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Module 2 -Lesson 3: The Transformational Journey
Posted by cheryl croasmun on December 26, 2023 at 10:56 pmPost your assignments here…
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Andre’s
Transformational Journey.1. My one-sentence vision for my success from this program is…
…to learn how to write the best script(s) of my life, so far, by dramatically improving the quality of my writing in the genres of Action, Erotica, and Horror; while having both the Financial and Time resources to travel the world doing so, with colleagues / friends /peers, (the few that I have).
2. Under My Vision, answer What I learned from doing this assignment is…
Objective: Create the transformational journey for our main Characters that an audience will care about deeply.
Arc Beginning: This is where the Character starts.
Arc Ending: This is where the Character is at the end of the movie.
The story begins in one place and ends in another. A major change will occur between that start and finish point. The arc covers the journey between them, that is, everything that happens to change the old ways into the new ways.
There are both Internal and External Journeys.
Internal Journey: This is a mind and emotions change.
External Journey: This is an action and experience change.
My Character Arc and External/Internal Journey are my guide as I create the Old Ways/New Ways. Doing this, I will know exactly what changes I need to make to have my Transformational Journey be powerful.
Character Name.
Arc Beginning.
Arc Ending.
Internal Journey.
External Journey.
Old Ways.
New Ways.
1. Start assignment by empowering myself using the State-To-Activity empowerment process.
· State: I’m completely capable…
· Activity: … at designing a great transformational journey for my Protagonist!
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Project: The Planetary Prince…
2. Tell the Character Arc for my Protagonist: Indigo.
· Arc Beginning: A voice, perhaps his guardian angel, warns him to change seats just prior to a hit and run accident in which he experiences NDE (Near Death Experience).
· Arc Ending: Is someone who accepts his NDE (Near Death Experience) and now accepts he has access to both worlds, parallel dimensions.
3. Give their Internal/External Journey:
Internal Journey: Mental Health (not illness) and acceptance to Body, Mind, and Soul union.
External Journey: Dealing with ignorance of western medicine in regards to his experience, because it is not in their textbooks, he loses everything and is discounted as 5150.
4. Tell their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
Old Ways: Trusting in the system.
New Ways: Trusting in himself.
End Planetary Prince Transformational Journey.
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Project: ΩmegaMan…
Character Name: Edgar D. Mitchell.
Arc Beginning: If we continue without change and without growth in our basic thinking and behavior, we will, despite spectacular technological feats, eventually- end the evolutionary experiment known as man.
Arc Ending: My thinking-indeed, my consciousness-was altered profoundly. I came to feel a moral responsibility to pass on the transformative experience of seeing earth from the larger perspective.
Internal Journey: I knew well that analytic and logical thought, using objective data, could produce a technology that would reveal new secrets of the universe by probing the reaches of Space and, at the microscopic level, the structure of atoms.
External Journey: “In February 1971, I had the privilege of walking on the Moon as a member of the Apollo 14 lunar expedition.
During the voyage I made a test in extrasensory perception (ESP), attempting to send information telepathically to four receivers on earth.
Old Ways: When I went to the moon, I was as pragmatic a Test Pilot, Engineer, and Scientist as any of my colleagues. More than a quarter of a century had been spent in learning the empirical approach to dealing with the universe. Many times, my life has depended upon the validity of scientific principles and the reliability of the technology built upon those principles.
New Ways: But further, the rational man in me had to recognize the validity of the non-rational cognitive process.
End ΩmegaMan.
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Project: APT28.
Character Name:
· Algo Informatio (AI).
· Online Profile Name: Vaginal Moisture.
Arc Beginning: Gifted yet novice computer-science student.
Arc Ending: Highly sought after Systems Designer.
Internal Journey: From girl-shy porn addict to highly sought after bachelor playboy.
External Journey: From gifted-talented yet naïve computer science student, to highly sought after Systems Designer.
Old Ways:
· Jerks-off to a lot of porn; Has a thing for nipples and moist vaginal folds.
· Not aware of gifted-talent in coding.
· Ignorant to the world.
· Politics…
New Ways:
· Has consistent real female attention. Still has a thing for nipples and moist vaginal folds!
· Designs Systems for major industries, including adult industry.
· Much more aware of the world.
· Politics…
End APT28.
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This reply was modified 1 year, 6 months ago by
Andre Howard. Reason: Add project ΩmegaMan. Expect another edit for Apt28
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This reply was modified 1 year, 6 months ago by
Andre Howard.
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This reply was modified 1 year, 6 months ago by
Andre Howard. Reason: Added APT28, Creating the Journey
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Pam’s Transformational Journey
One-Sentence Vision: I will turn my ideas into movie classics and live a happy, successful life as a writer and industry professional.
What I learned from doing this assignment: my protagonist is taking shape like a piece of clay as I add more depth.
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EVE (Protagonist in my Horror/Comedy COLD-BLOODED BEAUTY)
Arc Beginning: Feeling washed-up, both personally and professionally
Arc Ending: Confident in her own skin
Internal Journey: From insignificant to a force to-be-reckoned-with
External Journey: From a has-been graphic designer to relevant new artist
Old Ways:
– Depressed that she just turned 50
– Feels unattractive
– Compares herself unfavorably to her beauty-queen friend
– Extremely vulnerable to morally-grey decisions
– Loses a promotion to a younger employee at work
– Is afraid to pursue her dream of being a fine artistNew Ways:
– Is proud that she’s 50
– Likes her natural looks, able to be herself
– Doesn’t need to measure herself against others
– Confidently makes bold, healthy decisions
– Sticks up for herself at work
– Completes her canvases for a gallery showing-
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William Whelan – Transformational History
Vision: To write a screenplay which will become a successful movie.
What I learned from doing this assignment is to explore the transformational history of my protagonist.
Protagonist Character Arc
· Arc Beginning – Liza is stuck in a dead-end job and inhabits a world she does not want to be part of anymore.
· Arc Ending – Liza follows Professor Shaw back to England to start a new life in a new country.
Internal/External
· Internal Journey – Ever since witnessing a torture/beating as a little girl Liza has longed to leave the mafia life of violence and old-world mentality.
· External Journey – Liza starts by getting a hair stylist job outside the family business, then enrolls in a theater class followed by taking elocution lessons from Professor Shaw.
Old Ways / New Ways
· Old Ways – Brooklyn accent, copious make-up and teased hair, her life dominated by her father, Big Dom, and the mafia way of life.
· New Ways – Cultured accent, natural look, independent lifestyle.
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Vision: I want to write a smart, well-written, and blockbuster script which I can then produce and direct.
What I learned from doing this assignment is the transformational journey for my protagonist.
Subject Line: WIM – Vernall Ritchey – Transformational Journey
KYLA
Arc Beginning: An attentive Caregiver and soon-to-be nun deeply committed to her faith, showing compassion and dedication to Father Gill’s well-being.
Arc Ending: Fanatical and manipulative Caregiver who resorts to extreme and sadistic measures performing exorcisms while transforming into a terrifying and seductive demonic individual.
Internal Journey: From a brave and determined devout soon-to-be nun. Facing her fears with unwavering resolve and Catholic faith.
External Journey: Paranoid, fearful, desperate, terrifying, and faithless.
Old Ways:
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Attentive kind Caregiver
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Committed to her Catholic faith
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Brave and courageous
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Prayer heals all
New Ways:
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Evil Demon
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Paranoid
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Fanatical and Manipulative
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Sadistic
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Subject Line: John P. Hallar’s Transformational Journey
My Vision: To be a successful, highly sought after, highly paid writer who has had multiple movies produced and optioned.
What I learned from doing this assignment is: especially for the Protagonist, is how to think ahead of their arc, their journey from beginning to end throughout the story.
Character Arc for Melody (Protagonist):
- Arc Beginning:
Mad about life, death of husband, health issues, being sent to an assisted
living facility.- Arc Ending: Excited
about life, helping granddaughter, living in an assisted living facility.Her Internal/External Journey:
- Internal Journey:
From mad, angry to happy, understanding.- External Journey: From
timid, withdrawn to powerful, outgoing and social.Old Ways VS. New Ways:
- Old Ways: Grumpy,
not interested in doing anything, not motivated, not alive. Mad!- New Ways: Excited,
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- Arc Beginning:
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