WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 3: The Transformational Journey

[David Wickenden]

David Wickenden Transformational Journey

Vision: I become a writer that the industry respects and wants to work with and it offers me challenges that helps me to continue to grow and be successful.

“What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”

The transformational journey is what causes audiences to watch movies over and over again.

State:

I’m completely capable…

Activity:

…at designing a great transformational journey for my Protagonist!

Concept: A family discovers they are the sacrificial heirs of an ancient cult tied to supernatural forces from the 1700s.

Protagonist: Eliza Blackwood

Arc Beginning:

o Does not believe in the supernatural.

o Only believes what she can see and touch.

o Realist.

o A follower. Allows her siblings to decide.

Arc Ending:

o Controls elements of magic.

o Decision maker.

o Leader.

o Takes the fight to the enemy.

Internal Journey:

o From complacent to a born leader.

o Indecisive to taking charge.

External Journey:

o An advocate for the dead witches.

o A kick-ass warrior.

Old Ways:

o Disbelieving of the occult.

o Indecisive.

o Happy to follow others.

New Ways:

o Take charge.

o Can wield the forces of magic.

o Courageous.

o Fighting to protect those who are unable to.

AI

Protagonist: Eliza Blackwood

Arc Begins: Eliza is a skeptic, relying on what she can see and touch. She follows others’ lead, especially her siblings, allowing them to make decisions for the family.

Arc Ends: Eliza embraces the supernatural elements surrounding her family’s curse. She becomes a decision-maker, leading the charge against the cult and taking control of the magical forces at play.

Internal Journey: Eliza’s internal journey involves a shift from skepticism to belief. She must confront her deep-seated mistrust and abandonment issues, learning to trust her instincts and embrace her family’s legacy.

External Journey: Externally, Eliza’s journey involves uncovering the secrets of the estate and battling the cult and its supernatural forces. She must go from being a follower to a leader, taking charge of her family’s fate.

Old Ways: Eliza starts as a follower, lacking belief in anything beyond the tangible. She allows others, particularly her siblings, to make decisions for her.

New Ways: By the end, Eliza becomes a leader, embracing the supernatural and taking control of her family’s destiny. She trusts her instincts and makes decisions based on her newfound beliefs.

[LJ (Lawrence John) Seliski]

LJ’s Transformational Journey

My vision is to write incredible high-concept screenplays that are made into popular, financially successful movies.

What I learned from doing this assignment is the importance of designing a great transformational journey for my Protagonist.

Mia’s Transformational Journey

Act 1:

Character Arc: Arc Begins: Mia Vance is a young woman haunted by her past as an abused foster child. She struggles with trust issues, keeping people at a distance to protect herself from potential harm. Arc Ends: Through her journey, Mia learns to confront her past, trust others, and open herself up emotionally. She evolves into a courageous and empathetic individual who is willing to risk everything to protect those she cares about.

Internal Journey: Mia’s internal journey begins with her deep-seated fear of vulnerability and attachment due to her traumatic past. As she forms a bond with the alien princess, she gradually learns to let go of her emotional barriers and embrace her capacity for empathy and connection.

External Journey: Externally, Mia’s journey involves her physical actions in rescuing and protecting the alien princess. She navigates through dangerous situations, outsmarting adversaries and overcoming obstacles to ensure the princess’s safety.

Old Ways: At the beginning of the story, Mia’s old ways manifest as her reluctance to trust others and her tendency to push people away. She harbors deep-seated anger and resentment towards her abusers, which fuels her desire to fight against injustice but also prevents her from forming meaningful connections.

New Ways: By the end of the story, Mia’s new ways are characterized by her willingness to trust others and form genuine connections. She lets go of her past traumas, finding strength in vulnerability and empathy. Mia emerges as a beacon of hope, committed to protecting the vulnerable and standing up for what is right.

Act 2:

Character Arc: Arc Begins: Mia’s journey intensifies as she faces greater challenges and dangers while protecting the alien princess. She grapples with doubts and fears, questioning her own abilities and convictions. Arc Ends: Through her trials and tribulations, Mia undergoes a transformation, emerging stronger and more determined than ever. She embraces her role as a protector and leader, finding purpose in her mission to safeguard the princess and prevent catastrophe.

Internal Journey: Mia’s internal journey deepens as she confronts her inner demons and insecurities. She wrestles with feelings of inadequacy and guilt, struggling to reconcile her past with her present actions. However, as she continues to fight for what she believes in, Mia gains confidence and self-assurance, ultimately accepting herself and her capabilities.

External Journey: Externally, Mia’s journey takes her to various locations and confrontations as she evades capture and thwarts the plans of her adversaries. She relies on her resourcefulness and courage to navigate through perilous situations, forging alliances and outmaneuvering her enemies along the way.

Old Ways: During the second act, Mia’s old ways resurface as she grapples with self-doubt and insecurity. She struggles to trust her instincts and make difficult decisions, haunted by the specter of her past traumas.

New Ways: By the climax of the story, Mia has shed her old insecurities and doubts, emerging as a confident and determined leader. She draws strength from her past experiences, using them to fuel her resolve and guide her actions. Mia’s newfound sense of purpose drives her towards victory, as she embraces her role as a protector and guardian.

Act 3:

Character Arc: Arc Begins: As Mia enters the final act, she is faced with the ultimate test of her courage and resolve. She must confront her greatest fears and adversaries, risking everything to protect the alien princess and prevent catastrophe. Arc Ends: In the climactic resolution, Mia completes her transformation, fully embracing her identity as a hero and protector. She achieves redemption for her past and finds peace within herself, knowing that she has made a difference in the world.

Internal Journey: Mia’s internal journey reaches its zenith as she confronts her deepest fears and insecurities head-on. She finds the strength to overcome her past traumas and embrace her true potential, becoming the hero she was always meant to be.

External Journey: Externally, Mia’s journey culminates in a final showdown with her adversaries, where she must use all of her skills and resources to emerge victorious. She faces overwhelming odds and impossible challenges but refuses to back down, driven by her unwavering determination to protect the princess and save the day.

Old Ways: At the beginning of the third act, Mia’s old ways threaten to resurface as she faces the greatest challenges of her journey. She is tempted to succumb to doubt and fear, questioning whether she has what it takes to succeed in her mission.

New Ways: In the climax of the story, Mia fully embraces her new identity as a hero and protector. She confronts her adversaries with courage and determination, refusing to let her past define her. Mia’s newfound sense of purpose guides her actions, leading to a triumphant victory and a brighter future for herself and those she cares about.

[Renee Miller]

Renee’s Transformational Journey

My Vision: I will be in the top 1% of screenwriters and be known in the industry as an A-list screenwriter who is easy to work with, gets the job done, and never has to worry about the next job.

What I learned doing this assignment is how to think about the transformational journey of the protagonist by thinking about their old ways and new ways. I can see how important it is to create the journey before writing a single scene so you have a good road map of scenes that you need to create to implement the transformational journey.

Character: Dr. Hope Thorn

Arc Beginning: She harbors guilt and fears over her past as a serial killer, which she conceals under a façade of control and care. She struggles to reconcile her past with her current identity.

Arc Ending: She acknowledges her actions to herself and her group and emerges as a more authentic leader who no longer hides behind her secrets but uses her experiences to empower others.

Internal Journey: She battles with self-doubt and guilt, but through the crisis within the group and confronting Felix, she learns to forgive herself and accept that her past doesn’t define her future.

External Journey: She is active in trying to solve the mysterious murders, protecting her members, and confronting Felix. She shifts from defensive strategies to protect her secret to proactive measures to protect her members.

Old Ways:

– she’s secretive

– cautious

– controlling of her environment and interactions to keep her past a secret.

– Uses her insights into the killer’s mind defensively to keep her façade and group in order.

New Ways:

– She embraces her past and uses it as a tool for teaching

– Empathizes with others

– Becomes open about her past

– Connects more genuinely with her members

– Leads with integrity and authenticity

[Michael Collado]

• Mike’s Transformational Journey
  My Vision is to write an original screenplay, make a couple of calls to pitch it, to start a bidding war.
  During this lesson, I learned how to influence Chat GPT to enhance the character’s journey arc and keep it pointing toward the concept. However, I still have to change aspects of the GPT response to keep things on track.
  Transformational Journey for Coach Jo in “Smart Ball”
  Character Arc
  Arc Begins: Coach Jo starts the story as a frustrated detective, suspended from the police force for confronting sexism in her workplace. She feels marginalized and questions her own value and identity outside the context of her job.
  Arc Ends: By the movie’s end, Coach Jo emerges as a confident and innovative leader. She not only excels in her unexpected role as a coach but also reaffirms her investigative skills by uncovering and resolving a significant corporate conspiracy. Jo learns to navigate different challenges, using her unique strengths to foster change and justice.
  Internal/External Journey
  Internal Journey:

• Initial State: Jo feels
  defeated and uncertain of her future, grappling with feelings of being
  undervalued and misrepresented.

• Development: Jo regains her self-confidence and sense of purpose as she coaches the team. She
  realizes her problem-solving skills are valuable in any context, not just
  police work.

• Resolution: Jo fully
  embraces her new identity as a leader and mentor, seeing her value beyond
  the badge. She feels empowered and ready to tackle injustice in any arena.

• External Journey:Initial State: Jo is in a
  state of career limbo, without a clear direction.

• Development: She takes on
  the role of a coach, applying her detective skills to both coaching and
  investigating the shady dealings of the corporate sponsors. She adapts her
  investigative skills to a new context, learning to apply scientific
  principles to coaching and her natural curiosity to uncover wrongdoing.

• Resolution: Jo
  successfully leads her team to victory in the league while exposing a
  dangerous corporate scheme, proving her leadership and detective skills in
  a public and impactful way.

• Old Ways and New Ways
  Old Ways:Jo approaches
  problems confrontationally, often leading to conflicts with authority. She
  feels constrained by the sexist structures of her workplace, leading to
  feelings of frustration and helplessness.

• She doubts the
  applicability of her skills outside her specific job role, fearing that
  her abilities are not transferrable or broadly valuable.

• New Ways:By the end of
  the film, Jo adopts a more strategic approach to problem-solving. She
  learns to work within systems to change them, using creativity and
  indirect methods to achieve her goals.

• Jo gains a new
  confidence in the versatility of her skills, understanding that her
  investigative talents can be a force for good in any context, not just
  police work. She sees herself as a multifaceted individual capable of
  inspiring and leading others in diverse situations.

[Christopher Confer]

My Vision:

When people watch the trailer for my movie, they have to watch the movie.

What I learned from doing this assignment is keep moving quickly, make decisions after giving it thought but don’t get into paralysis of analysis.

RETALIA NATION

Genre: Crime / Intrigue

Protagonist: Holly

Character Arc of Holly

Arc Begins:

At the start of Retalia Nation, Holly is a cunning and thrill-seeking shoplifting ring leader. She orchestrates elaborate thefts, not out of financial necessity but for the adrenaline rush. Holly is adept at manipulating situations and people to succeed in her heists, viewing the world of retail as her playground. She is detached from the consequences of her actions, seeing her activities as a challenging game rather than criminal behavior.

Arc Ends:

By the end of the movie, Holly transforms into a person who recognizes the real-world implications of her actions. She sees the harsh realities of her lifestyle, particularly after the execution of her protege, and the unsustainable nature of her thrill-seeking behavior. Holly decides to abandon her life of crime, opting to seek legitimate employment and contribute positively to society, valuing stability and safety over the thrill of the chase.

Internal/External Journey

Internal Journey:

Holly’s internal journey involves a growing realization of the moral and personal costs of her lifestyle. Initially, she enjoys the rush and ignores the risks, but as the story progresses, the stakes become too high. The turning point is the execution of her protege, which acts as a wake-up call, leading her to question her values and the kind of life she wants to lead.

External Journey:

Externally, Holly starts as a successful thief, always one step ahead of security. However, her actions lead to increased security measures and the establishment of Retalia Nation. Her protege’s capture and execution are direct results of her actions, pushing her towards a final heist that ultimately convinces her to quit. Her journey from a feared criminal to a potential employee looking for normalcy highlights her external transformation.

Old Ways/New Ways

Old Ways:

Holly is driven by ego and the excitement of outsmarting the system. She’s meticulous, bold, and emotionally detached, seeing her criminal activities as a complex game she’s destined to win. Her old ways are characterized by thrill-seeking, manipulation, and a disregard for the broader impact of her actions.

New Ways:

By the film’s conclusion, Holly adopts a more empathetic and responsible outlook. She becomes aware of the social and personal repercussions of her actions. Opting for a stable job signifies her new approach to life: seeking fulfillment through honest work and valuing community welfare over personal thrill. At least, she is considering it after she finally realizes how this cat and mouse game steals most of the joy out of her life.

[Madeleind Gentinetta]

Subject Line: Madeleine’s Transformational Journey

Vision: I am going to do whatever it takes for me to be a writer of original, emotionally rich stories, recognized for depth, humor, and enduring impact, resulting in financial, critical and audience success.

What I learned from doing this assignment is: it’s important to work out the detail as much as possible to get a good answer from AI.

Protagonist: Elderly Jazz singer Mary

Arc Beginning: An affected jazz band singer
Arc Ending: A taboo-buster (women having to hide their age) solo artist

Internal Journey: From age-denying and self-absorbed to self-accepting and finding her true advocating destiny.

External journey: From an average jazz band singer to an icon for exposing double standards for aging women.

Old Ways:

• Putting up façade by hiding behind make-up and dressing to hide age (high heels).
• Fearing death and denying aging resulting in being sarcastic about age.
• Feeling guilty about not being the mother type woman (wound) and avoiding social interaction.
• Arrogant and affected to hide low self-esteem and insecurity.
• Redirecting her frustration onto those less powerful, as she feels oppressed by authority figures.
• Hurting herself to please others and showing victimizing behavior.
• Drinking and smoking.

New Ways:

• Finding her self-worth in her talent, which is independent of look and age.
• Fighting publically for the higher cause (taboo buster) as solo artist.
• Accepting the fact that she is not the mother type and not apologizing for it.
• Facing the cycle of life with death being part of it.
• Knowing what’s good for her and not getting pressed into a scheme.
• Helping others in an honest way but not taking on a role that is not her.
• Taking good care of herself (health).

AI

Protagonist: Elderly Jazz singer Mary

Arc Beginning: A seasoned jazz singer obsessed with maintaining her youthful stage image.

Arc Ending: Becomes an inspiring figure who breaks industry stereotypes about aging.

Internal Journey: From denying her age and fearing obsolescence to embracing her life’s experiences and authentic self.

External Journey: From chasing the fading spotlight to becoming a trailblazer for age acceptance in the entertainment industry.

Old Ways:

• Hides behind the façade of makeup and glitz to mask her age.
• Sarcasm and denial about getting older, fearing the end of her relevance.
• Neglects genuine social connections due to not fitting the ‘maternal’ role society expects.
• Self-esteem is anchored in her stage persona, not her true self.

New Ways:

• Showcases her natural talent and wisdom gained with age, without the guise of youth.
• Publicly advocates against ageism, becoming a symbol of dignity for aging artists.
• Accepts her unique life choices, including her decision not to be a mother.
• Confronts her mortality with grace, integrating it into her artistry.
• Empowers others by embodying honesty and genuine connection, on and off stage.
• Embraces a healthier lifestyle that reflects her respect for herself.

[Kelly Joseph]

Kelly’s Transformational Journey

I want to be an empowered writer who consistently produces salable scripts.

What did I learn?I am learning that using A.I has helpedme to be more relaxed when generating ideas. My need for trying to be perfect or even good decreases and my just get it down goes up.

Character Arc for Avery:

Avery:

Arc Beginning: Avery is a reclusive hacker with deep-seated trust issues and agoraphobia, reluctant to engage with the outside world and clinging to her beliefs and perceptions.

Arc Ending: She emerges as a determined and courageous individual, willing to challenge the status quo and confront uncomfortable truths in her pursuit of justice and truth.

Internal Journey: Avery evolves from a fearful and isolated individual to a confident and resilient advocate for truth and justice. She learns to trust herself and others, overcoming her distrust and skepticism to embrace uncertainty and complexity.

External Journey: Initially a small-time hacker, Avery embarks on a perilous investigation to uncover the truth behind the AI program’s manipulation and her brother’s involvement in the violent acts. She navigates a dangerous web of deceit and danger, facing numerous obstacles and adversaries along the way. Through her actions and experiences, Avery learns to navigate the complexities of the digital world and confront the sinister forces at play.

Old Ways:

Ignorant of the true extent of the AI program’s manipulation.

Afraid and isolated, hiding from the world.

Lacked belief in herself and her abilities.

Accepted the dominance of the AI program and its influence on social media.

New Ways:

Gains insight into the AI program’s manipulative tactics and learns to see through its deception.

Develops courage and resilience, confronting her fears and standing up for what she believes in.

Becomes a proactive agent of change, fighting against the AI program’s control and advocating for truth and justice.

Embraces her own agency and ability to make a difference, no longer willing to accept the dominance of external forces over her life and actions.

[Robin Fellows]

WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 3: The Transformational Journey

Robin’s Transformational Journey

MY VISION: I aim to make my writing flow naturally, like second nature, crafting stories that resonate globally and leave a mark, backed by a supportive team who really get what I’m about.

What I learned was seeing the full character arc really helped me give life to my lead character way before writing a single sentence of the screenplay.

Character Arc for Jake Reynolds:

Arc Beginning: A detective with a case overload, addicted to mind numbing narcotics constantly self-medicating.

Arc Ending: Restored confidence solving a complicated case and enters rehabilitation for overcome his addiction.

Jake’s Internal/External Journey:

Internal Journey: From constant crutching on drugs and second guessing himself, to weaning off drugs and entering rehab with a newfound sense of confidence and pride.

External Journey: From a mediocre detective with a major case overload to solving a massive case against a powerful crime boss, revealing crooked politicians and internal corruption on the force.

Jake’s Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and Jake’s New Ways at the end.

Jake’s Old Ways: When the pressure is too much he resorts to numbing himself with drugs. He second guesses all his decisions. He’s very withdrawn from the outside and is a shut-in resistant to change for fear of getting hurt or better yet, fired.

Jake’s New Ways: He’s able to lead a team again, feels confident in his decisions, feels pride in his work, has weaned off drugs and accepts that he’s an addict and seeks medical treatment to fight his addictions. He accepts the wrongs of his past and moves beyond the hurtles that kept him behind.

Genre: Neo-Noir Mystery

Concept: In the gritty dystopian future of 2057 Los Angeles, Detective Jake Reynolds battles addiction while unraveling a high-profile murder case linked to a powerful criminal syndicate. Teaming up with data analyst Maya Chen and facing off against the cunning Veronica Blackwood, they unravel a conspiracy shrouded in secrecy and corruption.

Protagonist: Jake Reynolds

3 Act Structure:

Act 1: Jake Reynolds begins as a troubled detective battling addiction and haunted by a traumatic past. His journey is fraught with inner turmoil and external challenges as he grapples with his personal demons while investigating the murder case.

Act 2: Amidst the twists and turns of the investigation, Jake’s internal journey sees him confronting his addiction and facing his past head-on. His external journey is marked by moments of peril and revelation as he uncovers the layers of corruption within the criminal underworld, aided by Maya’s analytical expertise.

Act 3: By the conclusion of the story, Jake has undergone a profound transformation. He emerges as a resilient and determined hero, no longer defined by his addiction or haunted by his past. Through his relentless pursuit of justice and redemption, Jake not only solves the murder case but also finds inner peace and closure.

Old Ways: At the beginning of the movie, Jake is deeply entrenched in his addiction, using substances to cope with his trauma and numbing himself to the pain of his past. He is emotionally closed off, resistant to help, and plagued by self-doubt and guilt.

New Ways: By the end of the movie, Jake has overcome his addiction and confronted his past, allowing himself to feel and process his emotions instead of burying them. He has learned to trust others, embrace vulnerability, and find strength in his resilience and determination to seek justice.

Internal Journey: Jake’s internal journey is one of self-discovery and healing. He learns to confront his inner demons, face his past traumas, and find redemption through his pursuit of justice. Along the way, he discovers inner strength and resilience, ultimately finding peace and closure.

External Journey: Externally, Jake’s journey is marked by action and investigation as he navigates the gritty streets of dystopian Los Angeles, unravels the conspiracy behind the murder case, and confronts the powerful forces aligned against him. With Maya’s help, he uncovers crucial evidence.

[Elle Tracy]

Vision: My vision includes recognition for my best work, including money.

What I learned from this lesson is that thinking through the transformational journey of each character helps give them magnetism, to draw in audience members, instead of being flat. The journey may also be interesting to actors. Thx!

Journey of Roberta “Bee” Finch, a retired mechanical engineer.

Arc beginning undervalued, overlooked, frustrated, dismissed by society,.

Arc ending: Respected leader and mentor in her community, finds fulfillment in empowering others

Internal journey: From inadequate, useless, purposeless, self-doubt
to self-confident in her skills, believes in herself, and in her passion in innovation.

External journey: From fidgeting in boredom and sadness
to community leader in building the machine and overcoming obstacles, completing the machine and influencing the STEAM students with her enthusiasm for engineering.

Old ways

· Bored, plays computer games

· Watches too much TV

· Sits too much

· Doesn’t clean house

New ways

· Walks in the neighborhood

· Computer researches to learn

· Engages with other seniors

· Becomes useful to others

[Edward Lusk]

Ed Lusk’s transformational journey.

MY VISION is to be a bankable, reputable, and industry go-to writer who’s demonstrated how to entertain and hold an audience’s attention through unforgettable characters and stories that are as enjoyable to write as they are to watch.

What I learned doing this assignment is how all the components of the character’s transformational journey support the character’s development and journey, immediately adding conflict, intrigue, and drama, which will come into greater importance with outlining.

Character Arc for your Protagonist: HOWIE BELLAMY

Arc Beginning: Christmas-hating, heartbroken, pessimistic, retail store manager.

Arc Ending: Hopeful, joyful, open-hearted, new-found believer in love and Christmas magic

Internal/External Journey.

Internal Journey: Struggles with cynicism toward love and the fear of getting hurt again. The enchanting manor helps him dismantle his contempt for Christmas. He confronts his fears, learns to forgive, and ultimately embraces his positive feelings.

External Journey: Sad and Disgusted retail store manager, fixing the manor’s chimney portal, a metaphor for repairing his own broken heart, unfolding magical events providing a new perspective on love, family, and holiday spirit.

OLD WAYS:

• Hates all things Christmas
• Retail store manager
• Treats others badly
• Distrustful of others’ romantic intentions
• Isolated
• Guarded nature
• Pessimistic about relationships
• Selfish focus on his hurt feelings
• Overly protective of his family

NEW WAYS

• True believer in the Magic of Christmas
• Treats others with kindness
• Store owner
• Renewed belief in the unpredictability and beauty of love,
• Open to new experiences
• Unselfish approach to personal and family commitments.
• Greater emotional intelligence and a readiness to trust others.

[JOHN RAE]

John’s Transformational Journey

Vision: Aiming to excel in writing with a unique voice, my goal is to gain representation soon, see my films in production, and achieve financial independence, leading to an Oscar win, recognized for my impactful storytelling, and respected in the industry as a go-to writer for compelling narratives, blending creativity with a life surrounded by a supportive community.

What I learned is that I need to be intentional when crafting a character for my story.

Character Arc:

• Arc Beginning: Alex is a disillusioned, untrusting, suicidal heir who indulges in hedonistic pleasures to mask his feelings of inadequacy and failure.
• Arc Ending: Alex is grounded, confident, takes ownership, and values authentic relationships over material wealth.

Internal/External Journey.

• Internal Journey: Alex overcomes his self-loathing and distrust. Skeptical of others, he resists changes, but gradually confronts his own demons–fear of being unworthy and unloved.
• External Journey: Alex throws caution to the wind and engages in a bizarre claim that 8 yr old Charlie was his mom in a past life, but he discovers deceit which he ultimately embraces to formulate a plan to steal back a fortune that was swindled from him.

Old Ways/New Ways:

• Old Ways: Hides behind a facade of reckless behavior. His life is aimless, filled with superficial and exploitive people.
• New Ways: Alex exhibits trust and a sense of responsibility–becoming proactive, collaborative and emotionally intelligent.

[Pat Fitzgerald]

Pat Fitzgerald’s Transformational Journey

My vision is to complete this class with a contest winning script that will establish me as a courageous and talented writer.

What I learned from doing this assignment is that creating a black comedy protagonist almost takes an opposite approach to what a protagonist should be. In Myra’s world, she sees herself as the savior of the suffering, a very protagonist stance, but the twists and turns required in a dark comedy will make her end up more like the antagonist. Still, I am confident that I have chosen the right person for protaganist. AI gave me ideas as to how to make Myra a more well-rounded character which I will most likely use in the future. And I gave myself permission to proceed with confidence and to put perfection aside.

Myra Jenkins arc:

Beginning: Egotistical and confident she’s doing her cohorts a favor by putting them out of their misery. She finds twisted satisfaction in murder.

Arc ending: Questions her decisions to end the lives of others. Fearful someone may think she would benefit from a mercy killing.

Internal Journey: A sociopathic, always right mentality to realizing she had no right to play the role of a god with the lives of others.

External Journey: Extraordinarily healthy and physically fit to weakened by incurable disease (yet to be determined.)

Old ways: Outspoken, never wrong. An alpha, leader of the pack, must know everyone’s business. A creative killer.

New ways: Secretive and reclusive, paranoid. Realizes there is quality of life despite a serious illness.

[Brandi Hoffman]

Brandi’s transformative journey

Brandi’s vision: I want the creative freedom to attract an audience that is passionate about my films, and regularly deliver films that are commercially successful and leave my audience both delighted and eager for the next.

What I learned from doing this assignment: I’m a little unsure about the query. By myself, I created a decent character arc/ journey, but the AI generated one was a lot richer. Also, I’m able to pick and choose which ideas make more sense to my story. This allows me a richer story.

Arc Begins: At the beginning of the story, Mei Chang is a naive and ambitious young magician, eager to make a name for herself in the world of magic. However, she is also somewhat insecure and prone to lying, particularly to her parents in order to maintain financial support.

Arc Ends: By the end of the story, Mei has undergone a significant transformation. She has grown in confidence and maturity, learning the importance of honesty and integrity. Through her journey to uncover the truth behind her ex-boyfriend’s murder, Mei has become more resilient and resourceful, ultimately embracing her true self and her place in the magic community.

Improvement for Character Arc: To enhance Mei’s character arc, ensure that her growth is gradual and believable, with each obstacle she faces serving as a catalyst for change. Show moments of self-reflection and introspection where Mei confronts her flaws and learns from her mistakes, leading to a satisfying and impactful transformation by the story’s conclusion.

2. Internal/External Journey:

Internal Journey: Throughout the story, Mei undergoes a profound internal transformation, confronting her own insecurities and ethical dilemmas. She grapples with feelings of guilt and self-doubt as she navigates the murky waters of deception and betrayal. However, through her journey, Mei learns to trust herself and her instincts, ultimately finding the courage to confront the truth and stand up for what is right.

External Journey: Externally, Mei’s journey is marked by a series of challenges and obstacles as she races against time to solve the murder mystery. She encounters danger, deception, and unexpected twists and turns, all while trying to maintain her reputation and clear her name. Along the way, Mei must rely on her wits and resourcefulness to outsmart her adversaries and uncover the truth before it’s too late.

Improvement for Internal/External Journey: To enhance Mei’s internal journey, delve deeper into her emotional struggles and growth, showing the evolution of her character through meaningful interactions and pivotal moments. For the external journey, increase the stakes and tension by introducing new obstacles and complications that push Mei to her limits, testing her resolve and determination at every turn.

3. Old Ways/New Ways:

Old Ways: At the beginning of the movie, Mei’s old ways are characterized by her tendency to lie and deceive, both to herself and others. She relies on dishonesty as a crutch, fearing that the truth will reveal her insecurities and weaknesses. Mei’s old ways also include her naivety and lack of confidence, which often lead her into precarious situations.

New Ways: By the end of the movie, Mei’s new ways reflect her growth and transformation. She has shed her old habits of deceit and self-doubt, embracing honesty and integrity as guiding principles. Mei no longer hides behind a facade but instead faces the world with courage and authenticity, unafraid to confront the truth and stand up for justice.

Improvement for Old Ways/New Ways: To strengthen Mei’s character development, ensure that her old ways are consistently challenged and confronted throughout the story, leading to meaningful changes in her behavior and mindset by the end. Show concrete examples of Mei breaking free from her old patterns and embracing her new identity, reinforcing the themes of growth and self-discovery in a satisfying and resonant way.

[Deni sher]

VISION: The essence of my vision is to become an A-list writer, respected in the industry and in high demand by producers for the quality of my work.

What I learned from doing his assignment is how important it is to consider the protagonists transformational journey before ever writing the script and to make sure you build this into how the character acts and speaks to show their arc through not just words, but through actions and subtext.

I am completely capable to design a great transformational journey for my protagonist.

CHARACTER ARC FOR PROTAGONIST – Mimi Sinclair

Arc Beginning: Emotionally drained wife of barista who dreams of being a screenwriter.

Arc Ending: Emotionally fulfilled, she writes this script, “Brewed Awakenings”

Internal Journey:

From sad, frustrated, timid and fearful to an extraverted, confident, successful, business woman.

External Journey:

From an unfulfilled wife in her husband’s shadow as a barista to a leader in the community and a produced screenwriter.

Old Ways:

Caregiver to her husband

Sad that her husband is ill

Resigned to just working in her husband’s café called, “Cuppa Joe”

Didn’t believe in supernatural qualities of any coffee beans

Never believed their beans had any special powers

Resigned that she’ll never follow her dreams as a screenwriter

Estranged relationship with her son.

Given up on son ever working in café

Didn’t usually interface with the customers

New Ways:

Has found closure on losing her husband

Loves working in her café

She embraces the supernatural

Uses café as a conduit to help others and herself

Changes name from “Cuppa Joe” to” Brewed Awakenings”

Has bonded with her son and brought him into the business

Courageous in her battle to save “Brewed Awakenings”

Sets time aside to help others to find closure of their loved ones

She and her son work together to save “Brewed Awakenings”

[Kathryn Gould]

Kathryn’s Transformational Journey

I want to be a highly creative and energized writer who makes big movies and loves her life working with the most creative people in the world.

What I learned: Starting with this transformational journey will make sure that my characters and the story are moving and emotional.

Arc Beginning: Japheth is a small time biohacker only interested in improving himself and his friends and helping his sister.

Arc Ending: He has come to see the interconnectedness of humanity and is willing to risk his life to save even the people who were awful to him.

Internal Journey: He goes from being selfish and only interested in his small group to loving all of humanity.

External Journey: He goes from small time hacker to saving millions of lives and instigating change in the entire society.

Old Ways: ignorant of his mentor’s plans – hating the “upper world” – only interested in his small group – bitter and angry

New Ways: realizing that his mentor’s plan is wrong even though it helps him and his group – willing to risk his life to save not only people he doesn’t know but people who treated him and his friends terribly – responsible and humane

Here’s what I got from AI after telling it to take his sister’s storyline and the unjust world into account:

Revised Character Arc for Japheth Bridges

Arc Begins: Japheth Bridges is a gifted biohacker driven by a personal mission: to heal his sister, born with spina bifida, and to transcend his own physical limitations. Living in a world where advanced nanotech healthcare is a luxury only the wealthy can afford, Japheth harbors a deep-seated resentment against the socio-economic system that keeps life-saving technology out of reach for the majority, including his impoverished family. Initially, his motivations are deeply emotional and somewhat vengeful, fueled by the desire to subvert a system that favors the elite.

Arc Ends: By the story’s conclusion, Japheth has evolved from a revenge-driven hacker to a visionary leader who sees beyond his personal grievances. He understands that his abilities can be used not just for personal gain or immediate family relief, but for larger societal reform. Japheth emerges as a champion for equitable access to technology, advocating for policies and practices that prevent the exploitation of the vulnerable. He still seeks to protect and heal but does so through creating a more just system rather than merely circumventing the existing one.

Improvement Suggestions for Character Arc:

1. Introduce early in the narrative the stark contrasts between the healthcare his sister receives and that available to the elite, emphasizing the injustice.

2. Illustrate his initial radical actions against the system as misguided attempts to bring immediate change, which evolve into more strategic, impactful actions as he matures.

Revised Internal/External Journey

Internal Journey: Internally, Japheth struggles with anger and frustration towards a system that prioritizes wealth over health. His journey involves overcoming his initial impulses for personal vendetta and realizing that true change requires systemic transformation. He must reconcile his personal desires with the broader need for social justice, leading to a significant maturation of his worldview.

External Journey: Externally, Japheth’s journey involves using his biohacking skills initially to clandestinely treat his sister and improve his physical capabilities. As he confronts the global conspiracy, his journey becomes a crusade against Medinano’s exploitative practices, transforming his personal rebellion into a public revolution. His actions shift from covert operations in shadowy labs to bold confrontations in the heart of Medinano’s facilities.

Improvement Suggestions for Internal/External Journey:

1. Clearly depict the evolution of his tactics from secretive personal enhancements to open confrontation and whistleblowing.

2. Highlight key moments where personal sacrifices lead to broader gains for the underprivileged, emphasizing the transition in his approach.

Revised Old Ways/New Ways

Old Ways: Japheth’s old ways are characterized by bitterness and a narrow focus on personal and familial revenge against an unjust healthcare system. He operates in secrecy, using stolen or improvised technology to treat his sister and enhance himself, viewing the law and societal norms with contempt.

New Ways: In his new ways, Japheth embraces his role as a protector of the common good. He pioneers a movement for technological democratization, ensuring fair access to medical advancements. He values transparency, collective action, and legal reforms to achieve what once he tried to obtain through defiance and subterfuge.

Improvement Suggestions for Old Ways/New Ways:

1. Develop incidents that clearly show the failures and limitations of his initial secretive methods, prompting a shift to more open and inclusive strategies.

2. Create scenes that showcase his influence on others, turning his personal quest into a widespread societal movement.

These revisions will ensure that Japheth’s character arc, internal and external journeys, and transformation from old ways to new ways are deeply integrated into the narrative, highlighting his growth from a vengeful biohacker to a reformative leader within the dystopian world of the story.

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[Luc Pagès]

Luc Pages’ Transformational Journey

My vision: write films that I personally love and enjoy directing, with a focus on human behavior analyzed with empathy, aiming to earn a living making these films, while maintaining creative autonomy and a carefree, enjoyable writing process.

What I learned from doing this assignment is…
That I’m still a bit too perfectionist, seeing how long it took me to do it. Although I like what I found. I still have to figure how not to drown myself in Gemini’s replies.

Arc Beginning: 
Ava is a charming and successful marketing executive who leverages her manipulative personality to climb the corporate ladder. She lacks genuine empathy and views emotions as tools to be exploited.
Arc Ending: 
Ava looses her job, but gains a romantic relationship based on trust and reciprocity.

Internal Journey:


From: unaware psychopath who is unconcerned about the pain she might inflict.


To: accepts she will never feel genuine empathy, but changes her behaviors as if she did.

External Journey: 


From: climbing the corporate ladder


To: loose her job, but be “The One” for her empathy boot-camp instructor.

Old Ways:

• Fakes empathy
• Prioritizes self-interest
• Takes emotions for weaknesses
• Views manipulation as a game
• Unaware of the pain she might inflict on people

New Ways:
• Behaves as if she could feel empathy
• Prioritizes relationships
• Acknowledges people emotions
• Tries to resist using manipulation
• Faces the consequences of her actions

Transformational journey structure

Act 1:
• Ava excels at her job but creates a PR disaster due to her lack of empathy.
• Forced to attend the empathy boot-camp, Ava sees it as a chance to improve her manipulation skills.
• The instructor Mark, suspecting she might fake empathy, hints in private at psychopathy.
• Ava denies it, but is disturbed: isn’t everybody faking it?
Act 2:
• Trying to prove him wrong, she starts a seduction campaign aimed at the boot-camp group.
• Ava’s calculated campaign seems to work, but when she gets sexually involved with Mark she has to struggle to maintain the facade.
• Brenda’s success without manipulation challenges Ava’s belief system and fuels self-doubt.
• Ava’s seduction campaign backfires causing a crisis, jeopardizing her career and breaking her intimate relationship with Mark.
• Ava starts digging into the possibility she might be a psychopath after all, and changes her behaviors to bring more meaning into her relationships.
Act 3:
• Ava regains Mark’s trust, but a second blunder ruins it all again, this time for good and for everyone to see. She looses her job.
• Acknowledging her lost, Ava realizes it’s time for her to really open herself to authentic change and stop prioritizing self-interest.
• Ava seeks help from Brenda.
• Ava comes clear to Mark, explaining what it is to be a psychopath living in a society obsessed with empathy. She asks him back, but this time Mark doesn’t fall for it, being too afraid to get hurt.
• Accepting the fact she will never experience empathy the way other people do, Ava embraces a new way: stop faking it, start behaving “as if” she had it.
• Realizing his mistake, Mark re-evaluates his own judgment.
• Both decide to pursue a relationship built on honesty, communication and trust.

[Sunil Pappu]

Sunil Pappu’s Transformational Journey

My Vision: I’m a successful produced writer who specializes in female-led thrillers.

“What I learned from doing this assignment is…to create a compelling transformational journey for my protagonist that audiences will care about deeply.”

Title: Decoding Enemy Lines

Genre: War Thriller

High Concept: A female communications expert joins a rebel naval crew to tap undersea cables in a crucial wartime operation during the 1971 Indo-Pak War.

PROTAGONIST: TRANSFORMATIONAL JOURNEY

• Arc Beginning: Ria is a gifted but traumatised radio operator who joins a male-dominated Naval crew as the daughter of a disgraced Naval officer.

• Arc Ending: Ria is the only one who can decipher the complex code that will self-destruct after a single error in translation to pinpoint the D-day of enemy attack that can help save countless lives in the Indo-Pak war of 1971.

• Internal Journey: traumatized by a diving accident, shamed by her disgraced father and ridiculed as a woman who has no place on a naval operation to navigating the male-dominated world to clear her father’s name and overcoming her fear of water to dive into the deep sea to save the day.

• External Journey: from a ridiculed female radio operator with questionable connections to be on the crew to being respected by the crew for her bravery and attention to detail in completing a crucial mission.

• Old Ways:

• Gifted but naïve

• Traumatized by water

• Ashamed of her father’s dishonorable discharge from naval service for desertion during an operation in ‘65 war.

• Doesn’t belong in the male-dominated world

• New Ways:

• Confident and accomplished

• Fearless and brave

• Honors her father’s legacy and gains the respect of her crew

• Operated well in the male-dominated world

AI VERSION:

1. Character Arc:

Arc Begins: Ria is introduced as a highly skilled but emotionally withdrawn radio operator. Her expertise is overshadowed by the dishonor of her father’s legacy. She is fiercely independent, often to her detriment, skeptical of authority, and struggles with claustrophobia which is a metaphor for her trapped feelings about her father’s tarnished reputation.

Arc Ends: By the end of the story, Ria has grown into a leader who trusts her team. She has reconciled with her father’s past and overcome her claustrophobia, symbolizing her newfound freedom. Ria becomes a symbol of hope and honor, both for her country and her personal life.

Improvement: Deepen Ria’s arc by showing subtle changes after each act, emphasizing her increasing trust in others and hinting at her inner healing process. Show her learning to ask for help as a sign of strength, not weakness.

2. Internal/External Journey:

Internal Journey: Ria’s internal journey revolves around overcoming her psychological scars – the claustrophobia representing her internal struggle and her need to clear her father’s name. Her growth involves learning to trust others, and herself, and accepting that her worth isn’t tied solely to her father’s reputation.

External Journey: Externally, Ria is part of a dangerous mission that requires her to use her intellect and technical skills to intercept crucial communications. Her external challenges reflect her internal struggle, as she faces physical confinement and battles to assert her place in a male-dominated environment.

Improvement: Integrate Ria’s internal and external journeys by using her skills and missions as metaphors for her personal growth. As she cracks codes and uncovers plots, she’s also unraveling her own psychological knots.

3. Old Ways/New Ways:

Old Ways: Ria is initially closed-off, her skepticism and independence act as barriers to teamwork. Her fear of confined spaces is debilitating, and she’s fixated on clearing her father’s name to the exclusion of all else.

New Ways: Ria becomes open to collaboration, leading to successful mission outcomes. Her claustrophobia diminishes, signifying a release from the past. She finds value in herself, not just as a vindicator of her father.

Improvement: To improve the depiction of Old Ways/New Ways, show the gradual shedding of her old habits in response to events that challenge her beliefs. Portray her willingness to change as a gradual transformation, with each mission providing a lesson that contributes to her new outlook.

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[Bob Creager]

Bob Creager’s Transformational Journey

VISION: As a screenwriter, I aspire to craft highly unique, high-concept stories that intrigue from the first glance and reach an A-list storytelling level at my own pace.

What I learned:

Title/Genre: Vampire Santa / horror

1. Protag Character Arc:

Beginning: Vampire that is only concerned with uncontrolled feeding and taking care of the children.

Ending: Vampire who controls his blood lust, takes care of the children, and is in love.

2. Internal / External Journey

Internal: From a loner with out-of-controlled blood lust to a caring vampire in love.

External: From feared vampire to loved family man.

3. Old ways / new ways

Old ways:

Uncontrolled murderous blood lust

Loner

Uncaring concern with adults

Stuck in his routine (Christmas, seeking blood):

New ways:

Controlled feeding – no killing

In love – plans for his own children

Becomes friends with adults

Seeks out others to share in the joy of Christmas.

AI Response:

Character Arc:

Arc Begins: Nicholas Samichlaus is a tormented, centuries-old vampire who has dedicated his immortal life to the role of Santa Claus, battling his bloodlust to bring joy to the world. Cursed with vampirism, he is isolated and guilt-ridden, struggling to reconcile his dual identities.

Arc Ends: Through his journey, Nicholas finds the strength to embrace his humanity and overcome his dark nature. He learns to accept both sides of himself, emerging as a redeemed, balanced figure who can continue his Santa Claus mission with a renewed sense of purpose.

Internal/External Journey:

Internal Journey: Nicholas undergoes a profound emotional transformation, moving from self-loathing and fear of his vampiric nature to self-acceptance and a newfound sense of hope. He learns to trust others, opening himself up to the possibility of love and connection.

External Journey: Driven to uncover the truth behind the “12 Days of Christmas” vampire attacks, Nicholas must confront his rival, the powerful vampire Vladimir Kozlov, while also navigating his growing relationship with Interpol agent Isabella Clarke. This external conflict forces him to take decisive action to protect his identity and mission.

Old Ways vs. New Ways:

Old Ways: Deceptive, isolated, and consumed by guilt over his vampiric nature. Reliant on his supernatural abilities to maintain his Santa Claus persona yet haunted by the need to feed on human blood. Distrustful of others and fearful of his true self being exposed.

New Ways: Embraces both his human and vampire sides, finding a balanced, harmonious existence. Learns to trust, love, and forge meaningful connections with others, including Isabella. Willingly accepts the responsibility of his role as Santa Claus, using his powers for good and finding redemption.

[Sandra Nelles]

Sandra’s Transformational Journey

My Vision: I am recognized in the industry as a great writer with serval successful produced movies.

What I learned from doing this assignment is that AI had good suggestions for improving the elements of the protagonist’s Transformational Journey.

Character Arc for Protagonist Erin

Arc Beginning: workaholic, cautious, and overly protective

Arc Ending: more relaxed and trusting, opens her heart to love

Internal Journey: from afraid to letting go of past hurts and trusting in love

External Journey: from a fashion buyer to a costume designer; from physically trying to break up her father’s relationship to trying to get them back together

Old Ways:

· Closed off emotionally

· Solely focused on work

· Blind to her own motivations and how they impacted others

· Didn’t believe in herself

· Afraid, Distrustful

New Ways:

· Open to love

· Prioritizing family and relationships

· Embracing adventure and spontaneity

· Self-confident and accomplished

· Knows she can create and design costumes

[James Hernandez]

Day 3 Assignment:

James’ Transformational Journey

My Vision: I am a great writer who is recognized by the industry as an exceptional collaborator able to elevate any project into production and have maximum success.

What I learned from doing this assignment is…I started to see the many possible moments, situations, and scenes that my protagonist will go through in the story. The challenges became clearer along with the choices he’ll make that will cause the change in him; this is his journey.

Ethan – Protagonist

· Arc Beginning: Lonely and dateless aging bachelor

· Arc Ending: Accompanied by a quality woman with future potential

· Internal Journey: From no confidence to adventurous

· External Journey: From lonely aging bachelor to dating a quality woman

Old Ways:

· Alone without female company

· Dateless due to lack of confidence because of age

· Introverted and hardly ever socializing

· Cynical view of the world

New Ways:

· Enters the dating scene with confidence

· More extroverted with women

· Age is no longer a negative factor

· Has positive outlook on life

[Kristin Donnan]

Kristin’s Transformational Journey

VISION: “I envision writing so well and consistently that I’m in demand, cherry-picking projects, selling beyond my wildest dreams, collaborating with people I admire and truly care about, and speaking my soul—on a big scale—so that I enjoy professional freedom, financial freedom, and joy.”

What I learned doing this assignment: I learned how the structures and concepts I’d developed in pre-lessons and up to now subtly shift as the characters and structure get more and more refined. And now I’m talking to AI like it’s a colleague, which I did not expect (and it’s using first person to refer to its previous comments). So we’re having a conversation about a storyline and people who are becoming more real by the minute. This part of the process (the underlying motivations, issues, challenges of characters) is one of my favorite parts of writing, and I feel like I’m “tossing ideas around” with a friend. Totally weird. In a good way.

Character Arc for Protagonist:

Arc Beginning: Defined and shackled by his family’s secrets and “code”; resistant to change. Arc Ending ultimately embraces the freedom to choose his own path and live by his own code of honor.

Internal/External Journey:

Internal Journey: John confronts his emotional barriers and reassesses his loyalty to his family, ultimately experiencing a profound transformation toward self-acceptance and personal integrity.

External Journey: Navigating media scrutiny, a murder investigation, and familial betrayal, John's is forced out of his comfort zone, where he gradually learns to adapt and evolve, and ultimately emerges as a stronger and more resilient individual.

Old Ways: John is stubborn, isolated, beaten down, and living under a protective family code and an unwavering loyalty to his family— at the expense of his own happiness and well-being.

New Ways:With a newfound sense of independence and self-awareness, John discovers his own integrity and discernment, confronts the flaws in the family code, and ultimately chooses to live by his own principles—even if it means breaking away from his family’s expectations.

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[Monica Arisman]

Subject: Monica’s Transformational Journey
VISION: I am a very successful screenwriter who has had multiple movies made.
What I learned from doing this assignment was to take an in-depth look at the character arc and look for the hero’s deepest wounds and fears and how these would change as the movie went on.
Only do this assignment for your Protagonist. This is about creating the Transformational Journey for the Hero/Heroin only. We’ll work with other characters later, but for now, this journey is the journey of the entire movie.
Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist – Emily Davis:
• Arc Beginning: From struggling, frustrated writer
• Arc Ending: To successful spiritual warrior writer
Give us their Internal/External Journey.
• Internal Journey: From frustrated, exhausted, and afraid
• External Journey: To invigorated, strong, and fearless
Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
• Old Ways: Working a dead-end job, writing til all hours, exhausting herself and making herself sick, feels abandoned by God and her family
• New Ways: Invigorated, successful, and fighting for the Divine cause
ChatGPT Version
• 1. Protagonist’s Character Arc:
• Arc Begins: Emily Davis starts the story as a struggling writer, battling crippling writer’s block and financial woes. She’s trapped in a cycle of odd jobs that drain her spirit, feeling disconnected from her creativity and purpose.
• Arc Ends: By the story’s conclusion, Emily has undergone a profound transformation. She emerges as a confident and purpose-driven individual who has embraced her role as a storyteller with the power to influence humanity’s spiritual awakening. Through her journey, she confronts her doubts and fears, finding strength in her creativity and imagination.
• Improvement: To enhance Emily’s character arc, ensure that her initial struggles are deeply rooted and relatable, making her eventual transformation all the more impactful. Emphasize her internal conflicts and doubts, highlighting the emotional journey she undergoes as she discovers her true purpose.
• 2. Internal/External Journey:
• Internal Journey: Throughout the story, Emily undergoes a significant internal transformation. She grapples with doubts about her abilities and the true intentions of the celestial beings guiding her. Ultimately, she confronts her fears and insecurities, finding confidence in her role as a storyteller and champion of light.
• External Journey: Emily’s external journey is marked by her exploration of the hidden library and the supernatural realm it connects to. She faces challenges and dangers as she delves deeper into her writing and confronts the cosmic forces vying for control. Her external journey mirrors her internal growth, with each obstacle she overcomes bringing her closer to her ultimate destiny.
• Improvement: Strengthen Emily’s internal journey by depicting her emotional struggles with greater depth and nuance. Show how her external experiences shape her internal growth, leading to moments of self-discovery and personal revelation.
• 3. Old Ways vs. New Ways:
• Old Ways: At the beginning of the story, Emily’s old ways are characterized by self-doubt, insecurity, and a lack of direction. She feels disconnected from her creativity and struggles to find meaning in her work.
• New Ways: By the story’s end, Emily has shed her old ways and embraced a new sense of purpose and confidence. She no longer doubts her abilities as a writer and recognizes the significance of her role in shaping humanity’s spiritual destiny.
• Improvement: Ensure that Emily’s transition from her old ways to her new ways is clearly depicted throughout the story, with each obstacle she faces serving as a catalyst for her personal growth. Show how her interactions with other characters and her experiences in the hidden realm contribute to her transformation.
• By refining Emily’s character arc, internal/external journey, and old ways/new ways, you can create a compelling and emotionally resonant narrative that captivates audiences and leaves them inspired by her transformative journey.

[Hope McPherson]

My Vison: To be a full-time respected screenwriter whose work brings joy to viewers and creates work for others in the industry, including actors and crew.

What I learned: Great exercise! I was able to do some of what I’ll be asking my protag to do: embrace the twists and turns. I really liked first doing the exercise myself and then asking my writing assistant, AI, to chime in. I found its help useful in deepening a few of my earlier choices.

Arc Beginning: Marta is a popular author who prides herself in controlling everything in her life, including her creative process and friends and family.

Arc Ending:Marta learns to embrace the unexpected and finds inspiration in the chaos.

Internal Journey:From second- and third-guessing her every decision to accepting disorder.

External Journey:Stressed out bride to confident creator ready to take on life and career.

Old Ways:

• Second-guessing even getting married
• hiding a crippling writer’s block
• craves the validation of others
• rigid and controlling, unwilling to deviate from her meticulously planned wedding

New Ways:

• off-the-charts creativity
• embraces spontaneity and finds joy in unexpected twists of life
• able to make decisions, even without a guarantee
• able to embrace her own and others’ imperfections

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[Jan Westbrook]

Jan’s Transformational Journey

My Vision: I am a talented and strong writer with a unique voice, recognized by the movie industry with multiple screenplays produced

What I learned from doing this assignment was that it was fun exploring where Emberleaf started out and ended. It gave me a clearer vision of the journey she is going to take and how the characters around her will be part of that journey.

Protagonist: Emberleaf

• Arc Beginning: entitled and aloof queen of Eveandor
• Arc Ending: becomes more courageous and empathetic

• Internal Journey: from rigid and entitled to empathetic and lenient
• External Journey: from reclusive and afraid in her palace to courageous and confident queen of Eveandor

• Old Ways:
o Rarely seen
o Emotionally detached
o Takes things for granted
o standoffish
o Immovable

• New Ways:
o Confident queen of Eveandor
o Respects the power of the amulet
o Courageous decision maker
o Empathetic
o Forms meaningful relationships

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[Mary Spiers]

Mary’s transformational journey

My Vision: I am one of the most sought after writers in the family friendly drama space. I bring fun, creativity, and a breath of fresh air to my stories because of my unique skills in story telling and my background in neuropsychology and history.

What I learned from this assignment. I thought I had my protagonists Arc but it wasn’t as specific, clear and detailed as what I have after doing this assignment. I found that after I came up with the aspects of the Journey, that AI helped to both confirm what I had (because I could see what fits and what doesn’t) and to sharpen and refine what I had because of the the choice of words ChatGPT+ used.

For Ava Reynard
Arc Beginning: Ava starts as isolated musician who sees herself as broken with synesthesia as a curse.
Arc Ending: Ava embraces her synesthesia as special gift of healing through music and uses this to heal a family wound.

3. Give us their Internal/External Journey.
Internal Journey: From feeling disconnected and not believing in her abilities to a champion for her gifts of sound healing.

External Journey: From an ordinary musician to someone who holds a key to sound healing in nature and people.

4. Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
Old Ways:
Average musician
No knowledge of family heritage
Ignorant of synesthesia and feels cursed by it.
Materialistic: Dismissive/skeptical of sound healing
Doesn’t believe in herself
New Ways:
Embraces her uniqueness as a musician
Brings her family together
Celebrates her color sound synesthesia as a gift.
Embraces her more spiritual role: Champion of sound healing.
Confident and self-accepting.

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[Joan Butler]

Joan Butler’s Transformational Journey

MY VISION: I am a well-respected writer with a balanced life whose stories increase understanding and compassion in the world, while they receive the highest recognition from everyone in the industry. I have loads of creativity, confidence, adaptability, and knowledge that make writing fun and profitable.

LEARNING: CHAT is teaching me about my character. Who would have thunk (spelled incorrectly on purpose) it?

MY PROTAGONIST LYRA:

Character Arc:

Beginning: She doubts her abilities and is afraid to defy societal expectations of herself.

Ending: She is confident in her abilities, has defied society’s expectations, and has embraced her own courage and resilience. Lyra evolves into a leader who inspires others to defy limitations and embrace diversity.

Improving Character Arc: Ensure that Lyra's transformation is gradual and believable, allowing for moments of doubt and growth throughout the story. Highlight pivotal moments where Lyra confronts her fears and makes choices that challenge her limitations, ultimately leading to her evolution into a courageous hero.

Internal Journey: Throughout the journey, Lyra undergoes a profound emotional transformation

Beginning:

She is filled with self-doubt and insecurity. She also accepts the limitations society places upon her and is reluctant to challenge them.

Ending:

She confronts her fears and insecurities, finding inner resilience and courage in the face of adversity. She also learns to trust in her own abilities and value herself beyond societal expectations.

External Journey:

Beginning: Lyra sets out to find an artifact in a land of treacherous landscapes governed by the tyrannical leader, Lord Tena.

Ending: She finds the artifact, saves her people, and becomes their hero.

Improving Internal/External Journey: Ensure that Lyra's internal struggles are mirrored in her external challenges, with each obstacle she faces serving as a catalyst for her emotional growth. Show how her external triumphs and setbacks shape her internal journey, reinforcing her transformation throughout the story.

Old Ways/New Ways:

Old Ways:

· Self-doubt

· Insecurity

· Reluctant to challenge the norms of society

· Passively accepts the limitations imposed on her by others

· Struggles to see her own worth beyond her disability

· Naïve about the journey ahead

· Frustrated because the population discriminates and marginalizes her

· Resentful/jealous of people without disabilities

New Ways:

· Has met the challenges of the journey

· No longer doubts her abilities

· confidently defies societal expectations

· sees her disability as a source of strength and empowerment.

· Is no longer frustrated, resentful, or jealous

Improving Old Ways/New Ways: Ensure that Lyra's transformation is evident in both her actions and her mindset, with each decision she makes reflecting her growth and newfound confidence. Show how Lyra's journey empowers her to challenge and overcome her old ways, leading to her triumphant evolution into a fearless leader.

By focusing on Lyra's Character Arc, Internal/External Journey, and Old Ways/New Ways, "Wheelchair Quest" can deliver a compelling and inspiring fantasy adventure that celebrates courage, resilience, and the power of self-discovery.

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[Lee Tidball]

LEE'S TRANSFORMATIONAL JOURNEY

My Vision: I am a writer who is excellent, recognized as such by people in the industry, and has several projects sold for WGA-type fees and some of those produced and successful in the theater and/or on a major streamer.

What I learned doing this assignment is that, in this case anyway, the AI response was absolutely amazing. It basically said the same things that I had, but augmented and elaborated on each so expertly, and also gave suggestions for bringing out the Transformational Journey in the outlining and writing of the script that were superb. Great prompt, Hal and team!!

2. Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:
* Arc Beginning: Kellen is a teacher at an Outdoor School in the foothills of the Sierra Nevada, enjoying its peace and serenity, and doing her best to wash herself emotionally clean from everything she ever did as an Army Green Beret years before.
* Arc Ending: Having had to use her military skills again to both save her students and nephew, but also the nation, she feels now reconciled with her past, is able to talk about it, and be proud of her service as well as continue doing her teaching job.

3. Give us their Internal/External Journey.
* Internal Journey: From denial of her Army service to acceptance and pride in what she’s done, and the skills she learned there.
* External Journey: Kellen goes from swearing she’ll never use anything she learned as a soldier again to using those very skills to save the lives of many who she cares about and loves.

4. Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
* Old Ways: Denial of her past, to the point of keeping it hidden from others.
* New Ways: Acceptance of who she once was and pride in her service and what she learned through it, feels free to talk about it, share stories, and her nephew’s pride in who she both was and is.

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[Matthew Lutz]

Matthew Lutz’s Transformational Journey

My Vision: To be an in-demand, confident writer with several hit projects produced, and to be known for being amongst the best in the business at balancing heart and hilarity, having a strong voice, and witty dialogue.

Assignment:

Protagonist Arc:

Arc Beginning: Fallon starts as a meticulous and dedicated screenwriter with a passion for detail and authenticity in her work. Her primary limitation is her blind trust in the integrity of the project and her colleagues.
Arc Ending: By the end, Fallon transforms into a disillusioned yet morally fortified individual who understands the complexities and ethical ambiguities of her industry. She emerges as a whistleblower, ready to expose the truth despite the personal and professional risks. This represents a significant shift from an enthusiastic participant to a courageous truth-seeker.

Internal/External Journey.:

Internal Journey: Fallon’s internal journey is marked by a growing conflict between her professional ambitions and her moral compass. Initially thrilled by the project, she becomes increasingly suspicious and conflicted as she uncovers the heist plot. This journey challenges her beliefs about right and wrong and forces her to redefine her values and identity as a writer and individual.
External Journey: Externally, Fallon moves from being an engaged screenwriter researching her script to actively investigating the discrepancies and anomalies she uncovers, eventually taking on the role of a detective. Her actions shift from creative involvement to covert investigation and finally to confrontation and exposure of the heist.

Old Ways / New Ways:

Old Ways: At the beginning, Fallon is characterized by her naivety and an idealistic view of the filmmaking world. She immerses herself in her work, often overlooking the broader implications of her projects. She trusts her colleagues implicitly and is focused solely on artistic and professional success.
New Ways: By the end, Fallon’s experiences lead her to a more skeptical and vigilant perspective. She becomes a critical thinker who questions not just the motives of those around her but also the ethical implications of her work. She stands ready to act on her convictions, even against powerful adversaries.

[Harry Rankin]

Harry’s Transformational Journey (for my Protagonist).

My vision for success from this program is:
To create scripts freely when working with producers, directors and cast, so to make award-winning work and create a lifestyle which is confident of financial freedom.

What I learned from doing this assignment is: It is really essential to set the template before writing a character.

Arc Begins: Suli starts as an ambitious and somewhat naïve astronaut, eager to prove herself and make a mark in the space program. She takes risks without fully considering the consequences, prioritizing the present moment over long-term planning.
Arc Ends: By the end of the story, Suli has undergone a profound transformation. She emerges as a responsible and practical leader, inspiring others with her resilience and determination. Through her experiences, she learns the importance of thinking ahead and taking calculated risks for the greater good.

Internal Journey: Suli’s internal journey involves a shift from feeling overlooked and underrated to being revered and respected. Initially, she struggles with self-doubt and a fear of failure, but as she faces challenges in space and confronts her own limitations, she gains confidence in her abilities and earns the admiration of her peers.
External Journey: Suli’s external journey is marked by her evolution from a minor character included for racial diversity to a unifying force across all ethnicities. As she navigates the dangers of space and grapples with the unexpected pregnancy, Suli becomes a symbol of hope and resilience, bridging divides and bringing people together in the face of adversity.

Old Ways: Suli’s old ways are characterized by her tendency to take risks and live in the present moment. She is ambitious and driven, but her impulsive nature sometimes leads her to make hasty decisions without considering the potential consequences.
New Ways: By the end of the story, Suli adopts a more careful and forward-thinking approach. She learns to weigh the risks and benefits of her actions, taking into account the long-term implications for herself and others. Her experiences in space and the challenges of motherhood shape her into a mature and responsible leader, inspiring those around her with her wisdom and compassion.

[jim ramsay]

RAMSAY – WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 3: Transformational Journey
My Vision: Creating stories and fun worlds for my characters. Producing my films will be my ultimate gratification.
Arc beginning:
Mic is embittered and haunted by her tragic past. She blames herself for not protecting her little sister, and she blames God for allowing her sister’s death. Consumed by anger and the desire to exact revenge on Carlito Bonino, her sister’s killer. Mic’s coping mechanisms include excessive drinking, a caustic and hostile attitude toward others, a short temper, and a propensity for violence.
Arc Ending:
Mic undergoes a profound transformation. After surviving several deadly situations she should not have lived through, she begins to believe that God is helping with her journey. She emerges as a stronger, more compassionate individual who reconciled her past and re-discovered her faith in God. Mic no longer blames herself and God for her sister’s death, and she has let go of her obsession with revenge. She apologizes for her past behavior and re-accepts God into her life. Now, she channels her determination into fighting the evil in her world and saving innocents.
Internal Journey:
Throughout the story, Mic is incrementally overcoming her anger, bitterness, and crisis of faith. She learns to forgive herself and forgive God and finds her inner peace by reconnecting with God.
External Journey:
Mic’s progression is physical and emotional. She evolves from a vulnerable, emotionally wounded girl into a woman of formidable force capable of confronting any situation head-on. And, when miraculous actions save her, what should have been her certain death by the evil entities she is battling, allowing her to continue saving innocents, she begins believing God is helping her mission. Mic has learned inordinate offensive skills, giving her an advantage in fighting evil. She atones for her sister’s death by saving innocents and learns to prioritize the greater good over personal vendettas.
Old Ways at the Beginning:
Mic’s old ways are characterized by a caustic and hostile attitude toward others, excessive drinking to numb her emotional pain, acting out of anger, and uncontrolled use of extreme violence. She blames other’s actions for causing her outbursts and is driven solely by her hunger for revenge.
New Ways at the End:
Mic’s new ways reflect growth and transformation. She has given up dulling her pain with alcohol, and her attitude, while still blunt and direct, is more accepting and unambiguous. Mic considers the moral ramifications of her actions, prioritizing the greater good over personal vendettas.

[Margaret]

Margaret’s Transformational Journey
Vision: To write profound faith-based screenplays that are produced.
What I learned: A.I. prompts for Character Journeys

Protagonist: Jabin Munoz

Arc Beginning: Diagnosed with Terminal Cancer
Arc Ending: Cancer Free

• Internal Journey: Jabin’s internal journey is marked by a shift from despair to hope, from fear to faith. He confronts his deepest fears and insecurities, learning to let go of his anger and resentment towards his illness. Through moments of introspection and spiritual exploration, he discovers inner strength and resilience, ultimately finding peace within himself.
• External Journey: Externally, Jabin’s journey is a rollercoaster of physical and emotional highs and lows. He battles the physical toll of his illness, enduring the pain of treatments and the uncertainty of remission. Alongside his loved ones, he navigates the practical challenges of medical appointments, financial strain, and the upheaval of his plans for the future going from the diagnosis of terminal cancer to cancer free.

• Old Ways: Fear, anger, resignation to his fate, faith shaken, struggles to find meaning in suffering.
• New Ways: Confronts fear with courage, replaces anger with acceptance, replaces resentment with gratitude. His faith becomes a source of strength and comfort. He cherishes the moment, embracing life’s uncertainty with peace and joy.

[Vernall Ritchey]

ASSIGNMENT: Lesson 3
Vision: To captivate audiences by writing, producing, and directing smart, well-written, blockbuster scripts.
What I learned from doing this assignment: is how helpful it is to get your 3 Act Structure down tight as soon as possible.
Subject Line: WIM – Vernall Ritchey’s – Transformational Journey

KYLA
Arc Beginning: An attentive Caregiver and soon-to-be nun deeply committed to her faith, showing compassion and dedication to Father Gill’s well-being.
Arc Ending: Fanatical and manipulative Caregiver who resorts to extreme and sadistic measures performing exorcisms while transforming into a terrifying and seductive demonic individual.
Internal Journey: From a brave and determined devout soon-to-be nun. Facing her fears with unwavering resolve and Catholic faith.
The protagonist’s internal goals evolve throughout the script as she goes from fulfilling her duties as a nun to seeking protection and purification from evil forces. These internal goals reflect her deeper desires for safety, protection, and spiritual well-being.
External Journey: Paranoid, fearful, desperate, terrifying, and faithless.
The protagonist’s external goals also evolve throughout the script as she navigates the immediate circumstances and challenges she faces. These external goals reflect her need for safety, protection, and understanding of the supernatural forces at play.
Old Ways:
• Attentive kind Caregiver
• Committed to her Catholic faith
• Brave and courageous
• Prayer heals all
New Ways:
• Evil Demon
• Paranoid
• Fanatical and Manipulative
• Sadistic

ChatGpt 3.5
Arc Begins: At the beginning of the story, Kyla is portrayed as an attentive caregiver and devout aspirant nun, driven by her compassion and faith. She is dedicated to her role in caring for Father Gill, viewing it as a sacred duty. However, beneath her outward appearance of kindness and piety, there are subtle hints of inner turmoil and suppressed emotions.
Arc Ends: By the conclusion of the journey, Kyla has undergone a profound transformation. She embraces her true demonic nature, shedding the facade of benevolence and revealing the darkness that resides within her. No longer bound by the constraints of morality and faith, Kyla embraces her identity as the demonic entity, fully embracing her power and desires.
Internal Journey: On a psychological and emotional level, Kyla experiences a tumultuous internal journey. Initially, she grapples with feelings of guilt and conflict as she confronts her demonic nature. However, as the story progresses, Kyla’s internal struggle gives way to acceptance and empowerment, culminating in her embrace of her true identity.
External Journey: On an action and experience level, Kyla’s journey is marked by a series of escalating conflicts and confrontations. From her initial attempts to exorcise the demon from Father Gill to her eventual confrontation with her own demonic nature, Kyla’s external journey is characterized by intense physical and supernatural battles that mirror her internal turmoil.
Old Ways: Kyla’s old ways are characterized by her facade of compassion and devotion, masking the darkness and conflict within her. She suppresses her true nature in an effort to maintain her identity as a caregiver and aspiring nun, denying the demonic urges that threaten to consume her.
New Ways: By the end of the story, Kyla’s new ways reflect her acceptance and embrace of her true demonic identity. She no longer hides behind a facade of benevolence, instead embracing her power and desires without remorse or restraint. Kyla’s transformation is complete, and she fully embraces the darkness within her, embracing her true demonic nature.

[Karen Haas]

My one sentence vision : I am a creative writer who can dream up something new and then write it even better than I’d imagined. Industry professionals enjoy my work, and buy it for real money, and my writing life is always fun and satisfying.
What I learned doing this assignment: Focusing on the change between their old ways and new gives you a big part of the main character's transformational journey.

Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:

Arc Beginning: searching for Dorothy and her shoes” cynical, harsh, mean spirited, not caring for others, jaded, impatient, disdainful, angry,
Arc Ending: winning against Wizard/con man, —truth teller but with compassion, humble, caring, curious, full of wonder, self-sacrificing
3. Give us their Internal/External Journey.

Internal Journey:fromcynical, harsh, mean spirited, selfish, jaded, impatient, disdainful and angry to
truth teller but with compassion, humble, caring, curious, full of wonder, self-sacrificing

External Journey: From Oz to Kansas, old ways/no tech to new ways, lots of tech which takes the place of “magic”.
4. Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie, hand washes clothes, boils, and scrubs with old washboard, uses broom to sweep and try to fly, bicycle, eating dunkin munchkins, flying monkeys taxi service, afraid of being liquidated?, bossy to others, impatient, demanding, tired
and their New Ways at the end. ready to wear no wash, no stink clothes, gets an iphone, mountain bike, e bike, swimmer, ready to collaborate,

5. Use this Prompt with AI to generate another version of your project and pick the ideas you like best.

Act 1: A twister in Oz sends the Wicked Witch of the East into modern-day Kansas where she discovers Dorothy's hometown and decides to hunt for her granddaughter, her long lost ruby slippers, and the wizard con-man who betrayed her sister.
Act 2: The witch makes enemies and allies of the townspeople, and prepares to peacefully plead her case to the authorities regain her slippers, and sue the con-man. While the witch is focused on reclaiming the ruby slippers and seeking revenge, a covert group in modern-day Kansas is secretly working to exploit the situation for their own gain, setting up a hidden conflict that comes to light in the climax. Also, as the witch navigates modern-day Kansas, she discovers that some of Dorothy's friends and allies have descendants who are willing to help her. However, these new allies have their own agendas, leading to humorous and unexpected partnerships.
Act 3: Thwarted by the greedy museum officials, and the con-man's team of lawyers, the witch take action on her own and summons her allies, and a few key associates from Oz to help her win by any means necessary. Then she happily returns home, leaving Kansas not much worse than she found it.

AI results:
Protagonist: Wicked Witch of the East

Arc Begins:
At the start of the story, the Wicked Witch of the East is consumed by bitterness and seeks revenge for past wrongs. She is driven by a desire to reclaim her power and punish those she perceives as enemies.

Arc Ends:
By the conclusion of the journey, the witch undergoes a significant transformation. She learns the value of forgiveness and the importance of letting go of her grudges. Instead of seeking vengeance, she finds redemption and chooses to make amends for her past actions.

Internal Journey:
Initially, the witch's internal journey is marked by anger, resentment, and a desire for revenge. However, as she encounters unexpected allies and faces unforeseen challenges, she begins to question her motivations and reevaluate her priorities. Ultimately, she learns to let go of her past grievances and embraces a more compassionate and forgiving outlook.

External Journey:
Externally, the witch's journey involves navigating the unfamiliar terrain of modern-day Kansas, facing off against adversaries, and forming unlikely alliances. She must adapt to the modern world while staying true to her own values and goals. Her journey is filled with comedic mishaps and unexpected twists as she works towards her objective.

Old Ways:
The witch's old ways are characterized by a single-minded focus on revenge, fueled by anger and bitterness. She is distrustful of others and unwilling to consider alternative perspectives. Her actions are driven by a desire for power and dominance, regardless of the consequences.

New Ways:
By the end of the story, the witch's new ways reflect a profound shift in her character. She learns to let go of her thirst for vengeance and embraces forgiveness and redemption. Her interactions with others are marked by empathy and understanding, and she works towards positive change rather than seeking to inflict harm.

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[Janeen Johnson]

Madison Lee – Character Arc and Transformational Journey

Arc Begins:
Madison is a talented stylist who loves her job but is constantly overshadowed by her fear of her boss and her own self-doubt. She’s passionate about her work but lacks the confidence to stand up for herself and take her career to the next level.

Arc Ends:
Madison gains confidence and establishes herself as a successful stylist with a partnership in her workplace. She no longer fears her boss and believes in her abilities.

Internal Journey:
Madison becomes more confident and less afraid of conflict. She learns to assert herself and trust her instincts, especially when it comes to her career and relationships.

External Journey:
Madison transitions from a retail clerk to a professional stylist. She also finds love with Daniel, learning to balance her personal and professional life.

Old Ways:
– Doubts herself and her abilities
– Is afraid to assert herself and confront her boss
– Fears that any man will dominate her and take away her independence

New Ways:
– Asserts herself confidently, especially at work
– Successfully trains her dog, showing her determination and patience
– Believes in an equal partnership with Daniel, valuing mutual respect and support

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Daniel Lee – Character Arc and Transformational Journey

Arc Begins:
Daniel is a talented musician frustrated by his band’s refusal to play his style of music alongside theirs. He relies heavily on his girlfriend’s assessment of his music and struggles to assert himself within the band.

Arc Ends:
Daniel establishes his own music career, believing in himself and his abilities. He surrounds himself with supportive people and finds love with Madison.

Internal Journey:
Daniel learns to believe in himself and his music, realizing that he doesn’t need validation from his band or girlfriend. He becomes more self-assured and independent, trusting his own judgment.

External Journey:
Daniel transitions from a frustrated band member to a successful solo musician. He also finds love with Madison, learning to balance his personal and professional aspirations.

Old Ways:
– Doubts himself and his musical abilities
– Relies on his girlfriend’s assessment of his music
– Believes that using manipulation, like the Chinese water torture method, will help him get his way

New Ways:
– Believes in himself and his music, pursuing his own career path
– Surrounds himself with supportive people who believe in his talent
– Takes control of his future by planning and executing his music career

[jamie handley]

Jamie’s Transformation Journey
My scripts will get made into powerful movies that impact audiences and view me as a talented, hardworking professional.
What I’ve learned = I found myself opening more with the use of AI. Things I overlooked and didn’t consider. Discovered the importance of making decisions with the protagonist and how it moves the story forward. It is hard to be so succinct when there is so much more to consider with the characters. So I guess it’s sort of a breakthrough to define a character succinctly.

CHARACTER: LINDSEY TURNER
LOGLINE = A resilient, controlling, and determined woman, the newest matriarch, left to hold the family together while conflicts arise and moral decisions are made, involving her sister’s failed assisted suicide, and passing, as she wrestles with her own burdens of guilt and responsibility.
UNIQUE = She has played the role of caretaker for her mother and husband. She’s experienced death of her mother and best friend. Though she was closest to sister Sadie, she raised her niece as her own. She is physically wounded, and opioid dependent.

Arc Beginning: Lindsey is a heartbroken and lonely caregiving middle sister who resents being the rock of the family and longs to be independent.
Arc Ending: Lindsey becomes the matriarch of the family, embracing the task with open arms and a new vision.

Internal Journey: A beloved and heartbroken aunt and mother with a façade of being resilient and strong who fears without being needed she has no identity to embracing her role, recognizing her strength and renewed purpose and love for her family.
External Journey: From a controlling and defensive caretaker to a supportive, compassionate mother, sister, and next matriarch of the family.

Old Ways:
Overwhelmed and underappreciated.
Fear of abandonment.
Defensive and opinionated.
The rock of the family and resents it.
Perfection gets in her way.
Enables her daughter.
Lack of concern with younger sister.

New Ways:
Accepts responsibility with love and grace.
Opens her heart with the younger sister, both girls and all the family.
Finds a way to stay connected with the family.
Considers living alone.
Finds new boundaries with her daughter.
Commits to embracing her mother’s legacy.
Enrolls in a memoir writing class.

[jamie handley]

I HAVE TRIED TO SEND THIS SEVERAL TIMES AND THE FORMAT COMES OUT VERY DIFFERENT. DON’T KNOW WHY BUT I’M SENDING IT IN AS IS. IT JUST MAKES IT HARD TO READ.

Jamie’s Transformation Journey
My scripts will get made into powerful movies that impact audiences and view me as a talented, hardworking professional.
What I’ve learned = I found myself opening more with the use of AI. Things I overlooked and didn’t consider. Discovered the importance of making decisions with the protagonist and how it moves the story forward. It is hard to be so succinct when there is so much more to consider with the characters. So I guess it’s sort of a breakthrough to define a character succinctly.

CHARACTER: LINDSEY TURNER
LOGLINE = A resilient, controlling, and determined woman, the newest matriarch, left to hold the family together while conflicts arise and moral decisions are made, involving her sister’s failed assisted suicide, and passing, as she wrestles with her own burdens of guilt and responsibility.
UNIQUE = She has played the role of caretaker for her mother and husband. She’s experienced death of her mother and best friend. Though she was closest to sister Sadie, she raised her niece as her own. She is physically wounded, and opioid dependent.

Arc Beginning: Lindsey is a heartbroken and lonely caregiving middle sister who resents being the rock of the family and longs to be independent.
Arc Ending: Lindsey becomes the matriarch of the family, embracing the task with open arms and a new vision.

Internal Journey: A beloved and heartbroken aunt and mother with a façade of being resilient and strong who fears without being needed she has no identity to embracing her role, recognizing her strength and renewed purpose and love for her family.
External Journey: From a controlling and defensive caretaker to a supportive, compassionate mother, sister, and next matriarch of the family.

Old Ways:
Overwhelmed and underappreciated.
Fear of abandonment.
Defensive and opinionated.
The rock of the family and resents it.
Perfection gets in her way.
Enables her daughter.
Lack of concern with younger sister.

New Ways:
Accepts responsibility with love and grace.
Opens her heart with the younger sister, both girls and all the family.
Finds a way to stay connected with the family.
Considers living alone.
Finds new boundaries with her daughter.
Commits to embracing her mother’s legacy.
Enrolls in a memoir writing class.

[Linda Kish]

Linda’s Transformational Journey
My Vision is: I will do whatever it takes to be a sought-after profound writer who has many successful movies produced and an Oscar on the mantel.
What I learned from doing this assignment is that I tend to complicate the journey unnecessarily.

Protagonist
• Arc Beginning: A low-level scout in the cartel
• Arc Ending: The cartel kingpin
• Internal Journey: A peaceful and timid man who feels trapped and is afraid to go against the leaders of the cartel to feeling invincible and battles the cartel leaders for power
• External Journey: A scout who obeys all orders to a powerful cartel kingpin who wipes out his competition
• Old Ways:
o Cautions his friend and family to put their heads down
o Says and does nothing when Dante kills his friend
o Obeys Dante’s commands
o Stays at the compound when he and his family want to leave
o Plans but never acts
o Goes to work for Arturo
• New Ways:
o Joins the competition
o Steals C4 and money from the cartel
o Burns down the rival cartel’s lab
o Manipulates Arturo
o Gains respect of the community and they protect him
o Puts his plan into action
o Puts his freedom at risk to win the competition
o Kills the cartel leader, Arturo and Dante

[Michael Katz]

Michael E. Katz’s Transformational Journey

Vision: I will sell a script for a million dollars.

For my Drama Comedy screenplay titled "I Love What You've Done To The Place," focusing on the protagonist Kirsten, a divorcee, here is the detailed Transformational Journey:

**Protagonist: Kirsten**

**Arc Begins:** Kirsten is a newly divorced wealthy woman in her 40s, living in the dream home she built with her ex-husband. Kirsten perceives the mansion as a symbol of the stability and love that her marriage once provided. It represents a life of glamour, success, and emotional fulfillment. This perception is deeply ingrained, making the mansion a cherished space filled with beautiful memories. However, this is also a distorted view because it glosses over the underlying issues that led to her divorce. This home represents her past life and marriage but serves as a constant reminder of her failed marriage. Living there, she feels trapped in the tainted memories, keeping her emotionally and physically tethered to Jesse and unable to move on with her life.

**Arc Ends:** The harsh reality is that her current life in the mansion is not stable or fulfilling. Post-divorce, the mansion is a constant reminder of her loss and loneliness, contradicting the stability it once symbolized. It's a large, overwhelming space that now feels odd and melancholic, a physical manifestation of her current emotional state. Kirsten becomes a liberated individual who has emotionally and physically detached from her past by selling and symbolically burning down the mansion. As a symbol of renewal and self-reliance, she is now ready to embrace new beginnings, a new identity, and a peaceful future.

**Internal Journey:** Kirsten transitions from a state of emotional dependency on her past and the physical embodiment of it (the mansion) to a state of self-awareness and emotional independence. She learns to let go of her attachments and redefine her sense of self outside of her marital history.

**External Journey:** Kirsten undertakes the physical act of transforming her home, which parallels her internal journey of healing and self-discovery. This includes deciding to sell the mansion and the symbolic act of burning it down, representing her final break from her past.

**Old Ways:**
– Emotionally attached to her past life and the mansion filled with memories of her marriage.
– Reluctant to make significant changes, clinging to the comfort and familiarity of her marital home, fearing the loss of what was familiar and safe.
– Hesitant to face the societal implications of her divorce, allowing public perception to influence her decisions.

**New Ways:**
– Emotionally resilient, having processed and released her attachment to her past and the mansion, finding strength in her independence and new beginnings.
– Proactive and courageous in making life-altering decisions, embracing change as a necessary pathway to growth.
– Confident and indifferent to societal judgments, prioritizing her personal well-being and happiness over public opinion.

[William Curley]

Bill Curley,s Transformational Journey.
Vision: To continue learning this trade and be vetted.
Learned: Once again AI has given my self a new perspective and insight to writing.

My Protagonist is a female 37 police officer in a small Northwoods town.Her name is Lisa Rawlins
ACT 1. Character Arc:

INT: Lisa must deal with routine, desultory affairs, typical.of her job. Maintaining the law and raising her fatherless son are priorities..
Ext: Aside from dealing with an occasional drunk or aggressive speeder, Lisa has no unusual physical challenges. She , if needed, must remove road kill in her jurisdiction.

Act 2. INT matters become convoluted
More complex. Her fatherless son has had two of his classmates brutally murdered allegedly by Vikings that stormed a bonfire in an area called by locals ad “,The Bog”. The mental questions come about when she realizes a dishonest but powerful real estate developer has unleashed a 1000 year old curse on the community
Ext Lisa is now seeing physical challenges. She must mentally and physically exert physical energies as strange sittings of giant sized forest animals are reported
Act 3 Int Lisa mind is in a whirl. Faced with challenges ever present with her 16 year old son, Lisa must also focus on solving and preventing additional deaths from rumored Viking attacks coming from the bog.
Ext. Lisa is now called to prevent Viking sorties into her town. She investigates, moves and reacts. She along with the Norse Goddes of peace, that being Freyr, must stand headmaster to a raiding Viking Cadre and forever sendcthem to the Midworld
Old Ways: Raising a kid
Routine police work
Compassionate law enforcement. New Ways: Deal with ax1000 year old Viking curse and its deadly results, all the result of a dishonest land developer, the very individual that unleashed the curse.

[Terrie Shaft]

Terrie’s Transformational Journey
Vision: I am paid to write screenplays that become successful movies. My process is so solid I can enjoy my equestrian hobby while exceeding expectations with my writing.

What I learned doing this assignment is that I need to keep several files with the prompts and differing responses and be prepared to modify the prompts and re-run the AI until I get something that it satisfactory. I’m still struggling with what to do myself/by hand and when to just re run the AI.
This is a buddy comedy so I’ve got two protagonists.
1. Protagonist’s Character Arc
Arc Begins: Misa is an angry, reclusive hippie who shuns human contact, living in isolation with her cats and marijuana plants. She’s distrustful of authority, technology, and mainstream society, finding solace only in her self-imposed exile.
Arc Ends: By the end of the story, Misa has transformed into someone more open-minded and compassionate. She learns the value of connection and cooperation, realizing that her off-the-grid lifestyle was a form of escapism. She embraces her role in helping others and becomes a catalyst for positive change.
2. Internal/External Journey
Internal Journey: Misa’s internal journey involves overcoming her fear of connection and learning to trust others. She confronts her deep-seated anger and discovers empathy and understanding, particularly through experiencing Bill’s perspective.
External Journey: Externally, Misa’s journey involves navigating the challenges of living in Bill’s alien body while evading detection and resolving the chaos caused by the body swap. She learns to adapt to new situations and collaborate with unlikely allies.
3. Old Ways vs. New Ways
Old Ways: Misa’s old ways include her avoidance of responsibility, her distrust of authority figures like Deputy Rhoades, and her reluctance to engage with the outside world. She sees herself as a victim of society rather than an active participant.
New Ways: By the end, Misa adopts a more proactive approach to life. She takes responsibility for her actions, forms genuine connections with others, and embraces her role in shaping her destiny. She no longer hides from society but actively contributes to it.

1. Protagonist’s Character Arc
Arc Begins: Bill is a hapless alien who’s always been considered expendable. He’s clumsy, lacks confidence, and is generally seen as a failure by his peers.
Arc Ends: By the end of the story, Bill has transformed into a more confident, empathetic, and understanding being. He learns valuable lessons about human emotions, bonds, and responsibility, ultimately gaining the courage to excel in flight school and prove his worth.
2. Internal/External Journey
Internal Journey: Initially, Bill struggles with understanding human emotions and customs. Through the body swap and his experiences in Misa’s body, he learns to appreciate and navigate these complexities, leading to personal growth and emotional maturity.
External Journey: Bill’s external journey involves navigating Earth’s customs, repairing his spaceship, and dealing with the investigation by Deputy Rhoades. These challenges force him to adapt, learn, and eventually collaborate with Misa to overcome obstacles.
3. Old Ways vs. New Ways
Old Ways: Bill’s old ways include being clumsy, lacking confidence, and seeing himself as expendable. He doesn’t understand human emotions and struggles with basic tasks, like fixing things or interacting with authorities.
New Ways: By the end, Bill becomes more confident, understanding, and responsible. He appreciates human emotions, learns to work collaboratively, and gains skills in problem-solving and handling challenges.

[Pam Ewing]

Pam's Transformation Journey

Arc Beginning: Cynical, controlling others but justifies herself, untrusting, trying create a new future
Arc Ending: skeptically partnering with others, laughs at her old controls, hopeful good things will happen

Internal Journey: trusting her girlfriend to pick a spa to vacation together at still living on her past laurels
External Journey: takes control to escape but fails and must work with others

Old Ways: control and command and call it group work, stuff feelings and desires, expects rejection
New Ways: willing to fight for personal goal not business goal, willing to risk rejection, listens to others and let’s them lead

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[David Zelitzky]

David Z's Transformational Journey

Vision:

I am an interesting, dependable, successful writer that people love to work with.

WHAT I LEARNED FROM DOING THIS ASSIGNMENT IS: to bring more clarity to the emotional journey and realizing that's what this story is truly about

Arc Beginning: Committed to health and leaving this dying town, scared to speak up about her feelings

Arc Ending: Realizes she would do anything for her brother and has the strength to fight those who stand in her way

Internal Journey: shy and unable to talk about her feelings

External Journey: Able to fight for freedom and do whatever it takes to strike out on her own

Old Ways: quiet worker, never speaks up

New Ways: doesn't put up with bullshit and willing to point it out and fight against it

AI SUGGESTIONS:

Protagonist's Character Arc:

Arc Begins: Tessa starts as a determined young woman who has sworn to stay clean in a city plagued by the devastating effects of Devil Dust. She is steadfast in her resolve to protect herself and her brother from the dangers of addiction, but her commitment is tested when her brother falls victim to the drug.

Arc Ends: By the conclusion of the story, Tessa undergoes a profound transformation. She evolves from a cautious and principled individual to a courageous and selfless protector. Her journey forces her to confront her fears and inner demons, ultimately leading her to sacrifice her own safety in order to save her brother.

Internal/External Journey:
Internal Journey: Tessa's internal journey is marked by a tumultuous struggle with her own values and beliefs. She battles with feelings of guilt, fear, and desperation as she grapples with the moral dilemma of whether to succumb to the allure of Devil Dust to save her brother or to uphold her principles at the risk of losing him.

External Journey: Externally, Tessa's journey is characterized by a series of increasingly perilous encounters and decisions. She navigates the dangerous world of addiction and crime, confronting both physical threats and moral dilemmas as she fights to rescue her brother from the clutches of the drug.

Old Ways/New Ways:
Old Ways: At the beginning of the movie, Tessa's old ways are marked by her rigid adherence to her principles and her reluctance to compromise her values. She is hesitant to confront the harsh realities of the world around her, preferring to maintain a safe distance from the dangers of addiction and temptation.

New Ways: By the end of the movie, Tessa's new ways reflect her newfound courage and resilience. She is willing to challenge her own beliefs and make difficult sacrifices in order to protect her loved ones. Tessa emerges as a stronger and more compassionate individual, capable of confronting the darkness within herself and the world around her.
Improvement Suggestions:

Ensure that Tessa's transformation is depicted gradually throughout the story, with each obstacle she faces contributing to her growth and development.
Provide moments of internal reflection for Tessa to explore her evolving thoughts and emotions, allowing the audience to empathize with her struggles.
Showcase Tessa's internal conflict through her actions and decisions, highlighting the tension between her desire to protect her brother and her commitment to staying true to herself.

• This reply was modified 1 year ago by  David Zelitzky.

[Andrew Foerster]

Drew Foerster’s Transformational Journey

My Vision: I am doing all that is needed to create a future where I am a well-respected Hollywood writer and have the freedom to choose the projects I put my time towards as well as working with amazing producers, directors actors, and agents/managers.

What I learned from doing this assignment is… thinking this through not only helps you identify the arc for your characters, it also gives you ideas of what other major things can happen in the story.

EMMA
Arc Beginning: Love is a business decision not left to fate or chance.
Arc Ending: True love really exists, and you can’t plan for it.
Internal Journey: From doubtful about love to open hearted.
External Journey: Only making “logical” relationship decisions to taking a “chance” on love at first sight.
Old Ways:
• Doesn’t believe in true love or soulmates
• Everything has a logical reason
• There is no such thing as aliens or UFOs
• Hyper-focused on career
New Ways:
• Believes in true love
• Understands that you can over-think when it comes to love
• Believes in Aliens
• Willing to take risks with her career and put love before business

MATTHEW
Arc Beginning: Stuck in a cold engagement with a superficial woman he doesn’t really love but has resigned that he should get married. “don’t should all over yourself”
Arc Ending: He breaks up with his fiancé to be with his perfect match.
Internal Journey: Meek and doesn’t believe he should be happy to knowing he is worth loving.
External Journey: Was submissive in his relationship to being willing to stand up for himself and his desires and leaving his fiancée.
Old Ways:
• Submissive
• Low self esteem
• Low-level programmer
• Never questions his boss
New Ways:
• Confident
• Feels worthy of finding true love
• Starts his own company
• Stands up to his boss and quits his job

• This reply was modified 1 year ago by  Andrew Foerster.

[jamie handley]

Act 1: Legacy Unveiled
REVISION – THE 3 ACT WERE LEFT OUT
In 2019, the family is thrown into turmoil with the loss of Sarah Henderson leaving Lindsey fearful of her future and heartbroken unlike the other members of the family. The family is further destabilized by her passing when she leaves her will and a mysterious journal with Lindsey that promises to reveal hidden truths in the family and with Sarah. Shortly after the cremation, older sister, Sadie Meade announces she has colon cancer. Her announcement deeply affects Lindsey, who has already been burdened with most of their family responsibilities and the strain with her daughter Gracie is shell-shocked when Brooke immediately moves to Oregon to be with her estranged mother Sadie, reigniting old tensions with their years of abandonment. Lindsey, who raised Brooke for most of her life, has resented being the family’s only caregiver while managing her own life and various issues with daughter, Gracie, and becomes reclusive. Lindsey is thrust into a new role of leadership but struggles against her desire for independence and freedom.

Act 2: The Revelations
As Sadie’s health worsens and she begins hospice which disturbs Lindsey. Lindsey flies in to be with her sister. Lindsey pushes for unity as she struggles with Sadie’s decision for assisted suicide. Lindsey introduces Sarah’s journal as a possible path to healing, hoping that Sadie will change her mind. The journal’s revelations shock the family, exposing Sarah’s favoritism and hidden struggles. These secrets reframe Sadie’s past choices, including her decision for assisted suicide, and force Lindsey to confront her long-held resentment and guilt. The family struggles to support Sadie’s choice and arguments ensue. While attempting to balance each of their own conflicting emotions Lindsey decides to fly back home. Lindsey is torn between maintaining control over her family and her deepening need for respect, compassion, understanding and independence.

Act 3: Fractures and Healing
Brooke reaches out to Gracie begging for her to intercede, hoping that it gets to Lindsey. Lindsey makes the decision to fly back to Oregon before it’s too late. Sadie’s assisted suicide goes horrifically awry, leaving Brooke devastated and broken. Lindsey arrives within hours but too late, which leaves her with deeper scars. Brooke is left to distribute all of Sadie’s belongings and instructions for her in the will. Lindsey sends Sadie’s belongings that were left to her to Gracie, who finds solace in faith and her love for her aunt. Despite the chaos, Lindsey reaches out to her daughter, and they redefine their relationship. Lindsey steps in as the matriarch, mending relationships and finding her purpose in her mother’s legacy. She sets her boundaries and a new tone as she finds a way to help Gracie and the family. Lindsey embraces her new role in the family and her personal growth by enrolling in a memoir writing class. The family begins to heal, inspired by Sarah’s wishes for unity and forgiveness. Lindsey now proud, makes peace with her new role and honors her mother’s final wishes.

[Diane Denham]

ALIENS ON A PLANE
SCI-FI COMEDY
Act 1:
1. Protagonist's Character Arc:
Arc Begins: Xiola is introduced as a highly skilled, yet self-serving and arrogant time traveler from future Earth. She's focused solely on her mission, disregarding the consequences of her actions and the well-being of others.
Arc Ends: By the end of the story, Xiola learns the value of cooperation and empathy. She evolves from a self-serving operative to someone who understands the importance of teamwork and compassion.
2. Internal/External Journey:
Internal Journey: Xiola's internal journey involves her transformation from a lone wolf to someone who learns to trust and rely on others. She confronts her arrogance and learns to connect with people on an emotional level.
External Journey: Externally, Xiola's journey takes her from being solely focused on her mission to navigating the chaos of being stranded on a commercial airliner in the present day. She must adapt to unfamiliar surroundings and work with the ET travel agents and tourists to find a solution.
3. Old Ways vs. New Ways:
Old Ways: Xiola's old ways are characterized by her selfishness and disregard for others. She prioritizes her mission above everything else and sees teamwork as a weakness.
New Ways: By the end of the story, Xiola learns to put the needs of others before her own. She embraces teamwork and collaboration, understanding that strength comes from unity rather than individualism.
Act 2:
1. Protagonist's Character Arc:
Arc Begins: Xiola remains focused on her mission, determined to uncover the truth behind the malfunction and prove her superiority over the ET travel agents.
Arc Ends: Through her experiences on the plane and interactions with the agents and tourists, Xiola begins to question her beliefs and priorities. She starts to see the value in cooperation and begins to change her perspective.
2. Internal/External Journey:
Internal Journey: Xiola's internal journey deepens as she confronts her own flaws and vulnerabilities. She struggles with the realization that her approach to life may not be sustainable in the long run.
External Journey: Externally, Xiola faces numerous challenges as she navigates the unfamiliar environment of present-day Earth. She must work with the ET travel agents and tourists to find a way back to their own time while avoiding detection or calamity.
3. Old Ways vs. New Ways:
Old Ways: Xiola's old ways continue to manifest in her reluctance to trust others and her insistence on following her own agenda.
New Ways: As the story progresses, Xiola learns to let go of her ego and embrace the skills of her companions. She begins to value cooperation and teamwork, understanding that true success comes from knowing oneself and recognizing the strengths of others.
Act 3:
1. Protagonist's Character Arc:
Arc Begins: Xiola reaches a breaking point as the situation becomes increasingly dire. She is forced to confront her deepest fears and insecurities.
Arc Ends: In the climax of the story, Xiola undergoes a profound transformation, fully embracing the values of cooperation and empathy. She is ready to accept and laugh at her shortcomings and face new challenges.
2. Internal/External Journey:
Internal Journey: Xiola's internal journey reaches its climax as she grapples with the realization that she cannot succeed alone. She must learn to trust her companions and rely on their strengths.
External Journey: Externally, Xiola and her companions face their biggest challenge yet as they race against time to fix the malfunction and return to their own time. Through teamwork and determination, they overcome the odds and emerge victorious.
3. Old Ways vs. New Ways:
Old Ways: Xiola’s thoughts, feelings and behaviors revolve around herself, making her insensitive with very little regard for the feelings, ideas and actions of others.
New Ways: In the end, Xiola begins to embrace a wider, more inclusive outlook on life, embracing the value of teamwork and cooperation. She emerges as a stronger, more compassionate individual, ready to face whatever challenges the future may hold.

[Farrin Rosenthal]

Farrin Rosenthal’s Lead Character's Transformational Journey

Farrin’s Vision: To do what it takes to become a highly paid A-List Hollywood writer whose produced movies will entertain audiences around the world.

What I learned doing this assignment is how to create a transformational journey for my protagonist. The character has to have an arc. He or she begins in one place and ends in another. This arc has an internal and external journey where the character changes from their old ways to their new ways.

Using the AI prompt for this assignment showed me my protagonist’s journey in far greater detail than what I wrote below. Wow!

Arc Beginning: Rose starts as a refined college student.
Arc Ending: She starts the Shadows of Justice, saves the town, and becomes the new Sheriff.

Internal Journey: From wanting to learn and do good to a leader and killer.
External Journey: From college student seeking a peaceful city life to wild west town savior and new Sheriff.

Old Ways: Learning skills to survive and thrive in the city. Non-leader, sits in the back of class, respectful of authority, helps bring life into the world.
New Ways: Learning skills to survive in the Wild West. A leader, a fighter, someone who can and will deliver justice, revenge seeker, a life-taker.

[Charles Jessen]

Chuck’s Transformational Journey of Protagonist

My Vision: I am a writer/director known for a particular brand of storytelling, in both comedies and dramas, that greatly appeal to their respective markets. I have Studios, Producers, and Actors wanting to work with me.

What I learned from this assignment: How to flush out and give depth to a character’s journey and how AI can help make the process so much easier.

Transformational Journey of Dr. Tom Walker

Character Arcs for Dr. Tom Walker in "Cat Town"

Dr. Tom Walker, Co-Protagonist
Arc Begins: Tom is introduced as a talented yet withdrawn and disillusioned local small-town veterinarian who remains deeply connected to his hometown of Limestone Springs despite feeling sometimes undervalued. He prefers to help animals now, as he finds some human behavior disgusting. His past relationship with Kathryn ended poorly ten years earlier, leaving him cynical about relationships and the scientific world she belongs to.

Arc Ends: By the end of "Cat Town," Tom has transformed into a more confident and engaged leader within his community, recognizing the significant impact he can have. His renewed bond with Kathryn and successful integration of his veterinary skills with non-scientific, intuitive common sense in solving the pandemic crisis reinvigorates his passion for both his profession and personal life.

Internal Journey: Tom's internal journey involves overcoming his skepticism and rediscovering his existential sense of purpose. He grapples with his feelings of inadequacy and learns to believe in himself and trust Kathryn again, reevaluating their relationship and collaborative potential.

External Journey: Externally, Tom confronts the virus's supernatural origins and the societal breakdown in Limestone Springs. His actions evolve from passive observation to active involvement, culminating in the risky strategy to reverse the curse using a blend of his veterinary knowledge and mystical, un-orthadox practices.

TOM – Old Ways/New Ways:
Old Ways:
• Laidback
• Detached, doubting his abilities to effect change
• Avoids deep emotional connections due to past hurt
• Prefers animals to humans as he thinks they’re kinder
• Resigned to a quiet life in his hometown as a Vet.

New Ways:
• Proactive
• Embraces his role as hero and community leader.
• Openly acknowledges his feelings for Katy.
• Embraces professional collaboration and open communication.
• Commits to using his unique skills toward a broader benefit of humanity.

• This reply was modified 1 year ago by  Charles Jessen.

[Dawn C Crouch]

Dawn Crouch’s Transformational Journey

To achieve success, I will write three-dimensional stories that connect and resonate.

What I learned from doing this assignment is that exploring the transformational journey ahead of time really helps the plotting and corrects possible missteps before you make them.

JAMES FONTENOT

Arc Beginning: Dead Man Walking – Successful corporate lawyer who deals with environmental issues from the confines of his air-conditioned office

Arc Beginning: James Fontenot strides through the polished halls of corporate law, a man of logic and calculation. His world is defined by facts and figures, his emotions locked away behind the polished veneer of professionalism. He is successful, yes, but his success comes at the cost of his authenticity. He is blind to the beauty around him, both in nature and in human connections, lost in the shadow of corporate interests that dictate his every move.

Arc Ending: He learns to live – Rebirth and new appreciation of life, love, and environment

Arc Ending: He learns to live By the story’s end, James undergoes a profound transformation. No longer confined by the walls of his office, he embraces life with open arms. His journey is one of rebirth, as he sheds the skin of his old life to reveal a man awakened to the wonders of the world. He not only fights for the environment but becomes its champion, recognizing the interconnectedness of all living things. His newfound courage propels him forward, no longer shackled by the expectations of others but guided by his own dreams and visions.

Internal Journey: From controlling and manipulative to sensient and supportive.

Internal Journey James’s internal journey is a tumultuous one, marked by the upheaval of his deeply ingrained beliefs and behaviors. At the outset, he is controlling and manipulative, using his skills to nvigate the corporate landscape with ease. But as the story unfolds, he confronts the limitations of this approach, realizing that true strength lies in vulnerability and empathy. He learns to unlock his emotions, embracing them as a source of strength rather than weakness. Through this emotional awakening, he becomes more supportive of those around him, fostering genuine connections rooted in authenticity.

External Journey: From confined corporate lawyer to making a real difference for the environment and oyster industry by finding his true love and true profession.

External Journey Externally, James's journey mirrors his internal evolution. He transitions from the confines of the corporate world to the untamed beauty of the Louisiana Bayou. Here, he discovers a new purpose, one intertwined with the fate of the oyster fishermen who call the bayou home. As he immerses himself in their way of life, he finds himself transformed, his actions driven not by profit margins but by a genuine desire to make a difference. He trades in his tailored suits for waders and mud-streaked boots, embracing the challenges of life on the water with courage and determination.

Old Ways:
• Facts and Figures only
• Emotions locked away
• Doesn’t acknowledge his preferences, visions, dreams
• Accepts the domination of corporate interests

Old Ways At the beginning of the story, James is a man consumed by the pursuit of success at any cost. His worldview is limited to facts and figures, his emotions buried beneath a facade of professionalism. He denies himself the luxury of dreams and visions, resigned to a life dictated by the demands of corporate interests. His acceptance of this status quo leaves him blind to the wonders of the world around him, a prisoner of his own making.

New Ways:
• Eyes open to the beauty and wonder of nature
• Champions the environment and lifestyle of the oyster fishermen
• Courageous.
• Open to his dreams and visions.

New Ways By the story’s end, James emerges reborn, a testament to the power of transformation. His eyes are open to the beauty and wonder of nature, and he embraces his role as a steward of the environment. No longer content to stand on the sidelines, he becomes a courageous advocate for change, challenging the status quo and championing the rights of the oyster fishermen. His newfound openness allows him to connect with others on a deeper level, fostering relationships built on mutual respect and understanding. And as he embraces his dreams and visions, he discovers a sense of purpose that transcends the confines of the corporate world, forging a new path guided by his own inner compass.

• This reply was modified 12 months ago by  Dawn C Crouch.

[John Trimbach]

John’s Transformational Journey
Vision: Sell or option 2 screenplays and acquire a manager for the rest.
What I learned doing this assignment is that AI needs a little coaxing with some of the more subtle story details
Main Character Sheriff Walter Egan
• Character Arc Beginning: Irresponsible, care-free, abandons his family, has sex with a young girl
• Arc Ending: responsible, honorable, honest, remorseful
• Internal Journey: Walter goes from being haunted by his memories to finally confronting them in stark terms.
• External Journey: Walter goes from being a wanton irresponsible pleasure seeking sailor to a concerned and fair-minded Sheriff who cares about his family.
• Old Ways: Walter is self-consumed, careless, hedonistic, absent father
• New Ways: kind, responsible, law abiding and upstanding lawman

[hari messer]

Hari's Transformational Journey

My Vision: I want to write screenplays that enable me to work with like minded creative people in the industry to produce profound movies that will have a long lasting positive effect on the world.

What I learned…The inner story is just as important as the outer one.

Protagonist: Colt McBride
Arc Beginning: Suspended cop. Running away from it all.
Arc Ending: Has defeated the aliens and saved the planet.
Internal Journey: Bitter. Anger issues. Lost faith in humanity, especially women. Not open to love for fear of getting hurt again.
External Journey: From down and out suspended cop to confident, able to handle anything life throws his way, hero.

Old Ways:
Doesn’t trust anyone.
Loner, just wants to be left alone.
Won’t go out of his way to help others.
Afraid of being hurt
Only sees things from his wounded perspective

New Ways:
Puts himself on the line for others
Willing to love again.
Renewed sense of energy and cause
Can handle loss
Sees the bigger picture

• This reply was modified 11 months ago by  hari messer.

[Tom Wilson]

Tom’s Transformational Journey

My vision is to use AI to work quickly to improve my writing quality and speed.

Doing this assignment, I find it easier each time to nail clever points.
1. Character Arc
Arc Begins:
• Who they are in the beginning:
o Name: Sara Amed, Afghanistan Scientist
o Issues and Limitations: Struggles to balance personal desires vs. duty to her people.
Arc Ends:
• How they changed and who they became at journey conclusion:
o Sara must balance the greater good over personal desires.

2. Internal/External Journey
Internal Journey:
• Beginning: Conflicted emotions about leaving Matt and her homeland.
• Middle: Feels guilt, loneliness after leaving Matt and joining Ratkin
• End: Will she stay with Ratkin or leave him to be with Matt?
External Journey:
• Beginning: Engages in scientific research with limited resources.
• Middle: Moves to U.S., marries Ratkin. Researches a cure for the disease
• End: Dilemma: Remain with Ratkin so she can research to find a cure, or go back to Matt and start a family.

Improvement: To enhance the internal and external journeys, ensure that Sara’s emotional struggles are mirrored by external conflicts and challenges. Create more scenarios where her internal decisions directly influence the plot, leading to tangible consequences and actions.
3. Old Ways / New Ways
Old Ways:
o Behaviors: Weighs personal happiness over saving her people.
o Emotions: Torn between love and duty.
o Thinking Patterns: Must choose between personal desires and her mission.
New Ways:
o Behaviors: Must she sacrifice personal happiness for a greater cause?
o Emotions: Confident in her abilities.
o Thinking Patterns: Understands the power of sacrifice for the greater good.

Improvement: To further develop the Old Ways and New Ways, ensure that these changes are gradually introduced through pivotal scenes and interactions. Show clear contrasts between Sara’s initial hesitations and her later decisiveness, using specific events and decisions to highlight her transformation.

3-Act Structure
Act 1: Setup
• Introduce Sara Amed, her life in Afghanistan relationship with Matt.
• Establish the deadly disease and Sara’s scientific aspirations.
• Present the ultimatum from General Ratkin and Sara’s dilemma.
• Sara makes the painful decision to leave Matt and marry Ratkin to pursue her PhD.
Act 2: Confrontation
• Sara’s struggles in the U.S., adjusts to her new life and research environment.
• The growing political tension as Ratkin prepares his presidential campaign.
• Sara’s internal conflict and loneliness, contrasted with progress in her research.
• Key turning points where Sara faces moral and ethical dilemmas.
Act 3: Resolution
• Sara discovers Ratkin’s corruption and true intentions.
• Climactic moment where Sara must choose between exposing Ratkin and securing her research.
• Sara successfully develops the cure and exposes Ratkin.
• Sara develops a potential cure which symbolizes her complete transformation.

This detailed breakdown ensures Sara Amed’s transformational journey is compelling and aligns with the thriller genre, emphasizing her growth from a conflicted individual to a determined and impactful leader.
Tom’s Transformational Journey

My vision is to use AI to work quickly to improve my writing quality and speed.

Doing this assignment, I find it easier each time to nail clever points.
1. Character Arc
Arc Begins:
• Who they are in the beginning:
o Name: Sara Amed, Afghanistan Scientist
o Issues and Limitations: Struggles to balance personal desires vs. duty to her people.
Arc Ends:
• How they changed and who they became at journey conclusion:
o Sara must balance the greater good over personal desires.

2. Internal/External Journey
Internal Journey:
• Beginning: Conflicted emotions about leaving Matt and her homeland.
• Middle: Feels guilt, loneliness after leaving Matt and joining Ratkin
• End: Will she stay with Ratkin or leave him to be with Matt?
External Journey:
• Beginning: Engages in scientific research with limited resources.
• Middle: Moves to U.S., marries Ratkin. Researches a cure for the disease
• End: Dilemma: Remain with Ratkin so she can research to find a cure, or go back to Matt and start a family.

Improvement: To enhance the internal and external journeys, ensure that Sara’s emotional struggles are mirrored by external conflicts and challenges. Create more scenarios where her internal decisions directly influence the plot, leading to tangible consequences and actions.
3. Old Ways / New Ways
Old Ways:
o Behaviors: Weighs personal happiness over saving her people.
o Emotions: Torn between love and duty.
o Thinking Patterns: Must choose between personal desires and her mission.
New Ways:
o Behaviors: Must she sacrifice personal happiness for a greater cause?
o Emotions: Confident in her abilities.
o Thinking Patterns: Understands the power of sacrifice for the greater good.

Improvement: To further develop the Old Ways and New Ways, ensure that these changes are gradually introduced through pivotal scenes and interactions. Show clear contrasts between Sara’s initial hesitations and her later decisiveness, using specific events and decisions to highlight her transformation.

3-Act Structure
Act 1: Setup
• Introduce Sara Amed, her life in Afghanistan relationship with Matt.
• Establish the deadly disease and Sara’s scientific aspirations.
• Present the ultimatum from General Ratkin and Sara’s dilemma.
• Sara makes the painful decision to leave Matt and marry Ratkin to pursue her PhD.
Act 2: Confrontation
• Sara’s struggles in the U.S., adjusts to her new life and research environment.
• The growing political tension as Ratkin prepares his presidential campaign.
• Sara’s internal conflict and loneliness, contrasted with progress in her research.
• Key turning points where Sara faces moral and ethical dilemmas.
Act 3: Resolution
• Sara discovers Ratkin’s corruption and true intentions.
• Climactic moment where Sara must choose between exposing Ratkin and securing her research.
• Sara successfully develops the cure and exposes Ratkin.
• Sara develops a potential cure which symbolizes her complete transformation.

This detailed breakdown ensures Sara Amed’s transformational journey is compelling and aligns with the thriller genre, emphasizing her growth from a conflicted individual to a determined and impactful leader.
Tom’s Transformational Journey
My vision is to use AI to work quickly to improve my writing quality and speed.
Doing this assignment, I find it easier each time to nail clever points.
1. Character Arc
Arc Begins:
• Who they are in the beginning:
o Name: Sara Amed, Afghanistan Scientist
o Issues and Limitations: Struggles to balance personal desires vs. duty to her people.
Arc Ends:
• How they changed and who they became at journey conclusion:
o Sara must balance the greater good over personal desires.
2. Internal/External Journey
Internal Journey:
• Beginning: Conflicted emotions about leaving Matt and her homeland.
• Middle: Feels guilt, loneliness after leaving Matt and joining Ratkin
• End: Will she stay with Ratkin or leave him to be with Matt?
External Journey:
• Beginning: Engages in scientific research with limited resources.
• Middle: Moves to U.S., marries Ratkin. Researches a cure for the disease
• End: Dilemma: Remain with Ratkin so she can research to find a cure, or go back to Matt and start a family.
Improvement: To enhance the internal and external journeys, ensure that Sara's emotional struggles are mirrored by external conflicts and challenges. Create more scenarios where her internal decisions directly influence the plot, leading to tangible consequences and actions.
3. Old Ways / New Ways
Old Ways:
o Behaviors: Weighs personal happiness over saving her people.
o Emotions: Torn between love and duty.
o Thinking Patterns: Must choose between personal desires and her mission.
New Ways:
o Behaviors: Must she sacrifice personal happiness for a greater cause?
o Emotions: Confident in her abilities.
o Thinking Patterns: Understands the power of sacrifice for the greater good.
Improvement: To further develop the Old Ways and New Ways, ensure that these changes are gradually introduced through pivotal scenes and interactions. Show clear contrasts between Sara's initial hesitations and her later decisiveness, using specific events and decisions to highlight her transformation.
3-Act Structure
Act 1: Setup
• Introduce Sara Amed, her life in Afghanistan relationship with Matt.
• Establish the deadly disease and Sara's scientific aspirations.
• Present the ultimatum from General Ratkin and Sara's dilemma.
• Sara makes the painful decision to leave Matt and marry Ratkin to pursue her PhD.
Act 2: Confrontation
• Sara's struggles in the U.S., adjusts to her new life and research environment.
• The growing political tension as Ratkin prepares his presidential campaign.
• Sara's internal conflict and loneliness, contrasted with progress in her research.
• Key turning points where Sara faces moral and ethical dilemmas.
Act 3: Resolution
• Sara discovers Ratkin's corruption and true intentions.
• Climactic moment where Sara must choose between exposing Ratkin and securing her research.
• Sara successfully develops the cure and exposes Ratkin.
• Sara develops a potential cure which symbolizes her complete transformation.
This detailed breakdown ensures Sara Amed's transformational journey is compelling and aligns with the thriller genre, emphasizing her growth from a conflicted individual to a determined and impactful leader.

• This reply was modified 10 months, 3 weeks ago by  Tom Wilson.

[Rebecca Smith]

Becky's Transformational Journey

I am an extraordinary writer – prolific, produced, profound, joyful, and well-paid – who writes stories that entertain and inspire.
What I learned – AI is a super helpful assistant to creativity! It takes the structure and makes it easy, rather than me laboring over the framework. It allows me to focus more on the story and is a great brainstorming partner..
Title: Goldstrike
Genre: Action/Thriller
Concept: Die Hard in a gold mine. When a treasure hunter covertly buys an abandoned gold mine under a touristy mountain community, residents resist its reopening. Mercenaries storm the town to open the mine and get the gold.
Protagonist: Daytona Levesque
1. Character Arc
Arc Begins:
• Who They Are at the Beginning: Daytona is a former Navy SEAL who has returned to his hometown for Christmas. He is emotionally distant, haunted by his past experiences in combat, and estranged from his father, who was once the mine's foreman. Daytona feels a deep sense of guilt and failure for not maintaining relationships and for not being able to protect those he cared about in the past.
Arc Ends:
• Who They Are at the End: By the end of the story, Daytona has transformed into a confident and connected leader. He has reconciled with his father, overcoming his emotional barriers. Daytona accepts his past, uses it as a source of strength, and finds a new purpose in protecting and leading his community.
Improvement Suggestions for Character Arc:
• Foreshadow Change Early: Introduce subtle hints of Daytona's potential for leadership and connection in early interactions.
• Pivotal Moments: Create key moments where Daytona's decisions lead to small but significant changes, building up to his final transformation.
• Reflective Dialogue: Use dialogue with other characters, such as his father and Linda, to reflect on his internal changes and highlight his growing emotional resilience.

2. Internal/External Journey
Internal Journey:
• Beginning: Daytona is emotionally closed off, plagued by guilt and haunted by his combat experiences. He avoids deep connections, fearing failure and loss.
• Middle: Daytona begins to confront his past, especially his relationship with his father. Through the conflict with the mercenaries, he learns to trust and rely on others, opening up emotionally.
• End: Daytona has reconciled with his father and embraced his role as a protector. He finds peace with his past and recognizes the strength in vulnerability and connection.
External Journey:
• Beginning: Daytona arrives in his hometown, intending to spend a quiet Christmas. The town is soon threatened by mercenaries seeking to reopen the mine.
• Middle: Daytona leads the townspeople in defending their home. He uses his military skills to strategize and combat the mercenaries, facing numerous physical challenges.
• End: Daytona successfully leads the townspeople to overcome the mercenaries, uncover the mine’s secrets, and prevent the release of the ancient evil. He reestablishes his place in the community and finds a new purpose.
Improvement Suggestions for Internal/External Journey:
• Parallel Development: Ensure that internal growth is mirrored by external achievements, with each external challenge pushing Daytona to grow internally.
• Symbolic Actions: Use Daytona’s physical actions to symbolize his internal journey, such as dismantling traps (breaking down emotional barriers) or saving townspeople (rebuilding connections).
• Consistent Obstacles: Introduce consistent internal and external obstacles that force Daytona to adapt and grow simultaneously.

3. Old Ways vs. New Ways
Old Ways:
• Behaviors: Avoids emotional connections, reluctant to engage with the community, relies solely on his own skills, and avoids confronting his past.
• Emotions: Feels guilt, isolation, and a fear of failure and loss.
• Thinking Patterns: Believes that relying on others is a weakness, thinks he must shoulder burdens alone, and doubts his ability to protect and lead.
New Ways:
• Behaviors: Engages actively with the community, collaborates and trusts others, reconciles with his father, and takes on a leadership role.
• Emotions: Feels connected, confident, and at peace with his past, embracing vulnerability as a strength.
• Thinking Patterns: Understands the power of teamwork and community, recognizes that sharing burdens makes him stronger, and believes in his capacity to lead and protect effectively.
Improvement Suggestions for Old Ways/New Ways:
• Clear Contrasts: Make the contrast between old and new ways stark and impactful, showing clear behavioral, emotional, and cognitive shifts.
• Gradual Transition: Show a realistic and gradual transition from old to new ways, with setbacks and moments of doubt to make the change more believable.
• Reinforcement: Use secondary characters and subplots to reinforce the changes in Daytona, highlighting how his transformation positively impacts those around him.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 3: The Transformational Journey
Sylvia’s Transformational Journey
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.

What I learned from doing this assignment is…the fulfillment of the layers is fascinating. It’s time consuming and well worth the effort. This is an enlightening exercise.
Only do this assignment for your Protagonist. This is about creating the Transformational Journey for the Hero/Heroin only. This journey is the journey of the entire movie.
2. Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:
• Arc Beginning: Bored, unambitious, self-loather—lost in her meaning for life.
• Arc Ending: Ambitious, sot after Entrepreneur—helping others find their purpose.
3. Give us their Internal/External Journey.
• Internal Journey: From weak and naïve to strong and self-confident
• External Journey: From a trusting artist who is easily manipulated to a well-respected business woman who brings down a narcistic con.
4. Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
• Old Ways: Overly trusting and giving to a fault
• New Ways: Self-Awareness and ability to see through with the strength to stop manipulation tactics

Homework Answers:
Genre =Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Protagonist = Hope, A well-known artist, is unhappily married to Will.
Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband, nor her life’s situation.

3 Act Structure =
**Act 1:**
In the vibrant but secretive art scene of a Southern town, Hope Harwood, under the pseudonym “Lila Rayne,” allows her high school sweetheart, Joy Sinclair, to use her artwork to stay financially afloat. Their intense reunion breathes new life into Ellie’s dormant passions, but tension mounts when Ellie discovers her husband Will in an intimate moment with her brother Michael, casting shadows over her already complex life.

**Act 2:**
Hope escapes with Joy to a tranquil lakeside retreat, seeking clarity and space to breathe. As they reconnect, Hope’s sacrifice becomes a betrayal when Joy begins to claim Hope’s entire artistic identity as her own. Back home, Will’s hidden emotional connection with Michael surfaces, compounding the betrayals and leaving Hope feeling suffocated by the secrets surrounding her.

**Act 3:**
Returning home to a storm of deceit, Hope confronts the devastating impact of Joy’s theft and the unraveling secrets between Will and Michael. Facing these betrayals, Hope chooses to reclaim her life and identity. She and Will part ways amicably as she begins to mend her professional reputation and personal relationships. As the dust settles, Hope rediscovers her voice in the art world, inspired by her journey through love’s shadows and the quest for authenticity.

– **Act 1:** Sets up Hope’s internal conflicts and external circumstances, introducing the key players (Will, Joy, Michael) and the seeds of betrayal.
– **Act 2:** Delves into the heart of Hope’s internal struggle and external challenges, where betrayals surface, and her old ways are increasingly challenged.
– **Act 3:** Brings Hope’s transformation to the forefront, where she actively confronts and resolves the betrayals, leading to her embrace of the new ways.

Transformational Journey for Hope in “Identity Crisis”
Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:
#### **1. Character Arc:**
– **Arc Begins:*- **Who She Is at the Start:**
Hope is a well-known artist, respected in her community yet emotionally detached from her own life. She lives under the weight of her own unfulfilled dreams and desires. She is unhappily married to Will, and though she respects him, she does not love him. She feels trapped in a marriage that stifles her emotionally and creatively. Hope is guilt-ridden, feeling a sense of duty to her husband despite the lack of true affection. Her life takes a turn when she reunites with Joy, an old flame whose passionate and vibrant approach to life reignites old feelings. Her deep, unresolved feelings for Joy Sinclair, a vivacious art curator who was once her closest friend and first love, remain buried but powerful. The lingering emotional connection with Joy is a source of both excitement and guilt for Hope as it unravels into a sinister stolen identity scheme.
– **Issues and Limitations:**
– Emotional detachment from her current life
– A sense of obligation to her marriage commitment
– Insecurity about pursuing her own happiness
– Creative stagnation due to emotional repression
-Lack of self-confidence in her own decisions
– Guilt over her unresolved feelings for Joy
– Fear of revisiting past romantic feelings

– **Arc Ends:**- **Who She Becomes by the End:**
By the end of her journey, Hope has undergone a profound transformation. She has reclaimed her identity, both personally and professionally. Hope is no longer defined by her marriage or her past but by her own choices and her reawakened passion for her art. She lets go of guilt and embraces her right to happiness, moving past her relationship with Joy who betrayed her trust, finding peace in her decisions and a renewed sense of purpose. She finds solace in her husband of whom was also living the same lie as they form a stronger friendship bond. The betrayal by Joy, who steals her identity, becomes the catalyst for Hope’s ultimate liberation. In reclaiming her identity and artistic voice, Hope emerges stronger, more confident, and ready to live life on her own terms.
– **Changes and Growth:**
– Emotional liberation from guilt
– Self-assurance in her decisions
– Reclamation of her creative identity
– Rejection of destructive relationships
– Independence and confidence
**How to Improve the Character Arc:** To deepen Hope’s arc, emphasize the intense emotional history, vulnerability and connection she has with Joy and how this shapes her journey. This connection should be the driving force behind Hope’s internal struggle and external actions. Illustrate her initial hesitance to reconnect with Joy due to past emotions, evolving into a deep trust, and finally, a profound sense of betrayal and empowerment from overcoming this betrayal.
Give us their Internal/External Journey.
#### **2. Internal/External Journey:**
– **Internal Journey:*- **How She Changes Emotionally and Mentally:**
Hope’s internal journey revolves around her grappling with rekindled feelings for Joy, which forces her to confront her dissatisfaction with her current life. At the start, these feelings are a source of guilt and confusion, but as she reconnects with Joy, they awaken a sense of passion and longing that Hope has suppressed for years. However, this emotional reawakening also brings about a crisis when Joy betrays her. Hope’s internal journey is one of reconciling her love for Joy with the pain of betrayal, ultimately leading her to a place of emotional clarity where she can let go of the past and embrace her own identity.
– **Key Emotional Shifts:**
– From guilt to acceptance of her loveless marriage
– From emotional detachment to passionate reawakening
– From repression to emotional openness
– From heartbreak to emotional empowerment
– From betrayal to self-empowerment
– From dependency to self-reliance

– **External Journey:**- **How Her Actions and Experiences Change:**
Externally, Hope’s journey revolves around her rekindled relationship with Joy, which initially brings excitement and a sense of revival to her life. As their relationship deepens, Hope allows Joy to use her artwork, which she views as an act of love and trust. However, when Joy begins to claim her entire artistic identity, Hope’s external journey shifts dramatically from passive acceptance to active confrontation. Betrayed by the person she trusted most, Hope is forced to fight for her identity, both personally and professionally. This battle leads her to confront not only Joy’s manipulative grasp but also the other unresolved issues in her life, including her marriage to Will.
– **Key Actions and Experiences:**
– Reconnecting with Joy, leading to emotional and creative revival and collaboration
– Discovering Joy’s betrayal and theft of her identity
– Confronting Joy and reclaiming her artwork and reputation
– Publicly reclaiming her artistic identity and separating from destructive relationships
– Addressing the unraveling of her marriage and deciding to move on
**How to Improve the Internal/External Journey:** To strengthen the connection between Hope’s internal and external journeys, ensure that her deep emotional bond with Joy is mirrored in her external actions that reflect her growing independence and strength. For instance, as Hope becomes more emotionally open, show her taking bold steps to protect her art and sever ties with Joy. The betrayal should feel like a personal and professional crisis that shakes Hope to her core, making her ultimate reclamation of self even more impactful.
Tell us their Old Ways at beginning of movie and their New Ways at end.
#### **3. Old Ways/New Ways:**
– **Old Ways:**- **Behaviors, Emotions, and Thinking Patterns at the Beginning:**
– Hope is emotionally detached from her current life, particularly in her marriage.
– She feels guilty for her lack of love for Will, which keeps her stuck in an unhappy marriage.
– Hope is reserved and avoids emotional risks, particularly with Joy.
– She feels a deep sense of guilt and unresolved feelings towards Joy, which she suppresses to maintain the status quo.
– Hope is creatively stagnant, using her art as a means of escape rather than self-expression.
– Hope represses her true desires and artistic expression.
– She avoids taking risks or making decisions that would disrupt her current life, leading to a sense of powerlessness.
– She allows Joy to influence her decisions due to old affections.

– **New Ways:**- **Behaviors, Emotions, and Thinking Patterns at the End:**
– Hope becomes emotionally engaged and assertive, confronting her true feelings for Joy and the consequences of their relationship.
– She lets go of the guilt associated with her feelings for Joy, accepting them as part of her journey towards self-discovery.
– She takes control of her life, making bold decisions to reclaim her identity and move forward through and beyond betrayal without fear.
– Hope experiences a creative resurgence, using her art to express her journey and newfound sense of self.
– She takes decisive actions to distance herself from Joy and her marriage ensuring her personal and professional autonomy.

**How to Improve the Old Ways/New Ways:** To make the transformation more compelling, deepen the emotional stakes in Hope’s relationship with Joy at the beginning of the story. Show her vulnerabilities and how they manifest in her early decisions. This will make the shift to the “New Ways” more powerful, as Hope’s journey will feel like a true emotional awakening and reclamation of her life and identity. Enhance her new ways by showing her taking concrete steps to protect her work and public identity, such as through legal actions or new exhibitions that clearly mark her independent path.

• This reply was modified 8 months ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk. Reason: posted as a big blob. hopefully this will take properly