEHICLE – DAY p.58
Rexy drives through her residential neighborhood. Next to her is her oversized purse with Teras inside. Teras does not attack, because she is exhausted and engorged with feasting on Reese and the lab creatures from the following night. It is also day and the Phoneutria Genus of spiders primarily hunt at night.
INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB – MORNING p.59
HALLWAY. Atticus gets a call from the CIA Operatives and disappears. He is threatened to get the spider back.
INT. CIA HEADQUARTERS – CONTINUOUS p.63
We finally see Anon(50s), a rugged CIA operative with the demeanor of a callused Nazi, vowing to kill Atticus. We find they have hired Atticus to crossbreed spiders to create the fastest and deadliest acting venom to use in their ballistic, assassination program deemed, QUICK KILL. If the bullet doesn’t kill you the venom will. Smart Horror!
INT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE ANTI-VENOM LAB – CONTINUOUS p.64
Atticus pockets his phone and goes into the lab where Keaton is consoling Rexy to go home while they look for the spider and take care of Reese’s and Cali Ann’s bodies. Rexy leaves with Teras in her purse.
EXT./INT. HORSE BARN – DAY p.65
Rexy stops at the horse barn to see Georgie has recovered. Jack gives her the first anti-venom vial. It’s not up to full anti-venom strength, but it may have some positive effect if needed.
INT. ANTI-VENOM RESEARCH LAB p.67
Keaton receives a call. Sheriff Mauer calls Keaton to tell him that he has found Atticus’s station is on the Pará River where the bamboo poison is found and close to the shipping port in Belém, where Captain Andrade’s company is based. The Sheriff found evidence of Atticus’s Dan and the bamboo poison on a glove Atticus accidentally left at the Horse Barn confirming Atticus poisoned Georgie and he is officially deemed a bad actor.
EXT./INT. REXY’S CAR – CONTINUOUS p.68
Rexy get’s in her car and starts the engine. The movement of the car, going from reverse to drive, causes the purse to shift and one of Teras’s legs comes out. Will the Spider come out and attack her while she is driving? Suspense!
EXT./INT. REXY’S HOME – CONTINUOUS p.68
Rexy swings her LARGE PURSE onto her shoulder and carries it to the front door. Tension fills the air. Will Teras attack. Not yet. Rexy puts the purse on a credenza in the entrance hall. Her daughter LILLY comes home. ROSCO, Rexy’s dog is so happy to see them and hungry for pancakes, he disregards the scent of the Spider in the purse, even though he looks at it. After pancakes, Rosco goes outside. Rexy goes upstairs and gets in the shower, and Lilly goes to her upstairs bedroom and lays down with a new video game, Donkey Kong. Lilly drifts off to sleep. The jungle sounds of the game attract Teras who climbs up on Lilly’s body and rest on her hands, still not in hunting mode. Lilly awakes and calls for her mother who is drying her hair. Suspense! Rexy finally turns off the hair dryer and hears Lilly’s pleas for help. Rexy in a bath towel tells Lilly to fling the spider off toward the door. Rexy takes a tennis racket to Teras but misses. Teras jumps on her towel. Terror! She knocks it off and Rosco engages the spider and fights with it down the stairs. Rosco gets bit, but, Rexy has anti-venom in her purse. She administers it and Rosco lives. Meanwhile Teras escapes out the back doggie door.
BACKYARD p.75
Teras climbs over the backyard gate and drops to the ground on a silk strand. She walks to the front yard where she picks up the scent of the port and the warehouse where her egg sacs are hidden among the bananas.
ACT 3
INT. KEATON’S AUTOMOBILE – CONTINUOUS p.80
Rexy and Keaton are driving toward the Port as Keaton tells Rexy that Atticus is based in the same area on the Para2 River that the bamboo poison is from and Captain Andrade’s shipping company operates out of. They finally deduce that Atticus, in a “GAIN-OF-FUNCTION” crossbreeding experiment created Teras from a Brazilian Wandering Spider and a Goliath Bird-Eating Tarantula. They also deduce that this aggressive and deadly species, if allowed to live and procreate, has the potential to create a plague which will endanger all other species and possibly humankind. SEQUEL!!!
EXT. SHIPPING PORT, U.S.A – CONTINUOUS p.81
Rexy opens the door and starts to get out. Keaton grabs two CO2 dispensers. They rush to Crutchfields Warehouse to look for Teras and any egg sacs that Teras may have left. We find that Bob Crutchfield distributed half of the bananas to the local grocery stores and didn’t inspect them throughly enough for all egg sacs. He found one and Rexy, Keaton and the Sheriff find another. Atticus and the CIA Operatives show up and, at gun point, take them, but drop them on the concrete floor when Teras shows up and threatens to attack them. The egg sacs burst open. Baby Terases swarm the CIA Operatives and Teras attacks and kills them. BOB CRUTCHFIELD grabs his homemade flamethrower and start to torch the baby Terases. Teras attacks Atticus and Keaton next. When Bob succumbs to the baby Terases, Sheriff Mauer grabs the flamethrower and torches the rest of the baby terases. Rexy tries to get the anti-venom to Keaton, but Atticus takes it and injects himself, leaving Keaton to die. Keaton tells Sheriff Mauer to shoot off the finger that Teras bit. The Sheriff complies in a gross out moment. Teras can’t get to Sheriff Mauer and attacks Rexy next. She is knocked to the floor, but manages to hold off a bite from the Spider until Keaton can knock Teras away from Rexy. Rexy then asks for the flamethrower from Sheriff Mauer and takes after Teras. Teras heads for the door, afraid of the flames, Rexy attempts to set her on fire. Only a spurt comes out and lands on the Spider’s back. Teras escapes out the door, while Rexy goes back to check on Bob. Bob goes into a seizure and dies.
EXT. DOCK – CONTINUOUS p.88
Teras limps across the dock platform in an escape, but it looks like she is still going to burn to death.
INT. ATTICUS’S VEHICLE – CONTINUOUS p.88
Atticus breathes heavily, pain down below comes in sharp pulses. Atticus, is feeling the painful cure of ED that the Phoneutria species is known for, only it is amplified. Morbid Humor.
EXT. DOCK AT OLD CARGO BOAT – CONTINUOUS p.89
Still on fire and SIZZLING, Teras drags herself to the edge of the dock and stops. She molts, leaving her burning exoskeleton behind and boards the Old Cargo Boat, the one she came in on. She climbs down into the Engine Room and up into a corner where she has laid another undiscovered, large, egg sac. We feel dread that a spider plague is about to visit the world. Set up for SEQUEL!!!
DOCK p.90
Sheriff Mauer walks toward the exoskeleton thinking it is the whole spider. He crushes it and sweeps it into the water with his foot.
EXT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT p.90
Keaton, Rexy, and Lilly exit onto a sidewalk and take a stroll. We see that they are together as a couple and potential family.
INT. GROCERY STORE – NIGHT p.91 Rexy, Keaton walk past a kiosk with bananas. They instinctively look for spiders. Seeing none, they walk past. However, as the camera stays on the bananas, we see one baby Teras spider. As another customer lifts a cluster of bananas out of the crate, we see an egg sac with another baby Teras coming out. It screeches and jumps on the Camera Lense, creating a FINAL BLACKOUT.
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This reply was modified 2 years, 1 month ago by
Kenneth Wood.
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Jalynn’s Horror Outline Version 1
What I learned is that I had mixed up some of my cast members and their dire situations, and had to rework that. I could see it after taking out all of the extraneous info and focusing on more of an outline.
Wildcats Outline
Wildcats Concept: Fraternity brothers play a drinking game with deadly results at the ranch estate of one of them. A frat brother entices the family’s big cats to eat the evidence of a dead pledge and when the cats get loose in the house, everyone is “game” and a hidden psychopath emerges.
EXT. COUNTRY ROAD – NIGHT
Three vehicles (a BMW, Mazda Miata, Ford Explorer) carrying fraternity brothers and pledges speed down a lonely road toward a country estate under a full moon. Cole, whose family owns the ranch, is driving three fraternity brothers (Malcolm, Phillip, Creighton) in his car, plus Benji, a pledge; Ethan is driving his good friend Axel; and Gary, a pledge, has another pledge, Wesley, with him.
EXT. RANCH ESTATE – NIGHT
The cars pull up to a ranch estate. The guys get out of the cars and walk along the big cat cages that lead into their wing inside the house. The cats, a black panther, cougar and cheetah, growl. The panther puts his head against the bars, and Cole reaches out to give his head a scratch. He warns the others not to touch the cats and avoid eye contact, but Ethan tells a pledge it’s OK to pet the cougar. When Benji does, the cougar screams at him and scratches his hand with a claw before he can pull it away.
INT. LUXURIOUS RANCH HOUSE – NIGHT
Cole cleans and dresses Benji’s scratched hand. He assures the guys they’re safe around the cats if they do what he says.
The guys meet Kellie (30s), the attractive housekeeper who has made Jell-O shots for them as a welcome to the ranch.
The pledges participate in a hazing drinking game. The frat boys want to see who can drink the most Tequila the fastest and be exempt from fraternity chores for the first month. Benji and Wesley dive in. One pledge, Gary, refuses to drink and is told to leave the ranch because more drinking will ensue.
Benji, the most gung-ho of the pledges, drinks way too much, and develops severe alcohol poisoning. Benji gets very sick and goes to the bathroom to upchuck. When he comes out, he decides to go sit with the big cats to try to sober up.
INT. CAT WING OF HOUSE – NIGHT
When the cats see Benji inside their suite in the house, they get very excited and start pacing. Benji watches them for a moment before his eyes roll back in his head as he has a seizure and starts choking. Benji dies on his own vomit. The cats react wildly.
Malcolm goes looking for Benji and finds him in the cat compound. He tries to rouse Benji, but realizes that he’s dead. Malcolm calls out for the others. The guys are horrified that Benji is dead.
INT. GREAT ROOM – NIGHT
They go back to the great room and debate what to do about Benji and if they’re going to get in trouble for his death. Cole worries about what his father will say.
One of the frat bros goes back to the big cat compound where Benji’s body is, but we don’t see who, just his legs. He gets an idea and pours tequila into the cats’ water. The cats drink it and grow loud and angry. This person goes out of the cat wing and closes the door. He operates a control panel that releases them into the area where Benji is.
The panther and the cougar stride out, sniff Benji’s body, and pounce on him, tearing into his flesh. They fight each other a bit, then go back to eating the body. The third cat growls and screams.
INT. TOILET – NIGHT
Wesley, who stopped drinking long before Benji did, gets helped to the toilet by some of the guys to vomit.
Cole realizes that Ethan, Creighton and Axel have gone too far in coaxing the pledges to binge drink. He’s starting to worry that they have bigger problems than the mess Wesley is making in the bathroom with his projectile vomiting.
INT. CAT WING – NIGHT
When Cole sees that the cats are loose, he freaks and tries to get the cats back into their cages, but they’ve developed a taste for human flesh and go after him. Cole escapes, but so do the big cats. The frat brothers are running through the house, trying to get away from them.
INT. KITCHEN – NIGHT
The cougar walks into the kitchen where two frat brothers Ethan and Axel are trying to find weapons. They grab knives. The cougar leaps up on the kitchen island and growls at them, pacing around it. Ethan throws his knife at the cat, but it bounces off. He turns and runs. The cat screams and lunges for Axel who can’t get away in time and mauls him. Cole runs into the kitchen and talks the cougar down with a broom, too late to save Axel’s life. The cougar runs off while Cole tries to help Axel.
INT. 2<sup>ND</sup> FLOOR HALLWAY OVERLOOKING GREAT ROOM – NIGHT
The cougar runs down a hallway on the second floor. He sees one of the boys, Creighton, and chases him. The frat boy climbs up on the railing of the overlook down into the great room. He sees a large light fixture and jumps for it. The cat stands up on the railing and makes ready to jump after him. The boy lets go as the fixture starts to come loose from the ceiling and falls onto a couch. The cougar jumps to the light fixture. The boy leaps off the couch and runs as the whole fixture falls with the cat to the floor.
INT. CLOSET – NIGHT
Ethan is hiding in a closet. The panther approaches and smells him. He sniffs all around the door. Finally, he rakes his claws down the door trying to open it.
Ethan is holding onto the door handle like his life depends on it. He manages to keep the door closed until the panther gets distracted and moves on.
INT. STUDY – NIGHT
Ethan finds Cole and tells him he needs to get guns and kill these cats before they kill the frat brothers. Cole is conflicted, but was thinking the same thing. These are family pets in his mind, but he realizes there’s no other choice.
Cole goes into his father’s study with Ethan behind him. Cole pulls a rifle out of a gun case and grabs a holster with a pistol. Ethan picks a pistol and a sword off the wall. They load the guns with ammo.
INT. KELLIE’S ROOM – NIGHT
Kellie turns off the TV and takes her ear buds out and puts them on the side table of her bed. She lies back to go to sleep, but is frightened by a scratching at her door. She looks down at the light under the door and sees a big black paw raking the carpet under the door. She looks at the door handle? Is it latched? Before she can get out of bed, the panther throws his weight against the door and pushes it open. Kellie stifles a scream as the panther sees her and jumps up on the bed straddling her and pinning her down with fear.
Cole sees the panther going into her room and races down the hall to her. He picks up a desk chair and pushes the cat off the bed and into her bathroom and closes the door. Kellie shrieks in relief, as Cole holds her and apologizes.
INT. KELLIE’S BATHROOM – NIGHT
The panther in Kellie’s bathroom breaks through a window and gets outdoors on a section of roof.
EXT. ROOF – NIGHT
The big cat walks around to a balcony, jumps onto it, and paws open a sliding glass door that’s ajar. He listens to the screams inside the house and trots off.
INT. INDOOR POOL – NIGHT
Another frat brother, Phillip, is hiding in the huge pool room. The panther walks in and sees Phillip at the end of the pool in the dim light. Phillip starts to get into the water, but the panther jumps into the end of the pool and swims toward him. Phillip grabs the pool skimmer pole and runs down a side trying to push the panther away but it’s relentless in stalking Phillip. He manages to put the skimmer net over the panther’s head and distract it long enough to escape.
INT. SECOND FLOOR HALLWAY – NIGHT
Malcolm on the second floor has found a whip and when he turns a corner trying to find the others, he runs into the cougar. He cracks the whip and spooks the cat for a few moments.
Malcolm thinks he has the upper hand and tries to back away, but the cat follows him. He cracks the whip again, but this time the cat keeps coming at him. Malcolm gets to the stairway leading downstairs and runs down to a landing then trips and tumbles down the rest of the steps. The cougar follows after him and the panther pounces on him when he gets to the bottom. He screams hoping help will come.
Cole and Ethan are looking for the cats with their guns ready. The panther is chewing on Malcolm who is being eaten alive. When the cougar sees Cole, he leaps for him. Cole tries to react quickly enough to get a shot off. But the cougar is on him before he can.
Ethan takes the sword and rams it into the cougar’s side. The cat screams and runs off. Ethan helps Cole up as the panther now comes at them.
INT. GARY’S CAR – NIGHT
Gary, the pledge who wouldn’t drink, doesn’t feel right about leaving the ranch. He turns his car around and drives back. He parks the car and walks in through the front door when he hears screaming.
EXT. RANCH HOUSE – NIGHT
Gary gets out of his car and hears screaming. He runs to the front door and opens it to see the panther chewing on Malcolm and shouts then turns and runs leaving the door wide open.
He scrambles up on the wired and barred cat enclosure and watches the panther as it runs out the door looking for him.
Cole yells for everyone to get out of the house if they can. Ethan runs off.
INT. CAT WING – NIGHT
Ethan heads for the cat wing to see what’s left of Benji. To his chagrin, there’s still a lot of pieces left. Then he notices the cheetah is missing. Where did it go?
EXT. CAT ENCLOSURE – NIGHT
The cheetah is moving through a caged enclosure that takes it from inside the house in the cat wing to the outdoor enclosure. When it reaches the outdoors, it sees Gary sitting on top of its enclosure watching for the panther.
The cheetah runs toward Gary and jumps up in the air trying to get a bite of him. This scares Gary into falling off of the enclosure. He gets up.
INT. HOUSE – NIGHT
Cole goes back in for Kellie and anyone else who’s still alive and pulls her out. She tells him she’s called 9-1-1 and his father. He sees Phillip and together they get Kellie into Cole’s Explorer.
EXT. RANCH HOUSE – NIGHT
He sees Gary and tells him to get back inside his car. Then Cole goes back in for anyone else he can find.
INT. COLE’S EXPLORER – NIGHT
Kellie watches as Ethan runs toward his BMW.
Ethan is walking around to the driver’s seat of his car. That’s the moment the panther jumps on top of the car, staring Ethan down.
Ethan backs away and bumps into Cole’s Explorer. He yells to Kellie to unlock the doors so he can get inside. Kellie scrambles to unlock the doors, but not before the panther jumps on Ethan and starts shredding him. The cat takes part of Ethan’s leg.
A badly mauled Malcolm rises up from the back seat floorboard of Cole’s Explorer scaring Kellie out of her wits and telling Kellie not to open the car.
Kellie pushes him away telling Malcolm they’ve got to help the others. He’s almost out of his mind with fear and prevents Kellie from opening the doors for Ethan.
Gary tries to help Ethan, but is attacked by the cougar who bites his head off. This attracts the panther. Ethan now has a chance to get into his BMW.
INT. GUEST BEDROOM – NIGHT
Wesley is passed out on a guest bed after drinking so much. Cole finds him and carries him out with the rifle slung across his back. He stops to rest near the front door and yells for anyone else inside to help him. Creighton steps out of the library and grabs Wesley under one arm as Cole takes the other. They look towards the front door to see the cougar standing there eyeing them.
Cole tells Creighton to carry Wesley while he reaches for the rifle. The cougar charges them and all Cole can do is whip the rifle butt around and hit the cougar in the head. It gets a paw on him and rakes his chest. Cole pulls a pistol out of his holster and shoots the cougar who bounds away.
EXT. RANCH HOUSE – NIGHT
Cole and Creighton get Wesley outside and face the panther. When the panther turns on Cole, he has to shoot it with his pistol several times to kill it.
Finally, his beloved panther is dead and the cougar appears and tears into the dead panther, then sees Cole and takes a last run at him. Cole puts bullets into his pistol just in the nick of time to shoot the cougar in the head. It falls inches from him and reaches a paw out to him with a sad cry. Cole cries over their deaths and this whole fiasco.
First responders arrive and gather up the dead and wounded. They wrap Ethan’s leg and wounds on his face. He’s lost a lot of blood and they don’t expect him to survive.
INT. CAT WING – NIGHT
Cole goes back to the indoor cat cages. He sees that the cheetah’s cage has been opened by someone, and the cat is gone.
EXT. RANCH HOUSE – NIGHT
A paramedic shuts the door to an ambulance. Flashing red, white and blue lights signal the ambulance is moving.
INT. AMBULANCE – NIGHT
Ethan is lying on a gurney. His eyes open in his bloody, bandaged face and he smiles.
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What I learned from this assignment is I came up with some new solutions to plot problems that I was struggling with.
My outline is 10 solid pages. I’m not going to bother you with it here.
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Please do. I would like to see how your story is coming.
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Looking ahead it looks like we’re going to be sharing everything. If that doesn’t happen, I’ll be happy to share with you privately, Kenneth.
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MIke’s Horror Outline Version 1
What I learned is the importance of sketching out each scene as it drives the story.
ACT 1: SET UP FOR HORROR
INT- SCHOOL BUILDING- DAY
Emily is walking in a hallway, not quite sure where to go. She walks into a classroom. Everyone turns around and looks at her. The professor at the front of the room asks her name. She tells him, and he responds that it’s good she finally showed up. There’s a big test.
He motions for her to sit down. He hands her a paper and tells her she has a half hour to finish the three hour final. The professor puts the test on her desk. She picks it up and looks at it. There are pages and pages of questions. She looks down and realizes she is in her underwear. The other students start turning in their papers and stare at her as he leaves the room. We hear the dings of texts coming in.
INT- EMILY’S ROOM- DAY
Emily is in her bed. We hear another ding. She awakes with a start, and picks up her phone.
We look at the screen of the phone and see texts from Brad. He tells her some people are getting together at a local coffee shop. She responds that she must have fallen asleep and she’ll be right there. Brad tells her to hurry. David will be there as well.
Emily gets up and starts to get ready.
EXT- THE COFFEE SHOP- DUSK
A car pulls up and Emily gets out. Emily walks toward the front entrance.
INT- COFFEE SHOP, INTERIOR- DUSK
Emily walks in the door. She walks toward a table. Heather, Brad, Madison, David, and Jacob greet her.
Emily shares her dream with them. It is a recurring one. Others have dreams just like it. Heather shares a story about an abandoned classroom building where people have disappeared. There was a fire years ago during a test when someone tried to set off a fire alarm to get out of the test. Instead they accidentally started a fire. The building was locked down, and they all died in the fire, although legend says the professor got away. Others have heard the story. Heather suggests they all go to check out the old building. Jacob and Brad have their doubts, but Emily, David and Madison are in. They think it is a joke.
EXT- OLD CLASSROOM BUILDING- EVENING
They are all standing outside of the building. Emily and David start to feel a little creeped out. Brad tries to talk the group into leaving and going somewhere else. Jacob complains about how cold and dark it is. It seems like the group is getting to leave. Heather yells and calls them cowards. Then she opens the door and walks in, holding it open. David shrugs his shoulders and follows. Emily and Madison walk in at the same time, bumping into each other. Jacob yells at them to come on out, and then walks in to get them. Jacob, seeing that he’s alone, runs in. The door shuts, and we hear the lock click.
INT- OLD CLASSROOM BUILDING ENTRANCE AREA- EVENING
There is low light. Brad starts yelling for people to follow him and get out. He tries the door, and it’s locked. Jacob tells Brad to cut it out and tries the door himself. Both run to windows, but they are locked shut. They start pounding on the windows, but nothing budges. Emily pulls out a cell phone, but there is no signal. Jacob can’t get a signal either. He starts freaking out, demanding that the others quit fooling around.
Heather finds the whole thing amusing. She laughs like it’s a game. She urges the others to go explore. Emily tries to get her to focus on the problem at hand. Brad pulls everyone together and suggests they split up and try to find a way out. He moves in one direction, Emily goes in another and Heather follows Emily. David splits off and Madison follows, leaving Jacob by himself. Jacob starts yelling and banging on the front door.
INT- HALLWAY- EVENING
Heather and Emily are trying to find a way out. They hear Jacob yelling and start laughing. They know that Jacob would be long gone if he actually found a way out. They start strategizing to find an exit. The conversation then goes to a crush that Emily has on David. They hear movement in a nearby classroom.
Emily looks in and gasps. Her eyes tear up and she runs off. Heather looks into the room and sees David and Madison making out. She runs after Emily.
ACT 2- THE POINT OF NO RETURN
INT- DIFFERENT HALLWAY- EVENING
Brad is looking around. He tries a door that is locked. A shadow goes by and he looks up. Nothing. He hears running footsteps and turns a corner. Heather runs right into him, almost knocking him over.
A voice comes over the intercom telling everyone to go to Room 313 for their exam. They look up at the intercom.
They hear Jacob off to the distance yelling that there’s no way he’s taking a test and to let him out. He starts yelling hysterically. Brad and Heather start following his voice. They find him in a classroom hunched over and weeping. Heather tries to comfort him.
A monitor comes on, and they see David in a room with a frightened look on his face. The voice comes on and tells them that David will die if they don’t answer the first question. Again they are told to go to Room 313 for the exam.
INT- ROOM 313- EVENING
Brad, Emily, and Jacob walk into the room. The monitor comes on, and we see David again, still frightened. There are two glasses in front of him. A voice comes on and tells them to handcuff themselves to the desks. Brad refuses and demands that David be let go. A knife comes out and is held to David’s throat. The order is repeated. Jacob starts to run, and Brad tackles him, pulls him to the desk, and puts on the cuffs. The voice orders Heather to put the cuffs on Brad. She complies and Brad lets her. She then cuffs herself to another desk.
The voice tells them that one glass contains water and the other contains poison. One is marked A and the other is marked B. The question is asked, and the group answers A. With a shaky hand, David picks up the glass and drinks it. He puts is down, and a weak smile comes across his face. A rope appears around his neck, and the screen goes blank.
The group starts to talk about how they are going to get out of this mess when the door opens and David appears looking fine. He takes a couple of steps and falls over. Dead.
The group starts to speculate. Where’s Madison/ Where’s Emily? Are one of them behind it? Then the screen comes on. We see Madison’s face, horrified.
INT- ANOTHER ROOM- EVENING
She has a noose around her neck. We see the end of a camera pointed toward her. Madison is standing on a red chair with a blue chair next to it. The group is asked another question, one answer is red and the other is blue. The question is answered, and Madison steps onto the red chair. We see a hand pull a lever and a trapdoor opens under the chair. Madison swings from the noose.
ACT 3: FULL ON HORROR
INT- ROOM 313- EVENING
The three people are terrified. Jacob suggests it could be Emily. Heather mentions that Emily had a crush on David and Saw David and Madison making out. Brad is skeptical. Then Emily appears at the door, a scary look on her face. Behind her is a man with a mask with a speargun in his hand. He orders Emily to sit at a desk and cuffs her. He uncuffs Jacob and takes him away, whining and whimpering.
Brad and Heather start asking Emily questions. She had run and been locked in c closet and couldn’t get out. The man in the mask opened the door, held the speargun to her and told her he was taking her to her friends. He told her it was exam time.
The monitor comes back on. Jacob is in a compromising position [I haven’t figured this one out yet] A problem is posed. After some tense moments, Emily asks for some scarp paper and the masked man comes in and hands her some along with a pen. Emily works out the problem and answers correctly.
A voice comes on and congratulates Emily telling her that she has earned the right to be the next victim.
INT- ANOTHER ROOM- EVENING
A relieved Jacob is taken out of the trap. He asks where he is being taken and is told he’ll go back with his friends. He begs to be let go and is told he will be given an extra credit question he could answer to be let go if he chooses. He accepts it. He He is asked a question and is given two guns, one loaded and one not. He picks up the gun corresponding to his answer and puts it to his head. We hear a couple of clicks. It’s empty. He starts laughing. He picks up the other gun and points it toward the masked man. Again two clicks. Jacob is confused.
The masked man tells him both answers were correct, but since he cheated, he would have to face the consequences. He fires the spear gun and kills Jacob. He picks up the gun and puts in some bullets.
INT- ROOM 313
The three survivors are in the room, and they hear footsteps coming down the hall. Emily writes furiously and crumples up the paper.She puts it in her mouth as the masked man walks in. He holds the gun to Emily’s head and uncuffs her. She leans down and kisses Brad. For good luck she says.
After the masked man walks out Brad pulls the paper out and reads it. The monitor comes on with Emily in a precarious position. The masked man starts to talk and Brad interrupts saying he would raise his hand if he could but he has a question. The monitor goes off.
We hear footsteps and the masked man enters the room. Brad asks for a review. The masked man goes up to the board at the front and starts lecturing. Brad then asks if he could try a practice problem. The masked man writes down a problem and takes him to the board. Brad starts on the problem and seems to get stuck at a point. The masked man is frustrated and grabs the chalk from Brad and starts to write. Brad grabs the man and pushes him out a window.
EXT- OUTSIDE THE BUILDING (THROUGH THE WINDOW)- EVENING
We see the masked man motionless on the pavement.
EXT- THE FRONT OF THE BUILDING-EVENING
Brad, Heather, and Emily are being led out of the building. They see a body bag, probably Jacob, belong put into the ambulance. Emily looks back toward the spot where the masked man fell. It is empty.
BLACKOUT
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Rachelle’s Horror Outline Version 1
What I learned: The exercises really do build on each other and make sense. Seems like a no-brainer, but it’s helping me out quite well.
Heads up: It’s 9 pages, but it is my best version yet.
ACT 1
EXT. DAY – ABANDONED ELEMENTARY SCHOOL
Estrella is peering through a window and sees the Doctor performing a morbid surgery; grafting animal parts to a living human.
The patient opens her eyes. She does not scream and is not afraid. She touches her tongue to her new fangs. Zoom out to see a tangle of snakes gnarled and swirling atop her head.
The patient looks Estrella straight in the eye. Estrella runs into the woods and falls into a discretely disguised pit.
EXT. DAY – WOODS
Five twenty-something friends, a transient band of misfits, are walking through the woods. Ryan spots a chain link fence, runs, and jumps it. He signals for the others to do the same.
Pip assesses the situation, decides it’s safe, and weaves their fingers together to create a foothold for the others. Pip’s partner Zinnia is first up. Will complains that it is a bad idea, and why do they have to do everything Ryan and Pip want.
Ryan makes a joke, tells Will he doesn’t have to come. Will ultimately decides to follow. Olly looks back, indicating his reluctance. He makes eye contact with Pip who drops their hands and both launch themselves over at the same time.
The group has a way of interacting together, seamlessly and with few words, which lets the audience know they have been traveling together for a while. There is a real, “Stand By Me” vibe about this crew.
The quintet keeps walking, chatting along the way. Zinnia hears Estrella’s whimpering and signals for everyone to be quiet. She follows the noise while the others proceed cautiously behind her. Ryan licks his finger and puts it into the wind, joking, “Yes, this is the way.”
The group extracts Estrella from the hole. Pip questions her, but she is shaking, rocking, unresponsive, mumbling to herself. Zinnia says they need to find her help. Will is against anything to do with this stranger.
Storm clouds roll in and force them towards a building they can see close by. Strange birds scream in the distance, like nothing any of them have ever heard.
Pip, noting concern in the group, lets everyone know it is just ravens. Will isn’t buying it. Ryan looks up and points to the birds circling high above their heads, “Looks like ravens to me.” Zinnia doesn’t care what they are, they need to get this woman inside ASAP.
Thunder and lightning, pouring down rain; the group is already soaked. Pip knocks. No answer. They try the door. Locked. Meanwhile, Olly has broken a window. Ryan jokes, “My hero.”
INT. CONTINUOUS – ABANDONED ELEMENTARY SCHOOL
The group enters. They discuss theories of the property being abandoned. The floor descends below them, delivering them to the basement.
Estrella is more lucid now and says, “We shouldn’t be here.”
Ryan takes her by the hand and leads her to one of the tunnels, “Over here better?”
Olly goes to a different tunnel to scope it out. Will follows him, enraged, “None of this would have happened if you hadn’t broken that window.”
Zinnia shudders and follows Pip to the third and final tunnel entrance. Pip is optimistic, telling the others it is a puzzle to be solved, they can figure it out together.
Bars fall, enclosing each pair in their respective tunnels.
Estrella loses it and falls to the ground hugging her knees, sobbing. Ryan tries to comfort her by making a joke. Will is still yelling at Olly. Zinnia looks at Pip who gives a sharp whistle that gets everyone’s attention.
His instructions: Solve the puzzle in pairs and meet each other outside, at the broken window. There is resistance from Will and Estrella, but Zinnia soothes them and convinces them to soldier on.
INT. SAME – CONTROL ROOM
The Doctor wakes the Siren, tells Medusa to bring him Estrella and Ryan, and lets the Kamaitachi loose.
One tunnel leads to sand, another to water, another to the operating room. All of the groups will be pursued, mentally and physically tortured.
INT. LATER – CAVE LEDGE
Zinnia and Pip find themselves on a ledge at the end of their tunnel. They can see a pool of water below.
“How deep do you think it is?” Zinnia wonders. “It’s our only exit,” Pip says just before he jumps in.
He looks up at Zinnia, “I didn’t even hit bottom.” The water looks clean and clear, lit from below. Zinnia jumps in.
Enter the SIREN and their fight to survive.
INT. SAME – SAND PIT
Will and Olly find their tunnel ending in ever more sand until they are atop a pile of it.
“Look at these cute little prints,” Will says. Something skitters on their periphery. Olly is silent. Will is panicked, he can’t stop talking.
Olly scouts a ladder on the wall and makes his way there. Will is beside himself, and doesn’t notice what Olly is doing. The Kamaitachi bursts through the sand and cuts him limb from limb.
Olly escapes to the sound of Will’s screams.
INT. SAME – TUNNEL
Ryan hugs the weeping Estrella to his side, encouraging her forward. They see the woman from earlier, Medusa with her snakes covered up.
Estrella freezes, she will not take another step. Ryan is attracted to Medusa and wants to see her in bed with him. She is charming and lures him closer. She wants to show him something. She promises nothing will happen to Estrella.
ACT 2 – THE POINT OF NO RETURN
INT. LATER – OPERATING ROOM
Ryan and Estrella are tricked into the operating room, deceived by Medusa.
Medusa tells Ryan to lie on the table. He does so, believing it has to do with her kink. Estrella is shaking her head. “You want her to watch?” he asks.
Once Ryan is strapped in, Medusa takes a straight jacket to Estrella, who resists.
INT. SAME – POOL OF WATER
Pip and Zinnia are trapped in water with the SIREN. They volley with her sharp claws, teeth, and ear-piercing screams until they figure it out – she breathes air! They drown her.
INT. SAME – SAND PIT
Will is dead. Only Olly knows this. He makes haste climbing the ladder ever higher.
INT. SAME – OUTSIDE O.R.
We see more of the Doctor, as he preps to operate on Ryan. reveal the entirety of the Doctor’s face while scrubbing in.
INT. CONTINUOUS – O.R.
The Doctor enters. Medusa is the Doctor’s assistant. Ryan understands what is happening now. They begin the process of anesthetizing him.
Estrella is screaming. Medusa suggests switching her out for Ryan. The Doctor explains the importance of having a healthy specimen for the surgery to have the greatest chance of success.
INT. SAME – POOL OF WATER
Pip and Zinnia have killed the Siren. They hug and kiss in victory. A whirlpool forms and drains them through different exits.
INT. LATER – LADDER
Olly is climbing the ladder to where it ends on the roof.
INT. SAME – DRAINAGE TUNNEL ONE
Zinnia follows the sound of Estrella’s wailing.
INT. SAME – DRAINAGE TUNNEL TWO
Pip navigates the maze from where he exited the drain.
INT. LATER – O.R.
Estrella is hysterical. The Doctor is calm. He speaks to her softly as he operates on Ryan. The Doctor uses his powers of persuasion and hypnotism to soothe Estrella, and she relaxes.
EXT. LATER – ROOF OF THE BUILDING
Olly paces the roof muttering to himself, clearly distraught over his decision to abandon Will.
The Doctor flies onto the roof and lands just in front of Olly, stunned. The Doctor waits patiently for Olly to make the first move.
Olly steps backwards slowly and keeps going. The Doctor warns him.
Olly falls off the roof.
He hits the ground, but isn’t dead. Dozens of harpies swoop in and pick him apart.
MIDPOINT – THE MONSTER IS WORSE THAN WE THOUGHT
INT. CONTINUOUS – DRAINAGE TUNNEL ONE
Zinnia hears Olly screaming. She calls out to Estrella, who replies back. Zinnia follows the sound of her voice.
INT. SAME – DRAINAGE TUNNEL TWO
Pip hears Olly’s cries, but can’t find their way to him. Instead Pip finds a door labeled, “Recovery.” He opens it.
Ryan is here. His head is bandaged.
INT. CONTINUOUS – O.R.
Zinnia finds Estrella in the operating room, still straight-jacketed. She releases her and the two run through the maze searching for an exit. They call out to Pip and Ryan.
ACT 3 – FULL OUT HORROR
INT. NIGHT – ISOLATED CHAMBER
The room is lit by the moon from a skylight overhead. It is an old classroom with writing desks, chalkboard, etc.
Pip and Ryan enter the room from different ingress points than do Zinnia and Estrella. Zinnia wields a scalpel defensively, sheltering Estrella behind her. Pip is ready with fists out. Ryan removes his bandages to reveal the new goat-like appendages grafted to his skull.
There is a momentary pause as they recognize each other, then run towards one another to embrace as a group.
The sound of metal scraping on concrete halts their celebration. On another end of the room a gate is opening. The growls of three distinctly different dogs can be heard.
Pip searches for an actual weapon and dislodges the lid from a desk. The four work their backs towards their only chance of escape, another door across the room.
Cerberus launches into the room. One head catches a hit from the desk shield. Another, a slash from the scalpel. Ryan and Estrella are essentially helpless, sheltered behind Pip and Zinnia.
They make it to their exit and attempt to close it before Cerberus can make it through. The three-headed beast gets Pip by the leg and drags them back to the other side. Pip continues beating Cerberus with the desktop shield, but they are being ripped to shreds.
It’s already too late for anyone to act on his behalf. Cerberus lunges for the door just as the last three are able to close it. The beast claws and thrashes itself against the barrier, trying to get to its prey.
INT. NIGHT – LAST ROOM BEFORE EXIT
The group walks cautiously backwards until Ryan catches the edge of the landing, teeters for a moment and catches himself. They are able to see by the tiny light of a broken window, this is the room where all of them originally entered.
The platform of their descent is still in the basement. They must hug the walls and walk along the last ledge of flooring to make it back to the window.
Cerberus continues clawing and thrashing at the door, until it breaks through! The three-headed dog falls into the open floor.
EXT. NIGHT – JUST OUTSIDE
Zinnia, Estrella, and Ryan exit through the window. Harpies scream, swooping down, pecking and clawing at them as the three run towards the woods.
The Doctor, still on the roof, takes flight. He swoops down and slashes Zinnia’s throat in one swift motion. She falls to the ground, bleeds out quickly. Estrella doesn’t stop. She dodges her previous pit-fall and makes it to the fence.
Ryan gives up, stands stupefied. The doctor speaks to him in soothing tones, convincing him to return to the compound. Ryan walks back towards the building.
Estrella jumps the fence and escapes.
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Man you guys are kicking butt. I’m having trouble committing to outline scenes. It was easy when we were vague but now I’m shifting things here and there but they never seem good enough. I don’t want to get too far in with temp scenes that I just have to redo again. :/
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Bill Anderson’s Horror Outline Version 1
What I learned from this assignment was that all the previous assignments were very cleverly designed to generate the required ingredients to make this process really fruitful.
MOTHERLAND
EXT – GNARLY TREE/ISOLATED FARMHOUSE – NIGHT
The leaves of an ancient, gnarled tree atop a rocky outcrop on an isolated farm shiver as the last sunlight of the day is crushed below the horizon by menacing clouds of night: we follow the sugars of photosynthesis inside the tree down to its roots which will exude them into the darkness of the dirt. A twisted root swells and splits off a piece of the rock it’s penetrated – this snaps, falls to the bottom of the outcrop, and smashes into the skull of a fox that was eating the entrails of its prey. As the fox spasms in death, something we can’t quite make out in the darkness drags the fox to its underground lair, where it disappears just as car headlights beam sweeps past, headed along the track to the isolated farmhouse…
…Inside the expensive car, Jan and Michael notice something strange about the way the fox disappears – too quickly. Michael quips he can relate to a crazy urge to hide: from Jan’s crazy family on their crazy farm… she smiles.
INT – FARMOUSE – NIGHT
Jan and Michael join the family to celebrate patriarch father Jeb’s 70th birthday along with his two other daughters Leah, Beth and her partner Jack. Leah, the youngest, is a veterinarian who has never really left the farm. Rebel permaculture hippy Beth is heavily pregnant – only recently moving back along with itinerant musician partner Jack to birth the baby somewhere safe. Elder sister Jan believes her academic farming credentials qualify her to run the farm better than her father, and lab-based seed geneticist Michael agrees. Beth reminds everyone Jan believed she was better qualified long before she went to college – Beth protests she’s not a cow as Leah listens to Beth’s bump with a stethoscope – family fun, teasing, frivolity – daughters have each prepared a dish for the birthday feast: Beth vegetarian, Leah meat, Jan a sugary meringue birthday cake with sparklers and fireworks.
Jeb announces that he’s selling the farm – it can’t make money – the ever increasing inputs of fertilizer and agrochemicals required cost too much – the debt unserviceable – time to get out. His daughters are stunned – it’s their living birth right as much as their birthplace. The family dog senses the atmosphere and sides with the daughters – starts barking as if possessed, making talk impossible…
EXT – GNARLY TREE – NIGHT
… The Gnarly Tree hears the dog barking from a distance – there is no wind, but its leaves suddenly rustle vigorously. They stop. Still no wind. The leaves rustle again, more insistently and the wind begins to blow and build up into a storm…
INT – FARMOUSE – NIGHT
… Leah senses something beyond the barking: she calms the dog and her and Jeb hear a distant cow in trouble…
INT – FARM SHED – NIGHT
Leah and Jeb help a cow struggling with a difficult labour…
INT – JAN’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
… Jan is insisting Michael has sex with her – The App has determined she’s optimally fertile tonight – Michael is tired but reluctantly tries to comply…
INT – BETH’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
… Jack listens to Jan and Michael through the wall as Beth sleeps…
EXT – GNARLY TREE – NIGHT
… the storm is now screaming through the branches of the gnarly tree, explosive thunder…
INT – FARM SHED – NIGHT
… Finally, Leah pulls the calf from the cow…
INT – BETH’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
… Lightning flashes as Beth jolts up, roaring as she’s woken by a huge contraction…
EXT – GNARLY TREE – NIGHT
… the gnarled tree is blown over, to reveal a skeleton rising up out of the ground entwined in the bolus of its roots, and permeated by a mycelial web – torrential rain blasts its bones clean…
INT – BETH’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
… Beth’s OK – another contraction but it’s just Brackston Hicks…
INT – FARM SHED – NIGHT
… the calf is horrifically deformed – and it has no eyes – Jeb drags its body out of the pen as Leah tries to save its dying mother – but Jeb sees the mother’s beyond help, returns with the captive bolt to put her out of her misery. Leah surprises herself how emotionally reluctant she is to give up on the mother, and Jeb acknowledge some history between Leah and himself over this before, with her tacit consent, he kills the cow.
EXT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
A postman hurries through torrential rain biblical Noah would recognise – he posts a letter through the door.
INT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
The family are arguing over the future of the farm – Jan says it’s failing but it could succeed with more hi-tech, chemically intensive farming done right, Beth the organic opposite – when Leah opens the letter addressed to their mother who’s been dead for thirty years: it’s a nest egg fund their mother had invested a small sum in and it’s about to mature on what would be her imminent 65th birthday – it’s a farm-saving amount they can claim! All Jeb has to do is provide Mother’s death certificate and Will.. but Jeb refuses to consider this – this is not financial for him: he didn’t know about this nest egg – it’s emotional – it’s as if Mother has suddenly come back from the dead – he snatches the nest egg letter and storms out into the rain…
EXT – FARM – DAY
…so heavy now that streams are coursing over the track to the farm, but Jeb wades through them until he can go no further – he stands knee deep in a torrent and roars with fear and frustration –
EXT – GNARLY TREE – DAY
…the leaves, then the skeleton hears Jeb’s roar…
EXT – FARM – DAY
– a landslide crevasse opens up underneath roaring Jeb – he falls into it, but as he slides down a root catches his jaw, breaking his fall and his neck – the root seems to tighten, pressing Jeb’s throat against the side of the crevasses – starting to asphyxiate him! The water level is rising as the family catch up with Jeb and work to extract him from the crevasse before he suffocates. Leah and Jack wade in, taking Jeb’s weight off the root as Jack cuts through it with his knife. As they drag limp and unconscious Jeb out of the crevasse and take him into the house, Jan and Michael’s car is swallowed into crevasse clearly making the track impassable for vehicles. They don’t see the two ends of the root Jack cut suddenly withdraw themselves back into the dirt!
INT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
The family lay Jeb on a couch near the fire to dry out. Leah attends – Jeb’s unconscious and maybe paralysed, but he’s breathing, stable, alive… how will they get help? Power is down. Nobody has mobile signal, Michael confirms the landline is down, and Jack points out that the off road farm vehicles all too heavy to risk driving over the flooded unstable ground. They’re cut off from the world. What to do? Leah knows the detail of the land best – leaving Beth to tend to Jeb, Leah goes to scout (on foot with the dog) a possible safe root for a farm tractor to get help. Michael volunteers to try and find where the landline’s gone down and fix it. Jan and Jack go into Jeb’s office to look for Mother documents that might release the nest egg and explain Jeb’s mysterious over-reaction to it.
While they’re searching, Jack asks Jan if The App is working for her? Confides he heard her and Michael in bed last night – walls are so thin it was like he was lying next to her… She confides that they were “interrupted” by everything… but she’s still fertile, still “on heat”, and it would be a shame to waste the opportunity – Jack agrees she’s still hot and kisses her passionately, Jan pulls away: Beth’s too close – she’d hear…
EXT – FARM TRACK – DAY
Michael discovers the land line is beyond repair.
EXT – FARM – DAY
Leah sees extent of flood damage – no safe route here – moves on to look elsewhere.
EXT – FARM BUILDINGS – DAY
Walking past a barn, Michael sees Jan and Jack having clandestine sex – he’s devastated and furious, but hides it – walks on to farmhouse, biding his time…
EXT – GNARLY TREE – DAY
Leah discovers the skeleton and calmly silences the barking dog that lead her to it. She examines the skeleton closely with a professional eye: it looks complete – no signs of obvious cause of death. She sees the distinctive ring still hanging loosely around one of its fingers. The dawning possibility that this is her mother and the questions that raises…
INT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
In the paperwork Jan and Jack have unearthed in Jeb’s office, Leah finds an old photo of her mother wearing the distinctive ring as Jack comes back in from the barn. Leah reports she hasn’t found a safe vehicle route. She’s scrutinising the ring in the photo when Jan comes in and asks about the extent of the havoc wreaked on the farm. Leah says it’s mostly flooding, some broken branches but only one tree down – Jan can see her sister’s hiding something and probes further – Leah confirms the fallen tree’s Old Gnarly as she puts the photo down and goes to Jeb. Jan scrutinizes this photo that interested evasive Leah so much…
Leah sees that Jeb’s breathing has become more laboured and hears the dog growling at something under his couch. Leah discovers mould has mysteriously appeared in Jeb’s bedding – spores may be damaging Jeb’s lungs – Leah notices the same mould has appeared on the nest-egg letter Jeb stuffed inside his pocket – Dog barks at something under Jeb’s couch – Jack discovers and closely examines distinctive, unfamiliar mushrooms are growing through the floorboards – publicly everyone works hard to put it down to a leak in the roof caused by the storm.
EXT – FARM CHEMICAL STORE – DAY
Inside the hi-tech hub/store Michael searches the chemical drums and finds a highly toxic fungicide – he takes a drum back to the house.
INT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
Jack is examining the fungus closely, fascinated, he hides some away for a closer look before Michael douses the fungus and surrounding floorboards with neat fungicide. Beth replaces Jeb’s covers with fresh.
EXT – GNARLY TREE – DAY
Jan finds the skeleton, goes to take her mother’s ring – as she touches it the leaves flutter and rustle – Jan hesitates, senses malice, but then continues to remove the ring and heads back to the farmhouse (Jan is too focussed on the ring to notice what we see: the same fungus as in the house has appeared growing on/in the tree near the skeleton since Leah was there)
INT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
Jeb’s breathing has deteriorated so much Leah decides they have to get help immediately. Jack volunteers to walk miles to the nearest doctor, and Michael says he’ll accompany him. Jan re-examines the nest egg letter for any clues about Mother and sees that it is now riddled with mould – she hears Jeb’s laboured breathing – Jan completely re-evaluates the nest egg money – it is not a kind gift, it is malicious – Mother has come back to make mischief – for revenge! Jan puts the letter down and obsessively rinses her hands in the toxic fungicide.
EXT – GNARLY TREE – DAY
Jack and Michael pass by the Gnarly tree but don’t see the skeleton as they leave the farm to take a shortcut through a wood. The skeleton sees Michael petulantly kick some of the distinctive fungus growing nearby – some of the same fungus now growing inside the skeleton slowly opens its gills to release spores…
EXT – WILD FOREST – DAY
Michael confronts Jack for having sex with Jan and threatens to reveal it and jeopardise Jack’s relationship to Beth and his share of the farm. Jack dismisses impotent Michael with contempt, and Michael attacks him. But bleeding Jack is only hurt enough to get mad and chases terrified Michael through a forest. Jack is overtaken by what looks like a root unearthing itself like a snake wriggling under fallen leaves to catch up with sprinting Michael: Jack sees the root surface to trip up Michael who flies though the air, smashes his head on a rock, and falls face down in a pool of storm water….
Jack knows what he saw but can’t understand it – he lifts the root beside him from under the leaves and confirms it’s freshly uprooted itself. As he puts it down it seems to retighten itself to the ground – Jack sees the dense fungal mycelium matt of embracing fibres the root is bedding itself back into. He hears Michael choking in the water, but as he goes to help him leaves of the forest floor start rippling as they move towards him from various directions. Jack abandons Michael (who drowns) as he runs for his life – he leaps over the tracks of the subterranean roots as they catch up with him, but they can swiftly change direction and there are more and more of them coming – a three-way root pincer movement almost gets him as he propels himself out of the wood into a grassy field near the farmhouse – the grass moves towards him in waves as he sprints back to the house…
INT – FARMHOUSE – DAY
… Jack bursts into the farmhouse in terror and tells what’s happened – Beth is terrified, believes bleeding Jack’s story; Jan is distraught and suspicious of Jack’s crazy explanation of Michael’s disappearance/demise. Leah sees Jack wide-eyed with fear of everything outside and suspects a different explanation… Jack goes to the chemical shed and pours a defensive ring of neat, toxic herbicide around the edge of the concrete slab surrounding the farmhouse. (He fails to consider the decorative creeper growing up the outside of the house)
INT – JACK AND BETH’S ROOM – DAY
Leah discovers that Jack has kept some dissected pieces of the mushroom there. Jan discovers Leah in Jack’s room and challenges her – what’s she doing in there? – Leah tells Jan she suspects Jack is hallucinating – that the mushroom he was handling is psychedelic – none of his story is real and that Michael is probably fine – getting help.
INT – JEB”S OFFICE – DAY
Jan conspiratorially shows Beth the photo of Mum’s ring then reveals the real thing – explains it’s from mum’s skeleton unearthed under the gnarly tree, how she found it and why she thinks that Leah’s hiding something – knows something she’s not telling. Jan tells Beth Leah thinks Jack’s just hallucinating from mushroom contact. But Beth believes what Jack says happened – Jan needs to know for sure if Michael’s dead – what if he’s badly injured but still alive? Beth tells her not to go – it’s not safe – look what happened to Jack! Who else could go? Jan suggests they make Leah go – Leah was the one who killed their mother in childbirth: if there’s no truth to the vengeful mother returning, and it was all just a hallucination then Leah’s perfectly safe – but if their mother has somehow come back for vengeance then best she takes Leah and leaves Beth and Jan alone – Beth reluctantly agrees.
INT – FARMHOUSE – EVENING
Jack finishes with the herbicide and Jan gets him to show Leah on a map of the farm where he last saw Michael – right on the edge of their land – he tells Leah there’s nothing she can do for Michael – he’s dead – the roots seemed to be working with the fungus – like the mycorrhizal relationship in nature, only much, much faster – and more deadly – Jan interrupts him telling Leah not to go: she passively sends Leah out into the scary wood as an offering to monster (but officially to find Michael and also get help for worsening Jeb… )
EXT – GNARLY TREE – EVENING
As Leah and the dog pass by, a fruiting body of the fungus emerges on the surface of the gnarly tree – at time-lapse speed – menacingly quick… we see the tree is becoming covered in fungus – voraciously consuming it from within… mycelial fibres are increasingly clothing the outside of the skeleton as if it were being wrapped by an embalmer…
EXT – WILD FOREST – EVENING
… As the forest shimmers, hisses, creaks and groans with supernatural threat, Leah and the dog come upon the body of Michael lying on the forest floor where we last saw him…
INT – JEB’S OFFICE – EVENING
… Searching with Jan, Beth exclaims as she finally discovers their mother’s death certificate – she’s shocked by what she reads…
EXT – WILD FOREST – EVENING
…Leah approaches Michael with great caution, looking closely for signs of life – she turns Michael’s body over – it’s horrifically consumed by fungus and penetrated by roots – hugely unnatural advanced decay – his body is already hollowed out by fungus and maggots which crawl out of his mouth – eel-like amphibian scavengers wriggle out of his eye sockets… Leah backs away, struggling to comprehend how this could have happened so quickly…
INT – JEB’S OFFICE – EVENING
… Beth and Jan discover that it wasn’t Leah that killed their mother – she didn’t die in childbirth – she was poisoned…!
INT – FARMHOUSE – EVENING
… Jeb regains consciousness and starts calling out the name of his wife – as a warning? A plea for mercy?…
EXT – GNARLY TREE – EVENING
… more mycelial strands are penetrating the roots inside the skeleton – they start to pulse with bioluminescence – sending a signal…
EXT – WILD FOREST – EVENING
… Leah senses the forest floor coming to life around her – beside Michael’s body the forest floor explodes in a tsunami of roots and leaves heading straight for Leah… as they hit her she’s thrown up into the air by the force of it, but when she lands she is not devoured – the roots are rushing past her – she can hardly believe it – but realises with dread that this dark energy is heading towards her family back at the farmhouse – Leah starts running back the way she came, following in the wake of the roots that are gathering in numbers and power…
INT – FARMHOUSE – EVENING
…Jack is lighting oil lamps when he hears a rumbling from outside…
EXT – FARMHOUSE – EVENING
… axe in hand, Jack steps out onto the concrete slab outside the front door and sees the tsunami of roots coming across the fields towards the farmhouse – he sees the frontrunners make contact with his ring of herbicide in the soil at the edge of the slab – the roots recoil: hissing and squirming in agony – his defences work! – he reassures Beth and Jan who’ve come to the door – but then he senses something in his feet – he gets down and puts his ear to the concrete – he hears what sounds like big roots scraping deep under the slab: the creeper growing up the outside of the house starts to come to life – Beth and Jan retreat inside – Jack takes his axe to the creeper, but its branches are too quick – too many…
EXT – WILD FOREST – EVENING
… Leah sprints back to her family…
INT – FARMHOUSE – NIGHT
… the creeper is breaking the glass in the windows to get inside, in spite of Jack’s efforts, roots are coming in through the door, Jan sees terrified Jeb and accuses him of poisoning their mother, killing her – Jeb denies, but Jan doesn’t believe him – as Jack comes in Jan decides they have to get Jeb out of the house and give him to the monster – it’s their mother avenging her murder by Jeb. Jack’s desperate – agrees, but Beth hears Jeb’s protests of his innocence and refuses to deliver her father to the monster – as Jack axes roots that are beginning to encircle them Jan attacks Beth who’s clinging to Jeb to protect him. As Jan becomes more violent trying to detach pregnant Beth from their father, a root grabs Jan by the ankle, abruptly pulls her off Beth with great force and lifts her though the air as it suddenly pulls her outside – lethally smashing Jan against the walls as her limp body scrapes through the window like a rag doll
On the way, Jan’s flailing limbs knock over oil lamps which starts a fire inside. Beth and Jack immediately start to try and put out the fire – Jack sees that the roots are recoiling from the fire – and just as Beth almost has the fire under control, Jack seizes the opportunity of Beth’s distraction, picks up Jeb and carries him outside. Firefighting Beth roars in protest – but it turns into a contraction and she falls to her knees – now the fire instantly regains its strength …
EXT – FARMHOUSE – NIGHT
… Leah arrives back at farmhouse as Jeb is carrying her father outside – anticipating resistance to his mission, Jack shouts that Jeb poisoned her mother and Jeb’s the one she wants (Jeb says “No!”)… and then Jack becomes aware that Leah is standing where Jack wants to throw Jeb – amongst the moiling roots swirling beyond the slab – LEAH IS UNHARMED – How can this be? Jack knows what these roots can and will do! Has she been possessed by the mother? Leah works out that Jack intends her father’s fate to be the same as Michael’s and decides to stop him – she tells him to stand still, walks towards him onto the slab, and demands Jack give her Jeb – terrified Jack is frozen to the spot – as Leah approaches from his front, he doesn’t see the creeper roots are snaking over the concrete behind him – Jack lets Leah (the monster?) take Jeb just as a creeper root tugs him forcibly away – more roots grab, bend him backwards and snap his spine before dragging him into the creeper growing up the house where he’s dismembered into pieces which are dragged in different directions up the walls, through the leaves.
Leah hears Beth scream as something crashes inside the burning farmhouse: she lays Jeb down on the concrete slab and rushes into the building to save her sister.
INT – FARMHOUSE – NIGHT
It’s ablaze and Beth is screaming with contractions, but she’s not being attacked by the roots, Leah sees that the roots seem to be trying to put the fire out, sap hissing as they’re burned in the attempt – she tries to help labouring Beth out of the fire, but structural timbers collapse onto Beth’s legs – she is trapped – in spite of the efforts of the roots the fire is out of control – Leah cannot move Beth and both of them are struggling to breathe… Beth knows how this is going to end – she helps Leah make the decision: “Save my baby!” Leah grabs a knife, c-sections the baby out of her dying sister and manages to get out of the blazing house alive with the dripping new-born…
EXT – FARMHOUSE – NIGHT
… Leah goes to Jeb who’s barely alive, lying on the concrete slab that is still some kind of a safety raft in the maelstrom. Dying Jeb whispers to Leah: he didn’t poison their mother – but after Leah was born he had to start using chemicals on the farm, to make ends meet, but her mother thought he was poisoning their farm with the chemicals – the farm that they’d made together to nourish their children (Jeb looks at the new born) all children – Jeb wouldn’t listen to her and in despair she killed herself with the same poison he was using on the land. Jeb asks Leah to forgive him. Leah forgives, just as a root finally cracks the concrete, reaches around Jeb’s neck and decapitates him.
The baby’s hungry, but devastated Leah picks up a piece of burning wood from the collapsing house…
EXT – FARM CHEMICAL STORE – NIGHT
Leah kicks over a drum and throws her burning wood into the store – as she walks away with the baby the store explodes into flames…
EXT – GNARLY TREE – NIGHT
Even from a distance the flickering flames cast their light on the mother’s skeleton hanging in the roots of the decaying tree as Leah strides away from the burning farmhouse with the baby and the dog. The dog barks as if possessed as it tries to block Leah’s path to her mother, but she will not be stopped – furious, Leah defiantly holds the baby up to her mother’s skull and dares to shout “Enough!” – the dog stops barking but her mother’s unblinking eye sockets meet Leah’s penetrating gaze as the baby cries and cries…
How will this child be fed?
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Andre’s Horror Outline Version 1.
What I learned is…this process was not easy for me. I did not understand it, Got lost in the “instructions” and started something else elsewhere. I’m going to upload the outline from the WIM outline.
EXT. ASIA – DAY
One-million years ago. ASIA is the homeland of the human race. It is on a southern peninsula of this continent that the progenitors of humanity, Andon and Fonta are born; in the highlands of what is now Afghanistan.INT – TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC – DAY
Present Day…Inside an urban building eerily similar to the white house, vacuum suction sounds of another abortion take place. Within the womb, the fetus attempts to dodge the medical instruments honing in on killing it. Imagine if fetus’ had Second Amendment Rights. There is no escape! Snip! Cut! Suction! Wash, rinse and repeat. Another successful “miscarriage”, albeit intentional aborting of human life.
During this particular abortion, performed by our Antagonist Human Asclepius, perfectly timed with an electrical storm, the Particle Accelerator is engaged, a séance for black lives matter-ing is held, and utter chaos and confusion lines the streets, neighborhoods, and cities.
100,000 Bolts of Lightning strike! The ENTIRE STAFF (from 100 to 1000), of A WORLDRULER, The Fallen Planetary Prince, incorporate onto the planet. now corporeal.
With the raising of the Lucifer flag, sentient anti-matter is born as the Anti-Christ! The imperfection of humanity is not perfected.INT – MEDICAL CLINIC – DAY
As a form of retaliation from his former employer, an unnamed government sponsored entity with immense authoritative powers and no accountability nor oversite, our main Protagonist is essentially fired and forced to undergo psychological treatment in order to receive pension.
But of course, the treatment already includes his false diagnosis, because what he experienced is real, and that is part of the coverup and veil of power they have over society.
Indigo, our main protagonist has to make life adjustments by getting a part time job as security at the abortion clinic, while also attempting to become a screenwriter, all while attending out patient mental health to deal with his “stuff”.
It is revealed during one of the sessions, by a depth psychologist, a traumatic experience going back to a vehicle accident. But that memory is refuted and a focus on his mental instability is prioritized. Textbook ‘mental disorder not otherwise specified condition’ is the label- standard western medical bullshit speak for fuck this guy.
The institutionalized educated “doctor”, we learn is under the supervision of our Antagonist Ashkenazi, has already been given our protagonist’s diagnosis before he walked through the clinic doors. SCOP-Standard corrupt operating procedures. This ultimately adds to levels of distrust our protagonist embodies.
During a particularly electrical thunder-stormy day, our Protagonist’s girlfriend unbeknownst to him, undergoes an abortion. Can a man be affected when his unborn child is fighting for its life during an abortion? In our biased matriarchal society, does it matter?
Conducted within a plan by the employer-sponsored doctor when he signed up many years prior, this aborted fetus is used as part of the ingredient in the serum gestated with anti-matter in creating the Anti-Christ. Our Protagonist walked into a trap designed hundreds of thousands of years ago, maybe longer. The next question to ponder is, was his accident and accident?INT – ASHKENAZIS MEDIA STUDIO – NIGHT
Triggering the N_gg_rs. The negative narrative.
• “These n_gg_rs get an entire month and a day called Juneteenth”.
• All coalesced within the black lives movement and the failure of the black community to keep the family unit tight and together.
• The failure of black men, the sorry ass n_gg_, who abandon their children and the women they impregnate.
• And the irresponsibility of black women in their choice in males, and their empathetic-less attitudes towards those they dislike.
• The failure of the community in forgetting who they are, the spiritual embodiment they are held to responsibleness and the enslavers of the peoples-which take us to Africa and those who trapped and enslaved their own to be sold and purchased to a foreign man. Slave ports exist in Africa because slavery was a business that Africa capitalized off of.INT – CITY OF DALAMATIA-PERSIAN GULF – NIGHT
And I beheld Satan fall as Lightning from Heaven. He had come with Lucifer to Earth (Urantia) for the last crucial struggle.
-UrantiaBook53:8:4(609.7
Lucifer and Satan were last on our world together during the time of their combined assault upon the Son of Man
The One Hundred are superhuman, infused with the life plasma of Adam, from Adam&Eve; The 100- 50 males and 50 females, look human, but superhuman, corporeal life flesh infused with the Adamic life plasma. They are organized for service in ten (10) Autonomous Councils of ten (10) members each. When two or more of these ten councils meet in joint session, such liaison gatherings are presided over by Daligastia, the Devil’s Assistant.
Each one of the chosen One-hundred (now One-Thousand) is from a different planet, and none are from Earth.
The One Hundred are personally immortal, or undying. The re-created bodies of this group are fully satisfied by a non-flesh diet. This was one of the considerations which determined their residence in a warm region abounding in fruits and nuts.
The practice of subsisting on a non-flesh diet dates from the times of the Caligastia One-Hundred, for this custom spread near and far to affect the eating habits of many surrounding tribes, groups of origin in the once exclusively meat-eating evolutionary races.After 500,000 years of freewill, humanity has proven its willful disdain for life.
From wars, murders, and intentional abortion (not induced for medical purposes to save the life of the mother, but due to irresponsible careless “My body-My choice”; and aggrandized political slogans such as “abortion is between a woman, her doctor, and the government (hush-hush, but not the father of the fetus/baby)”. The freewill of wo-mankind has been under observation, since its creation.
The Planetary Prince of Earth goes into darkness at the time of the Lucifer rebellion, thus precipitating the long confusion of the planet. The Planet is a Character in this story.
Since his arrival, the Planetary Prince earthly civilization progresses in a fairly normal manner for almost 300,000 years.
Sound-EFX… Fibonacci frequency. Annoying buzzing of flies and mosquitoes, used to induce insanity and sleep lethargy.
Both Lucifer and his assistant, The Devil “Caligastia” have been patiently instructed and lovingly warned, respecting their critical tendencies and the subtle development of their pride of self and its associated exaggeration of the feeling of self-importance. But all of these attempts to help have been misconstrued as unwarranted criticism and as unjustified interference with personal liberties.
Lucifer flag being raised. The Lucifer emblem is a banner of white with one red circle, in the center of which a black solid circle appears
DNA alteration from [ATCG 10 5 6 5] to [ATCCCG 10 5 6 6 6 5].
In looking back over the long career of Caligastia, we find only one outstanding feature of his conduct that might have challenged attention; he was ultra-individualistic. He was inclined to take sides with almost every party of protest, and he was usually sympathetic with those who gave mile expression to implied criticism. In the course of this inspection, Satan informs Caligastia of Lucifer’s then proposed, “Declaration of Liberty,” and as we now know, the Prince agrees to betray the planet upon the announcement of the rebellion.Horror Situations – Denial, Solve It, Escape, Fight:
Childrens songs played backwards. Yup, f_cking with your childhood.
Unsuspecting father’s child is aborted, and the unrealized soul torments his experiences. He unknowingly lives with a loss, not knowing why.
Why did she do it? Because she wasn’t 100% certain the child was his.The Case of Gabriel vs. Lucifer: The Charges…
Charge 1
Personality Pride.Charge 2:
Default of Divine Plan resulting in Miscarriage of Adam and Eve, miscarriage of divine plan.Charge 3:
Devil made me do it. The doctrine of a personal devil on Earth, though it had some foundation in the planetary presence of the traitorous and iniquitous Caligastia, was nevertheless wholly fictitious in its teachings that such a devil could influence the normal human mind against its free and natural choosing.Charge 4:
Contempt for Truth.Charge 5:
Default / Violation of Trust.Charge 6:
Accelerate the process of social evolution, bypassing the divine plan.Charge 7:
Individual Liberty…Charge 8:
Ultra-individualistic. In looking back over the long career of Caligastia, we find only one outstanding feature of his conduct that might have challenged attention, he was ultra-individualistic.Charge 9:
Planetary civilization progressed in a fairly normal manner for almost 300,000 years.Charge 10
No one ever suggested rebellion to Lucifer. The idea of self-assertion in opposition to the will of Michael and to the plans of the Universal Father, as they are represented in Michael, had its origin in his own mind.Charge 11
In the course of this inspection, Satan informed Caligastia of Lucifer’s then proposed, “Declaration of Liberty,” and as we now know, the Prince agreed to betray the planet upon the announcement of the rebellion.Charge 12
Through evil and error, he (LUCIFER) embraced sin.The charges against Lucifer include the Declaration of Liberty, in his call to the “liberty-loving, free-thinking, and forward-looking intelligences of the misruled and maladministered worlds of Satania.
In the course of this inspection, Satan informs Caligastia, The Devil, of Lucifer’s then proposed “Declaration of Liberty,” and as we now know, the Prince agrees to betray the planet upon the announcement of the rebellion.
Gabriel is so profoundly impressed with the certainty of the impending outbreak that he goes direct to confer with the Constellation Fathers regarding the measures to be employed in case of open rebellion. (Keep in mind, he was impressed, profoundly; not necessarily against.)Lucifer Declaration of Liberty
1) The reality of the Universal Father.
Lucifer charges that the Universal Father does not really exist. That physical gravity and space-energy are inherent in the universe, and that the Father is a myth invented by the Paradise Sons, to enable them to maintain the rule of the universes, in the Father’s name.He denies that personality is a gift of the Universal Father. He even intimates that the finaliters are in collusion with the Paradise Sons to foist fraud upon all creation since they never brought back a very clear-cut idea of the Father’s actual personality as it is discernible on Paradise. He trades on reverence as ignorance.
The charge is sweeping, terrible, and blasphemous. It is this veiled attack upon the finaliters that no doubt influences the ascendant citizens then on Jerusem to stand firm and remain steadfast in resistance to all the rebel’s proposals.
50:1.3 (572.5) Being quite alone as representatives of divinity on the
individual planets, these Sons are tested severely, and Nebadon has suffered
the misfortune of several rebellions. (Abandonment of God, Lucifer’s defense).In the creation of the System Sovereigns and the Planetary Princes there occurs the personalization of a concept that has been getting farther and farther away from the Universal Father and the Eternal Son, and there is an increasing danger of losing the sense of proportion as to one’s self-importance and a greater likelihood of failure to keep a proper grasp of the values and relationships of the numerous orders of divine beings and their gradations of authority.
THAT THE FATHER IS NOT PERSONALLY PRESENT IN THE LOCAL UNIVERSE ALSO IMPOSES A CERTAIN TEST OF FAITH AND LOYALTY ON ALL THESE SONS.
2) The universe government of the Creator Son-Michael.
Lucifer contends that the local systems should be autonomous.
He protests against the right of Michael, the Creator Son, to assume sovereignty of Nebadon in the name of a hypothetical Paradise Father and require all personalities to acknowledge allegiance to this unseen Father. [this unseen father is cause used against our Hero, due to the abandonment of his father at birth.]
He asserted that the whole plan of worship was a clever scheme to aggrandize the Paradise Sons.Lucifer IS willing to acknowledge Michael as his Creator-father, but not as his God and rightful ruler.
He exhorts his followers to believe that none of these rulers could do aught to interfere with the operation of complete home rule if men and angels only had the courage to assert themselves and boldly claim their rights.
He contends that the executioners of the Ancients of Days be debarred from functioning in the local systems if the native beings would only assert their independence.
He maintains that immortality is inherent in the system personalities, that resurrection is natural and automatic, and that all beings will live eternally except for the arbitrary and unjust acts of the executioners of the Ancients of Days.
3) The attack upon the universal plan of ascendant mortal training.
Lucifer maintains that far too much time and energy is expended upon the scheme of so thoroughly training ascending mortals in the principles of universe administration, principles which he alleged were unethical and unsound.He protests against the agelong program for preparing the mortals of space for some unknown destiny and pointed to the presence of the finaliter corps on Jerusem as proof that these mortals have spent ages of preparation for some destiny of pure fiction.
With derision he points out that the finaliters have encountered a destiny no more glorious than to be returned to humble spheres similar to those of their origin.
He intimates that they have been debauched by overmuch discipline and prolonged training, and that they are in reality traitors to their mortal fellows since they are now co-operating with the scheme of enslaving all creation to the fictions of a mythical eternal destiny for ascending mortals.
He advocates that ascenders should enjoy the liberty of individual self-determination. [In the USA, symbolized through the Statute of Liberty]
He challenges and condemns the entire plan of mortal ascension as sponsored by the Paradise Sons of God and supported by the Infinite Spirit.And it was with such a Declaration of Liberty that Lucifer launched his orgy of darkness and death.
INT – TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC – DAY
Is there a soul connection with men and their life-force seed (sperm)? Our Male Protagonist does not know why he feels discomfort, because she never tells him, yet the affects are real to/him. Because his aborted child was tormented during the abortion. Why does a part of him feel torment?Is the monster the woman aborting his child, to cover up her infidelity?
Is the monster the abortion doctor and politician with the slogan, “abortion is between a woman, her doctor, and the government (hush-hush, but not the father)”?
Is the monster Lucifer? Satan? The Devil? Together known as the Dragon?
Is God the monster, for creating Creation?EXT – ATLANTIS EYE OF THE SAHARA – DAY
Technology of particle accelerator used to harness dark energy for the purpose of merging with aborted fetus, while the world chants Black Lives Matter? Black lives referring to black souls, not people. The energy of destruction riots, theft, social chaos; to bring forth the Anti-Christ.INT – COURTHOUSE – DAY
Lucifer’s folly was the attempt to do the non-doable, to short-circuit time in an experiential universe. Lucifer’s crime was the attempted creative disenfranchisement of every personality in the system of Satania, the unrecognized abridgment of the creature’s personal participation—freewill participation—in the long evolutionary struggle to attain the status of light and life both individually and collectively.
In so doing, this onetime Sovereign of our system, set the temporal purpose of his own will directly thwarting the eternal purpose of God’s will as it is revealed in the bestowal of free will upon all personal creatures.
The Lucifer rebellion thus threatened the maximum possible infringement of the freewill choice of the ascenders and servers of the system of Satania—a threat forevermore to deprive every one of these beings of the thrilling experience of contributing something personal and unique to the slowly erecting monument to experiential wisdom which will sometime exist as the perfected system of Satania.
You’re going to do what?-
I think this is more of a Thriller than a Horror.
This assignment was not easy, complicated it was. Too many mental manipulations required.
Here is my outline, waaaay after due date.High Concept: Rosemary’s Baby and The Omen meets The Devil’s Advocate.
Logline: What would power do to remain in power? Align Itself with Evil!
Major Hook: Utilizing particle acceleration technology to merge Anti-Matter with the aborted fetus’ within a barren woman- to create the Anti-Christ.
After 500,000 years of freewill experimentation, humanity is judged on its collective actions. With Lucifer on trial, Gabriel vs. Lucifer, and annihilation from existence as his potential judgment, Lucifer conducts his Final Act- to perfect the imperfection of his earthly assignment- Humanity.
As evidence, using human freewill, fatherhood abandonment, abortions as plan-b birth control, scientific-experiments utilizing aborted fetuses as ingredients, and constant forever-wars, Lucifer proves humanity is sinfully-evil.
Betrayal of Trust and the consequences of the Lucifer Rebellion results in the miscarriage of humanity.
The purpose, to take His (or Her) seat of the all-powerful position of President of the US.
FADE IN FROM BLACK
A cautionary tale about freewill and fatherhood abandonment.CAPTION: Freewill :(defined)
CAPTION: Abandonment :
DISSOLVE TO“Haters of God, … inventors of evil things” – Romans 1:30.
DISSOLVE/SOFT FADE TO“What would One in power do, to remain in power? Align Itself with Evil.” -Anonymous.
DISSOLVE/SOFT FADE TOIf freewill Man is endowed with the powers of creativity in the inner man, then must we recognize that freewill creativity embraces the potential of freewill destructivity?
And when creativity is turned to destructivity, you are face to face with the devastation of both Evil and Sin—oppression, war, and destruction.Evil is a partiality of creativity which tends toward disintegration and eventual destruction.
All conflict is evil in that it inhibits the creative function of the inner life—it is a species of civil war in the personality, -Urantia Book 111:4.11 (1220.10).
FADE OUT
FADE INOPENING SHOT-
EXT. SPACE-SYSTEM SATANIA – SPACE
As a rule, the PLANETAY PRINCE appears on a planet about the time of freewill development.“The loyal Planetary Princes of the inhabited worlds are permanently attached to the planets of their original assignment.” -Urantia Book.
SATANIA itself is an unfinished coordinate SPACE-SYSTEM, containing 619 inhabited worlds. Such planets are numbered serially in accordance with their registration as inhabited worlds; as worlds inhabited by free-will creatures.
Thus was Our planet, UrantiaEarth, given the number 606 of Space-System Satania, meaning the 606th world in this local system on which the long evolutionary life process has culminated into the appearance of HUMAN BEINGS.
There are thirty-six (36) uninhabited planets nearing the life-endowment stage, and several are now being made ready for the Life Carriers.
There are nearly two-hundred (200) spheres which are evolving so as to be ready for life implantation within the next few million years.
DISSOLVE TO.
EXT. THE PERSIAN GULF -DAY
Earth’s Planetary Prince rebels on planet earth.
Scene Arc: 500,000 years ago, when Earth’s Planetary Prince (The Devil) arrives, human freewill- the ability to choose the path of eternal survival, appears developed in the mind of primitive man, who in number are almost one half billion, scattered over Europe, Asia and Africa. 50,000-100,000 years later, the Lucifer Rebellion.
The CALIGASTIA 100 (The DEVIL and 100 of his Staff- 50 MALE and 50 FEMALE), come to UrantiaEarth with the intention to uplift humanity from its retarded and defective strains, via evolution, not revolution.
A Planetary Prince may also have as Assistants one or more of the third order of his own group of sonship and sometimes, on certain worlds, one of his own order, a SECONDARY LANONANDEK ASSOCIATE.
The Planetary Staff includes a large number of ANGELIC COOPERATORS and a host of other CELESTIAL BEINGS, assigned to advance the interests and promote the welfare of the human races.
Fully satisfied by a non-flesh diet, the re-created bodies of The CALIGASTIA 100 (THE ONE-HUNDRED), fifty males and fifty females; each one chosen from a different planet, seek to uplift humanity from its retarded strains, but not forcibly, but evolutionary. It’s complicated, try to follow along.
NARRATOR VOICE
“It is very difficult to point out the exact cause or causes which finally culminated in the Lucifer rebellion.
Very little is heard of Lucifer on Urantia owing to the fact that he assigned his first lieutenant, Satan, to advocate his cause on our planet.
UNKNOWN
“And no marvel, for Satan himself is a brilliant creature of light.”
When Satan arrives on this planet, his appearance in no way resembles our caricatures of his nefarious majesty. He was, and still is, a Lanonandek Son of great brilliance.NARRATOR VOICE
We are certain of only one thing, and that is: Whatever these first beginnings were, they had their origin in Lucifer’s mind.
CALIGASTIA, THE DEVIL with a maximum of intelligence and a vast experience in universe affairs, goes astray and embraces sin.
NARRATOR VOICE
There must have been a pride of self that nourished itself to the point of self-deception, so that Lucifer for a time really persuades himself that his contemplation of rebellion is actually for the good of the system, if not of the universe.
Under normal conditions, the first work of a Planetary ADAM and EVE would be the co-ordination and blending of the races, but on UrantiaEarth, such a project seems just about hopeless, for the races, while biologically fit, were never purged of its retarded and defective strains.
NARRATOR VOICE
By the time his plans develop to the point of disillusionment, no doubt, he has gone too far for his original and mischief-making pride to permit him to stop.A Planetary Prince is not visible to mortal beings; it is a test of faith to believe the representations of the semi-material beings of his staff. Do you see wind? Or do you see the affects of wind?
In the course of this inspection, Satan informs Caligastia, The Devil, of Lucifer’s then proposed “Declaration of Liberty.”
NARRATOR VOICE
And as we now know, the Prince agrees to betray the planet upon the announcement of the rebellion.
At some point in this experience he (Lucifer) becomes insincere, and evil evolves into deliberate and willful sin. That this happened is proven by the subsequent conduct of his brilliant executive.
He is long offered opportunity for repentance, but only some of his subordinates ever accepted the proffered mercy.
CREATOR SON,
(voicing his contempt)
“You are like your leader, Lucifer, and you have sinfully perpetuated his iniquity. He was a falsifier from the beginning of his self-exaltation because he abode not in the truth.”
The loyal universe personalities look with peculiar disdain upon Prince Caligastia because of this premeditated Betrayal of Trust.
CREATOR SON,
(voicing his contempt)
In all administrative work of a local universe, no high trust is deemed more sacred than that reposed in a Planetary Prince, who assumes responsibility for the welfare and guidance of the evolving mortals on a newly inhabited world.And of all forms of evil, none are more destructive of personality status than betrayal of trust and disloyalty to one’s confiding friends.
In committing this deliberate sin, Caligastia so completely distorts his personality, that his mind has never since been able to fully regain it equilibrium.
Our world still continues to pursue an irregular and checkered career as a result of the double tragedy of a rebellious PLANETARY PRINCE (The Devil) and a defaulting Material Son (Adam).Beginning: (Big Picture, More Interesting Setting)
500,000 years ago, when Earth’s Planetary Prince -The Devil arrives, human freewill- the ability to choose the path of eternal survival appears developed in the mind of primitive man. As a rule, the Planetary Prince appears on a planet about the time of freewill development.
Fully satisfied by a non-flesh diet, the re-created bodies of The CALIGASTIA 100 (THE ONE-HUNDRED), fifty males and fifty females; each one chosen from a different planet, seek to uplift humanity from its retarded strains, but not forcibly, but evolutionary. It’s complicated, try to follow along.
The Planetary Staff includes a large number of ANGELIC COOPERATORS and a host of other CELESTIAL BEINGS, assigned to advance the interests and promote the welfare of the human races.Middle: (Major Twist)
The 100, newly arrived citizens of the system capital, assembled from widely separated places by coordinated THOUGHT ADJUSTER, are held in sleep of SERAPHIC TRANSPORT at the direction of SERAPHIC GUIDANCE.
Our world still continues to pursue an irregular and checkered career as a result of the double tragedy of a rebellious Planetary Prince and a defaulting Material Son.
The Planetary Princes organize their specialized groups of assistants from among their corps of planetary aids. They usually surround themselves with a supreme council of twelve, but this is variously chosen and diversely constituted on the different worlds. The Majestic Twelve?
A Planetary Prince may also have as Assistants one or more of the third order of his own group of sonship and sometimes, on certain worlds, one of his own order, a SECONDARY LANONANDEK ASSOCIATE.
The entire Staff of a world ruler consists of personalities of the Infinite Spirit and certain types of higher Evolved Beings and Ascending Mortals from other worlds. Such a Staff averages about one thousand, and as the planet progresses, this Corps of Helpers may be increased up to one-hundred thousand or more (100,000+).
The isolation of UrantiaEarth renders it impossible to undertake the presentation of many details of the life and environment of Our Satania neighbors. In these presentations we are limited by the planetary quarantine and by the system isolation.
The development of civilization on UrantiaEarth has not differed so greatly from that of other worlds which have sustained the misfortune of spiritual isolation. But when compared with the loyal worlds of the universe, Our planet seems most confused and greatly retarded in all phases of intellectual progress and spiritual attainment.
Because of Our planetary misfortunes, We are prevented from understanding very much about the culture of normal worlds. But We should not envisage the evolutionary worlds, even the most ideal, as spheres whereon life is a flowery bed of ease. The initial life of the mortal races is always attended by struggle. Both Effort and Decision are an essential part of the acquirement of survival values.
Culture presupposes quality of mind; culture cannot be enhanced unless mind is elevated. Superior intellect will seek a noble culture and find some way to attain such a goal. Inferior minds will spurn the highest culture even when presented to them ready-made.
We should not forget that for 200,000 years, all the worlds of Satania have rested under the spiritual ban of Norlatiadek, in consequence of the Lucifer rebellion. And it will require age upon age to retrieve the resultant handicaps of sin and secession.
Our world still continues to pursue an irregular and checkered career as a result of the double tragedy of a rebellious Planetary Prince and a defaulting Material Son (Adam). Even the bestowal of Jesus Christ Michael on UrantiaEarth did not immediately set aside the temporal consequences of these serious blunders in the earlier administration of the world.
The signal for a System Sovereign to act in the matter of assigning a ruler to a given planet, is the reception of a request from the Life Carriers, for the dispatch of an administrative head to function on the planet whereon they have established life and developed intelligent evolutionary beings.Ending: (Intrigue)
The 100 CORPOREAL STAFF, divided equally as to gender (50 male, 50 female) and in accordance with their previous mortal status, are nonetheless- superhuman.
The entire transaction of re-personalization, from the time of the arrival of the seraphic transports bearing the One Hundred Jerusem volunteers until they become conscious, threefold beings of the realm, consume exactly ten days.
These transactions, together with the literal creation of special bodies for the Caligastia One-Hundred, give origin to numerous legends.
The prince’s corporeal staff early organize the planetary schools of training and culture, wherein the cream of the evolutionary races are instructed and then sent forth to teach these better ways to their people.
Although the remote tribes continue in hunting and food foraging, the students and teachers in the Prince’s schools are all agriculturists and horticulturists.
Their time is about equally divided between the following pursuits:
1. Physical labor. Cultivation of the soil, associated with home building and embellishment.
2. Social activities. Play performances and cultural social groupings.
3. Educational application. Individual instruction in connection with family-group teaching, supplemented by specialized class training.
4. Vocational training. Schools of marriage and homemaking, the schools of art and craft training, and the classes for the training of teachers—secular, cultural, and religious.
5. Spiritual culture. The teacher brotherhood, the enlightenment of childhood and youth groups, and the training of adopted native children as missionaries to their people.
Fully satisfied by a non-flesh diet, the considerations which determines their residence in a warm region abounding in fruits and nuts the Persian Gulf. The one great task of those ages was to transform man from a hunter to a herder, with the hope that later on he would evolve into a peace-loving, home-abiding farmer.
Each person of this group is capable of becoming co-parental to some new order of physical being, carefully instructed to resort to parenthood only under certain conditions.
It is customary for the corporeal staff of a Planetary Prince to procreate their successors sometime prior to retiring from special planetary service. Usually this is at, or shortly after, the time of the arrival of the Planetary Adam and Eve; in respect to earth, the failed mission via default story of Adam and Eve.
From such a world center of culture and achievement, there gradually radiates to all peoples, an uplifting and civilizing influence, which slowly and certainly transforms the evolutionary races.
Meantime, the educated and spiritualized children of the surrounding peoples who have been adopted and trained in the prince’s schools, return to their native groups, and to the best of their ability, are there establishing new and potent centers of learning and culture which they carry on according to the plan of the prince’s schools; (for purposes of our movie) Washington DC and Manhattan NY being two of those centers of learning and culture.
These plans for planetary progress and cultural advancement are well under way, proceeding most satisfactorily, when the whole enterprise is brought to a rather sudden and most in-glorious end! by Caligastia’s adherence to the Lucifer rebellion.
It is one of the most profoundly shocking episodes of this rebellion to learn of the callous perfidy of Caligastia, who, in deliberation and with malice aforethought, systematically perverts the instruction, and poisons the teaching provided in all the earthly planetary schools in operation at that time.
The wreck of these schools is speedy and complete.
Our world still continues to pursue an irregular and checkered career as a result of the double tragedy of a rebellious PLANETARY PRINCE (The Devil) and a defaulting Material Son (Adam).
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TRANSITION.
INT. GARDEN OF EDEN -DAY
Disruption of the Teaching Regime.
Scene Arc:
Teaching Regime for the Prince’s City of Dalamatia. The Schools of the Planetary Prince are primarily concerned with philosophy, religion, morals, and the higher intellectual and artistic achievements.
Sin on Earth does very little to delay biologic evolution, but it does operate to deprive the mortal races of the full benefit of the Adamic inheritance. Disruption of the teaching regime results in human kinds loss of freewill of choice.
The Melchizedek who lived on Urantia during the time of Abraham was locally known as the Prince of Salem, because he presided over a small colony of truth seekers residing at a place called Salem. He volunteers to incarnate in the likeness of mortal flesh and does so with the approval of the Melchizedek receivers of the planet, who fear that the light of life will become extinguished during that period of increasing spiritual darkness.
Beginning: (Interesting Setting, Suspense, Intrigue)
Teaching Regime for the Prince’s City of Dalamatia. HAP presents the early races with a moral law.
The Schools of the Planetary Prince are primarily concerned with philosophy, religion, morals, and the higher intellectual and artistic achievements.
The Garden Schools of Adam and Eve are usually devoted to practical Arts, fundamental intellectual training, Social Culture, Economic Development, Trade Relations, Physical Efficiency, and Civil Government.
The Planetary Prince and his staff foster the spiritual and philosophic domains of activity. Adam and Eve pay particular attention to the physical, scientific, and economic status of the realm. Both groups equally devote their energies to the promotion of the Arts, Social Relations, and Intellectual Achievements.Middle: (Mystery, Major Twist, Uncomfortable Moment)
Sin on Earth does very little to delay biologic evolution, but it does operate to deprive the mortal races of the full benefit of the Adamic inheritance.
Disruption of the teaching regime results in human kinds loss of freewill of choice.
Teaching Regime for the Prince’s City of Dalamatia…
HAP presents the early races with a moral law. This code is known as “The Father’s Way” and consists of the following seven commands:
1. You shall not fear nor serve any God but the Father of all.
2. You shall not disobey the Father’s Son, the world’s ruler, nor show disrespect to his superhuman associates.
3. You shall not speak a lie when called before the judges of the people.
4. You shall not kill men, women, nor children.
5. You shall not steal your neighbor’s goods or cattle.
6. You shall not touch your friend’s wife.
7. You shall not show disrespect to your parents or to the elders of the tribe.
This is the law of Dalamatia for almost three-hundred thousand years.
This expanding revelation of Deity goes on for more than (300,000) three-hundred thousand years, until, suddenly,
by planetary secession AND the Disruption of the Teaching Regime, it TERMINATES!
And many of the stones on which this law is inscribed, now lie beneath the waters off the shores of Mesopotamia and Persia.Ending: (External Dilemma, Uncomfortable Moment, Internal
Dilemma, Suspense)
The MELCHIZEDEKS are well-nigh perfect in wisdom, but they are not infallible in judgment. When detached and alone on planetary missions, they have sometimes erred in “minor” matters.
The Melchizedek who lived on Urantia during the time of Abraham was locally known as the Prince of Salem, because he presided over a small colony of truth seekers residing at a place called Salem. He volunteers to incarnate in the likeness of mortal flesh and does so with the approval of the Melchizedek receivers of the planet, who fear that the light of life will become extinguished during that period of increasing spiritual darkness.
TRANSITION.
EXT. MANHATTAN -DAY
Descending, not falling.
Scene Arc: MODERN DAY.
With a Shattering THUNDEROUS ROAR appears to be LIGHTNING descending (not falling) from the sky; LUCIFER, SATAN, and The DEVIL descend (landing, not falling) easily onto the Court Plaza, as if descension is nothing new to them. They make it look easy.
Among The One-Hundred, are Main characters LUCIFER, THE DEVIL (the true planetary Prince, to be revealed),and SATAN. And supporting characters ABADDON and BEELZEBUB.
Then, SILENCE and CALMNESS.
GABRIEL is occupied more with universe policies, while Melchizedek is occupied with practical procedures.
Gabriel and the Father Melchizedek are never away from Salvington at the same time, for in Gabriel’s absence, the Father Melchizedek functions as the chief executive of Nebadon. As in the case of Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
Beginning: (Interesting Setting)
Outside, The WIND stirs.
BEAT.
People, everyone and everything scurry for cover.
BEAT.
With a Shattering THUNDEROUS ROAR appears to be LIGHTNING descending (not falling) from the sky; LUCIFER, SATAN, and The DEVIL descend (landing, not falling) easily onto the Court Plaza, as if descension is nothing new to them. They make it look easy.
BEAT.
In a BODY and Sworn in publicly as the Officers of the Administration of the New Head of “the liberated worlds and systems”, THE CALIGASTIA ONE-HUNDRED, dressed immaculately, old money of course, think the Devil wears Prada and Calvin Klein, tailored rare textile material, exit well-maintained modern and vintage vehicles!
BEAT.
Middle: (More Interesting Setting)
Among The One-Hundred, are Main characters LUCIFER, THE DEVIL (the true planetary Prince, to be revealed),and SATAN. And supporting characters ABADDON and BEELZEBUB.
ABADDON is the Chief of the Staff of Caligastia. He follows his master into rebellion and has ever since acted as chief executive of the Urantia rebels.
BEELZEBUB is the leader of the disloyal midway creatures who allied themselves with the forces of the traitorous Caligastia. It must be remembered that Caligastia is still the titular Planetary Prince of Urantia, a misguided but nevertheless High Son of the local universe.With all eyes upon them, they ALL, the entire ADMINISTRATIVE CABINET of Lucifer, ENTERS the Court House for the trial of Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
Ending: (More Interesting Setting)
Then, SILENCE and CALMNESS.
GABRIEL is occupied more with universe policies, while Melchizedek is occupied with practical procedures. Gabriel presides over the regularly constituted tribunals and councils of Nebadon, Melchizedek over the special, extraordinary, and emergency commissions and advisory bodies.
Gabriel and the Father Melchizedek are never away from Salvington at the same time, for in Gabriel’s absence, the Father Melchizedek functions as the chief executive of Nebadon. As in the case of Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
TRANSITION.
EXT. THE SEA OF GLASS -DAY
The orgy of darkness and death.
Scene Arc: (200,000) Two-Hundred thousand Years Ago, on the last day of the year, at the Sea of Glass at the annual conclave of Satania, the Lucifer Manifesto is issued.
Whatever the early origins of trouble in the hearts of Lucifer and Satan, the final outbreak takes form as the Lucifer Declaration of Liberty.
The Lucifer flag is raised. And it is with such a Declaration of Liberty, that Lucifer launches his orgy of darkness and death!Beginning: (Betrayal, Uncomfortable Moment, Major Twist, Anticipation)
Two-Hundred Thousand Years Ago, on the last day of the year, at the Sea of Glass at the annual conclave of Satania, the Lucifer Manifesto is issued.Middle: (Betrayal, Intrigue, Surprise, Major Twist)
Whatever the early origins of trouble in the hearts of Lucifer and Satan, the final outbreak takes form as the Lucifer Declaration of Liberty. Advocating that ascenders should enjoy the liberty of individual self-determination, He protests against the agelong program for preparing the mortals of Space for some unknown destiny, and points to the presence of the finaliter corps on Jerusem as proof that these mortals have spent ages of preparation for some destiny of pure-fiction.1. The reality of the Universal Father.
Lucifer charges that…
LUCIFER
(charging)
The Universal Father does not really exist.
Physical gravity and space-energy are inherent in the universe.
And, the Father is a myth invented by the Paradise Sons to enable them to maintain the rule of the universes in the Father’s name.
He goes on to deny that personality was a gift of the Universal Father.
LUCIFER
(denying)
Personality is not a gift of the Universal Father.
He concludes by trading on reverence as ignorance.
LUCIFER
(trading on conclusion)
Reverence is ignorance.2. The universe government of the Creator Son—Michael.
Lucifer contends that the local systems should be autonomous.
He protests against the right of Michael, the Creator Son, to assume sovereignty of Nebadon in the name of a hypothetical Paradise Father requiring all personalities to acknowledge allegiance to this unseen Father.
He asserts that the whole plan of worship was a clever scheme to aggrandize the Paradise Sons. He was willing to acknowledge Michael as his Creator father but not as his God and rightful ruler.3. The attack upon the universal plan of ascendant mortal training.
Lucifer maintains that
LUCIFER
Far too much time and energy were expended upon the scheme of so thoroughly training ascending mortals in the principles of universe administration, principles which he alleged were unethical and unsound. He protested against the agelong program for preparing the mortals of space for some unknown destiny and pointed to the presence of the finaliter corps on Jerusem as proof that these mortals had spent ages of preparation for some destiny of pure fiction.Lucifer intimates…
LUCIFER
(Intimating)
that they had been debauched by overmuch discipline and prolonged training, and that they were in reality traitors to their mortal fellows since they were now co-operating with the scheme of enslaving all creation to the fictions of a mythical eternal destiny for ascending mortals.
He advocates that…
LUCIFER
(Advocating)
Ascenders should enjoy the liberty of individual self-determination.
And it was with such a Declaration of Liberty that Lucifer launched his ORGY of darkness AND Death.Ending: (Major Twist, Suspense, Misinterpretation)
The Lucifer flag is raised. The Lucifer emblem is a banner of white with one red circle, in the center of which a black solid circle appears. And it is with such a Declaration of Liberty, that Lucifer launches his orgy of darkness and death!
TRANSITION.
EXT. THE GARDEN OF EDEN -NIGHT
Post rebellion- Abject Spiritual Darkness.
Scene Arc:
Day 2 in the Garden of Eden, and post Luciferin rebellion. No Adam of the planetary service has ever set down on a more difficult world; the obstacles seemed insuperable and the problems beyond creature solution.
Adam and Eve find themselves on a sphere wholly unprepared for the proclamation of the brotherhood of man, a world groping about in abject spiritual darkness and cursed with confusion worse confounded by the miscarriage of the mission of the preceding administration.
Such a project seems just about hopeless, for the races, while biologically fit, had never been purged of their retarded and defective strains.
Beginning: (Uncomfortable Moment, External Dilemma,
Uncertainty, Cliffhanger)
Day 2 in the Garden of Eden. No Adam of the planetary service was ever set down on a more difficult world; the obstacles seemed insuperable and the problems beyond creature solution.Middle: (Mystery, Major Twist, Superior Position, Internal Dilemma)
Adam and Eve find themselves on a sphere wholly unprepared for the proclamation of the brotherhood of man, a world groping about in abject spiritual darkness and cursed with confusion worse confounded by the miscarriage of the mission of the preceding administration.Ending: (Mystery, Major Twist, Superior Position, Internal Dilemma)
Such a project seems just about hopeless, for the races, while biologically fit, had never been purged of their retarded and defective strains.
Mind and morals were at a low level, and instead of beginning the task of effecting religious unity, they must begin all anew the work of converting the inhabitants to the simplest forms of religious belief. Instead of finding one language ready for adoption, they are confronted by the world-wide confusion of hundreds upon hundreds of local dialects.
TRANSITION.
EXT. STATUTE OF LUCIFER-TY -DAY
The Statute of Lucifer, also known as The Statute of Liberty.
Scene Arc: A construction crew sets-up demolition on the chain-link on the foot of Statute of Liberty; binding Lucifer bound.
Demolition is set up, especially along the chain binding the FOOT of the Statute.
Freeing Lucifer from bondage.
Beginning: (More Interesting Setting, Mislead / Reveal, Uncertainty)
Construction at the base of the Statute of “Liberty”, is truly the Statute of Lucifer.Middle: (More Interesting Setting, Mislead / Reveal, Suspense)
Demolition is set up, especially along the chain binding the FOOT of the Statute.Ending: (More Interesting Setting, Mislead / Reveal)
Freeing Lucifer from bondage.
TRANSITION.
EXT. MANHATTAN COURT HOUSE / THE HIGH COURTS LOCATED ON SALVINGTON -DAY.
The trial of Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
Scene Arc:
The court is physically located in Manhattan, with a portal bridging the realms to the high courts in Salvington. The elevators are the portals.
LUCIFER is #37 of his order of angels. And when commissioned by the Melchizedek’s, he is designated as one of the One-Hundred most able and brilliant personalities in more than seven-hundred thousand of his Kind. There are no peculiar or special conditions in the system of Satania which suggest or favor rebellion.
Self-assertion is the battle cry of the Lucifer Rebellion.
The 19 Charges in the Trial of Gabriel vs Lucifer are read.
The Passing of Time enhances the consequential good to be derived from the Lucifer folly; and since the evil to be penalized was quite fully developed within a comparatively short time, it is apparent that the all-wise and farseeing universe rulers would be certain to extend the time in which to reap increasingly beneficial results.Beginning: (Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
The court is physically located in Manhattan, with a portal bridging the realms to the High Courts in Salvington. The elevators are the portals.
The charges against Lucifer and the rebels are read before the court.Middle: (Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
LUCIFER is #37 of his order of Angels. And when commissioned by the Melchizedek’s, he is designated as one of the One-Hundred most able and brilliant personalities in more than seven-hundred thousand of his Kind. There are no peculiar or special conditions in the system of Satania which suggest or favor rebellion.
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Gabriel of Salvington is the Chief Executive of the universe of Nebadon and the arbiter of all executive appeals respecting its administration.
Gabriel is the chief officer of execution for superuniverse mandates relating to nonpersonal affairs in the local universe. Most matters pertaining to mass judgment and dispensational resurrections,…
BEAT.
CALIGASTIA (the devil), Earth’s apostate Planetary Prince, is still free on UrantiaEarth, to prosecute his nefarious designs.
But he has absolutely no power to enter the minds of men, neither can he draw near to their souls to tempt or corrupt them unless they really desire to be cursed with his wicked presence, that is until his plan to merge anti-matter with aborted fetus to create the sentience of dark matter.
Self-assertion is the ‘battle cry’ of the Lucifer rebellion. One of his chief arguments is self-government.
LUCIFER
If self-government is good and right for the Melchizedeks and other groups, it was equally good for all orders of intelligence.
He is bold and persistent in the advocacy of the “equality of mind” and “the brotherhood of intelligence.”
He maintains that…
LUCIFER
All government should be limited to the local planets and their voluntary confederation into the local systems. All other supervision is disallowed.
He promises…
LUCIFER
Planetary Princes that they should rule the worlds as supreme executives.
He denounces the location of legislative activities on the constellation headquarters and the conduct of judicial affairs on the universe capital.
He contends…
LUCIFER
all these functions of government should be concentrated on the system capitals and proceeded to set up his own legislative assembly and organized his own tribunals under the jurisdiction of Satan. And he directed that the princes on the apostate worlds do the same.
The 19 charges in the Trial of Gabriel vs Lucifer are read.
Charge1: Personality Pride.
Charge2: Default of the Divine Plan resulting in Miscarriage of Adam and Eve, miscarriage of divine plan.
Charge3: Devil made me do it. The doctrine of a personal devil on Earth.
Though it had some foundation in the planetary presence of the traitorous and iniquitous Caligastia, was nevertheless wholly fictitious in its teachings that such a devil could influence the normal human mind against its free and natural choosing. Neither Caligastia nor Daligastia was ever able to oppress mortals or to coerce any normal individual into doing anything against the human will.
The freewill of Man is supreme in mortal affairs; even the indwelling Thought Adjusters refuse to compel man to think a single thought or to perform a single act against the choosing of man’s own will. 66:8.6
Charge4: Contempt for Truth.
Charge5: Default / Violation of Trust.
Charge6: Accelerate the process of social evolution, bypassing the divine plan. Attempting to achieve planetary advancement independently of the divine plan of progression. Day two of Adam and Eve; 74;3.3.
And now, after their formal installation, Adam and Eve became painfully aware of their planetary isolation. Silent were the familiar broadcasts, and absent were all the circuits of extraplanetary communication. Their Jerusem fellows had gone to worlds running along smoothly with a well-established Planetary Prince and an experienced staff ready to receive them and competent to co-operate with them during their early experience on such worlds. But on Urantia rebellion had changed everything. Here the Planetary Prince was very much present, and though shorn of most of his power to work evil, he was still able to make the task of Adam and Eve difficult and to some extent hazardous. It was a serious and disillusioned Son and Daughter of Jerusem who walked that night through the Garden under the shining of the full moon, discussing plans for the next day; 74:3.1 (830.4)
Charge7: Individual Liberty…
Charge 8: Ultra-individualistic.
In looking back over the long career of Caligastia, we find only one outstanding feature of his conduct that might have challenged attention, he was ultra-individualistic. He was inclined to take sides with almost every party of protest, and he was usually sympathetic with those who gave mild expression to implied criticism.
We detect the early appearance of this to be restless under authority, to mildly resent all forms of supervision. While slightly resentful of senior counsel and somewhat restive under superior authority, nonetheless, whenever a test had come, he had always proved loyal to the universe rulers and obedient to the mandates of the Constellation Fathers. No real fault was ever found in him up to the time of his shameful betrayal of Urantia.
[note, this is why I may be a sympathizer, I get this].
With this being said, stated, and known, IS LUCIFER GUILTY OF MISCARRIAGE OF ADAM AND EVES MISSION TO —-, OR WAS THEIR MISSION DOOMED TO FAIL? IFHUMANS HAVE FREE WILL, HOW COULD THE DEVIL BE RESPONSIBLE FOR ACTIONS?
THEREFORE, EVE WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR HER ACTIONS. ADAM WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR HIS ACTIONS.
Charge9: Planetary civilization progressed in a fairly normal manner for almost 300,000 years.
Aside from being a life-modification sphere and therefore subject to numerous irregularities and unusual episodes of evolutionary fluctuation, earth progressed very satisfactorily in its planetary career up to the times of Lucifer Rebellion and the concurrent Caligastia betrayal.
All subsequent history is definitely modified by this catastrophic blunder as well as by the later failure of Adam and Eve and Eve to fulfill their planetary mission.Lucifer’s folly was the attempt to do the non-doable, to short-circuit time in an experiential universe.
The default of the Lucifer Rebellion being… Default of Trust!
Always had the archangel custodian admonished Adam and Eve that Default of Trust would culminate in degradation of status, the loss of immortality, and access to the source of energy (the tree of life in the garden) would be denied them subsequent to their default.The Concepts of Evil, Error, Sin, and Iniquity; 89:2.3…
EVOLUTIONARY man finds it difficult to fully comprehend the significance and to grasp the meanings of Evil, Error, Sin, and Iniquity; 54:0.1 (613.1).
Man is slow to perceive that contrastive Perfection and imperfection produce potential Evil; that conflicting truth and falsehood create confusing Error; that the divine endowment of freewill choice eventuates in the divergent realms of Sin and righteousness; that the persistent pursuit of divinity leads to the kingdom of God as contrasted with its continuous rejection, which leads to the domains of Iniquity.
Sin is a deliberate transgression of the divine will; it is ritual, not rational, an act, not a thought. And this entire concept of sin is fostered by the lingering traditions of Dilmon and the days of a little paradise on earth.
Evil is the mis-adaptation of plans and the maladjustment of techniques resulting in universe disharmony and planetary confusion.
Even though this project of modifying the divine plan had been conceived and executed with entire sincerity and with only the highest motives concerning the welfare of the world, it constituted evil because it represented the wrong way to achieve righteous ends, because it departed from the right way, the divine plan.
The Gods neither create evil nor permit sin and rebellion; 54:0.2.Potential Evil is…
Time-existent in a universe embracing differential levels of perfection meanings and values.Sin is…
Potential in all realms where imperfect beings are endowed with the ability to choose between good and evil. The very conflicting presence of truth and untruth, fact and falsehood, constitutes the potentiality of error.
The deliberate choice of evil constitutes sin; the willful rejection of truth is Error; the persistent pursuit of Sin and Error is Iniquity.
Liberty is…
Stemming from the Lucifer Rebellion is the consequences of the Default of Divine Plan, resulting in Miscarriage of Adam and Eve; the Default of Trust.
Of all the perplexing problems growing out of the Lucifer rebellion, none has occasioned more difficulty than the failure of immature evolutionary mortals to distinguish between True and False liberty
True Liberty is…
The quest of the ages and the reward of evolutionary progress.
False Liberty is…
The subtle deception of the error of time and the evil of space.
Enduring Liberty is…
Predicated on the reality of justice—intelligence, maturity, fraternity, and equity.
Perfecting the divine plan requires presentation of ALL of the facts with Justice Mercy and Love.Ending: (Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
Waiting for Lucifer’s defense…The Passing of Time
The passing of time enhances the consequential good to be derived from the Lucifer folly; and since the evil to be penalized was quite fully developed within a comparatively short time, it is apparent that the all-wise and farseeing universe rulers would be certain to extend the time in which to reap increasingly beneficial results.
TRANSITION.
INT. MENTAL HEALTH CLINIC – DAY
Therapy.
Scene Arc:
Our Protagonist Human Indigo, sits in the waiting room of a Clinic, waiting for his Mental Health Treatment.
Introduction to our Protagonist INDIGO.
As our Protagonist exits his session, just by chance, his girlfriend enters another clinic bay to test for pregnancy. He does not see her, but does she see him? Females typically know more than males, males are typically clueless to female actions and behaviors.Beginning: (Big Picture, Character, Anticipation)
Our Protagonist Human Indigo, sits in the waiting room of a Clinic, waiting for his Mental Health Treatment.Middle: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
Depth Psychology reveals NDE.Ending: (Character, Superior Position, Anticipation)
As our Protagonist exits his session, just by chance, his girlfriend enters another clinic bay to test for pregnancy. He does not see her, but does she see him? Females typically know more than males, males are typically clueless to female actions and behaviors.
BEAT
INT. TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC -DAY
THE ORGY OF DARKNESS AND DEATH
Scene Arc: Turn style abortions. Tours of pregnant women (of twins and triplets and more) counted as 1; leaving without pregnancy.
Pregnant females enter. Some pregnant with one, other pregnant with twins, a few pregnant with triplets. Most know they are pregnant, a few do not.
The evil aspect of this is the portrayal of warfare, killing other men via killing their children. Men in warfare are despised for killing pregnant women, but what if you’re a doctor and you are “authorized” by government? Keep in mind, Same government authorizes was.
They ALL depart without child. Something sedious and horrible has happened, and there is no going back. A tactic of warfare, not healthcare. Blatant cruel and intentional murder of another man’s seed. The abortion clinic IS the battlefield.
Beginning: (Anticipation, Major Twist, Internal Dilemma, Uncomfortable Moment)
Pregnant females enter. Some pregnant with one, other pregnant with twins, a few pregnant with triplets. Most know they are pregnant, a few do not.Middle: (Anticipation, Major Twist, Uncomfortable Moment)
Many of the fathers of these babies are not present, either by choice or not. There is a slogan on the wall,Abortion is between a mother, her doctor, and the government (hush-hush, but not the father).
The evil aspect of this is the portrayal of warfare, killing other men via killing their children. Men in warfare are despised for killing pregnant women, but what if you’re a doctor and you are “authorized” by government? Keep in mind, Same government authorizes was.Ending: (Anticipation, Major Twist)
They ALL depart without child. Something sedious and horrible has happened, and there is no going back.
A tactic of warfare, not healthcare. Blatant cruel and intentional murder of another man’s seed. The abortion clinic IS the battlefield.
TRANSITION.
INT./EXT. THE ORGY OF DARKNESS AND DEATH -DAY/NIGHT
Reaction to Inciting Incident-
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TRANSITION.
EXT. THE GARDEN OF EDEN -NIGHT
Horror Situations
The miscarriage of modern day humanity via Adam and Eve.
Scene Arc: Failing their planetary mission in uplifting the human race, Eve mixes good with evil.
Knowing the tendency of woman to look upon immediate results rather than to plan farsightedly for more remote affects, the Melchizedek’s, before departing, had especially enjoined Eve as to the peculiar dangers besetting their isolated position on the planet AND had in particular warned her never to stray from the side of her mate, that is, to attempt no personal or secret methods of furthering their mutual undertakings.
Serapatatia makes it clear to Eve, that Adam is oftentimes discouraged by the little that had been accomplished toward uplifting the world.
The whole affair develops so gradually and naturally that she is taken unawares. Eve commits infidelity. They fail their mission.
Beginning: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
Knowing the tendency of woman to look upon immediate results rather than to plan farsightedly for more remote affects, the Melchizedek’s, before departing, had especially enjoined Eve as to the peculiar dangers besetting their isolated position on the planet AND had in particular warned her never to stray from the side of her mate, that is, to attempt no personal or secret methods of furthering their mutual undertakings.Middle: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
Influenced by flattery, enthusiasm, and great personal persuasion, Eve then and there consents to embark upon the much-discussed enterprise, to add her own little scheme of world saving to the larger and more far-reaching divine plan.
It should again be emphasized that Serapatatia is altogether honest and wholly sincere in all that he proposes. He never once suspects that he is playing into the hands of CALIGASTIA and DALIGASTIA.
Serapatatia is entirely loyal to the plan of building up a strong reserve of the violet race before attempting the world-wide up-stepping of the confused peoples of Urantia. But, this would require hundreds of years to consummate, and he was impatient; he wants to see some immediate results—something in his own lifetime.
Serapatatia makes it clear to Eve, that Adam is oftentimes discouraged by the little that had been accomplished toward uplifting the world.Ending: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
The whole affair develops so gradually and naturally that she is taken unawares. Eve commits infidelity. They fail their mission.
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Reaction to Horror Situations.Beginning:
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TRANSITION.
INT. BACKSEAT OF A DUSTY CADILLAC -DAY
Characters are warned not to do it
Another SAN father planning his abandonment.Scene Arc: With Not a drop in the college education fund, not a hamper nor a stroller invested in, another SAN irresponsibly makes a baby he has no intention of raising.
When you have no plan, but operate out of the narrative set before you for your destruction and that of your community.
Fulfilling the negative narrative set up for you. Creating the abandonment of another.
Fulfilling the abandonment of another.
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When you have no plan, but operate out of the narrative set before you for your destruction and that of your community.Middle: (/////)
Fulfilling the negative narrative set up for you. Creating the abandonment of another.Ending: (/////)
Fulfilling the abandonment of another.
TRANSITION.INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Denial of Hope, TBD.
Beginning:
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Middle:
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Ending:
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TRANSITION.
EXT. FEARING THE MOON -NIGHT.
“Safety taken away”
Sun worshippers.
Scene Arc:
The Sun Worshippers rather live in fear of the dark; they have a mortal dread of nightfall. As long as the Moon shines a little, they manage to get along, but, in the dark of the Moon, they grow panicky, and begin to sacrifice their best specimens of manhood and womanhood in an effort to induce the Moon again to shine.
The Sun, they early learn, will regularly return, but the Moon they conjecture, it only returns because they sacrifice their fellow tribesmen.
As the race advanced, the object and purpose of sacrifice progressively changes, but the offering of human sacrifice as a part of religious ceremonial long persisted.
When the light of the night goes away, man’s evil will play.
The more enlightened the human race becomes, its evil based in ignorance fades, or transitions.Beginning: (Anticipation, External Dilemma, Betrayal, Interesting Setting)
Afraid of the night, thus begins the fright.
The Sun Worshippers rather live in fear of the dark; they have a mortal dread of nightfall. As long as the Moon shines a little, they manage to get along, but, in the dark of the Moon, they grow panicky, and begin to sacrifice their best specimens of manhood and womanhood in an effort to induce the Moon again to shine.
The Sun, they early learn, will regularly return, but the Moon they conjecture, it only returns because they sacrifice their fellow tribesmen.
As the race advanced, the object and purpose of sacrifice progressively changes, but the offering of human sacrifice as a part of religious ceremonial long persisted.Middle: (Anticipation, External Dilemma, Betrayal, Interesting Setting)
When the light of the night goes away, man’s evil will play.
Ending: (Anticipation, External Dilemma, Betrayal, Interesting Setting)
The more enlightened the human race becomes, its evil based in ignorance fades, or transitions.
TRANSITION.
INT./EXT. TBD -DAY/NIGHT.
Monster, Nature of the Beast-Beginning:
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TRANSITION.
INT./EXT. TBD –DAY/NIGHT
DRAMATIC PURPOSE-Beginning:
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BEATACT 1 TURNING POINT 1.
No turning back, Hero must take next step in journey.
EXT. SPACE-HEAVEN –DAY/NIGHT.
The War in Heaven.
The War in Heaven is a depiction of the hell to be fought on planet earth.
Scene Arc:
Michael elects to remain aloof from the actual warfare of the Lucifer rebellion.
Gabriel calls his PERSONAL STAFF together on Edentia and, in counsel with the Most Highs, elects to assume command of the loyal hosts of Satania.
Displaying none of the barbarities so characteristic of physical warfare on immature worlds, The War in Heaven is very terrible, very real and far more deadly! Due to the depravity of human freewill, this War can now be fought on Earth.
Material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the War in Heaven is fought in terms of life eternal. Due to the depravity of human freewill, this war can now be fought on Earth.Beginning:
Since Michael elects to remain aloof from the actual warfare of the Lucifer rebellion, Gabriel calls his PERSONAL STAFF together on Edentia and, in counsel with the Most Highs, elects to assume command of the loyal hosts of Satania.
Michael remains on Salvington (same Manhattan location of the trial Gabriel vs Lucifer) while Gabriel proceeds to Jerusem, and establishes himself on the sphere dedicated to God The Father-the same Universal Father whose personality Lucifer and Satan question.
In the presence of the forgathered hosts of loyal personalities, he displays the banner of Michael, the material emblem of the Trinity government of all creation, the three azure blue concentric circles on a white background.
The Lucifer emblem is a banner of white with one red circle, in the center of which a black solid circle appears.Middle:
The is a War in Heaven. While displaying none of the barbarities so characteristic of physical warfare on immature worlds, The War in Heaven is very terrible, very real and far more deadly! Michael’s Commander and his Angels fight against the Dragon (Lucifer, Satan, and the Apostate Princes).
The Dragon and his rebellious Angels fight, but prevail not.
In the early days of the struggle, Lucifer holds forth continuously, in the planetary amphitheater.
Gabriel conducts unceasing exposure of the rebel sophistries from his headquarters, taken up near at hand.
The various personalities present on the sphere who are in doubt as to their attitude, journey back and forth between these discussions until they arrive at a final decision.
Material life is in jeopardy in material combat, but the War in Heaven is fought in terms of life eternal. Due to the depravity of human freewill, this war can now be fought on Earth.Ending:
The calamitous and utter HORROR of DEVASTATION of The War in Heaven, that is now allowed to be played out here on Earth, thanks to the fall of mankind.
TRANSITION.
INT. THE GARDEN OF EDEN – NIGHT.
Isolated Situation, THE GARDEN OF EDEN.
Day 2 in the garden. The realization of isolation and fatherhood abandonment.
Scene Arc: After their formal installation, Adam and Eve became painfully aware of their planetary isolation.Beginning: (Superior Position, Misinterpretation, Internal Dilemma, Uncomfortable Moment, Major Twist, Anticipation)
Day 2 in the Garden of Eden. Adam and Eve are now aware of the consequences of the Lucifer rebellion.Middle: (Superior Position, Misinterpretation, Internal Dilemma, Uncomfortable Moment, Major Twist, Anticipation)
Under a full shining moon, they discuss their plans for the next day.Ending: (Superior Position, Misinterpretation, Internal Dilemma, Uncomfortable Moment, Major Twist, Anticipation)
tbd
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Horror Situation, TBD.
Beginning:
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Middle:
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Ending:
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TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Reaction to Horror Situation, TBD.
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Middle:
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Ending:
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BEAT APPLIED TO PAGES 0,1,2,3,5,8,13,21.
ACT 2 – PAGES 30-60
Point of No Return, New Plan. Tie with Dramatic Purpose.
EXT. GARDEN OF EDEN -DAY.
The “voice in the garden”, the Warning of Default of Trust.
Scene Arc: Always had the archangel custodian admonished Adam and Eve that Default of Trust would culminate in degradation of status, loss of immortality.
And access to the source of energy (The Tree of Life in The Garden) would be denied them subsequent to their default. Default, Adam and Eve lose their immortality.Beginning: (Big Picture, Major Twist, Anticipation)
Always had the archangel custodian admonished Adam and Eve that Default of Trust would culminate in degradation of status, and access to the source of energy (The Tree of Life in The Garden) would be denied them subsequent to their default.Middle: (Big Picture, Major Twist, Anticipation)
Adam and Eve depart from the divine plan.Ending: (Big Picture, Major Twist, Anticipation)
Default, Adam and Eve lose their immortality. The “voice in the garden”.
When they learned what had happened to Eve, the infuriated inhabitants of The Garden become unmanageable; they declare war on the near-by Nodite settlement. They sweep out through the gates of Eden and down upon these unprepared people, utterly destroying them—not a man, woman, or child is spared.
And Cano, the father of Cain yet unborn, also perishes.
Upon the realization of what had happened, Serapatatia was overcome with consternation and beside himself with fear and remorse. The next day he drowns himself in the great river.
TRANSITION.
EXT. PARTICLE ACCELERATOR -NIGHT.
Beneath That, PARTICLE ACCELERATOR.
Sub-Atomic particles, The Particle Accelerator.
Scene Arc: Harnessing Anti-Matter.
Beginning: (Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
Explaining particle physics and how this technology has many applications to propel mankind, including evolutionary.
Middle: (Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
Anti-Matter is harnessed.
Ending: (Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
tbd
TRANSITION.Character Depths.
INT. MAINSTREAM MEDIA – DAY
Triggering the Jews.
Scene Arc: From the teachings and practices of Jesus regarding tolerance and kindness that ran counter to the long-standing attitude of the Jews toward other peoples whom they considered heathen.
Beginning: (Misinterpretation, Internal and External Dilemma, Mislead)
Explanation of Stockholm Syndrome.
From the teachings and practices of Jesus regarding tolerance and kindness that ran counter to the long-standing attitude of the Jews toward other peoples whom they considered heathen.
Middle: (Misinterpretation, Internal and External Dilemma, Mislead/Reveal)
Ashkenazi striving to be as Aryan as he can. Building upon the legacy of targeting Blacks, (not) Jews, and Gays; and soon Asians.
Ashkenazi’s arrogance dis-allows him to accept, until his character arc that the jews did not accept Jesus, because he didn’t look like their arrogance presupposed he look (white, blonde with blue eyes) and he was Palestinian. His character arc will be steep with hubris at the top and utter humility at the bottom.
Ending: (Misinterpretation, Internal and External Dilemma, Reveal)
The media empire of white washed race superiority, as long as the hero is white, blue-eyed and blonde.I know thy works, and tribulation, and poverty, (but thou art rich) and I know the blasphemy of them which say they are Jews, and are not, but are the synagogue of Satan.
Behold, I will make them of the synagogue of Satan, which say they are Jews, and are not, but do lie; behold, I will make them to come and worship before thy feet, and to know that I have loved thee.
– Revelation 2:9 and 3:9
TRANSITION.
Horror Situations
INT. HOME –DAY.
Preacher Teacher, all that’s bad.
Scene Arc: BBB deals with father sexual exploitation.
Beginning: (Anticipation, Uncomfortable Moment, Internal Dilemma)
Father invites young and developed BBB to be “hospitable” to the guests, his work peers and church members.Middle: (Anticipation, Uncomfortable Moment, Internal Dilemma)
The failure of the institution known as the black church; part and parcel an extension of partisan politics.Ending: (Anticipation, Uncomfortable Moment, Internal Dilemma)
Being “hospitable” always ends with BBB being used sexually.
TRANSITION.Horror Situations,
TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC.
INT. TURNSTYLE ABORTION CLINIC – DAY/NIGHT.
Aborting a life.
Scene Arc: The Abortion process- from baby to no baby.
Beginning: (External-Internal Dilemmas, Uncomfortable Moment, Uncertainty)
The SOUNDS of an abortion; cut, snip, vacuum suction. What is done with the aborted fetus material? Science.
Middle: (External-Internal Dilemmas, Uncomfortable Moment, Uncertainty)
Abortions are performed.Ending: (External-Internal Dilemmas, Uncomfortable Moment, Uncertainty)
The Hope is that this is the best decision, the Fear is that it is not. Once done, cannot be undone.
TRANSITION.Horror Situations,
Lynching’s and Reinstatement of 15th Amendment.
INT. ASHKENAZI’S MEDIA STUDIO OUTLET – NIGHT
Prime-Time News report, leading story…
ANGER. When society fails to punish crimes, group resentment usually asserts itself as lynch law; the provision of sanctuary was a means of escaping this sudden group anger. Lynching and dueling represent the unwillingness of the individual to surrender private redress to the state.Beginning: (Mislead / Reveal, Suspense)
Good, finally something to bring justice and order back to society. Many see it as a solution to the crime and social issues.Middle: (Misinterpretation, Internal and External Dilemmas)
Lynching’s and slavery are reconstituted on the land due to the riots and disorderly conduct.Ending: (Reveal, Characters change radically, Uncomfortable Moment)
The law is abused and EVERYONE becomes a target, not just the colored folks, EVERYONE!Along with vaccine mandates, and embedded chips to monitor location, pulse, body, etc. Some call it, the mark of the beast.
TRANSITION.
Reaction to Horror Situations
INT. MEDICAL CLINIC – DAY.
The myth of Asclepius.
Scene Arc: Asclepius struggles with his dilemma of dealing with Zeus “God” killing his with thunderbolt for not bringing over the souls.Beginning: (Anticipation, Twist, Character, Mislead)
Asclepius struggles with his dilemma of dealing with Zeus “God” killing his with thunderbolt for not bringing over the souls.
Was on the medical board that ends the career of our Protagonist, and also aborts Indigo’s unborn child.Middle: (Twist, Anticipation, Character)
Asclepius is lobbied by Ashkenazi. Abortion is between a woman, her doctor, and the government (hush-hush but not the father).
If he heals, he dies, if he kills, he lives.Ending: (Reveal, Twist, Anticipation, Character)
tbd
TRANSITION.Reaction to Horror Situation,
INT. ASHKENAZI’S MEDIA STUDIO OUTLET –
Lynching’s and Reinstatement of 15th Amendment
Oh no he didn’t! A cacophony of angry colored people decry at the reissuance of such a decree.
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Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
BEAT
INT./EXT. TBD DAY/NIGHT
Plan in Action-
Isolated / Trapped / Abducted.
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Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
INT./EXT. TBD -DAY/NIGHT.
One of Us is killed-
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Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
BEAT
TURNING POINT 2
INT. -ABORTION CLINIC -MOONLIT NIGHT.
From ATCG to ATCCCG.
Scene Arc:
Infecting the world with the cytosine DNA sequence.Beginning: (External Dilemma, Twist, Mystery, Suspense)
Infecting the world with the cytosine DNA sequenceMiddle: (External Dilemma, Twist, Mystery, Suspense)
The weak begin to die off.Ending: (External Dilemma, Twist, Mystery, Suspense)
DNA Sequence altering from double helix to triple helix; from [ATCG 10565 to ATCCCG 1056665].
TRANSITION.
MID-POINT.
No turning back, Hero must take next step in journey
EXT. LOCATION -DAY.
The Ten Designs of Mortal Life.
Scene Arc: Electric Type -The electric, magnetic, and electronic behavior of the worlds varies greatly.Beginning: (Interesting Setting, Intrigue, Mystery)
Earth begins as Number 4, atmospheric electric.
Not all worlds are alike in the manner of taking in energy. Not all inhabited worlds have an atmospheric ocean suited to respiratory exchange of gases, such as is present on UrantiaEarth.
During the earlier and the later stages of many planets, being of our present order could not exist, and when the respiratory factors of a planet are very high or very low, but when all other prerequisites to intelligent life are adequate, the Life Carriers often establish on such worlds a modified form of mortal existence, beings who are competent to affect their life-process exchanges directly by means of light-energy and the firsthand power transmutations of the Master Physical Controllers.Middle: (Mystery, Suspense)
There are six different types of animal and mortal nutrition:
1. The sub-breathers employ the first type of nutrition.
2. The marine dwellers the second.
3. The mid-breathers (UrantiaEarth).
4. Super-breathers employ the fourth.
5. Non-breathers utilize the fifth of nutrition and energy.
6. Sixth technique of energizing is limited to midway creatures.
There are numerous additional physical variations in planetary life, but all of these differences are wholly matters of anatomical modification, physiologic differentiation, and electrochemical adjustment. Such distinction do not concern the intellectual or the spiritual life.Ending: (Cliffhanger, Surprise, Characters change radically)
Due to erosion of the planet by humans, a change happens.
The majority of inhabited planets are peopled with the breathing type of intelligent beings. But, there are also orders of mortals who are able to live on worlds with little or no air. In all Satania, there are only nine such worlds.
There are so very few of the non-breather type of inhabited worlds in Satania because this more recently organized section of Norlatiadek still abounds in meteoric space bodies; and worlds without a protective friction atmosphere are subject to incessant bombardment by these wanderers. Even some of the comets consist of meteor swarms, but as a rule they are disrupted smaller bodies of matter.
Millions upon millions of meteorites enter the atmosphere of UrantiaEarth daily, coming in at a rate of almost two-hundred miles a second (12,000 miles per minute, 720,000 miles per hour). You do the math. Confirm the numbers. If they correlate, get some popcorn and continue reading. If not, get some popcorn and continue reading, it’s just a movie script. Makes you wonder?
On the non-breathing worlds, the advanced races must do much to protect themselves from meteor damage by making electrical installations which operate to consume or shunt the meteors. Great danger confronts them when they venture beyond these protected zones. These worlds are also subject to disastrous electrical storms of a nature unknown on UrantiaEarth. During such times of tremendous energy fluctuation, the inhabitants must take refuge in their special structures of protective insulation.
Life on the worlds of the non-breathers is radically different from what it is on UrantiaEarth. The non-breathers do not eat food or drink water as we do. The reactions of the nervous system, the heat-regulating mechanism, and the metabolism of these specialized peoples are radically different from such functions of earth mortals. Almost every act of living, aside from reproduction, differs, and even the methods of procreation are somewhat different.
BEAT.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Character Wound.Beginning:
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Full pursuit of the killer.
Beginning:
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Middle:
The dog that is poisoned by the neighbor with glass in the meat. And the consequences to him. Perhaps he is reincarnated as a dog.
The Black community that claims to be so spiritual, yet does not exude such positive spirituality.Ending:
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TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Terrorized.Beginning:
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Cruelty to animals…The dog that is poisoned by the neighbor with glass in the meat. And the consequences to him. Perhaps he is reincarnated as a dog.
The Black community that claims to be so spiritual, yet does not exude such positive spirituality.Ending:
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BEAT PAGE 34,55.
ACT 3 – PAGES 60-90
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Full out Horror. Rethink EVERYTHING…
Atmosphere of Evil Established.Beginning:
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TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Connect with Characters.Beginning:
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TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
The Characters are warned not to do it.Beginning:
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TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Horror Situation.
The Black lives that mattered, consequences of selling your soul.
The negative narrative of the African American is unfortunately normalized.Beginning:
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Lynching’s. Reinstitution of 15th Amendment of Constitution allowing slavery. The reversal of Civil Rights within a matter of generations).Ending:
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TRANSITION.
Denial of HorrorOh no He didn’t!
Beginning: (Oh no he didn’t reactivate the 15th amendment allowing slavery, lynching’s, and —- of the black church that has failed the community.)
Middle: (/////)
Ending: (How can a community allow themselves to accept a narrative about them, and act it out in acceptance? This narrative being SANs, and what that implies statistically.)
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Reaction – Escape.
Rewriting the negative narrative
Rewriting the SANSs narrative.
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Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
EXT. LOCATION -DAY.
Human “upgrade”.
From air breathing Human to non-breathing (AI) artificial intelligence = Cyborgs, the cost of abusing freewill.
Scene Arc: World of non-breathers-The majority of inhabited planets are peopled with the breathing type of intelligent beings.
Beginning: (Twist, Uncertainty, Interesting Setting, External Dilemma)
Mid-breathers represent the average or typical breathing order of mortal existence.
Middle: (Twist, Uncertainty, Interesting Setting, External Dilemma)
Tbd
Ending: (Twist, Uncertainty, Interesting Setting, External Dilemma)
AI is the required upgrade for humanity to continue its existence. That upgrade is connected to the grid, on planet and off-planet, they thought of everything. Upgrade or die. Get the vaxx, or die.
BEAT.
ACT 3
Breakthrough New Plan. Tie with Dramatic Purpose
Full out Horror.
INT. COURTROOM – DAY.
Lucifer’s defense.
Scene Arc: Lucifers defense is earth was his responsibility and uplifting the backwards nature of humanity was his
goal, human freewill was established before he and his crew arrived, don’t blame him.Beginning: (Character, Twist)
Lucifer’s defense to initiating the rebellion.Middle: (Character, Twist)
Full out Horror!Ending: (Character, Twist)
Who is on trial, Lucifer or Humanity? What do the Melchizedeks say about the outcome of the rebellion?TRANSITION.
Fight to the death.
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Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Horror Situations,
Lynching’s reinstitution and enforcement of 15th of the
Constitution.
Beginning:
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Middle:
(Lynching’s reinstitution and enforcement of 15th of the Constitution).
Ending:
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TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Denial of Horror,
Lynching’s reinstitution and enforcement of 15th of the Constitution.
Beginning:
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Middle:
(The denial of lynching’s being reinstituted along with the enforcement of 15th of the Constitution.)
Ending:
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BEAT
TURNING POINT 3
EXT. SOMEWHERE -DAY/NIGHT.
Huge Failure / Major Shift. No turning back, Hero must take next step in journey.
The accumulation of sin.
Scene Arc: TP3 Dramatic Purpose… The Melchizedeks now teach that the good resulting from the Satania rebellion is more than a thousand times the sum of all evil.
Beginning: (Major Twist, Cliffhanger, Surprise, More Interesting Setting)
Continuation of Lucifer’s defense.
Middle: (Major Twist, Cliffhanger, Surprise, More Interesting Setting)
tbd
Ending: (Major Twist, Cliffhanger, Surprise, More Interesting Setting)
tbd
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Dramatic Purpose.
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Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Hysteria.
Beginning: (/////)
Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Thrilling escape from death.
Beginning: (/////)
Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Death returns to take one or more.
Beginning: (/////)
Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
TRANSITION.
INT/EXT: LOCATION -DAY/NIGHT
Resolution.
Beginning: (/////)
Middle: (/////)
Ending: (/////)
BEAT PAGE 89.
ACT 4 – PAGES 90-110/120
Ultimate expression / Main ConflictHarnessing Anti-Matter.
Scene Arc: The timing of an Electrical Storm, chanting of Black Lives Matter, riots and violence, the Particle Accelerator is used to harness Anti-Matter.
The Anti-Christ is CREATED from aborted fetuses fused with anti-matter during an electrical storm.
Using a Particle Accelerator to Harness Anti-Matter altering human DNA from ATCG 10565 to ATCCCG 1056665.Beginning: (Big Picture, Twist, Anticipation)
The timing of an Electrical Storm, chanting of Black Lives Matter, riots and violence, the Particle Accelerator is used to harness dark energy-matter.Middle: (Big Picture, Twist, Anticipation)
White Lies Harnessing the negativity of black lives matters movement, less than peaceful protests, vandalism, riots, racism, chaos and confusion of 2020s to conjure the living element of dark-lifeforce.Ending: (Big Picture, Twist, Anticipation)
The Anti-Christ is CREATED from aborted fetuses fused with anti-matter during an electrical storm.
Using a Particle Accelerator to Harness Anti-Matter altering human DNA from ATCG 10565 to ATCCCG 1056665.
TRANSITION.
EXT. LOCATION -NIGHT.
The Lucifer Manifesto, consequences of…
Scene Arc: ACT 4 Ultimate Expression Main Conflict- In short, what God had given men and angels, Lucifer would have taken away from them, that is, the divine privilege of participating in the creation of their own destinies, and of the destiny of this local system of inhabited worlds.Beginning: (Big Picture, Betrayal, Anticipation, Character)
Ultimate Expression Main Conflict- In short, what God had given men and angels, Lucifer would have taken away from them, that is, the divine privilege of participating in the creation of their own destinies, and of the destiny of this local system of inhabited worlds.Middle: (Big Picture, Betrayal, Anticipation, Character)
The Lucifer Manifesto, masquerading in the habiliments of liberty.Ending: (Big Picture, Betrayal, Anticipation, Character)
We await the flashing broadcast that will deprive these traitors of personality existence, anticipating the verdict of Uversa will be announced by the executionary broadcast which will affect the annihilation of these interned rebels.
TRANSITION.
EXT. AMERICA – NIGHT
Triggering the Blacks.
Scene Arc: From 1930s Freedom to Modern day Slavery.Beginning: (Mislead, Twist, Character, External Dilemma)
Civil War Race War.Middle: (Anticipation, Character)
Triggering the blacks by reinstituting lynching’s and constitutional slavery are brought back to keep the black community, and ALL communities in place.Ending: (Reveal)
Using the struggle of black lives to create soulless life.
TRANSITION.
EXT. LOCATION -NIGHT.
Rebel annihilation- The Wages of Sin is death.
Scene Arc: ACT 4 Ultimate Expression/Main Conflict- Awaiting the flashing broadcast that will deprive these traitors of personality existence.Beginning: (Big Picture, Suspense, Uncertainty)
Awaiting the flashing broadcast that will deprive these traitors of personality existence. We do not look for a removal of the present Satania restrictions until the Ancients of Days make final disposition of the arch rebels.
The system circuits will not be reinstated so long as Lucifer lives. Meantime, he is wholly inactive.Middle: (Big Picture, Suspense, Uncertainty)
All rebels who will ever accept mercy have done so. We await the flashing broadcast that will deprive these traitors of personality existence. We anticipate the verdict of Uversa will be announced by the executionary broadcast which will affect the annihilation of these interned rebels. Then will you look for their places, but they shall not be found.Ending: (Cliffhanger)
The rebellion has ended. And thus shall all of these unworthy traitors “become as though they had not been.
“And they, who know you among the worlds, will be astonished at you; you have been a terror, but never shall you be any more.”
All await the Uversa decree.
For ages, the seven prison worlds of spiritual darkness in Satania have constituted a solemn warning to all Nebadon, eloquently and effectively proclaiming the great truth that…“…the way of the transgressor is hard”;
“…within every sin is concealed the seed of its own destruction”;
“…wages of sin is death”.
BEAT.
ACT 4 RESOLUTION…
INT. WASHINGTON DC -NIGHT.
The Anti-Christ.
Scene Arc: Resolution… Timed with an electrical storm, particle acceleration technology harnesses Anti-Matter that is merged with the aborted fetuses collected over time, from the worse personalities, and those that suffered from the evils of man’s freewill, since freewill has been established on earth-men and women. Bring life to the Anti-Christ.BEGINNING: (Anticipation, Twist, More Interesting Setting)
Timed with an electrical storm, particle acceleration technology harnesses Anti-Matter that is merged with the aborted fetuses collected over time, from the worse personalities, and those that suffered from the evils of man’s freewill, since freewill has been established on earth-men and women. Bring life to the Anti-Christ.MIDDLE: (Anticipation, Twist, More Interesting Setting)
The conflict is, the mass-produced DNA altering vaxx-serum, was not a biological weapon intentionally inflicted upon the world, with the specific diabolical plan of altering the genome of every living (and dead) human and animal. For human, from ATCG 10565 to ATCCCG 1056665. For the soul of America, literally!ENDING: (Anticipation, Character, Twist, More Interesting Setting)
Impregnated within the womb of a barren woman, The Devil’s Child (fetuses aborted overtime and merged with anti-matter) is risen and born, from the world of politics. The most powerful entity to be born of anti-matter, harnessed with the aborted struggles of generations of human evil and sin.
TRANSITION.
EXT. COURTHOUSE – NIGHT
Fallen children of Light.
Scene Arc: Technically terminating the Lucifer rebellion in the system of Satania.
Beginning: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
At first the Lucifer upheaval appears to be an unmitigated calamity to the system and to the universe. Gradually benefits begin to accrue. With the passing of twenty-five thousand years of system time (twenty thousand years of UrantiaEarth time), the Melchizedeks teach that the good resulting from Lucifer’s folly equals the evil incurred, the good resulting from the Satania rebellion is more than a thousand times the sum of all the evil.Middle: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
The passing of time enhances the consequential good to be derived from the Lucifer folly; and since the evil to be penalized is fully developed within a comparatively short time.
Regardless of the many additional reasons for delaying the apprehension and adjudication of the Satania rebels, this one gain would have been enough to explain why these sinners were not sooner interned, and why they have not been adjudicated and destroyed.Ending: (Big Picture, Character, Twist, Anticipation)
Shortsighted and time-bound mortal minds should be slow to criticize the time delays of the farseeing and all-wise administrators of universe affairs. The final result of wholehearted Sin is annihilation.
The greatest punishment (in reality an inevitable consequence) for wrongdoing and deliberate rebellion against the government of God is loss of existence, as an individual subject of that government.
The final result of wholehearted Sin is annihilation. In the last analysis, such sin-identified individuals have destroyed themselves by becoming wholly unreal through their embrace of Iniquity.
The factual disappearance of such a creature is, however, always delayed until the ordained order of justice current in that universe has been fully complied with.
TRANSITION.
EXT. EARTH -DAY.
Not all worlds are alike.
Scene Arc: Earth was an Atmospheric – Energizing Type of planet; the new planetary type that is formed, due to the default, allowing more Artificial Intelligence, is Electric – Non-Breathers.Beginning: (Big Picture, Anticipation)
Earth was an Atmospheric – Energizing Type of planet. Not all inhabited worlds have an atmospheric ocean suited to respiratory exchange of gases, such as is present on UrantiaEarth.
Middle: (Big Picture, Twist, Anticipation)
tbd
Ending: (Big Picture, Anticipation, Cliffhanger)
The new planetary type that is formed, due to the default, allowing more Artificial Intelligence, is Electric – Non-Breathers.
BEAT
ACT 4
Transformational Journey: Character Arc + Major Challenge to their reality,
forcing them to change on an identity level.
INT. MANHATTAN SALVINGTON COURT -DAY
Lucifer asks for mercy.
Lucifer asks for Mercy because he was assigned Planetary Prince The Devil and his job was to uplift the human strain. With the Melchizedeks acknowledging that race improvement was beneficial to Humanity.
LUCIFER
It is always difficult to induce evolutionary minds suddenly to accept advanced revealed truth.
Man is an evolutionary creature and in the main must get his religion by evolutionary techniques.
Revealed Truth: personally discovered truth, is the supreme delight of the human soul; it is the joint creation of the material mind and the indwelling spirit.
The eternal salvation of this truth-discerning and beauty-loving soul is assured by that hunger and thirst for goodness which leads this mortal to develop a singleness of purpose to do the Father’s will, to find God and to become like him. There is never conflict between true knowledge and truth.Beginning: (Big Picture, Suspense, Cliffhanger)
Charge 1: Personality Pride.
Charge 2: Default of Divine Plan resulting in Miscarriage of Adam and Eve, miscarriage of divine plan.
Charge 3: Devil made me do it. The doctrine of a personal devil on Earth, though it had some foundation in the planetary presence of the traitorous and iniquitous Caligastia, was nevertheless wholly fictitious in its teachings that such a devil could influence the normal human mind against its free and natural choosing.
Charge 4: Contempt for Truth.
Charge 5: Default / Violation of Trust.
Charge 6: Accelerate the process of social evolution, bypassing the divine plan.
Charge 7: Individual Liberty…
Charge 8: Ultra-individualistic. In looking back over the long career of Caligastia, we find only one outstanding feature of his conduct that might have challenged attention, he was ultra-individualistic.
Charge 9: Planetary civilization progressed in a fairly normal manner for almost 300,000 years (66:8.3).
Aside from being a life-modification sphere and therefore subject to numerous irregularities and unusual episodes of evolutionary fluctuation, earth progressed very satisfactorily in its planetary career up to the times of Lucifer Rebellion and the concurrent Caligastia betrayal.
Charge 10: No one ever suggested rebellion to Lucifer. The idea of self-assertion in opposition to the will of Michael and to the plans of the Universal Father, as they are represented in Michael, had its origin in his own mind.
At some point in this experience, he became insincere, and evil evolved into deliberate and willful sin. That this happened is proved by the subsequent conduct of this brilliant executive [?Satan?].
He was long offered opportunity for repentance, but only some of his subordinates ever accepted the proffered mercy
Charge 11: In the course of this inspection, Satan informed Caligastia of Lucifer’s then proposed, “Declaration of Liberty,” and as we now know, the Prince agreed to betray the planet upon the announcement of the rebellion.
Charge 12: Through evil and error, he (LUCIFER) embraced sin.Lucifers Declaration of Liberty
1. The reality of the Universal Father.
Lucifer charged that the Universal Father did not really exist, that physical gravity and space-energy were inherent in the universe, and that the Father was a myth invented by the Paradise Sons to enable them to maintain the rule of the universes in the Father’s name. He denied that personality was a gift of the Universal Father. He traded on reverence as ignorance.
2. The universe government of the Creator Son—Jesus Christ Michael.
Lucifer contended that the local systems should be autonomous. He asserted that the whole plan of worship was a clever scheme to aggrandize the Paradise Sons. He was willing to acknowledge Michael as his Creator father but not as his God and rightful ruler.
3. The attack upon the universal plan of ascendant mortal training.
Lucifer maintained that far too much time and energy were expended upon the scheme of so thoroughly training ascending mortals in the principles of universe administration, principles which he alleged were unethical and unsound. He protested against the agelong program for preparing the mortals of space for some unknown destiny and pointed to the presence of the finaliter corps on Jerusem as proof that these mortals had spent ages of preparation for some destiny of pure fiction.
He intimates that they had been debauched by overmuch discipline and prolonged training, and that they were in reality traitors to their mortal fellows since they were now co-operating with the scheme of enslaving all creation to the fictions of a mythical eternal destiny for ascending mortals.
He advocated that ascenders should enjoy the liberty of individual self-determination.
What if Mercy is the plea from Lucifer, in that he was attempting to be perfect like God is perfect, as commanded? Would not God forgive him and have mercy?
Mercy is simply justice tempered by that wisdom which grows out of perfection of knowledge and the full recognition of the natural weaknesses and environmental handicaps of finite creatures. “Our God is full of compassion, gracious, long-suffering, and plenteous in mercy.”
Therefore “whosoever calls upon the Lord shall be saved,” “for he will abundantly pardon.”
God is divinely kind to sinners. When rebels return to righteousness, they are mercifully received, “for our God will abundantly pardon.” “I am he who blots out your transgressions for my own sake, and I will not remember your sins.” “Behold what manner of love the Father has bestowed upon us that we should be called the sons of God.”
Due to Ultra-individualistic Personality pride, Lucifer is put on trial in Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
As Planetary Prince, he sees the result of modern-day society of fatherless and a planet in peril; all his responsibility. And with ego and pride being his downfall, this is his conviction.Middle: (Big Picture Misinterpretation, Character Changes Radically)
The Planetary Prince’s Corporeal Staff (The One Hundred) are usually removed from the planet in connection with the next adjudication at the time of the second Son’s arrival on the sphere.
Before leaving, they customarily assign their various duties to their mutual offspring and to certain superior native volunteers.
On those worlds where these helpers of the prince have been permitted to mate with the superior groups of the native races, such offspring usually succeed them.Ending: (Betrayal, Internal and External Dilemma)
Lucifer and his legion are annihilated because the greatest punishment (in reality an inevitable consequence) for wrongdoing and deliberate rebellion against the government of God is loss of existence, as an individual subject of that government. The final result of wholehearted Sin is annihilation.
In the last analysis, such sin-identified individuals have destroyed themselves by becoming wholly unreal through their embrace of Iniquity.
Error suggests lack of intellectual keenness; evil, deficiency of wisdom; sin, abject spiritual poverty; but Iniquity is indicative of vanishing personality control.
The factual disappearance of such a creature is, however, always delayed until the ordained order of justice current in that universe has been fully complied with.
The issue-Earth embraced evil. Do not mix good with evil.Wisdom of Delay.
Reasons known as to why Lucifer and his confederates were/are not sooner interned or adjudicated:
Mercy, Supreme Justice, Patience of Time, Wisdom and Love, Qualified Sovereignty, A Full Hearing, Deliberate Choice to insure complete determination, Judgement, Cessation of Existence – Dissolution of soul.
Mercy
Mercy requires that every wrongdoer have sufficient Time in which to formulate a deliberate and fully chosen attitude regarding his evil thoughts and sinful acts. The restraint of justice by mercy, proves that God is love, and that such a God of love dominates the universes and in mercy controls the fate and judgment of all his creatures.
Supreme Justice
Supreme Justice is dominated by a Father’s love; therefore will justice never destroy that which mercy can save. Time to accept salvation is vouchsafed every evildoer. [evil of a son, overrides wrongs committed to others.
Patience of Time
No affectionate father is ever precipitate in visiting punishment upon an erring member of his family. Patience cannot function independently of time.
Wisdom and Love
While wrongdoing is always deleterious to a family, wisdom and love admonish the upright children to bear with an erring brother during the time granted by the affectionate father in which the sinner may see error of his way(s) and embrace salvation. WHAT HAPPENED?
Qualified Sovereignty
Regardless of Michael’s attitude toward Lucifer, notwithstanding his being Lucifer’s Creator-father, it was not in the province of the Creator Son to exercise summary jurisdiction over the apostate System Sovereign because he had not then completed his bestowal career, thereby attaining unqualified sovereignty of Nebadon.
A Full Hearing
The Ancients of Days could have immediately annihilated these rebels, but they seldom execute wrongdoers without a full hearing.
The Faithful of Days on Edentia advised the Constellation Fathers to allow the rebels free course to the end that all sympathy for these evildoers should be the sooner uprooted in the hearts of every present and future citizen of Norlatiadek–every mortal, morontia, or spirit creature.
Deliberate Choice to insure complete determination
On Jerusem the personal representative of the Supreme Execute of Orvonton counsels Gabriel to foster full opportunity for every living creature to mature a deliberate choice in those matters involved in the Lucifer Declaration of Liberty.
The issues of rebellion having been raised, the Paradise emergency advisor of Gabriel portrays…
“If such full and free opportunity are not given to all creatures, then would the Paradise quarantine against all such possible half-hearted or doubt-stricken creatures be extended in self-protection against the entire constellation?”
To keep open the Paradise doors of ascension, it is necessary to provide for the full development of rebellion and to ensure the complete determination of attitude on the part of all beings in any way concerned therewith.
– Gabriel, Paradise Emergency Advisor.
Judgement
At first the Lucifer upheaval appears to be an unmitigated calamity to the system and to the universe. Gradually, benefits began to accrue.
With the passing of twenty-five thousand years of system time (twenty thousand years of Urantia time), the Melchizedeks begin to teach that the good resulting from Lucifer’s folly has come to equal the evil incurred.
The sum of evil had by that time becomes almost stationary, continuing to increase only on certain isolated worlds, while the beneficial repercussions continued to multiply and extend out through the universe and superuniverse, even to Havona.
The Melchizedeks now teach that the good resulting from the Satania rebellion is more than a thousand times the sum of all the evil.
With these findings, should Lucifer’s soul be annihilated? With his success living on through the vaxx 1056665 merged with Anti-Matter and aborted fetus’s, thus bringing life to The Anti-Christ? For the soul-less purpose of that Being becoming the President of the US?
Cessation of Existence – Dissolution of soul
Cessation of existence is usually decreed at the dispensational or epochal adjudication of the realm or realms. On a world such as Urantia it comes at the end of a planetary dispensation.
Cessation of existence can be decreed at such times by co-ordinate action of all tribunals of jurisdiction, extending from the planetary council up through the courts of the Creator Son to the judgment tribunals of the Ancients of Days.
The mandate of dissolution originates in the higher courts of the superuniverse following an unbroken confirmation of the indictment originating on the sphere of the wrongdoer’s residence (Earth); and then, when sentence of extinction has been confirmed on high, the execution is by the direct act of those judges residential on, and operating from, the headquarters of the superuniverse.
When this sentence is finally confirmed, the sin-identified Being instantly becomes as though he had not been!
There is no resurrection from such a fate; it is everlasting and eternal.
The living energy factors of identity are resolved by the transformations of Time and the metamorphoses of Space, into the cosmic potentials whence they once emerged.
As for the personality of the iniquitous one, it is deprived of a continuing life vehicle by the creature’s failure to make those choices and final decisions which would have assured eternal life.
When the continued embrace of sin by the associated mind culminates in complete self-identification with iniquity, then upon the cessation of life, upon cosmic dissolution, such an isolated personality is absorbed into the oversoul of creation, becoming a part of the evolving experience of the Supreme Being.
Never again does it appear as a personality; its identity becomes as though it had never been.
In the case of an Adjuster-indwelt personality, the experiential spirit values survive in the reality of the continuing Adjuster.
In any universe contest between actual levels of reality, the personality of the higher level will ultimately triumph over the personality of the lower level. This inevitable outcome of universe controversy is inherent in the fact that divinity of quality equals the degree of reality or actuality of any will creature.
Undiluted Evil, complete Error, willful Sin, and unmitigated Iniquity are inherently and automatically suicidal.
Such attitudes of cosmic unreality can survive in the universe only because of transient mercy-tolerance pending the action of the justice-determining and fairness-finding mechanisms of the universe tribunals of righteous adjudication.
BEAT
ACT 4 CHARACTER OUTROS (ALL OF THESE WILL BE UPDATED).
Beginning: (/////)
INDIGO
Abandonment issues. NDE stuff. The abortion stuff with BBB. Career stuff.
SAN / THE UNSEEN FATHER
The SAN (Sorry Ass Negro) soundtrack includes old worn-out negro spirituals. Creating babies and not taking care of them. Abandoning the women they impregnate. To be aligned with, The Unseen father.
Re-writing the narrative assigned.
BBB
Indigo’s girlfriend.
At the abortion clinic, without his awareness. This one is not his, but he will believe this until Act 2.
Father abuse, sexual exploitation ramifications.
ASCLEPIUS
Abortions
Consequences of abortions, Zeus lightning death history. The toll it takes. Destroying Indigo’s career, and aborting indigo’s baby and using it for science.
ASHKENAZI
The fortuitous liberty and independence of the political rule of surrounding and more powerful peoples the Jews attributed to the fact that they were the “chosen people,” to the direct interposition of Yahweh.
Such an attitude of racial superiority made it all the harder for them to endure Roman suzerainty when it finally fell upon their land.
But even in that sad hour the Jews refused to learn that their world mission was spiritual, not political.
LUCIFER
Add action
THE ANTI-CHRIST BEELZEBULB
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SATAN
Add action.
CALIGASTIA
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INDIGO
Abandonment issues.
NDE stuff.
The abortion stuff with BBB.
Career stuff. He gets assigned to write a court case…Gabriel vs. Lucifer.
SAN / THE UNSEEN FATHER
BBB
Dealing with her childhood father abuse and exploitation stuff.
Aborting Indigo’s baby, and others.
Power over men.
ASCLEPIUS
Add action.
ASHKENAZI
HE IS IN DENIAL OF HIS RACIST IDEOLOGY. AND DAMN ANYONE WHO QUESTIONS THEM. HE CRUSHES HIS OPPONENTS WITH HIS MONEY, CONNECTIONS, AND ESPECIALLY HIS JEWISH SYMPATHY.
HIS HOPE IS TO WHITE WASH HIS PAST BY PORTRAYING HIS IDEALIZED VERSION OF HIMSELF ON THE SCREEN, WHILE DEMONIZING BLACKNESS. THE SAME OPPRESSION HIS FAMILY FLED FROM NAZI GERMANY ONLY TO REPLICATE IN USA.
LUCIFER
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The ANTI-CHRIST BEELZEBULB
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SATAN
Add action.
CALIGASTIA
Add action.Ending: (Superior Position, Intrigue, Reveal, Uncomfortable Moments)
The personal and liberating touch of the God of perfection overshadows the hearts and encircuits the natures of all those mortal creatures who have ascended to the universe level of moral discernment.
In this manner, as well as through the contacts of the divine presence, the Universal Father actually participates in the experience with immaturity and imperfection in the evolving career of every moral being of the entire universe.
INDIGO
Add action.
Abandonment issues.
NDE stuff.
The abortion stuff with BBB.
Becomes very successful with his erotic novels. Who knew that turning women on could be so suck-sessful! Indigo’s writing takes form, well received by female audience. Who knew getting dicked down by the devil was a quite fantasy? The allure of the horrific with the females audience takes shape.
The case of Gabriel vs. Lucifer…
SAN / THE UNSEEN FATHER
The SAN (Sorry Ass Negro) soundtrack includes old worn-out negro spirituals. Creating babies and not taking care of them. Abandoning the women they impregnate. To be aligned with, The Unseen father.
BBB
In the end, this is what happens to BBB?
Abortions take a toll she becomes barren, but her barren womb is used to incubate the Anti-Christ. The aborted fetus are collected from an illuminati orgy, run by Asklepius and funded by Ashkenazi.
ASCLEPIUS
In the end, this is what happens to…
ASHKENAZI
In the end, this is what happens to Ashkenazi’s Character Arc…
“Happy are they who mourn, for they shall be comforted.”
So-called common sense or the best of logic would never suggest that happiness could be derived from mourning. But Jesus did not refer to outward or ostentatious mourning. He alluded to an emotional attitude of tenderheartedness.It is a great error to teach boys and young men that it is unmanly to show tenderness or otherwise to give evidence of emotional feeling or physical suffering. Sympathy is a worthy attribute of the male as well as the female. It is not necessary to be calloused in order to be manly. This is the wrong way to create courageous men.
The world’s great men have not been afraid to mourn. Moses, the mourner, was a greater man than either Samson or Goliath. Moses was a superb leader, but he was also a man of meekness. Being sensitive and responsive to human need creates genuine and lasting happiness, while such kindly attitudes safeguard the soul from the destructive influences of anger, hate, and suspicion.
In the end, the Charges…
1- Infringement of Freewill.Lucifer’s folly was the attempt to do the non-doable, to short-circuit time in an experiential universe; 54:2.3 (614.8).
Lucifer’s crime was the attempted creative disenfranchisement of every personality in Satania, the unrecognized abridgment of the creature’s personal participation—freewill participation—in the long evolutionary struggle to attain the status of light and life both individually and collectively.In so doing this onetime Sovereign of your system set the temporal purpose of his own will directly athwart the eternal purpose of God’s will as it is revealed in the bestowal of free will upon all personal creatures.
The Lucifer rebellion thus threatened the maximum possible infringement of the freewill choice of the ascenders and servers of the system of Satania—a threat forevermore to deprive every one of these beings of the thrilling experience of contributing something personal and unique to the slowly erecting monument to experiential wisdom which will sometime exist as the perfected system of Satania.
Thus does the Lucifer manifesto, masquerading in the habiliments of liberty, stand forth in the clear light of reason as a monumental threat to consummate the theft of personal liberty and to do it on a scale that has been approached only twice in all the history of Nebadon.
In short, what God had given men and angels Lucifer would have taken away from them, that is, the divine privilege of participating in the creation of their own destinies and of the destiny of this local system of inhabited worlds; 54:2.4 (615.1).
No being in all the universe has the rightful liberty to deprive any other being of true liberty, the right to love and be loved, the privilege of worshiping God and of serving his fellows; 54:2.5 (615.2).
Count 2- Personality Pride.
Keeping in mind our Logline: Consequences of the default of the Luciferin rebellion, resulting in the miscarriage Human destiny.
THE problems associated with human existence on Urantia are impossible of understanding without a knowledge of certain great epochs of the past, notably the occurrence and consequences of the planetary rebellion. Although this upheaval (planetary rebellion) did not seriously interfere with the progress of organic evolution, it did markedly modify the course of social evolution and of spiritual development. The entire superphysical history of the planet is profoundly influenced by this devastating calamity; 67:0.1 (754.1).
MELCHIZEDEK OF NEBADON
I was present on Jerusem when the brilliant Caligastia departed from the system capital. No prince of the planets ever embarked upon a career of world rulership with a richer preparatory experience or with better prospects than did Caligastia on that eventful day one-half million years ago. One thing is certain: As I executed my assignment of putting the narrative of that event on the broadcasts of the local universe, I never for one moment entertained even in the slightest degree any idea that this noble Lanonandek would so shortly betray his sacred trust of planetary custody and so horribly stain the fair name of his exalted order of universe sonship. I really regarded Urantia as being among the five or six most fortunate planets in all Satania in that it was to have such an experienced, brilliant, and original mind at the helm of world affairs.I did not then comprehend that Caligastia was insidiously falling in love with himself; I did not then so fully understand the subtleties of personality pride. Presented by a Melchizedek of Nebadon; 66:1.5 (741.7).
At first the Lucifer upheaval appears to be an unmitigated calamity to the system and to the universe. Gradual benefits begin to accrue.
Charge 3:
Devil made me do it. The doctrine of a personal devil on Earth, though it had some foundation in the planetary presence of the traitorous and iniquitous Caligastia, was nevertheless wholly fictitious in its teachings that such a devil could influence the normal human mind against its free and natural choosing. Neither Caligastia nor Daligastia was ever able to oppress mortals or to coerce any normal individual into doing anything against the human will. The free will of man, is supreme in mortal affairs; even the indwelling Thought Adjusters refuse to compel man to think a single thought or to perform a single act against the choosing of man’s own will. 66:8.6
Charge 4:
Contempt for Truth.
Charge 5:
Default / Violation of Trust.
Charge 6:
Accelerate the process of social evolution, bypassing the divine plan. Attempting to achieve planetary advancement independently of the divine plan of progression. Day two of Adam and Eve; 74;3.3.
And now, after their formal installation, Adam and Eve became painfully aware of their planetary isolation. Silent were the familiar broadcasts, and absent were all the circuits of extraplanetary communication. Their Jerusem fellows had gone to worlds running along smoothly with a well-established Planetary Prince and an experienced staff ready to receive them and competent to co-operate with them during their early experience on such worlds.
But on Urantia rebellion had changed everything. Here the Planetary Prince was very much present, and though shorn of most of his power to work evil, he was still able to make the task of Adam and Eve difficult and to some extent hazardous. It was a serious and disillusioned Son and Daughter of Jerusem who walked that night through the Garden under the shining of the full moon, discussing plans for the next day; 74:3.1 (830.4)
Charge 7:
Individual Liberty…
Charge 8:
Ultra-individualistic. In looking back over the long career of Caligastia, we find only one outstanding feature of his conduct that might have challenged attention, he was ultra-individualistic. He was inclined to take sides with almost every party of protest, and he was usually sympathetic with those who gave mild expression to implied criticism.
We detect the early appearance of this to be restless under authority, to mildly resent all forms of supervision. While slightly resentful of senior counsel and somewhat restive under superior authority, nonetheless, whenever a test had come, he had always proved loyal to the universe rulers and obedient to the mandates of the Constellation Fathers. No real fault was ever found in him up to the time of his shameful betrayal of Urantia. [note, this is why I may be a sympathizer, I get this].
With this being said, stated, and known, IS LUCIFER GUILTY OF MISCARRIAGE OF ADAM AND EVES MISSION TO —-, OR WAS THEIR MISSION DOOMED TO FAIL? IFHUMANS HAVE FREE WILL, HOW COULD THE DEVIL BE RESPONSIBLE FOR ACTIONS? THEREFORE, EVE WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR HER ACTIONS. ADAM WAS RESPONSIBLE FOR HIS ACTIONS; 66:8.1.
Charge 9:
Planetary civilization progressed in a fairly normal manner for almost 300,000 years (66:8.3).
Aside from being a life-modification sphere and therefore subject to numerous irregularities and unusual episodes of evolutionary fluctuation, earth progressed very satisfactorily in its planetary career up to the times of Lucifer Rebellion and the concurrent Caligastia betrayal.
All subsequent history is definitely modified by this catastrophic blunder as well as by the later failure of Adam and Eve and Eve to fulfill their planetary mission (end 66:8.3).
Charge 10
No one ever suggested rebellion to Lucifer. The idea of self-assertion in opposition to the will of Michael and to the plans of the Universal Father, as they are represented in Michael, had its origin in his own mind. His relations with the Creator Son had been intimate and always cordial.
At no time prior to the exaltation of his own mind did Lucifer openly express dissatisfaction about the universe administration.
Notwithstanding his silence, for more than one hundred years of standard time the Union of Days on Salvington had been reflectivating to Uversa that all was not at peace in Lucifer’s mind. This information was also communicated to the Creator Son and the Constellation Fathers of Norlatiadek 53:2.3 (602.6)
Throughout this period Lucifer became increasingly critical of the entire plan of universe administration but always professed wholehearted loyalty to the Supreme Rulers.
His first outspoken disloyalty was manifested on the occasion of a visit of Gabriel to Jerusem just a few days before the open proclamation of the Lucifer Declaration of Liberty. Gabriel was so profoundly impressed with the certainty of the impending outbreak that he went direct to Edentia to confer with the Constellation Fathers regarding the measures to be employed in case of open rebellion 53:2.4 (602.7).
It is very difficult to point out the exact cause or causes which finally culminated in the Lucifer rebellion. We are certain of only one thing, and that is: Whatever these first beginnings were, they had their origin in Lucifer’s mind.
There must have been a pride of self that nourished itself to the point of self-deception, so that Lucifer for a time really persuaded himself that his contemplation of rebellion was actually for the good of the system, if not of the universe.
By the time his plans had developed to the point of disillusionment, no doubt he had gone too far for his original and mischief-making pride to permit him to stop.
At some point in this experience he became insincere, and evil evolved into deliberate and willful sin. That this happened is proved by the subsequent conduct of this brilliant executive [?Satan?].
He was long offered opportunity for repentance, but only some of his subordinates ever accepted the proffered mercy 53:2.5 (603.1).
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In the course of this inspection, Satan informed Caligastia of Lucifer’s then proposed, “Declaration of Liberty,” and as we now know, the Prince agreed to betray the planet upon the announcement of the rebellion.
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Through evil and error, he (LUCIFER) embraced sin 53:0.1 (601.1).
The personality soul of Lucifer is terminally annihilated. Terminated.
THE ANTI-CHRIST BEELZEBULB
The anti-matter mergence with aborted fetus, altering of the human DNA structure to 1056665 from [ATCG 10 5 6 5] thus becoming the US President- Anti-Christ, (and female), By her side, —BEELZEBULB—.
SATAN
In the end…similar to Lucifer, personality soul annihilation.
CALIGASTIA
In the end…
“You Caligastia are like your leader, Lucifer, and you have sinfully perpetuated his iniquity. He was a falsifier from the beginning of his self-exaltation because he abodes not in the Truth”.
The universe personalities look with peculiar disdain upon Prince Caligastia because of his premeditated betrayal of TRUST.
CREATOR SON:
(voicing this contempt) )
You Caligastia are like your leader, Lucifer, and you have sinfully perpetuated his iniquity. He was a falsifier from the beginning of his self-exaltation because he abodes not in the Truth”. Yet he was from truth. How is this?
In all administrative work of a local universe, no high trust is deemed more sacred than that reposed in a Planetary Prince who assumes responsibility for the welfare and guidance of the evolving mortals on a newly inhabited world. And of all forms of evil, none are more destructive of personality status than betrayal of trust and disloyalty to one’s confiding friends.
Atoning for the sorrow and confusion brought upon the planet earth by the devil, Caligastia, betrayal of trust and subsequent default of humanity.
BEAT
ACT 4
EXT. EYE OF THE SAHARA -DAY.
“Perfecting Imperfection”.
By losing its freewill, with the biological uplift, humanity evolves from imperfection, to perfection.
GABRIEL
The way of the transgressor is hard;
Within every sin is concealed the seed of its own destruction;
The wages of sin is death.”
What happens to Lucifer’s soul? Is it terminally annihilated? Does he request mercy? Satan? The Devil? What is their fate?
Perfecting Imperfection, by humanity losing its freewill.
Although the upheaval of Rebellion did not seriously interfere with the progress of organic evolution, it did markedly modify the course of social evolution and of spiritual development.
The entire superphysical history of the planet is profoundly influenced by this devastating calamity.
The Lucifer Manifesto, masquerading in the habiliments of liberty, stands forth in the clear light of reason, as a monumental threat, to consummate the theft of personal liberty, and to do it on a scale that has been approached only twice in all the history of Nebadon.Beginning: (Interesting Setting, Superior Position, Intrigue, Mystery)
Since God is eternally and infinitely perfect, he cannot personally know imperfection as his own experience, but he does share the consciousness of all the experience of imperfectness of all the struggling creatures of the evolutionary universes of all the Paradise Creator Sons, We pay the price for His experience.Dramatic Purpose Resolved:
Resolution to Dramatic Purpose, Earthly affairs are no longer disorganized, they are organized. No longer is retardation an issue for the human race. Evolution of a betterment to the species has occurred with the vaxx and DNA resequencing. No longer is our world irregular nor checkered, although that is a marker in our past, known as history.
The main dramatic purpose of this story is to serve as a cautionary tale to human history and it potential future, should its past not be headed.Ultimate Expression
GABRIEL
In short, what God had given men and angels, Lucifer would have taken away from them, that is, the divine privilege of participating in the creation of their own destinies, and of the destiny of this local system of inhabited worlds.
The Betrayal of Trust being one of the consequences of the default of the Luciferin rebellion, results in the miscarriage of modern-day humanity.We await the flashing broadcast that will deprive these traitors of personality existence. We anticipate the verdict of Uversa will be announced by the executionary broadcast which will affect the annihilation of these interned rebels. Then will you look for their places, but they shall not be found.
Constellation Spiritual ban results from the rebellion.
GABRIEL
“And they who know you among the worlds will be astonished at you; you have been a terror, but never shall you be any more.” And thus shall all of these unworthy traitors “become as though they had not been.”Norlatiadek- UrantiaEarth is commonly referred to as world/planet 606 of Satania, in Constellation Norlatiadek of Nebadon; meaning the six hundred sixth inhabited world in the local system of Satania, situated in the constellation of Norlatiadek, one of the one hundred constellations of the local universe of Nebadon.
GABRIEL
You should not forget that for two-hundred thousand years all the worlds of Satania have rested under the spiritual ban of Norlatiadek in consequence of the Lucifer rebellion. And it will require age upon age to retrieve the resultant handicaps of sin and secession.Your world still continues to pursue an irregular and checkered career as a result of the double tragedy of a rebellious PLANETARY PRINCE and a defaulting Material Son (Adam).
Even the bestowal of Christ Michael on Urantia did not immediately set aside the temporal consequences of these serious blunders in the earlier administration of the world.
Constellations being the primary divisions of a local universe, their rulers link the local systems of inhabited worlds to the central administration of the local universe on Salvington and by reflectivity to the super administration of the Ancients of Days on Uversa.
BEAT.
Disruption of the Teaching Regime.
Sin on Urantia did very little to delay biologic evolution, but it did operate to deprive the mortal races of the full benefit of the Adamic inheritance.
Sin enormously retards intellectual development, moral growth, social progress, and mass spiritual attainment.
But Sin does not prevent the highest spiritual achievement by any individual who chooses to know God and sincerely do his divine will- freewill of choice.
And it is this freewill of choice that is in danger of being taken.
Evil and Sin visit their consequences in material and social realms and may sometimes even retard spiritual progress on certain levels of universe reality, but never does the sin of any being rob another of the realization of the divine right of personality survival.
Freewill of humanity is removed. This is for the soul of America. Literally, for the freewill of their souls!
Success lives on through the anti-matter mergence with aborted fetus, altering of the human DNA structure to 1056665 from [ATCG 10 5 6 5].Triggering The Jews.
I know thy works, and tribulation, and poverty, (but thou art rich) and I know the blasphemy of them which say they are Jews, and are not, but are the synagogue of Satan.
Behold, I will make them of the synagogue of Satan, which say they are Jews, and are not, but do lie; behold, I will make them to come and worship before thy feet, and to know that I have loved thee.
-Revelation 2:9 and 3:9.
BEAT.Middle: (Anticipation, Twist)
In this manner, as well as through the contacts of the divine presence, the Universal Father actually participates in the experience with immaturity and imperfection in the evolving career of every moral being of the entire universe.Ending: (Character, Twist, Anticipation)
By losing its freewill, humanity evolves from imperfection, to perfection, with the biological uplift. There is also a judgment against humanity, killing Christ, Adam and Eve miscarriage, generations of willful sin.
Human limitations, potential evil, are not a part of the divine nature, but mortal experience with evil and all man’s relations thereto are most certainly a part of God’s ever-expanding self-realization in the children of time—creatures of moral responsibility who have been created or evolved by every Creator Son going out from Paradise.
BEAT
EXT. WASHINGTON DC –NIGHT
Year 2033…
A FULL MOON casts stark contrast of deep dark shadows and near daytime brightness over the first city ever designed before built. The obelisk creates a time shadow of —-o’clock over the National Mall pointing towards the white house. All is now in place.Beginning: (Big Picture, Twist, Anticipation)
Year 2033…
“In all the administrative work of a local universe, no high trust is deemed more sacred than that reposed in a Planetary Prince, who assumes responsibility for the welfare and guidance of the evolving mortals on a newly inhabited world.”
The Anti-Christ is the President of the USA. Born through the particle acceleration technology, merged with aborted fetuses of a woman with DNA structure 1056665, from covid-War-Bride, Indigos ex-girlfriend.
This is for the soul of America, and the world- Literally, for the freewill of their souls!
The emblematic Lucifer flag with a banner of white with one Red Circle, in the center of which a Black Solid Circle appears, The new corporate logo is raised at 1600 Penn Ave.Middle: (Uncomfortable Moment, External Dilemma, Uncertainty)
The new currency of DNA infused demonic-devil-dollars, to coincide with the Anti-Christ being the president of the US replaces the USD. $6 demon-itization digital bill and .06 cent digital coin, The Devil’s Digital Currency.
DNA altered humans have merged with ai cybernetic interface -cyborg.Ending: (Reveal, Surprise, Mystery-Suspense)
“The Devil’s child will rise from the world of politics”.Closing Shot…
Our world no longer continues to pursue an irregular and checkered career as a result of the double tragedy of a rebellious PLANETARY PRINCE and a defaulting Material Son (Adam).
AI is the required upgrade for humanity to continue its existence. That upgrade is connected to the grid, on planet and off-planet, they thought of everything. Upgrade or die. Get the vaxx (Satan Sauce), or die.
With this, the Lucifer flag is raised, and humanity as we currently know it-DIES. Along with it, its freewill.
On the nonbreathing worlds the animal species are radically unlike those found on the atmospheric planets. The nonbreathing plan of life varies from the technique of existence on an atmospheric world; even in survival their peoples differ, being candidates for Spirit fusion.
You would be more than interested in the planetary conduct of this type of mortal because such a race of beings inhabits a sphere in close proximity to UrantiaEarth.CUE MUSIC INSTRUMENTAL:
MARVIN GAYE “WHAT’S GOING ON”.Hope/Fear:
A cautionary tale about fatherhood abandonment and freewill.ROLL END CREDITS.
FADE TO BLACK.
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