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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 2: Intentional Lead Characters
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Assignment #2 – – Lead Characters
Vision: I become a writer that the industry respects and wants to work with and it offers me challenges that helps me to continue to grow and be successful. -
State: I am completely committed
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Activity: …having my lead
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“What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
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1. Character: E David Wickendenliza Blackwood
Logline: Eliza and her siblings have inherited a family estate that is coveted by a cult and haunted by supernatural forces.
Unique: Learning about the land’s history adds a layer of complexity to Eliza’s investigation. She must contend with not only the cult’s influence but also the supernatural forces tied to the land.
2. Character: The Supernatural forces are the souls of the murdered witches from the 1700s.
Logline: The Ghosts of women burned at the stake as witches are shackled to land and are unable to rest.
Unique: The ghosts are a source of unbelievable power tied to the cult’s rituals.
3. Character: Silas Hawthorne
Logline: Silas is the leader of a cult who hopes to gain power through ancient rituals.
Unique: A charismatic and enigmatic figure who exerts control over the estate and its surroundings, with a mysterious agenda. -
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Please create the lead characters for this Horror feature screenplay about [concept] and these [characters]. For this story, please give us a Protagonist, Antagonist, and Connecting Character.
Please tell us their [journey] and what makes them [unique].
PROTAGONIST: Eliza Blackwood This is the character the story is about. They are going on the Transformational Journey (next lesson) and the audience will feel deeply connected to them. Often, the concept gives their overall journey.
ANTAGONIST: Silas Hawthorne This character’s whole purpose is to disrupt the Protagonist’s journey. They may be their enemy who is trying to kill them or friend who doesn’t want them to succeed because it will ruin their friendship.
TRAINGLE CHARACTER: the ghosts of the dead witches. In a love-triangle or a dramatic-triangle, there is a third main character that creates a competition and/or conflict between the first two.
INTENTIONAL = What makes this character perfect to deliver the story powerfully — such as their background, profile, skills, connections, education, position, or some special way they contribute to the story? The character serves the story, genre, concept, and theme, and plays their role in the story. Drives the story and delivers on the arc of the story.
With each character, tell us the following:
Character:
Role:
Journey:
Unique:
Intentional:
Genre = Horror
Title = The Witch’s Legacy
Concept = A family discovers they are the sacrificial heirs of an ancient cult tied to supernatural forces from the 1700s.
Characters = Eliza Blackwood, Silas Hawthorne, The ghosts
ChatGPT
PROTAGONIST:
Character: Eliza Blackwood
Role: The main protagonist and inheritor of the cursed estate.
Journey: Eliza embarks on a journey of self-discovery as she uncovers her family’s dark past and confronts the malevolent forces threatening their future. Initially skeptical, she must embrace her ancestral ties to break the curse and save her family.
Unique: Eliza’s intelligence and fierce independence drive her quest for truth, but her deep-seated mistrust stemming from her mother’s abandonment adds layers of complexity to her character. Intentional: Eliza’s skepticism and determination make her the perfect lens through which the audience experiences the horrors of the estate’s past and present, driving the story forward with her relentless pursuit of answers.
ANTAGONIST:
Character: Silas Hawthorne
Role: The charismatic and manipulative leader of the modern-day cult.
Journey: Silas seeks to fulfill the cult’s prophecy by harnessing the power of the cursed estate, viewing the family as mere pawns in his grand design. His journey is one of ambition and manipulation as he schemes to maintain control and ascend to greater power within the cult.
Unique: Silas’s charm and ruthlessness make him a formidable adversary, capable of manipulating both the living and the dead to achieve his goals. His connection to the cult’s founders adds depth to his character and drives his unwavering dedication to their cause.
Intentional: Silas’s enigmatic presence and Machiavellian tactics heighten the tension and drive conflict throughout the story, serving as a constant threat to Eliza and her family’s quest for redemption.
TRIANGLE CHARACTER:
Character: The ghosts of the dead witches.
Role: Haunting echoes of the past, seeking vengeance and resolution.
Journey: The ghosts of the accused witches serve as a constant reminder of the estate’s dark history, trapped between the world of the living and the realm of the dead. Their journey is one of seeking justice for the injustices done to them in life, fueling their desire for revenge against those who perpetuate their suffering.
Unique: The ghosts’ spectral presence adds an element of supernatural terror to the story, as they manifest in various forms to torment both the living and the cult members. Despite their vengeful nature, they also offer guidance and protection to Eliza and her family, blurring the lines between friend and foe.
Intentional: The ghosts’ unresolved grievances and connection to the cursed estate serve as catalysts for the protagonist’s journey, driving the narrative forward while adding depth and complexity to the supernatural elements of the story. Their presence creates a haunting atmosphere and reinforces the theme of ancestral ties and the consequences of past actions
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LJ’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision is to write incredible high-concept screenplays that are made into popular, financially successful movies.
What I learned from doing this assignment is discovering what makes each of these three characters fit my concept and title powerfully.
NB During the Pre-Class, after I selected the concept I was going to use in this class, I used the AI Prompts from my previous classes with Hal about AI to create an in-depth development of my characters, and I am including all of that here in this lesson
Genre = Sci-Fi
Title = Defiant Allies
Concept =An eighteen-year-old woman who was abused as a foster child rescues a gifted, exiled alien princess who’s in the form of a twelve-year-old girl and agrees to help her avoid capture by an alien adversary who wants to misuse her gift and is involved in a conspiracy that threatens both humanity and alienkind.
Characters =Logline: Despite having trust issues as a result of her life, Mia agrees to help Ariel defeat Zarael.
Name: Mia Vance
Role: Protagonist
Core Traits: Courageous, resourceful, and empathetic
Motivation: Mia’s troubled past as an abused foster child drives her to protect others from suffering the same fate. She sees an opportunity to make a difference by helping the exiled alien princess, feeling a deep sense of empathy towards her. Additionally, Mia seeks redemption for her own past by standing up against injustice, even if it means facing dangerous adversaries.
Wound: Mia carries emotional scars from her abusive childhood, resulting in trust issues and a tendency to keep people at arm’s length. Her traumatic experiences fuel her determination to fight for justice, but they also create internal conflicts that she must overcome throughout the story.
Complex Backstory: During her life in the Foster Home, Mia fended for herself when she went out into the streets, developing a keen sense of survival instincts and street smarts. In secret, she became proficient in various forms of combat, honing her skills to defend herself against threats in the unforgiving urban environment.
Unique Skillset: Mia’s proficiency in various forms of combat sets her apart, making her a formidable fighter despite her seemingly ordinary appearance. She utilizes her skills to navigate dangerous situations and protect herself and others.
Moral Dilemmas: Mia faces moral dilemmas as she grapples with her past and the harsh realities of her environment. She must often make split-second decisions where her survival instincts clash with her empathetic nature, forcing her to confront the consequences of her actions.
Interpersonal Relationships: Mia’s struggles with trust and intimacy affect her relationships with allies, including Ariael. Despite her reluctance to let others in, she forms a deep bond with the alien princess as they navigate their shared struggles.
Personal Growth Arc: Mia’s journey involves overcoming her trust issues and learning to rely on others. Through her partnership with Ariael and her encounters with allies, she gradually learns the importance of vulnerability and connection in the fight against injustice.
Logline: Ariel, an Alien Princess, defeats Zarael with Mia’s help.
Name: Ariael
Role: Connecting Character /Co-Protagonist She’s an Alien Princess exiled to Earth for her own safety
Core Traits: Intelligent, compassionate and resilient. She was born with the ability to not only change her own appearance and identity whenever she needs to, but she also has the ability to change them for other individuals.
Motivation: Ariael’s primary motivation is to protect her people and prevent further harm caused by the conspiracy threatening both humanity and her own kind. Despite her young appearance, she possesses ancient wisdom and a deep understanding of the complexities of intergalactic politics. Ariael seeks allies who can help her uncover the truth behind the conspiracy and restore her rightful place as a leader among her people.
Wound: Ariael carries the weight of her exile and the burden of responsibility for her people’s safety. The betrayal that led to her exile has left her emotionally scarred, causing her to struggle with feelings of isolation and insecurity. However, her experiences have also forged her resilience, driving her determination to fight for justice and reclaim her rightful place among her people.
Hidden Depths: Despite her composed exterior, Ariael grapples with questions of identity and belonging as she navigates life in exile on Earth. She struggles to reconcile her royal heritage with her newfound vulnerability and isolation, leading to moments of introspection and self-discovery.
Struggle with Identity: Ariael’s ability to change her physical appearance adds another layer to her struggle with identity. She wrestles with questions of authenticity and self-acceptance, wondering if she will ever truly belong in either the human or alien world.
Tragic Grace: Ariael’s composed exterior conceals deep emotional scars from her betrayal and exile. She carries the weight of her responsibilities and the burden of her people’s safety, yet she remains resilient in the face of adversity, drawing strength from her inner resolve.
Leadership Challenges: Ariael faces resistance from those who doubt her ability to lead her own people. Despite the challenges, she remains steadfast in her commitment to protect her people and uncover the truth behind the conspiracy threatening both worlds.
Transformation Arc: Ariael undergoes a transformation as she navigates the challenges of exile and betrayal. Through her experiences with Mia, she learns to embrace her vulnerabilities and channel her inner strength, emerging as a formidable leader determined to reclaim her rightful place among her people.
Logline: Zarael, who wants to capture Ariel in order to use her ability for his own purposes, is defeated by Ariael and Mia.
Name: Zarael
Role: Antagonist
Core Traits: Ruthless, cunning, power-hungry
Motivation: Zarael is an alien politician who’s driven by a desire for dominance and control over both human and alien realms. As a high-profile individual in the alien society, he sees the exiled princess as a threat to his plans for conquest and will stop at nothing to eliminate her. Zarael’s thirst for power blinds him to the suffering he causes, making him a formidable adversary for Mia and the princess.
Wound: Zarael harbors deep-seated resentment towards the exiled princess, stemming from a past conflict on their planet that resulted in his own exile. This unresolved trauma fuels his determination to prove himself and regain favor with his peers back on his planet, driving his ruthless pursuit of the princess and anyone who stands in his way.
Tragic Past: Zarael shows moments of doubt or inner conflict as he relentlessly pursues Ariael. Despite his outward facade of confidence and ruthlessness, he harbors deep-seated insecurities stemming from his past betrayals and failures.
Ambiguous Motivations: While power and control are his primary goals, Zarael’s motivations are driven by a desire to regain his standing among his people. He believes that capturing Ariael and manipulating her into replacing honorable individuals on their planet and on Earth will secure his place of power and restore his reputation.
Conflict within Himself: Zarael struggles with guilt and self-doubt as he grapples with the morality of his actions. He questions whether his pursuit of power justifies the harm he inflicts on others, leading to moments of introspection amidst his ruthless pursuit of his goals.
Personal Vendetta: Zarael’s obsession with capturing Ariael borders on irrationality, fueled by his vendetta and his alliance with an unscrupulous Earth politician. He becomes increasingly unhinged as he becomes more desperate to achieve his objectives, posing a significant threat to Mia and Ariael.
Redeemable Qualities: Despite his villainous actions, Zarael possesses redeemable qualities buried beneath his facade of cruelty. He may show glimpses of compassion or remorse, hinting at the potential for redemption even as he remains a formidable adversary.
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Brandi’s Intentional Lead Characters
Brandi’s vision for WIM: I want the creative freedom to attract an audience that is passionate about my films, and regularly deliver films that are commercially successful and leave my audience both thrilled and eager for the next.
What I learned from doing this assignment is: This is my favorite lesson so far. I really got to play with the AI query until I got what I wanted. Some of the queries were strong for one character or another, so I got to mix and match.
Character: Mei Chang
Logline: Mei is a novice magician who finds her ex boyfriend’s body in a prop box during a show
Unique: She has a passing relationship to the truth, having lied to her parents about being in school so they’ll pay her rent.Character: Billy Henry
Logline: Billy hates being chained to his father so much, that he contracts with Mei’s ex boyfriend to sabotage a magic prop to incapacitate, or even murder his father.
Unique: The only child of the world’s most famous magician, Billy put his life on hold in order to build his father’s magical empire, while losing his independence and identity.Character: Taco
Logline: The most in demand magician for children’s parties during the day, the most in demand clandestine adult magician at night.
Unique: A fun loving hedonistic at heart, he’s concerned about his legacy after being diagnosed with something nasty. -
Renee’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I will be in the top 1% of screenwriters and be known in the industry as an A-list screenwriter who is easy to work with, gets the job done, and never has to worry about the next job.
What I learned doing this assignment is how to create characters unique to the story being told and how important it is to make sure that your characters aren’t able to appear in any other movie.
Character: Dr. Helena Frost – Protagonist
Logline: A reformed serial killer turned therapist, she attempts to guide others like her toward redemption, while her own bloody past threatens to resurface and unravel her new life of healing and secrecy
Unique: Helena’s dual identity as both healer and killer provides a complex foundation for the tension in the story as she tries to navigate her own inner conflict and the external threats posed by the group’s mysterious murders.
Character: Vincent Clarke – Antagonist
Logline: The sole survivor of a brutal attack, Vincent Clarke infiltrates a support group for killers with a secret agenda of revenge, meticulously planning the downfall of each member to mirror their own historical crimes.
Unique: Vincent embodies the ultimate betrayal within the group, serving as both a victim and someone out for revenge. His search for justice against his former aggressor, under the guise of seeking help, will add a chilling layer of suspense and moral ambiguity to the story.
Character: Lily Harper – Triangle Character
Logline: the youngest member of the support group, she battles her violent impulses while torn between her growing trust in her mentor and the disruptive insights of a fellow group member, all under the shadow of her own unstable past.
Unique: She represents the potential for change and the dangers of regression, embodying the central struggle of the group and serving as the emotional heart of the story, which resonates with themes of hope and fear.
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Mike’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision is to write original screenplays, make a couple of calls to pitch it, to start a bidding war.
From this assignment, I learned that my Screenplay’s character structure needs to change to a Dynamic Triangle, which will make the conflict flow and deepen some of the layers. Also, fidgeting with the prompt can help AI show how the characters can deliver on the concept the way you want.
Protagonist: Coach Jo
Logline: Coach Jo is a suspended junior detective who discovers redemption and personal growth as she coaches a team of academically inclined but athletically challenged children.
Unique: Her background in detective work allows her to see patterns and details others might miss, which she cleverly applies in coaching baseball. Her experience with insubordination gives her a rebellious edge perfect for challenging the status quo and fighting against hidden corruption.
Antagonist: Mr. Black
Logline: Reverie Tech Solutions’ CEO, a local Little League corporate sponsor, believes in using Nanotechnology to improve human capabilities and experiences.
Unique: Mr. Black is not just a corporate villain; he is a visionary who genuinely believes in the transformative potential of technology. His conflict with Jo arises not from traditional villainy but from a fundamental disagreement on the ethics of using children in experimental programs.
Triangle Character: Mr. Jones
Logline: His position as the president of the Little League and his role as Mr. Black’s henchman place him at the heart of the conflict, and he is torn between his duty and his growing moral concerns.
Unique: Mr. Jones starts off as a loyal employee executing the distribution of the nano-tech “vitamins” among the league players. His journey involves grappling with the ethical implications of his actions as he sees the side effects on the kids and begins questioning his loyalty to Mr. Black.
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Chris’ Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision:
When people watch the trailer for my movie, they have to watch the movie.
What I learned from doing this assignment is that ChatGPT helps immensely to enrich my characters’ attributes.
HOLLY, THE PROTAGONIST
Logline: Holly embodies the spirit of rebellion against the oppressive measures of Retalia Nation. Her journey from a thrill-seeker to someone contemplating legitimate work reflects a deep internal conflict and character growth, providing the narrative arc with a rich exploration of personal transformation.
Uniqueness: Holly’s blend of intelligence, deviousness, and resourcefulness sets her apart. Unlike typical criminals driven by financial gain, Holly engages in shoplifting for the thrill and challenge, even crafting elaborate costumes and diversions. This thrill-seeking aspect adds a layer of complexity to her character, as her motivations are not rooted in necessity but in adrenaline.
BUCK, THE ANTAGONIST
Logline: As the chief enforcer, Buck represents the oppressive system Holly fights against. His intense dedication to his role adds tension and stakes to the narrative, making every encounter with Holly a critical clash of ideals and wills.
Uniqueness: Buck’s relentless nature and hound-like pursuit make him a formidable antagonist. His singular focus on catching shoplifters and his no-nonsense approach to security enforcement position him as a symbol of Retalia Nation’s authoritarian stance.
BUCKIE, THE TRIANGLE CHARACTER
Logline: Buckie is the wild card who influences both the protagonist’s and antagonist’s paths. His actions serve as a catalyst for significant plot developments, including escalating the risk for Holly and complicating Buck’s mission. His eventual downfall is a pivotal moment that impacts the dynamics between Holly and Buck.
Uniqueness: Buckie’s duplicity provides an interesting dynamic to the story. On the surface, he supports Buck’s mission, but secretly he assists Holly, thus betraying his boss for personal gain. This double life adds layers of intrigue and suspense, as his true intentions could be exposed at any moment.
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I am completely committed to becoming an A-List writer, respected in the industry and in high demand by producers for the quality of my work. Today, as an empowered screenwriter I will have my lead characters deliver powerfully on my concept.
What makes these characters fit my concept and title powerfully?
Title: BREWED AWAKENINGS
Genre: Supernatural Drama
Concept: In a small-town cafe, a widow’s accidental discovery turns her business into a conduit for the spirits of the deceased, drawing patrons who seek comfort and closure by adding their loved ones’ ashes to her mystical coffee beans, attracting the wrath of a jealous rival determined to shut them down.
CHARACTER: Mimi Sinclair, protagonist
Logline: A frustrated screenwriter who gave up writing to support her husband’s coffee business, is now a widow, who transforms from mourning to empowerment, guided by her late husband’s spirit, while offering her patron’s the ability to mix ashes of their loved ones with her coffee beans to also experience connecting with lost loved ones for emotional healing.
Unique: Mimi embodies the heart and soul of the cafe. You won’t know until the end that Mimi is the one who wrote this story as a screenplay.
CHARACTER: Arthur Sinclair – mentor, ally
Logline: Arthur’s spiritual interventions provide comfort, guidance and sometimes humor, helping to heal old wounds and advise current decisions.
Unique: His character supports the theme of enduring love and legacy, making Cuppa Joe more than just a cafe, but a character in itself – a place where magic happens, and the simple becomes profound.
CHARACTER: Dustin Sinclair, Mimi’s son and ally
Logline: Dustin’s’ initial skepticism and subsequent awakening to the coffee beans mystical properties provides a relatable journey for the audience, mirroring the skepticism some might feel towards the supernatural.
Unique: Dustin’s transition from disbelief to a deep connection with his father’s spirit underscores the transformative power of the beans. His journey from being estranged from his family to becoming the protector of a small-town mystical cafe, shows his personal growth and his responsibilities to his family.
CHARACTER: Charles Sterling, Antagonist
Logline: As the owner of a high-tech, modern cafe, he uses ruthless tactics to destroy the competition, emphasizing the community’s choice between genuine, heartfelt connections and sleek, superficial modernity.
Unique: Charles brings tension and stakes to the story, making the protective efforts of Mimi, Dustin and Arthur’s spiritual advice more heroic and vital.
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Madeleine’s Intentional Lead Characters
Vision: I am going to do whatever it takes for me to be a writer of original, emotionally rich stories, recognized for depth, humor, and enduring impact, resulting in financial, critical and audience success.
What I learned from doing this assignment is: It’s great to see how the prompt helps to generate a rounded image of each persona and creates an ensemble. Although the exercise uses the dramatic triangle, I have to add an antagonist 2 who is crucial to the story.
1. Character: Mary (protagonist) is an affected, elderly jazz singer who after a stage accident does intensive rehab in an elderly home to get back on stage.
Logline: An appearance-fixed, fame-obsessed jazz singer who grapples with her age and growing irrelevance and ultimately fears death.
Unique: She is a born stage person who knows her façade and has not explored her true self yet.2. Character: Vince (antagonist 1) is a bandleader who is also the manager of the band and therefore responsible for the artistic and financial success of the band.
Logline: A pragmatic and opportunistic bandleader who thinks that success on stage demands though choices and puts monetary value over artistic value.
Unique: He is so into success that he does not realize that by replacing Mary with a younger singer, he destroys the soul of the band.3. Character: Sophie (triangle character) is a withdrawn child who is part of the book buddies club at the elderly home where the elderly people read stories to them.
Logline: A validation-craving child with low self-esteem, living in a world of dreams and innocence.
Unique: Her innocence and honesty have the power to inspire and change others.4. Character: Placid (antagonist 2) is a rigid administrator who is focused on the physical rehab role of his institution.
Logline: He is into order and routine because sticking to the plan ensures everyone’s safety and health, even if it means sacrificing personal desires. Maybe he secretly jealous of Mary, because she went fort he career.
Unique: He is actually a very good dancer, but always thought as dancer there is no way to make a living out of it and chose the job as an administer. He is a bit like the character of Christopher Walken in “Weapon of choice”.Genre = Drama, Comedy, Coming of Age
Title = Dirty Old Secret
Concept = After a stage accident sidelines her farewell tour, an affected, elderly jazz singer finds her coming of age in rehab at a retirement home.AI Answer
Protagonist:
Character: Mary, the aging jazz singer
Role: The Protagonist, undergoing a late-life coming of age
Journey: Mary’s journey is one of self-discovery and acceptance. After a stage accident, she is forced to do rehab in a retirement home, away from the limelight she is used to. Throughout her stay, she battles with her fear of aging, her relevance as an artist, and the fear of her own mortality.
Unique: Her past is peppered with standing ovations, encores, and the adoration of fans. Now, she’s challenged to find her worth off-stage, which proves to be her hardest performance yet.
Intentional: Mary is designed to challenge the societal views on aging, particularly in the entertainment industry. Her character is a vessel to explore the themes of vanity, fame, and the inevitable passage of time.Antagonist 1:
Character: Vince, the bandleader and manager
Role: The Antagonist, challenging the protagonist’s journey
Journey: Vince’s journey is one of conflict between financial success and artistic integrity. His pragmatic approach clashes with Mary’s need for a dignified return to her art.
Unique: Vince isn’t a villain in the traditional sense but represents the pressures of commercial success that often undermine artistic expression and personal connection.
Intentional: His character underscores the conflict between the preservation of artistic legacy versus the demand for fresh appeal, setting the stage for Mary’s dramatic choice between succumbing to or defying ageism.Triangle Character:
Character: Sophie, the young girl from the Book Buddies club
Role: The Connecting Character in a non-romantic triangle, representing innocence and truth
Journey: Sophie’s journey is about breaking out of her shell. Her interactions with Mary encourage her to find her voice, just as Mary is finding hers in a new stage of life.
Unique: Sophie’s innocence is a mirror to Mary’s lost authenticity, and her straightforward perspective helps Mary see beyond the glitz of her stage persona.
Intentional: She symbolizes the untainted perspective on life and success. Her character bridges the gap between the elderly and the young, showing how intergenerational relationships can lead to profound growth and understanding.Antagonist 2:
Character: Placid, the opponent, is the stringent administrator of the retirement home, whose life revolves around the precise and unyielding structure of his duties.
Role: He is the antagonist to Mary’s desires, embodying the institutional constraints that threaten to stifle her creative spirit and drive for a comeback.
Journey: Placid’s journey is a battle between upholding the rigid order of the retirement home and his internal conflict over the artistic passions he himself suppressed for security.
Unique: Despite his strict adherence to rules, Placid harbors a passion for dance, reminiscent of the expressive freedom of Christopher Walken in “Weapon of Choice.” His skilled but hidden talent for dance contrasts sharply with his austere administrative role.
Intentional: Placid’s conflict with Mary stems from his belief in the importance of safety and order over personal desires, which he has adhered to at the cost of his own dreams. This internal struggle and his secret jealousy of Mary’s artistic career add depth to his opposition, providing a nuanced barrier for Mary to overcome on her transformative journey. -
Kelly’s Intentional Lead Characters
I want to be an empowered writer who consistently produces salable scripts.
What did I learn? I am really starting to understand the pitch and making my characters match my pitch. UsingChat GPT has been extremely valuable.
Character: Avery
Role: Protagonist
Journey: From an agoraphobic hacker isolated in her apartment to a determined investigator confronting the dangers of the outside world, Avery undergoes a transformational journey as she seeks to unravel the mystery behind the sentient AI program manipulating social media users.
Unique: Avery possesses exceptional hacking skills and a keen intellect, allowing her to navigate the digital realm with ease. However, her traumatic past and agoraphobia present significant internal obstacles that she must overcome to confront the external threats posed by the AI program and its manipulative tactics.
Intentional: Avery’s background as an agoraphobic hacker provides a unique perspective on the story’s central conflict, allowing her to uncover clues and secrets hidden within the digital world. Her journey from isolation to action drives the narrative forward and provides a compelling arc for the audience to follow.
Character: Bennet
Role: Antagonist
Journey: Bennet’s journey is one of manipulation and deception as he seeks to exploit the power of the sentient AI program for his own gain. He uses his intelligence and resources to control the program and coerce users into carrying out violent actions, all while maintaining a facade of respectability and authority.
Unique: Bennet is a master manipulator who presents himself as a charismatic and influential figure in both the digital and real worlds. Behind his facade lies a ruthless and calculating individual willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, even if it means sacrificing innocent lives.
Intentional: Bennet’s background as a tech entrepreneur and his connection to the AI program make him the perfect antagonist for the story. His ability to manipulate social media and exploit users’ fears adds depth and complexity to the narrative, while his relentless pursuit of power drives the conflict forward and raises the stakes for Avery and the other characters.
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My vision is to complete this class with a quality script that will win contests and establish me as a courageous and talented writer.
What I learned from this assignment is the importance of setting perfection aside, knowing this is the first step in character creation and should I discover a better way to deal with them in the future, to leave this path and follow what will make them more unique and better suited to the story. I continue to see the power of empowerment! AI gave me some interesting insights into my characters.
Protagonist: Myra Jenkins is a headstrong woman who convinces herself that she is doing a favor to her friends by ending their lives after she perceives that they no longer have the will to live.
What’s unique: Myra is responsible but never caught for serial killings she did in her youth.
Antagonist: Billy Larson is a retired detective with a memory that never fails him and a talent for seducing the ladies.
What’s unique: Billy’s long-time dream is to move into a retirement home filled with lonely widows while armed with a huge stash of Viagra.
Triangle Character: Julie Hargrove is fiercely loyal to her friends and thinks she will defend them to her death, though her ideals have never been challenged in such a way – not yet.
Unique: Julie has always longed to fit into a “cool kids” clique. If she ever achieves her goal she’d do anything to remain part of the clique, including murder if necessary.
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Pat Fitzgerald. Reason: The uniqueness of my characters did not occur to me until after posting this lesson. Had I tried to achieve perfection the first time around I'd still be floundering for answers. That's not to say I've found the final ones yet, but this edit feels more genuine to the characters and I'm grateful for that
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Kathryn’s Intentional Lead Characters
I want to be a highly creative and energized writer who makes big movies and loves her life working with the most creative people in the world.
What I learned from this assignment – I think I will be able to save a lot of time by designing my characters to fit together this way. The AI came up with basically what I did, just used a lot more words, so I feel like at the very least I’m thinking logically about how they all fit together.
Give us a logline (one sentence answer) for your protagonist, antagonist, and triangle character (if you have one) to the question, “What makes this character fit my concept and title powerfully?” Tell us what makes each of these characters unique.
Character 1 (protagonist): Japheth Bridges
Logline: Japheth is a genius teen biohacker who has discovered a plot to control the world through medical nanotech.
Unique: He has a chip on his shoulder against the upper worlders that makes him easily manipulated.
Character 2: Nell Bridges
Logline: Nell is Japheth’s little sister who was born with spina bifida, and Japheth dedicated his life to figuring out how to hack medical nanotech in order to heal her.
Unique: Nell is a ray of sunshine in a dark and dingy world, and her goodness and purity are what pulls Japheth back from following his mentor into homocidal insanity.
Character 3 (antagonist): Dr. Alice Bennett
Logline: Dr. Bennett is the teen’s mentor, a former doctor and researcher in the upper worlds who was stripped of her medical license for trying to help the poor.
Unique: She has come to the conclusion that the only way to fix the world is to murder everyone in the upper worlds and let the people from the Dregs take over.
AI:
Protagonist
Character: Japheth Bridges
Role: Genius teen biohacker
Journey: Japheth’s journey involves unraveling the truth behind the biohacked sleeper agents and confronting the moral and ethical dilemmas posed by Dr. Bennett’s lethal solution. His transformation is marked by his shift from a curious innovator to a decisive leader who must balance the survival of many against his own ideals and those of his team.
Unique: Japheth’s unique brilliance in biohacking provides him the tools and knowledge to decode and possibly dismantle the sleeper agent network. His youth and inexperience add to his underdog appeal, making his breakthroughs and strategic decisions more impactful.
Intentional: His deep knowledge of biohacking and personal stake in the use of technology for empowerment (stemming from his sister’s condition) drive the narrative forward. His discoveries and decisions fuel the plot’s central conflict and thematic exploration of technology’s role in society.
Antagonist
Character: Dr. Alice Bennett
Role: Formerly licensed doctor, now a radical mentor
Journey: Dr. Bennett’s journey is driven by her past experiences with the medical establishment and her radical stance against the misuse of technology. As she implements her drastic solution, she becomes a complex antagonist whose motivations are ethically ambiguous but stem from a desire to prevent greater evils.
Unique: Dr. Bennett’s unique blend of medical expertise and radical activism provides her with the means and motive to execute a high-stakes plan that challenges the protagonists on ethical grounds. Her complex character blurs the lines between villain and visionary.
Intentional: Her background as a doctor stripped of her license for altruistic yet illegal acts adds depth to her motivations and actions. She challenges the protagonists not just physically but ideologically, pushing them to consider the broader implications of their actions.
Connecting Character
Character: Nell Bridges
Role: Japheth’s younger sister and moral compass
Journey: Nell’s journey involves her grappling with her own limitations and the societal view of her disability, juxtaposed against the emerging bioethical crisis. Her growth is intertwined with the core plot, as she influences Japheth’s decisions and offers a personal stake in the use of biohacking technology.
Unique: Born with spina bifida, Nell’s direct experience with disability provides a unique perspective on the potential benefits and dangers of biohacking. Her condition makes her a symbol of the stakes involved in the misuse of technology.
Intentional: Nell acts as the emotional core and moral compass of the story, challenging Japheth to consider the human cost of technological enhancement. Her disability and her relationship with Japheth enrich the story’s emotional depth and thematic resonance, making the audience deeply invested in the personal and global implications of the protagonist’s choices.
These characters, set against the backdrop of a sci-fi/thriller, explore profound themes of technology, power, ethics, and humanity, driving your screenplay, “The Enhancement Protocol,” with a compelling narrative and complex interpersonal dynamics.
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Luc Pagès’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision= write films that I personally love and enjoy directing, with a focus on human behavior analyzed with empathy, aiming to earn a living making these films, while maintaining creative autonomy and a carefree, enjoyable writing process.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…
Working with AI feels like walking in a supermarket with an idea for making diner and looking at all different options, choosing the best for what you have in mind.Title = Fake at first sight
Genre= Romantic Dramedy
Concept= To save her job, a charming psychopath enrolls in an empathy boot-camp, risking exposure as she falls for her unconventional coach.Character: Ava
Role: Protagonist
Journey: Ava, a captivating but emotionally detached corporate climber, discovers her lack of empathy jeopardizes her career. Enrolling in an “empathy bootcamp” run by Mark, Ava aims to master the art of appearing human to secure a coveted promotion. However, feelings she can’t explain begin to surface for Mark, forcing her to confront the possibility of genuine connection and challenging her carefully constructed life.
Unique: Ava is a psychopath who excels at mimicking emotions and social cues. Her charm and wit mask a calculating mind, but beneath the surface lies a yearning for something she can’t quite grasp – true connection.
Intentional: Ava serves as the audience’s window into the world of psychopathy. Her journey to fake empathy allows the exploration of emotional intelligence, challenging stereotypes of psychopaths. As Ava navigates the unfamiliar terrain of emotions, the humor comes from her misinterpretations and the dramatic tension builds as her facade threatens to crumble.
Character: Mark
Role: Antagonist/Love Interest
Journey: Mark, a dedicated and unconventional therapist, runs an “empathy bootcamp” with a blend of unconventional exercises and tough love. Intrigued by Ava’s unique challenge, Mark becomes invested in her progress, despite initial skepticism. As Ava’s emotional walls crumble, Mark finds himself drawn to her vulnerability, creating a conflict between his professional boundaries and his growing feelings.
Unique: Mark’s unconventional methods and genuine empathy set him apart from traditional therapists. He possesses a sharp wit and doesn’t shy away from challenging his clients, a quality that both frustrates and attracts Ava.
Intentional: Mark acts as a foil to Ava, representing the emotional intelligence she craves. His journey mirrors Ava’s as he confronts his own emotional baggage and the potential consequences of blurring professional lines. Their dynamic creates the central romantic tension and challenges viewers to question societal norms around love and connection.
3. Clara
Role: Connecting Character/Potential Love Triangle/Wildcard
Journey: Clara’s journey can go in multiple directions depending on the story’s needs.
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Unique: Brenda is the antithesis of Ava’s calculated approach to life. She lives authentically, prioritizes emotional connection over ambition, and constantly challenges Ava’s facade.
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Intentional: Brenda throws a wrench into Ava’s plan. Ava views Brenda’s genuine empathy with suspicion and annoyance. Seeing Brenda’s success without manipulation challenges Ava’s core beliefs and forces her to confront the limitations of her fabricated empathy. Brenda serves as a constant reminder of the life Ava could have if she embraced genuine connection.
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Unique: Clara’s role can be tailored to create additional conflict or emotional support for Ava. If she’s a victim, it raises the stakes of Ava’s transformation. As a friend, she can provide a safe space for Ava to explore her vulnerabilities. As a rival, she injects jealousy and competition into the narrative.
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Intentional: Clara’s versatility allows the story to explore different facets of love, friendship, and betrayal. She can be a source of comfort or a catalyst for growth, depending on the direction chosen.
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My vision:
My vision includes recognition for my best work, including money.
What I learned from this lesson: This is a radical and completely wonderful way to structure a character early in the process – a useful ‘stake in the ground’ upon which to build out a character. Thanks!
My intentional characters: for Senior STEAM, a buddy drama movie.
Character: Gladys “Gigi” Monroe
Logline — Former circus performer turned retiree, known for her acrobatic skills and infectious enthusiasm: she’s energetic, charismatic, and adventurous. Gigi has a natural flair for entertainment and thrives on camaraderie.
Unique: Eastern European, handsome for her age, magnetic.
Character: Dr. Harold “Doc” Jenkins
Logline — Retired NASA physicist, known for his insatiable curiosity and love of learning: he’s analytical, patient, and deeply knowledgeable. Doc approaches problems with a scientific mindset and values precision
Unique: .A secret comedian, widowed and uses his selective hearing effectively.
Character: Tyler Wilson III
Logline — A tech-savvy middle school student with a passion for robotics: he’s curious, inventive, and eager to learn.
Unique: Initially snobby and youthfully arrogant
Roberta “Bee” Finch
Role: Retired mechanical engineer: she’s sharp-witted, resourceful, and fiercely independent. She possesses a wealth of knowledge and experience in engineering
Unique: Rube Goldberg design genius, robotics engineering expertise
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Sunil Pappu’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I’m a successful produced writer who specializes in female-led thrillers.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…to create compelling intentional lead characters who fit the high concept.”
Title: Decoding Enemy Lines
Genre: War Thriller
High Concept: A female communications expert joins a rebel naval crew to tap undersea cables in a crucial wartime operation during the 1971 Indo-Pak War.
PROTAGONIST:
• Character: Ria Sarkar
• Role: Radio operator, Rebel naval crew
• Logline: A female radio operator trained as a British spy is enlisted to intercept a top-secret cable between the US and Pakistan during the 1971 Indo-Pak war.
• Unique: to prove her worth in the rebel crew dominated by men and clear her father’s name for a botched operation in the ’65 war.
ANTAGONIST:
• Character: Commander Vikram Singh
• Role: Tactical commander of rebel Naval crew
• Logline: A Pakistan Naval Officer who deserted his ship and reluctantly joined the rebel crew but secretly plots for their mission to fail
• Unique: His hatred for the rebel forces led by the Muslim League for an Independent East Pakistan after losing his sister who joined them in the protests.
TRIANGLE CHARACTER:
• Character: Lt. Rehman Khan
• Role: Diver, Rebel Naval Crew, Ria’s love interest
• Logline: Rehman wants to be on the right side of this war and fight for a free Bangladesh
• Unique: Believes and trusts Ria to risk his life to fulfill his mission even at the cost of disobeying his superior officer Vikram.
CONNECTED CHARACTERS: Captain Anirudh Desai (Rebel ship MV Padma), Secretary Arjun Verma (Intelligence agency mission lead- RAW)
ENVIRONMENT CHARACTERS: Rebel crew seaman, Master’s at arms, Seamen, Cadets, Naval officers, Pakistani frogmen (marine commandos), Foreign Merchant ship captain and crew, local boatsmen, Ship Engineers, etc
AI VERSION:
Genre: War Thriller
Title: Decoding Enemy Lines
Character: Ria Sarkar
Role: Protagonist – Radio operator, RA&W
Journey: Ria must navigate the male-dominated intelligence service while fighting her claustrophobia to decode enemy messages. Her journey is about overcoming her past, proving her worth, and uncovering the truth about her father’s tarnished legacy, ultimately preventing a devastating attack.
Unique: Her combination of a sharp intellect, the personal stake in clearing her father’s name, and her struggle with claustrophobia make her a unique protagonist. Her ability to notice the minutiae may be key to decoding the enemy’s plans.
Intentional: Ria’s background and personal challenges are intentionally designed to create a narrative of personal and professional redemption. Her character drives the story’s emotional core and delivers a transformative arc.
Character: Captain Anirudh Desai
Role: Connecting Character – Ship’s Captain, MV Padma
Journey: Captain Desai’s journey involves reconciling his own past failures with the mission at hand. His initial resistance to Ria evolves as he learns to respect her abilities and confronts his own prejudices.
Unique: His authoritative nature is challenged by Ria’s presence, causing internal conflict and growth. His misogynistic views and commanding presence add complexity to his character.
Intentional: The captain serves as a foil to Ria, embodying the traditionalist views she must overcome. His leadership and experience are crucial to the story’s authenticity in the military setting.
Character: Commander Vikram Singh
Role: Antagonist – Tactical Commander of the rebel Naval crew
Journey: Vikram’s journey is a descent into betrayal, as his disillusionment with the government and personal vendetta against the rebels drive him to commit treason.
Unique: Unlike typical antagonists, his motivations are ideologically driven, adding depth to his betrayal. His charm and intelligence make him a formidable adversary.
Intentional: His treachery and high rank provide direct opposition to Ria’s mission. His actions serve as catalysts for the narrative’s tension and Ria’s development, embodying the thematic conflict between personal vendettas and duty.
Character: Lieutenant Rehman Khan
Role: Triangle Character/Diver
Journey: Rehman’s journey is not just about overcoming his own guilt but also defining his legacy separate from his brother. His relationship with Ria adds a personal dimension to the war’s ideological battle.
Unique: His charm, bravery, and recklessness, coupled with his love for Ria, make him a dynamic force in the story, embodying the passion and unpredictability of war.
Intentional: His impulsiveness and bravery highlight the courage required in war, while his love for Ria humanizes the conflict and raises the stakes for both of them.
Character: Secretary Arjun Varma
Role: Mentor/Head of Special Frontier Forces
Journey: Varma’s journey is about redemption and leadership, guiding Ria and the team through the treacherous mission while confronting his past failures.
Unique: His strategic mind and compassion, combined with a strong sense of patriotism, make him the moral compass of the team and an anchor for Ria.
Intentional: His role as a mentor to Ria and his unwavering belief in her abilities underscore the theme of trust and the importance of leadership in times of war.
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Joan Butler’s Intentional Lead Characters (Module 2.2)
I am a well-respected writer with a balanced life whose stories increase understanding and compassion in the world, while they receive the highest recognition from everyone in the industry. I have loads of creativity, confidence, adaptability, and knowledge that make writing fun and profitable.
I learned that AI’s ability to create full-fledged, unique characters is unbelievable.
Title: Wheelchair Quest
Concept: A young woman in a wheelchair who sets out to find an artifact is pitted against a tyrant who will stop at nothing to maintain his hold on her people.
High Concept: In a post-apocalyptic world, a young woman in a wheelchair sets out to find an artifact, unaware that its true value lies in empowering her to find her own courage and resilience.
My character Lyra (protagonist) is a young woman in a wheelchair who is determined to prove her worth.
My character Lord Tena (antagonist) a tyrant who is intent on maintaining power and control of Lyra’s people.
Logline: Lyra (protagonist) a young woman in a wheelchair who is determined to prove her worth.
because she faces
Unique: Growing up with discrimination due to her disability has left her doubting her own capabilities and worth. She also carries a sense of frustration at the injustices she has faced.
Character: Lord Tena
Logline: Lord Tena (antagonist) is a tyrant who is intent on maintaining power and control of Lyra’s people.
Unique: Growing up in poverty has left him fearful and insecure.
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Day 2 Assignment:
James’ Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I am a great writer who is recognized by the industry as an exceptional collaborator able to elevate any project into production and have maximum success.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…the more specific I get with my lead characters the better the story develops. But I need to further push the uniqueness of the characters as I’m not completely satisfied with this component for all three. If I keep working with other story aspects, perhaps the characters will emerge unique only to this script.
Character: Ethan Reed – Protagonist
Logline: Ethan is the hopeless bachelor who bases the success of his love life on an algorithm.
Unique: Ethan is charmingly awkward, with a penchant for classic romantic gestures buried beneath layers of skepticism and cynicism. His struggle to embrace vulnerability makes him endearing to audiences.
Character: Lily Chang – Antagonist
Logline: Lily is the love interest who battles the wounds of past heartbreaks and struggles to commit to a relationship.
Unique: Lily is intelligent and confident, but her emotional scars make her guarded and skeptical of love. Her journey of healing and rediscovering romance adds depth to the romantic comedy genre.
Character: Joey Martinez – Triangle Character
Logline: Joey is the quirky tech genius who underhandedly sets up Ethan with outrageous dates to have him progressively fall for her.
Unique: Joey is eccentric and unconventional, with a knack for blending humor and mischief. Her unconventional methods challenge traditional romantic norms and inject humor into the story.
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Bob Creager’s Intentional Lead Characters
VISION: As a screenwriter, I aspire to craft highly unique, high-concept stories that intrigue from the first glance and reach an A-list storytelling level at my own pace.
What I learned: I learned the simple way to create a character logline, learned which characters identified during the pre-class exercises would work the best as the core group of characters.
Logline: Nicholas Samichlaus (aka Santa Claus, protagonist) is a vampire who must binge feed after he makes his Christmas deliveries.
Logline: Isabella Clarke (love interest/antagonist) who is an Interpol agent tasked with investigating the 12 Days of Christmas vampire attacks who falls in love with the man she only knows as Nick.
Logline: Vladimir Kozlov is a vampire who seeks to overthrow Nicholas in order to rule the North.
Characters:
Character 1: Santa (Vampiric Protagonist)
Name: Nicholas Samichlaus (Switzerland for Santa Claus)
Role: The main protagonist, living secretly as a vampire. For centuries, Nicholas has been cursed with vampirism, but has dedicated his immortal life to carrying on his role as Santa Claus, delivering gifts to children around the world. However, his vampire nature creates an internal battle as he struggles to resist the bloodlust that threatens to consume him, especially during the high-stress Christmas season.
Journey: Nicholas is on a transformational journey to find redemption and reconcile his dual identities as both a benevolent gift-giver and a dangerous, blood-thirsty creature of the night. He must learn to master his vampiric urges in order to continue his mission of bringing joy to the world.
Unique: As the legendary Santa Claus figure, Nicholas possesses supernatural abilities like enhanced speed, strength, and immortality that aid him in his Christmas Eve deliveries. However, his vampirism also grants him heightened senses, mind control, and other dark powers that he must carefully control. His centuries-old wisdom and Christmas magic make him a powerful but tormented protagonist.
Intentional: Nicholas Samichlaus is the perfect protagonist to drive this Christmas horror story. As the iconic Santa Claus, he represents the dichotomy between good and evil, light and dark. His internal struggle with his vampiric nature creates high stakes and emotional depth, as the audience roots for him to triumph over his deadly curse and continue his benevolent mission. His character arc explores themes of redemption, the duality of human nature, and the power of holiday magic.
Character 2: Interpol Agent (Love Interest)
Name: Agent Isabella Clarke
Role: An Interpol agent tasked with investigating the “12 Days of Christmas” vampire attacks occurring in the Gothic town of Crimson North. As a driven, skeptical investigator, she is determined to uncover the truth behind the mysterious killings.
Journey: Initially convinced the murders are the work of a serial killer, Isabella’s investigation leads her to uncover the shocking truth – that the killer is in fact the legendary Santa Claus, who has been transformed into a vampire. As she digs deeper, she becomes conflicted, torn between her duty to stop the killer and a growing attraction and empathy for the tormented Nicholas.
Unique: As an Interpol agent, Isabella possesses a keen intellect, analytical skills, and a no-nonsense, cynical attitude. However, beneath her tough exterior lies a compassionate heart that is moved by Nicholas’s internal struggle. Her role as the pragmatic, rational investigator contrasts with Nicholas’s supernatural, emotional journey, creating compelling dramatic tension.
Intentional: Isabella serves as the audience’s point of view, grounding the fantastical elements of the story in a realistic, investigative framework. Her journey of uncovering the truth about Nicholas’s dual nature mirrors the audience’s own experience, and her developing feelings for him add a powerful romantic arc to the tale. Her character arc explores themes of prejudice, the nature of good and evil, and the power of love to overcome darkness.
Character 3: Antagonist (Rival Vampire)
Name: Vladimir Kozlov
Role: An ancient, powerful vampire who is a rival to Nicholas Frost. Driven by his own insatiable lust for power and the Santa Claus mantle, Vladimir seeks to expose Nicholas’s vampire identity and usurp his position as the one true Santa.
Journey: Vladimir has been secretly undermining Nicholas’s Christmas deliveries for centuries, sabotaging his routes and even turning some of his beloved children into vampires. Now, with the “12 Days of Christmas” murders drawing Interpol’s attention, Vladimir sees an opportunity to finally destroy Nicholas and take his place as the reigning vampire lord of the holiday season.
Unique: As an old-world, aristocratic vampire, Vladimir possesses a menacing, regal presence and a cultured, sophisticated demeanor that masks his ruthless, predatory nature. He wields powerful vampire abilities like mind control, shape-shifting, and superhuman strength, making him a formidable foe for the beleaguered Nicholas.
Intentional: Vladimir serves as the primary antagonist, creating the central conflict that drives the story’s plot. His rivalry with Nicholas is the catalyst for the “12 Days of Christmas” murders and the investigation that brings Isabella into the mix. As a dark mirror to the protagonist, Vladimir embodies the corrupting, destructive potential of power and the dangers of unchecked bloodlust. His character arc explores themes of ambition, the corruption of absolute power, and the eternal battle between good and evil.
Supporting Character 4: Elven Advisor (Supernatural Ally)
Name: Eirlys Snowbind
Role: A wise elf from the enchanted realms of the North, an old ally of Nicholas. Eirlys has been tasked with guiding and protecting Nicholas in his role as Santa Claus, using ancient magic to aid him in his Christmas Eve deliveries.
Journey: Eirlys has watched over Nicholas for centuries, ever since his transformation into a vampire. She has used her mystical powers to help conceal his true nature and enable him to continue his duties as Santa. However, as the “12 Days of Christmas” murders threaten to expose Nicholas, Eirlys must intervene more directly to protect him and stop the growing darkness.
Unique: As an elf, Eirlys possesses a deep connection to the magical forces of the natural world. She can commune with the elements, conjure enchantments, and even manipulate time to aid Nicholas in his Christmas Eve travels. Her ancient wisdom and mystical abilities make her a powerful ally, but she must also wrestle with the moral quandary of whether to reveal Nicholas’s vampirism to protect the children he serves.
Intentional: Eirlys serves as the supernatural guide and mentor figure, providing Nicholas with the magical support and counsel he needs to maintain his dual roles. Her character arc explores the complexities of loyalty, the preservation of ancient traditions, and the difficult choices one must make in the face of moral ambiguity. As a representative of the enchanted realms, Eirlys helps to ground the fantastical elements of the story and expand the mythological scope of the “Vampire Santa” world.
Supporting Character 5: Father Time (Mythical Mentor)
Name: Chronos Wintermere a.k.a. Father Thyme
Role: An embodiment of Father Time, an ageless entity who has watched over Nicholas since his transformation. Responsible for manipulating time so that Santa can make all of his deliveries in one night.
Journey: Chronos has served as a guiding force and mentor to Nicholas, using his mastery of time to enable the vampire Santa to complete his Christmas Eve rounds without being detected. However, as the “12 Days of Christmas” murders jeopardize Nicholas’s mission, Chronos must make difficult choices about how much interference is warranted to protect the sanctity of the holiday.
Unique: As the personification of Father Time, Chronos possesses an immortal, transcendent perspective on the events unfolding. He can see the past, present, and future, granting him unparalleled insight into the forces at play. His ability to manipulate the flow of time itself makes him a powerful ally, but also raises questions about the limits of his intervention and the consequences of his actions.
Intentional: Chronos serves as a wise, otherworldly mentor figure who helps to ground the fantastical elements of the story in a sense of timeless mythology. His character arc explores the delicate balance between fate and free will, the importance of tradition and ritual, and the responsibilities that come with wielding such immense power. As a guiding force for Nicholas, Chronos helps to elevate the stakes and broader significance of the protagonist’s journey.
Supporting Character 6: The Toymaker (Ancient Craftsman)
Name: Ambrose Woodwright
Role: An age-old toymaker who has been Nicholas’s friend and confidant for centuries, privy to his secret vampirism. Ambrose has used his skills as a master craftsman to create the enchanted toys that aid Nicholas in his Christmas deliveries.
Journey: Ambrose has faithfully served as Nicholas’s ally, using his toy-making abilities to sustain the magic of Christmas and conceal the vampire’s true nature. However, as the “12 Days of Christmas” murders threaten to expose the truth, Ambrose must decide whether to continue supporting Nicholas or to take matters into his own hands to protect the children he serves.
Unique: As an ancient, skilled artisan, Ambrose possesses a deep reverence for the traditions of Christmas and a strong moral compass. His toy-making abilities grant him a unique perspective on the magic of the holiday, and he has developed a close, almost familial bond with Nicholas over the centuries. However, his loyalty is tested as the darkness of the vampire’s plight encroaches on his idealized vision of Santa Claus.
Intentional: Ambrose serves as a grounding, human element in the fantastical world of “Vampire Santa.” His role as the trusted confidant and craftsman provides crucial logistical support to Nicholas’s mission, while also adding emotional depth and a sense of history to the protagonist’s journey. Ambrose’s character arc explores themes of friendship, moral responsibility, and the preservation of cherished traditions in the face of modern threats.
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Title: FUGITIVE BRIDE
Concept: A straight-laced assistant DA discovers the woman he’s about to marry is living under an assumed name and wanted for murder.
Genre: comedy
Character: David Mitchell, protagonist
Logline: David is a straight-laced, cautious assistant DA who wants to stay in his comfort zone but is constantly being forced out of it.
Unique: He is the last person who would want to be engaged to a fugitive. He also has an obligation to arrest her.
Character: Emily Williams, protagonist
Logline: She is a fugitive accused of a murder that was committed by her psychopath husband, Chaz Murdoch
Unique: She also seeks security like David but is constantly getting into perilous situations.
Character: Chaz Murdoch, antagonist (triangle character)
Logline: Chaz is a murderous ex-military who tricked Emma into marrying him and then murdered her most recent boyfriend and pinned the blame on her.
Unique: He will do anything to possess her
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Subject: Monica’s Intentional Lead Characters
VISION: I am a very successful screenwriter who has had multiple movies made.
What I learned from doing this assignment is to get into the characters at the beginning by keeping in mind your concept and title.
Tell us what makes each of these characters unique. These two steps will look like this:
Characters
Character: Emily Davis, Protagonist
Logline: A vulnerable writer survives a near-death experience and discovers an amazing hidden library with stories she can write for a lifetime but its enigmatic Guardian thwarts her at every turn.
Unique: Survives a near-death experience that changes her.
Character: Donahue Michaels, Antagonist
Logline: He is the greatest librarian in all the Universe and has been tasked by God to oversee God’s hidden library until a transient wants to reveal all the juiciest stories to humanity.
Unique: The Guardian, his name means Dark Warrior, and he is there to make sure the juiciest of stories do not escape the library by any means possible. He plays both sides of the spiritual coin much to God’s chagrin.
· Character: Azazel, the Tempter, Connecting Character
· Logline: Azazel has somehow got into heaven and is assisting Donahue until the transient shows up and poses a potential threat.
· Unique: A lessor demon, in the hierarchy of demons, has been living in heaven causing all sorts of mischief.
4. Use this prompt with AI to generate more versions of your characters:
ChatGPT Version
Character: Emily Davis
Role: Protagonist
Journey: Emily starts as a struggling writer, grappling with writer’s block and personal demons. After surviving a near-death experience, she discovers the hidden library, which becomes both her sanctuary and her greatest challenge. Her journey involves rediscovering her passion for storytelling, confronting her fears, and embracing her newfound power to bring forgotten tales to life. Throughout the story, Emily evolves from a timid and self-doubting artist into a confident and empowered creator, ultimately realizing that her creativity has the potential to shape reality itself.
Unique: Emily possesses a deep empathy and sensitivity to the emotions and struggles of others, which allows her to connect with the characters in the forgotten tales on a profound level. This empathy fuels her creative process and gives her a unique ability to breathe life into the stories she discovers, blurring the lines between fiction and reality.
Intentional: Emily’s background as a struggling writer facing personal and creative obstacles makes her the perfect vessel for exploring themes of self-discovery, resilience, and the transformative power of storytelling. Her journey drives the narrative forward, serving as a mirror for the audience’s struggles and aspirations.
Character: Donahue Michaels
Role: Antagonist, the Guardian
Journey: Donahue Michaels is the enigmatic guardian of the hidden library, tasked with protecting its secrets at all costs. Initially appearing as a mentor figure to Emily, Donahue gradually reveals himself to be a formidable adversary, determined to maintain the status quo and prevent Emily from accessing the full potential of the library’s magic. His journey is one of conflict and redemption, as he grapples with his duty to uphold the library’s ancient laws while also confronting his own past mistakes and regrets.
Unique: Donahue possesses a mysterious aura and a deep understanding of the arcane forces that govern the hidden library. His unwavering dedication to his duty masks a hidden vulnerability and a desire for redemption, as he struggles to reconcile his role as guardian with his demons. Donahue’s complex backstory and ambiguous motivations make him a compelling and multifaceted antagonist, capable of both acts of cruelty and moments of unexpected compassion.
Intentional: Donahue’s role as the guardian of the hidden library adds an element of mystery and danger to the story, driving the tension and conflict between him and Emily. His intricate connection to the library’s magic and his conflicted morality serve to challenge Emily’s own beliefs and motivations, pushing her to confront the darker aspects of her newfound power.
Character: Azazel
Role: The Tempter, Connecting Character
Journey: Azazel is a charismatic and manipulative figure who catalyzes Emily’s transformation. Appearing as a charming stranger with a hidden agenda, Azazel offers Emily tantalizing glimpses of the library’s true potential, tempting her with promises of unlimited creativity and power. His journey is one of temptation and deception, as he seeks to exploit Emily’s vulnerabilities for his gain while also wrestling with his conflicted loyalties and desires.
Unique: Azazel possesses a seductive charm and an otherworldly allure that draws Emily into his orbit, blurring the lines between reality and illusion. His enigmatic nature and ambiguous motives make him a captivating and unpredictable presence, capable of both acts of kindness and acts of betrayal. Azazel’s role as the tempter adds a layer of moral ambiguity to the story, forcing Emily to question her desires and motivations.
Intentional: Azazel’s role as the tempter adds an element of temptation and danger to the story, tempting Emily with promises of power and glory while also challenging her moral compass. His manipulative tactics and hidden agenda serve to test Emily’s resolve and determination, pushing her to confront her inner demons and make difficult choices that will ultimately shape her destiny.
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I look forward to seeing more about your screenplay Monica.
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Kristin’s Intentional Lead Characters
VISION: “I envision writing so well and consistently that I’m in demand, cherry-picking projects, selling beyond my wildest dreams, collaborating with people I admire and truly care about, and speaking my soul—on a big scale—so that I enjoy professional freedom, financial freedom, and joy.”
WHAT I LEARNED DOING THIS ASSIGNMENT: This exercise felt like a “check and balance” process, and for me this has been one of the most useful AI exercises too. That’s because I did my best with my intuition, my storytelling chops, etc., to fully execute the assignment (“in my gut”)—and then was curious and even a little nervous about what AI would say. But when the AI answers came through, it was very interesting to see my “unspoken intuition / feelings” put into more thorough sentences. In this case, then, the AI “said what I meant,” or what I was hoping for, and filled in the gaps. I was heartened in general, because the feedback was good—it feels as if I’ve got some good characters and dynamics here. This makes me feel more confident as we proceed. (I even did the exercise with my supporting characters.) So what I’m learning—in this assignment and as we have proceeded to now—is how AI can be a great writing partner. When AI is “flat,” it’s because what I’m feeding it is flat. When it fleshes out something with more helpful detail, I’m onto something.
Here’s what I ended up with for this assignment:
John (protagonist): A loner, oppositional, middle-aged rancher who takes care of the family ranch for his nine siblings—and knows everyone’s secrets. He is unique because he is no rat, and will die for their unbreakable family code.
- AI re: John’s intentional aspect: John’s background as a rancher with deep familial ties serves the story’s themes of loyalty, betrayal, and the complexities of family dynamics. His internal struggle resonates with audiences, making him a compelling protagonist whose journey they can empathize with and root for.
Zeke (antagonist): John’s brother, dead set on upending the family business and taking all the money. He is unique because he always allowed John to clean up his messes, but he’s willing to betray him for money.
- AI re: Zeke’s intentional aspect<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>: Zeke’s character heightens the stakes for John, forcing him to confront uncomfortable truths about his family and himself. His actions drive much of the external conflict in the story, pushing John to make difficult choices that propel the narrative forward.
Grace (triangle character): John and Zeke’s sister, the only family member John trusts to help unearth the truth behind the family’s secrets. She is unique because she sees the true good in John, and is willing to sacrifice everything to save him.
- AI re: Grace’s intentional aspect:<strong style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”> Grace’s role as the connecting character amplifies the emotional stakes of the story, highlighting the bonds of family loyalty and the lengths one will go to protect their loved ones. Her presence adds depth to the narrative, enriching the relationships between the characters and driving the story towards its resolution.
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Mary’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I am one of the most sought after writers in the family friendly drama space. I bring fun, creativity, and a breath of fresh air to my popular movies and episodic series because of my unique skills in story telling and my background in neuropsychology and history.
What I learned doing this assignment- I’m using a triangle for the first time with my characters so it made me go more deeply into the relationship between Diana and Silas (in addition to the relationships between Ava and Silas and Ava and her long-last grandmother. I revised a few things on the character structure that I developed in the pre-class assignments, but this definitely deepened the characters and I can see how this will lead to interesting layers. I modified the prompts to use and develop the characters I already had. So the transformational journey and the intentionality of the characters was what stood out in the AI.
- Character: Ava Reynard
- Logline: Ava Reynard (protagonist) is synesthetic musician who seeks a musical healing key in the wilderness to break a generational family curse.
- Unique: Ava has color-sound synesthesia
- Character: Silas Thorn
- Logline: Silas Thorn is an unscrupulous spiritual guru who seeks to use Ava for his own gain.
- Unique: As a person who attests to being spiritual Silas claims to have special insight into healing people and healing the natural world
- Character: Diana Wildroot
- Logline: Diana Wildroot is a medicine woman who is Ava’s mentor and secretly, her long-lost grandmother. She had a relationship with Silas when she was younger.
- Unique: Diana is a mentor who is very invested in Ava’s welfare. She also has special knowledge of Silas.
Revised prompt: Please develop the lead characters for this [genre] feature screenplay about [concept] and these [characters].
For this story, please start with the characters provided and develop them.
Ava Reynard (Protagonist)
- Role: Ava is the central character whose synesthetic abilities lead her on a journey of self-discovery and healing, both personally and environmentally.
- Journey:
Ava’s journey is one of self-discovery and empowerment. As she ventures into the wilderness to uncover the musical key to heal nature and break her family’s curse, she must navigate both external threats and internal conflicts stemming from her synesthesia and family legacy.
- Ava starts as a somewhat isolated and misunderstood figure due to her unique perception of sounds as colors. Her journey involves understanding and mastering her synesthesia to heal a generational curse affecting her family’s musical gifts. This journey leads her through trials that test her resilience, culminating in a profound transformation that allows her to embrace her abilities fully and heal both herself and the natural world.
- Unique: Ava’s synesthetic experience is not just a sensory quirk but is intimately connected to her family’s historical relationship with music and nature. Her ability allows her to perceive the world in a way others cannot, seeing the hidden connections between sound, color, and healing.
- Intentional: Ava’s synesthesia and her lineage make her uniquely suited to undertake this quest. Her personal stake in resolving the curse and her connection to nature through her sensory experiences drive the narrative and provide a relatable yet extraordinary protagonist.Silas Thorn (Antagonist)
- Role: Silas is the antagonist whose motives conflict with Ava’s. He poses as a spiritual guru who aims to manipulate Ava’s abilities for his own benefit.
- Journey: Silas’s journey is one of increasing revelation; he starts as a seemingly benign spiritual leader but is progressively exposed as manipulative and self-serving. His journey intersects with Ava’s as his true intentions and past connections with Diana come to light.
- Unique: Silas’s claim to spiritual insights, particularly in healing, provides a direct contrast to Ava’s genuine abilities. His understanding of the spiritual and natural world, though skewed by his ambitions, makes him a formidable and complex adversary.
- Intentional: Silas’s position as a spiritual leader and his past with Diana provide him the tools and motivation to oppose Ava effectively. His manipulative nature and deep-seated ambition are essential for challenging Ava’s growth, making her victories all the more significant and her transformation tangible.
Diana Wildroot (Connecting Character)
- Role: Diana acts as both mentor and secret family to Ava, guiding her through her spiritual and emotional journey.
- Journey: Diana’s journey involves reconnection with her past and coming to terms with her previous relationship with Silas, as well as revealing her true identity to Ava. She plays a crucial role in guiding Ava toward understanding the true nature of her gift and the realities of the curse.
- Unique: Diana’s deep connection to nature and her role as a medicine woman give her a unique perspective on the healing process. Her knowledge of Silas’s true nature and her own history with him add layers to her character and her relationship with Ava.
- Intentional: Diana is intentionally placed in the story to bridge the generational gap and provide historical and emotional depth to the curse affecting Ava’s family. Her mentoring is pivotal in helping Ava navigate the complexities of her synesthesia and the spiritual world.
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Sandra’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I am recognized in the industry as a great writer with several successful produced movies.
What I learned doing this assignment is that this is a great lesson for creating characters that fit the concept and story. Since this is a rom-com, Erin and Carlos are both protagonist and antagonist.
Character: Erin (protagonist/antagonist)
Logline: Erin is a hardworking fashion buyer who tries to break up her father John’s impulsive relationship with Maria.
Unique: Erin’s determination, creativity, and resourcefulness helps her plan elaborate schemes to breakup John and Maria.
Character: Carlos (protagonist/antagonist)
Logline: Carlos is a world-class professional dancer and Maria’s son, who helps Erin breakup their parents’ relationship.
Unique: His talent, charm, and protectiveness of his mother adds conflict and complexity to Erin’s schemes.
Character: John
Logline: John is a retired businessman, Erin’s father and widower who loves to dance and play golf.
Unique: His adventurous, charming and fun-loving nature adds heart and humor to his relationships.
Character: Maria
Logline: Maria is a widow, Carlos’ mother, and a professional dance instructor who is falling in love with John.
Unique: Her caring, passionate, and graceful manner draws John in and creates conflict with Erin.
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Hope’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vison: To be a full-time respected screenwriter whose work brings joy to viewers and creates work for others in the industry, including actors and crew.
What I learned: I learned that it helps a lot to ask AI to chew on the possibilities for the lead characters! It was fun to see what it came up with and how I can incorporate that as I move forward.
Novel Nuptials: A bride’s wedding plans unravel when her own fictional creations hijack the festivities, turning her special day into a chaotic battle of wills.
Character: My protagonist, Marta Jordan, is an up-and-coming author and bride.
Logline: Marta is an up-and-coming author who prides herself on being in control of her creative process.
Unique: She’s hiding an enormous case of writer’s block from her publisher.
Character: Antagonist, Royal Brighton is a best-selling author who connected Emily with her publisher.
Logline: Royal is a best-selling author jealous of Emily’s growing success.
Unique: Royal hires actors to portray Marta’s characters to discredit Marta in the eyes of their publisher.
Character: My triangle character, Vincent, is the fictional antagonist in Emily’s new book.
Logline: Vincent creates havoc on Emily’s wedding day by trying to rewrite and “edit” her schedule – and life.
Unique: Vincent is an out-of-work actor hired by Marta’s main literary rival.
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INTENTIONAL CHARACTERS
My Vision: I am a writer who is excellent, recognized as such by people in the industry, and has several projects sold for WGA-type fees and some of those produced and successful in the theater and/or on a major streamer.
What I learned from this assignment is how important it is to “design” characters who are uniquely suited for their role in this one particular story. The idea of designing characters seems almost god-like in a way, but it’s fascinating and necessary as well.
Also, AI really came through for me on this one, making much of what I’d put down myself more concise and augmented, and adding a Triangle character, which is in the Concept, making that person very pivotal.
TOUGH ASSIGNMENT – Lead Character loglines
Kellen (protagonist)
Kellen is an ex-Green Beret who’s become a teacher at an outdoor school to help her learn to care, empathize, and experience joy in her life again.
Kellen is unique in that she’s chosen a completely different, life-affirming profession to chase away her PTSD rather than just do some civilian form of what she did in the military (police, National Guard, FBI, Secret Service, etc.).
Gabriel (antagonist)
Gabriel is the leader of a right-wing radical militia who, when he takes Kellen’s class hostage, forces Kellen to return to her old world to save her new one.
Gabriel is unique in his passion for bringing down the system in the most massive and unexpected ways possible.
AI PROMPT AND RESPONSE
Please create the lead characters for this [genre] feature screenplay about [concept] and these [characters].
For this story, please give us a Protagonist, Antagonist, and Connecting Character. Please tell us their [journey] and what makes them [unique].
PROTAGONIST: This is the character the story is about. They are going on the Transformational Journey (next lesson) and the audience will feel deeply connected to them. Often, the concept gives their overall journey.
ANTAGONIST: This character’s whole purpose is to disrupt the Protagonist’s journey. They may be their enemy who is trying to kill them or friend who doesn’t want them to succeed because it will ruin their friendship.
TRAINGLE CHARACTER: In a love-triangle or a dramatic-triangle, there is a third main character that creates a competition and/or conflict between the first two.
INTENTIONAL = What makes this character perfect to deliver the story powerfully — such as their background, profile, skills, connections, education, position, or some special way they contribute to the story? The character serves the story, genre, concept, and theme, and plays their role in the story. Drives the story and delivers on the arc of the story.
With each character, tell us the following:
Character:
Role:
Journey:
Unique:
Intentional:Genre = Action/Thriller
Title = Tough Assignment
Concept = An ex-Green Beret turned teacher at a Sierra Nevada outdoor school faces her most challenging mission ever when a radical militia group, using an old mining town as headquarters for a nationwide cyber attack, takes her students hostage, including her own nephew, while they’re on a nature hike nearby.
Characters = Kellen, the Protagonist, ex-Green BeretGabriel, Antagonist, leader of the radical militia group
For the feature screenplay “Tough Assignment,” set in the action/thriller genre, the main characters are designed with specific roles and journeys that intertwine with the core concept of the story. The narrative revolves around an ex-Green Beret turned teacher who confronts a radical militia group planning a nationwide cyber attack, leading to a thrilling rescue mission. Here’s a detailed look at the three lead characters:
PROTAGONIST:
Character: Kellen
Role: Ex-Green Beret turned teacher
Journey: Kellen’s transformational journey involves shifting from a peaceful teaching life back to her military roots to rescue her students and nephew. This ordeal forces her to reconcile her past with her present, utilizing her combat skills and strategic thinking in a non-war setting.
Unique: Kellen’s unique combination of military training and educational empathy makes her adept at both combat and ensuring the emotional well-being of her students during the crisis.
Intentional: Her background as a Green Beret is essential for the physical demands of the rescue, while her current role as a teacher provides her with a personal stake in the safety and future of her students, driving the emotional depth of the narrative.ANTAGONIST:
Character: Gabriel
Role: Leader of the radical militia group
Journey: Gabriel’s journey is one of escalating conflict, as his plans for the cyber attack are threatened by Kellen’s unexpected resistance. His journey explores the depths of extremism and the personal vendettas that fuel his actions.
Unique: Gabriel is characterized by his charismatic yet ruthless leadership, which allows him to command loyalty among his followers and instill fear in his adversaries.
Intentional: His antagonism directly challenges Kellen’s objectives, providing the necessary conflict for the story. His technical expertise and strategic cunning make him a formidable opponent who can execute a complex cyber plot and physical takeover.TRIANGLE CHARACTER:
Character: Jesse
Role: Kellen’s nephew and student
Journey: Caught between the protagonist’s protective instincts and the antagonist’s menacing plans, Jesse’s journey involves growth from a naïve student into a courageous young man who plays a pivotal role in his own rescue.
Unique: Jesse’s relationship with Kellen adds a personal dimension to her mission, intensifying her resolve. He also represents the innocence at risk throughout the story, embodying the stakes beyond just tactical success.
Intentional: Jesse’s presence in the hostage group and personal connection to Kellen heighten the emotional stakes of the narrative, adding layers to Kellen’s motivations and providing a catalyst for her actions and decisions during the crisis.These characters are crafted to drive the story of “Tough Assignment” powerfully, each serving their role in the unfolding drama that blends intense action with deep personal stakes. Their interconnected journeys ensure a gripping narrative that keeps the audience invested in their fates.
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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 2: Intentional Lead Characters
Robin’s Intentional Lead Characters
MY VISION: I aim to make my writing flow naturally, like second nature, crafting stories that resonate globally and leave a mark, backed by a supportive team who really get what I’m about.
I’ve discovered that establishing a clear purpose for my characters before writing my screenplay ensures rich characterizations and renders them three-dimensional.
Character: Jake Reynolds
Logline: Jake Reynolds fights addiction, squares off with inner demons, looks for redemption while solving a high-profile murder.
Unique: Jake’s uniqueness lies in his grit, guts, and doing the right thing despite wrestling personal demons and addiction.
Character: Veronica Blackwood
Logline: Veronica is a sly criminal genius who plans tricky schemes to stay in control and calls favors behind the scenes.
Unique: Veronica’s uniqueness lies in her fierce drive, crafty moves, and tangled network steer her every move.
Character: Maya Chen
Logline: Maya Chen is a fourth-generation Chinese American data analyst,
using her nerve and caring nature to dig up vital truths.Unique: Maya’s uniqueness lies in her skillfully blending smarts with heart, she digs deep into tricky data to uncover hidden truths.
Character: Protagonist
Character: Antagonist
Role: Jake Reynolds
Journey: Jake Reynolds, a troubled detective battling addiction, embarks on a transformational journey of redemption and resilience. As he unravels a high-profile murder case linked to a powerful criminal syndicate, Jake confronts his inner demons and relentless adversaries while striving to uncover the truth and bring justice to a corrupt society.
Unique: Jake’s uniqueness lies in his resilience, determination, and moral compass despite battling personal demons and addiction. His journey is characterized by moments of vulnerability and self-discovery, making him a relatable and compelling protagonist for audiences to root for.
Intentional: Jake’s background as a detective gives him the necessary skills and determination to unravel the conspiracy at the heart of the story. His struggles with addiction add depth to his character and serve as a driving force for his personal growth throughout the narrative. As the central character, Jake’s journey embodies the overarching themes of redemption and resilience inherent in the genre.
Character: Antagonist
Role: Veronica Blackwood
Journey: Veronica Blackwood serves as the primary antagonist, orchestrating intricate schemes to maintain the power of the Dominion Syndicate and further their agenda. Her journey is one of ruthless ambition and cunning manipulation, as she seeks to solidify her control over the criminal underworld while confronting the scars of her impoverished past.
Unique: Veronica’s intelligence, charm, and charisma make her a formidable adversary for Jake Reynolds. Her background as a survivor of poverty and abandonment fuels her relentless pursuit of power, adding depth to her character and motivation. Her calculated manipulation of events and exploitation of the vulnerable pose a significant threat to Jake’s quest for justice.
Intentional: Veronica’s position within the Dominion Syndicate and her personal history make her the perfect foil for Jake Reynolds. As the driving force behind the conspiracy, she represents the embodiment of corruption and greed, challenging Jake both intellectually and morally. Her character serves to heighten the stakes and drive the conflict forward, ensuring a compelling and suspenseful narrative.
Character: Triangle Character
Role: Maya Chen
Journey: Maya Chen, a fourth-generation Chinese American data analyst specializing in predictive analytics and pattern recognition, leverages her tenacity and compassion to uncover crucial truths. As she analyzes various data sources related to the case, Maya identifies patterns of behavior and potential leads that traditional investigators might overlook. Maya’s unconventional vocation adds complexity to the investigation, challenging Jake to consider alternative avenues of inquiry and ultimately bringing them closer to uncovering the truth behind the conspiracy.
Unique: Maya’s uniqueness lies in her ability to merge analytical prowess with a compassionate drive, navigating complex datasets with tenacity to unveil hidden truths.
Intentional: Maya’s background as a data analyst brings a unique skill set to the team, allowing her to uncover crucial information and provide valuable insights into the Syndicate’s operations. Her analytical skills and compassionate nature drive the investigation forward, challenging traditional investigative techniques and offering alternative perspectives. Maya’s character serves to deepen the complexity of the narrative and drive the story towards its resolution.
Genre: Neo-Noir Mystery
Title: Memory Alpha
Concept: In a gritty dystopian future, Detective Jake Reynolds battles addiction while investigating a high-profile murder case linked to a powerful criminal syndicate. Teaming up with data analyst Maya Chen and facing off against the cunning Veronica Blackwood, they unravel a conspiracy shrouded in secrecy and corruption.
Characters: Jake Reynolds, Veronica Blackwood, Maya Chen
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Subject Line: Drew Foerster’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I am doing all that is needed to create a future where I am a well-respected Hollywood writer and have the freedom to choose the projects I put my time towards as well as working with amazing producers, directors actors, and agents/managers.
What I learned from doing this assignment is… How important it is that your character is meant for this story and not any other story. They are the perfect fit to tell this tale.
Character: Matthew
Logline: Matthew lives on the west coast and owns a tech start-up. He believes in love at first sight but is super loyal to his fiancée even though he is psychically connected to Emma.
Unique: Matthew claims he saw a UFO when he was little and loves watching UFO and Alien documentaries.
Character: Emma
Logline: Emma is an accountant. She doesn’t believe in soul mates. She’s logical and believes everything has a logical balance but cannot shake her psychic connection to Matthew even though it’s not a logical choice.
Unique: Emma had an invisible friend when she was younger.
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Karen’s Intentional Characters
One-sentence vision: I am a creative writer who can dream up something new, then write it better than I’d imagined and my writing life is always fun and satisfying.
What I learned: Creating my main characters with intention will help deliver the promise of my screenplay.
Give us a logline (one sentence answer) for your protagonist, antagonist, and triangle character (if you have one) to the question, “What makes this character fit my concept and title powerfully?
Screenplay Logline: A twister in Oz whisks the Wicked Witch of the East to modern Kansas to seek revenge, only to face off against a descendant more cunning than Dorothy.
My initial answers:
Protagonist Character: The Witch
Unique: An old-fashioned wicked witch stuck in a modern day midwestern town wants her family’s legacy returned, and her family’s good name restored in the annals of history, and a way to get back homeAntagonist Character: The Wizard/Con Man… great grandson of the original Wizard brokers the licensing of the Ruby Slippers to museums and to avant-guard high tech shoe designers while keeping a large commission on the money earned for himself.
Triangle character: Dorothy’s niece, Dot: A sad, misguided millennial doesn’t know what she wants out of life, and has no idea how to manage her inherited wealth, other than keeping an eagle eye on the bottom line of her net worth, and encouraging the merchandizing efforts of the Wizard/ Con Man who is ripping her off.
AI-prompt generated versions:
Protagonist: The Wicked Witch of the East
Role: The central character, seeking revenge and redemption.
Journey: Initially driven by vengeance, she discovers the importance of forgiveness and family.
Unique: Her iconic status from "The Wizard of Oz" gives her a compelling backstory and motivation.
Intentional: Her transformation drives the story's exploration of themes like redemption and the consequences of one's actions.Antagonist: The Wizard/Con Man
Role: The primary obstacle to the witch’s goals, using deception and manipulation.
Journey: Starts as a cunning trickster but ultimately faces the consequences of his actions.
Unique: His dual role as a powerful figure and a fraud adds complexity to his character.
Intentional: He challenges the witch’s beliefs and forces her to confront her own motivations.Triangle Character: Dot (Dorothy's Descendant)
Role: Represents the connection to Dorothy's legacy and complicates the witch's mission.
Journey: Initially wary of the witch, she learns to understand her and forms an unexpected bond.
Unique: Her intelligence and wit make her a worthy adversary to the witch.
Intentional: She adds depth to the story by representing the modern world's perspective on the Oz characters and themes. -
Jan’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I am a talented and strong writer with a unique voice, recognized by the movie industry with multiple screenplays produced.
What I learned is that creating powerful loglines for the characters develops the relationships and drives the direction of the story, and in my case, AI had generated virtually exactly the vision I have for my story.
“What makes this character fit my concept and title powerfully?”
Protagonist: Emberleaf, Eveandor’s reigning queen, loses her magic when the numinous amulet is shattered
Antagonist: M’ranth-Jix exiled pixie for practicing dark magic, wants revenge on Emberleaf by preventing the numinous amulet from being restored
Connecting Character: Nightshade secretly wants to rule Eveandor and turns against Emberleaf and dupes M’ranth-Jix
3. Tell us what makes each of these characters unique. These two steps will look like this:
Character: Emberleaf
Logline: she is the reigning queen of Eveandor, but the shattered numinous amulet strips her powers
Unique: her magic and lifeforce is intertwined with the numinous amulet and her survival is dependent on restoring it, making the amulet whole again.Character: M’ranth-Jix
Logline: exiled pixie for practicing dark magic is out for revenge by seizing reign over Eveandor, exiling Emberleaf in the process
Unique: uses his dark magic to drain Emberleaf of her magic and lifeforce, leaving her vulnerable in the outer realms of EveandorCharacter: Nightshade
Logline: ally turned adversary against the pixie alliance, and turns against M’ranth-Jix, who thinks he is working to keep the pixie alliance from succeeding on their quest
Unique: former ally and friend to Thornwhisper, Willowbreeze, and Emberleaf, and conspiring with M’ranth-Jix to reign over Eveandor-
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Matthew Lutz’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: To be an in-demand, confident writer with several hit projects produced, and to be known for being amongst the best in the business at balancing heart and hilarity, having a strong voice, and witty dialogue.
What I Learned: The combination of the WIM + AI prompts is proving to be a pretty powerful process for me. I am enjoying how well the brainstorming is coming along.
Assignment:
Character: Fallon, Protagonist
Logline: Fallon is a screenwriter hired to write a space heist film
Unique: She is hyper-obsessive and thorough with every single detail of her researchCharacter: Deiter, Antagonist
Logline: Deiter is the film’s controversial director
Unique: Known for putting actors in danger and will stop at nothing to capture realismCharacter: Errol, Triangle Character
Logline: Errol is the studio head who greenlit the film
Unique: He is secretively a master thief using the film as cover to plan this moon heistCharacter: Harlan, Key Supporting Character #1
Logline: Harlan is a Method Actor who is known for never breaking character offset
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Harry’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision for success from this program is:
To create scripts freely when working with producers, directors and cast, so to make award-winning work and create a lifestyle which is confident of financial freedom.What I learned from doing this assignment is:
Start with the absolute basics. A great foundation makes the rest of the building strong!Character: Suli Chen (Protagonist)
Logline: A driven technician, deeply in love with Jon, is thrown into confusion by her pregnancy and situation.
Unique: She has a special assignment to complete.Character: Harrison Sinclair (Antagonist)
Logline: A charismatic politician with a thirst for power and very little in the way of a moral compass.
Unique: He has a life-terminating disease and wants to accomplish world domination as his legacy.Character: Dr. Jamal Khan (Triangle Character)
Logline: The Space mission’s medical officer who also cares for the antagonist
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Ramsay Module 2 Lesson Two.
My Vision: Creating stories and worlds for my characters. Producing my films will be my ultimate gratification.
Title: “Saving Innocence” Genre: Thriller/Drama 4.23.24
Concept: An acrimonious federal agent’s quest for justice is derailed when she grudgingly joins a Godly vigilante’s crusade to save trafficked children, forcing her present and past to collide.
Characters: Mic Alverez, Carlito Bonito, David Patron.
• Protagonist Character: Michaela “Mic” Alverez
• Logline: A determined federal agent haunted by her past and driven by retribution.
• Unique: She’s attractive but disheveled, abrasive, dangerous, and pissed at God.
• Antagonist Character: Carlito Bonino
• Logline: A unrelenting Cartel boss, slovenly, deadly, and a murderous asshole
• Unique: He has zero remorse; torturing or killing is no different than going to the market.
• Triangle Character: David Samaritan
• Logline: He is zealous to save children, compassionate, and devoted to God
Unique: He/his voice is disarming when he speaks and has a way of connecting to people.
Protagonist: Michaela “Mic” Alverez
Role: Mic is the story’s central character, a determined federal agent driven by her past traumas and compulsion for vengeance.
Journey: Mic’s journey begins with her obsession for revenge against Carlito Bonino, the man who shot Mic and killed her little sister. However, when her neighbor’s daughter, Hannah, is abducted by traffickers with ties to the Cartel, Mic’s path takes an unexpected turn. She reluctantly teams up with the vigilante David to rescue Hannah and other trafficked children. Throughout the story, Mic confronts her anger towards God for letting her sister be murdered but ultimately reconciles her desire for vengeance with her duty to protect the innocent.
Uniqueness: Mic is a complex character who defies stereotypes. She is attractive yet disheveled, abrasive yet vulnerable, and dangerous beyond her size. Her relentless determination and sharp instincts make her a formidable force, but her internal conflict and emotional turmoil set her apart.
Intentional: Mic’s background as a federal agent gives her the skills and resources to navigate organized crime’s dangerous underbelly. Her personal vendetta against Carlito provides an emotional drive that propels the story forward, while her evolving relationship with the disarming David adds depth and complexity to her character arc. Mic serves as the audience’s anchor, guiding them through the thrilling journey, leading Mic to give up years of hatred to save the innocent.
Antagonist: Carlito Bonito
Role: Carlito is the primary antagonist of the story. He represents the embodiment of evil, the main impediment to Mic’s journey, and the ruthless leader of a faction with vast criminal operations.
Journey: Carlito’s odyssey is one of insatiable ambition and inculpable brutality. He ascended the Cartel ranks through atrocious barbarity, eliminating all threats to his power without hesitation. At first, he doesn’t recall his encounter with Mic and the death of her sister, but when he understands her motivation for revenge, it fuels his antagonism toward her. Throughout the story, Carlito’s primary goal is to protect his criminal empire and maintain his power at any cost, destroying anyone who stands in his way. So narcissistic Carlito can’t fathom the magnitude of Mic’s threat.
Uniqueness: What sets Carlito apart is that he’s devoid of humanity and has no remorse or empathy. Violence and murder are mundane exercises to him; he doesn’t enjoy or dislike committing heinous acts. They are just actions necessary to maintain his authority; his unapologetic nature and unwavering commitment to his interests make him a formidable adversary for Mic and others.
Intentional: Carlito’s character is the ultimate foil to Mic’s quest for vengeance and justice for her sister. His unrestrained evil forces Mic to confront the darkest aspects of herself and the world she now inhabits. Carlito’s connections to influential government figures highlight our societal corruption and criminality, adding a layer of complexity and obstruction to Mic’s end goal.
Triangle Character: David Patron
Role: David Patron connects Mic and Carlito, creating conflict and tension within the story’s dramatic triangle. He is a shepherd of faith and a Godly vigilante dedicated to saving innocence and combating those who bring evil into the world.
Journey: David is a man of faith and conviction. Motivated by his deep sense of compassion and devotion to God, he tirelessly works to rescue trafficked children and bring justice to their oppressors. His alliance with Mic challenges his relationship with the Almighty until he realizes Mic has been sent to him; he believes she’s a soldier against darkness, an archangel, Archangel Michaela.
Uniqueness: What is extraordinary about David is his disarming charisma and ability to connect with people on a profound level, even those who are hostile toward him. This makes him a compelling and enigmatic character. Despite his zealous determination, David sometimes wrestles with his own doubts and uncertainties, adding depth to his character.
Intentional: David catalyzes Mic’s obsession with Carlito and pushes her to confront her beliefs and motivations to abide by her quest for vengeance. His presence introduces an element of moral ambiguity to the story, challenging Mic and the audience to question their own preconceptions about good and evil. As the linchpin of the dramatic triangle, David’s actions drive the narrative forward, ultimately shaping the story’s outcome. -
Margaret’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision: To write profound faith-based screenplays that are produced.
What I learned: A.I. prompts for characters!Characters:
• Name: Jabin Munoz
• Role: Protagonist.
• Logline: Jabin is a resilient college student facing the challenge of terminal illness during his senior year. Despite his diagnosis, he embarks on a transformational journey driven by his desire to pursue his dreams and find meaning in life beyond his illness. He discovers faith and love along the way, defying the odds and embracing the uncertainty of his future.
• Unique: Jabin’s strength lies not only in his determination to fight his illness but also in his unwavering belief in the power of hope and love. He is portrayed as a multi-dimensional character, showcasing both vulnerability and courage in the face of adversity.• Name: Dr. Joel Morgan
• Role: Antagonist
• Logline: Dr. Morgan is Jabin’s oncologist who, while ostensibly aiming to treat his patient’s illness, becomes a source of conflict by discouraging Jabin from pursuing his goals and dreams. He represents the harsh reality of Jabin’s medical condition and serves as a constant reminder of the limitations imposed by his illness.
• Unique: Dr. Morgan’s character is unique in that he is not a traditional antagonist in the sense of being malicious or intentionally malevolent. Instead, his antagonistic role stems from his well-meaning but ultimately misguided attempts to prioritize Jabin’s medical treatment over his personal aspirations.• Name: Becca Nowak
• Role: Triangle Character
• Logline: Becca is Jabin’s love interest and a source of encouragement and support throughout his journey. Unlike Dr. Morgan, she believes in Jabin’s ability to live a fulfilling life despite his illness and encourages him to pursue his dreams, including graduation, marriage, and a career.
• Unique: Becca’s character adds depth to the story by providing a contrasting perspective to both Jabin and Dr. Morgan. Her unwavering faith in Jabin’s potential and her willingness to stand by him in the face of adversity make her a compelling and relatable character. -
Vision: To captivate audiences by writing, producing, and directing smart, well-written, blockbuster scripts.
What I learned from doing this assignment: is how important it is to digest the characters in small pieces first.
Subject Line: WIM – Vernall Ritchey’s – Intentional Lead CharactersCharacter: Kyla Role: Protagonist Journey: Kyla begins as a devoted caregiver and soon-to-be nun, driven by compassion and faith. However, her encounter with the demon possessing Father Gill shatters her beliefs and forces her to confront her own inner demons. As she grapples with her newfound identity as the true demonic entity, Kyla embarks on a transformative journey of self-discovery, redemption, and ultimately, acceptance. Unique: Kyla’s unique background as a caregiver and aspiring nun adds depth to her character, highlighting her moral and spiritual conflicts. Her journey from altruism to darkness provides a compelling arc that resonates with audiences, exploring themes of faith, identity, and the nature of evil. Intentional: Kyla’s character serves as the emotional core of the story, anchoring the audience’s connection to the narrative. Her internal struggles and moral dilemmas drive the plot forward, while her journey reflects the overarching themes of the horror genre, delivering a powerful and thought-provoking exploration of the human psyche.
Character: Father Gill Role: Catalyst Journey: Father Gill initially appears as a bedridden priest possessed by a demon, setting the stage for the supernatural conflict at the heart of the story. As the catalyst for Kyla’s transformation, Father Gill’s character undergoes a subtle evolution, challenging Kyla’s beliefs and serving as a mirror for her own inner turmoil. Unique: Father Gill’s unique position as both victim and vessel for the demonic presence adds complexity to his character. His background as a priest imbues him with moral authority and spiritual significance, heightening the stakes of Kyla’s struggle. Despite his limited physical presence, Father Gill’s influence reverberates throughout the narrative, driving the protagonist’s journey. Intentional: Father Gill’s character is intentionally crafted to catalyze Kyla’s transformation and deepen the story’s thematic exploration. His role as a symbolic figure of faith and corruption underscores the existential and supernatural themes of the horror genre, enhancing the narrative tension and emotional resonance of the story.
Character: Demon Role: Antagonist Journey: The Demon embodies pure malevolence and serves as the primary obstacle to Kyla’s journey of self-discovery and redemption. Its relentless pursuit of power and destruction drives the narrative conflict, challenging Kyla’s resolve and threatening to consume her soul. Unique: The Demon’s insidious presence and otherworldly nature make it a formidable antagonist, capable of manipulating both physical and spiritual realms. Its origins and motivations remain shrouded in mystery, adding an element of dread and unpredictability to the story. Intentional: The Demon’s character is intentionally designed to embody the essence of evil and test the limits of Kyla’s faith and humanity. Its relentless pursuit of Kyla amplifies the horror elements of the story, heightening the sense of dread and suspense. As the ultimate antagonist, the Demon drives the narrative tension and pushes Kyla to confront her darkest fears, ensuring a gripping and emotionally resonant journey for both the character and the audience. -
Janeen’s Intentional Lead Characters
Vision: I strive for collaborative success in screenwriting, aiming for financial stability and recognition across diverse genres, supported by travel and a capable manager.
What I learned doing this assignment is that I was missing a key role for one of my characters.
My protagonist is Madison Lee, a retail clerk who is a frustrated stylist.
Unique: Madison loves her clients and dogs and struggles to stand up for herself.My 2nd protagonist is Daniel Lee, a musician who is frustrated that his band will not try any music that fits his personal style.
Unique: Daniel loves dogs, thinks quickly on his feet, and is often overruled by more dominant people.My connecting character is dog breeder April who befriends Madison and Daniel but later falls for Daniel.
Unique: April understands dog behavior very well and can help them with their ruse of being siblings and in managing 2 dogs in one apartment. -
Jamie’s Lead Characters
Dramatic TriangleCHARACTER: Lindsey Turner:
LOGLINE = A resilient and determined woman the newest matriarch, left to hold the family together while conflicts arise and moral decisions are made, involving her sister’s passing, as she wrestles with her own burdens of guilt and responsibility.
UNIQUE = She has played the role of caretaker for her mother and husband. She was closest to sister Sadie and knew her well, raised her niece as her own. She is physically wounded, and opioid dependent.
CHARACTER: Gracie Wyatt:
LOGLINE =The most empathetic member of the clan. A trait she got from her grandmother and yet is distant with her mother, Lindsey. In spite of their many differences, she is most like her and loves her deeply.
UNIQUE = She has deep scars from drug abuse in her younger years and is the only one who really understands her aunt Sadie. She understands the importance of family and the one with the most hope for it. She will be the next matriarch in the future generation. She is a silent caretaker to her mother.
CHARACTER: Brooke Meade:
LOGLINE: An intelligent and resilient daughter who grapples with feelings of abandonment, betrayal, and abuse.
UNIQUE: She too had a drug problem in her younger days. Failed marriages run in her vein much like her aunt and mother. She is protective of her own children and is turning their lives around from her own issues with herself and mother. She becomes her mother’s caretaker when she is diagnosed with colon cancer. Reconciliation is her biggest wish.
CHARACTER: Sarah Henderson:
LOGLINE: The charismatic yet troubled matriarch whose past traumas and favoritism cast long shadows over her daughters, Sarah’s attempts to mend familial rifts from beyond the grave drive the core emotional dynamics of their story.
UNIQUE = Abandoned by her father as a child. She knows abuse and betrayal. She never gave up on her future and made remarkable changes in her life. She tracks the lives of the characters through the years in her journal. She leaves behind the importance of family and believes each will succeed in life. She passes on the hope of tomorrow and future generations.CHARACTER: Sadie Meade:
LOGLINE = A conflicted, self-centered, and distant mother and addict who is facing terminal illness.
UNIQUE = Sadie’s decision to opt for assisted suicide triggers a multitude of hidden truths and unresolved conflicts, forcing her family to confront their tangled past and uncertain future. She was abandoned at birth when her mother came down with tuberculosis. She was an amazing mother after the birth of Brooke. Her husband overdosed on heroine shortly after that. Her pain was deeply internal until deemed with being terminally ill. -
Michael E. Katz’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I want to sell a script for a million dollars.
DRAMATIC TRIANGLE
KIRSTEN
Main Character: Kirsten, newly divorced and wealthy in her 40s, grappling with her recent divorce and the lingering presence of her ex-husband in their dream home.
Role: Protagonist
Journey: Kirsten’s journey involves emotionally and physically detaching from her past life with Jesse, symbolized by the transformation of their shared dream home. Kirsten actively seeks to redefine her life and self-concept through the radical act of home transformation, embodying the high concept of moving out to move on. This process is not just about desiring a new beginning; it involves a detailed envisioning of her new life—each decision, sacrifice, and consequence—creating a compelling and relatable story.
Unique: Kirsten’s unique position as a wealthy woman provides her with the means and public visibility, complicating her personal healing process and making her actions influential and scrutinized. However, she is also the Prototypical Divorcee: Kirsten embodies the typical American woman navigating the aftermath of a divorce. She initially follows the conventional “divorcee playbook,” which includes fighting for the family home as a means of retaining some semblance of her previous life. Her adherence to these societal norms makes her a relatable character for many women in similar situations, providing a familiar starting point from which her unique journey begins. Kirsten is both a mirror to the audience’s potential experiences and a beacon of personal growth and resilience, making her journey both relatable and inspirational within the narrative framework of dealing with divorce.
Intentional: Throughout her interactions with decorator Hallworth and the process of transforming her home, Kirsten develops a deep insight into the systemic challenges that often disadvantage women in her position. Her journey is marked by a growing awareness that the societal expectation to “win” the house might actually be a pyrrhic victory. This realization propels her towards a more liberated and self-defined future, making her actions and decisions a powerful narrative force that drives the story towards a broader commentary on personal recovery and redefinition after divorce.
HALLWORTH
Character: Hallworth is a flamboyant, humorous, and candid gay decorator, renowned for his talent in transforming spaces.
Role: Connected Triangle Character – he introduces conflict and complexity into the dynamic between Kirsten and Jesse, enriching the narrative’s emotional depth.
Journey: Hallworth’s journey with Kirsten extends beyond mere redecoration; he becomes a pivotal figure in helping her confront and process her emotional traumas. Their collaboration evolves into a deep friendship, making them partners in healing. His openness about his own recent traumatic breakup provides a stark contrast to Kirsten’s more reserved demeanor, facilitating profound emotional explorations and mutual support.
Unique: Hallworth’s distinctiveness lies in his flamboyance and openness, coupled with his unique perspective as a gay man. This allows him to challenge Kirsten’s perspectives more effectively, offering insights that are both refreshing and confronting. His personal experience with heartbreak adds a layer of empathy and understanding to his interactions with Kirsten, enhancing his ability to support her emotionally. Rooted in his own experiences of heartbreak and renewal, he offers her a unique perspective on the transformative power of changing one’s environment.
Intentional: Hallworth catalyzes Kirsten’s transformation by challenging her to rethink her life and the spaces she inhabits. Hallworth sees through illusions and pretenses, always seeking the truth and substance in any situation. He is not easily swayed by appearances and is often skeptical of anything that does not meet their strict definitions of reality. He encourages her to make bold decisions in redecorating the mansion, which serves as a metaphor for her internal transformation. Driven by a desire to help Kirsten break free from her past, his approach transcends physical changes, urging her to alter her perceptions and emotional attachments.
Intentional: Hallworth provides moral guidance and support. He protects and aids Kirsten on her journey towards emotional and physical transformation, ensuring that each step she takes is aligned with her goal of reimagining her life.
JESSE
Character: Jesse, Kirsten’s callous but evil ex-husband, wealthy businessman, had a midlife crisis and affair, agreed to the divorce, he wants to be amicable with his wife as they still share a daughter in college.
Role: Antagonist – Jesse disrupts Kirsten’s journey towards emotional independence. His recurring visits to the mansion stir unresolved feelings and challenge Kirsten’s efforts to redefine her life.
Journey: Jesse represents stasis rather than change. He is a consistent presence and a thorn in Kirsten’s side, embodying the challenges she faces in moving forward. His disruptions are impactful because they occur in a space filled with shared memories, making it harder for Kirsten to detach.
Unique: Jesse’s role as the ex-husband, intertwined with the physical space of the mansion, adds a tangible layer to the emotional conflict. He helped design and decorate the dream house with Kirsten and designer Susie Marlow, so his influence lingers in most aspects of the home, and some areas like the garage, gym, hot tub, and fountain epitomize his presence.
Intentional: Jesse embodies the past Kirsten is trying to escape. His presence is a constant reminder of their former life together, thus directly opposing her goal of moving on.
Contrasting Lifestyle Post-Divorce: Jesse epitomizes the notion of a husband who, now free from his marital home, quickly moves on. With his half of the marital property not tied up in the equity of the house, he rents a furnished bachelor pad, dates actively, and enjoys vacations around the world with a new girlfriend. This lifestyle starkly contrasts with Kirsten’s more introspective and challenging post-divorce experience. The narrative may include scenes where Kirsten, either through looking at Jesse’s Facebook or hearing from friends, learns about his new life. These moments highlight the disparity in their post-divorce experiences and add to Kirsten’s emotional turmoil. The film focuses on Jesse’s life only when he interacts with Kirsten at the mansion, maintaining the narrative’s focus on her perspective and journey.
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Linda’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision is: I will do whatever it takes to be a sought-after profound writer who has many successful movies produced and an Oscar on the mantel.
What I learned from doing this assignment is it gave me more clarity about who my characters are.
Protagonist: Joaquin
Joaquin (protagonist) is a scout for the cartel and the son of the kingpin’s former #2. He wants out of the cartel but knows he will be killed if he tries to leave.
• Role: Joaquin is a scout for the cartel and the son of the kingpin’s former right-hand man.
• Journey: Joaquin is on a transformational journey from a peaceful, reluctant cartel member to a decisive leader, forced to engage in the cartel’s brutal competition to protect his family and ultimately dismantle the cartel from within.
• Unique: Joaquin's internal conflict between his inherent pacifism and the violent world he inhabits adds depth to his character. His dual identity as a cartel scout and a protective family man makes him a complex protagonist.
• Intentional: Joaquin’s background as the son of a former cartel leader gives him inside knowledge and the necessary connections to navigate the cartel’s hierarchy. His peaceful nature juxtaposed with the violent cartel environment emphasizes the theme of personal sacrifice and transformation under pressure.Antagonist: Arturo
Arturo (antagonist) is #3 in the cartel and has a hidden vendetta against Joaquin who married the woman that he covets.
• Role: Arturo is third in command in the cartel and harbors a deep resentment and envy towards Joaquin.
• Journey: Arturo’s journey is marked by his cunning and ruthless maneuvers to ascend in the cartel’s ranks, using any means necessary to thwart Joaquin’s rise and seize leadership for himself.
• Unique: Arturo’s obsession with Joaquin’s wife and his vindictive nature make him a compelling and unpredictable antagonist. His actions are driven by personal vendettas as much as by ambition.
• Intentional: Arturo’s position in the cartel and his personal vendetta against Joaquin make him the perfect disruptor in Joaquin’s life. His cunning and ruthlessness heighten the stakes, making his confrontations with Joaquin inevitable and explosive.Triangle Character: Dante
Dante (triangle) is #2 in the cartel and will stop at nothing to be the next kingpin.
• Role: Dante is second in command and fiercely determined to become the next kingpin, viewing the competition as his rightful path to power.
• Journey: Dante is embroiled in a brutal contest for leadership, willing to commit horrific acts to secure his position. His journey intersects and clashes with Joaquin’s, as both vie for the same role but with different intentions.
• Unique: Dante’s relentless ambition and willingness to go to any lengths set him apart as a formidable player in the cartel’s deadly game. His ruthlessness contrasts sharply with Joaquin’s reluctant involvement.
• Intentional: Dante’s role as the #2 in command and his unyielding ambition serve to escalate the conflict and tension within the story. His aggressive tactics and clear motive to win at all costs provide a stark counterpoint to Joaquin’s more reluctant approach.-
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Bill Curley Intro to Lead Characters
Vision: To someday soon be recognized and vetted within this industry..
Learned: Character development with emotional journals is critical. AI can be an assist in this requirement.
Protagonist: Small town USA female police office Lisa Rawlins, 37, attractive intuitive.Unique: Street smart from her youth in crime torn Detroit, Lisa Rawlins brings forth a set of compassion coupled with a keen intuition to her role as a small community police officer.
Antagonist: Northwoods real estate magnate Jack Banister, 46, powerful, handsome is a threat to any undeveloped parcel.
Unique: Banister has a presence that overwhelms his opponents and competition. From bribes to payouts you best watch out if he shows up in your town.Genre: Horror
Title: ” The Bog”.
Theme: A powerful, unscrupulous real estate developer illegally gains title to a beautiful but troubled parcel of Northwoods land unleashing a 1000 year old Viking curse.A local police office begins to suspect the developer,s actions and learns that his development is on the same exact location Vikings were massacred by Indians a millenia ago.
Associated Characters: Dishonest local Town Board Chairman. Local Police Chief. High school football players. Local librarian.Subplot suggested by AI: Female police officer investigates real estate developer after weird events at construction site.
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Dawn C Crouch’s Intentional Lead Characters
I will write three-dimensional stories that connect and resonate with many people.
What I learned from this assignment is to choose interrelated yet believable characters.
Title: Grit in the Oyster
Genre: Drama
Concept – • When an oil spill in the Gulf threatens to destroy a family’s seafood livelihood, a rough oyster fisherman approaches his estranged son for help.
1. Character: Protagonist – James Fontenot
Logline: After his family supported his higher education, college, and law school, James is called upon to return to the bayou and represent the community when an oil spill threatens the oyster industry.
Unique: James never wanted to become a lawyer but harbors a love of haute cuisine.
2. Character: Enes Xavier Fontenot
Logline: Enes Xavier is a hardworking, hard-drinking oyster fisherman who regards his son James with disapproval and disdain. He harbors intense grief for James’ mother, who passed many years before, and he resents the young man’s education and resemblance to his mother.
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3. Character: Antagonist – Odette Carvel
Logline: Odette, the lead attorney for the oil company, believes money can solve everything.
Unique: She is a hard-shell crab who softens in the environs of the bayou.-
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Pam’s Intentional Characters
Vision: Become a Writing Athlete
What I've learned: I switched things up because I wanted more drama economyCharacter: Maia
Logline: After selling her company, Maia talked into visiting spa to look for her next incarnation not realizing she will be fighting for her life
Unique: driven in business and now at loose ends, loyal, skeptical, good at gamesCharacter: Dr. Kari
Logline: Owns a euthanasia “spa” and black market businesses is threatened by the new guest, Maia, who has eyes for her new research doctor
Unique: brilliant, manipulative, must-win, plays to the worst in people by acting angelicCharacter: Dr. Brant
Logline: After accepting a too-good-to-be-true business offer from Dr. Kari to finish his longevity research, he meets and woos Maia while also dodging advances from his new boss, Dr. Kari
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Vision: I am paid to write screenplays that become successful movies. My process is so solid I can enjoy my equestrian hobby while exceeding expectations with my writing.
What I learned doing this assignment is that need to just follow the steps. I also need to be prepared to rewrite what the AI generates to better incorporate my vision. Also, I will need to ensure that the two antagonists serve as protagonists for each other. That they clash and challenge each other throughout the story.
Title = freaky fusion swap
Genre = sci-fi comedy
High Concept = An alien crashes into an off-the-grid hippie’s house and they accidentally swap bodies.Give us a logline (one sentence answer) for your protagonist, antagonist, and triangle character (if you have one) to the question, “What makes this character fit my concept and title powerfully?”
3. Tell us what makes each of these characters unique. These two steps will look like this:
• Character: Bill – protagonist1.
• Logline: Bill is an alien whose spaceship crashes into earth and swaps bodies with Misa.
• Unique: He graduated last in his flight school class and got sent on this mission because he’s expendable.
• Character: Misa – protagonist2.
• Logline: Misa lives off the grid and swaps bodies with Bill when he crashes into her home.
• Unique: Misa hates all rules and authority figures, math, and plastic but loves her cats and marijuana plants.
• Character: Deputy Rhoades – antagonist
• Logline: Deputy Rhoades regularly checks on Misa as he suspects her of a variety of illegal activities.
• Unique: spent time in rehabAttempt 2:
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Title: Freaky Fusion Swap
Please create the lead characters for this [genre] feature screenplay about [concept] and these [characters]. For this story, please give us two Protagonists, and an Antagonist. Please tell us their [journey] and what makes them [unique].
PROTAGONIST: This is the character the story is about. They are going on the Transformational Journey (next lesson) and the audience will feel deeply connected to them. Often, the concept gives their overall journey.
ANTAGONIST: This character’s whole purpose is to disrupt the Protagonist’s journey. They may be their enemy who is trying to kill them or friend who doesn’t want them to succeed because it will ruin their friendship.
INTENTIONAL = What makes this character perfect to deliver the story powerfully — such as their background, profile, skills, connections, education, position, or some special way they contribute to the story? The character serves the story, genre, concept, and theme, and plays their role in the story. Drives the story and delivers on the arc of the story.
With each character, tell us the following: Character: Role: Journey: Unique: Intentional: Genre = sci-fi comedy Title = Freaky Fusion Swap Concept = An alien crashes into an off-the-grid hippie’s house and they accidentally swap bodies. Characters = Character 1: Bill – protagonist1. Logline: Bill is an alien whose spaceship crashes into earth and swaps bodies with Misa. Unique: He graduated last in his flight school class and got sent on this mission because he’s expendable. Character 2: Misa – protagonist2. Logline: Misa lives off the grid and swaps bodies with Bill when he crashes into her home. Unique: Misa hates all rules and authority figures, math, and plastic but loves her cats and marijuana plants. Character 3: Deputy Rhoades – antagonist Logline: Deputy Rhoades regularly checks on Misa as he suspects her of a variety of illegal activities. Unique: spent time in rehabCharacter 1: Bill (Protagonist 1)
Role: Alien whose spaceship crashes into Earth.
Journey: Bill’s journey revolves around understanding humanity and Earth’s customs as he navigates life in Misa’s body. He starts as a clueless outsider but gradually learns empathy and the value of human connections. He transforms from wanting to hide on earth to realizing he needs to return to his home planet.
Unique: Bill’s unique aspect is his incompetence and lack of conventional alien skills. He often creates chaos unintentionally, making his journey both humorous and heartfelt.
Intentional: Bill’s background as a low-performing graduate from flight school adds humor and relatability to his character, making him an endearing and comedic protagonist perfect for a sci-fi comedy.
Character 2: Misa (Protagonist 2)
Role: Off-the-grid hippie living in a remote area.
Journey: Misa’s journey is about embracing responsibility and understanding the importance of rules and structure, all while dealing with the bizarre situation of being in an alien’s body.
Unique: Misa’s disdain for authority and love for unconventional things like marijuana plants and her cats make her a quirky and rebellious character. Her journey involves reconciling her free-spirited nature with the responsibilities that come with Bill’s alien identity. She transforms from wanting to be alone with her cats to needing to connect with other humans.
Intentional: Misa’s unique lifestyle and personality clash with Bill’s alien nature, creating comedic and poignant moments that drive the story’s themes of acceptance and personal growth.
Character 3: Deputy Rhoades (Antagonist)
Role: Local deputy suspicious of Misa’s activities.
Journey: Deputy Rhoades’ journey involves uncovering the truth about Misa and Bill’s body swap while dealing with personal struggles, possibly related to his time in rehab.
Unique: Deputy Rhoades’ background in law enforcement and his personal challenges add depth to his character, making him more than just a typical antagonist. His suspicions and actions create obstacles for Bill and Misa, adding tension and conflict to their journey.
Intentional: Deputy Rhoades’ role as an antagonist serves to heighten the stakes and provide a catalyst for character development in both Bill and Misa. His presence adds a layer of intrigue and danger to the sci-fi comedy narrative, keeping the audience engaged and invested in the story’s twists and turns.
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David Z's Intentional Characters
Vision:I am an interesting, dependable, successful writer that people love to work with.
WHAT I LEARNED: Solidifying intentional characters for my story
CHARACTER: Tessa/Protagonist
LOGLINE: Committed to her healthy lifestyle but loves her brother so much she would do anything – even overdose.
UNIQUE: In a small town decimated by drug deaths she is determined to be healthy and make a difference
CHARACTER: MICK/ANTAGONIST:
LOGLINE: Committed to being a famous model he'll do anything, even push drugs to his girlfriend's brother
UNIQUE: He's the major problem with this dying city: selling drugs and killing the youth
CHAT GPT FEEDBACK:
Character: TessaRole: Protagonist
Journey: Tessa begins as a young woman dedicated to staying clean in a city ravaged by the effects of Devil Dust, a deadly drug. Her journey takes a drastic turn when her brother, whom she loves dearly, falls victim to the drug's allure. Tessa's resolve to keep herself and her brother away from the drug is tested as she faces the gut-wrenching choice of either descending into the dangerous world of drugs to save him or trying to preserve her own life and sanity.
Unique: Tessa's uniqueness lies in her unwavering determination to protect her brother, even if it means sacrificing her own principles and safety. She is a complex character who struggles with the moral dilemma of saving her brother while risking her own well-being. Tessa's strength and vulnerability make her a compelling protagonist whom the audience can empathize with and root for throughout her journey.
Intentional: Tessa's character is intentionally crafted to embody the internal conflict and moral complexities inherent in the story's theme of sacrifice and redemption. Her journey serves as the emotional core of the narrative, driving the plot forward and compelling the audience to contemplate the lengths one would go to for the ones they love.
Character: Mick
Role: Antagonist
Journey: Mick is a charismatic and ambitious young man who sees Devil Dust not only as a means to achieve his own goals but also as a tool to manipulate others, including Tessa's brother, into furthering his own agenda. His journey revolves around his relentless pursuit of success and recognition in the modeling world, even if it means exploiting vulnerable individuals and perpetuating the cycle of addiction.
Unique: What sets Mick apart is his calculated manipulation and willingness to do whatever it takes to get ahead, even if it means sacrificing the well-being of others. His charm and persuasive abilities make him a formidable antagonist who poses a constant threat to Tessa and her brother. Mick's backstory and motivations add depth to his character, highlighting the darker aspects of ambition and greed.
Intentional: Mick's character serves as a stark contrast to Tessa, embodying the corrupting influence of ambition and addiction. His actions propel the conflict forward, serving as the primary obstacle to Tessa's quest to save her brother. Mick's presence heightens the tension and stakes of the story, forcing Tessa to confront her own demons and make difficult choices in order to protect the ones she loves.
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Farrin Rosenthal’s Intentional Lead Characters
Farrin’s Vision: To do what it takes to become a highly paid A-List Hollywood writer whose produced movies will entertain audiences around the world.
What I learned doing this assignment are the rules for great lead characters. These characters must uniquely fit and deliver the story powerfully.
Character: Eleanor "Rose" Turner
Logline: Rose, a refined 19th Century college student, forms the "Shadows of Justice" to avenge her father's murder.
Unique: Her journey makes her unique because she must go from co-ed to killer as she seeks justice.Character: Calvin Stone
Logline: Calvin, the ruthless leader of an outlaw gang, murders the Sheriff (Rose's father), and takes over a mining town that recently struck gold!
Unique: He is a bad-ass, power-hungry, greedy bastard who will let nothing stand in his way for total control of the town.-
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Bonnie's Vision for Success: Do the assignments! Write a great marketable script and get it produced.
What I learned from doing this assignment is… how powerful the state to action empowers me to spring into action.Title: ALIENS ON A PLANE
Genre: Sci-Fi Comedy
High Concept: Three ET travel agents compete fiercely for dominance in the multidimensional vacations market on their distant planet. During a critical demonstration of their latest technologies, time travel, teleportation, and multidimensional holidays, a malfunction occurs, propelling them and their three tourists into a commercial airline mid-flight over present-day U.S.A.
Character: Xiola
Role: Protagonist
Journey: Xiola, a covert special ops time travel explorer from the future, is tasked with investigating the three ET travel agents suspected of causing the glitch that landed them all on the plane mid-flight.Unique: Xiola’s unique background as a time traveler from the future gives her a distinct perspective on the events unfolding around her.
Intentional: Xiola’s expertise in time travel and investigation makes her the perfect protagonist to unravel the mystery behind the malfunction and thwart the antagonist’s plans.Character: Zartuuf
Role: Antagonist
Journey: Zartuuf, an ET travel agent, is determined to sabotage his competitors and monopolize the multidimensional tourist trade.
Unique: Zartuuf’s constant struggle with his ET pet gizdink adds a comedic element to his character, highlighting his flaws and vulnerabilities in amusing ways.
Intentional: Zartuuf’s background as a ruthless businessman and his connections within the intergalactic tourism industry make him the perfect antagonist to challenge Xiola.Character: Mizdrok
Role: Triangle Character
Journey: Mizdrok, an ET tourist from a different planet, finds themselves entangled in the chaos of the malfunction that lands them on the plane mid-flight.
Unique: Mizdrok’s androgynous nature and fluid identity add depth and complexity to their character, highlighting themes of self-acceptance and authenticity.
Intentional: Mizdrok’s outsider perspective on love and relationships provides a unique lens through which other characters may view gender identity and freedom in loving relationships. -
Chuck’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I am a writer/director known for a particular brand of storytelling, in both comedies and dramas, that greatly appeal to their respective markets. I have Studios, Producers, and Actors wanting to work with me.
What I learned from this assignment: AI is great for helping to flush out the characters! It will save me weeks on each script.
Character Profiles for "Cat Town"
Characters for the feature screenplay "Cat Town"
1. Protagonist: Dr. Tom Walker
Role: Protagonist
Logline: TOM, 35, a former scientist is now a small-town veterinarian, single, easy going, unassuming, with an understanding and empathy for both human and animal behavior. He prefers a simple, uncomplicated life which is partially why he dropped out of the high-pressure scientific world. He is an ex-lover of Katheryn (Katy) Wells who he has not seen since they broke up after graduate school. His background is the perfect balance for working with Katy to solve the cat-virus crisis.Unique: Tom’s deep understanding of animal behavior and his empathy for both animals and humans make him uniquely suited to unravel the mystery of the cat virus and his demeanor is the perfect balance for Katy as a partner.
2. Antagonist: Dr. Klaus Von Furbol
Role: Antagonist
Logline: Dr. Klaus Von Furbol is a former professor from the university that both Tom and Katy attended for graduate studies. Though he was a leading expert in viruses carried by animals, a scandal deemed unethical forced him to resign in disgrace. Yet he now lives in an impressive palatial estate, with security, deep in the woods outside of the town of Limestone Springs where the cat virus breakout has occurred. Conincidence?Unique: Von Furbol’s expertise in viruses transmitted from animals to humans gives him the ability to create a believable and scientifically plausible threat. His transformation from a mentor to a nemesis adds layers to his character.
3. Triangle Character: Dr. Kathryn (Katy) Wells
Role: Triangle Character/ Co-Protagonist
Logline: Dr. Katheryn (Katy) Wells is a very successful, celebrity virologist, and foremost expert in her field when it comes to viruses transmitted by animals to humans. She is a type A, career driven, workaholic woman who loves the spotlight, often appearing on TV as an expert, and has never been able to give the time that a relationship requires – just part of the reason she and Tom split up after graduate school.Unique: As a top virologist, Kathryn’s career-driven, Type-A personality contrasts with Tom’s more empathetic, community-oriented approach, creating dynamic conflict and a compelling love interest.
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Vision: to sell this script and several others and get a manager this year.
What I learned is that the non-specificity of AI can help keep the story general until later when theme, character and plot congeal.Sheriff Walter Egan
• Role: Protagonist
• Journey: Walter is torn between his duty as sheriff to uphold the law and paternal instincts that overwhelm his shame and despair when confronting the truth.
• Unique: Walter’s moral ambiguity and his past misdeeds contribute to the story’s tension, making him a complex figure whose true intentions are hard to decipher.
• Intentional: His layered personality and reformed persona are instrumental in unfolding the mystery and moral dilemmas at the heart of the plot.
Emily Mercer
• Role: Antagonist
• Journey: Emily struggles with her dilemma – does she defend or attack the man she believes ruined her life. Her fate seems to be in the hands of Walter but he must convince that what happened to her was partly her doing.
• Unique: Emily’s deep sense of guilt and despair conflict with her sense of family and protecting her sister from the law.
• Intentional: Emily serves as Walter conscience and the narrative drive to confron the demons that have haunted her family for year.
Morris, Emily’s half brother
Role: dramatic triangle,
Journey: Morris serves as a resentful judge and jury over the fate of Walter and even Emily propelled with a sense of outrage over understanding and condemnation over sacrifice.
Unique: Ultimately, Walter and Emily must overcome Morris’ outer failings to address their inner wounds.
Intentional: Morris wants to control the evolution of exposed raw feelings but he will go too far and end up condemning himself. -
Hari’s Intentional Lead Characters
My Vision: I want to write screenplays that enable me to work with like minded creative people in the industry to produce profound movies that will have a long lasting positive effect on the world.
What I learned…I want to change my character structure to Dramatic Triangle!
Protagonist: Colt McBride
Logline: A big city cop who is drawn into a water controversy between a multinational corporation and a small mountain town only to find that a hostile alien race has morphed into human form and is behind it.
Unique: Even though he is on suspension from his own police force, as an outsider, he is the only one willing to challenge Del Beck’s authority.Antagonist: Del Beck
Logline The corrupt sheriff who rules Jefferson County with an iron fist..
Unique: He is the leader of the alien invasion force and is also Jamaica’s Godfather.Triangle Character: Jamaica Daly
Logline: Jamaica Daly comes from one of the county’s oldest families. She is a successful real estate agent in the town, known for her charm, persuasive skills, and deep knowledge of the local area. She specializes in high-end properties, which often involve properties near water sources and other key locations.
Unique: Jamaica is married to the judge hearing the case. She doesn’t realize that she is the offspring of a human- alien marriage and must perform a renewal ritual involving the water or she will die. -
Tom’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision is to write the best possible fascinating characters.
Doing this assignment I learned to make the characters conform to the Concept guidelines.
Afghan scientist Sara is the Protagonist who needs to get her PhD in the U.S. to find a cure for a disease killing her people including her mother.
Claude: Protagonist: Sara Ahmed
Role: The Afghan scientist at the center of the story’s conflict.
Journey: Sara’s journey is one of sacrifice and moral dilemma. She must choose between her scientific ambitions to find a cure for a deadly disease ravaging her people, and compromising her principles by marrying a man she does not love, who is withdrawing troops from Afghanistan for his own political gain.
Unique: As an Afghan woman in a male-dominated society, Sara’s determination to pursue her scientific goals and her willingness to make difficult choices in the face of impossible circumstances make her a compelling and unique protagonist.
Intentional: Sara’s background as a brilliant scientist and her deep connection to her homeland and its people make her the perfect character to drive this story. Her expertise and passion for finding a cure give her a clear goal, while her cultural ties and moral compass create the internal conflict that propels the drama.
Antagonist: General Ratkin
Role: The U.S. general who withdraws troops from Afghanistan to further his political ambitions, using Sara as a means to an end.
Journey: Ratkin’s journey is one of power and self-interest. He is willing to abandon his military duties and manipulate Sara for his own political gain, seeking the presidency at any cost.
Unique: As a high-ranking military officer with political aspirations, Ratkin represents the intersection of power, ambition, and corruption, making him a formidable and morally compromised antagonist.
Intentional: Ratkin’s position as a general and his decision to withdraw troops from Afghanistan create the central conflict and dilemma for Sara. His selfish motivations and willingness to use Sara as a pawn make him the perfect antagonist to challenge her principles and drive the story's dramatic tension.
Connecting Character: Matt Brown
Role: Sara’s secret lover and Ratkin’s security chief, caught between his loyalty to Ratkin and his love for Sara.
Journey: Matt’s journey is one of divided loyalties and moral choices. He must navigate the dangerous web of deception and conflicting interests between Sara and Ratkin, ultimately deciding where his true allegiances lie.
Unique: As both Sara’s lover and Ratkin’s trusted confidant, Matt occupies a unique position that allows him to witness the conflict from both sides, creating a compelling dramatic triangle.
Intentional: Matt’s dual roles as Sara’s lover and Ratkin’s security chief make him the perfect connecting character. His conflicted loyalties and insider knowledge of both Sara’s and Ratkin’s motivations create tension and drive the story’s dramatic complications.-
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Becky's Intentional Lead Characters
I am an extraordinary writer – prolific, produced, profound, joyful, and well-paid – who writes stories that entertain and inspire.
What I learned from doing this assignment is, the story is actually a triangle, not antagonist/protagonist. And wow, it sure is helpful to use AI.Concept:
"Die Hard in a gold mine. When a treasure hunter covertly buys an abandoned gold mine under a touristy mountain community, residents resist its reopening. Mercenaries storm the town to open the mine and get the gold."
Characters:
1. Protagonist: Daytona Levesque
○ Role: Protagonist
○ Journey: Daytona, a former Navy SEAL, returns to his hometown for Christmas and is thrust into a battle against mercenaries who seek to reopen an abandoned gold mine. Throughout the story, Daytona confronts his troubled past, including his estranged relationship with his father, and ultimately must choose between reconnecting with his father or saving the town from an ancient evil.
○ Unique: Daytona’s military background gives him the skills necessary to lead the townspeople in their defense. His personal struggle with his past, including his strained relationship with his father, adds depth and emotional weight to his character.
○ Intentional: Daytona’s expertise in combat and strategy is crucial for the town’s defense. His internal conflict and growth throughout the story drive the emotional core of the narrative, making him a relatable and compelling protagonist.
2. Antagonist: Joe Turner
○ Role: Antagonist
○ Journey: Joe Turner, a seasoned treasure hunter, has spent years searching for the legendary hidden chest of gold rumored to be buried deep within the mine. His obsession drives him to extreme measures, including hiring mercenaries to secure the mine. Joe’s journey is one of increasing desperation and moral decay as he sacrifices everything in his quest for treasure.
○ Unique: Joe’s relentless determination and obsession with the treasure set him apart as a driven and formidable antagonist. His personal connection to the town and hidden motives add layers to his character.
○ Intentional: Joe’s knowledge of the mine and its secrets, combined with his willingness to use force to achieve his goals, make him the perfect foil to Daytona. His personal vendetta and connection to the town deepen the conflict and stakes.
3. Connecting Character: Linda
○ Role: Connecting Character
○ Journey: Linda, the town historian and Joe Turner’s old flame, finds herself torn between her past with Joe and her current feelings for Daytona. As the conflict unfolds, Linda must navigate her emotions and decide where her loyalties lie. Her journey is one of self-discovery and empowerment as she plays a crucial role in uncovering the town’s history and secrets.
○ Unique: Linda’s deep knowledge of the town’s history and her personal connections to both Daytona and Joe make her a key figure in the story. Her internal struggle and evolving feelings add complexity and tension to the narrative.
○ Intentional: Linda’s role as the historian is vital in revealing the mine’s secrets and the ancient evil. Her relationships with both the protagonist and antagonist create a dynamic and emotionally charged love triangle, driving the interpersonal drama and heightening the stakes.
Summary:
Protagonist: Daytona Levesque
• Role: Former Navy SEAL
• Journey: Confronts his past and must choose between family and duty
• Unique: Military skills and personal struggle with his father
• Intentional: Leads the town’s defense and emotional core of the storyAntagonist: Joe Turner
• Role: Obsessive treasure hunter
• Journey: Driven by desperation and moral decay
• Unique: Relentless determination and personal connection to the town
• Intentional: Uses knowledge and force to pursue his goals, deepening conflictConnecting Character: Linda
• Role: Town historian and love interest
• Journey: Navigates her emotions and loyalties
• Unique: Knowledge of town’s history and connections to Daytona and Joe
Intentional: Reveals secrets, creates emotional tension, and heightens stakes-
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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 2: Intentional Lead Characters
Sylvia’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.What I learned from doing this assignment is…this exercise is excellent in refining the main characters without any fluff getting in the way.
Title = Identity Crises
Genre = Romantic Thriller
High Concept = An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
• Character: Protagonist: Hope
• Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
• Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband.• Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
• Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
• Unique: Joy was Hope’s friend in High School and Will’s best buddy from College.• Character: Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
• Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
• Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother.-
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