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Eclipse Neilson Action/Props
What I’ve learn I added a few more but already had action props.
INCONGRUENCE
The main incongruence is the women are seniors age range 75-97. All but Radna know nothing about metaphysical or supernatural experiences and they are about to begin an adventure to find buried gold that a ghost has instructed them about.
OUTLINE OF FUNNY MOMENTS (props included)
Figure of speech: To Be Or Not to Be
The small group of women – the wanna be rebels, meet in the sitting room after bedtime. They are in their night gowns with their over coats. Martha walks in with a sexy negligee – a variety of comments and playful actions.
(Brainstorming for comments )
Oh la la to
Are you kidding me.
Where’s your boobs? * (one I will use)
There’s always one in the crowd.
(Brainstorming for prop) NEGLIGEE AND PENDULUM
Martha flashes her negligee
Martha pulls out her pendulum and struts across the room as if she was on stage in a fashion show.
(Brainstorming for prop) FLASHLIGHT
(The women use their flashlights)
They play blink, blink with them like children.
Tilda starts the rap sound pretending she is holding a mike as she blinks her light.
and beat boxes.
shaboom bee bop bob turns it into the song who put the bomp in the bomp bomp song
BRAINSTORM
Radna is at the head of the table getting a bit frustrated – taps her fingers and yells out
ok who smoked the dope? * (one I will use)
Ok ladies all aboard
Martha responds no Martinis for me
Silvia responds Scotch on the rocks
Tilda jumps back begins a rap of who smoke the dope. Soon the other women pick it up. Who smoked the dope.
They all answer sarcastically with a “who me?” and dumb expression on their faces.
The only one who raises their hand to the question is Anne they suddenly look at her. Tilt their heads.
Long back and forth about why her hand is raised . And questions who senile and whose not type of back and forth funny situation. She at one point forgets why her hand is up but then remembers. They discover her hand is raised because she has answered Radna’s question letting them know she smoked dope earlier.
(Brainstorming for prop) JOINT
Anne pull out a joint and ask if anyone wants one.
Radna tells them this is not working tells them to circle up for a real OM .Tells them to circle up They stand in line. Instead looking like the seven dwarfs. She rolls her eyes makes a comment. Draws in the air that this is a circle and that they are a line comment
They start to Omm . Trying to be seriously sacred.
No one really gets into it-
Tilda yawns the yawn gets catchy between OMS soon everyone is yawning with half oms
Radna gives up -tells them “oh what the hell knowing they want to do the yum chant.
Starts the Yum toning – soon it becomes a choir of yums in every possible form . The RUNNING GAGS
(NOTE: this yumm tone was started before in a few scenes before and is repeated.)
They sit down feeling good. Silvia pulls out of her bag a box of cookies.
(Brainstorming for prop)COOKIES
Everyone takes one starts to munch- variety of dreamy faces- ahs oohs and a yum. Soon all start the 100 ways of saying yum. Tilda jumps up raising her cookie like the statue of liberty to start the yum tone – Martha quickly pulls her down. The rest of the women frown at her.
They continue to munch but quietly.
(Brainstorming for prop) LAMPS
Radna looks at all of them suggest they might need help from the resident ghosts. Smiles and waits for a response. The lamps go off
George Wellworth ( the ghost ) remains invisible taps a few of the women’s shoulders . They respond differently.
Silvia chokes over her cookie. Grabs her water.
They look at each other -get what Radna has just said know she is not kidding and freak all at once. They gulp. Smile nervously. Some try not twitch. Anne smirks.
Silvia jumps up runs to the door to leave.
Tilda blocks the door spread eagle – not letting anyone escape. Silvia whines she has to pee! Crossing her legs.
(Brainstorming for prop( CHINA BOWL
Martha is checking the price of gold these days on her phone, announces it’s value as she gets up and walks over to Silvia – makes comment on possible investments, snaps it close and grabs the expensive china bowl on the sideboard hands it to Silvia . Raises a stern motherly eyebrow. Tell her she can use it . Silvia says never mind and goes sit back down. Grabs her water. Everyone says no and reminds her she has to pee and water will make it worse.
(Brainstorming for prop) PENDULUM
They get back to the ghost talk – Radna tells Silvia to consult her pendulum.
Silvia stands up – hand shakes from nerves. Martha and Jeanie hold her still –
Radna – ask the question about having ghosts help.
The pendulum quickly responds with a big yes.
Silvia faints.
Anne ask if she wet her pants? while she swings her pendulum back and forth hypnotizing herself.
(Brainstorm responses.)
Tilda looks – nope
Not a drop
Oh my god!….. Just joking nope
Silvia comes to. They give her the water.
Radna tells everyone to take a bathroom break and meet out in the garden in five minutes.
Some of the women get up and rush to the bathroom. She yells after them
(Brainstorming) Figure of speech To pee or not pee
Let me remind you it is not a good idea to keep ghost waiting.
She turns to Martha ask her if she know what happens if you keep a ghost waiting too long
Martha shakes her head no as the walk out the door.
Radna turns and looks at her with a serious expression and ask
Did you know ghost don’t have to pee?
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DAY 9 WILLIAM BEASLEY ACTION/PROPS
WHAT I LEARNED FROM THIS ASSIGNMENT IS ADDING PHYSICAL AND PROP HUMOR TO IMPROVE THE SCRIPT
COMIC SITUATION OUTLINE
HUSBAND PREPARING TO WATCH FOOTBALL GAME
WIFE KEEPS INTERUPTING
HUSBAND GETS ANNOYED AND LEAVES
WIFE GETS TO WATCH HER SHOW
MAIN AREA OF INCONGRUENCE
MISINTERPRETATION
ACTION/PROPS ALREADY IN SCENE
FOOD – WINGS, CHIPS, DIP, BEER
ARRANGING FOOD
NAPKINS, TOWEL
BOWLS
TRAY
RECLINER
BROOM
FLIRTING
BIG SCREEN TV
ADDITIONAL ACTION/PROPS
FOOTBALL
HAT
NEWSPAPER
BRAINSTORM INCONGRUENT WAYS
FOOD – WINGS, CHIPS, DIP, BEER
ARRANGING FOOD ON TRAY
BEING NEAT, THEN SLOPPY
NAPKINS,
TAKES ONE, WIFE BRINGS MORE
BOWLS
MEASURING PRECISE AMOUNTS, COUNTING CHIPS, WIFE GRABS HSANDFUL
RECLINER
FINDING RIGHT POSITION
BIG SCREEN TV
HUGGING, SIZE COMMENTS
BROOM
SWEEP, NO FLY AWAY TIL AFTER GAME
FLIRTING
SEXY DANCING, SITTING ON LAP, GET OFF
FOOTBALL
TOSSING UP AND DROPPING, PROP TO WIFE
LUCKY HAT
WHERE? WASHED?
NEWSPAPER
SEEN TV SECTION? BOTH LOOK.
REWRITE OUTLINE OF SCENE
HUSBAND
FOOD – WINGS, CHIPS, DIP, BEER
SEPERATES FOOD BY HALVES, MEASURING ITEMS INTO BOWLS, CHOOSING WHICH DIP
TWO BEERS IN AN ICE BUCKET
ARRANGING FOOD ON TRAY
PUTS TOWEL DOWN, ARRANGES BOWLS, THEN REARRANGES THEM SEVERAL TIMES
PUTS ON HAT DIFFERENT WAYS
PICKS UP FOOTBALL AND DROPS
SITS DOWN ON RECLINER AND LOOKS FOR RIGHT POSITION
WIFE
WATCHING HIS PREPARATION WHILE READING NEWSPAPER
FELIX UNGER COMMENT
HUSBAND SPILLS SOME FOOD
OSCAR MADISON COMMENT
BRINGS NAPKINS
TOPPER – ODD COUPLE COMMENT “YOU’RE YOUR OWN ODD COUPLE”
WIFE GETS BROOM
TOPPER – HUSBAND MAKES WITCH COMPARISON “FLY AWAY TIL AFTER THE GAME”
COMMENTS ON SIZE OF TV
TOPPER – THE BIGGER, THE BETTER
WIFE ASKS ABOUT DINNER
GOT MINE
I’LL SHARE,
ENOUGH FOR ONE
TOPPER – ONE ARMY
HUSBAND
SEEN REMOTE?
YOU DO SOMETIMES
CAN’T FIND BUTTON TO TURN ON
WHAT ELSE IS NEW?
TOPPER – ALWAYS TROUBLE TURNING THINGS ON
WIFE FLIRTING
SEXY DANCE IN FRONT OF TV
MOVE YOUR ASS AND DON’T BLOCK THE TV
SITS ON HUSBAND’S LAP
WHY DON’T WE . . .
DIDN’T WE LAST NIGHT?
NO LAW CAN’T DO AGAIN
NEED TIME TO RECUPERATE
NOT WHAT I’M FEELING
TAKE A NAP AND I’LL BE UP LATER
TOPPER – WHY WAIT, YOU’RE UP NOW
GAME STARTS
WIFE ASKS DUMB QUESTIONS MIXING UP VARIOUS SPORTS
I.E.
BASEBALL HAS BASES
AND FOOTBALL HAS FOOTS?
FOOTBALL HAS YARDS
AREN’T YARDS MADE OF FEET?
TOPPER – WHO’S ON FIRST DOWN?
HUSBAND GETS ANNOYED, LEAVES
WIFE GETS TO WATCH HER SHOW
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DAY 9 darryl brant Action/Props
What I learned from this exercise is humour is not limited to just dialogue, but can also be found in props, visual gags and physical action.
Outline: Paulie arrives uninvited to the wedding of his ex-girlfriend, Claire, who is marrying a man twice her age, Rodney and who is also her teacher. At first, Paulie and Rodney are cordial, almost friendly. But when Paulie catches sight of Claire prior to the ceremony, he realizes he still loves her. In an attempt to sabotage the wedding, Paulie’s actions start from subtle by performing with the band and singing songs about the considerable age difference to rearranging the letters of their backdrop to changing Claire and Rodney’s wedding vows to making out with Rodney’s mother to finally standing up and vehemently opposing the union by inappropriately and explicitly retelling the sordid details of Paulie and Claire’s past relationship to all those in attendance embarrassing everyone while reinforcing Claire and Rodney’s marriage.
The main incongruence is that Paulie only realizes that he still loves his ex-gf when he is attending her wedding to someone else.
Physical Action: Paulie acting as singer in wedding band
Incongruity: Instead of singing typical wedding songs, he sings famous songs about old men with younger women
Prop: Certificate of Ordination and Minister’s collar
Incongruity: Paulie will ‘officiate’ the ceremony for the girl he loves to another man
Prop: Wedding Vows
Incongruity: Paulie has secretly written wedding vows for the bride and groom and switched them with their actual vows
Prop: Name Board
Incongruity: Paulie keeps changing the names on the name board to read bizarre messages
Physical Action: Paulie making out with mother of groom
Incongruity: To protest the age difference between bride and groom, Paulie makes out with the oldest person attending the wedding.
Physical Action: Paulie escaping for his life after the whole wedding party turns on him
Incongruity: He went there to attend the wedding but ended up ruining the entire thing
Prop: Wedding car
Incongruity: During his getaway, Paulie steals the wedding car only to smash it into a telephone pole
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Ron Basci Physical and Prop Humor Lesson 9
What I learned from this exercise: In the tradition of legendary comedians like Buster Keaton, WC Fields, Laurel and Hardy and every vaudevillian who ever worked the stage, physical and prop humor can make good dialogue great, poor dialogue almost unnoticeable and absence of dialogue hilarious.
Comic Situation Outline:
Billy resists blind date, gives in.
Arrives on time at seaside amusement park Ferris wheel.
She’s not there. Wanders to beverage stand. Sits, has a beer.
Orders fries, another beer and another.
45 minutes later, Jenny arrives.
Their greetings, her clothing.
Billy trying to keep it together. Conversation about auras, jobs.
Billy loses control, spews his abdominal contents splattering her sneakers.
She studies the result, is genuinely impressed by his “creativity” and declares that this is a sure sign that they are made for each other.
Nonplussed by his action and her response, he replies.
Main area of incongruence: Two completely different personalities on a date.
Additional actions, props:
Billy’s reaction to the date suggestion: They are standing on sidewalk. He is in jeans and tee shirt. At his angry outburst he smacks a nearby tree. It hurts, a lot. Clutching it, he is not paying much attention to Bob until he sees the picture.
Billy arrives at seaside park: He wears a sport coat, open collar shirt, slacks, casual shoes and a bandaged hand. Near Ferris wheel an excited kid drops ice cream onto his shoe. Silent, but with a chagrined look at parent he meticulously wipes it with his handkerchief, then throwing same in trash.
At the concession counter he sits on a wobbly stool, almost slipping off. Orders a Heineken and fries. Counterman notices some fries are gray colored so before serving asks if Billy wants them served with catsup. Affirmative response the spuds are drowned, removing all evidence. Billy eats and has two more beers.
Jenny arrives: Pageboy styled blue hair, a green sweatshirt with gold lettering: “Animals are people too”, a pair of orange shorts over black waist high leggings, white sneakers, no bag or purse. She sees his upraised beckoning arm and approaches. As Billy rises to greet her (conversation begins) the wobbly stool and excessive beer causes him to lose his balance. Slamming his good hand on the counter to keep from falling, a glancing blow to the fries sends them sailing to other customer’s plate, with one landing in his beer. Reaction as customer slowly plucks soggy fry and flicks same at Billy, who is oblivious. Jenny sits on Billy’s other side, asking what he’s drinking. (Heine) and wants one, too.
Conversation: She reads auras and is intrigued his is gray like the clams on another’s dish. Anxious and inebriated, Billy does his best to participate.
Jenny: You should be an actor. You’d be funny in a porno.
Billy: I’d have to take my clothes off. Besides, my pasty white heinie would never work.
Jenny: Just get more sun.
Billy suddenly spews flotsam and fries, a fair portion of which land on Jenny’s sneakers. She studies the result.
Billy: (rising awkwardly as stool falls away) God, I’m so sorry…
Jenny: (looks up smiling) Fabulous colors! This marks the beginning of a beautiful relationship.
Embarrassed, Billy’s pants darken as his previous beers have also found a way out.
Jenny notices: It’s Kismet! Yes! Take me now!
Billy (confused looking at his pants): Huh? (slowly looks up) Where’s Kismet?
Jenny: In my arms, Einstein.
Billy (staring): I love you.
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Forgot to post earlier.
Day 9 – Larry’s Physical Humour and props
What I learned from this is assignment is that by visualizing each moment I could find more humourous details. By reading the dialogue more closely I looked for ways to support it with physical actions and props. I also found that sometimes you need to modify the dialogue to accommodate the action and/or props. In terms of action, detail can be key as to its execution.
I have taken my submission from Day 8 and put the action and props in italics.
I broke down my scene into four parts: an introduction; a trail segment and a bear encounter (at the bare minimum) and a conclusion.
In the introduction I developed an Incompatible Couple of a he-man guy (Jack) teamed up with an overtly gay guy (Billy) on a forced corporate bond-building hike exercise through the Adirondack mountains where they get lost. This leads to friction and competition as each does not like the other particularly well and wants to prove he is superior over the other. They will also meet some interesting characters along the way.
In the introduction they are dressed in very different clothing (the he-man in rugged outdoors wear and the gay in frilly clothing – good sight gag and differentiating the characters) and bickering as to who was responsible for getting themselves lost.
PROPS: Focus on the clothing:
Jack wearing safari gear such as khaki shirt and cargo pants, cowboy hat with one side pinned up, Ralph Lauren safari sunglasses, walking stick and serious hiking boots.
Billy wearing Hawaiian shirt, a vest, tight, bright shorts, wide-brimmed sun hat with a flower, sneakers, and carrying a parasol.
Both have way oversized knapsacks on their backs.
Jack asks for a snack but Billy has eaten them all along the way.
PROPS: There is a trail of food wrappers behind the two. Food is smeared around Billy’s face.
The two are bickering as to who was responsible for they becoming lost.
ACTION: they start shoving each other like school children.
In the second segment, along the trail, it is revealed Billy has Boy Scout badges in pottery, cooking and leatherwork. Jack says this is the “Martha Stewart trifecta.”
PROP: Billy opens his vest revealing merit badges for pottery, cooking and leatherwork.
This leads to a gag with Martha Stewart popping out of the bush offering a “trail mix” recipe.
PROP: Martha is holding a plastic bag of trail mix.
I turned this into a running gag as she will pop up later in the bear scene. She works well as an incongruity.
On the trail I have Jack smack his head killing a mosquito leaving a blood red spot on his forehead. Then they meet a person from the opposite direction who, seeing the red spot, says “namaste.” Jack replies, “Have a nice day.” I saw this as an opportunity to expand this:
Both Jack and Billy kill mosquitoes on their foreheads leaving red spots. They meet a man coming from the opposite direction who looks like Mahatma Ghandi, carrying a satchel. (Another incongruity.) They do the namaste greeting. Billy mistakes the man as a guru and asks for “wise words”.
I brainstormed on this coming up with:
– A Buddha quote
– Do or do not from Star Wars
– old sayings: a stitch in time saves nine
A punchline with a reversal
PROPS: Ghandi is wearing a shawl, loin cloth, carrying an over-the-shoulder satchel and a walking stick.
In the bear scene, it starts off the boys walking into a clearing with a black bear on the other side. They freeze and try to remember as to what to do. And the do everything wrong in terms of what should be done. Initially Jack exclaims, “Shit!” and Billy responds, “Just did. Do I have the toilet paper or do you?” I can rework this into a running gag where Billy figures that if they are downwind the bear will definitely smell them.
ACTION: Billy wets finger to determine wind direction.
PROPS and ACTION: Billy digs into his knapsack and pulls and tosses out a hairdryer, a rubber duckie, a cat, a woman’s bra, a sink and finally, toilet paper.
When Jack suggests Billy could use his cooking skills to “whup” up a honey cake for the bear Martha Stewart pops up again.
PROPS and ACTION: Martha pops up again. She is waving a cake.
Then Jack remembers to play dead and falls down. I see potential for a topper scene as each tries to outdo the other in “dying.”
ACTION: Jack starts by simply falling down. Billy falls down and flops about. Jack then gets up and goes into death spiral and moaning before hitting the ground. And so on.
Finally the bear charges. He then trips over his knapsack and knocks himself out, effectively now “dead.”
MODIFIED ACTION: As the bear charges Billy gets ahead of Jack. Jack pushes him from behind and Billy trips over his own junk and hits the ground knocking himself out.
The bear runs over Billy and Jack runs up a tree, appearing safe for the moment.
ACTION AND PROPS: The bear reaches up and rips off one of his boots.
Martha Stewart shows up with advice – and has none.
ACTION: Martha throws up hands in a sign of futility and shakes her head left and right.
In the conclusion, park rangers come to the rescue.
MODIFIED ACTION: They use a loud air horn to scare off bear. They also scare Jack who falls out of tree.
They found the boys by following the food wrappers.
PROPS: Ranger has handful of food wrappers.
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Margaret’s Actions/Props
What I learned: Learning how important it is to use props to create comedy.
Comedy character logline: An 80-year-old with Alzheimers who thinks she is sane.
Outline:
· We see someone under the sink c/o it leaking
· We hear the you-tube smart phone video of how to fix a leaky sink
· The phone comments on needing a brand new strainer – the person under the sinks states, “It would be easier for me to pay for a plumber, but that’s not happening either.”
· The person emerging out from under the sink is an 80-year-old – Irene.
· Irene uses a mixing bowl instead of the phone suggested bucket. She introduces herself to the mixing bowl as the “plumber” and tells it that they are the “bucket”
· Irene comments after you-tube instructions, “Screw? Nuts? Can’t they make any video nowadays that isn’t R rated?”
· If the nuts are too tight, you might need a wrench.
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· Comments after you-tube instructions, “Once the nuts are loose, take hold of the pipes and pull…” “You’re talking to an 80-year-old here! A little respect is in order!”
· Gets rid of her bowl because it is in the way and gets drenched with water.
· Comments on you-tube instructions, “Unscrew the screw” “don’t need to talk about screwing. I am a widow, you know.”
· Uses dial phone with smart phone instructions, confusing a con-man calling. He tells her she has won a year’s worth of groceries but ends up hanging up on her. She comments, “Go get my own groceries, soon as I finish fixing this sink. Buy me some nuts.”
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Sherri D. Coffee – Physical and Prop Humor
What I learned was to start with the main form of incongruence. Brainstorm props and physical actions to add humor.
Main incongruity: At 26, Alex is an attorney for the FBI assigned to infiltrate a lobby firm. Marion is a 50 something seasoned successful lobbyist with the firm assigned to train her. Alex is very politically liberal, and Marion is a staunch conservative. Both must find a way to relate.
Prop: Picture on wall of Marion with President Reagan that she adores.
In Marion’s office, Alex begins to ask questions to get to know Marion better. She asks, “Wasn’t Reagan the beginning of the end of democracy?” Marion studies her and just points to the picture on the wall.
Prop: Marion removed the picture from the wall and places on her desk. “He is the reason I became a lobbyist.” Alex displays an uncomfortable smile. Marion states, “you were not even born, right?” Alex responds, “1997. Clinton baby.
Prop: Marion prints out a client list and hands to Alex. She peruses the list and can’t believe her eyes. “You represent the NRA” Marion points to the gun cabinet in her office. “You betcha. A girl with a gun will never be a victim.” Alex: “So, you never had to do drills in school, right?” Marion scoffs. “They are one of our most important clients.” Alex slips, “I bet”
Prop: Lunch arrives. Roast beef sandwiches, chips, and sodas. Marion grabs a sandwich and Alex just stares at the platter. Marion, “what is the matter, aren’t you hungry?” Alex, “are there any vegetarian?” Marion yells to the admin, “Sue, we’ve got a grasseater. Can you add vegetarian for tomorrow?” Alex is horrified. “Where am I?”
Physical: At the state capital, Alex follows Marion never letting her phone out of her site, not even in the ladies restroom. She sits on the toilet and texts. “Going to be harder than I thought. Don’t know if I can make friends here.” Text back, “You must. Do whatever it takes.” Marion peers over the stall. “Do you even text when you pee?” Alex drops the phone on the floor and it cracks. She must spend the rest of the day with a cracked phone. When she if finally able to leave Marion, she arrives at the store to find it closing. She loses it in the parking lot. She is phoneless for a day and begins to see the world around her.
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What I learned… the more you commit to brainstorming, the more hysterical it gets.
1 Start with your comic situation outline.
Scene Outline:
Goal: Charles wants his new conquest to fall for his arrogant games. Anna wants him to obey her ridiculous demands so she has complete control over him.
Activity: Charles uses his seductive tricks on her and she leads him to believe they are actually working although she has no intention of doing what he wants.
Complication: A former boyfriend of Anna’s tells Charles she is a complete nut job and to run for his life. He doesn’t believe him and is convinced she is seriously attracted to him.
2 Write down the main area of incongruence for your story.
Two damaged individuals are attempting to psychologically control each other under the guise of a romantic relationship.
3 Notice which actions/props are already in the scene and brainstorm others that might work for it.
Props: Bra and panties, grapefruit and lemons, enormous high heels, 35-millimeter digital camera.
Physical action: manipulating him to parade around as a lingerie model so she can plaster the pictures all over social media and delight in making a fool of him.
She gets him to shave his legs and chest and to wear nylons with garters.
The egotist is so fascinated with himself, that he agrees to take his modeling gig to a karaoke bar.
She choose the song “I am Women” for his debut followed by “Walk on the wild side.”
At first, the crowd roars with outrageous laughter, then turns into a heckling mob tossing insults, lemon slices, ice cubes, and empty beer cans. She can’t help showing her delight at the mockery.
Security guards pop up and get the crowd under control. They escort the cross-dresser and friend out the back door of the tavern and make sure they drive off the property.
4 Rewrite the outline of the scene, including yesterday’s toppers and today’s best physical actions/props.
Manipulating a male egotist to model women’s lingerie in his own bedroom.
I just happen to have my 35-millimeter digital camera in my bag.
She incites him to get into his modeling, work it, work it. Oh, yeah.
These pics are definitely going viral. People will be roaring at these pics all around the planet.
She gets him to shave his legs and chest and to wear nylons with garters.
The egotist is so fascinated with himself, that he agrees to take his modeling gig to a karaoke bar.
At the bar, she has the DJ play the song “I am Women” for his debut, followed by “Walk on the Wild Side” by Lou Reed.
At first, the crowd roars with raucous laughter, he decides to dance about like a stripper. Then they turn into a heckling mob hurling insults, lemon slices, ice cubes, and empty beer cans. She can’t help showing her delight at the mockery.
Security guards pop up and get the crowd under control.
They escort the cross-dresser and friend out the back door of the tavern and make sure they drive off the property unscathed by the ugly mob.
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