Lesson 9

[Kristina Zill]

KZ presents non-stop intrigue

I feel like my pilot isn’t strong enough, so rather than make every line in the bible as intriguing as possible, I’m skipping ahead to Module 3, and working on enhancing the inciting incident.

[Cat Miggs]

Cat Miggs Presents Non-Stop Intrigue

What I learned doing this assignment is going back and getting more focused.

Pitch Deck- I went over each section and turned bullet points into paragraphs using the setups and payoffs to form them.

[Chanda Haynes]

Chanda Haynes Presents Non-Stop Intrigue

What I learned doing this assignment is that there will always be something to edit, but you have to have a stopping point and be satisfied with it. There were also some unnecessary lines that I removed. I think it made the bible clearer.

I removed some repetitive lines and also made sure that everything in the episode outlines was reflected in my episode summaries. Which then eliminated the need to have both the outline and the summary. So I removed the episode outlines. I had to make some changes to make sure the character descriptions matched what was in the story summary. So this assignment helped to make the story align. Increased the consistency of the bible.

I also went ahead with the next assignment and added the riveting episode titles. It was easy to go ahead and do it while reading through the episode summaries.

• This reply was modified 1 year, 10 months ago by  Chanda Haynes.