Module 2 – Lesson 9: Make Every Line Intriguing

[Brenda Boddy]

Brenda Boddy – Using intriguing patterns.
What I learned doing this assignment: This took a while. Every time I think I get through it I find something else. Eventually I must do something else and come back or I find myself just editing instead of making it better. I’m also trying not to repeat myself in different parts of the bible such as the summary vs. the first season description. I can tell my bible has improved but I’m not sure I’m there yet.