Lesson 9

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Lesson 9 assignments here.

[Kimbal Thompson]

Kimbal Thompson BWAI M1, L9 Inviting Obsession Through Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is how big and little picture open loops are used to create obsession throughout a series.

ASSIGNMENT 1

1. Think about the Diplomat. Make a list of the Big Picture open loops that were established early in the season.

· Who attacked th British Aircraft Carrier?

· Will Kate succeed as the Ambassador to England?

· Why does Kate want to go to Kabul?

· Will Kate become Vice President?

· Will others continue refer to Kate as Ambassador rather than referring to Hal as such?

· Why did Kate check to see if sheets were on the Guestroom bed?

· Will Hal let Kate perform her responsibilities without him?

· Will Hal get a car in England?

· Can Kate break the protocol?

· Did Hal manipulate Kates’s meetings?

· Can the U.S. Secretary of State perform?

· Why is the President at odds with his Secretary of State?

· Why is Kate being kept away from Meg?

· Will the aerial photo of the Iranian boat cause Gannon to react publicly?

· Will Gannon be able to get rid of Gannon?

· Will Hal be gone soon?

· Will Kate take Hal back?

· Does Hal want Kate to become VP?

· Who is kidnapping Hal?

2. Go back and watch the pilot again. As you do, notice how many open loops are being used to create the need to see future episodes. At least those above.

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ASSIGNMENT 2:

1. Use this list to brainstorm big picture open loops for your first season that you will use to keep the audience captivated.

GOALS:

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[Etta Worthington]

Etta’s Big picture Loops Assignment 2

What I learned from this assignment is that considering the Open Loops is helping me brainstorm my characters from a different angle and changing a bit of what I thought the show was going to be,

Big Picture Loops for my as yet Untitled Show

Goals: Lydia aims to introduce environmentally friendly practices within the fracking company, but faces opposition from other board members.

Consequences: Lydia adopts and alter ego and a disguise to keep up her environmental activism, but alsways risks being discovered.

Solving Problems: Lydia struggles to keep her Quaker values intact while navigating the corporate world, leading to quirky ethical dilemmas.

Relationships

• In peril: Lydia’s attempts to bond with Martez result in hilariously awkward misunderstandings, escalating their conflict in ridiculous ways.

• New relationships: Angela becomes an unlikely confidante, providing offbeat advice that leads to comedic situations.

• Conflict inside relationships: Alonzo’s tech-savviness clashes with Lydia’s Luddite tendencies, leading to quirky family disputes.

• Changing relationships: Lydia’s interactions with the Quaker community involve humorous attempts to reconcile her corporate role with her spiritual values.

Danger: Lydia’s well-intentioned but misguided actions frequently get her in trouble one way or another

[Eclipse Neilson]

Eclipse Neilson Big Picture Open Loops

What I’ve learn that the more detail I give AI the better the answers that are going down the path I am choosing. Ido admit at times it is over whelming ,even though I know it will all fall into place.

ASSIGNMENT 1

1. Think about your Example Show. Make a list of the Big Picture open loops that were established early in the season.
2. All the different relationships that keep returning in the episodes.
3. The drug habit and how she attempts to resolve it.
4. Her unfolding ability to feel and express feelings that comes to dramatic closure at the end.

ASSIGNMENT 2:

1. Use this list to brainstorm big picture open loops for your first season that you will use to keep the audience captivated.

GOALS:

• New goals? Save the forest
• Discover her origins through her time travel, where clues are revealed.
• Her relationships with Winthrop, Wing and the old One. Her deepest feelings are for Wing who is only a ghostly illusion of a past life .clues will be revealed as time goes on.
• Goals related to the big picture? Ultimately she must heal her past and we get a glimpse of her future as we see her speaking to a child of war in the future.
• Crushed goals? Winthrop her beloved adopted father betrays her capolting her to the losses in life and one reveled in the beginning that is Winthrop in another life time.
• Competition / conflict around goals?

CONSEQUENCES:

• Are they going to be caught? She almost looses the forest from Winthrop’s betrayal.
• Problems created from past actions?
• Good plans gone wrong? She believes Winthrop her adopted father is her only adult on earth who has loved her but must suffer through the moment of betrayal and find her power as a young healer by finding a way to heal is grieving shame.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

• What is the major problem for this character? She is different and has mystical psychic gifts that she can not deny and she is here with a destiny to fulfill to help save humanity.
• What are they trying to solve? Help save the soul of humanity and earth.
• Major change imposed on character? She grows up and must harness her rage as power.
• Previous solutions cause new problems?

RELATIONSHIPS:

• Relationships in peril?
• New relationships forming? The friends in her village who are able to let the mystical beings in the forest help them.
• Conflict inside relationships? She is in love with Wing but he is keeping a big secret from her.
• Relationships changing? She must let go of Wing hoping he will return to earth some how in the future for her- but how will that manifest.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

• Can they survive X? Will the forest and the mystical ones along with the trees and creature be saved?
• Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions?
• Who else is pulled into their danger?
• Internal dangers – Robyn’s deep despair needing to be healed.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 9: Inviting Obsession Through Open Loops

Sylvia’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is…What’s strange is that I asked AI for more specifics and it gave me more generalities. I love this “loops” thing. I must delve into it more. This is a great and eye opening assignment.

Assignment 1 Sample Show:

Big Open Loops:

How will she survive? Will she get adopted? What exactly happened to her mom? Why is the orphan staff such psychos? What’s will the drugs? Will she get addicted? Her buddy, is she her friend or is she her foe? What’s with the chess? How does she become so great at it? Will she understand boys/girls romantic relationships? Will be compromise herself from her curiosity and get herself “in trouble”?

Assignment 2 My show:

I’m writing a TV Series that is [Format/Genre] about [Concept] and [Conflict] with [Lead Characters]. Can you generate [Open Loops] and setups that could play out over the course of Season

1. Definition of “Open Loops”: Questions that can only be answered in future episodes. An open loop is a rhetorical device to instill curiosity by creating anticipation for what will come next.

Open Loops opportunities:

GOALS: • New goals? • Goals related to the big picture? • Crushed goals? • Competition / conflict around goals?

CONSEQUENCES: • Are they going to be caught? • Problems created from past actions? • Good plans gone wrong?

SOLVING PROBLEMS: • What is the major problem for this character? • What are they trying to solve? • Major change imposed on character? • Previous solutions cause new problems?

RELATIONSHIPS: • Relationships in peril? • New relationships forming? • Conflict inside relationships? • Relationships changing?

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: • Can they survive X? • Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions? • Who else is pulled into their danger? • Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

Format/Genre = one hour/dramedy

Concept / Conflict=In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past. Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

Lead Characters =Emily the mother and her daughter Abigail

AI:

**Open Loops Opportunities:**

**GOALS:**

1. New Goals: Abigail starts a charity project but faces unexpected challenges.

2. Big Picture Goals: Emily aims to expose a corrupt hospital executive.

3. Crushed Goals: Abigail’s attempt to reconnect with her mother faces setbacks.

4. Competition/Conflict: A rival philanthropist challenges Emily’s fundraising efforts.

**CONSEQUENCES:**

1. Caught: Abigail risks exposure when digging into the hospital’s secrets.

2. Past Actions Problems: Emily’s past cover-ups lead to a mysterious threat.

3. Plans Gone Wrong: A well-intentioned gala to save the hospital creates chaos.

**SOLVING PROBLEMS:**

1. Major Problem: Emily discovers a child’s ghost seeking justice in the hospital.

2. Trying to Solve: Abigail investigates the ghostly presence, unveiling more secrets.

3. Imposed Change: Hospital management changes, affecting Emily’s charity events.

4. New Problems: Solutions to past mysteries reveal a more significant conspiracy.

**RELATIONSHIPS:**

1. Relationships in Peril: Abigail’s investigation strains her bond with Emily.

2. New Relationships: Emily befriends a nurse with ties to the hospital’s secrets.

3. Conflict Inside Relationships: Gossip-loving friends betray Emily for personal gain.

4. Changing Relationships: Abigail learns a shocking truth about her father.

**DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:**

1. Survival: Emily faces a life-threatening situation during a charity event.

2. Dangerous Decisions: Abigail risks her safety to expose the hospital conspiracy.

3. Pulled Into Danger: Emily’s closest friend becomes entangled in the hospital secrets.

4. Internal Dangers: Abigail struggles with the emotional toll of her discoveries.

ME: Please answer again with more specifics

AI:

**Open Loops Opportunities:**

**GOALS:**

1. New Goals: Abigail launches a charity initiative for pediatric patients.

2. Big Picture Goals: Emily aims to expose financial misconduct within the hospital.

3. Crushed Goals: Abigail’s attempt to reunite at a gala gets disrupted.

4. Competition/Conflict: A rival philanthropist challenges Emily’s fundraising supremacy.

**CONSEQUENCES:**

1. Caught: Abigail’s snooping may attract the attention of hospital authorities.

2. Past Actions Problems: Emily’s cover-ups resurface, jeopardizing her reputation.

3. Plans Gone Wrong: A planned gala to reveal secrets takes an unexpected turn.

**SOLVING PROBLEMS:**

1. Major Problem: Emily encounters a ghost seeking justice for a deceased child.

2. Trying to Solve: Abigail investigates the mysterious ghostly presence.

3. Imposed Change: New hospital management disrupts Emily’s charity plans.

4. New Problems: Resolving past mysteries exposes a more significant conspiracy.

**RELATIONSHIPS:**

1. Relationships in Peril: Abigail’s investigation strains her relationship with Emily.

2. New Relationships: Emily befriends a nurse connected to hospital secrets.

3. Conflict Inside Relationships: Gossip-loving friends betray Emily for personal gain.

4. Changing Relationships: Abigail discovers a shocking truth about her father.

**DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:**

1. Survival: Emily faces life-threatening danger during a high-profile charity event.

2. Dangerous Decisions: Abigail risks personal safety to expose the hospital conspiracy.

3. Pulled Into Danger: Emily’s closest friend becomes entangled in hospital secrets.

4. Internal Dangers: Abigail battles emotional turmoil from her shocking discoveries.

[Patricia Semler]

Pat’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is this method of puzzle solving isn’t working for me. I had to lay out the basics of my pilot episode to have some idea of where this story is going. The suggestions I’m getting from AI aren’t helping all that much. I see a lot of repetition and blasé character traits that wouldn’t sustain this kind of writing. I’m working on it.

ASSIGNMENT 1

1. Think about your Example Show. Make a list of the Big Picture open loops that were established early in the season.

2. Go back and watch the pilot again. As you do, notice how many open loops are being used to create the need to see future episodes.

Wednesday loops –

There’s a monster in town what is it, how do we catch it?

Wednesday is put in Nevermore as a last resort. She wants out but an attempt on her life and rescue by the Hyde intrigue her enough to dig into what’s going on.

Several introductions are made – Bianca, Xavier, Enid, Miss Thornhill. Who will become an ally and who an opponent?

The origin of the town itself has a dark side to its history.

The Sheriff dearly wants to arrest Gomez for a murder back when he was a student at Nevermore.

ASSIGNMENT 2:

1. Use this list to brainstorm big picture open loops for your first season that you will use to keep the audience captivated.

GOALS:

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[Jennifer Miller]

Miller’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is that using open loops to create mysteries/questions about the future to create obsession – a need to know the answer.

Big Picture Loops:

Will Lydecker kill Phoebe?

Will Phoebe bring destruction to the town and pack?

Will Phoebe be killed?

Will Phoebe find her mother?

Will she save Helena?

Will she transform?

Will she solve the murders?

Make friends and get out of her own way? What will come of her relationship with Lucas, Dolly, Patsy?

What’s the story of her parents past?

How will Dolly capture and hunt Phoebe?

Will Phoebe survive the pack’s initiation ceremony?

Wednesday Open Loops – who tried to kill her, why did the monster save her, will she bring destruction to the school as prophesied, is her father a murderer, and who and why is the monster killing/purpose?

[Michelle Gaza]

LESSON 9: Inviting Obsession Through Open Loops

MR ROBOT:

GOALS:

• Stop evil and corrupt individuals using Elliot’s hacking skills…and possibly even bring Evil Corp down!

– Deal with his unbearable loneliness

• Heal emotionally from the traumas of losing his Dad and from having a mother who was so severely un-attuned to his needs.

– figure out what this f-society thing is all about

• Maybe not a goal so much as a fantasy – to have a romantic relationship with Angela

– To help Krista, his therapist, even though she thinks she’s supposed to help him

CONSEQUENCES:

– Being followed, Paranoia, and actually being kidnapped by E-Corp Goons.

– Elliot is anti-social because he has not met his goals of healing emotionally or finding a romantic partner in a healthy stable relationship and so he stays stuck in loneliness

• He hates working at Allsafe but is not functional enough or healthy enough to pursue something else.

– What will be the consequences of taking Terry Colby down?

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

• E-Corp is a serious problem that can potentially be solved with hacking and cyberattacks.

• wants vengeance for his father’s death and Angela’s mom’s death and wants to bring E=Corp down

– Ddos attack on E-Corp and framing Terry Colby opens up more problems. E-corp is thinking about leaving Allsafe and E-corp is 80% of their business.

RELATIONSHIPS:

• Elliot is in love with Angela, and even though she is dating Ollie, there is a moment in the pilot when Elliot and Angela make-up (after she is angry at him for trying to help her in the meeting with E-Corp) when they embrace and then look in each other’s eyes for a long time before being interrupted by the news of Terry Colby’s arrest.

• Conflict with Angela cause Elliot hates Ollie

• Conflict in relationship with therapist Krista since he doesn’t think she can help him…he sees her as one of the sheep he detests, but also sees that she cares so he gives her a bit more empathy…Krista thinks she is there to help him but meanwhile he is trying to help her by secretly getting “Michael Hansen”, he jerk of a boyfriend, out of her life.

• He HIDES from other people and exacerbates his loneliness and delusions

– he won’t allow people to touch him but desperately needs touch

-Who is Mr Robot? Can he trust him?

– Elliot breaks the 4th wall and speaks to the audience like we are an imaginary friend, or some non-corporeal witness to his life….who does he think we (the audience) actually are? Is this part of his delusion or is this a narrator voice situation?

DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:

• Elliot is risking his freedom and possibly his life if he is discovered; powerful and evil people will want to stop him;

• Internal danger – his loneliness fuels his morphine addiction, which is always on the brink of getting out-of-control

– Internal danger – delusions

• Is pulled into f-society which brings him into extremely risky behavior

– Can he trust MR ROBOT? Why is Mr Robot following him? What dangers and challenges will Mr Robot bring to Elliot’s life?

MY STORY:

GOALS:

New goals?

-Stop Dr Jacobs from turning humanity into monkeys and keeping them forever slaves.

Goals related to the big picture?

-Awaken Humanity before the universal timeline collapse when the galactic gate will close and those who don’t wake up will be in slavery for 26,000 years.

Crushed goals?

-Humans turning into monkeys from the poison vaccine crushes the Overtakers’ goal to awaken humanity before the Galactic Gateway closing

Competition / conflict around goals?

-Dr Jacobs wants to keep people as monkeys, The Overtakers and The Three Sisters want to free humanity

-The politicians and government officials and businesspeople and more who were bribed by Dr Jacobs want to keep the vaccines going regardless of consequences

CONSEQUENCES:

Are they going to be caught?

• Dr Jacobs has access to a lot of money and influence. He could hurt anyone in The Overtakers if he figures out what they are doing.
• If government officials discover them and realize they didn’t get the jab, they could be captured, arrested, and forced to take the jab

Problems created from past actions?

• The Three Sisters would visit Delphine as a child, and Delphine thought that was just her “mental illness” but now that she has met them in real life, the sisters have to distract her so she doesn’t know who they are

Good plans gone wrong?

-Probably something with exposing Dr Jacobs goes wrong.

-Dr Jacobs plan goes wrong when he underestimates Delphine, Jeriko, The Three Sisters, and the power and determination of The Overtakers

-Dr Jacobs plan also gets shaken up when The King of China tries to start his own side hustle and cut in on Dr Jacobs power and profits

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

What is the major problem for this character?

-Delphine needs to integrate her internal identity splits. She needs to regain her power and be her true self. And she needs to do this before the galactic gateway closes or she will be another slave to Dr Jacobs.

-The Overtakers generally have a major problem of getting the monkeys to awaken when the monkeys don’t think there is any problem at all

What are they trying to solve?

-How to return the monkeys to their original human form and consciousness

Major change imposed on character?

-Delphine won’t be able to stay friends with her family and friends of the family because most of them became monkeys, and the ones that did not are being paid to pretend there isn’t a problem.

Previous solutions cause new problems?

-Delphine dealt with her R.I.D. diagnosis by cutting off Parts of herself. Now she needs to reclaim those Parts in order to empower herself to be free from Dr Jacobs and his evil schemes, and to help the monkeys get free as well

RELATIONSHIPS:

Relationships in peril?

-Delphine’s relationship with her mother, and most of her family, and her family’s social network are destroyed once she wakes up

New relationships forming?

-Delphine forms a relationship with “Skywalker” online, who she will eventually discover is Jeriko, the famous rapper who disappeared mysteriously and is presumed dead

Conflict inside relationships?

-Delphine and Jeriko want to be together but they are jealous of each other’s other relationships, and sometimes disagree on the direction and means to bring The Overtakers to success.

-Also, Jeriko knows who Dr Jacobs really is, and that Delphine is going to have to undergo her timeline collapse, but he has to let her see for herself and resist the constant temptation to tell her everything.

-The Three Sisters know what Dr Jacobs is doing, and they know they are the “Spirit Guides” that visited Delphine when she was a child, but they can’t let her know this before her timeline collapse.

Relationships changing?

-When Delphine discovers that “Skywalker”, her online crush, is actually the Jeriko, it changes everything. She goes through some trust issues and is frustrated that he didn’t tell her who he was, even though he explains it was for everyone’s safety.

-Delphine’s relationship with her mother changes as she awakens and realizes how her mother manipulated her for her mother’s career success, and not for Delphine’s benefit or health.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

Can they survive Dr Jacobs scheme?

-Will The Overtakers be captured, exposed, or forced to become monkeys?

-Will Dr Jacobs harm Delphine? Will Delphine successfully manipulate Dr Jacobs, or will he mind-control her to be his puppet?

Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions?

-Delphine volunteers to manipulate and seduce Dr Jacobs like Scheherazade,

Who else is pulled into their danger?

-Mayor Simone Carter gets pulled into danger when she realizes Dr Jacobs’ plan and has to keep a mask of ignorance while she works to free people from his grips.

Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

-Jeriko has to fight his inner demons from childhood abuse

-Delphine has to fight her inner demons regarding the betrayals and confusions from childhood when she realizes she was completely manipulated for the gains of others

-The Masses of Monkeys are their own worst enemies because their inner fears and cowardice causes them to behave like sheep and keeps them in line with the Dr Jacobs’ horrible plans for them

[Jennifer Quintenz-Berry]

Jenn’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment: Some of these things are baked into the idea, but some are interesting mysteries to add intrigue to the story. I tried asking GPT a few different times, and in this instance, it gave better answers when I wasn’t adding to previous thread.

Big Picture Open Loops that could be in the pilot:

· Goals related to the big picture: Ash discovers a mysterious connection between the bomber and a shadowy stochastic terrorist with a hidden agenda.

· Competition/conflict around goals: Detective Byron intensifies his efforts to undermine Ash’s investigation, competing for the open Lieutenant position and seeking to discredit her in the eyes of their superiors.

· Problems created from past actions: Ash’s previous confrontation with Dr. Harper comes back to haunt her as he seeks revenge and uses his influence to turn others against her.

· Previous solutions cause new problems: Ash’s decision to trust Dr. Harper with sensitive information about the case results in unexpected consequences, endangering their fragile alliance.

· Will Ash figure out who supplied the plans for the bombing?

· Will Ash learn the true identity of Max before he incites more violence?

· Can Lessa survive being targeted and doxxed by the incels (after which she panics and confesses to Ash about her husband)?

· Will Ash get the lieutenant position (and get away from her asshole partner)?

· Will Joey be able to successfully infiltrate the violent incel sub-group without being discovered?

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[Abdul Rahim]

Abdul. Sample show. Scandal Big Picture Open Loops

1) What is a gladiator in a suit?

2) Will Steven propose to his girlfriend?

3) Who killed Lieutenant Sully Saint James girlfriend?

4) Will Steven and Alicia see each other again?

5) What more evidence could Olivia’s team bring forth to prove Sully’s innocence?

6) Will Olivia start dating anyone?

7) What is the story of every person on Olivia’s team?

8) Do Abby have feelings for Steven and is she jealous of his and his girlfriends relationship?

9) Will the President and Olivia continue to commit adultery?

10) Why does Olivia put so mush attention and trust in her gut feelings?

11) How did Olivia get in such a deep relationship with the President?

12) Why is it a big deal that Olivia doesn’t cry nor want any of her associates to cry?

13) What secret is Olivia living with for a long period of time?

14) Does Amanda Tanner come forward and tell the world about her adulterated activities with the President?

[Abdul Rahim]

Abdul. Big Picture Open Loops

The Cafe:

What I learned doing this assignment is how important these big picture open loops are. They will keep you coming back again and again and again. I enjoyed this process because it opened my mind to what the capabilities are with my show.

Act 1:

Goals:

• Alex decides to expand the cafe’s influence by hosting live events, aiming to bring in new patrons and generate more stories for Oliver to use in his writing.
• Oliver’s goal is to overcome his writer’s block and find a way to ethically use the patrons’ stories without violating their trust.

Consequences:

• The cafe’s popularity grows, attracting the attention of a local business tycoon who sees it as a threat to his own establishments.
• Oliver’s writing gains recognition, but one of the patrons discovers the unauthorized use of their story, leading to a potential scandal.

Solving Problems:

• Alex’s major problem is controlling his methuselah gene, as he starts experiencing unpredictable bursts of enhanced abilities.
• Amelia is determined to unravel the mystery behind Alex’s behavior and its connection to the experiment she conducted.

Relationships:

• Alex and Evelyn’s relationship becomes more strained as Evelyn senses Alex’s secret, leading to a confrontation.
• Oliver develops a romantic interest in a regular patron, complicating his use of their personal stories for his writing.

Dangers:

• The cafe becomes a target for vandalism orchestrated by the business tycoon, putting everyone’s safety at risk.
• Alex’s enhanced abilities start to attract the attention of a mysterious organization interested in people with unique genetic traits.

Act 2:

Goals:

• Alex seeks out a specialist to help him understand and control his methuselah gene.
• Oliver faces a moral dilemma when a famous author offers to collaborate with him, but the collaboration involves exploiting the cafe’s patrons.

Consequences:

• The specialist reveals the potential dangers of Alex’s gene, linking it to a series of unexplained incidents throughout history.
• The collaboration with the famous author leads to public backlash, threatening the cafe’s reputation.

Solving Problems:

• Alex’s attempts to control his gene result in unintended consequences, putting the cafe and its patrons in greater danger.
• Amelia discovers that her experiment on Alex might have triggered the manifestation of his abilities.

Relationships:

• Evelyn becomes a confidante for a troubled patron, blurring the lines between her role as a counselor and her personal life.
• Tensions rise between Oliver and the cafe patrons as they learn about his collaboration with the famous author.

Dangers:

• The mysterious organization intensifies its efforts to recruit Alex, forcing him to go on the run to protect himself and those around him.
• Amelia’s investigation puts her at odds with the organization, making her a target as well.

Act 3:

Goals:

• Alex, now in hiding, searches for answers about the origins of the methuselah gene and how to neutralize its effects.
• Oliver, feeling guilty about the scandal, tries to make amends with the patrons and salvage his reputation as a writer.

Consequences:

• Alex discovers a secret society connected to the methuselah gene, and their motives are not entirely clear.
• The cafe patrons, feeling betrayed by Oliver, form alliances to expose the truth behind his writing and its impact on their lives.

Solving Problems:

• Alex’s investigation into the secret society uncovers a potential ally with knowledge about controlling the gene, but their motives are questionable.
• Amelia faces a crisis of conscience as she grapples with the ethical implications of her experiment on Alex.

Relationships:

• Evelyn’s role as a counselor becomes even more vital as the cafe patrons navigate the fallout from Oliver’s actions.
• The strained relationship between Alex and Evelyn takes an unexpected turn as they find themselves united against a common threat.

Dangers:

• The secret society targets Alex, Oliver, and Amelia, viewing them as obstacles to their agenda.
• The cafe’s reputation is irreparably damaged, and the patrons face personal and professional consequences from the revelations in Oliver’s writing.

(Continued…)

Act 4:

Goals:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia form an uneasy alliance to confront the secret society and protect themselves and the cafe patrons.
• The cafe patrons, now more interconnected than ever, strive to rebuild trust and overcome the challenges exposed by Oliver’s actions.

Consequences:

• The secret society launches a coordinated attack on the cafe, revealing their true intentions and the potential global impact of the methuselah gene.
• The patrons’ efforts to rebuild trust face setbacks as old conflicts and secrets resurface.

Solving Problems:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia unlock the true potential of the methuselah gene, discovering that it can be used to benefit humanity if controlled.
• The patrons come together to confront their own demons, finding strength in their shared experiences and forming a resilient community.

Relationships:

• Alex and Evelyn’s relationship undergoes a transformation as they rediscover their connection amid the chaos caused by the secret society.
• Oliver seeks redemption by using his writing to shed light on the ethical implications of genetic experimentation and the importance of personal responsibility.

Dangers:

• The secret society’s influence reaches unexpected levels, with powerful individuals and government agencies becoming entangled in their plans.
• The cafe becomes a battleground, and the patrons must face physical and emotional dangers to protect the newfound unity they’ve forged.

Act 5:

Goals:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia, armed with the knowledge of the methuselah gene’s potential, decide to confront the secret society head-on and expose their activities to the world.
• The cafe patrons, now a tight-knit community, strive to rebuild the cafe and its reputation, turning it into a symbol of resilience and shared humanity.

Consequences:

• The confrontation with the secret society results in a revelation that challenges the characters’ understanding of morality, raising the question of whether the ends justify the means.
• The cafe patrons, having faced their own demons, become beacons of inspiration for others dealing with personal struggles.

Solving Problems:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia must make difficult choices as they navigate the ethical dilemmas posed by the methuselah gene and the potential consequences of their actions.
• The cafe patrons, through their collective strength, turn the negative impact of Oliver’s writing into an opportunity for growth and connection.

Relationships:

• The relationships among the characters evolve as they confront the moral complexities of their actions, leading to both reconciliation and separation.
• The cafe becomes a symbol of hope and resilience, drawing in new patrons who are inspired by the stories of overcoming adversity.

Dangers:

• The secret society, now exposed, resorts to desperate measures to protect their agenda, putting the characters and the cafe in greater danger than ever before.
• The consequences of the characters’ actions reverberate globally, raising questions about the potential misuse of genetic advancements and the responsibility that comes with extraordinary abilities.

[Phyllis Strong]

Phyllis’ Open Loops

What I learned from this assignment was that I could ask ChatGPT to redo Open Loop Opportunities, assuming things were different from what AI assumed, and it would redo the entire section without my redoing the prompt.

Assignment 1:

Sample Show: The Walking Dead

Open Loops:

· Will Rick survive?

· Will Rick’s wife and son survive?

· Will the other characters survive?

· Will Rick find out about Lori and Shane’s affair?

· Who will win out for control of the group?

· Will Shane be able to give up pining for Lori and Carl?

· Will Lori’s marriage to Rick stay intact?

· Will the group find a safe haven, even if it’s only temporary?

· Will Rick be able to reach Morgan again?

· Is Merle alive or dead?

· Is Sophie alive or dead?

· Does the CDC have a cure for the zombie plague?

· Who will be the first characters to die?

· How did this zombie plague start (who was patient zero)?

Assignment 2

Open Loops Opportunities for Diana Sagraves:

GOALS:

1. New goals?

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1. Diana sets out to prove the success of her consciousness transfer experiment publicly, aiming to gain recognition and respect within the scientific community for her groundbreaking achievement.

2. Goals related to the big picture?

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2. Diana’s goals extend beyond personal success as she envisions transforming her experiment into a widely accepted and commercialized procedure, altering the landscape of aging and consciousness preservation.

3. Crushed goals?

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3. Unexpected challenges arise as Diana’s dream of widespread acceptance faces opposition from skeptics and ethical concerns, threatening to crush her ambition of revolutionizing the way society views consciousness and aging.

4. Competition/conflict around goals?

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4. Diana encounters resistance from rival scientists, skeptical colleagues, and ethical committees, leading to a fierce competition over the legitimacy and acceptance of her experiment, creating a high-stakes conflict with potential consequences for her scientific legacy.

CONSEQUENCES:

1. Are they going to be
   caught?

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1. Diana faces the looming possibility of her experiment’s side effects becoming public knowledge, putting her scientific reputation on the line and risking public outrage over the unforeseen consequences of consciousness transfer.

2. Problems created from past actions?

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2. The experimental nature of Diana’s consciousness transfer results in unforeseen challenges, creating problems that she must navigate, including potential backlash from the scientific community, ethical dilemmas, and the need to address the unexpected side effects.

3. Good plans gone wrong?

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3. Diana’s well-intentioned plan to revolutionize consciousness transfer takes a perilous turn as the side effects emerge, threatening to derail not only her scientific ambitions but also the lives of those involved in the experiment.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

1. What is the major problem
   for this character?

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1. Diana grapples with the major problem of salvaging her scientific reputation and mitigating the unintended consequences of her experiment, requiring her to find solutions that address the ethical, scientific, and personal dimensions of the unfolding crisis.

2. What are they trying to solve?

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2. Diana endeavors to solve the multifaceted problems arising from the experiment’s side effects, delving into the scientific complexities, ethical quandaries, and the challenge of managing public perception, all while striving to maintain the integrity of her groundbreaking work.

3. Major change imposed on character?

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3. A major change is imposed on Diana as she navigates the fallout from the experiment’s side effects, necessitating a shift in focus from scientific triumph to crisis management, ethics reassessment, and the potential redefinition of her goals and legacy.

RELATIONSHIPS:

1. Relationships in peril?

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1. Diana’s professional relationships are in peril as the scientific community questions the safety and legitimacy of her experiment, jeopardizing her standing among colleagues and mentors.

2. New relationships forming?

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2. Diana forms unexpected alliances with other scientists and researchers who, intrigued by the potential of her experiment, offer support and collaboration to address the challenges and consequences it presents.

3. Conflict inside relationships?

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3. Conflict arises within Diana’s relationships as colleagues and collaborators question the ethical implications of her experiment, testing the bonds of trust and alliance that were once built on scientific curiosity.

4. Relationships changing?

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4. Diana’s relationships undergo profound changes as she grapples with the fallout from her experiment, with some allies becoming critics and others evolving into unexpected allies, creating a dynamic shift in her professional network.

DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:

1. Can they survive X?

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1. Diana faces the existential threat of losing her standing in the scientific community, risking not only her career but also the potential widespread adoption of her consciousness transfer procedure if the emerging challenges are not navigated successfully.

2. Putting themselves in danger/making dangerous decisions?

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2. Diana makes dangerous decisions by navigating the scientific and ethical complexities of the experiment’s side effects, risking not only her professional reputation but also the lives and well-being of those involved in the ongoing procedure.

3. Who else is pulled into their danger?

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3. Diana inadvertently pulls her colleagues, collaborators, and the subjects of her experiment into the danger surrounding the side effects, amplifying the stakes and broadening the risks for everyone involved in the scientific and ethical quagmire.

4. Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

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4. Diana grapples with internal dangers related to the unforeseen consequences of her experiment, confronting ethical dilemmas, questioning the impact of her work on humanity, and navigating the inner demons that arise as she strives to preserve her scientific legacy amidst the unfolding crisis.
5. <strong style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit; color: var(–bb-body-text-color);”>Open Loops Opportunities for Mark Ashburn:

6. GOALS:

   1. New goals?
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   1. Mark sets new political aspirations, aiming to leverage his rejuvenated body to launch a groundbreaking political career, but faces unexpected challenges as his past deeds come to light.
   2. Goals related to the big picture?
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   2. Mark’s political ambitions clash with the public’s perception of his rejuvenation, leading to a political battleground where ethical questions about the procedure and Mark’s intentions come to the forefront.
   3. Crushed goals?
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   3. Mark’s attempt to present a reformed image is crushed when a past scandal resurfaces, threatening to undo his carefully crafted public persona and jeopardize his political future.
   4. Competition/conflict around goals?
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   4. Mark faces intense competition from political rivals who exploit the controversy surrounding his rejuvenation, creating a political battleground where ethical concerns become a focal point.

   CONSEQUENCES:

   1. Are they going to be
      caught?
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   1. Mark grapples with the constant threat of exposure as investigative journalists and political opponents dig into the details of his rejuvenation, risking public outrage and the collapse of his political ambitions.
   2. Problems created from past actions?
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   2. Past political maneuvers and questionable decisions resurface, creating internal conflicts within Mark’s team and jeopardizing the support he needs for his political comeback.
   3. Good plans gone wrong?
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   3. Mark’s well-intentioned plan to use his rejuvenation for political reform faces unexpected challenges when his political opponents weaponize the public’s skepticism, turning his ambitions into a political nightmare.

   SOLVING PROBLEMS:

   1. What is the major problem
      for this character?
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   1. Mark faces the major problem of navigating the treacherous waters of politics, where the consequences of his past actions and the public’s reaction to his rejuvenation pose significant challenges to his political career.
   2. What are they trying to solve?
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   2. Mark strives to solve the mystery behind the resurfacing scandals and political attacks, uncovering a web of deceit and manipulation that threatens not only his political aspirations but also the stability of the entire experiment.
   3. Major change imposed on character?
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   3. A major change is imposed on Mark when he realizes that his rejuvenation not only challenges the norms of society but also forces him to confront the ethical implications of his decisions, leading to a personal and political transformation.

   RELATIONSHIPS:

   1. Relationships in peril?
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   1. Mark’s relationship with his political allies is in peril as the controversy surrounding his rejuvenation divides opinions within his inner circle, leading to betrayals and shifting loyalties.
   2. New relationships forming?
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   2. Mark forms new alliances with individuals who see the potential benefits of his rejuvenated leadership, creating unexpected alliances that may either bolster or undermine his political goals.
   3. Conflict inside relationships?
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   3. Conflict arises within Mark’s family as the public scrutiny affects his relationships with his spouse and children, testing the resilience of family bonds amidst the chaos of political and personal challenges.
   4. Relationships changing?
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   4. Mark’s relationships undergo profound changes as the truth about his rejuvenation becomes public knowledge, leading to shifts in public perception, personal dynamics, and the political landscape.

   DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:

   1. Can they survive X?
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   1. Mark faces the existential threat of losing not only his political aspirations but also his personal and family life if the public’s skepticism and political attacks escalate, pushing him to the brink of political and personal ruin.
   2. Putting themselves in danger/making dangerous decisions?
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   2. Mark makes dangerous decisions by attempting to navigate the volatile world of politics amid the controversy, risking not only his political career but also the stability of the memory transfer experiment and the lives of those involved.
   3. Who else is pulled into their danger?
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   3. Mark inadvertently pulls his political allies, family members, and even the company conducting the experiment into the danger surrounding his political and personal life, intensifying the stakes and broadening the risks.
   4. Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?
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   4. Mark grapples with internal dangers related to the moral implications of his political ambitions and the toll of living with the consequences of past actions, forcing him to confront his inner demons and the true cost of his decisions.

   Open Loops Opportunities for Peter Barnett:

   GOALS:

   1. New goals?
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   1. Peter sets a new goal to expand the memory transfer procedure globally, leading to conflicts with the company’s board and ethical questions about the potential consequences.
   2. Goals related to the big picture?
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   2. Peter’s goals become intricately tied to establishing a new world order where the memory transfer technology dictates power dynamics on a global scale.
   3. Crushed goals?
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   3. Peter faces a crushed goal when the initial rollout of the memory transfer procedure encounters unexpected complications, jeopardizing his vision for immediate global success.
   4. Competition/conflict around goals?
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   4. Intense competition arises as other tech companies attempt to replicate Peter’s memory transfer technology, leading to corporate espionage and a race to dominate the market.

   CONSEQUENCES:

   1. Are they going to be
      caught?
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   1. Peter grapples with the constant threat of exposure as investigative journalists dig into the ethical implications of the memory transfer project, risking legal consequences and public backlash.
   2. Problems created from past actions?
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   2. Past actions of securing funding through questionable channels resurface, creating legal and financial troubles that threaten to unravel Peter’s entire venture.
   3. Good plans gone wrong?
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   3. Peter’s well-intentioned plans to use the memory transfer for societal improvement go awry when unintended side effects lead to chaos and unrest, both within the company and society at large.

   SOLVING PROBLEMS:

   1. What is the major problem
      for this character?
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   1. Peter faces the major problem of ensuring the stability and success of the memory transfer procedure, dealing with technical glitches, public scrutiny, and internal dissent.
   2. What are they trying to solve?
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   2. Peter strives to solve the mystery behind the unanticipated physiological and psychological consequences of the memory transfer, aiming to salvage the project’s reputation and viability.
   3. Major change imposed on the character?
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   3. A major change is imposed on Peter when he realizes the profound societal implications of memory transfer, forcing him to confront the ethical and philosophical consequences of playing with human consciousness.

   RELATIONSHIPS:

   1. Relationships in peril?
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   1. Peter’s relationship with key allies within the company is in peril as they question his decision-making and leadership, leading to internal power struggles.
   2. New relationships forming?
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   2. Peter forms new alliances with influential figures in politics and science, creating complex relationships that blur the lines between business, politics, and ethics.
   3. Conflict inside relationships?
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   3. Conflict arises within Peter’s personal life as the memory transfer project takes precedence over his relationships, leading to strained connections with friends and family.
   4. Relationships changing?
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   4. Peter’s relationship with his own humanity undergoes a transformation as he grapples with the consequences of playing god, leading to a personal journey of self-discovery and introspection.

   DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:

   1. Can they survive X?
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   1. Peter faces the existential threat of societal collapse if the memory transfer procedure’s flaws are not addressed, risking not only his reputation but also the stability of the world he envisions.
   2. Putting themselves in danger/making dangerous decisions?
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   2. Peter makes dangerous decisions by pushing the boundaries of the memory transfer technology, leading to unforeseen consequences that endanger not only himself but also the future of humanity.
   3. Who else is pulled into their danger?
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   3. Peter inadvertently pulls his loyal employees, collaborators, and the global population into the danger surrounding the memory transfer project, escalating the stakes and intensifying the risks.
   4. Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?
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   4. Peter grapples with internal dangers related to the ethical implications of manipulating memories, confronting his own inner demons and the toll of playing a godlike role in the lives of others.

7. Open Loops Opportunities for Suzanne Farrell:

   GOALS:

   1. New goals?
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   1. Suzanne embarks on a quest to find love and start a new family in her rejuvenated body, introducing a personal goal that conflicts with her corporate responsibilities.
   2. Goals related to the big picture?
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   2. Suzanne’s pursuit of love and family clashes with the power dynamics within her cosmetics empire, creating a complex interplay between personal fulfillment and professional obligations.
   3. Crushed goals?
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   3. Suzanne’s attempt to balance her personal desires with the demands of her corporate world faces challenges when her children vehemently oppose her new romantic relationship, putting her dream of a new family at risk.
   4. Competition/conflict around goals?
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   4. Suzanne encounters competition and conflict within her company as her children vie for control, complicating her quest for love and family amidst internal power struggles.

   CONSEQUENCES:

   1. Are they going to be
      caught?
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   1. Suzanne grapples with the consequences of her personal and professional worlds colliding, risking exposure of her romantic relationship with the grandson of her first love, potentially causing public scandal and internal strife.
   2. Problems created from past actions?
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   2. Past decisions and relationships resurface, creating internal conflicts within Suzanne’s company as her children exploit the situation, leading to corporate turmoil and the potential loss of her cosmetics empire.
   3. Good plans gone wrong?
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   3. Suzanne’s well-intentioned plan to bring her new love interest into her company for a genuine role leads to unexpected complications, threatening not only their budding relationship but also the stability of the entire company.

   SOLVING PROBLEMS:

   1. What is the major problem
      for this character?
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   1. Suzanne faces the major problem of reconciling her personal aspirations with the corporate challenges she encounters, as the collision of love, family, and business creates a web of problems that demand resolution.
   2. What are they trying to solve?
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   2. Suzanne strives to solve the intricate problems arising from her personal and professional life merging, unveiling a series of interconnected issues that demand her attention, strategy, and a delicate balance between love and corporate success.
   3. Major change imposed on character?
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   3. A major change is imposed on Suzanne as she navigates the complexities of love and family while reshaping her company’s dynamics, forcing her to confront the consequences of intertwining her personal and professional spheres.

   RELATIONSHIPS:

   1. Relationships in peril?
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   1. Suzanne’s relationship with her children is in peril as they vehemently oppose her new romantic involvement, threatening not only family ties but also the stability of her cosmetics empire.
   2. New relationships forming?
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   2. Suzanne forms a new and significant relationship with the grandson of her first love, introducing a dynamic that creates both personal fulfillment and unexpected challenges within her professional life.
   3. Conflict inside relationships?
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   3. Conflict arises within Suzanne’s company as her children and corporate allies clash over the introduction of her new love interest, highlighting the tensions between personal happiness and corporate obligations.
   4. Relationships changing?
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   4. Suzanne’s relationships undergo profound changes as she attempts to balance the complexities of love, family, and business, leading to shifts in familial dynamics, corporate alliances, and the personal lives of those involved.

   DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:

   1. Can they survive X?
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   1. Suzanne faces the existential threat of losing not only her cosmetics empire but also the chance for personal happiness and a new family if the conflicts between her personal and professional life escalate, pushing her to navigate a precarious balance.
   2. Putting themselves in danger/making dangerous decisions?
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   2. Suzanne makes dangerous decisions by intertwining her personal and professional life, risking not only her own happiness and corporate stability but also pulling her new love interest and her children into the perilous consequences of her choices.
   3. Who else is pulled into their danger?
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   3. Suzanne inadvertently pulls her new love interest, her children, and key figures in her company into the danger surrounding her attempts to balance love and business, amplifying the stakes and broadening the risks for everyone involved.
   4. Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?
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   4. Suzanne grapples with internal dangers related to the emotional toll of navigating love, family, and business, forcing her to confront inner demons, past regrets, and the true cost of pursuing personal fulfillment in the corporate world.
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[Sunil Pappu]

Sunil Pappu’s Big Picture Open Loops

“What I learned doing this assignment is… to create big open loops that can create intrigue and invite obsession for the series”

Example Show: Mr Robot

Big Picture Open Loops:

1. Will Elliot get caught for hacking into Evil Corp?

2. Will his boss Gideon at AllSafe find out he is the mole?

3. Will Elliot and Angela ever get together?

4. Will Elliot work for Fsociety or rat them out?

5. Will Evil Corp be taken down or will Elliot fall victim?

6. Who is Mr Robot?

7. Who is Tyrell and what does he want?

8. Can Elliot protect the people he cares about?

Smaller Open Loops:

1. Will Krista and Angela find out Elliot hacked their partners to protect them?

2. Who is blackmailing Ollie and Angela?

3. Will Elliot avenge his girlfriend Shayla’s death?

4. Who is Darlene? Will Elliot and Darlene work together?

5. Will Angela get Colby to testify against Evil Corp?

6. Why is being CTO so important to Tyrell and his wife? Who are they really and what is their secret?

7. What does Mr Robot have on Tyrell and what does he want from him?

8. Will Elliot start using morphine again?

My Show: Ghost Ledger

Format / Genre: 1 hour Heist Thriller Series

Concept: A suspended RAW agent assembles a crew of expert international thieves to penetrate an enigmatic hawala network operation outside India to retrieve a coveted ledger that can upend governments and bring the financial world to its knees.

Conflict: Will the thieves pull off their heist or get killed trying?

Big Open Loops: (without AI)

1. Will Arjun and his team retrieve the ghost ledger?

2. Will Arjun get his personal vendetta against “The Cobra”?

3. Will Meera and Arjun ever get together?

4. Will Sofia find her missing sister?

5. Will Mandeep find the mole within RAW?

6. Will Lina be found out for her involvement in the Hawala network?

7. Will Raghav find his mole in the Hawala network?

8. Will Harsh face off with Arjun in the end?

9. Will Arjun get reinstated as a RAW agent?

10. Will we ever solve the Ghost node puzzle?

11. Will the team find all the pieces of the ledger that require multiple heists to complete the ledger?

12. As the team seeks the ledger pieces, will they discover that the ledger is more than just a record of transactions, but a map to something even more valuable?

13. Is there a deeper reason behind Arjun’s sister’s death, possibly tied to a conspiracy within RAW or the government?

14. As the team gets closer to completing the ledger, will they attract the attention of a global entity with the power to either help or hinder their mission?

Big Open Loops: (with AI)

GOALS:

New Goals:

1. The team discovers that the ledger contains information on a mysterious “Operation Phoenix” that could lead to a much bigger threat than the network itself. The new goal becomes not only retrieving the ledger but also deciphering and stopping this operation.

Goals Related to the Big Picture:

2. As they get closer to the ledger, they realize that the financial world’s downfall could trigger global chaos. They must decide if exposing the truth is worth the potential anarchy.

Crushed Goals:

3. A failed initial attempt to retrieve the ledger leads to increased security and paranoia within the Hawala Network, forcing the team to regroup and rethink their strategy.

Competition / Conflict Around Goals:

4. Another criminal syndicate is also after the ledger, leading to a three-way battle between the team, the Hawala Network, and this new player.

CONSEQUENCES:

Are They Going to Be Caught?

5. The team’s operations start drawing too much attention, leading to a relentless Interpol agent picking up their trail.

Problems Created from Past Actions:

6. Previous hacks by Meera (AKA Ghost) inadvertently leave digital breadcrumbs that begin to point towards the team’s identities.

Good Plans Gone Wrong:

7. An unexpected betrayal within the team leads to a botched operation, leaving a member in the hands of the Hawala Network.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

Major Problem for a Character:

8. Mandeep Singh (AKA Shadow) discovers clues that suggest the mole within the Indian Intelligence might be someone he trusts.

Major Change Imposed on Character:

9. Lina Chen (AKA Oracle) must confront her past when the team’s mission indirectly leads to the arrest of her former mentor.

Previous Solutions Cause New Problems:

10. The team’s strategy to disrupt the network’s finances accidentally causes a small country’s economy to collapse, raising moral questions.

RELATIONSHIPS:

Relationships in Peril:

11. Arjun and Meera’s growing relationship is tested as her past threatens to catch up with them.

New Relationships Forming:

12. Sofia (AKA Chameleon) connects with a member of the Hawala Network, creating a complex bond that could be her sister’s last known link.

Conflict Inside Relationships:

13. Raghav Patel (AKA The Hyena) suspects Harsh Mehta (AKA The Cobra) of having his own agenda, leading to an internal power struggle.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

Can They Survive X?

14. The team must survive a gauntlet set by the Network, designed to be impossible to pass as a punishment for their audacity.

Internal Dangers:

15. Arjun’s vendetta against The Cobra leads him down a dark path, risking the mission and the lives of his crew for personal revenge.

[Margaret]

Margaret’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned: How to plant Open loops into the TV series.

Assignment 1

Goals

· Stop the assassination attempt.

Consequences

· Will Jack’s affair with Nina affect their future working relationship?

· How will Nina’s past relationship with Jack affect her current relationship?

· Will Jack’s past (exposing bad agents) affect his current ability to find the mole in the CTU?

· Will Jack’s treatment of George Mason affect his job?

Solving Problems

· Will Kim be found?

· Who can Jack trust?

· Will Jack be able to figure out who the mole in the CTU is?

· What does Maureen Kingsley have on Senator Palmer?

· What part does the parachuter play? Why did she want the key card?

Relationships

· Will Kim’s relationship with her mother get fixed?

· Will Jack’s relationship with his wife survive?

· If Senator Palmer is elected, will he do away with the CTU?

Danger/Survival/Risks

· Will Senator Palmer be assassinated?

Assignment 2

Goals:

· Abe wants to find his way home.

· New Goals: Discover the origin and purpose of Masada’s echoes.

· Crushed Goals: Fail to gain the complete trust of both tribes simultaneously.

· Competition/Conflict: Rivalry between Abe and Alo for leadership of the Donek tribe.

Consequences:

· Getting Caught: The revelation of Abe’s true identity (earthling) puts him at risk of being ousted.

· Past actions: The unintended consequences of bridging the tribes creates new challenges, with Hedeon spies of Imara’s acceptance of the Orb.

· Good Plans Gone Wrong: Abe’s diplomatic efforts inadvertently intensify tribal conflicts with siding between Abe and Alo.

Solving Problems:

· Major Problem: Can Abe find a portal back to Earth?

· What they are trying to solve: Understanding the cosmic threat’s nature.

· Major Change: Abe is thrust into leadership, changing his dynamic within the Donek tribe.

· Previous Solutions; Attempts to maintain secrecy about his Earthly origin lead the Donek to believe he has spiritual power associated with past nomadic tribe on the planet.

Relationships?

· Will Imara be reunited with Grigo?

· Relationship in Peril: Abe’s alliance with Imara faces strains as her hidden agendas come to light.

· New Relationships: Imara finds a new relationship among the Hedeon to aid her plan on getting her son away from Armann.

· Conflict Inside Relationships: The Donek tribe questions Abe’s leadership, straining alliances.

Danger/Survival/Risks:

· Will the Donek stay safe from the Hedeon?

· Surviving X: Will the Donek survive the attack by the Hedeon?

· Putting themselves in danger: Abe takes personal risks to help Imara get her son.

· Pulled into danger: Akuji attempts to subvert Armann’s orders, becoming an increasing threat to the Donek.

· Internal Dangers: Abe’s unresolved issues from Earth resurface, impacting his decisions.

[Barbe LaPierre]

Barbe’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is the Open Loops are very helpful in mining down into the profound emotional aspects of the story. Chat provided a number of interesting Loops to consider.

ASSIGNMENT 1

Example Show: Star Trek Discovery (Season 4)

Big Picture Open Loops

• Will Burnham prove to be a good leader?

• Who or what is behind the destruction in the galaxy?

• How will the problem be solved? By conflict? Or by connection?

• Will Burnham’s relationship with Book survive this ordeal given that they are on opposite sides of the solution?

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ASSIGNMENT 2:

Big Picture Open Loops

Destiny – Season 1

GOALS:

• New goals? Will Noren and Nika find A’Lyx? Will they be able to stop Vosskara Slyth?

• Goals related to the big picture? Will Vosskara Slyth take over Noren’s empire?

• Crushed goals? Will A’Lyx abandon Nika and Noren?

• Competition / conflict around goals? Will Nika and Noren split over the quest to find A’Lyx.

CONSEQUENCES:

• Are they going to be caught? Will A’Lyx’s true identity be revealed? Will Vosskara Slyth be stopped?

• Problems created from past actions? Will Noren’s past come between him and Nika?

• Good plans gone wrong? When Nika leaves Destiny to track down A’Lyx will she become a victim of Vosskara Slyth?

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

• What is the major problem for this character? A’Lyx grew up as an orphan.

• What are they trying to solve? Aly’x knows that his mother died under mysterious circumstances. He resists searching for his father.

• Major change imposed on character? A’Lyx joins Nika and Noren on Destiny. Neither he nor Noren are aware of their link.

• Previous solutions cause new problems? A’Lyx has always been on his own. Will forming a bond with Nika and Noren compromise his independence and objectivity.

RELATIONSHIPS:

• Relationships in peril? Will Nika and Noren’s relationship survive after Nika leaves to track down A’Lyx her own way?

• New relationships forming? Will A’Lyx become part of the team?

• Conflict inside relationships? Whose side is A’Lyx on?

• Relationships changing? Will A’Lyx grow close to Nika and Noren and then abandon them when ordered to do so by Vosskara Slyth.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

• Can they survive X? Will Nika, Noren and A’Lyx defeat Vosskara Slyth?

• Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions? Nika will team up with Aurora Kael and based on an “enigmatic message” they will take off and go look for A’Lyx.

• Who else is pulled into their danger? Aurora is a former colleague of Elena’s, now an expert in ancient languages and symbology. She becomes a vital resource in deciphering the enigmatic messages left by the ancient cultures Elena studies.

• Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)? Nika is telepathic. A’Lyx exhibits powers.

Big Picture Open Loops

Destiny – Pilot / Galactic Nexus

• Why did the archaeologist cause the cave-in that nearly killed Nika? Was he trying to kill her?

• Who is Vosskara Slyth?

• Who is A’Lyx? And whose side is he on?

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Assignment 3: ChatCPT

ChatGPT

Season 1 Open Loops for “Destiny’s Veil”

GOALS:

1. New Goals:

• Nika discovers an encrypted message in an ancient artifact pointing to a hidden power that could be pivotal in defeating Vosskara Slyth. The couple sets out on a dangerous mission to uncover the truth behind this power.

2. Goals related to the big picture:

• A’Lyx starts questioning his allegiance as he learns more about his father’s empire and Slyth’s ruthless plans. His internal struggle becomes a focal point as both Noren and Slyth try to sway him to their side.

3. Crushed goals:

• Noren’s attempt to negotiate a peace agreement with a key ally goes awry, resulting in the ally aligning with Slyth. This not only puts Noren’s business at risk but also jeopardizes their quest to find A’Lyx.

4. Competition/conflict around goals:

• A rival entrepreneur enters the scene, seeking to exploit the power struggle between Noren and Slyth. This competitor becomes an unexpected adversary, manipulating events to hinder Noren’s progress.

CONSEQUENCES:

1. Are they going to be caught?

• A’Lyx’s identity teeters on the brink of exposure when a mysterious bounty hunter starts closing in, hired by a shadowy figure with ties to Slyth’s syndicate.

2. Problems created from past actions:

• Nika’s telepathic abilities inadvertently draw the attention of an ancient, dormant threat that resurfaces, posing a new danger to the galaxy. The couple must confront this unforeseen consequence while dealing with Slyth’s machinations.

3. Good plans gone wrong:

• A well-devised scheme to infiltrate Slyth’s inner circle goes south when a trusted ally betrays Noren and Nika, leading to unexpected consequences that ripple through their personal and professional lives.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

1. What is the major problem for this character?

• A’Lyx, torn between loyalty to his father and a desire for independence, grapples with a critical decision that could either save or doom Noren’s empire. The resolution of this internal conflict will have far-reaching consequences.

2. What are they trying to solve?

• Nika and Aurora uncover an ancient prophecy hinting at a celestial event that could shift the balance of power in the galaxy. Racing against time, they must decipher the prophecy’s true meaning and prevent Slyth from exploiting it for his gain.

3. Major change imposed on character:

• Noren’s right-hand person, an AI assistant integral to the success of his business, becomes compromised. The couple must adapt to this unexpected setback while navigating a web of corporate espionage.

4. Previous solutions cause new problems:

• Nika’s decision to break ties with Noren to protect A’Lyx inadvertently sets off a chain reaction, leading to a series of events that make it increasingly difficult for them to reunite without endangering everyone involved.

RELATIONSHIPS:

1. Relationships in peril:

• Noren’s long-lost sibling resurfaces, harboring resentment for being excluded from the family business. This revelation strains Noren’s relationship with both the sibling and A’Lyx.

2. New relationships forming:

• A’Lyx develops a tentative alliance with a charismatic, yet mysterious, individual who claims to have information crucial to their mission. The true motives of this new ally remain unclear.

3. Conflict inside relationships:

• Nika’s telepathic abilities strain her relationship with Aurora as the intensity of their shared experiences threatens to overwhelm their friendship. Trust issues emerge as Nika struggles to balance her personal and professional obligations.

4. Relationships changing:

• A mutual past acquaintance of Nika and Slyth resurfaces, creating tension as allegiances are tested. This person holds information that could either aid or hinder Noren and Nika’s quest.

DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:

1. Can they survive X?

• The Destiny becomes stranded in a treacherous region of space, and the couple must navigate an ancient cosmic phenomenon to escape. Meanwhile, Slyth seizes this opportunity to launch a full-scale assault.

2. Putting themselves in danger/making dangerous decisions:

• Noren, in a desperate move, agrees to a risky alliance with a morally ambiguous group, placing not only his life but the fate of the entire galaxy in jeopardy.

3. Who else is pulled into their danger?

• A’Lyx’s childhood friend, unaware of his true identity, becomes entangled in the conflict, leading to a heartbreaking revelation that tests their friendship.

4. Internal dangers:

• Nika’s telepathic abilities start to manifest uncontrollably, tapping into a dangerous source of energy that threatens her sanity. As she struggles to contain this newfound power, it becomes a potential weapon against Slyth, but at a cost.

[Denice Lewis]

Denice’s Big Picture Open Loops
What I learned doing this assignment is that I still need to be more exact with my questions to AI. My character relationships are complicated and the answers don’t apply to all main characters. It’s like I need to give AI only a couple of characters at a time. Haven’t tried that yet. Even so, some of the answers lead to depth for continued seasons.

Big Picture Open Loops in the TV pilot, HIJACK

1. Why is the plane hijacked?

2. Why is there a bullet in the bathroom?

3. Who are the hijackers?

4. Why are the hijackers reluctant to kill anyone?

5. Who is behind the hijacking and why?

6. Will anyone be hurt or die?

7. How will those on the ground learn the truth?

8. What’s going to happen in the 7-hour flight?

9. Whose side is Sam on?

My Big Picture Loops, Season 1, DREAMWEAVER
1. Why was the Dreamweaver, Maya’s father, kidnapped? Some of his secrets and search to foil the prophecy that foretells Maya’s death.

2. Will Maya find her father in the unpredictable world of dreams?
3. Will Lysandra, the Dark Dreamer and kidnapper, capture Maya? Memory loss continues so she doesn’t know she’s in a coma in the real world and Blake and Maya are her family.

4. Will Maya learn about her grandmother’s secrets? What did Sophia do to Lysandra?

5. Can Maya trust Zander, the shape-shifter in the dream world? He’s unpredictable and plays both sides.

6. Who are the Dream Forgers? Secret society wanting to control reality by finding a lost artifact that connects with Maya’s family. No one knows who they are.

7. Will Maya find her father since his location is always shifting?

8. Will Maya become the Dreamweaver? She learns the powers of her birthmark. Her lack of self-confidence, impulsive choices in the dream world affect reality she has to rectify.

[Jeff Chase]

Jeffrey Alan Chase’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is how quickly and well-structured the returns for this lesson were from AI. I’m finding that AI and I are on the same page and I’m really looking forward to writing this BW series.

ASSIGNMENT 1:

Watch the pilot episode of “The Queen’s Gambit” again.

Big Picture Open Loops

1. Will the janitor turn out to be a
   good or bad guy?
2. Will Beth be harmed by her drug
   overdose?
3. Will Jolene turn out to be a friend or
   foe or both?
4. Will the orphanage persecute Beth or
   treat her kindly?
5. How will Beth visualize chess when
   she doesn’t have access to a board?
6. Will Beth’s real mother and father
   play a part in the series?
7. Will Beth achieve some big goal with
   her chess playing?
8. How will her mother’s suicide affect
   Beth in the future?

ASSIGNMENT 2:

TITLE OF MY SHOW: The Backpack

FORMAT: One-hour serialized

GENRE: Christian Thriller

Goals:

1. New Goals:

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2. Noah sets a personal goal to find the
   original owner of the backpack and return it.
3. Catherine discovers a mysterious
   connection between her family tree and the supernatural events linked to
   the backpack.
4. Goals Related to the Big Picture:

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5. James John reveals that the backpack’s
   contents have the power to influence global events, prompting Noah to
   grapple with the responsibility of this newfound power.
6. Crushed Goals:

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7. Keith Kane’s relentless pursuit of
   justice against Noah leads to a tragic event, crushing Noah’s hope for a
   peaceful resolution.
8. Competition/Conflict Around Goals:

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9. Another group, aware of the backpack’s
   power, competes with Noah’s mission, introducing a rival force that
   complicates the journey.

Consequences:

1. Are They Going to be Caught?:

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2. Keith Kane gets dangerously close to
   uncovering Noah’s location, putting Noah’s safety and mission at risk.
3. Problems Created from Past Actions:

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4. Mary Adams discovers a dark secret from
   her family’s past that directly connects to the supernatural events
   surrounding the backpack.
5. Good Plans Gone Wrong:

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6. A seemingly foolproof plan to confront
   Keith backfires, leading to unintended consequences that put everyone in
   jeopardy.

Solving Problems:

1. Major Problem for This Character:

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2. Noah discovers a hidden prophecy related
   to the backpack, foretelling a catastrophic event he must prevent.
3. What Are They Trying to Solve?:

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4. The characters realize that the demon
   possessing Keith is a major threat, and they must find a way to exorcise
   it without harming Keith.
5. Major Change Imposed on Character:

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6. Catherine faces a moral dilemma when she
   learns the true purpose of the backpack, forcing her to reevaluate her
   beliefs and allegiances.
7. Previous Solutions Cause New Problems:

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8. Noah’s attempt to confront his PTSD
   using the backpack’s power inadvertently awakens a dormant supernatural
   force that poses a new danger.

Relationships:

1. Relationships in Peril:

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2. Noah and Catherine’s growing connection
   is threatened when the supernatural forces interfere, testing the
   strength of their bond.
3. New Relationships Forming:

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4. Mary develops an unexpected alliance
   with Gino as they both seek the truth about the war crimes accusations
   against Noah.
5. Conflict Inside Relationships:

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6. Father Zeke’s resentment towards Noah
   causes a rift, but Noah discovers a way to redeem the chaplain and
   reconcile their relationship.
7. Relationships Changing:

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8. James John reveals a secret about his
   past that changes the dynamics of his relationship with Noah, adding a
   new layer of complexity.

Danger/Survival/Risks:

1. Can They Survive X?:

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2. The characters face a supernatural
   entity that poses a threat not just to their lives but to their souls.
3. Putting Themselves in Danger/Making Dangerous Decisions:

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4. Noah makes a risky deal with a
   mysterious figure to gain information about the backpack’s origins,
   endangering himself and those around him.
5. Who Else is Pulled into Their Danger?:

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6. Keith’s family becomes unwittingly
   entangled in the supernatural conflict, putting them at risk and
   complicating the moral dilemma faced by the protagonists.
7. Internal Dangers:

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8. Gino’s struggle with depression
   resurfaces, threatening to compromise the critical information he
   provides to Noah.

These open loops and setups should add layers of intrigue, suspense, and emotion to your Christian thriller series.

[Deanne]

BWTV – AI Mod 1 Lesson 9 OPEN LOOPS

Deanne’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned = asking ChatGPT to create open loops for my series using only brief character and situation descriptions results in broad, vague suggestions that just point in a direction to explore. I was getting better results by imagining my characters interacting with each other while I pruned blackberry vines. That’s probably because these characters are fleshed out for me in a way that’s difficult to transmit to AI without keying in pages of information.

ASSIGNMENT 1: Ex Show SUCCESSION open loops

Will Logan remain in control of the company? Who will succeed Logan if he can’t? Will Shiv and Tom’s relationship last? Will Lawrence get revenge against Kendall? Will Kendall ever find a way to please his father? How much control will Marcia end up with? Will Greg advance in the company or be thrown out with the garbage? Why does Marcia have so much repressed hostility toward Greg? Will Vaulter keep Waystar from going under? Will Roman end up with a serious job and now how to be serious a bout it? Will Roman have an affair with his trainer? Will Shiv get back with her old boyfriend? Why is Connor so “out there?” Why do neither Frank not Gerri want to become the CEO? Will Waystar survive the debt. What will Sandy Furness do to the company? Will Shiv’s candidate win? Will Kendall get back together with his wife. Will Kendall have a relapse?

ChatGPT answers for TRENDING LOCAL

**Episode 1: “Seeds of Discord”**

*Open Loops:*

1. **New Goals:** Tandy discovers a hidden agenda within the town council, leading to a conflict with her longtime friends.

2. **Consequences:** Dieter’s past involvement with a controversial group is exposed, causing tensions within the school and putting his career in jeopardy.

3. **Solving Problems:** Lee’s unexpected alliance with a mysterious outsider complicates the town’s efforts to counter the neo-Nazi influence.

**Episode 2: “Whispers in the Shadows”**

*Open Loops:*

1. **New Goals:** Jorge’s estranged brother arrives, harboring dangerous secrets that could either help or hinder the fight against the neo-Nazi.

2. **Relationships:** Bronwen discovers a connection between her family and Lee’s past, forcing her to confront her loyalties and question her own beliefs.

3. **Danger/Risks:** Tensions escalate as the town faces external threats from a neighboring community sympathetic to Lee’s cause.

**Episode 3: “Echoes of Hate”**

*Open Loops:*

1. **Goals Related to the Big Picture:** The town leaders uncover evidence of a larger, organized effort to spread extremist ideologies in rural communities.

2. **Consequences:** Dieter’s attempts to confront his past lead to a violent confrontation, putting the school and its students in the crossfire.

3. **Relationships:** Tandy’s strained relationship with her son intensifies as he becomes inadvertently entangled with the neo-Nazi group.

**Episode 4: “Burning Bridges”**

*Open Loops:*

1. **Crushed Goals:** The town’s initial efforts to peacefully resist Lee’s influence fail, leading to a fracture within the community.

2. **Problems Created from Past Actions:** Lee’s former mentor, believed to be dead, resurfaces, complicating the town’s strategy to counter the recruitment efforts.

3. **Danger/Survival/Risks:** The neo-Nazi group initiates a series of covert actions, putting the town in imminent danger and testing the limits of their resistance.

**Episode 5: “Roots of Change”**

*Open Loops:*

1. **Major Change Imposed on Character:** Dieter faces increasing pressure from both sides, forcing him to make a life-altering decision that could affect the entire community.

2. **Relationships Changing:** Unexpected alliances form as characters put aside personal differences to confront the escalating threat.

3. **Solving Problems:** Tandy discovers a potential weakness in Lee’s operation, but exploiting it may come at a high personal cost.

[Zeke Farrow]

I LEARNED SO MUCH.

I learned so much about my characters, that is. Layers and layers of intrigue for me to choose from. I couldn’t possibly use all of it… But I have the right things to choose from.

OPEN LOOPS

JACK

GOALS

NEW GOALS:

Change from writing the profile for his journalism class. Go to law school to solving the murder, writing something great and becoming an actor.

Olivier wants to sleep with Jack and prove his innocence. Same goes for Cassandra.

GOALS RELATED TO THE BIG PICTURE:

Jack wants to solve the murder.

Jack discovers a conspiracy that runs deeper than he thought.

Cassandra wants to prove her innocence

CRUSHED GOALS:

Jack had auditioned for the acting program and been waitlisted and then rejected.

Olivier’s role was given to another student TBD. ‘Being a nepo baby isn’t enough…

COMPETITION / CONFLICT AROUND GOALS:

His ex-girlfriend edits the school paper. As Jack goes from disinterested fluff writer to crime solving beat writer, she takes notice and competes and supports.

Jack is trying to catch the killer. The killer is avoiding being caught.

Everyone is playing a part.

The drama students / suspects are competitive artists.

CONSEQUENCES:

Will Jake get caught during his covert investigation.

Jack’s investigation implicates an innocent suspect. He must correct course.

Jack auditioned for the drama school and was rejected so he has a motive.

Will the killer be caught?

Will the killer kill again?

Cassandra took someone’s place from the wait list.

The class is made up entirely of nepo babies and they conspire to get away with murder. Why? Because for Dr. Montgomery, being a nepo baby wasn’t nearly enough.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

Jack solves the murder.

Jack solves the problem / question of his sexuality.

Jack abandons his boring plan for his future.

Jack loves acting.

RELATIONSHIPS:

Jack and Cassandra have a new sexual relationship.

Jack and Olivier have a new sexual relationship.

Jack and his editor / ex girlfriend haven’t resolved their breakup.

Jack’s journalistic integrity is questioned.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

Jack is in the cross hares of the murderer.

Jack goes undercover

In search of the truth, Jack is constantly in greater danger.

Internally, Jack struggles with his sexual identity.

Cassandra has stolen an identity.

Olivier lives in the shadow of his parent and has no identity.

The acting classes are about finding your identity.

[Bob Creager]

Bob’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned: Breakthroughs from lessons 7 and 8 tied in with this lessons exercise have totally turned my concept around bringing it that much closer to being truly bingeworthy.

Assignment 2:

1. Use this list to brainstorm big picture open loops for your first season that you will use to keep the audience captivated.

GOALS:

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[Jamie Stegner]

Jamie Stegner

What I learned: It’s great to get the story and the series organized in this deliberate way. It feels so much more manageable.

Assignment 2– Big Picture Open Loops for Eric & Joe

A BIG PIX open loop for Black Water (carry the season): Will Jack / Eric succeed to build a life in the New World? What kind of life will his pirate skills bring? His sailor and navigation skills? His fighting skills?

1. GOALS:

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[Renee Miller]

Renee’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is how to think about how a binge worthy show draws audiences in. Having compelling open loops in your show can help keep viewers tuning in episode after episode. I really enjoyed thinking about the open loops I can use in my show and was surprised that many of the open loops AI came up with were pretty close to the open loops I had already thought about.

Assignment #1

The Diplomat

1. Who ordered the attack on the British Aircraft Carrier?

2. Will Kate and Hall go through with the divorce?

3. Will Kate and Dennison get together?

4. Did Hal die in the car bomb?

5. Will Kate accept the Vice Presidency?

6. Will Hal get tapped for the Secretary of State position? And was this Hal’s plan all along?

Assignment #2

GOALS:

New Goals: Veronica discovers clues suggesting her father might still be alive within the cult. Does this change her main objective?

Big Picture Goals: Dr. Stone finds a relic, but it’s only one part of a larger, mysterious artifact. What powers does the complete artifact hold?

Crushed Goals: Father Malachi’s attempts at redemption are constantly thwarted by the cult. What lengths will he go to for redemption?

Conflict Around Goals: Samuel’s efforts to use Veronica clash with Dr. Stone’s ambitions. Will this conflict of interest expose Samuel’s true identity?

CONSEQUENCES:

Fear of Getting Caught: Veronica discovers that the cult is involved in global political manipulations and has infiltrated high levels of government. Exposing this could make her a target of powerful enemies.

Past Actions’ Problems: Dr. Stone’s past dealings with illegal artifact traders come back to haunt her. Will this compromise her position?

Good Plans Gone Wrong: Veronica’s plan to infiltrate the cult leads to unintended consequences. What new threats emerge from her actions?

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

Major Character Problem: Veronica struggles with trust issues, affecting her alliances. How will this impact her investigation?

Trying to Solve: Samuel attempts to manipulate Veronica but starts to genuinely care for her. How will this internal conflict affect the prophecy?

Imposed Major Change: Father Malachi faces a crisis of faith. How will this change his approach to the cult?

New Problems from Solutions: Dr. Stone’s use of a relic unleashes a malevolent entity. How will the team contain this new threat?

RELATIONSHIPS:

Relationships in Peril: Samuel’s true identity as the cult leader puts him at odds with Veronica, especially as she gets closer to the truth. The tension escalates as Veronica becomes suspicious of his motives.

New Relationships Forming: Unexpected alliances form between Veronica and a mysterious cult member. What secrets does this new ally hold?

Conflict Within Relationships: A character makes a significant sacrifice or suffers a great loss, leading to anger and blame within the group, particularly if the loss could have been prevented.

Changing Relationships: Dr. Stone’s obsession with the relics strains her relationship with Father Malachi. Can they reconcile their differences?

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

Survival against Odds: Veronica and her team face a supernatural threat in the cult’s headquarters. Can they all make it out alive?

Dangerous Decisions: Samuel’s decisions start to endanger the cult members. How far will he go for the prophecy?

Pulled into Danger: Veronica’s investigation inadvertently puts her loved ones in danger. How will she protect them?

Internal Dangers: Father Malachi’s knowledge of the cult rituals tempts him back into dark practices. Can he resist the temptation?

[Tom Wilson]

Tom’s Big Picture Open Loops in his Example Show 24 (2001) “12 am to 1 am” S1E1 Pilot

Loud knocking on door in Kuala Lumpur as CIA agent transmits encrypted message. Will he send the message before he’s arrested?

Assignment 1: Open Loops in Example Show “24” Pilot

1. CIA boss learns the message says Presidential candidate Davis Palmer is targeted to be murdered.

2. Nina calls: Jack must come in now. Why does big boss Walsh want everyone in the office ASAP?

3. Jack’s daughter Kim sneaks out. Girlfriend Jan picks her up. They will party with college boys.

4. Jack and Teri were separated. Will Teri forgive Jack for having a fling with his coworker Nina?

5. Walsh: A domestic hate group hired as Russian assassin to kill Palmer. But why?

6. Walsh can trust only Jack to save Palmer. Will he prevent Palmer from getting killed?

7. Walsh tells only Jack he has intel that a spy is in their midst. Who could it be?

8. Jack forces Agent Mason to tell him the intel source or he’ll squeal on Mason’s embezzling money.

9. Will Mason get revenge on Jack because he discovered his theft?

10. Mason: If Palmer’s elected, their counterterrorism unit will be gutted. Will Jack still try to save him?

11. A car hits Jan. She’s unconscious in the street. Will she live?

12. Mandy steals Martin’s photo ID. Blows plane door open. Parachutes out. Blows up plane. Why?

Assignment 2: Open Loops in Tom’s Show Pilot

1. Marty’s wife Jean and clairvoyant daughter Milly are kidnapped. Will he ever get them back?

2. Does X the computer whiz who works for him have anything to do with the kidnapping?

3. Marty gets a message: If he wants them back, he must pay for their return with a Sword missile.

4. Middle of the night: Marty abruptly wakes up. He just dreamt his daughter asks him to save her.

5. Marty inventories Sword missiles. One is missing. Was it stolen by the cartel?

6. Marty fires a missile into Cartel Chief’s mansion. He sneaks in hoping he didn’t kill Jean or Milly.

[Patrick Malone]

Module 1 Lesson 9: Inviting Obsession Through Open Loops

PATRICK’S BIG PICTURE OPEN HOOKS

I learned numerous ways to create open loops. AI gave me some good ideas to consider using.

Assignment 1: The Diplomat

Who/what country blew up the British aircraft carrier?

Will Kate adjust to being the new Ambassador to Britain?

Did Iran blow up the ship?

Will US president or the British prime minister attack Iran?

Who and why was Hal kidnapped?

Will Kate choose to become US vice president?

Will Kate divorce Hal?

Will Kate and British Foreign Secretary become romantically involved?

What position is Hal scheming for?

Will the British prime minister attack Russia?

Why did the British member of parliament want to meet with Hal and only with Hal?

Who and why was the British member of parliament blown up at his car? (The end of season one.)

Assignment 2:

My ideas

Does the Amaruga exist?

If it exists will the Amaruga attack the expeditions?

Will the expeditions find the gold?

Which group of searchers will find the gold, the Floridians or the Northerners?

Will these rival expeditions destroy one another?

Will Clark discover what happened to his father?

Will Ollie be able to pay the drug traffickers and save himself and his family?

Will Tammy avenge her family?

Who is Sergeant Roland Johnson?

ChatGPT Results

Open Loops for Season 1:

1. New Goals:

• Ollie discovers a hidden map that hints at a different location for the gold, leading to a divergence in the team’s objectives.

• Grant Fairchild learns about a legendary artifact rumored to increase the gold’s power, adding a new layer to his pursuit.

2. Goals Related to the Big Picture:

• The gold isn’t just a fortune; it’s a key to a supernatural realm, and whoever controls it can unlock unimaginable power.

• Ollie and Clark realize that finding the gold might be the only way to prevent a catastrophic event tied to the Amaruga.

3. Crushed Goals:

• Ollie’s initial plan to pay off his debts falls apart, forcing him into increasingly dangerous situations with the drug traffickers.

• Clark’s strategy to keep the search low-key crumbles when a mysterious figure starts trailing the team.

4. Competition/Conflict around Goals:

• Another group, aware of the gold’s supernatural properties, competes with Ollie and Clark, leading to a series of covert battles.

• Grant Fairchild hires a skilled tracker to shadow Ollie and Clark, creating constant tension and a game of cat and mouse.

5. Consequences:

• Ollie’s troubled past with drug traffickers resurfaces, putting not only him but the entire team in jeopardy.

• Uncovering the truth about the gold brings unintended consequences, awakening ancient guardians that were meant to remain dormant.

6. Problems Created from Past Actions:

• The discovery of a Confederate soldier’s journal sheds light on the monster witnessed during the Civil War, revealing a darker secret.

• Tammy’s efforts to reconcile with her family history inadvertently expose her to Grant Fairchild’s ruthless tactics.

7. Good Plans Gone Wrong:

• A well-thought-out expedition goes awry when a series of natural disasters are triggered by the supernatural forces protecting the gold.

• Ollie’s plan to outsmart the drug traffickers backfires, leading to increased pressure and danger.

8. Solving Problems:

• Ollie and Clark must find a way to break the curse that protects the gold, leading them on a journey into the heart of the supernatural.

• Grant Fairchild seeks ancient knowledge to exploit weaknesses in the Amaruga’s defense, putting him at odds with dark forces.

9. Major Change Imposed on Characters:

• Ollie discovers a latent ability connected to the gold, changing his role in the quest and making him a target for various factions.

• Clark learns a shocking truth about his father’s disappearance, reshaping his understanding of the gold’s significance.

10. Previous Solutions Cause New Problems:

• Ollie’s attempt to confront the drug traffickers head-on results in unforeseen consequences, escalating the danger for everyone.

• Grant Fairchild’s manipulation of a historical artifact inadvertently triggers a series of events that threaten to unleash chaos.

11. Relationships:

• Ollie and Clark’s friendship is strained when personal secrets emerge, creating a rift that could jeopardize the entire mission.

• Tammy’s connection with Grant Fairchild’s past adds tension to her relationship with Clark, as trust becomes a fragile commodity.

12. New Relationships Forming:

• Ollie forms an unexpected alliance with a local historian who possesses crucial information about the gold’s origin.

• Grant Fairchild recruits a skilled archaeologist who becomes entangled in the supernatural mysteries surrounding the gold.

13. Conflict Inside Relationships:

• The revelation of Tammy’s family history puts a strain on her relationship with Clark, who must confront his own family’s legacy.

• Ollie’s past connections with the drug traffickers create distrust within the team, leading to internal conflicts.

14. Relationships Changing:

• The supernatural elements of the gold alter the dynamics between the characters, as hidden loyalties and betrayals come to light.

• Ollie’s debt to the drug traffickers becomes a bargaining chip, changing alliances and alliances within the group.

15. Danger/Survival/Risks:

• The team faces a series of tests from the Amaruga, forcing them to confront their deepest fears and insecurities.

• Ollie’s risky decisions to escape the drug traffickers lead to unexpected alliances but also draw the attention of more dangerous adversaries.

16. Putting Themselves in Danger/Making Dangerous Decisions:

• Clark’s obsession with finding the gold pushes him to make increasingly dangerous decisions, endangering the entire team.

• Ollie’s desperation to settle his debts leads him down a perilous path, with consequences that echo throughout the season.

17. Who Else Is Pulled into Their Danger:

• A family connected to the gold’s history becomes unintentionally entangled in Ollie and Clark’s quest, putting them at risk.

• Grant Fairchild’s pursuit of the gold draws the attention of a secret society with its own agenda, adding a new layer of danger.

18. Internal Dangers:

• Ollie’s struggle with addiction resurfaces under the pressure of the quest, posing a threat to the team’s cohesion.

• The supernatural nature of the gold begins to affect the mental well-being of the characters, leading to internal conflicts and breakdowns.

[Richard Morell]

Lesson 8 – Inviting Obsession

Richard’s Open Loops

What I learned from this assignment is that when I get a fun idea to work with and need to change my concept a little, I can go back and bring AI forward along with the process. It was interesting that the AI at first focused on open loops affecting the group of newcomers as opposed to the individual characters. That is actually something I need to consider, especially since it will become apparent by the end of the first season that there’s something mystical going on in Skanekta. (And I realize too that it’s by the end of Season 2 that they operate with the understanding that they were each chosen specifically to be in this place.) I did once try to use the prompt with adding in several considerations, but Bard came back with a blank reply—probably too many things in that one. So I broke it down for each character to come up with 5 open loops each could focus on. And they were close to the ones I came up with.

ASSIGNMENT #1 – RIVERDALE

Large loops

Do Cheryl and Jason have an incestuous relationship?

Why do the Coopers hate Jason?

Will Betty and Archie get together? Or Archie and Veronica?

Will Archie move toward a musical career?

“I’m Breakfast at Tiffany’s and this place is In Cold Blood.”

Will Betty vanquish her intimidating mother’s insatiable need for control?

What’s with Veronica’s Dad?

What happened with Jason and Polly?

Will Betty and Veronica be rivals or friends?

Will Archie and Grundy come forward with the fact they heard the gunshot?

Who will come out on top in the school dynamics? Cheryl or Veronica?

There are open loops galore in the relationships between the kids and the students?

Small Loops

Will they find Jason or is he dead?

Who are Veronica and Hermione? What’s their story?

Can Archie do football and music?

What will happen with Archie and Valerie?

Will Archie and Grundy keep up their relationship?

Will Kevin hook up with Moose?

ASSIGNMENT 2: THE APOCALOPTOMISTS or THE NEWCOMERS

Before AI Open Loops:

GOALS:

New goals?

Annabel sets up a new environmental law practice in the expectations that this will be necessary. She’s also researching laws pertaining to refugees, as there will be mass migrations in the future.

Because of the voices and the library under the oak tree, Edmond has a new goal of listening to them and then taking actions upon their guidance—even if they don’t always understand what it is they’re being asked to do.

Goals related to the big picture?

Dermot’s goal of starting a successful business to support regenerative agriculture ties in with the big picture of accepting climate change.

Mayor Marchetti’s private project to work with the asphalt company is a big picture goal against the wishes of the rest of the town.

Edmond is dimly aware that everyone’s actions pertain to the future they all want to create for themselves and with each other.

Crushed goals?

Taliesin had goals for his place in Detroit, but these were crushed by politics and personalities. He’s licking his wounds, and seeking a new goal.

Competition / conflict around goals?

Dermot and Annabel’s goals conflict with Mayor Marchetti’s, though they are unaware of this.

CONSEQUENCES:

Are they going to be caught?

Mayor Marchetti could get caught in this web of deceit he’s creating.

Though he’s not doing anything wrong, Taliesin wonders if he might not be witnessed engaging in his rituals and then be shamed for it.

What problems can be created from past actions?

Dermot’s past work with the oil company during one of the worst pipeline bursts in recent memory could come back to haunt him.

Annabel left some nasty clients for her firm to deal with back in Atlanta. Some of them will come back to haunter her, and at least one actively pesters her to represent their company.

Good plans gone wrong?

Taliesin’s spellwork could potentially create problems for both himself and Skanekta down the line. Also, Taliesin’s work with the Mayor could potentially be a good plan that has unforeseen consequences.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

What is the major problem for this character?

Dermot’s major problem is trying to keep a long-distance relationship with Michael while also beginning this business in Skanekta. Dermot seeks to convince Michael to relocate there.

Taliesin is drawn to Skanekta and feels an urgent need to understand why. He’s rather unnerved by some of the things he’s experiencing, as he feels he’s had these experiences before—perhaps in his night dreams?

Annabel’s uppermost concern is with Pastor Sarah, her wife. She really wants to ensure that their marriage is solid, but her jealousy causes her to worry about Sarah’s true allegiance.

What are they trying to solve?

Edmond is seeking community while also holding space for the voices that are coming to him and informing him of the events that are about to transpire.

Major change imposed on character?

Mayor Marchetti now has to deal with these newcomers who have a very different mindset than himself.

All of the characters feel the pressure of climate change, but still hold onto denial to varying degrees, with the Mayor being most in the dark.

Previous solutions cause new problems?

Mayor Marchetti’s choices to support the LGBTQ+ community and the environmental concerns of the town prove to be insubstantial. They will confront him eventually to give the ordinances some teeth.

RELATIONSHIPS:

Relationships in peril?

Both Dermot and Annabel experience turmoil in their relationships. Dermot also contends with his growing attraction to Taliesin.

New relationships forming?

Taliesin and Dermot start to get closer to each other. Edmond grows fond of the newcomers and the newcomers are also fond of Edmond. Edmond alternates with crushes on each of them, but really likes Taliesin.

Conflict inside relationships?

Dermot and Michael; Annabel and Sarah

Relationships changing?

Mayor Marchetti’s relationship with his wife and kids are changing as they interact with the newcomers.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

Can they survive X?

All of the characters have people in their lives who are in danger due to climate change, but they aren’t yet aware of it.

Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions?

Taliesin finds that he will need to work with spirits with questionable trustworthiness. He might draw both the Mayor and Edmond into the danger.

Who else is pulled into their danger?

Edmond’s attention to the voices will put Dermot, Taliesin and Annabel into uncomfortable situations that could be life-threatening. Part of Edmond’s job is to temper these souls to prepare them for the much more difficult work ahead.

Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

Dermot’s guilt and shame about his past in the oil and gas industry is likely to create a few issues in the future.

Annabel’s clientele did include a couple of respectable people hiding criminal actions. She doesn’t realize she knows some things that are threatening to their continued operations.

All of the LGBTQ+ characters carry wounds related to owning their sexuality and gender identity.

AI Contributions

Prompt: ’m writing a TV Series that is [Format/Genre] about [Concept] and [Conflict] with [Lead Characters]. Can you generate [Open Loops] and setups that could play out over the course of Season 1.

Definition of “Open Loops”:Questions that can only be answered in future episodes. An open loop is a rhetorical device to instill curiosity by creating anticipation for what will come next.

Open Loops opportunities:

GOALS:

New goals?

Goals related to the big picture?

Crushed goals?

Competition / conflict around goals?

CONSEQUENCES:

Are they going to be caught?

Problems created from past actions?

Good plans gone wrong?

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

What is the major problem for this character?

What are they trying to solve?

Major change imposed on character?

Previous solutions cause new problems?

RELATIONSHIPS:

Relationships in peril?

New relationships forming?

Conflict inside relationships?

Relationships changing?

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

Can they survive X?

Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions?

Who else is pulled into their danger?

Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

Format/Genre =

Concept =

Conflict =

Lead Characters =

Sure, here are some open loops and setups that could play out over the course of Season 1 of your TV series:

Goals

New goals: The new transplants discover that they have been brought to the town for a specific purpose, and they must now find out what that purpose is and how they can fulfill it.

Goals related to the big picture: The new transplants begin to realize that their individual goals are intertwined with the fate of the town, and they must learn to work together to save it.

Crushed goals: The new transplants face setbacks and challenges that force them to reevaluate their goals and priorities.

Competition / conflict around goals: The new transplants find themselves competing with each other for resources and influence, which creates tension and conflict.

Consequences

Are they going to be caught: Taliesin’s secret identity as a warlock is at risk of being exposed, which could have serious consequences for him and the others.

Problems created from past actions: Dermot’s past comes back to haunt him, threatening to jeopardize his new life and his relationship with Michael.

Good plans gone wrong: Annabel’s efforts to help the town adapt to climate change have unintended consequences that could make things worse.

Solving Problems

What is the major problem for this character: Edmond struggles to find a way to balance their loyalty to the town with their desire to help the new transplants.

What are they trying to solve: Mayor Marchetti must find a way to protect the town from the mysterious forces that are at work.

Major change imposed on character: Taliesin is forced to confront his true nature and accept his role as a protector of the town.

Previous solutions cause new problems: The new transplants’ attempts to solve the town’s problems often create new problems.

Relationships

Relationships in peril: Dermot and Michael’s relationship is tested by the challenges of starting a new life in a new town.

New relationships forming: Annabel and Pastor Sarah develop a close relationship, but they face opposition from some members of the town.

Conflict inside relationships: Taliesin’s secret powers create tension in his relationship with Dermot.

Relationships changing: The new transplants’ relationships with each other evolve as they work together to save the town.

Danger / Survival / Risks

Can they survive X: The new transplants face a number of threats, including the mysterious forces at work in the town, the town’s resistance to change, and the challenges of adapting to climate change.

Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions: Taliesin uses his powers to protect the town, putting himself in danger.

Who else is pulled into their danger: The new transplants’ friends and family start to get caught up in the danger that they are facing.

Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons): Edmond struggles with their own inner demons, which could threaten their ability to help the town.

These open loops and setups will provide plenty of intrigue and suspense for Season 1 of your TV series. As the new transplants work together to solve the town’s problems, they will learn more about themselves, each other, and the mysterious forces that are at work. They will also face difficult choices that will affect their own lives and the future of the town.

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For each of the characters, create five open loops they could be working with throughout the series that are specific to them.

Sure, here are five open loops that each character could be working with throughout the series that are specific to them:

Dermot

Can he balance his love for Michael with his growing attachment to the town and its people?

How will he deal with the guilt of leaving his family behind in the city?

Will he be able to use his business acumen to help the town adapt to climate change and economic dislocation?

How will he overcome his fear of rejection and accept his new role as a leader in the town?

What will he do when he discovers that Taliesin is a warlock?

Taliesin

How will he keep his magical powers a secret from the townspeople?

How will he learn to control his powers and use them for good?

Will he be able to reconcile his bisexual identity with his role as a protector of the town?

How will he deal with his growing feelings for Dermot?

What will he do when he discovers that Mayor Marchetti is hiding a dark secret?

Annabel

How will she reconcile her faith with her growing belief in the existence of supernatural forces?

How will she balance her commitment to environmental justice with her relationship with Pastor Sarah?

Will she be able to use her legal expertise to help the town adapt to climate change and economic dislocation?

How will she deal with the opposition from some members of the town who are resistant to change?

What will she do when she discovers that the town’s hidden power source is connected to the ancient forces that are at play?

Mayor Marchetti

How will he maintain his control over the town and keep the new transplants from uncovering his secrets?

How will he balance his desire to protect the town with his own personal gain?

How will he deal with the growing distrust of the townspeople who are starting to suspect that he is not who he seems?

How will he stop the mysterious forces that are threatening the town’s existence?

What will he do when he discovers that the new transplants are more than just a group of transplants?

Edmond

How will they balance their loyalty to the town with their desire to help the new transplants?

How will they find their place in the world, feeling torn between their past and their future?

How will they use their knowledge of the town’s history to help the new transplants solve the mysteries that threaten the town’s existence?

How will they deal with their own internal conflicts, such as their struggle with their non-binary identity?

What will they do when they discover that they have a unique connection to the town’s hidden power source?

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What open loops can be created for Dermot’s past as an oil/gas executive? How might that create some tensions audiences might find intriguing?

Sure, here are some open loops that can be created for Dermot’s past as an oil/gas executive, and how that might create some tensions audiences might find intriguing:

Open Loops

Will Dermot’s past come back to haunt him in the small town?

Will Dermot’s past values and beliefs conflict with the new values and beliefs that he is trying to adopt in the town?

Will Dermot’s past connections to the oil/gas industry create problems for him and the new transplants?

Will Dermot be able to make amends for his past mistakes?

How will Dermot’s past experiences shape his approach to solving the town’s problems?

Intriguing Tensions

Dermot’s past as an oil/gas executive could create tension between him and the environmentally-conscious residents of the town.

Dermot’s past could make it difficult for him to gain the trust of the townspeople.

Dermot’s past could lead him to make decisions that conflict with his own values and beliefs.

Dermot’s past could be a source of shame and guilt for him, which could affect his relationships with others.

Dermot’s past could be used against him by those who want to keep the town from changing.

These open loops and intriguing tensions could add a layer of complexity to Dermot’s character and make him a more interesting and relatable character for audiences. They could also provide opportunities for conflict and drama throughout the series.

Here are some specific examples of how Dermot’s past could create tensions in the series:

Dermot could be approached by his former colleagues in the oil/gas industry who want to exploit the town’s hidden power source.

Dermot could be blamed for the town’s past environmental problems.

Dermot could be ostracized by the townspeople who believe that he is not one of them.

Dermot’s past could make it difficult for him to find love and acceptance in the town.

These are just a few examples, and there are many other ways that Dermot’s past could be used to create conflict and tension in the series. The specific challenges that he faces will depend on the overall plot and themes of the series. However, there is no doubt that Dermot’s past will play a significant role in his journey of self-discovery and redemption.

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Those are great. Now, how could Annabel’s work with her former law firm in Atlanta come back to haunt her?

Annabel’s past work with her former law firm in Atlanta could come back to haunt her in several ways, creating intriguing tensions and conflicts within the narrative of the TV series. Here are some potential scenarios:

Conflicts with Environmental Ideals: Annabel’s past work at the law firm may have involved representing clients who were involved in environmentally damaging practices. This could create tension between her current commitment to environmental justice and her past actions, potentially leading to internal conflicts and challenges to her credibility.

Unforeseen Legal Consequences: Legal decisions made by Annabel in her previous role could have unforeseen consequences that manifest in the small Midwestern town. This could involve cases related to property rights, environmental regulations, or corporate dealings, leading to legal battles and challenges for the town.

Unwelcome Attention from Former Colleagues: Annabel’s former colleagues, aware of her legal expertise and connection to the town, could approach her for assistance in handling legal matters related to the town’s hidden power source or the presence of the new transplants. This could force Annabel to confront her past and make difficult choices about her involvement in the town’s affairs.

Resurfacing of Past Scandals: If Annabel’s former law firm was involved in any scandals or unethical practices, her association with them could come under scrutiny in the small town, potentially damaging her reputation and making it difficult for her to gain the trust of the townspeople.

Lingering Guilt or Regrets: Annabel’s past work could be a source of guilt or regret for her, especially if she realizes that she was unknowingly contributing to environmental harm or injustice. This internal conflict could affect her personal relationships and her ability to fully embrace her new life in the town.

These scenarios could create compelling storylines for the TV series, exploring the impact of Annabel’s past on her present and future. They could also serve as catalysts for personal growth and self-discovery, allowing Annabel to confront her past mistakes and make amends while working towards a more fulfilling and meaningful life in the small town.

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The idea of Edmond hearing those voices from the ancestors of the place are intriguing as is their connection to the mysterious library under the oak tree. How might this create open loops?

Edmond’s connection to the voices of the town’s ancestors and the mysterious library under the oak tree could introduce various open loops, adding layers of intrigue and mystery to the TV series. Here are some potential open loops that could arise from this connection:

Deciphering the Ancestors’ Whispers: Edmond’s ability to hear the whispers of the ancestors could become a crucial tool in unraveling the town’s hidden history and understanding the nature of the mysterious forces at play. However, deciphering the meaning of these whispers could prove challenging, leading to a series of puzzles and quests for Edmond and the new transplants.

Uncovering the Library’s Secrets: The hidden library beneath the oak tree could hold ancient texts, artifacts, and knowledge that are essential to understanding the town’s secrets and the role of the new transplants. Edmond’s connection to the library could allow them to access these secrets, but they would also face challenges in safeguarding the library’s contents and protecting them from those who seek to exploit its knowledge.

The Ancestors’ Purpose and Guidance: As Edmond delves deeper into the whispers and the library’s secrets, they could discover the true purpose of the ancestors’ communication and the guidance they offer. This could lead to questions about the role of the new transplants in the town’s future and the choices they must make to fulfill their destiny.

The Ancestors’ Warnings or Prophecies: The whispers could contain warnings or prophecies about impending threats, dangers, or challenges that the town and the new transplants may face. Edmond would have to interpret these warnings and decide how to act upon them, creating a sense of urgency and suspense.

Edmond’s Growing Powers and Responsibilities: Edmond’s connection to the ancestors and the library could enhance their own abilities and responsibilities. They could develop new powers or insights that allow them to protect the town and guide the new transplants, but they may also face internal struggles and doubts about their own role in this unfolding drama.

These open loops could provide ample opportunities for character development, plot twists, and intriguing storylines. Edmond’s unique connection to the town’s past and the mysterious forces at play could make them a central figure in the narrative, driving the story forward and keeping audiences engaged in the unfolding mysteries.

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Mayor Marchetti is hiding several things from the town, including working with a company that will no doubt contribute to pollution and make the climate worse. He also seems keen to suppress this new knowledge that Edmond is putting out there. What open loops would this create?

Mayor Marchetti’s secret dealings with a polluting company and his attempts to suppress Edmond’s knowledge of the town’s past could create several intriguing open loops that add layers of tension and conflict to the TV series. Here are some potential open loops that could arise from this situation:

Mayor Marchetti’s True Motives: Exploring Mayor Marchetti’s motivations behind his secret alliance with the polluting company could reveal a complex interplay of personal gain, political ambitions, and a misguided belief that he is acting in the town’s best interests. This could lead to a clash between his outward persona as a progressive leader and his hidden agenda.

Unveiling the Polluting Company’s Plans: As the new transplants investigate the town’s hidden energy source and Edmond’s revelations about the past, they could uncover the polluting company’s plans to exploit this resource for their own profit. This could put the town’s environment at further risk and create a conflict between the town’s interests and the company’s greed.

Mayor Marchetti’s Efforts to Silence Edmond: Mayor Marchetti, fearing that Edmond’s knowledge of the past and the town’s hidden power source could expose his secret dealings, could resort to various tactics to silence Edmond. This could lead to a cat-and-mouse game between Edmond and the mayor, with Edmond struggling to protect their knowledge and the new transplants trying to uncover the truth.

The Town’s Reaction to Mayor Marchetti’s Betrayal: If the townspeople discover Mayor Marchetti’s secret dealings and his willingness to compromise their environmental well-being for personal gain, it could lead to a loss of trust and a crisis of leadership. The new transplants could play a role in exposing the truth and helping the town grapple with this betrayal.

Mayor Marchetti’s Desperate Measures: As Mayor Marchetti feels the pressure mounting, he could resort to increasingly desperate measures to protect his secret and maintain his control over the town. This could lead to moral compromises, dangerous actions, and a potential clash with the new transplants and Edmond.

These open loops could create a compelling narrative that explores themes of power, corruption, environmental justice, and the struggle for truth. Mayor Marchetti’s actions could serve as a catalyst for the new transplants to unite with Edmond and the townspeople to protect their new home and shape its future.

[Brian Bull]

BRIAN BULL – Big Picture Open Loops

“What I learned from doing this assignment is…
In order to maintain the audiences interest throughout the episode as well as the season it is best to incorporate mysteries both short term and long term.

ASSIGNMENT 1
1. Think about your Example Show. Make a list of the Big Picture open loops that were established early in the season.
2. Go back and watch the pilot again. As you do, notice how many open loops are being used to create the need to see future episodes.

WEDNESDAY

I did.

ASSIGNMENT 2
1. Use this list to brainstorm big picture open loops for your first season that you will use to keep the audience captivated.

FORESIGHT – An Optometrist (Jim Brown) creates a pair of glasses from a crystal ball and he witnesses an attempted murder, now he must figure out when and how to stop it from happening.

Tell us your top 5-8 Big Picture Open Loops that could be in your pilot.

Jim creates a pair of glasses from a crystal ball that enables him to see someone’s future when he looks at them.

How will Jim use the glasses to his benefit?

Will people honestly want to know their future if they don’t ask?

What if Jim “sees” something good, does he tell them and spoil the surprise and the thrill of the moment?

What if Jim “sees” something bad, do they really want to know then?

Does Jim go around town telling everyone about the glasses and his new discovery? Some people might think he’s crazy? Some people may kill him for them.

What if Jim misplaces the glasses and someone evil finds them?

Jezebel comes into Jim’s optical store looking for Zelda, the Psychic next door. Having just created the glasses, Jim can’t help himself but to put them on and he looks at Jezebel. He “sees” Jezebel with a Day-glow syringe standing over Zelda’s hospital bed.

Will Jim say anything to anyone about what he just saw?
Jim knows where but not when, how will he stop Jezebel from doing the deed?
Does Jim go to the police and tell them? Will they think he’s crazy?
Does Jim just follow Jezebel around and for how long?
Can Jim trust the glasses to be accurate or is he going crazy, after all he doesn’t believe in the psychic world to begin with?

With the Psychic Glasses, Jim “sees” his father, who has been “dead” for 30 years, with his mother and now he must get to the bottom of what really happened and find his dad.

What really happened to Jim’s dad?
Is he really alive?
Where has he been and what is he doing?
Why hasn’t he been able to escape and contact him and JoAnn?

Jim sees Gloria and falls in love with her though she has no interest in Jim other than being “friends”.

Will Jim and Gloria ever become more than “just friends”?

Jim is constantly trying to protect his mother, JoAnn from harm and thus stifling her from living her life and all she wants to do is live life to the fullest.

How far will Jim go to prevent his mom from “endangering” herself?
What adventures will Howard/JoAnn do to “live life to the fullest”?

Delores has a huge crush on the Delivery Guy and she keeps ordering stuff online just so he has to stop by the store.

Will Delores and the Delivery Guy ever get together?
What “tricks” will Delores “pull” to get him to notice her?

JoAnn, starts a romantic relationship with Howard, a free-spirited younger man, because she has finally come to terms with her husbands “death”.

Can an older woman keep up with a younger man?
Will their relationship blossom or wilt as Jim predicts?
Is Howard in it for the money or is his love for her real?
Is JoAnn enjoying herself and her “lust for life” attitude?

Zelda, the Psychic next door to Jim’s Optical store, has a heart attack and is in the hospital. Later, Jezebel tries to kill her. Jim arrives too late and Zelda flatlines as the nurses come rushing in to save her.

Do the nurses save Zelda?
If the nurses save her will she be in a coma?
If Zelda survives, how will Jim explain to her the crystal ball broke and he has made a pair glasses from it?
Will Zelda understand?

Gloria does romantically like Jim but her sister, Jezebel, has a strangle hold on her and Jezebel is using Gloria as a pawn to get the crystal ball that Zelda possesses. The crystal ball has been in the family for centuries.

Will Gloria break-free from Jezebel’s grasp and be with Jim?
Will Gloria find out that the crystal ball is now a pair of glasses?
Will she allow herself to love Jim regardless about the crystal ball?

Jezebel wants the crystal ball for herself and is willing to kill anybody to acquire it, including her sisters.

Will Jezebel succeed in finding out that the crystal ball is now a pair of glasses?
Will she kill Jim just for the sake of his making the glasses from the crystal ball?

There is a serial killer that has been terrorizing Los Angeles.

Will Jim have a run in with this serial killer?
If he did, how would that turn out?

[Nat Melvin]

Natalie’s Big Picture Open Loops

WIL: Properly thought through and set up open loops help create intrigue and story’s season’s structure.

Assignment 1: GOT Pilot Open loops

Big Picture Open Loops:

Who are the White Walkers, why are they killing people, and what threat do they represent to people?

What happened to Jon Snow’s mother?

What happens if the Dragon awakens?

What happened to Targaryens and their kingdom?

Will Daenerys’ marriage help her brother get the Iron Throne back?

What secret had John Arryn discovered and died for, and who killed him?

Will Daenerys adjust to living her life Dothraki way?

Will Ned Stark be in danger as the King Robert’s hand?

Will Sansa marry Jeoffrey?

Will John Snow join the Night Watch?

Will Cersei and Jamie’s affair be revealed?

Small Picture Open Loops:

Will Brandon Stark survive the fall?

Assignment 2: My Show’s Open Loops Opportunities for Season 1:

Sola:

GOALS: Sola overhears Uli’s conversation with Apollo that hints at a hidden sanctuary where she might find crucial information about the curse. However, the journey is fraught with challenges, and reaching the sanctuary becomes a pressing goal.

CONSEQUENCES: The theft of Zeus’ power has inadvertently alerted other divine beings, including Hera, to Sola’s existence. As she struggles to control her abilities, the consequences of her actions escalate, drawing the attention of both allies and enemies.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Sola realizes that breaking the curse requires unlocking the secrets hidden within her mother’s necklace. However, each attempt to decipher its magic unveils new layers of complexity, leading to unforeseen consequences and complications.

RELATIONSHIPS: Sola’s growing closeness to Antony triggers feelings of jealousy in Polly, complicating their friendship. Meanwhile, her interactions with Ash unveil hidden layers of their connection, raising questions about the nature of their feelings and shared destiny.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Sola’s quest takes her to the brink of the divine realms, where she must confront mythical creatures, ancient guardians, and powerful adversaries. The risk of succumbing to the curse amplifies, and Sola grapples with the question of whether the ends justify the means.

Polly:

GOALS: Polly, fueled by her obsession with Hawaiian myths, stumbles upon a prophecy that hints at a potential solution to the clash between the pantheons. Her goal becomes deciphering the prophecy and understanding its significance.

CONSEQUENCES: Polly’s secret infatuation with Anteros deepens, leading to emotional turmoil. The consequences of her unrequited love become more pronounced as Sola’s journey unravels the intricate connections between the gods.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Polly’s knowledge of Hawaiian myths becomes a crucial asset, but the cryptic nature of the prophecies poses challenges. Her attempts to interpret the messages inadvertently set events into motion, creating a domino effect of complications.

RELATIONSHIPS: Polly’s loyalty to Sola is tested as she grapples with conflicting emotions. Her connection to Anteros becomes a double-edged sword, influencing her decisions and potentially putting her at odds with Sola.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Polly’s delve into forbidden knowledge attracts the attention of divine entities protective of their secrets. As she uncovers more about the prophecies, the risk of becoming entangled in divine conflicts escalates.

Kama:

GOALS: Kama’s mission to escort Sola to the Island of Hawaiian Gods faces unexpected challenges when he discovers a secret prophecy hinting at unforeseen consequences. His goal shifts to deciphering the prophecy and ensuring Sola’s safety, all while trying to delay fulfilling Ku’s demands for preventing Sola from successfully achieving her goals

CONSEQUENCES: Kama’s tricks and debts catch up with him, leading to a revelation that he unknowingly triggered events that intensified the war between the pantheons. The consequences of his past actions threaten to unravel the delicate balance between gods and mortals.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Kama must navigate the treacherous alliances and rivalries between gods while fulfilling his duty to protect Sola. His attempts to outsmart divine beings lead to unexpected alliances but also sow seeds of discord.

RELATIONSHIPS: Kama’s allegiance to Ku becomes strained as he uncovers the true nature of Sola’s destiny. His interactions with Hecate, driven by mutual goals, create a complex dynamic that tests his loyalty and puts him at the center of divine power struggles.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Kama’s reliance on wit and trickery exposes him to unforeseen dangers. As the prospect of gods’ war intensifies, he must navigate the shifting allegiances, risking entanglement in divine conflicts that threaten his very existence.

Ku:

GOALS: Ku’s goal of leading the Hawaiian gods in the war against the Greek gods is challenged when he discovers a prophecy that hints at a potential resolution without further bloodshed. His goal transforms into finding a path to preventing peace between the pantheons. .

CONSEQUENCES: Ku’s aggressive pursuit of victory places him on a collision course with divine entities who question the morality of his methods. The consequences of his decisions amplify as the war unfolds, jeopardizing the stability of the Hawaiian realm.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Ku grapples with the ethical dilemma of sacrificing his principles for victory. The revelation of the prophecy forces him to reconsider his approach, but the shift in strategy triggers internal conflicts among the Hawaiian gods.

RELATIONSHIPS: Ku’s relationship with Hecate becomes strained as her hidden agenda emerges. His interactions with Uli, a voice of reason and empathy, create tension within the pantheon. The evolving dynamics test Ku’s leadership and loyalty.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Ku’s commitment to war places him in the crosshairs of divine retribution. As the conflict intensifies, he faces the risk of losing not only the war but also the trust of his fellow gods.

Uli:

GOALS: Uli’s goal to protect Sola and guide her to the Island of Hawaiian Gods is complicated when she discovers a hidden prophecy that hints at a connection between Sola and an unknown deity. Her goal evolves into unraveling the mystery surrounding Sola’s lineage.

CONSEQUENCES: Uli’s role as a guardian takes an unexpected turn when he becomes entangled in the divine conflicts. The consequences of his allegiance to Sola extend beyond protecting her, revealing a forgotten power that could alter the balance between gods.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Uli faces the challenge of deciphering ancient texts and prophecies to understand the true nature of Sola’s destiny. Her quest for knowledge leads her to question the motives of other gods and goddesses, introducing layers of complexity to the narrative.

RELATIONSHIPS: Uli’s relationship with Sola deepens as she unveils the secrets surrounding her heritage. Interactions with other gods, particularly Ku and Hecate, force Uli to navigate the intricate web of alliances and rivalries, testing her patience and diplomatic skills.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Uli’s involvement in the divine conflict exposes her to the wrath of gods with opposing agendas. The risks escalate as she becomes a key player in the unfolding events, challenging her ability to safeguard Sola and maintain neutrality.

Paul (Apollo):

GOALS: Apollo’s goal to protect the demigods seeking refuge on Refuge Island is jeopardized when he uncovers a hidden threat tied to the curse. His goal shifts to maintaining the sanctuary while uncovering the true source of the curse.

CONSEQUENCES: Apollo’s efforts to shield the demigods from divine conflicts result in unintended consequences. The consequences of his decisions lead to a revelation about the curse’s origin, linking it to events from the distant past and threatening the safety of Sola’s very existence.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Apollo faces the challenge of reconciling his role as protector with the need to confront the growing danger. His investigation into the curse unravels secrets about his fellow Olympians, creating internal conflicts and exposing vulnerabilities.

RELATIONSHIPS: Apollo’s relationships with other demigods become strained as the truth behind the curse unfolds. Interactions with divine beings, including Hera and Zeus, force him to navigate conflicting loyalties and test his commitment to maintaining the island’s sanctuary.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Apollo’s efforts to shield the demigods put him in the crossfire of divine conflicts. As the curse’s true nature is revealed, he faces the risk of losing the very sanctuary he sought to preserve.

Tula (Laka):

GOALS: Laka’s goal to reunite with her twin daughters and protect them from divine conflicts is thwarted when she discovers the prophecy surrounding Sola’s destiny. Her goal transforms into finding a way to alter the course of the clash between pantheons.

CONSEQUENCES: Laka’s attempts to shield her daughters from the consequences of divine wars lead to unexpected revelations. The consequences of her choices intertwine with the fate of both Greek and Hawaiian gods, setting the stage for a complex family reunion.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Laka grapples with the challenge of altering prophecies that seem inevitable. Her quest to change the course of events involves interactions with powerful beings, unveiling forgotten powers, and confronting her own past actions.

RELATIONSHIPS: Laka’s reunion with her daughters introduces tension as they grapple with the consequences of their shared destiny. Interactions with Zeus and Hades force Laka to confront her role in shaping the events that led to the impending clash of realms.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Laka’s involvement in divine affairs places her at risk of being caught in the crossfire. The risks escalate as she becomes a central figure in altering the course of a prophecy with far-reaching consequences.

Antony (Anteros):

GOALS: Anteros’ goal to break Zeus’ curse by winning Laka’s love sets the stage for a complicated journey. As his love for Laka is intertwined with the fate of both pantheons, new goals emerge, and the pursuit of love becomes a catalyst for unforeseen challenges.

CONSEQUENCES: Anteros’ quest for love has consequences that ripple through both the Greek and Hawaiian realms. The consequences of his actions create a web of relationships and conflicts, forcing him to question the true cost of breaking the curse and the impact on the balance between gods.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Anteros faces the challenge of navigating the complexities of love and duty. His pursuit of Laka’s affection brings him into the crossfire of divine conflicts, requiring him to make decisions that will not only impact his fate but also influence the unfolding clash of realms.

RELATIONSHIPS: Anteros’ relationships with both mortals and gods become increasingly intricate. Interactions with Laka, Zeus, and Hecate expose layers of deception and hidden agendas, testing the strength of his alliances and pushing the boundaries of loyalty.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Anteros’ involvement in the curse-breaking quest exposes him to the risks of love turning into a weapon. The danger escalates as he becomes a pawn in a larger game, with potential consequences for both the mortal and divine worlds.

Ash (Asclepius):

GOALS: Asclepius’ goal to heal and protect becomes more complex as he discovers the intertwining fates of the Greek and Hawaiian realms. His goal expands to find a way to reconcile the conflicts between pantheons while preserving the delicate balance between life and death.

CONSEQUENCES: Asclepius’ actions in pursuit of his healing goals have unforeseen consequences on the mortal and divine realms. The consequences of his medical interventions and attempts to mitigate the curse’s effects lead to a revelation about the fragility of the cosmic order.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Asclepius faces the challenge of healing wounds that extend beyond the physical. His quest for solutions involves delving into ancient lore, seeking guidance from mystical sources, and confronting the moral dilemmas that arise when life and death are manipulated.

RELATIONSHIPS: Asclepius’ relationships with mortals and gods become strained as the curse’s impact intensifies. Interactions with Hades, Zeus, and Sola force Asclepius to reevaluate his role in the unfolding events and confront the limitations of his healing abilities.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Asclepius’ attempts to mediate the curse’s effects place him at the center of divine conflicts. The risks escalate as he grapples with the ethical implications of his interventions, potentially jeopardizing the delicate equilibrium between life and death.

Hecate:

GOALS: Hecate’s goal to exploit the clash between Greek and Hawaiian gods to seize power is shrouded in secrecy. Her goal involves manipulating key players and events to establish a matriarchal dominion, setting the stage for a power struggle with unforeseeable consequences.

CONSEQUENCES: Hecate’s clandestine agenda has far-reaching consequences on the mortal and divine realms. The consequences of her manipulation create a volatile environment, with potential repercussions for gods and mortals alike, as she weaves a web of deceit to achieve her ultimate goal.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Hecate faces the challenge of maintaining the illusion of loyalty while executing her hidden plans. Her quest for dominance involves intricate schemes, alliances, and the exploitation of divine conflicts, with each move bringing her closer to achieving or unraveling her ambitions.

RELATIONSHIPS: Hecate’s relationships with other gods become increasingly treacherous as her true intentions come to light. Interactions with Hera, Persephone, and Sola force Hecate to navigate a complex landscape of alliances and betrayals, where trust is a rare commodity.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Hecate’s pursuit of power places her in the crossfire of divine conflicts and mortal repercussions. The risks escalate as she becomes a puppet master in a cosmic game, where the line between victory and defeat is blurred by the unpredictable nature of gods and destiny.

Hera:

GOALS: Hera’s goals extend beyond preserving the Olympian order. The revelation of Zeus’ stolen power and the impending clash with Hawaiian gods prompts her to reconsider her objectives, introducing new dimensions to her goals and the preservation of divine harmony.

CONSEQUENCES: Hera’s actions in response to the unfolding events carry consequences that reverberate through the realms. The consequences of her decisions affect her relationships with other gods, challenging the foundations of trust and loyalty within the divine pantheon.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Hera faces the challenge of adapting to unforeseen circumstances and protecting her divine legacy. Her quest involves navigating the intricate web of divine politics, making alliances, and confronting the moral dilemmas that arise as she redefines her role in the cosmic order.

RELATIONSHIPS: Hera’s relationships with Zeus, Hecate, and other gods undergo transformations as the clash of realms intensifies. Interactions force Hera to confront her assumptions about power, loyalty, and the sacrifices necessary to maintain divine equilibrium.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Hera’s involvement in the escalating conflicts places her in a precarious position. The risks escalate as she grapples with the repercussions of Zeus’ actions and the challenges posed by external threats, potentially reshaping the dynamics of Olympian authority.

Zeus:

GOALS: Zeus’ goals, initially centered on maintaining divine dominance, take a turn with the revelation of the curse and the theft of his power. New goals emerge as Zeus seeks to reclaim his stolen essence, setting the stage for a transformative journey that challenges his understanding of power and responsibility.

CONSEQUENCES: Zeus’ pursuit of his goals carries consequences that transcend the boundaries of the divine realms. The consequences of his actions create a ripple effect, influencing the relationships between gods, the balance of power, and the fate of both mortals and immortals.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Zeus faces the challenge of reconciling his desire for dominance with the consequences of his past actions. His quest involves navigating the intricate politics of the divine realm, confronting the limitations of his authority, and making decisions that redefine his role in the cosmic order.

RELATIONSHIPS: Zeus’ relationships with Hera, Hecate, and other gods undergo profound shifts as the clash of realms unfolds. Interactions force Zeus to confront the consequences of his choices and the complexities of divine responsibility, testing the bonds that once seemed unbreakable.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Zeus’ involvement in the escalating conflicts places him at the epicenter of a cosmic storm. The risks escalate as he grapples with the repercussions of the curse, the challenges posed by external threats, and the potential loss of divine supremacy, reshaping the very foundation of Olympian rule.

Hades:

GOALS: Hades’ goals extend beyond his traditional role as the ruler of the Underworld. As the events unfold, new goals emerge, driven by a desire to navigate the changing dynamics among the gods, protect the balance of the realms, and secure the stability of his dominion.

CONSEQUENCES: Hades’ actions carry consequences that reach beyond the boundaries of the Underworld. The consequences impact relationships with other gods, potentially altering the perception of Hades’ realm and his role in the divine order.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Hades faces the challenge of maintaining the delicate equilibrium between life and death amid the escalating conflicts. His quest involves navigating the complexities of divine politics, managing the influx of souls affected by the curse, and making decisions that redefine the Underworld’s place in the cosmic balance.

RELATIONSHIPS: Hades’ relationships with other gods, especially Persephone, undergo transformations as external threats and internal conflicts intensify. Interactions force Hades to reassess his alliances, confront moral dilemmas, and address the challenges posed by the shifting dynamics of divine power.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Hades’ involvement in the unfolding events places the Underworld at risk. The risks escalate as he grapples with the repercussions of the curse, the potential disruptions in the cycle of life and death, and the external threats that challenge the stability of his realm.

Persephone:

GOALS: Persephone’s goals, initially tied to her connection with the cycle of life, take on new dimensions. Motivated by the unfolding events, her goals shift towards protecting the natural order, maintaining harmony between gods, and preserving the integrity of her relationship with Hades.

CONSEQUENCES: Persephone’s actions carry consequences that extend beyond her personal domain. The consequences impact relationships with other gods, influencing perceptions of the Underworld, and challenging Persephone to confront the complexities of her divine identity.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Persephone faces the challenge of reconciling her role as the goddess of spring with the unfolding conflicts. Her quest involves navigating the intricacies of divine politics, addressing the consequences of the curse on mortal and divine realms, and making decisions that redefine her position in the cosmic balance.

RELATIONSHIPS: Persephone’s relationships, particularly with Hades, undergo profound shifts as external threats and internal conflicts intensify. Interactions force Persephone to assert her agency, confront moral dilemmas, and address the challenges posed by the changing dynamics of divine power.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Persephone’s involvement in the escalating conflicts places her at the crossroads of mortal and divine realms. The risks escalate as she grapples with the repercussions of the curse, the potential disruptions in the cycle of seasons, and the external threats that challenge the stability of her divine influence.

Poseidon:

GOALS: Poseidon’s goals extend beyond his traditional role as the god of the sea. Faced with the consequences of the curse, new goals emerge, pushing Poseidon to safeguard the oceans from divine upheavals, navigate conflicts among gods, and secure his dominion over maritime realms.

CONSEQUENCES: Poseidon’s actions have consequences that ripple through the seas and beyond. The consequences impact relationships with other gods, altering perceptions of Poseidon’s realm, and challenging him to assert his influence amid the changing dynamics of divine power.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Poseidon grapples with the challenge of preserving the balance of the oceans amid escalating conflicts. His quest involves navigating the complexities of divine politics, addressing the consequences of the curse on aquatic life, and making decisions that redefine the seas’ place in the cosmic balance.

RELATIONSHIPS: Poseidon’s relationships with other gods, especially those associated with water and sea creatures, undergo transformations as external threats and internal conflicts intensify. Interactions force Poseidon to reassess alliances, confront moral dilemmas, and address the challenges posed by the shifting dynamics of divine power.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Poseidon’s involvement in the unfolding events places the oceans at risk. The risks escalate as he grapples with the repercussions of the curse, potential disruptions in marine life, and the external threats that challenge the stability of his maritime dominion.

Hermes:

GOALS: Hermes, the messenger of the gods, finds new goals emerging as communication among gods becomes essential in the face of the curse. His goals include maintaining order in divine communication, deciphering cryptic messages related to the curse, and preserving his status as a trusted intermediary.

CONSEQUENCES: Hermes’ actions in the realm of divine communication have consequences that impact the effectiveness of messages among gods. The consequences influence relationships, alter perceptions of Hermes’ role, and present challenges as he navigates the intricate web of divine information exchange.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Hermes faces the challenge of deciphering messages related to the curse, ensuring accurate communication among gods, and addressing the consequences of misinformation. His quest involves unraveling cryptic prophecies, managing divine correspondence, and making decisions that impact the effectiveness of divine cooperation.

RELATIONSHIPS: Hermes’ relationships with other gods, particularly those reliant on his messenger role, undergo transformations as external threats and internal conflicts intensify. Interactions force Hermes to navigate diplomatic challenges, confront moral dilemmas in delivering crucial information, and address the challenges posed by the shifting dynamics of divine power.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Hermes’ involvement in divine communication places him at the center of potential misinterpretations, misunderstandings, and conflicts among gods. The risks escalate as he grapples with the repercussions of misinformation, potential breakdowns in divine cooperation, and the external threats that challenge the stability of his messenger role.

Iris:

GOALS: Iris, the goddess of the rainbow and messenger of the Olympian gods, adopts new goals as divine messages become integral to overcoming the curse. Her goals include ensuring the clarity and accuracy of divine communication, interpreting signs related to the curse, and preserving her role as a conduit between gods.

CONSEQUENCES: Iris’ actions in facilitating divine communication have consequences that impact the perception of divine messages. The consequences influence relationships, alter the effectiveness of communication among gods, and present challenges as she navigates the intricate web of divine information exchange.

SOLVING PROBLEMS: Iris faces the challenge of interpreting signs related to the curse, ensuring the accuracy of divine messages, and addressing the consequences of miscommunication. Her quest involves deciphering cryptic prophecies, managing divine correspondence, and making decisions that impact the effectiveness of divine cooperation.

RELATIONSHIPS: Iris’ relationships with other gods, particularly those dependent on her messenger role, undergo transformations as external threats and internal conflicts intensify. Interactions force Iris to navigate diplomatic challenges, confront moral dilemmas in delivering crucial information, and address the challenges posed by the shifting dynamics of divine power.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Iris’ involvement in divine communication places her at the center of potential misinterpretations, misunderstandings, and conflicts among gods. The risks escalate as she grapples with the repercussions of miscommunication, potential breakdowns in divine cooperation, and the external threats that challenge the stability of her messenger role.

[Janeen Johnson]

Janeen’s Open Loops

What I learned while doing this lesson is the more information the AI is given, the less imaginative it is. If I asked it to be more imaginative, it changed my characters into caricatures.

Assignment 1

Show: The Morning Show

Open loops:

GOALS:

• New goals? — Will Bradley embrace The Morning Show or blow it up
• Goals related to the big picture? Will Alex really leave if they don’t let her have cohost approval?
• Crushed goals? Is Mitch finished?
• Competition / conflict around goals? Will the other TMS lesser hosts sabotage each other and Alex to get the co-anchor spot?

CONSEQUENCES:

• Are they going to be caught? Will Alex be sucked into Mitch’s defeat?
• What problems can be created from past actions? Will Bradley’s past repeat itself?q
• Good plans gone wrong? Will Alex’s plan to ride this out without being fired be possible?

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

• What is the major problem for this character? Alex: Aging — no help for that! Bradley: family trouble and shoots herself in the foot by crusading Mitch: Got caught having affairs that may/may not have been entirely consensual
• What are they trying to solve? Alex wants to lock in her job with the next co-host Bradley wants to see if she can hold this great-paying job Mitch wants his old job back
• Major change imposed on character? Alex: Stuck with the co-host she named out of anger Bradley: Has to live up to TMS expectations while keeping her integrity of looking for truth and avoiding a blow-up
• Previous solutions cause new problems? Alex’s choice of Bradley as co-host now means she’s under the gun too if Bradley doesn’t work out.

RELATIONSHIPS:

• Relationships in peril? Alex and Mitch had a best friend relationship which may end with his firing. Alex and her husband are falling apart. Bradley and her mother are at odds about her brother
• New relationships forming? Alex and Bradley now have to work together
• Conflict inside relationships? Alex and Mitch disagree, Chip and everyone disagree, Alex and Bradley clash
• Relationships changing? Mitch and Alex’s relationship must change. Alex and Bradley morph into friends

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

• Can they survive X? Can Alex survive Mitch’s professional demise and Bradley’s new way of interviewing/reporting?
• Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions? Did Alex shoot herself in the foot by choosing Bradley and standing by it? Did Cody shoot himself in the foot by supporting Alex’s decision?
• Who else is pulled into their danger? Chip, the booker, the weatherman and his intern girlfriend, Alex’s family, Mitch’s family
• Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)? Alex and others seem to drink a LOT

Assignment 2:

My Show:

GOALS:

• New goals?

• Adrianna wants to support her family in addition to being a mom, wife and fabricator
• Zane wants to succeed at his parents’ business
• Bettina wants to be a “humane” banker and still stay afloat
• Binley wants to overcome his goals

[Joan Macbeth]

Joan Macbeth’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is… Put the open loops at the beginning – forget world-building until sometime after the audience is obsessed with what’s going to happen to the characters.

ASSIGNMENT 1

1. Think about your Example Show. Make a list of the Big Picture open loops that were established early in the season.

Why are June, Luke and Hannah fleeing? The police are chasing them – but why?

When The car is wrecked, Luke tells June to take Hannah and run.

Gunshots are heard – did Luke get shot?

June hides – she sees soldiers – will she get caught? Is little Hannah going to expose them if she can’t stay quiet?

Oh no, they’re caught and separated! What’s happened to Hannah, and will June get her back?

Then, June becomes Offred, a handmaiden, and her story unfolds. What is this strange environment?

Mrs. Waterford seems strict, and possessive of her husband, the Commander – how will these relationships unfold for June/Offred?

June/Offred wonders what the driver Nick’s situation is – will he be her friend or enemy?

(This is all in the first 10-12 minutes of the pilot.)

2. Go back and watch the pilot again. As you do, notice how many open loops are being used to create the need to see future episodes.

So many open loops… the warnings by Ofglen, with hope of an underground to aid escapes; but who’s an “Eye” in the Waterfords’ house where June lives; the bizarre environment and the cruel Aunt Lydia, Janine’s punishment of plucking out her actual eye, meeting up with Moira from June’s past – her best friend, who also knew Luke and Hannah.

Deadline: 24 hours

ASSIGNMENT 2:

1. Use this list to brainstorm big picture open loops for your first season that you will use to keep the audience captivated.

GOALS:

• New goals? Juliet wants to escape the collective to be with Romeo, but they are both captured by the militia and separated.

• Goals related to the big picture? Romeo’s tribal family has to flee the area, under attack by the militia. Romeo’s brother stays behind in the hopes of freeing Romeo.

• Crushed goals? Romeo and his brother needed to improve their relationship/forgive each other, but Romeo was captured before they had the chance.

• Competition / conflict around goals? Romeo’s brother was in love with Romeo’s tribal fiancée and meant to marry her when Romeo betrayed her by running away with Juliet. But the surprise attack has scattered the tribe, and the fiancée might be dead.

CONSEQUENCES:

• Are they going to be caught? There needs to be hope that they can get away and fear that they will be caught, so using open loops will contribute to this.

• Problems created from past actions? When Romeo and Juliet attempt escape, the consequences are that the Militia increases its efforts to kill the free tribal people. Romeo will be guilty of bringing death upon his family. Similarly, the Militia cracks down on the Reproduction Collective’s women, making the collective even more prison-like, lest they get ideas from Juliet’s misbehaviour.

• Good plans gone wrong? Romeo’s brother hopes to save the people he loves, but he himself also gets caught.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

• What is the major problem for this character?

• Romeo: to stay alive, escape, then find Juliet; find and make amends to his family/tribe. Hopefully to change the way things are in their world.

• Juliet: To hide that she is illegally pregnant, because she’ll be put to death. Ultimately, to change how the Reproduction Collective fits into the society of Cascadia.

• Ophelia: to save her daughter’s life, without everyone finding out she had an affair with The General.

• The Chief of Staff: To maintain his power and the status quo.

• The General: To gain control of the Militia government from the Chief of Staff and introduce new, more humane laws; also to protect his secret family.

• Romeo’s brother: Reconcile with Romeo. Stay alive.

• What are they trying to solve?

Romeo – Right some wrongs and be with the one he loves.

Juliet – Protect her unborn child and live free.

Ophelia – Protect her children.

Romeo’s Brother – Be true to his tribe, including Romeo.

The General – Their system is all wrong – fix it.

The Chief of Staff – He alone can save society… by killing it, if necessary.

• Major change imposed on character?

Romeo – Stepping up. Life is harder than he thought it was going to be. He needs skills to survive and doesn’t always have what it takes.

Juliet – Stand up against authority.

Ophelia – It becomes too hard to keep all her secrets.

Romeo’s Brother – Talented and happy-go-lucky when free, he sees the other side of life when he becomes enslaved.

The General – Cease the cover-ups and tell the truth.

The Chief of Staff – He is not all-powerful.

• Previous solutions cause new problems?

Romeo – Running away with Juliet causes their imprisonment and separation – where they each think/are told the other is dead. He thought he was saving Juliet, but he has put her in extreme danger.

Juliet – To protect her unborn child, she claims it was conceived when the Chief off Staff raped her. There will be a genetics test when the child is born, so she fears the test will prove she lied, and she’ll be executed anyway.

Ophelia – She’s always been able to secretly protect her children, fathered by The General, due to his high position. What happens if he is found to be a traitor?

The General – He chooses a course of action that will be regarded as treason – how will he survive?

Romeo’s Brother – Following his brother always seems to get him into bigger trouble.

The Chief of Staff – ?

RELATIONSHIPS:

• Relationships in peril? Romeo and Juliet’s relationship is always in peril.

• New relationships forming? A deeper relationship between Romeo and his brother is in the making, but with lots of problems at the beginning.

• Conflict inside relationships? So much is illegal in Cascadia’s society – things happen that have to be kept secret.

• Relationships changing? Secrets eventually come out, changing some relationships.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

• Can they survive X?

Can Romeo’s “free” tribe survive the renewed attacks upon them ? Will Romeo survive prison? Will his brother survive capture and enslavement? Will Juliet outwit her opponents and survive?

• Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions?

Juliet claiming her baby’s father is the evil Chief of Staff, not Romeo?

• Who else is pulled into their danger?

Juliet’s (secret) mother, Ophelia, wants to protect her daughter and may have to expose her illegal secrets.

• Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

The whole society needs controlled human reproduction in order to survive – or they will die out from a disease they call The Plague. This sounds more external than internal, but every woman with the right disease-resistant genes knows it is her duty to reproduce for the continuance of civilization.

2. Use this prompt with AI to generate even more Open Loops.

I’m writing a TV Series that is [Format/Genre] about [Concept] and [Conflict] with [Lead Characters]. Can you generate [Open Loops] and setups that could play out over the course of Season 1. Definition of “Open Loops”:Questions that can only be answered in future episodes. An open loop is a rhetorical device to instill curiosity by creating anticipation for what will come next. Open Loops opportunities: GOALS: New goals? Goals related to the big picture? Crushed goals? Competition / conflict around goals? CONSEQUENCES: Are they going to be caught? Problems created from past actions? Good plans gone wrong? SOLVING PROBLEMS: What is the major problem for this character? What are they trying to solve? Major change imposed on character? Previous solutions cause new problems? RELATIONSHIPS: Relationships in peril? New relationships forming? Conflict inside relationships? Relationships changing? DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: Can they survive X? Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions? Who else is pulled into their danger? Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)? Format/Genre = Post-apocalyptic thriller Concept = Post-apocalyptic reimagining of “Romeo and Juliet” in a future low-tech world where women are enslaved to reproduce for the military dictatorship, who are out to destroy the few remaining free people living in the wilds of Northwest/Cascadia. Lead Characters = Character 1 = RomeoCharacter 2 = Juliet Character 3 = Romeo’s Brother Character 4 = Romeo’s Fiancée Character 5 = Juliet’s (secret) Mother “Ophelia” Character 6 = Juliet’s (secret) Father “The General” Character 7 = The General’s Boss – “The Chief of Staff” Character 8 = A friend of Ophelia “Nurse” Conflict = Three factions: Romeo’s tribe who want to live free and off the land; Women in the Reproduction Collective (including Juliet) who are controlled by All Male Totalitarian Government with military power and hatred of free people. Romeo and Juliet want to be together, but are caught by the military while trying to escape and are separated and imprisoned under the authority of The Chief of Staff.

Open Loops Opportunities for Season 1:

GOALS:

1. New goals?

   • Juliet discovers coded messages hinting at a hidden resistance within the Reproduction Collective, sparking a goal to unite the enslaved women for a rebellion.

2. Goals related to the big picture?

   • Romeo learns of a secret weapon that could tip the power balance in favor of the free people. His goal becomes finding and harnessing this weapon to turn the tide against the military dictatorship.

3. Crushed goals?

   • Romeo’s attempt to broker a fragile alliance with another free tribe collapses, leading to internal conflicts and mistrust among his people.

4. Competition / conflict around goals?

   • Juliet and her father, The General, unknowingly share conflicting goals for the future. Juliet seeks freedom, while The General is determined to maintain control over the Collective, setting up a heartbreaking father-daughter conflict.

CONSEQUENCES:

1. Are they going to be caught?

   • Juliet’s covert communications with Nurse to organize a rebellion within the Collective raise suspicions, setting the stage for a tense investigation.

2. Problems created from past actions?

   • Romeo’s brother, thought dead in the attack, reappears with a hidden agenda, creating a web of lies that could endanger the entire tribe.

3. Good plans gone wrong?

   • A well-executed plan to expose The Chief of Staff’s corruption backfires, intensifying the military’s oppression and putting Romeo and Juliet at greater risk.

SOLVING PROBLEMS:

1. What is the major problem for this character?

   • Juliet discovers a potential cure for the plague hidden within the Collective. Her major problem becomes navigating the moral dilemma of whether to expose the cure and risk retaliation.

2. What are they trying to solve?

   • Romeo seeks a way to infiltrate the heavily guarded military compound to rescue Juliet, leading to a high-stakes operation with unforeseen complications.

3. Major change imposed on character?

   • Ophelia, facing the consequences of her affair with The General, is thrust into a leadership role within the resistance, challenging her peaceful nature.

4. Previous solutions cause new problems?

   • Juliet’s attempt to expose The Chief of Staff’s corruption inadvertently reveals the existence of the hidden resistance, putting Nurse and the enslaved women in greater danger.

RELATIONSHIPS:

1. Relationships in peril?

   • Romeo and Juliet’s relationship faces strains as the harsh realities of their world test their love and commitment.

2. New relationships forming?

   • Ophelia forms an unexpected alliance with a charismatic rebel leader, introducing a romantic subplot that complicates her relationships with The General and Nurse.

3. Conflict inside relationships?

   • The revelation of Romeo’s brother’s deceit creates tension within the tribe, threatening the unity needed to confront the military.

4. Relationships changing?

   • Juliet’s growing connection with a fellow captive in the military prison sparks jealousy and mistrust among her fellow prisoners, leading to internal conflicts.

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS:

1. Can they survive X?

   • Juliet’s escape attempt from the military prison introduces a life-threatening situation as she navigates treacherous terrain to reunite with Romeo.

2. Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions?

   • Romeo makes a risky pact with a rival tribe to acquire crucial resources, endangering the delicate balance of power in the region.

3. Who else is pulled into their danger?

   • The revelation of Juliet’s connection to the hidden resistance endangers Nurse, putting her at odds with the military.

4. Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

   • The General struggles with the inner demons of guilt over his role in the plague’s outbreak, leading to erratic decision-making that jeopardizes the safety of the Collective.

[Lawrence Fraly]

Larry Fraller’s Big Picture Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is to not freak out if I can’t figure something out. AI will help me figure things out. When I get bogged down in detail, AI helps me see the bigger picture.

Assignment 1

DIPLOMAT

Goals:

learn to be ambassador

divorce Hal

Major problems

ambassador to UK – doesn’t want it, doesn’t know the protocols

who did the explosion

Consequences

UK have her bypass the sec of state who is her boss

sec of state can’t stand Hal

Solving problems

major problem – stopping a war

trying to solve who attacked the ship

major change – has to deal with high society and top authorities

previous solutions cause new problems–she’s used to field work in a third world country concerning human rights

public image is everything to the Brits

Relationships

Her plan to divorce Hal is in peril.

new relationship with CIA station director

new relationship with UK foreign secretary

Danger/survival/risks:

has to work with CIA

if she fucks it up, there could be a war

MY STORY

Goal Eddie and Sarah want to steal the oil well

Victoria wants to keep oil well secret, and definitely not let Sarah in on the secret

Consequences Will Sarah and Eddie get caught

What will Victoria do to stop the scheme

Victoria’s already killed one of Eddie’s girlfriends

Solving problems

Can Sarah escape Eddie’s threats

Sarah’s major problem is Eddie

How can she keep her plans secret

She’s not used to acting for herself

Relationships

She plots to leave Eddie

Will she come clean with Daniel

Daniel despises Alex, can this be resolved

Victoria turns Alex against Sarah

Danger/survival/risks:

Sarah, Daniel and Eddie (her ex) haven’t the slightest idea the danger their in

Alex is beginning to see the bigger picture. What will he do about it?

Victoria’s the only one who knows the details of the well.

Victoria’s part of a larger group protecting/the well

Victoria has killed before, will she kill again.

The well contains poisonous gases which, if released, would cause widespread illness, death

AI Generated Loops

You

I’m writing a TV series that is [format/genre] about [concept] in which the mom marries the street musician and has a baby by him and [conflict] with [lead characters]. Can you generate [open loops] and setups that could play out over the course of season 1.

Definition of “open loops”: questions that can only be answered in future episodes. An open loop is a rhetorical device to instill curiousity by creating anticipation for what will come next.

open loops opportunities:

goals:

new goals?

goals related to the big picture?

crushed goals?

competition/conflict around goals?

consequences: are they going to be caught?

problems created from past actions?

good plans gone wrong?

solving problems:

what is the major problem for this character?

major change imposed on character?

what are they trying to solve?

major changes cause new problems?

previous solutions cause new problems?

relationships: relationships in peril?

new relationships forming?

conflict inside relationships?

relationships changing?

danger/survival/risks:

can they survive X?

putting themselves in danger/making dangerous decisions?

who else is pulled into their danger?

internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

format/genre = crime drama

concept = a mom and her ex scheme to steal from a street musician and his controlling mother the rights to a secret capped oil well in the Everglades.

conflict = control of the oil well and the ex-‘s threats of violence against the mom and the street musician lead

characters = the mom, her trans teen, her ex-, the musician, his mother

ChatGPT

Certainly! Here are some open loops, setups, and potential storylines for your crime drama TV series:

Goals:

1. New Goals:

· The mom discovers a hidden document that hints at another valuable resource in the Everglades. What is it, and how does it complicate their initial plan?

· The street musician starts pursuing a music career in a way that inadvertently puts the secrecy of the oil well at risk. Can they keep his new ambitions under control?

2. Goals Related to the Big Picture:

· The mom learns about a larger organization with interests in the Everglades, raising questions about who else might be after the oil well and why.

· The musician’s mother has a hidden agenda that involves a powerful figure in the city. How does this connection impact the power dynamics around the oil well?

3. Crushed Goals:

· The mom and her ex-face unexpected setbacks in stealing the rights to the oil well. What went wrong, and how do they adapt their plan?

· The musician’s dream of a music career hits a roadblock, leading him to reconsider his involvement in the oil well scheme.

4. Competition/Conflict Around Goals:

· A rival group discovers the mom and her ex-‘s plan and seeks to outmaneuver them. What are their motives, and how do they complicate the situation?

· The ex-‘s violent threats escalate, creating internal conflicts within the group and putting pressure on their alliance.

Consequences:

1. Are They Going to Be Caught?:

· A detective with a personal connection to the Everglades starts investigating, raising the stakes for the mom and her group.

· The musician’s mother hires a private investigator to dig into the background of the mom and her ex-. What secrets will be uncovered?

2. Problems Created From Past Actions:

· The mom’s past criminal activities resurface, leading to unexpected alliances and betrayals.

· The ex-‘s violent actions have consequences that extend beyond their immediate circle, attracting attention from law enforcement and criminal rivals.

3. Good Plans Gone Wrong:

· A seemingly foolproof plan to steal the rights to the oil well unravels due to an unforeseen complication. How do they salvage the situation?

Solving Problems:

1. Major Problem for This Character:

· The trans teen faces challenges related to their identity and the societal pressures in the crime-filled environment. How do they navigate these issues?

2. Major Change Imposed on Character:

· The mom is forced to make a difficult choice that jeopardizes her relationship with her child. How does this decision impact their future actions?

3. What Are They Trying to Solve?:

· The mom discovers a hidden message that suggests the oil well might have environmental consequences. How does this revelation affect their motives and alliances?

4. Major Changes Cause New Problems:

· A change in leadership within the criminal underworld introduces new conflicts and alliances, reshaping the dynamics around the oil well.

5. Previous Solutions Cause New Problems:

· The mom and her group successfully acquire the oil well but find themselves entangled in a web of corporate and political corruption. How do they navigate these treacherous waters?

Relationships:

1. Relationships in Peril:

· The mom’s relationship with the musician becomes strained as secrets and lies come to light. Can they overcome these challenges, or is their connection doomed?

2. New Relationships Forming:

· The trans teen forms a surprising alliance with someone from the musician’s past. How does this alliance impact the overall scheme?

3. Conflict Inside Relationships:

· The ex-‘s violent tendencies create tension within the group, leading to internal power struggles. Who emerges as the dominant force, and at what cost?

4. Relationships Changing:

· The musician’s mother begins to question her loyalty to her son, leading to unexpected alliances and betrayals.

Danger/Survival/Risks:

1. Can They Survive X?:

· The group faces a dangerous encounter in the Everglades that tests their survival skills and loyalty to each other.

2. Putting Themselves in Danger/Making Dangerous Decisions:

· The mom makes a risky deal with a dangerous figure to protect her family. How does this decision come back to haunt them?

3. Who Else Is Pulled Into Their Danger?:

· A charismatic activist becomes involved in their cause, attracting both supporters and enemies. How does their involvement change the dynamics of the conflict?

4. Internal Dangers (Drug Addiction, Need for Medicine, Inner Demons):

· The musician struggles with addiction, posing a threat to the success of their plan. Can they overcome these personal demons, or will it lead to their downfall?

These open loops and setups should provide a foundation for intricate and suspenseful storylines throughout Season 1 of your crime drama TV series.

[Lenore]

BWTV-AI Module 1, Lesson 9

Lenore Bechtel’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned from this assignment is that loops cause questions that can only be answered in future episodes. The audience’s need to know the answer will keep them coming back for more.

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