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Post Day 5 Assignment Here
Posted by cheryl croasmun on August 24, 2021 at 3:43 amReply to post your assignment.
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Dave’s (1950’s Comedy Short) Character Journeys
What I learned doing this assignment:
A few things about each of my characters.
Journey Structures for each main character
Beginning:
Audrey – Novice switchboard operator, alone in the office on New Year’s Eve during a blizzard.
Audrey’s Sister – Out on a date arranged by Audrey.
Audrey’s Husband – He’s smarting from an argument he had with Audrey over her matchmaking and meddling.
Audrey’s Sons – ages 12 and 8 – are home alone which leads to Audrey’s first turning point.
Turning Point:
Audrey’s husband, the town vet, is driving in the storm to help a farm family.
Sister – Her date looks like a dud. She blames Audrey.
Sons – Call Audrey to fight over dinner/dishes. The younger boy worries about his dad.
Town Mayor – Expecting a call from the state capital.
Midpoint:
The farmer’s wife calls Audrey. The vet hasn’t arrived at the farm yet.
Sister – Still at the NYE party, having fun drinking and ignoring her date.
Sons – Call Audrey to argue about radio programs.
Governor’s Aide – Calls the mayor.
Turning Point @2:
The farmer’s wife calls again. The calf is coming and the vet still isn’t there.
Sister – Still drinking, worries that she’ll never find a good man like Audrey did.
Dilemma:
Something is wrong with the cow. They need the vet now!
Sons – Now the older boy worries about his dad.
Third Act Climax:
Audrey uses her farm upbringing to help the farmers.
End:
Audrey’s husband arrives just as the calf is born. He surprises Audrey on the phone. Tearful happy ending.
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