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Meg Stout’s Relationship Maps
What I learned doing this assignment is that it sucks that the forums don’t have a way to paste in tables or pictures, as this makes this particular assignment take up a huge amount of vertical space. For my piece, I explored the relationships between the core characters, to cut down on having to do three unique relationships for each of three main people. But I love the power of this tool for any relationship we see two people enter into – great exploration for finding the things on which people do have conflict, as it is conflict and its resolution our brains are wired to crave.
Assignment #1
Thirteen Reasons Why
Hannah and Clay
Surface: Co-workers
Common Ground: Work at movie theater, go to the same high school
Conflict: she needs him, he doesn’t know how to reach out to her
Relationship History: They grew to be close but he did nothing as she spiraled into fatal depression
Subtext: Clay truly loved Hannah but did believe the rumors that she was a slut
Relationship Arc: casual friends to lovers
Hannah and Justin
Surface: Boyfriend
Common Ground: Same high school, friends with Hannah’s “only friend” Kat
Conflict: romance – she was infatuated, he used her to enhance his reputation for getting any girl he wants
Relationship History: They kissed then he shares a picture of suggesting she is a slut that goes viral
Subtext: Didn’t care about hurting Hannah if it made him seem cool
Relationship Arc: meet at the party Kat throws, goes through one date, ends in Justin slandering Hannah
Hannah and Jessica
Surface: Best friend
Common Ground: new students at Liberty High, put together as friends by guidance counselor
Conflict: friendship with Alex Jessica blames Hannah for sabotaging her and Alex
Relationship History: They were put together and became friends, but Jessica and Hannah grew apart and fought over mutual friend, Alex
Subtext: Thought Hannah was lying but comes to learn content of tapes were true
Relationship Arc: meet at school, become close friends, end in fight over Alex, who has dumped Jessica, then Jessica becomes aligned with Justin
Assignment #2
Children of Heaven
Bennett and Annie
Surface: Lovers
Common Ground: Living in home of Joseph Smith
Conflict: Bennett wants to marry Annie, but Annie learns Bennett is still married
History: Meet at Smith household, Bennett will persist in attempting to possess Annie, first through marriage, then through a secret sexual union
Subtext: Bennett sees Annie as the only woman who can make him whole following his wife’s abandonment
Relationship Arc: Living in Smith household. Bennett admires Annie but admiration turns to love when Bennett learns his wife refuses to reconcile and continues to obsession even after Bennett learns his wife refuses to divorce him. His final depraved acts in Nauvoo are motivated by a desire to bed and impregnate Annie to bind her to him.
Bennett and Joseph Smith
Surface: Partners
Common Ground: Desire to defend Saints from mob violence
Conflict: Joseph wants to trust and forgive Bennett but Bennett can’t keep away from the women he “loves”
History: Bennett comes to Nauvoo as a politically connected protector. When outsiders attack Bennett, Joseph defends him. But when Joseph learns the depths of Bennett’s depravity, he ejects him from the community
Subtext: Bennett sees Joseph and the Mormons as the key to his future political dominance
Relationship Arc: Come together because of the Missouri extermination order and subsequent kidnappings of Mormons from Illinois. Wins a strong city charter and advocates for concentration at Nauvoo for political reasons. Joseph initially forgives when Bennett commits adultery, but eventually ejects Bennett. Bennett turns on Joseph, conducting a national slander campaign.
Surface:
Lovers
Common Ground:
Living in home of Joseph Smith
Conflict:
Bennett wants to marry Annie, but Annie learns Bennett is still married
History:
Meet at Smith household, Bennett will persist in attempting to possess Annie, first through marriage, then through a secret sexual union
Subtext:
Bennett sees Annie as the only woman who can make him whole following his wife’s abandonment
Relationship Arc:
Living in Smith household. Bennett admires Annie but admiration turns to love when Bennett learns his wife refuses to reconcile and continues to obsession even after Bennett learns his wife refuses to divorce him. His final depraved acts in Nauvoo are motivated by a desire to bed and impregnate Annie to bind her to himBennett and Sarah Pratt
Surface: Patron/patient
Common Ground: Laundry and mending, medical treatment
Conflict: Sarah is lonely and craves the hysteria treatments Bennett provides, tempts him when he is weak
History: Introduced so Sarah can help Bennett with laundry and mending and Bennett can provide Sarah funds for these services. Bennett treats her hysteria. They have a brief affair and are punished. When Bennett is ejected, he claims he had protected Sarah from Joseph’s advances
Subtext: Sarah represents Bennett’s hunger for sex, the beginning of his descent into depravity
Relationship Arc: Introduced so Bennett can get help with laundry and mending and provide Sarah some income. Bennett begins to treat Sarah for hysteria over her husband’s absence. When Annie leaves Nauvoo, Sarah tries to comfort Bennett by touching him as he’s touched her. Bennett, aroused, takes a willing Sarah. Bennett tries to protect Sarah from their sin, but this twists to threaten her marriage.
Annie and Joseph Smith
Surface: Governess and Employer
Common Ground: Belief in the restored gospel, concern for Emma, the Smith children, and other Saints
Conflict: Annie’s hopes to marry
History: Annie hired as governess, then is introduced to Joseph’s mandate to restore biblical marriage. When Bennett attacks Joseph, Joseph protects Annie from Bennett.
Subtext: Joseph and Annie will covenant to be together for eternity
Relationship Arc: Annie starts as a believer in the restored gospel Joseph preaches. She becomes the Smith governess, then is embroiled in the conflict between Joseph and Bennett. She will covenant with Joseph Smith and agree to marry Jonathan Holmes as a public husband.
Annie and Jonathan Holmes
Surface: husband and wife
Common Ground: desire to enter into an eternal covenant with those they respectively love
Conflict: Once publicly married, Jonathan refuses to consummate their union, feeling it would constitute infidelity to his deceased wife
History: Annie saved Jonathan’s daughter from the attack where Jonathan’s wife was gang-raped. They care for Jonathan’s wife together until her death, after which Annie becomes the de facto mother for Jonathan’s surviving daughter. After Jonathan’s hope for being eternally bound to his deceased wife is scuttled, Annie agrees to accept Jonathan as public husband, though both know she will enter into covenant with Joseph Smith
Subtext: A marriage of convenience becomes a lifelong devotion
Relationship Arc: From friends to mourners to religious co-conspirators to devoted spouses
Joseph Smith and Jonathan Holmes
Surface: Religious leader and convert
Common Ground: Devotion to the restored gospel and to the Smith family
Conflict: When Joseph has disagreements with his wife, Emma, Jonathan sides with Emma. Emma’s main disagreements arise from her fear that Joseph is endangering his life, which aligns with Jonathan’s concerns as one of Joseph’s bodyguards.
History: Jonathan and his cousins converted to Joseph’s restored gospel and gathered to Ohio. Jonathan lived in the Smith home for two years, until marrying Marietta Carter. After Marietta’s death, Jonathan and his daughter join the Smith household, where Jonathan will help serve as bodyguard. Jonathan becomes involved in helping “fix” the damage caused by Bennett’s illicit intercourse heresy.
Subtext: Devotion can break your heart. Love is complicated.
Relationship Arc: Jonathan goes from convert to Joseph’s doctrine to protector of Joseph’s legal wife and Joseph’s covenant wife after Joseph’s death.
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Emmanuel Sullivan’s Relationship Maps
What I learned doing this assignment is character relationships move around from good to bad and back to good at any moment. Each character has a unique marker that they control to determine how the mutual relationship flows.
Assignment #1
Show – The Americans
Philip Jennings and Elizabeth Jennings
Surface: Married – Wife
Common Ground: KGB Agents
Conflict: No love in marriage
History: Both young when recruited for the KGB
Subtext: Distant
Relationship Arc: Cold to loving
Philip Jennings and Stan Beeman
Surface: Neighbor
Common Ground: Family Man
Conflict: FBI Agent
History: None
Subtext: Doubtful
Relationship Arc: Curious to Friendly
Philip Jennings and Martha
Surface: Colleague
Common Ground: Government Employee
Conflict: Wants more out of the relationship
History: Confiding in shop talk
Subtext: Loyal
Relationship Arc: Friendly to Lover
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Assignment #2
Andrew Brice and Mark Cason
Surface: Business Partners – Political Opponents
Common Ground: Accomplished Politicians
Conflict: Both want to damage the opposing political party
History: Both were young senators
Subtext: Political Competitor
Relationship Arc: Friendly business relationship to bitter
Andrew Brice and Molly Brice
Surface: Married – Wife
Common Ground: Marriage – Close Family
Conflict: Wants a high-profile lifestyle
History: Early marriage was unstable
Subtext: Supporter
Relationship Arc: Close marriage to open marriage
Andrew Brice and Sarah Cason
Surface: Associate to Business Partner
Common Ground: Work together to advance the Non-Profit
Conflict: Wants to control the non-profit’s direction
History: Supported some of his political ideas – rare to do so
Subtext: Manipulator
Relationship Arc: Even friendship to distrust
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Big little lies relationship map between madeline, renata, celeste and jane
Madeline | renata | celeste | jane
Surface | adversaries | bff | new friend
Common ground | school school school
Conflict | [madeline, renata] alphas, fighting against amabella-ziggy accusation, Ave Q
[celeste and jane] both want to diffuse ziggy-amabella
History| [renata, madeline] butt heads before|
[madeline, celeste] both don’t work |
[jane] none with others, moved, raped in her own past.
Subtext | [madeline, renata] power struggle|
[celeste] sex abuse secrets|
[jane] rape, revenge, suicide
arc |[madeline] righteous to bad, secrets to exposure|
[renata] truce to conflict |
[celeste] Secrets to exposure, stay at home mom to working woman again |
[jane]mysterious secrets to exposure, pleasant to violent
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Sherri D. Coffee Module 1 Lesson 6 Relationship Map
Madeleine Jane Celeste Bonnie
Surface Friend Friend Related by marriage
Common school school husband
Conflict Ziggy’s jealous wife of ex husband
father marriage
History new friends good friends different styles/jealousy
Subtext Secret competition jealous
scheme envy
Relationship Strangers to Friends to enemies to civil relationship
Arc Friends closer friends
I learned to look at all the interactions to evaluate and construct the relationship map.
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Ben’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is … that relationships cause drama and intrigue, for them to work in an ongoing series they need multiple layers, and to be binge worthy they must be distinct and unique.
Jack with Gina:
Surface: Journalist / Source
Common Ground: Expose the truth
Conflict: Not trusting each other – he doesn’t trust her with his career / she with her life
History: Recently introduced by one of Jack’s informants
Subtext: They want to trust each other but need the other to prove it
Relationship Arc: From distrusting each other to trusting each other
Jack with Margaret:
Surface: Employee / Boss
Common Ground: Dedication to journalism
Conflict: Dedication to the story / Dedication to the newspaper
History: Worked together for fifteen years
Subtext: Having an affair for fifteen years while she is married to someone else
Relationship Arc: From an intimate and secret affair to breaking up although still in-love
Jack with Harold:
Surface: Citizen / Government Official
Common Ground: Good of the nation
Conflict: Jack exposing a government conspiracy / Harold hiding that conspiracy
History: Harold knows of Jack because of his public profile, but Jack doesn’t yet know Harold exists
Subtext: Jack must expose the conspiracy before Harold ruins him
Relationship Arc: From not knowing each other to despising each other
Gina with Harold:
Surface: Whistleblower / Henchman – Criminal-Traitor / Pursuer-Authority
Common Ground: Good of the nation
Conflict: Escape him / Erase her
History: Worked together on highly classified government project
Subtext: He doesn’t just want to arrest her but to erase her existence
Relationship Arc: From security detail and protected to hunter and hunted
Gina and Tom:
Surface: Colleagues
Common Ground: Physicists
Conflict: Wants his cooperation / Doesn’t want to know her
History: Worked together on highly classified government project
Subtext: She thinks he’s a coward / He thinks she’s a fool
Relationship Arc: From trusted colleagues to estranged
Harold with The Director
Surface: Employee / Boss
Common Ground: Both trying to keep a highly classified government project secret and a public “myth”
Conflict: Get caught doing this job and you’re on your own
History: Worked in a national security organization together
Subtext: Their work is ultimately for a classified committee called The Watch Committee
Relationship Arc: From engaging in a “routine” exercise to sliding down the slippery slope
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Sherri D. Coffee Module 1 Lesson 6 Character Relationship Map
Grace with Sam:
Surface – Romantic relationship
Common ground – Live together and share medical knowledge
Conflict – Sam is dying and he chose Grace as executor of his will but feels guilty about his children.
History – Sam saved Graces’ life 5 years earlier after an accident.
Subtext – She is obligated to him and wants to do the right thing.
Relationship Arc – from Love to distrust.
Grace with Carlton:
Surface – Sam’s estranged son
Common ground – Sam’s health
Conflict – the Will
History – on vacation to reconcile relationship with Father, he tries to have Grace killed.
Subtext – competition
Relationship Arc – acquainted to enemies.
Grace with Harmony:
Surface: hippie psychic meditative journey guide
Common ground: Grace’s new neighbor
Conflict: Lifestyle
History: Past life Mother/Daughter
Subtext: hiding secret from past life with Grace
Relationship Arc: Strangers to friends
Sam
Sam with Grace:
Surface: Romantic relationship
Common Ground: Live together
Conflict: Sam wants to reconcile with Carlton and his sisters.
History: He saved her life. She is the only one helping him through cancer treatments.
Subtext: He wants to reconcile with children and take care of Grace.
Relationship Arc: Love to distrust.
Sam with Carlton:
Surface: estranged son
Common Ground: Both want to keep bailout history secret.
Conflict: Grace and will.
History: Sam bailed out his hedge fund; knows he hid money offshore to keep from his ex-wife; Sam knows his children are sociopaths.
Subtext: Obligation to children, image among community.
Relationship Arc: Estranged to relationship
Sam with Harmony:
Surface: knows of her through Grace
Common Ground: Grace
Conflict: thinks she is crazy. Does not believe in past lives.
History: Berates Grace for seeing Harmony.
Subtext: He is afraid she will reveal the truth of his children and the bailout to Grace.
Relationship arc: no relationship to trying to control her
Carlton
Carlton with Sam:
Surface: Estranged son
Common ground: Father and keeping secret of Sam’s bailout.
Conflict: Grace, will and childhood abandonment.
History: Sam left Carlton’s mother when he was 5 and was basically absent workaholic father building medical practice. Paid for education but was not present in his life. Sam bailed Carlton’s hedge fund out and helped him move money offshore to protect from ex-wife.
Subtext: Obligation, protecting secret, and provide for sisters.
Relationship Arc: Estranged to relationship.
Carlton with Grace:
Surface: Father’s significant other
Common ground: Sam’s health
Conflict: executor of will – Grace
History: Took Sam and Grace on vacation to Mexico and tried to have Grace killed.
Subtext: competition
Relationship Arc: Acquaintance to enemy
Carton with Harmony:
Surface: crazy psychic friend of Grace
Common ground: Carlton wants to use Harmony’s crazy to discredit Grace
Conflict: Harmony sees Carlton for who he is.
History: Harmony is aware that Carlton is the past life bastard son of Sam.
Subtext: competition
Relationship Arc: no relationship to enemies.
Harmony
Harmony with Grace:
Surface: psychic friend
Common Ground: neighbors
Conflict: past life journey and relationship with Sam.
History: Past life Mother/Daughter
Subtext: Conspirators
Relationship Arc: from neighbors to friends
Harmony with Sam:
Surface: knows of through Grace
Common Ground: Grace best interest
Conflict: past life knowledge – Sam is afraid she will expose his secrets
History: Harmony doesn’t trust he is being true to Grace. He is afraid she will expose him.
Subtext: Competition and control
Relationship arc: not knowing to distrust
Harmony with Carlton:
Surface: knows of through Grace
Common Ground: Grace and Sam
Conflict: Grace and Sam relationship, will, and Harmony’s image and business.
History: Carlton tries to discredit Harmony to discredit Grace and gain control of the will.
Subtext: competition. Harmony knows Carlton is trying to destroy her. And she knows the karma from the past life.
Relationship Arc: not knowing to enemies.
I learned to construct a very interesting story weave with several choices by mapping out the relationships between the characters.
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The Americans
Surface:
Elizabeth Jennings (Kerry Russell) and Phillip Jennings (Matthew Rhys). They are husband and wife, (arranged marriage for the purpose of espionage).
Elizabeth Jennings and Paige Jennings. They are mother and daughter (for real, her biological daughter with Phillip).
Elizabeth Jennings and Stan Beeman (Noah Emmerich). They are neighbors and sworn international enemies.
Common Ground:
Elizabeth Jennings and Phillip Jennings. They are both spies for Russia, and totally committed to their jobs. They have the same training, the same beliefs, the same indoctrination.
Elizabeth Jennings and Paige Jennings. They are both women, both have a strong family bond, both are strong, and as mother and daughter, they understand each other on a very deep level.
Elizabeth Jennings and Stan Beeman. They are both in the intelligence business, both fighting for their country. They both have families and children. Both live in suburban Washington, D.C.
Conflict:
Elizabeth Jennings and Phillip Jennings. He likes America more than her, in fact, in the pilot, he’s ready to defect. She a Russian loyalist. He’s skeptical of Russian decision-making; she’s not, in fact, she’s more of a true believer. They have conflict of sexual partners outside their marriage. They are in conflict about how they interpret orders and intelligence. They are on “the ground,” so they may know more that their bosses know about the situation.
Elizabeth Jennings and Paige Jennings. Paige wants to buy her own sexy bra alone at the mall with her girlfriends. Her mother wants to be involved in her introduction to sexual relations. Her mother has an old-world upbringing, full of suspicion, whereas Paige has been brought up with American mores.
Elizabeth Jennings and Stan Beeman. They’re sworn enemies, also they’re the opposite, which adds a charge. They’re in secret competition in their jobs while pretending to be neighborly.
History:
Elizabeth Jennings and Phillip Jennings. They have an arranged marriage to be spies living in America. When they moved in together, they had still not had sex. Then they get involved with others outside their marriage, then they start to have a love relationship. They have competition with each other as operatives.
Elizabeth Jennings and Paige Jennings. She’s Paige’s mother, so she knows her intimately, and since she raised her, she understands the way she thinks on a very deep level. And Paige has the same understanding of her mother. They’ve developed their relationship over many years.
Elizabeth Jennings and Stan Beeman. They history is brief. They’ve only been neighbors for a short time, but it’s charged because of the secret dealings.
Subtext:
Elizabeth Jennings and Phillip Jennings. They are sexually jealous of their spouse’s attraction to others in the course of their undercover work. They have different ideological approaches to intelligence gathering and interpreting. The secret that may have been present the whole time is that even though their marriage has been arranged, they are in love with each other.
Elizabeth Jennings and Paige Jennings. They are in competition about how Paige should be raised, like in the old country, or by new American values. Paige wants to know secrets that they keep from their kids. Elizabeth says, “None of your business.”
Elizabeth Jennings and Stan Beeman. What’s hidden is that they are spies, and as an FBI agent assigned to a special task force, he’s looking for spies like them. She may resent him when Phillip was going to defect to him and turn in the injured Russian in episode 1.
Relationship Arc:
Elizabeth Jennings and Phillip Jennings. From not knowing each other that well, to working hard in life and death situations to falling in love with each other.
Elizabeth Jennings and Paige Jennings. From Paige obeying her mother in an unquestioning way, to thinking for herself, and perhaps becoming suspicious of what her parents are doing.
Elizabeth Jennings and Stan Beeman. From being sworn enemies to trusting him in the context of being neighbors and even getting intelligence from without him realizing it.
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What I learned doing this assignment is the story (and flashbacks) is starting to take shape, and the arcs of each episode can be superimposed and added to reveal more of the season.
Example Show – JESSICA JONES
Relationship map of Jessica Jones –
Trish Walker:
Surface: Best friend/ past live-in
Common Ground: Love each other, want what’s best for Jessica
Conflict: Different approaches to handling dilemmas and situations in life.
History: Lived with each other for years
Subtext: Jessica’s conscious, moral path
Relationship Arc: Jessica avoids past, Trish wants her to confront her demons (PTSD) in order to control them.
2. Jeri Hogarth:
Surface: Boss/Client working relationship
Common Ground: Investigation contracts
Conflict: Jeri doesn’t like how Jessica gets information, but likes that she is dependable to get information
History: About 15 contracts
Subtext: Secret mutual admiration
Relationship Arc: Jeri relies on Jessica to get information to keep her on top of her game, Jessica relies on Jeri to distract her from her past life, yet each assignment reminds her of her past.
3. Kilgrave:
Surface: Ex-boyfriend
Common Ground: Both superheroes
Conflict: Kilgrave is controlling her mind, Jessica is fighting it
History: Boyfriend/girlfriend, she left him when she figured out his power
Subtext: Unfinished warped love
Relationship Arc: They dated for one month, incident at one month, she leaves him to die, he doesn’t die and wants revengeDonna Stockwell’s Relationship Maps
Relationship map of BEN
To Patrina
Surface:Marriage – wife
Common Ground:Children, house
Conflict: quietly fight like cats and dogs over finances, time apart, house
History:Met in high school, quickly fell out of love after children
Subtext:Ben becomes suspicious of Petrina befriending others, esp men.
Relationship Arc:Increasingly Ben stays away from Petrina, as Petrina becomes more impatient and frustrated with Ben’s actions and attitude.
2. To Celeste
Surface:Daughter
Common Ground: Close relationship, always comforting her father
Conflict:Celeste finds that Ben is smothering her social life
History:Birth
Subtext:Celeste is easily controlled by Ben’s emotions, as Ben needed more and more attention
Relationship Arc:Celeste notices how Petrina is acting towards Ben, and tries to help ease the situation… it seems to be a burden, but she feels it’s her duty
3. To Jasper
Surface:Brother
Common Ground:parents, Upbringing
Conflict:Jasper always questioning what Ben does and why
History:Jasper always does what Ben tells him to
Subtext:Jasper is Ben’s conscious
Relationship Arc:Throughout childhood, Ben is helping Jasper get through life, as Jasper is a bit slow. Jasper trusts all of Ben’s actions and is faithful to himRelationship map of PETRINA
To Ben
Surface:Marriage – husband
Common Ground:Children, house
Conflict:Fight out of view of children, over finances, time apart, house
History:Met in high school, quickly fell out of love after children
Subtext:Over controlling, emotionally and physically
Relationship Arc:Everyday wake up afraid what will happen, Petrina
2. To Celeste
Surface:Daughter
Common Ground:Birth, relationship with boyfriend
Conflict: Fight like cats and dogs – how to act, who to friend, etc
History:Birth, rearing
Subtext:
Relationship Arc:from mother to boyfriend rival
3. To Luc
Surface:Daughter’s boyfriend – turned lover
Common Ground:Daughter, outlook on life
Conflict:
History: short, just since daughter’s introduction
Subtext: With more time that Petrina & Luc spend together, become confidents, Luc points to abusive husband
Relationship Arc:daughter’s boyfriend, turned handyman, turned romanceRelationship map of LUC
To Ben
Surface:Romantic rival
Common Ground:Celeste and Patrina
Conflict:Overprotective father doesn’t like Luc going out with his daughter
History:Ben doesn’t like Luc dating daughter, does he imagine Luc’s attention to his wife?
Subtext:Luc is seen as a womanizer, but outwardly acts innocent, but available at opportune time — Ben is the only one who notices this
Relationship Arc:
2. To Celeste
Surface:girlfriend
Common Ground:High school, friends, dating
Conflict:Luc romantic, Celeste standoff-ish
History: High school classmates / dating
Subtext: Celeste stole Luc from her best friend
Relationship Arc: Luc sees many nice things in Celeste, but sees where she gets all the good qualities – her mother, and decreases attention to Celeste
3. To Patrina
Surface:Handyman turned lover
Common Ground:Daughter, outlook on life
Conflict:How immoral is it to fall in love with daughter’s boyfriend
History:Increasing time together, through Petrina’s insistence
Subtext:Luc lends a sympathetic ear to Petrina’s bad marriage
Relationship Arc:daughter’s boyfriend, turned handyman, turned romance -
Lesson 6.1 Supernatural– Sam
Sam and Dean
Surface: Brothers
Common Ground: Hunting monsters, death of their mother.
Conflict: Whether to continue hunting monsters or pursue a
normal life, whether to share their secret with other people.History: Grew up learning to hunt monsters together. Tension
because Sam went off to college while Dean stayed with their father.Subtext: Dean’s anger at Sam for going away.
Relationship Arc: Estranged to working together.
Sam and Becky
Surface: College friends.
Common Ground: Learning, having fun.
Conflict: Having to lie to her about Dean being a cop.
History: Studied at Stanford together.
Subtext: Sam has a secret identity, he isn’t sure he can
share with her.Relationship Arc: Not knowing who Sam is to learning about monsters
firsthand.Sam and John
Surface: Father and son.
Common Ground: Hunting monsters, death of Sam’s mother, John’s
wife.Conflict: Whether to hunt monsters or go to college.
History: Taught Sam how to hunt monsters.
Subtext: Mystery of John’s disappearance.
Relationship Arc: Estranged, to taking on the role John envisioned
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What I learned doing this assignment is… the more I dig into character relationships, the more I understand the story.
CHEATERS
Surface:
Ruby Kane, Detective and Brian ‘Thor’ Vinter, Husband and Police Chief. They are husband and wife, and she is a lead Detective in the small-town police department that her husband is the chief of. They are kind of known as a golden couple, but all is not what it seems.
Ruby Kane, Lula Kane, her mother. They are mother and daughter. Her mother still lives in the town, and Ruby goes to visit her often.
Ruby Kane, Aviv Karnofsky, her father. Her father was a spy for the Russians during the cold war, and retired to Northern California, but his past kept intruding.
Brian Vinter, Ruby Kane. Husband and wife. He promoted his wife to Detective because she is good, and he wanted to give her more work so he could cheat.
Brian Vinter, Lula Kane, Ruby’s mother. He tolerates Lula, his mother-in-law, and frankly thinks she’s weird.
Brian Vinter, Aviv Karnofsky, Ruby’s dead father. Brian, is curious about Aviv’s history, but doesn’t know he was a spy, and questions why he has a different name than his wife and daughter.
Lula Kane, Ruby Kane. Mother and daughter. They are close.
Lula Kane, Brian Vinter. Mother-in-law and Son in law. They are slightly estranged, but polite to each other at social events.
Lula Kane, Aviv Karnofsky. Wife and diseased husband who keeps all his secrets.
Common Ground:
Ruby Kane, Brian Vinter: They share a home, have a reputation as a beautiful couple, share a workplace; when the case gets out of control, they begin to feel an odd empathy for each other.
Ruby Kane, Lula Kane: They have family in common, so family secrets, and have both been cheated on or raped by her father.
Ruby Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: They both carry guns, work in clandestine ways, she has a secret life like he did when he was a spy. They had their shared history of sexual abuse.
Brian Vinter, Ruby Kane: He is her husband as well as boss. They have the same friends. They share a deep respect for law-enforcement, but in her case, the trappings of it protect her.
Brian Vinter, Lula Kane: They spend holiday dinners together. He sometimes confides in her that his wife doesn’t love him anymore.
Brian Vinter, Aviv Karnofsky: He’s always digging around, trying to find out more about her father.
Lula Kane, Ruby Kane: When Ruby comes to visit her, she feels like a spider who has drawn her daughter back into her web. Is she going to threaten to double-cross her daughter with Brian to have more power over her?
Lula Kane, Brian Vinter: She doesn’t give away how much she knows about their relationship. But she understands him in a way, and kind of likes him.
Lula Kane, Aviv Karnofsky. They have in common, years of marriage, and a daughter, and their history and secrets, which are powerful.
Conflict:
Ruby Kane, Brian Vinter: Their big conflict are his secret affairs, but she can’t let him know she knows—that will give away her game.
Ruby Kane, Lula Kane: She’s constantly worried that her mother is trying to control things, the way she tried to control things when her husband was a spy.
Ruby Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: Her father began to molest her when she was a teenager, and when she found out he was a spy, in the middle of a sexual assault, she knocked her father out and placed a cyanide capsule in his mouth, so it looked like he was ordered to kill himself as part of his job.
Brian Vinter, Ruby Kane: He’s angry at her that she can’t solve the murders. He’s going to bring in an FBI specialist to assist and give them deniability.
Brian Vinter, Lula Kane: He tries to find out more about his wife through Lula, needs to get information out of her.
Brian Vinter, Aviv Karnofsky: He’s curious and wants to know more about her father. When he finds out he assaulted her, he’s angry at him.
Lula Kane, Ruby Kane: She’s worried about the way her daughter is behaving. She wants to know more about the night her husband took the capsule.
Lula Kane, Brian Vinter: She’s thinking of making him an ally, as a way of controlling her daughter.
Lula Kane, Aviv Karnofsky. She’s enraged that he cheated on her with other women. When she finds out he molested their daughter, her rage knows no bounds.
History:
Ruby Kane, Brian Vinter: He cheats on her, like her first husband did. That was a betrayal and it makes something snap in her.
Ruby Kane, Lula Kane: She needs her mother as a sounding board and support, but is wary of her controlling ways.
Ruby Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: Their history of sexual assault and she murdered him because of it.
Brian Vinter, Ruby Kane: He’s used to being the boss, and she has to get back at him in underhanded ways, techniques she intuited from her father’s occupation.
Brian Vinter, Lula Kane: Don’t have much of a history, but there’s something he can sense that he’s curious about.
Brian Vinter, Aviv Karnofsky: Wants to know his wife’s father’s history and begins to dig.
Lula Kane, Ruby Kane: Still wants to be the mother and control her daughter’s life.
Lula Kane, Brian Vinter: he tries to figure his wife out by analyzing her mother.
Lula Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: They have a whole history of their life together. When he retired to Northern California, she watched as his spy work started infecting their family life.
Subtext:
Ruby Kane, Brian Vinter: She hates him for cheating on her and is determined to bring him down.
Ruby Kane, Lula Kane: She doesn’t trust her mother, and thinks her mother is withholding family secrets from her.
Ruby Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: She hated him for abusing her, and vowed to kill him if she got the chance, and she did.
Brian Vinter, Ruby Kane: He’s determined to figure out what his wife is up to.
Brian Vinter, Lula Kane: He begins to ask realize she might betray her daughter.
Brian Vinter, Aviv Karnofsky: He starts to research what no one knows about Ruby’s dad.
Lula Kane, Ruby Kane: Her mother is worried about her, and feels she didn’t protect her and was therefore a bad mother.
Lula Kane, Brian Vinter: She’s going to help bring him down when she finds out her daughter’s plan.
Lula Kane, Aviv Karnofsky. She’s not willing to hide his secret life any longer.
Relationship Arc:
Ruby Kane, Brian Vinter: Golden couple that everyone admires, to sworn life and death enemies.
Ruby Kane, Lula Kane: From family secrets to completely confiding her crimes to her mother who (like a good spy’s wife) becomes her ally.
Ruby Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: From hate and murder to respect for what he taught her and how that knowledge helped her survive.
Brian Vinter, Ruby Kane: He’s her boss and in control to she pulling the strings so he’s losing.
Brian Vinter, Lula Kane: From estranged to Brian trying to make her his ally. Does Lula double-cross him?
Brian Vinter, Aviv Karnofsky: From not knowing his history to finding out her was a Russian spy.
Lula Kane, Ruby Kane: From secrets to becoming full allies.
Lula Kane, Brian Vinter: From estranged to becoming a possible ally, then betraying him to help her daughter.
Lula Kane, Aviv Karnofsky: From holding his life as a spy at a distance to finding out more so she can help her daughter win.
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Stuart’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is…The importance of relationships as the hook for viewers – in many ways more powerful than the individual characters. This encouraged me to broaden the character circles. Fascinating discoveries. Yes, answers are a bit long but I’ve uncovered fascinating layers with questions that I want to keep open for further exploration and discovery. This has been an eye-opening and creatively liberating assignment.
Assignment 1
Watchmen Relationship Map:
Character: Angela Abar
Relationship with Will Reeves:
Surface: Will is Angela’s grandfather.
Common Ground: Serve for the police, Angela for Tulsa, Will for NYC. Both serve as masked vigilantes.
Conflict: Will hasn’t been there for Angela. He’s a mystery. He killed Judd, Angela’s mentor.
History: History is very recent. He’s been a mysterious older man in a wheelchair hanging outside the site of bakery. And she found her at the site of Judd’s hanging.
Subtext: both served as vigilantes, dealing with conspiracies within the police force. Will dealing with Cyclops. Angela with 7th Kavalry.
Relationship Arc: From estranged to understanding (as of Episode 5).
Relationship with FBI Agent Laurie Blake
Surface: Professional relationship. Blake is Angela’s supervisor. Blake is an FBI agent, installed as leading the investigation against 7th Kavalry and murder of Chief Judd Crawford. Angela is masked vigilante assisting Tulsa Police Department.
Common Ground: Justice. Solving the case.
Conflict: Angela has been withholding evidence connected to Judd Crawford, and her grandfather, Will Reeves. Angela is the masked vigilante Sister Night. Blake has been unmasking and decommissioning the costumed adventurers.
History: Since the death of Judd Crawford. She was brought in by Senator Joe Keene.
Subtext: worthy adversaries; both are determined to seek justice, both are outsiders trying to find truth.
Relationship Arc: From adversaries to a level of bonding – Agent Blake wants to help Angela (Ep 5).
Relationship with Wade, Looking Glass:
Surface: both serve Tulsa PD, both friends/allies of Tulsa Police Chief Judd Crawford
Common Ground: See justice served to Judd’s murdered. Seeking the truth.
Conflict: Angela’s relationship with Will Reeves, her awareness of Will’s connection to Crawford’s hanging and truth.
History: Since the White Night. Angela was serving Tulsa PD and a target. Wade joined the Tulsa PD because of that night’s tragic turn on justice.
Subtext: Strong allies. Both protective of personal identity. Angela’s withholding forces Wade to give her up.
Relationship Arc: from colleagues to adversaries (as of Ep 5)
Relationship with Cal Abar:
Surface: Married
Common Ground: Protection of their family, children, and their community. Justice.
Conflict: Angela’s rebelliousness, to take things in her own hands
History: They met in Vietnam. Soon married, adopted the three children after the parents were massacred on the White Night.
Subtext: He’s accepting of her vigilantism, though it’s getting more strained. The question about Will Reeves and Angela’s background.
Relationship Arc: supportive married couple –their relationship is still strong at Ep 5. Though he’s struggling to awaken her from Nostalgia-induced coma.
Assignment 2
Lead Character #1: Hop-Frog
Hop-Frog’s Relationship with Trippetta:
Surface: friends since childhood
Common Ground: love of nature, entertains her with his clockwork creations, their loved ones were massacred by King Goplik, both serving as entertainment to King Goplik and his court.
Conflict: how to deal with trauma and revenge. Trippetta comes from the wealthy class. She’s enchantingly beautiful and physical. Hop-Frog has the stigma of his physical disability, though active and agile – and he creates beauty in his clockwork mechanicals.
History: as long as they can remember, they’ve been friends. Although, Trippetta has treated Hop-Frog as subservient, a plaything for her entertainment. He’s valued their friendship above all others.
Subtext: Conspirators. Hop-Frog is secretly in love with Trippetta. Prince Brann should have survived the massacre not Hop-Frog.
Relationship Arc: From long time best friends to adversaries to conspirators in revenge.
Hop-Frog’s Relationship with King Goplik:
Surface: Court fool serving the King. Hop-Frog is forced to serve as the court jester or face torture/death.
Common Ground: Humor, grand events/parties, practical jokes; feelings for Trippetta.
Conflict: King Goplik massacred Hop-Frog’s guardian and his family. And has placed Trippetta in servitude. To win the King’s ear and manipulate him to destroy himself and his court.
History: King Goplik wants domination of his neighboring lands. By taking Hop-Frog’s country (Lavinia), King Goplik feels he can force Balog into compliance. The history between Hop-Frog and the King begins with Goplik’s attack and usurpation of Lavinia, an attack delivered at Trippetta’s debutante’s party.
Subtext: adversaries while Hop-Frog earns the king’s trust as adviser of the grand practical joke against Balog
Relationship Arc: from servant/king to worthy conspirators and adversaries of the horrific practical joke. Fool humiliates the king – Hop-Frog clears the throne for the next ruler
Hop-Frog’s Relationship with his Guardian, Myria:
Surface: she raised him as his mother when he had no one
Common Ground: creativity, love a nature, morality
Conflict: she wanted him to find his strength, his special power, his secret sauce
History: she raised him since the disappearance of his parent (abandonment, death…?)
Subtext: nurturing, she’s aware of the curse inflicted upon him, but saw him as significant/powerful and not a servant/slave to others
Relationship Arc: nurturing, supportive to tragic – Hop-Frog witnesses her massacre at the hand of King Goplik’s army, led by Lord Krapp.
Lead Character #2: Trippetta
Trippetta’s relationship with Hop-Frog:
Surface: friends since childhood.
Common Ground: love flowers and nature, she delights at his mechanicals, shared trauma of massacre of their families/country and now enslavement by King Goplik.
Conflict: Hop-Frog is treated as a servant, from a lower class; why did he survive Goplik’s attack and her betrothed, Prince Brann, die? How to survive this trauma?
History: known each other for as long as she can remember, felt sorry for his physical disabilities, took him on as a friend and he’s kind of stuck, a friend in need for entertainment (and counsel?), Hop-Frog is the more devoted to the relationship and Trippetta’s needs
Subtext: conspirators, but she sees herself superior to him; why did Hop-Frog survive? He can’t possibly survive or help. Can he be trusted?
Relationship Arc: from friends to adversaries to conspirators
Trippetta’s relationship with King Goplik:
Surface: slave serving the king
Common Ground: power, manipulation, beautiful acquisitions
Conflict: survival of servitude
History: Although aware of King Goplik as foreign leader, their history begins with the King’s attack and usurpation of her homeland on the day of her debutante’s party (and intended announcement of her engagement to Prince Brann).
Subtext: she’s determined to see him punished, using King Goplik’s daughter against him?
Relationship Arc: from slave to abused victim to vanquisher
Trippetta’s relationship with Lord Krapp:
Surface: the spoils of war and her captor; sparring partners
Common Ground: physical combat skills, fencing, both self-taught
Conflict: she was the spoils of war that Krapp wanted for himself, but was forced to give to King Goplik, she wants revenge but she admires his combat skills and intelligence
History: their history begins with the massacre of Lavinia
Subtext: is she falling in love with her captor or using him for her vengeance on the King Goplik and his court?
Relationship Arc: adversaries to lovers to… enemies?
Lead Character #3: King Goplik
King Goplik’s relationship with Hop-Frog:
Surface: Hop-Frog serves as his Court Fool, and confidante
Common Ground: loves oddities; humor, grand events/parties, practical jokes; feelings for Trippetta. Both have had histories of being ridiculed.
Conflict: King Goplik’s army massacred Lavinia. Hop-Frog is his fool. Can he be trusted?
History: Hop-Frog is given to the king by Lord Krapp as spoils of war. Hop-Frog quickly delights the king and his ministers that he’s installed as his court fool.
Subtext: Can Hop-Frog be trusted as confidante and “minister”?
Relationship Arc: King-slave to King-minister to vanquished-vanquisher
King Goplik’s relationship with Lord Krapp:
Surface: Lord Krapp is loyal military command to his king, kingdom of Brattvia. Secret lovers.
Common Ground: power, military strategy, horror/torture, sexual exploration
Conflict: Lord Krapp’s conflicts with King’s ministers; King forced Krapp to give up Trippetta.
History: Krapp was the King’s page, a servant, and secret lovers. Krapp taught Goplik his combat skills. Goplik rewarded Krapp with military service, and Krapp rose to power, now serving as the king’s military adviser.
Subtext: Conspirators in the Goplik’s march for domination. Krapp wants Trippetta for his own, will she break up their allegiance? Krapp is treated as an outsider by the King’s ministers.
Relationship Arc: allegiance-lovers to adversaries to allegiance
King Goplik’s relationship with daughter, Princess Cyrrell:
Surface: father-daughter
Common Ground: royal family, power, political skullduggery, worthy manipulators
Conflict: Cyrrell isn’t male; Goplik may need to bow down to rival kingdom to broker an arranged marriage. Cyrrell won’t play that game.
History: devoted little girl but facing king-dad who needs an heir
Subtext: Princess Cyrrell is coming out
Relationship Arc: from filial obligation to adversarial
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Daniel Melin’s Relationship Maps for Athens, MN
What I learned during this lesson is that relationships, like the characters themselves, have arcs that are forced, by circumstances and the characters on either end of them to change. The value of hidden information from one of the two characters builds beautifully off of the hidden agendas from one of the previous lessons.
Tom and Lizzie
Surface: Friends
Common Ground: Love of gentleness, warmth and beauty.
Conflict: Lizzie is so wrapped up in her vendetta that she is
transforming boys into monsters and Tom wants to stop her.History: Lizzie has provided a safe place for Tom when he
felt alone.Subtext: Tom is actually working against Lizzie, even though
he pretends to still be on her side.Relationship Arc: Friends to enemies
Tom and Louis
Surface: Father figure
Common Ground: Shared interest in idiosyncratic ways of thinking.
Conflict: Louis is responsible for starting Lizzie’s
vendetta, and Tom wants him to take responsibility.History: None. Louis has only just met Tom.
Subtext: Louis is actually Lizzie’s estranged husband, and
the stag that she is hunting.Relationship Arc: Trusted advisor to adversary
Tom and Talia
Surface: Sister
Common Ground: Love of silliness, theatrics, making each other
laugh.Conflict: The role of magic in life, Talia’s erratic love
life.History: Tom and Talia butted heads a lot as kids, but they
also have a lot of love for one another.Subtext: Tom is guilty about Talia being date-raped by a
friend of his.Relationship Arc: Disagreement to shared beliefs.
Mark and Robby
Surface: Servant.
Common Ground: They are both looking for Oberon’s staff.
Conflict: Robby is difficult to control and has his own ideas
about how to find Oberon’s staff.History: Robby has been Mark’s assistant for several years.
Subtext: Robby is actually working for Lizzie.
Relationship Arc: Master/servant to traitor who needs to be brought
to justice.Mark and Tom
Surface: Pupil
Common Ground: They both have a passion for magic.
Conflict: They have different ideas about how best to use
magic.History: None. Their relationship is new.
Subtext: Mark is hiding his full library from Tom.
Relationship Arc: Teacher/pupil to equals.
Mark and Miguel
Surface: Acquaintance.
Common Ground: They share a circle of friends and a love for
cigars.Conflict: Mark thinks Miguel is shady and Miguel thinks Mark
is a wimp.History: Miguel and Mark have butted heads on a few
occasions in the past.Subtext: Mark needs Miguel’s help because he’s looking for a
magical artifact.Relationship Arc: Enemies to friends.
Miguel and Tom
Surface: Employee
Common Ground: They both care about family.
Conflict: They have very different ideas about what family
means, and what it takes to make a family.History: They have only recently gotten to know each other.
Subtext: Tom is a beginning magician.
Relationship Arc: Employee to friend.
Miguel and Nick
Surface: Son
Common Ground: Both intelligent and inventive.
Conflict: Nick acts out at school and Miguel constantly has
to discipline him.History: Miguel separated from Nick’s mom when he was
little, and they have often butted heads.Subtext: Nick has been skipping school.
Relationship Arc: Meek son to openly defiant son.
Miguel and Milly
Surface: Fiance
Common Ground: They have built a business and a family together.
Conflict: They have an open relationship but disagree on how
often to bring someone else into the dynamic.History: They have been together for six years, and Milly
has supported Miguel as he started his business.Subtext: Miguel has been seeing someone else.
Relationship Arc: Couple to separated.
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Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map
“What I learned doing this assignment is: my relationships need fuller arcs and exploration.”
John Anderson’s Show Relationship Map
The Americans
MiG Pilot
My 4 Charts wont past here for some reason???
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(Patricia Ruland’s) Show Relationship Map
[Binge Worthy TV] Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map
What I learned from this assignment:
Still waters must run deep and long; emotional relationships are intricate and consequential. It’s taxing to consider character relationship on so many levels—just as it is in life.
Show: Gossip Girl
Show: “Psycho*Boomer*Effing*Delic”—pilot
For the serial: Ok Boom! Wham! Bam!
Gossip Girl
Surface:
Serena and Blair
Best Friends
Serena and Dan
Friends
Serena and Chuck
Peers
Common Ground
Serena and Blair
Both are popular, both are insiders, both go to the same elite high school.
Serena and Dan
Both are good students at elite high school; both experience life as an outsider.
Serena and Chuck
Both are students at elite high school; both run in the same Upper Eastside social circle.
Conflict
Serena and Blair
They are interested in the same guy—rather, the Blair is in love with Nate who is in love with Serena.
Serena and Dan
They click until Dan finds out that Serena betrayed Blair by sleeping with Nate.
Serena and Chuck
Serena won’t admit that before she wanted to change, Chuck was right in thinking she was a lot like him.
History
Serena and Blair
They are best friends for as long as they can remember—up and until Blair finds out how Serena betrayed her.
Serena and Dan
Dan has feelings for Serena but she barely acknowledges his existence. They clicked after she comes back, presumably having changed for the better.
Serena and Chuck
They click as long as Serena lives out her bad side; they clash after she tries to change for the better.
Subtext
Serena and Blair
Competitors, in reality, for top ultimate insider role.
Serena and Dan
Kindred spirits, allies.
Serena and Chuck
Adversaries because he is predatory.
Relationship Arc
Serena and Blair
From being best friends to becoming enemies and back to best friends, for the time being.
Serena and Dan
From being just peers, classmates to clicking as friends to becoming romantically involved to–?
Serena and Chuck
From being classmates with only their bad ways in common to becoming mortal enemies after he preys upon Dan’s sister and colludes with Blair.
My Show: “Psycho*Boomer*Effing*Delic”—pilot
For the serial: Ok Boom! Wham! Bam!
Surface:
Caren Cay and Fred Oscar
Husband, Wife
Caren Cay and ok
Mother and twin son and daughter
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda
Patient, Psychiatrist
Common Ground
Caren Cay and Fred Oscar
As the Boomers, living in a prosperous suburb, they’ve built a comfortable life for themselves and their twin son and daughter.
Caren Cay and ok
Caren Cay adores ok, and they, her. They love to perform, as singers and musicians.
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda are committed to finding a way for Caren Cay to realize greater autonomy and self-actualization, forestalled during the “Boomers with Children” years.
Conflict
Caren Cay and Fred Oscar
They are never very compatible, and they’ve grown absolutely incompatible over the years. Caren Cay has gotten more “out there,” restless, and FO! more the company man, conservative social climber, inside guy.
Caren Cay and ok
ok feel pulled, torn because they love both their parents, although their desire to break away increases, making Caren Cay both hold on and push them away
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda
Caren Cay gets upset, destabilized when FO! and Dr. Frieda act like mortal enemies—fighting on opposite sides of the battle—the former for Caren’ Cay’s independence, and the latter for Caren Cay’s acceptance of her fate and role as wife, mother, community woman.
History
Caren Cay and Fred Oscar
They click in college, in film school, but when they move away from College Town, their true, opposing natures make their early marriage difficult, and their oil and water relationship bleaker for both of them.
Caren Cay and ok
ok benefit by having indulgent parents, who both are committed to giving them everything, to seeing they had the strong foundations for a good and prosperous future in adulthood.
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda
Dr. Frieda risks her professional standing by trying out her controversial “take the leap” therapy she’s employing to try to get Caren Cay unstuck—from the past, from the ties that bind, from life without her true soulmate.
Subtext
Caren Cay and Fred Oscar
Arch rivals: she the throwback hippie, he the anti-hippie
Caren Cay and ok
Rebellion waiting to happen.
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda
Comrades in arms.
Relationship Arc
Caren Cay and ok
From being college sweethearts to staying married for the material comforts and for the benefits of family to potentially becoming estranged and divorced.
Caren Cay and ok
From being the devoted son and daughter to the humiliated young adults who break off from their Boomer embarrassments for parents.
Caren Cay and Dr. Frieda
From being patient and doctor to bonded allies to bearers of secret knowledge and practices that make the “take the leap” sessions so unconventional and thus risky.
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Jane’s Show Relationship Map – What I learned from doing this assignment is that relationships between characters can go a long way to inciting various situations that reveal differing layers in each character. I have 4 main characters and so explored the interconnecting relationships between all four.
I’m discovering that my 4 main characters have a lot in common and most of it is about keeping control of a situation, whether that be a secretive one or one that is known. So they’ll all battle for control until they have to work together, acknowledging their need for each other in order to come out of their gig at the summer lodge alive!
ASSIGNMENT 1 – RIVERDALE, as of Season 1, Episode 6 _ Betty
Betty and Veronica
Surface – Friends
Common Ground – School, values, interests
Conflict – Relationships, jealousy
History – Didn’t like her at first
Subtext – Trusts her fully
Relationship Arc – From dislike to BFF
Betty and Archie
Surface – Friends/love interest
Common Ground – School, neighborhood, background
Conflict – Values
History – Head over heels in love with him
Subtext – Jealousy
Relationship Arc – From love interest to friend
Betty and Jughead
Surface – Boyfriend
Common Ground – School, values, interests, goals
Conflict – Control, power
History – Friends and school peers
Subtext – Control of relationship
Relationship Arc – From friend to love interest
ASSIGNMENT 2 – 13 WEEKS
JODIE
Jodie and Susie
Surface – Roommate
Common Ground – Job, dislike of job
Conflict – Control, power
History – Don’t like each other at first sight
Subtext – Fellow kingpin and schemer
Relationship Arc – From unknown to best friend
Jodie and Lucas
Surface – Co-Worker
Common Ground – Job, concern for siblings
Conflict – Knowledge and power
History – Superiority at first sight
Subtext – Unexpressed respect
Relationship Arc – From unknown to partner in crime
Jodie and Miguel
Surface – Co-Worker
Common Ground – Job, love of kids, both want out
Conflict – Jealousy
History – Prejudice at first sight
Subtext – Unexpressed love
Relationship Arc – From unknown to lover
SUSIE
Susie and Jodie
Surface – Roommate
Common Ground – Schemers
Conflict – Mistrust; competition
History – Felt Jodie’s prejudice and superiority right from the start
Subtext – Admires her cunning
Relationship Arc – From unknown best friend
Susie and Lucas
Surface – Co-Worker
Common Ground – Intelligence
Conflict – Power
History – Saw him as an oddball then as a criminal
Subtext – Intrigued by his story; attracted to criminal element.
Relationship Arc – From unknown to hero
Susie and Miguel
Surface – Co-Worker
Common Ground – Good at hiding secrets; loves children
Conflict – Mistrust; betrayal
History – Tense around him, senses he isn’t playing straight – A “takes one to know one” relationship
Subtext – Admires his ability with children; initially falls for him.
Relationship Arc – From unknown to co-conspirator
LUCAS
Lucas and Susie
Surface – Co-worker
Common Ground – Both are focused on the kids in their lives; both hate the outdoors
Conflict – Manipulative behavior threatens his cover
History – Thought she was a spoiled snob – wrote her off.
Subtext – Cares about her
Relationship Arc – From unknown to love
Lucas and Jodie
Surface – Co-worker
Common Ground – Focus on siblings; hate Ranger Steve, head of the summer staff
Conflict – Power and control
History – Prepared to do battle with her if she gets too close
Subtext – Admires her courage
Relationship Arc – From unknown to co-conspirator
Lucas and Miguel
Surface – Co-Worker
Common Ground – One of only five males in a staff of 27; dislikes nature
Conflict – Power and control over secrets
History – Recognizes a gang member when he sees one
Subtext – A sense of brotherhood; admires his courage
Relationship Arc – From unknown to respected partner
MIGUEL
Miguel and Susie
Surface – Co-worker
Common Ground – Both recognize how different they are from each other. Nothing in common, it seems.
Conflict – She will blackmail him and he does not like that.
History – Just another spoiled daddy’s girl.
Subtext – Feels sorry for her and senses that she’s in deep pain.
Relationship Arc – From unknown to good friend
Miguel and Lucas
Surface – Co-worker
Common Ground – Both have killed others in gang violence
Conflict – Threat to his cover; pushes buttons about kids
History – Avoids him
Subtext – Cautious and mistrustful
Relationship Arc – From unknown to an unspoken brotherhood
Miguel and Jodie
Surface – Co-worker
Common Ground – Both have a very different reason for being at the lodge
Conflict – Power and control
History – Hates her for her prejudice against him
Subtext – Admires her ability to take on a situation successfully: she’s brave
Relationship Arc – From unknown to lovers
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What I learned from doing this assignment is that the relationship map is proving to be and will continue to be an invaluable framework to build out characters and their relationships. I enjoy using it and it certainly helps with creativity.
Assignment #1
Big Little Lies
Madeline Mackenzie and Jane Chapman
Relationship Surface Friends
Relationship Common Ground Parent at same school; she too used to be a single mom
Relationship Conflict Wants Jane to find out who raped her, Jane not 100% sure this is a good idea
Relationship History Recently met no history
Relationship Subtext Wants Jane to date again
Relationship Arc Strangers to Close Friends
Madeline Mackenzie Celeste Wright
Relationship Surface Madeline needs her more
Relationship Common Ground Parent at same school; gave up career to raise kids
Relationship Conflict Has not been revealed
Relationship History Has not been revealed
Relationship Subtext Wants Celeste to return to her legal career
Relationship Arc Best friend to closer Best Friend
Madeline Mackenzie Renate Klein
Relationship Surface Well matched adversaries Renate may have the edge
Relationship Common Ground Parent at same school
Relationship Conflict Opposes play in which Madeline is the lead actor
Relationship History Career woman versus stay at home mom
Relationship Subtext Wants to triumph over Renate at everything
Relationship Arc Adversaries to Friends
Madeline Mackenzie Bonnie Carlson
Relationship Surface Adversaries
Relationship Common Ground Marriage to Ben Carlson
Relationship Conflict Control of Nathan Carlson, Madeline and Nathan’s kids
Relationship History Was married to Nathan, Bonnie’s husband
Relationship Subtext Jealous wants them to split up or Nathan to be unhappy
Relationship Arc Adversaries to friends
Assignment 2
My show Green Lake
Jess Pearson and the Sheriff
Relationship Surface Colleagues
Relationship Common Ground Work together
Relationship Conflict Wants Sheriff’s job
Relationship History Sheriff in charge of investigating Jess’ brother’s disappearance
Relationship Subtext Sheriff protecting town’s criminals
Relationship Arc Boss to Competitors
Jess Pearson and Sarah Watson
Relationship Surface Friends
Relationship Common Ground Spent summer vacations together doing art
Relationship Conflict Wants to rekindle their relationship
Relationship History Secret lovers
Relationship Subtext Was dating Jess’ brother when he disappeared
Relationship Arc Lovers to Friend
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Lesson 6
Renee Brown’s Show Relationship Map
“What I learned doing this assignment is…this format allows a framework to change the stakes throughout the series to flip the scene, episode or season.
ASSIGNMENT 1: The 100 relationship map
Clark:
Relationship surface:
Finn-Lover / Abby-Mother / Blake- Adversary
Relationship common ground:
Finn-both are prisoners, both stranded, both on same side / Abby-family, both miss dad, both tenacious / Blake- both prisoners, both stranded.
Relationship conflict:
Finn- he has a girlfriend / Abby-wants to keep track of her / Blake- leader of neg. side of tribe.
Relationship history:
Finn- both crashed in prisoner ship / Abby- mother and child, both lost Dad. / Blake- different classes on ark.
Relationship subtext:
Finn- bonding / Abby- sending child into world, hope for future / Blake- Janitor vs upper class wants her approval.
Relationship arc:
Finn-from lover to ex / Abby- mother with lost child to mother with found child / Blake- Adversary to ally.
ASSIGNMENT 2: Renee Brown’s Alien Mafia relationship map
Tallas:
Relationship surface:
Anauk-DSOM gatekeeper / Saltar-Nemesis / Steelman-Ally / Rollin-Fellow Longhead, both want the One to emerge.
Relationship common ground:
Anauk-Fellow alien wants open access to DSOM / Saltar-Fellow alien / Steelman-Wants open access to DSOM / Rollin-Fellow Longhead, both want the One to emerge.
Relationship conflict:
Anauk-Saltar’s intentions / Saltar-Deepers and Longheads sworn enemies / Steelman-Human vs Aliens / Rollin-Lying about the One.
Relationship history:
Anauk-His father allied with Longheads long ago against the Deepers / Saltar-Saltar tried to seduce him long ago to find out identity of the One / Steelman-has a child with his ex / Rollin-Was chosen by Tallas at an early age to be the One.
Relationship subtext:
Anauk- unofficial friends / Saltar- forbidden sexual tension/ Steelman-unofficial family / Rollin-unofficial son.
Relationship arc:
Anauk- friends to enemy / Saltar-sworn enemy to lover / Steelman- informant to deceiver/ Rollin – loyal protegee to betrayer.
Saltar:
Relationship surface:
Anauk- Ally/ Steelman-Tensions / Tallas- Enemy /Rollin-Observer
Relationship common ground:
Anauk-Both want open access to DSOM / Steelman-Want to get to DSOM / Tallas- wants to get to DSOM/Rollin- wants to find the One
Relationship conflict:
Anauk-In love with Saltar’s daughter / Steelman- holding one of her hatchlings for torture/ Tallas-Deepers and Longheads sworn enemy /Rollin- he knows Saltar visits Tallas.
Relationship history:
Anauk- Saltar has history with his dad / Steelman- she helps get his lover and kid to DSOM (as favor to Tallas/ Tallas- Saltar tried to seduce him long ago to gain details about the ONE/ Rollin-has early memories concerning Saltar and Tallas
Relationship subtext:
Anauk- Saltar wants him but can’t have him / Steelman- I have something you want/ Tallas- forbidden sexual tension /Rollin- been quietly observing everyone.
Relationship arc:
Anauk- object of desire to object of manipulation / Steelman-ally to conflict when she finds out he is torturing one of her hatchlings / Tallas- Sworn enemy to lover /Rollin-. silent keeper to bargaining info.
Steelman:
Relationship surface:
Anauk- informant / Saltar- chess mate/ Tallas- ally /Rollin-ambivalent
Relationship common ground:
Anauk- His father allied with Longheads against the Deepers/ Saltar- interest in her hatchling in prison / Tallas- get to DSOM /Rollin-both pro Longhead
Relationship conflict:
Anauk-Stirring up trouble for Steelman by rebelling against his father / Saltar- he is torturing her hatchling/ Tallas-Steelman meets with Deepers /Rollin- does not want Steelman to know he is the One.
Relationship history:
Anauk- was present at negotiations between Steelman and Anauk’s father (Skyflier’s Don) to get Steelman’s pregnant lover to DSOM / Saltar-Helped get his preg. Lover to Skyfliers. / Tallas- shares history of alien arrival with him – the source informant. Gains insight of weaknesses of each species /Rollin-uses his telepathy to see what Steelman is up to.
Relationship subtext:
Anauk- Lukewarm / Saltar- I know your secret / Tallas- unofficial family /Rollin-spy
Relationship arc:
Anauk- Luke warm to ally / Saltar-ally to conflict / Tallas-ally to betrayer /Rollin- innocent to blackmailer.
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Lesson 6 – Assignment #1
Build Your Character Relationship: Revenge
Emily’s Relationship with Victoria
Surface: Neighbors
Common Ground: Wealthy, socialites
Conflict: Victoria despises that Emily is dating Daniel. Emily wants to avenge the framing of her father.
History: Victoria had an affair and was in love with Emily’s father, but she helped frame him for a felony and he died in prison. Emily wants revenge.
Subtext: Contempt
Relationship Arc: Unassuming neighbor to rivals and potential revenge victim.
Emily’s Relationship with Jack
Surface: Friend (childhood friend)
Common Ground: Jack’s dog (Emily’s former dog)
Conflict: Jack wants to date Emily and Emily loves Jack but cannot let him know.
History: As a young girl (Amanda Clarke), she knew Jack, and actually was the owner of his dog.
Subtext: Love
Relationship Arc: Childhood friends to just friends to possibly more than friends.
Emily’s Relationship to Daniel
Surface: Boyfriend
Common Ground: Dating
Conflict: Emily loves Jack
History: Daniel is a new boyfriend.
Subtext: Means to an end.
Relationship Arc: From acquaintances to engaged.
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Lesson 6 – Assignment #2
Marc Armstrong’s Show Relationship Map
Catch and Release
What I learned from this assignment is that the relationship map between two people may differ slightly from each respective perspective.
Nik’s Relationship to Brandon
Surface: Best Friend
Common Ground: Alignment of vigilante purpose
Conflict: Nik’s girlfriend resents Brandon
History: Former high school athletes / teammates
Subtext: Conspirators
Relationship Arc: From best friends to estranged
Nik’s Relationship to Charlie
Surface: Protege
Common Ground: Alignment of purpose
Conflict: Charlie attempts to sabotage Nik’s relationship
History: Graduated together, but Charlie was bullied
Subtext: Nik feels superior to Charlie
Relationship Arc: From different high school cliques to close friends
Nik’s Relationship to Bryson
Surface: Adversaries
Common Ground: Both capable / worthy adversaries
Conflict: Bryson wants to kill Nik
History: Nik killed Bryson’s brother
Subtext: Respected enemies
Relationship Arc: From bitter hatred to mutual respect
Brandon’s Relationship to Nik
Surface: Best Friend
Common Ground: Fully supports Nik’s cause
Conflict: Nik’s girlfriend is driving a wedge in their friendship
History: Former high school athletes / teammates
Subtext: Conspirators
Relationship Arc: From best friends to estranged
Brandon’s Relationship to Charlie
Surface: Fellow vigilante
Common Ground: Fellow high school graduate
Conflict: Charlie is jealous of Brandon’s friendship with Nik
History: Graduated together, but Charlie was bulled by Brandon
Subtext: Competing for Nik’s attention
Relationship Arc: From mutual tolerance to mutual contempt
Brandon’s Relationship to Bryson
Surface: Enemies
Common Ground: Both intelligent
Conflict: A threat to Nik
History: Nik killed Bryson’s brother
Subtext: Saboteur of Bryson’s plan to kill Nik
Relationship Arc: From strangers to bitter adversaries
Charlie’s Relationship to Nik
Surface: Mentor
Common Ground: Alignment of purpose
Conflict: Adores Nik and jealous of his girlfriend
History: Graduated together, but Nik was popular
Subtext: Charlies feels inferior to Nik
Relationship Arc: From different high school cliques to close friends
Charlie’s Relationship to Brandon
Surface: Fellow vigilante
Common Ground: Fellow high school graduate
Conflict: Charlie is jealous of Brandon’s friendship with Nik
History: Graduated together, but Brandon bullied Charlie
Subtext: Competing for Nik’s attention
Relationship Arc: From mutual tolerance to mutual contempt
Charlie’s Relationship to Bryson
Surface: Enemies
Common Ground: Experts in martial arts and hand-to-hand combat
Conflict: A threat to Nik
History: Only first met during the story arc
Subtext: Mutual respect
Relationship Arc: From strangers to respected adversaries
Bryson’s Relationship to Nik
Surface: Adversaries
Common Ground: Worthy adversaries
Conflict: Wants to kill Nik
History: Nik killed Bryson’s brother
Subtext: Respected enemies
Relationship Arc: From bitter hatred to mutual respect
Bryson’s Relationship to Brandon
Surface: Enemies
Common Ground: Both intelligent
Conflict: Brandon is an impediment
History: Brandon is Nik’s ally
Subtext: Brandon is a saboteur of Bryson’s plan to kill Nik
Relationship Arc: From strangers to bitter adversaries
Bryson’s Relationship to Charlie
Surface: Enemies
Common Ground: Experts in martial arts and hand-to-hand combat
Conflict: Another impediment
History: Only met during the story arc
Subtext: Mutual respect
Relationship Arc: From strangers to respected adversaries
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Assignment #1
L O S T
Kate Austen
Kate / Jack Shephard
Surface: New allies with budding trust/attraction.
Common Ground: Both action oriented, eager to do what it takes to improve situation for survivors.
Conflict: Jack’s trust in Kate is shaken when Mars reveals she’s a fugitive.
History: Introduced when Jack asks her to sew the wound in his back.
Subtext: Mutual attraction.
Relationship Arc: Beginning of long-term relationship, friends>lovers>committed.
Kate / James “Sawyer” Ford
Surface: Cautious allies.
Common Ground: Both action-oriented, willing to do unsavory but necessary things to assure survival.
Conflict: Sawyer is as survival oriented as Kate, making him potentially dangerous. His machismo both repels and attracts her.
History: They meet on the island; Kate lifts the gun off Sawyer, gives the bullets to Sayid and the pistol back to Sawyer in order to keep them on equal footing. Later the gun is voted back to her when Boone swipes both gun and bullets but is caught.
Subtext: Mutual understanding and cautious respect.
Relationship Arc: Developing relationship that becomes briefly romantic.
Kate / Edward Mars
Surface: Enemies.
Common Ground: Both strong willed, recognizing each others’ determination.
Conflict: Mars is a federal marshal extraditing Kate for murder.
History: After murdering her abusive father, Mars arrests Kate; Kate escapes, and Mars spends years tracking her; he arrests her in Australia and extradites her back to Iowa but the plane crashes.
Subtext: Long-term rivalry.
Relationship Arc: Mars’ pursuit is personal after Kate’s escape; near death from crash-inflicted wounds and in great pain, he asks if Kate will kill him. Kate gives the gun to Sawyer; Sawyer shoots him in the heart, but misses and punctures a lung. Jack smothers him to finish the job as he has no means of helping/saving him.
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Jason’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment is interconnectivity is important from the onset, and maps such as this can be quite helpful in keeping ducks in their prospective rows.Gina Semple
Gina / Maggie Ketchum
Surface: Employee/Employer, friends.
Common Ground: Work well together, both appreciate wonder, awe, joie de vivre. Maggie loves Gina’s writing.
Conflict: Maggie shares Gina’s journal with a news affiliate in hopes Gina will be recognized; Gina’s is borderline agoraphobic due to deep wounds of the past she’s buried.
History: Gina’s been working for Maggie and Mark for a year as a data entry clerk.
Subtext: Gina likes Maggie as a friend but is afraid of letting her in.
Relationship Arc: From business relationship to a deep friendship and gratitude.
Gina / Chris McAllister
Surface: New friends.
Common Ground: Both are storytellers, wordsmiths who love language. Both affect those they share their passions with—Chris does it willingly.
Conflict: Gina develops feelings for Chris, who assumes she knows he’s gay until it’s clear she doesn’t—he’s deeply fearful he’s paved the way for hurting her.
History: They meet at the news station the morning her journal goes public, but she doesn’t talk to him until attending his show with Parker two nights later.
Subtext: Mutual awe for one another, deep fascination which becomes challenging to navigate.
Relationship Arc: Gina falls for Chris through their discussions; when he reveals he’s gay, she accepts it (though it hurts) and shifts her focus to their growing friendship.
Gina / Parker Lang
Surface: Just met, he serves her at the pub and Maggie introduces them.
Common Ground: Both quick witted, love music, and are private about personal lives.
Conflict: Maggie’s hospitalization obliges Parker to help protect Gina from her new exposure to fans; Gina doesn’t want a babysitter or to be match-made.
History: Maggie introduces them at the pub; after being injured, she asks him to check on her and take her to Parker’s show, where tickets are waiting for them
Subtext: Both are very guarded but can’t help being intrigued—and deny they’re drawn to each other.
Relationship Arc: Gina slowly opens up to Parker, who feels compelled to do so as well. They share much more than they thought—his darker past prompts Gina to share her own, which opens the door for new understanding and a deeper appreciation leading to possibilities.
Maggie Ketchum
Maggie / Gina Semple
Surface: Employer/Employee
Common Ground: Gina is an exemplary employee, both get along well. They also see the positive more than the negative.
Conflict: Maggie shares Gina’s journal with the world in hopes Gina will be recognized, not realizing she’s caused Gina to confront one of her worst nightmares.
History: Gina’s been working for Maggie and Mark for a year, writing in her journal on her breaks and lunch. Maggie discovered it at one point and has been avidly reading it ever since, living vicariously through Gina’s vivid imagination.
Subtext: Maggie deeply admires Gina, but wans her to open up, share her gift with the world, and allow herself to be loved.
Relationship Arc: Maggie feels bad for “outing” Gina’s journal, but not the results that come from it–she wants the best for her, and slowly sees her come to life–the same way she feels when reading Gina’s words.
Maggie / Mark Ketchum
Surface: Wife / Husband
Common Ground: They deeply love one another, and fight to beat obstacles in running their business..
Conflict: Maggie misses the man she married, before he became concerned with bills and mortgages and the business. She’s wistful for him to let go of his perception of what being responsible means. Mark also does not agree with how Maggie interfered with Gina’s private life, and the argument blows up much larger than anticipated.
History: Married for nearly 30 years.
Subtext: Maggie wants to love life again, with Mark, who cares about the obligations of the future?
Relationship Arc: Maggie and Mark have it out, open up and let the fear speak its mind–but are both inspired to change things up for the better–and Maggie is blown away by Mark’s transformation and surprise he’s got in store..
Maggie / Parker Lang
Surface: Patron / Bartender-turned-proxy.
Common Ground: Both appreciate humor and are easy to get along with.
Conflict: Maggie’s hospitalization obliges Parker to help protect Gina from her new exposure to fans; Gina doesn’t want a babysitter or to be match-made.
History: Maggie and Mark frequent Doolie’s Pub in their small town of Point North, and appreciate Parker’s vitality and wit.
Subtext: Maggie has a respectful crush on Parker, her gut tells her he’s perfect for Gina.
Relationship Arc: Maggie is defensive when Parker says he’s done being her spy, but when he apologizes later she recognizes he’s partially right; they own their stuff and make good.
Parker Lang
Parker / Gina Semple
Surface: Maggie introduces them, acquaintances.
Common Ground: Both appreciate humor and music, both are private about personal lives.
Conflict: Parker doesn’t want a relationship but is drawn to Gina; her standoffish behavior is understandable, he doesn’t want to get hurt either.
History: Just introduced two days ago.
Subtext: Parker likes Gina, is afraid to be anything but friends.
Relationship Arc: They go from superficial to awkward to confrontative quickly–then realize both have issues with themselves, and agree to pretend they haven’t met. The second time is better.
Parker / Maggie Ketchum
Surface: Bartender / Patron. Friends.
Common Ground: Both enjoy laughter and over-the-top joking around, one-upmanship and improv.
Conflict: Parker feels used by Maggie and her obsession with Gina, but agrees she needs someone to help field the sudden flood of people. They argue over her motives and his attitude.
History: Has known Maggie / Mark for about 6 months.
Subtext: Parker gets Maggie and ‘gets’ she’s unhappy, but recognizes her love for Mark and that they’re both afraid to take risks that jeopardize the future.
Relationship Arc: Parker gets into it with Maggie when he feels she’s using him; he comes around when he realizes his anger is not her fault but his, and owns it.
Parker / Chris McAllister
Surface: Mutual friends of Gina.
Common Ground: Both are fascinated by Gina, and protective of her. Both understand the power of expression and need for it. Both are talented performers—Parker only sings karaoke.
Conflict: Parker believes Gina is falling for Chris and calls him out on not being honest. Chris returns with suggesting Parker is projecting his own inabilities to own his feelings.
History: Just met.
Subtext: Parker envies and disdains Chris’ fame because he feels guilt and shame for himself in life. Chris helps him recognize it.
Relationship Arc: Parker comes to appreciate Chris and vice versa; Chris actually advocates for Parker with Gina.
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What I learned during this assignment is that I have a lot to learn about my characters. And that I can use these forms to work on the growth between characters.
Supergirl
Kara/SG Alex Cat Grant Hank H
Surface
Sister/protector
Boss/assistant
Boss/ coworker
Common Ground
Coworkers fighting aliens
Portraying SG in the media
Fighting aliens in a human world
Conflict
Physical Training
Knows that Kara likes James
Kara wants to save everyone and Hank wants to stick to his job
History
Grew up together and Alex knows of her super powers
Co workers
They both know Alex
Subtext
Collaborators
Tensile relationship for growth
Teacher for Kara
Relationship Arc
Distance to collaborators
Conflict/Resolution
Distrust to trust
Carrington Manor
Gwenn Terry Sally Tara
Surface
Boss
Coworker/Mentor/Friends
Mother daughter
Common Ground
People pleasers
Commiserating at a job they hate
Related
Conflict
Unreasonable expectations of Gwenn with Fraud and patients
Gwenn is judgmental of Sally’s use of sex to get her way.
Gwenn Watts her mom to go to a home and Tara does not want to go
History
Hiring manager
Mentor and new friend
Tara is a crazy mom and is defiant of her daughters direction
Subtext
Distrust to admiration
Collaborators
Confusion
Relationship Arc
Compliant/defiant/apathetic
Friends/enemies/friends
Compliant to dominant
I did the others but I can’t get it to format it correctly.
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Sean’s Show Relationship Map
What I learned doing this assignment:
1. Seemed daunting task at first, then the importance and skills helped me see the simplicity and need going forward. I can get better at seeing these relationships : )
2. This assignment helped me see the layers and possibility of more layers in a profound way for first time.
3. Just pushing through and doing the assignment paid off big time!
Assignment 1
Relationship map for Dean Winchester
Surface Sam – Brothers with opposite views on hunting, obedience
Dad – Respectful without question, like views on hunting
Common Ground Sam – love each other and father. Great at hunting, together they are fantastic.
Dad – love hunting to help people, realize importance.
Conflict Sam – opposite views on obedience, life choices and importance.
Dad – John does not want brothers engaging the demon that killed their mother.
History Sam – fought like brothers on opposite views and paths, but love and proud of each other.
Dad – always obeyed Dad without question.
Subtext Sam – opposites that respect their differences, cannot do without each other.
Dad – felt way Sam did, but never acted on it or displayed it, represses how he feels.
Relationship Arc Sam – quarreling brothers on opposite paths to like-minded brothers together.
Dad – obedient without question, inseparable to suspect absence of father.
Assignment 2
Relationship Map for Cian Shea
Surface Bridget McCabe – Co-workers, attracted to each other.
Mitchell Dawe – Cian’s older brother, psychopath.
The Devil – Adversary.
Common Bridget McCabe – Both FBI profilers, equal talent
Ground Mitchell Dawe – Same mom and dad, grew up in same home, aware of the Devil.
The Devil – aware of the presence of Caliel and other Angels, close connection to Mitchell.
Conflict Bridget McCabe – Bridget obeys rules, Cian bends them, both intense in different ways.
Mitchell Dawe – is the most vicious, notorious and elusive serial killer to date worldwide.
The Devil – to the death adversaries, the Devil is Mitchell’s biggest fan and help.
History Bridget McCabe – aware of each other day one in academy, 12-year age difference, flirt.
Mitchell Dawe – brothers, Mitchell is evil, Cian is good.
The Devil – The Devil challenges Cian as 12-year-old boy to rid world of him.
Subtext Bridget McCabe – Cian’s greatest love and crucial to his success.
Mitchell Dawe – could have caught him long ago but wants him alive at the end.
The Devil – have similar views on people and God, worthy adversaries.
Relationship Bridget McCabe – enthralled at academy, to equals in FBI, to lovers and co-conspirators.
Arc Mitchell Dawe – brothers, to enemies, to world ending, new world results and revenge.
The Devil – nightmare in passing as child, to mortal adversaries and impossible revenge.
Relationship map for Bridget McCabe
Surface Cian Shea – Co-workers, attracted to each other, 12-years her senior.
Mitchell Dawe – another case file, killer she wants to catch.
The Devil – hardly believes he exists or does not care.
Common Cian Shea – both top FBI profilers who want to make ultimate difference.
Ground Mitchell Dawe – know each other exists and why.
The Devil – both completely interested in Cian Shea, sold out.
Conflict Cian Shea – Cian bends rules, mystery when he leaves FBI, reasons.
Mitchell Dawe – world’s most notorious and elusive serial killer ever.
The Devil – The Devil wants to destroy Cian; she becomes a target.
History Cian Shea – knew about him before she joined academy, Cian was famous FBI profiler.
Mitchel Dawe – the whole world heard of Mitchell Dawe before she joined academy.
The Devil – She saw the Devil looking at her with interest as child, serial killer neighbor.
Subtext Cian Shea – more alike than she realizes, will sell out to his ways and mission.
Mitchell Dawe – is one she wants to catch the most during every case she works; now kill.
The Devil – never considers the Devil until her relationship with Cian deepens.
Relationship Cian Shea – someone she admires from young to ultimate love relationship.
Arc Mitchell Dawe – serial killer she wants to catch, to need to kill, to Cian’s brother.
The Devil – never considers to knows she can destroy and make up for lost time, revenge.
Relationship map for the Devil
Surface Cian Shea – adversaries.
Mitchell Dawe – biggest fan, interest and help.
Bridget McCabe – aware of relationship to Cian, tracking and plotting.
Common Cian Shea – both despise God and His ways.
Ground Mitchell Dawe – evil interests and no filter.
Bridget McCabe – Interest in who Cian Shea really is and what he can accomplish.
Conflict Cian Shea – wat to destroy each other in unimaginable ways.
Mitchell Dawe – some rogue murders and independent agenda.
Bridget McCabe – relationship and importance to Cian and his mission or end game.
History Cian Shea – challenged him as 12-year-old boy for terror and fun.
Mitchell Dawe – impressed with his level of promise young, assigns Amii to tutor him.
Bridget McCabe – Saw her in a situation as a child when she lived next to serial killer.
Subtext Cian Shea – has been looking for this kid and man for centuries.
Mitchell Dawe – did not realize he was a prophetic evil come true until too late.
Bridget McCabe – does not realize how important she will be or her angelic protection.
Relationship Cian Shea – from mindless threat to 12-year-old to equal enemies in world ending battle.
Arc Mitchell Dawe – from mutual evil interest to master and teacher helping star pupil.
Bridget McCabe – from little regard to need to destroy her or relationship with Cian.
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What I learned doing this assignment is that it’s an excellent exercise for identifying where conflicts not only can but should come up between characters. I’ll be doing this for every single relationship.
LESSON 6, ASSIGNMENT 1
RELATIONSHIP MAPS: BIG LITTLE LIES
MADELINE/CELESTE:
Surface: Best friends
Common Ground: Kids in same class, stay-at-home moms
Conflict: Envy, dishonesty
History: Superficial friendship
Subtext: M is envious of C’s perfect/passionate life
Relationship Arc: Superficial to intimate friendship
MADELINE/JANE:
Surface: New friends
Common Ground: Two against Renata
Conflict: Forget the past vs confront the past
History: Met when Jane came to Madeline’s aid
Subtext: M wants J to have the “Fresh Start” she longs for, and is one of M’s “causes”
Relationship Arc: From big sis/little sis to new (unclear) ground
MADELINE/RENATA:
Surface: Adversaries
Common Ground: Kids in same class
Conflict: Renata’s petition to cancel play
History: Alphas clashing
Subtext: They are alike in many ways
Relationship Arc: Adversaries to conspirators
LESSON 6, ASSIGNMENT 2
RELATIONSHIP MAPS: TIN MEN
JOHN/DANA:
Surface: Brother/sister
Common Ground: Toxic family upbringing
Conflict: Mutual resentment
History: Dana ran, John picked up slack
Subtext: Dana actually sacrificed more
Relationship Arc: Estranged to bonded
JOHN/KEIRA:
Surface: Husband/wife
Common Ground: Their kids
Conflict: Financial & parenting struggles, Stale marriage
History: Married out of obligation
Subtext: Marriage was a mistake and held them both back
Relationship Arc: Partners to adversaries to true partners
KEIRA/DANA:
Surface: Sisters-in-law
Common Ground: John
Conflict: Competition over niece/daughter
History: Were friends before Keira and John got together
Subtext: Mutual jealousy
Relationship Arc: Competition to acceptance to betrayal
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Norene Smiley Relationship Maps
What I learned doing this assignment: It made me think more about cross relationships, how every character fit into the pattern of things.
Not sure how to post the relationship map assignments here.
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Norene Smiley Lessons 6 Assignment – Relationship Maps
What I learned from this exercise – it made me consider how each character fits in the story, interrelations, dynamics of how they react to each other. I have condensed and shortened my assignment responses here as I was unable to post in the Maps and difficult to post here.
Assignment 1. JESSICA JONES
JESSICA TRISH / LUKE / KILGRAVE
Surface adoptive sisters /acquaintances&lovers /both have super powers
Common Ground love and protective /both have secrets/ both have powers
Conflict disagreement over safety / J. killed his wife / struggle for power over each other
History competition/diff. world view / ? / he controlled her until she killed him
Subtext J. feels flawed & danger to sister / guilt over wife’s death/he needs her power/she fears she cannot stop him
Relationship Arc sisters to competitors /strangers to lovers& supporters/ victim to opponent
Assignment 2 TROUBLE
SCRAP /RUBY & BARDO / AGRIPPA / TOODIE
Surface her caretakers / mother figure / fellow street waif
Common Ground hiding in Keep / both want control / both abandoned
Conflict control/independence / A. wants to use her / diff. goals S. wants to protect, T. does not trust anyone
History Bardo rescued baby S. / A. was underling / Scrap rescues Toodie
Subtext S. embodies curse / A. wants to use S.’s power / S. sees herself in T.
Relationship Arc guardians to collaborators/ parent figure to opponent /dependent to enemy
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Jonelle Berment’s Relationship Map
What I learned in doing this assignment is that all my colorful tables I made for the assignment don’t carry over 🙁 but all jokes aside, I learned how to map out relationships so that the characters become relevant through multiple episodes and seasons.
Assignment #1
Revenge
Emily & Nolan
Relationship Surface: Co-conspirators
Relationship Common Ground: Both wealthy & smart
Relationship Conflict: Nolan wants to be involved in Emily's plan for revenge but Emily wants him to have no parts of it.
Relationship History: Nolan worked for Emily's father, and her dad invested in Nolan's 1st company
Relationship Subtext: Indifference
Relationship Arc: From working for her dad to helping her carry out her revenge plot.Co-conspirators
Emily & Victoria
Relationship Surface: Adversaries
Relationship Common Ground: Powerful women who are used to getting their way.
Relationship Conflict: Emily is dating Victoria's son, Victoria doesn't trust Emily and wants to destroy their relationship and Victoria is the one who set up Emily's Dad.
Relationship History: Victoria was dating and in love with Emily's father
Relationship Subtext: Deep Hatred
Relationship Arc: From her father's lover to her sworn enemy.
Emily & Amanda
Relationship Surface: Former cellmate
Relationship Common Ground: Both are extremely strong willed and ambitious
Relationship Conflict: Amanda is inadvertently thrown into the revenge plan and has now decided to remain in the Hamptons and live the life she's always wanted.
Relationship History: They looked out for each other in the juvenile detention center they were serving time and Amanda agreed to switch identities.
Relationship Subtext: Major disdain
Relationship Arc: From Friend to Foe
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Jamie Stegner
What I learned: Relationships between characters can be rich and varied. I made relationship maps for several characters using msexcel for grid format. Like in life, one loves A, other don’t but have to pretend, etc. Push and pull between characters is complex, subtle. My grids are too big to post here.
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