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Partner-up to exchange feedback
Posted by Laree Griffith on October 9, 2023 at 2:51 pmPost your request to exchange feedback here.
Lloyd Shellenberger replied 1 year, 5 months ago 3 Members · 7 Replies -
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Hello, I am looking to exchange my Pilot. I wrote a TV and Streaming pilot. The TV is 45 pages, The streaming is 59. High concept: A former CIA assassin turned Special Operations Commander and his crew are brutally recruited into a Top-Secret Pentagon agency whose purpose is to make sure our nation’s secrets stay secret.
Genre: Action Drama
Title: Bejamin Greene
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Hi, Lloyd! I’d be happy to exchange scripts but I won’t be ready with mine until next week as I’m still working thru the final lessons.
Let me know if that works for you,
CJ
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Call me at 747-210-1983 or lloydshellenberger@yahoo.com when you are ready. Also I wrote a TV and Streaming version for both. High Concept. Colonel Benjamin Greene, a former CIA assassin turned Special Operations Commander and his crew are brutally recruited by a Top Secret Pentagon Agency to make sure the nations secrets stay secret.
Action Drama
What’s yours?
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hey again! emailed you last week, but thought I should post here as well
happy to exchange anytime, my script, PATIENT X, is a medical thriller with paranormal elements aimed at streamers and is 58pages
PDFs can be difficult to add comments to, would you prefer a word doc instead? just let me know what works for you
CJ
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yes, I emailed you almost two weeks ago and posted here on the forum (these forums are super glitchy!)
what format would you prefer? word doc is the easiest to add comments to
thanks,
CJ
PS: I’ll also send this to your email, hope it makes it thru
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CJ give me your email I must have missed it sorry. I will send you the PDF for the streaming and the TV pilot for Benjamin Greene. I use word. Do you want to use word for feedback?
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