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Abdul Show Summary

Set up — Character’s normal situation:

Alex, the cafe owner and heir to a family legacy, grapples with the responsibilities of running the cafe. Meanwhile, Amelia, haunted by guilt from her past, frequents the cafe, attempting to help patrons secretly. Little does she know, her past experiments, including one on Alex, remain hidden.

Twist/Hook:

Unbeknownst to the cafe regulars, there’s a hidden room in the basement, and Amelia is haunted by her mysterious past actions.

Layer beneath surface – Major Empathy / Distress:

As Alex discovers the limitations of his Methuselah Gene, Evelyn, the separated wife with her own Book Nook, secretly influences cafe patrons through her therapeutic insights.

Twist/Hook:

Strange memories start haunting Alex, leading to a dramatic confrontation between Amelia, Alex, and Evelyn. The mystery deepens as the impact of an experiment unfolds.

Impossible to solve conflict or major mystery:

Amelia aims to manipulate Alex’s behavior, creating conflicts with Evelyn, who seeks genuine interactions. The hidden room and the mysterious experiment become central to an unsolvable conflict.

Final Hook into the Series – Extreme Dramatic Question:

With relationships strained, secrets revealed, and an impending longevity crisis, can Alex navigate the intricate web of the cafe’s mysteries, including the hidden room and his own gene, while maintaining the delicate balance between his patrons?

Format/Genre = 5 act structure with a 2 minute teaser at the beginning it’s a Drama / Thriller

Concept = A. Engaging and highly proactive hero or group…Alex has the Methuselah Gene and has to find its connection to his inherited Cafe.

B. …up against a major conflict…that he will ultimately out live his family and friends

C. …goes on unique transformational journey…Learns that the Gene can be turned on and off

D. …Into an intriguing world. within the mysterious walls of the Cafe.

Pilot Structure = Pilot as the inciting incident

Engaging and Intriguing Character: Amelia uses multiple aliases and disguises to protect her true identity and past associations.

She has a hidden online presence where she communicates with her covert contacts, unbeknownst to the cafe’s regulars.

Intriguing World: The Cafe

Empathy/Distress: Alex, the cafe owner with the Methuselah Gene learns that his gene’s potential longevity is marred by a rare, incurable health condition

Mystery: Through the season Amelia is haunted by her past actions. As Alex starts experiencing strange memories, the truth about the experiment

and it’s impact on his life gradually comes to light, leading to a dramatic confrontation between Amelia, Alex and Evelyn

Layers: There’s a hidden room in the basement of the Cafe

Open Loops: Evelyn who operates the Book Nook inside the Cafe and is married to Alex but separated. She mislead people’s mind through books in

her Book Nook. She’s a retired therapist who offers her insights and advice to fellow patrons becoming an unofficial counselor.

Conflict:Amelia aims to manipulate Alex’s behavior, creating conflict with Evelyn, who wants genuine interactions with cafe patrons.

Relationship Hooks: Alex and Evelyn are Ex-sposes

Irony: Despite his creative talents, Oliver struggles with writer’s block. The cafe, which is meant to be a hub of inspiration, becomes a place of frustration for him as he battles to find the words that will bring his stories to life.

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Abdul Episode Descriptions

What I learned doing this assignment is to keep moving forward no matter what.

Episode 1: “Awakening”

Teaser: A mysterious note hints at the Methuselah Gene’s link to the Cafe. Alex delves into its history, discovering a hidden online community.

Major Challenge: Alex grapples with outliving loved ones, keeping the gene secret. Oliver finds ancient artifacts, sparking a journey into gene origins.

Cliffhanger: Dr. Amelia suspects more to the gene than Alex reveals, setting the stage for a mysterious unraveling.

Episode 2: “Unveiling Secrets”

Teaser: Flashbacks unravel the figure’s past. Alex and Oliver uncover the gene’s impact. Evelyn confronts Alex, straining their relationship.

Midpoint: Dr. Amelia suspects dangers. The group decides to keep the gene hidden, facing increasing challenges.

Cliffhanger: A new patron claims knowledge of the gene’s secret society connection, escalating the intrigue.

Episode 3: “Whispers of the Past”

Teaser: A patron reveals a journal detailing past experiences with the gene. External pressure grows as rumors spread.

Major Challenge: Evelyn helps navigate emotional challenges. The group investigates the secret society, leading to a perilous encounter.

Cliffhanger: A figure from Alex’s past threatens to expose the Methuselah Gene.

Episode 4: “Choices and Consequences”

Teaser: A mysterious figure warns of gene secrets. Alex struggles with ethical dilemmas. Dr. Amelia reveals her experiment’s true purpose.

Midpoint: Confrontation with the secret society forces tough choices with lasting consequences.

Cliffhanger: Oliver taps into the gene’s power, causing unintended consequences and raising stakes.

Episode 5: “Boundaries Blurred”

Teaser: Oliver’s abilities affect the Cafe. Alex struggles to control the gene. Tensions rise as personal and mysterious worlds collide.

Midpoint: Evelyn uncovers a forgotten story, hinting at controlling the gene’s powers.

Cliffhanger: Dr. Amelia discovers a hidden truth, challenging her relationship with the group.

Episode 6: “Revelations”

Teaser: Flashbacks reveal Dr. Amelia’s role in gene creation. The group confronts her, facing internal conflicts.

Major Challenge: The group races against time to uncover the Cafe’s purpose and gene connection.

Cliffhanger: A revelation about a hidden chamber exposes a dark secret, threatening to change everything.

Episode 7: “Echoes of Time”

Teaser: The group discovers a chamber hinting at the gene’s time-manipulating ability. Alex grapples with the responsibility.

Major Challenge: The secret society intensifies efforts, putting the group in danger. A prophecy reveals consequences of reckless gene use.

Cliffhanger: The group’s decision leads to immediate and irreversible consequences.

Episode 8: “The Unraveling” (Season Finale)

Teaser: News of the group’s actions attracts powerful forces. Alex confronts fallout, protecting loved ones.

Major Challenge: The secret society launches a final assault. Oliver’s creative abilities offer hope.

Cliffhanger: A revelation about the gene’s true nature leaves the Cafe and its patrons’ fate hanging in the balance.

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Abdul Rahim Intriguing Concept and World

1. Concept

• A. Engaging and highly proactive hero or group…Alex has the Methuselah Gene and has to find its connection to his inherited Cafe.
• B. …up against a major conflict…that he will ultimately out live his family and friends
• C. …goes on unique transformational journey…Learns that the Gene can be turned on and off
• D. …Into an intriguing world. within the mysterious walls of the Cafe.

1. World

Unique Sub-World: Inside the mysterious four walls of the Cafe.

Previously unexplored: The connection between Methuselah Gene, the cafe,

history and inheritance.

The unknown: will fear keep Alex from connecting his past to his future

The unseen: How the gene is effected, the experiment performed on him and

who’s behind it all.

Unheard of dangers: While operating his inherited cafe Alex uncovers a

hidden room, letters from his grandmother dated two hundred years ago

and who’s responsible for his grandfather’s disappearance.

Reason to explore it: To find the truth about who he really is and what the

cafe represents.

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Abdul Creating Irony The Cafe

Character Irony:

• Alex: Despite owning a cafe focused on healing and connection, he is emotionally distant and struggling to mend his own broken relationship with Evelyn.
• Oliver: As a gifted writer, Oliver struggles with writer’s block and has difficulty expressing his thoughts and emotions in real life.
• Dr. Amelia: While being a behavioral psychologist who helps others, she battles her own internal demons and insecurities, making her question her ability to truly help others.
• Evelyn: Despite running the Book Nook, she’s lost her own sense of connection with Alex and is grappling with the irony of fostering love through literature while her own marriage falls apart.
• Alex: He’s known for his wisdom and advice in the cafe but often fails to heed his own counsel, creating a disconnect between his public persona and private life.
• Oliver: As a writer, he’s excellent at creating fictional characters but struggles to understand the real people around him, leading to misunderstandings and misjudgments.
• Dr. Amelia: She frequently analyzes people’s behavior but is oblivious to the romantic feelings Oliver has for her, showcasing her emotional blindness.
• Evelyn: Despite promoting love and connection in the Book Nook, she’s become isolated from the world and has to reconcile her own loneliness.
• Alex: He encourages others to open up about their past in the cafe, yet he’s the most secretive one about his own past and the Methuselah gene.
• Oliver: Although he’s a writer, he prefers to communicate through text and writing, struggling with verbal communication and face-to-face interactions.

Situational Irony:

• The Cafe Setting: A place meant for healing and connection becomes a hub for secrets, lies, and unresolved personal issues among the characters.
• Alex and Evelyn’s Marriage: They run a cafe centered on love and connection, but their own marriage is falling apart, highlighting the disconnect between their public and private lives.
• Oliver’s Writer’s Block: The cafe is a hub for creativity and expression, yet Oliver, a writer, faces severe writer’s block when he’s there.
• Dr. Amelia’s Blindness: As a behavioral psychologist who studies human behavior, Dr. Amelia remains unaware of Oliver’s romantic feelings for her, demonstrating her emotional blindness.
• Evelyn’s Book Nook: While she promotes literature as a means of connection, she becomes isolated and disconnected from others.
• Alex’s Methuselah Gene: He is granted a long life, yet he is emotionally disconnected from the people around him.
• The Healing Atmosphere: Despite the cafe’s soothing atmosphere, tensions and conflicts continually brew beneath the surface.
• Cafe Patrons: Regular customers come to the cafe seeking solace and healing, but their presence often brings chaos and conflict into the cafe’s serene ambiance.
• Oliver’s Artistic Talents: As a gifted writer, Oliver’s talents are not appreciated by the cafe’s patrons, who are often more interested in their own problems.
• Evelyn’s Love for Literature: Despite her deep love for literature, her inability to connect with Alex showcases the irony of her own life story differing from those in the books she treasures.

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Abdul Creating Irony

What I learned doing this assignment is that we can take almost anything and flip it upside down and make things Ironic. It’s an easy and nice skillset to have under your belt.

Example Show. Scandal

• Olivia, the main character, is a crisis manager who helps powerful people handle and cover up scandals. Ironically, despite her expertise in managing others’ scandals, her personal life is filled with numerous scandals and complications.
• Huck, a character in the show, is a former black ops agent with a dark and violent past. The irony lies in his name, which is a contrast to his ruthless and brutal actions.
• The President of the United States, is involved in extramarital affairs throughout the series. The ironic that he’s the leader of the nation but struggles with personal moral dilemmas and scandals.
• Cyrus the White House Chief of Staff, is known for his cunning and manipulative tactics to control situations. Ironically, his personal life is often chaotic and filled with its own set of scandals.
• Mellie is ambitious and desires political power, but her husband’s actions continually undermine her aspirations. The irony is in her position as the First Lady, yet she struggles to wield influence in the way she desires.
• Quinn has a hidden past that is revealed. The irony is in between her apparent innocence and her true identity, which is tied to a darker side of the story.

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Assignment 2. My show

Titled: The Cafe

Act 1: Surface Layer

• Plot Layer: The cafe is a place for people to share and heal, but beneath the surface, there’s a major scheme at play. Unknown to Alex, there’s a secret society that knows about his methuselah gene and is manipulating events in the cafe to exploit it.
• Character Layer: Alex’s hidden wound is revealed—he is haunted by the fear of losing control over his extraordinary abilities and the potential harm it could cause to those around him.
• Location Layer: The Book Nook is not just a quaint corner; it hides a secret room that Evelyn uses to eavesdrop on conversations, gaining insights that she subtly uses to influence the patrons.

Act 2: New Surface

• Plot Layer: Oliver, the writer, discovers the secret society’s existence and unwittingly becomes entangled in their plan. He thought the stories he used for his writing were mere fiction, but they hold the key to the society’s motives.
• Character Layer: Dr. Amelia’s experiment is revealed; she’s not just a casual observer but is working for the secret society, manipulating events in the cafe to study Alex’s reactions to various situations.
• Location Layer: The seemingly ordinary cafe has hidden rooms and passages, serving as meeting places for the secret society, revealing it to be a hub for clandestine activities.

Act 3: Major Shift

• Plot Layer: The mystery deepens as the patrons, including Evelyn, start questioning the true nature of the cafe and its purpose. The major shift occurs when the society’s grand plan is unveiled—using Alex’s gene to create a powerful weapon.
• Character Layer: Oliver’s hidden relationship is exposed—he has a connection to one of the society members, complicating his loyalties and putting him in a moral dilemma.
• Location Layer: A secret location is discovered beneath the cafe, where the society conducts experiments related to the methuselah gene.

Act 4: Unveiling Truths

• Plot Layer: Alex’s gene is not just unique but has a connection to a hidden history involving ancient civilizations and a prophecy. The cafe’s role in preserving this knowledge becomes crucial.
• Character Layer: Dr. Amelia’s true agenda is revealed—she wants to use Alex’s gene to unlock the secrets of human potential, believing it could reshape society.
• Location Layer: Thought to be a single location, the cafe is part of a network of similar establishments worldwide, each harboring unique individuals with extraordinary abilities.

Act 5: Climax and Resolution

• Plot Layer: The climax involves a confrontation between Alex and the society, forcing him to make a choice—embrace his gene to protect the knowledge or suppress it to prevent exploitation.
• Character Layer: Evelyn’s hidden agenda is exposed—she knew about the society and was secretly working to protect Alex, using her Book Nook to mislead them.
• Location Layer: The cafe, once a place of conflict, transforms into a sanctuary where the patrons, now aware of the hidden layers, decide to protect the knowledge and use their unique abilities for the greater good.

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Abdul. Example Show Scandal

What I learned doing this assignment is layers add depth to any character, story or location

Assignment 1

Plot Layers:

Quin getting off a murder trial unexpectedly

President sleeping around

Voter election rigging going on

Olivia and team work to uncover who Quin really is

Huck has a mysterious and dark past as a former government assassin

Cyrus protecting the President from all the would be scandals of and in the White House

President and First Lady having marital problems in the midst of her seeking political power

All of Olivia’s team have mysterious pasts

Character Layers:

Quin is a alias her real name is Lindsey

Abby sleeps with Ex attorney general

Melle fakes a miscarriage

The President wants to divorce his wife and marry Olivia

Cyrus is gay

The first lady mentioned her running for president which it seems was her plan all along to have a political career

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Abdul. Big Picture Open Loops

The Cafe:

What I learned doing this assignment is how important these big picture open loops are. They will keep you coming back again and again and again. I enjoyed this process because it opened my mind to what the capabilities are with my show.

Act 1:

Goals:

• Alex decides to expand the cafe’s influence by hosting live events, aiming to bring in new patrons and generate more stories for Oliver to use in his writing.
• Oliver’s goal is to overcome his writer’s block and find a way to ethically use the patrons’ stories without violating their trust.

Consequences:

• The cafe’s popularity grows, attracting the attention of a local business tycoon who sees it as a threat to his own establishments.
• Oliver’s writing gains recognition, but one of the patrons discovers the unauthorized use of their story, leading to a potential scandal.

Solving Problems:

• Alex’s major problem is controlling his methuselah gene, as he starts experiencing unpredictable bursts of enhanced abilities.
• Amelia is determined to unravel the mystery behind Alex’s behavior and its connection to the experiment she conducted.

Relationships:

• Alex and Evelyn’s relationship becomes more strained as Evelyn senses Alex’s secret, leading to a confrontation.
• Oliver develops a romantic interest in a regular patron, complicating his use of their personal stories for his writing.

Dangers:

• The cafe becomes a target for vandalism orchestrated by the business tycoon, putting everyone’s safety at risk.
• Alex’s enhanced abilities start to attract the attention of a mysterious organization interested in people with unique genetic traits.

Act 2:

Goals:

• Alex seeks out a specialist to help him understand and control his methuselah gene.
• Oliver faces a moral dilemma when a famous author offers to collaborate with him, but the collaboration involves exploiting the cafe’s patrons.

Consequences:

• The specialist reveals the potential dangers of Alex’s gene, linking it to a series of unexplained incidents throughout history.
• The collaboration with the famous author leads to public backlash, threatening the cafe’s reputation.

Solving Problems:

• Alex’s attempts to control his gene result in unintended consequences, putting the cafe and its patrons in greater danger.
• Amelia discovers that her experiment on Alex might have triggered the manifestation of his abilities.

Relationships:

• Evelyn becomes a confidante for a troubled patron, blurring the lines between her role as a counselor and her personal life.
• Tensions rise between Oliver and the cafe patrons as they learn about his collaboration with the famous author.

Dangers:

• The mysterious organization intensifies its efforts to recruit Alex, forcing him to go on the run to protect himself and those around him.
• Amelia’s investigation puts her at odds with the organization, making her a target as well.

Act 3:

Goals:

• Alex, now in hiding, searches for answers about the origins of the methuselah gene and how to neutralize its effects.
• Oliver, feeling guilty about the scandal, tries to make amends with the patrons and salvage his reputation as a writer.

Consequences:

• Alex discovers a secret society connected to the methuselah gene, and their motives are not entirely clear.
• The cafe patrons, feeling betrayed by Oliver, form alliances to expose the truth behind his writing and its impact on their lives.

Solving Problems:

• Alex’s investigation into the secret society uncovers a potential ally with knowledge about controlling the gene, but their motives are questionable.
• Amelia faces a crisis of conscience as she grapples with the ethical implications of her experiment on Alex.

Relationships:

• Evelyn’s role as a counselor becomes even more vital as the cafe patrons navigate the fallout from Oliver’s actions.
• The strained relationship between Alex and Evelyn takes an unexpected turn as they find themselves united against a common threat.

Dangers:

• The secret society targets Alex, Oliver, and Amelia, viewing them as obstacles to their agenda.
• The cafe’s reputation is irreparably damaged, and the patrons face personal and professional consequences from the revelations in Oliver’s writing.

(Continued…)

Act 4:

Goals:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia form an uneasy alliance to confront the secret society and protect themselves and the cafe patrons.
• The cafe patrons, now more interconnected than ever, strive to rebuild trust and overcome the challenges exposed by Oliver’s actions.

Consequences:

• The secret society launches a coordinated attack on the cafe, revealing their true intentions and the potential global impact of the methuselah gene.
• The patrons’ efforts to rebuild trust face setbacks as old conflicts and secrets resurface.

Solving Problems:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia unlock the true potential of the methuselah gene, discovering that it can be used to benefit humanity if controlled.
• The patrons come together to confront their own demons, finding strength in their shared experiences and forming a resilient community.

Relationships:

• Alex and Evelyn’s relationship undergoes a transformation as they rediscover their connection amid the chaos caused by the secret society.
• Oliver seeks redemption by using his writing to shed light on the ethical implications of genetic experimentation and the importance of personal responsibility.

Dangers:

• The secret society’s influence reaches unexpected levels, with powerful individuals and government agencies becoming entangled in their plans.
• The cafe becomes a battleground, and the patrons must face physical and emotional dangers to protect the newfound unity they’ve forged.

Act 5:

Goals:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia, armed with the knowledge of the methuselah gene’s potential, decide to confront the secret society head-on and expose their activities to the world.
• The cafe patrons, now a tight-knit community, strive to rebuild the cafe and its reputation, turning it into a symbol of resilience and shared humanity.

Consequences:

• The confrontation with the secret society results in a revelation that challenges the characters’ understanding of morality, raising the question of whether the ends justify the means.
• The cafe patrons, having faced their own demons, become beacons of inspiration for others dealing with personal struggles.

Solving Problems:

• Alex, Oliver, and Amelia must make difficult choices as they navigate the ethical dilemmas posed by the methuselah gene and the potential consequences of their actions.
• The cafe patrons, through their collective strength, turn the negative impact of Oliver’s writing into an opportunity for growth and connection.

Relationships:

• The relationships among the characters evolve as they confront the moral complexities of their actions, leading to both reconciliation and separation.
• The cafe becomes a symbol of hope and resilience, drawing in new patrons who are inspired by the stories of overcoming adversity.

Dangers:

• The secret society, now exposed, resorts to desperate measures to protect their agenda, putting the characters and the cafe in greater danger than ever before.
• The consequences of the characters’ actions reverberate globally, raising questions about the potential misuse of genetic advancements and the responsibility that comes with extraordinary abilities.

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Abdul. Sample show. Scandal Big Picture Open Loops

1) What is a gladiator in a suit?

2) Will Steven propose to his girlfriend?

3) Who killed Lieutenant Sully Saint James girlfriend?

4) Will Steven and Alicia see each other again?

5) What more evidence could Olivia’s team bring forth to prove Sully’s innocence?

6) Will Olivia start dating anyone?

7) What is the story of every person on Olivia’s team?

8) Do Abby have feelings for Steven and is she jealous of his and his girlfriends relationship?

9) Will the President and Olivia continue to commit adultery?

10) Why does Olivia put so mush attention and trust in her gut feelings?

11) How did Olivia get in such a deep relationship with the President?

12) Why is it a big deal that Olivia doesn’t cry nor want any of her associates to cry?

13) What secret is Olivia living with for a long period of time?

14) Does Amanda Tanner come forward and tell the world about her adulterated activities with the President?

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Abdul. Show Mysteries season 1: The Cafe

Assignment: 2

What I learned doing this assignment is if you get mystery right it swings the door open wide for repeated viewership. It seems to demand that you return to see what happens next.

With this TV [Concept] in [Format/Genre], and these [Lead Characters], give me a list of possible mysteries that could be created for Season 1.

Mystery Definition: The intriguing secret, question, or puzzle that must be solved by the hero, often connected to high stakes and consequences for the main characters.

Format/Genre = 5 act structure with a 2 minute teaser at the beginning Drama / Thriller

Concept = is a drama/thriller series set in a cafe, a place where patrons can meet, share their experiences and past. The cafe serves as a hub to interact with others but it also acts as a place to heal.

Lead Characters =

Character 1 = Alex who owns the Cafe and has the methuselah gene and is married to Evelyn but separated. His goal is to keep his gene hidden and to

harness it and not be overwhelmed by it.

Character 2 = Oliver who is a gifted writer, musician and works in the Cafe. He wish to get recognition for his writing and overcome writers block. He uses the patrons

personal and private stories to write about without their permission.

Character 3 = Dr. Amelia who is a Behavioral Psychologist and frequents the Cafe. Her goal is to watch Alex and his behavior in spite of what the patron’s think she’s there for.

She performed an experiment and the subject was Alex.

Character 4 = Evelyn who operates the Book Nook inside the Cafe and is married to Alex but separated. She mislead people’s mind through books in her Book Nook. She’s a

retired therapist who offers her insights and advice to fellow patrons becoming an unofficial counselor.

• The Hidden Gene:

• Mystery: Patrons begin to notice unusual occurrences around Alex, from his seemingly slower aging to unexplainable events. The mystery revolves around discovering Alex’s Methuselah gene, the implications of its existence, and the potential threats or benefits it poses.

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Abdul. Show Mysteries. Scandal

Assignment 1.

Big Picture Mysteries

Investigation into how Quin got off a death sentence that was air tight against her.

Why were Quin and Huck at the hotel where Quin was watching her

What secrets are Olivia and Huck hiding from co-workers

Why did Olivia put so much time into getting Quin off in court with a case that was sure to convict Quin.

Did Huck bomb the building that killed 7 people and because of that he and Olivia are fighting hard to prove her innocence?

Smaller Mysteries

Olivia got Quin off with a phone call

What did Quin actually do prior to working at the company where the bomb went off

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Assignment 2. Abdul Show Titled: The Cafe Empathy / Distress

What I learned doing this assignment is another skill that will keep my characters intriguing, captivating, and filled with drama. This assignment made me shake my head like this is cool. It allowed me to see not only where but also how my characters can actually go to these places and carry the emotion along.

Character 1 – Alex:

Distress:

A. Undeserved misfortune: Alex’s methuselah gene makes him age much slower than others, causing him to watch his loved ones grow old and pass away, leading to a

profound sense of isolation.

B. External character conflicts: A rival cafe owner is determined to put Alex out of business, creating financial stress and emotional turmoil for him.

C. Plot intruding on life: Alex discovers a dark secret from his past that threatens to unravel his present life, leaving him in a state of constant fear and anxiety.

D. Moral dilemmas: Alex faces a moral dilemma when he learns that the cafe’s success relies on selling a certain type of addictive coffee that harms his customers’ health.

E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Alex is cornered into a difficult decision when his estranged wife, Evelyn, demands half of the cafe’s ownership in their impending

divorce.

Empathy:

A. Put them in distress: Alex’s loneliness and the burden of the methuselah gene create empathy as viewers connect with his internal pain and sense of isolation.

B. Make them relatable: Alex’s struggles with love, loyalty, and moral dilemmas make him relatable to viewers facing their own complex life decisions.

C. Universal experiences that are emotional: The fear of losing loved ones, dealing with a troubled past, and navigating the complexities of marriage and business ownership

are universal themes that evoke empathy for Alex.

Character 2 – Oliver:

Distress:

A. Undeserved misfortune: Oliver loses his eyesight due to a sudden illness, crushing his dreams of becoming a famous writer.

B. External character conflicts: Oliver faces constant rejection from publishers and a fellow writer who tries to steal his work, putting his career and self-worth in jeopardy.

C. Plot intruding on life: Oliver’s estranged family resurfaces with a shocking revelation, turning his life upside down.

D. Moral dilemmas: Oliver must decide whether to expose a cafe patron’s dark secret in his writing, potentially ruining their life, or protect their privacy at the cost of his

career.

E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Oliver is forced to choose between undergoing a risky surgery to regain his eyesight or accepting a life of blindness.

Empathy:

A. Put them in distress: Oliver’s blindness and career struggles make viewers empathize with his loss and determination to overcome adversity.

B. Make them relatable: Oliver’s dreams, family conflicts, and ethical dilemmas resonate with those who have faced obstacles in their own lives.

C. Universal experiences that are emotional: The fear of losing one’s abilities, family secrets, and moral dilemmas are universal experiences that elicit empathy for Oliver.

Character 3 – Dr. Amelia:

Distress:

A. Undeserved misfortune: Dr. Amelia faces an undeserved scandal that tarnishes her reputation and threatens her career as a respected behavioral psychologist.

B. External character conflicts: She is in a constant power struggle with a fellow psychologist at her workplace who undermines her professionally and personally.

C. Plot intruding on life: Dr. Amelia’s estranged son unexpectedly returns to her life, bringing past trauma and unresolved issues with him, disrupting her peace.

D. Moral dilemmas: She must decide whether to protect her patient’s confidentiality or reveal information that could save a life but harm her professional ethics.

E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Dr. Amelia is forced to choose between her career and her son when he becomes entangled in a criminal case.

Empathy:

A. Put them in distress: Dr. Amelia’s tarnished reputation and family turmoil evoke empathy as viewers connect with her efforts to rebuild her life.

B. Make them relatable: Her professional and personal struggles make Dr. Amelia relatable to those who have faced setbacks and challenges.

C. Universal experiences that are emotional: Coping with a damaged reputation, family reunions, and ethical dilemmas are universal experiences that elicit empathy for Dr. Amelia.

Character 4 – Evelyn:

Distress:

A. Undeserved misfortune: Evelyn’s estranged husband, Alex, has kept a life-altering secret from her, causing her heartbreak and a sense of betrayal.

B. External character conflicts: Evelyn faces criticism and competition from a new cafe owner who threatens to overshadow her Book Nook’s success.

C. Plot intruding on life: Her long-lost twin sister resurfaces with a dangerous agenda, putting Evelyn in a perilous situation she never anticipated.

D. Moral dilemmas: She discovers that her beloved Book Nook promotes literature with controversial themes, and she must decide whether to censor or continue to sell them.

This controversy comes from Amelia’s research but Evelyn need the money so she does nothing.. It’s business as usual. Aria gets wind of this and decides to

intervene with changing the words back to their original .

E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Evelyn is forced to choose between protecting her estranged husband, Alex, or seeking revenge for the pain he’s caused her.

Empathy:

A. Put them in distress: Evelyn’s heartbreak and family secrets make viewers empathize with her emotional turmoil and desire for closure.

B. Make them relatable: Evelyn’s struggles with her business, family, and moral dilemmas resonate with viewers who have faced similar challenges.

C. Universal experiences that are emotional: Dealing with betrayal, familial secrets, and ethical dilemmas are universal experiences that elicit empathy for Evelyn.

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Assignment 1. Example Show Titled: Scandal. Empathy / distress

Distress:

A) Underserved Misfortune: Quin has to stop the bleeding of her boyfriends stabbed neck and when she pulled the scissors out he bled out and died.

B) External Character Conflicts: Quin has to face being accused of bombing a building that killed seven people, being drugged, kidnapped and waking up in a hotel room with a new social security card and number, passport, birth certificate and cash on the nightstand next to her all of which she has no recollection.

C) Plot Intruding On Life: Quin has to answer for being finger printed and the prints coming back as not the person that she claims to be but the person that was wanted for the bombing of a building that killed seven people.

D) Molar Dilemas: Quin has to make a decision to call the police in her boyfriends murder which would reveal her true identity and allowing the scene to be cleaned up thus removing all of her DNA.

E) Forced Decisions They’d Never Make: Quin’s forced to allow the murder scene to be wiped of her DNA which would allow her to continue living as her alias.

Empathy:

A) Put Them In Distress: Quin’s put in distress having to make a choice of stopping her boyfriend from bleeding out from the stab wound and retrieving her phone to call for help.

B) Make Them Relatble: Quin having to keep a deep deep dark secret.

C) Universal Experiences That Are Emotional: Quin having to make a tough call that could be life changing.

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Abdul Rahim Assignment:2

For each of the main characters Alex, Evelyn, Oliver and Dr. Amelia this Drama / Thriller is a series set in a cafe, a place where patrons can meet, share their experiences and past. The cafe serves as a hub to interact with others but it also acts as a place to heal.please brainstorm the Internal Struggles of

A. Situational: Hope / Fear

B. Motivation: Want / Need

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion / Public Mask

D. Weaknesses

E. Triggers

F. Coping Mechanism

that fits this TV series well.

Genre = Drama / Thriller

Concept = is a drama/thriller series set in a cafe, a place where patrons can meet, share their experiences and past. The cafe serves as a hub to interact with others but it also acts as a place to heal.

Main characters = Alex, Evelyn, Oliver and Dr. Amelia

Alex:

A. Situational: Hope – Alex hopes to find closure and reconciliation with their estranged family, but they fear the painful truths they might uncover.

B. Motivation: Want – Alex wants to rebuild broken relationships with family members, but they need to confront their own past mistakes first.

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion – Alex’s base negative emotion is guilt over past decisions. Their public mask is one of confidence and indifference, hiding the emotional turmoil within.

D. Weaknesses – Alex’s weakness is a tendency to be self-critical and a difficulty in forgiving themselves.

E. Triggers – Conversations about family or situations that remind them of their past mistakes trigger Alex’s guilt and anxiety.

F. Coping Mechanism – Alex copes by using humor to deflect from serious discussions and by seeking solace in the cafe’s ambiance and its regular patrons.

Evelyn:

A. Situational: Fear – Evelyn is afraid of getting close to anyone due to past betrayals in her life, but she hopes to find genuine connection.

B. Motivation: Need – Evelyn needs emotional support and healing, but she wants to protect herself from further hurt.

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion – Evelyn’s base negative emotion is a deep sense of betrayal and vulnerability. Her public mask is one of independence and aloofness.

D. Weaknesses – Evelyn’s weakness is her difficulty in trusting others and her fear of vulnerability.

E. Triggers – Displays of affection or situations where she feels someone might get too close emotionally trigger Evelyn’s fear and defensiveness.

F. Coping Mechanism – Evelyn copes by keeping a safe emotional distance from others and by immersing herself in her work at the cafe.

Oliver:

A. Situational: Hope – Oliver hopes to find purpose and redemption after a past filled with poor decisions and regrets. His fear is that he’s too far gone to change.

B. Motivation: Want – Oliver wants to make amends and help others, but he needs to forgive himself first.

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion – Oliver’s base negative emotion is self-loathing. His public mask is one of charm and a desire to help others, masking his own inner struggles.

D. Weaknesses – Oliver’s weakness is his tendency to self-sabotage and his difficulty in believing he can truly change.

E. Triggers – Situations that remind him of his past mistakes or interactions with people he’s hurt trigger Oliver’s self-loathing and anxiety.

F. Coping Mechanism – Oliver copes by going out of his way to help others, seeking redemption in their gratitude, and trying to find solace in the cafe’s warm environment.

Dr. Amelia:

A. Situational: Hope – Dr. Amelia hopes to heal the emotional wounds of the cafe’s patrons and guide them toward a better future. She fears that she may be unable to help everyone.

B. Motivation: Need – Dr. Amelia needs to make a difference in the lives of her clients, but she wants to maintain her own emotional distance to avoid getting too involved.

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion – Dr. Amelia’s base negative emotion is a sense of responsibility for the emotional well-being of her clients. Her public mask is one of professionalism and empathy.

D. Weaknesses – Dr. Amelia’s weakness is her tendency to take on too much emotional burden from her clients and her fear of not being able to help everyone.

E. Triggers – Client situations that remind her of her own past trauma or instances where she feels she can’t help trigger Dr. Amelia’s feelings of inadequacy and emotional distress.

F. Coping Mechanism – Dr. Amelia copes by maintaining professional boundaries and seeking guidance from a mentor. The cafe also provides her with a sense of purpose and healing through her work.

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Abdul Rahim. Assignment:1

What I learned doing this assignment was to look at self and see how these emotional traits apply.

Example show: Scandal Character Emotional Profile Olivia Pope and Fitz Grant

A. Situational: Hope / Fear

Olivia HOPE for a better world but FEAR loosing control of a situation and her life.

Fitz HOPE to love but FEAR losing Olivia

B. Motivation: Want / Need

Olivia WANT power but NEED to face her personal issues

Fitz WANT to help people but NEED to run the country as a president

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion / Public Mask

Olivia’s BASE NEGATIVE EMOTION is Guilt and her PUBLIC MASK is Being In Control and Innocence

Fitz BASE NEGATIVE EMOTION is Frustration and his PUBLIC MASK a strong leader

D. Weakness:

Olivia WEAKNESS is Fitz

Fitz WEAKNESS is Olivia

E. Triggers:

Olivia’s TRIGGER is questioning her authority

Fitz TRIGGER is Olivia

F. Coping Mechanism:

Olivia COPING MECHANISM is having the final say by overriding what her team says or votes on and alcohol

Fitz COPING MECHANISM is alcohol and sex

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What I learned doing this assignment is that layers really make the character.

Abdul Rahim Intriguing Character layers

Character Name: Alex

Role: Owner of the cafe

Hidden agendas: Alex’s hidden agenda is to find closure for the traumatic event from their past, which is related to the cafe’s history. They are determined to uncover the truth behind it.

Competition: Alex faces competition from a rival cafe owner who wants to lure away their patrons, leading to a battle for the cafe’s survival.

Conspiracies: There’s a conspiracy involving the cafe’s origins, and Alex becomes entangled in uncovering a dark secret that could affect the cafe’s reputation.

Secrets: Alex is keeping a secret relationship with one of the regular patrons, creating tension and emotional conflicts.

Deception: Alex occasionally pretends to be a patron to eavesdrop on conversations and gather information, blurring the line between their role as the cafe owner and a hidden observer.

Wound: The traumatic event from the past that haunts Alex is a deep emotional wound that they must confront in the series.

Secret Identity: It is revealed that Alex has been using an alias, and their true identity has connections to a powerful, enigmatic figure in the city.

Evelyn:

Character Name: Evelyn

Role: A regular patron at the cafe

Hidden agendas: Evelyn’s hidden agenda is to connect with someone who might have information about her son’s accident, which she suspects was not a simple accident.

Competition: She competes with a newcomer at the cafe for the attention and friendship of another patron.

Conspiracies: Evelyn stumbles upon a mysterious group of individuals who might have information about her son’s accident, leading her into a web of conspiracies.

Secrets: Evelyn is hiding a letter from her son that could contain crucial information about the accident.

Deception: She pretends to befriend one of the patrons to gain access to their information, leading to a moral dilemma about betraying their trust.

Wound: Evelyn’s unresolved grief is a profound emotional wound that drives her actions and interactions at the cafe.

Secret Identity: It is revealed that Evelyn is not just a retired therapist but a former investigator who specialized in uncovering corporate conspiracies, adding complexity to her character.

Oliver:

Character Name: Oliver

Role: Troubled young musician

Hidden agendas: Oliver’s hidden agenda is to find the person responsible for the trauma that led to his stage fright.

Competition: He competes with a rival musician who is trying to steal his spotlight in the cafe.

Conspiracies: Oliver discovers that some of his songs inadvertently expose hidden truths about the cafe’s past, leading to a conspiracy to silence him.

Secrets: He’s secretly receiving therapy from Dr. Amelia but doesn’t want the other patrons to know about it, fearing it might affect his image.

Deception: Oliver occasionally pretends to be a cafe employee to overhear patrons’ conversations for songwriting inspiration.

Wound: His debilitating stage fright is a deep emotional wound stemming from a traumatic event that occurred at a previous performance.

Secret Identity: Oliver’s true identity as a musician is revealed to be a cover for his real mission, which is to uncover the secrets of the cafe and its role in the past trauma.

Dr. Amelia:

Character Name: Dr. Amelia

Role: Psychologist who visits the cafe

Hidden agendas: Dr. Amelia’s hidden agenda is to study the long-term effects of the cafe’s therapeutic environment for a research project, but she keeps this hidden from the patrons.

Competition: She faces competition from a colleague who believes the cafe’s healing environment is a hoax and wants to prove it.

Conspiracies: Dr. Amelia uncovers a conspiracy involving a hidden experiment conducted within the cafe that might have unintended consequences.

Secrets: She is hiding a personal connection to one of the cafe’s patrons, who is also her estranged family member, adding emotional complexity.

Deception: Dr. Amelia occasionally pretends to be a regular patron, gathering information for her research while maintaining her professional detachment.

Wound: Her own psychological issues are rooted in a tragic family history, which she must confront while helping others.

Secret Identity: It is revealed that Dr. Amelia has been using an alias to protect her true identity, which has connections to a powerful organization linked to the cafe’s history.

Genre = Drama / Thriller

Concept = a Drama / Thriller series set in a cafe, a place where patrons can meet, share their experiences and past. The cafe serves as a hub to interact with others but it also acts as a place to heal.

Main Characters: Alex, Evelyn, Oliver and Amelia

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What I learned doing this assignment is to keep answering the questions and the rest will and keep moving forward.

Abdul Rahim. Engaging Main Characters That Sell The Show

Assignment: 2

Title: The Cafe

Alex:

A. Role in the show: Owner of the cafe.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Alex has a knack for making people feel comfortable and understood, which is essential in creating a safe haven for the patrons.

C. Intrigue: Beneath the surface, Alex is secretly struggling with a traumatic event from the past that still haunts them.

D. Moral Issue: Alex is occasionally involved in keeping the patrons’ secrets and walking a fine line between privacy and intervention.

E. Unpredictable: It’s hard to predict whether Alex will take a hands-on or hands-off approach in helping the cafe’s visitors.

F. Empathetic: We care about Alex because they provide a space for others to heal, even though they, too, need healing.

Evelyn:

A. Role in the show: A regular patron at the cafe.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Evelyn is a retired therapist who offers her insights and advice to fellow patrons, becoming an unofficial counselor.

C. Intrigue: Beneath the surface, Evelyn is concealing her own unresolved grief after losing her son in a tragic accident.

D. Moral Issue: Evelyn grapples with the ethical dilemma of whether she should reveal her true identity and credentials to the cafe’s visitors.

E. Unpredictable: It’s uncertain whether Evelyn will cross personal boundaries and interfere with patrons’ lives or maintain her role as a quiet observer.

F. Empathetic: We care about Evelyn because she’s a well of wisdom, but her emotional struggles make her a complex and relatable character.

Oliver:

A. Role in the show: A troubled young musician who frequents the cafe.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Oliver’s music often helps patrons express their emotions and find solace, making him an unintentional therapist through art.

C. Intrigue: Beneath the surface, Oliver is grappling with a debilitating stage fright that threatens his career.

D. Moral Issue: Oliver faces the dilemma of whether to continue using the cafe’s patrons as emotional fodder for his music.

E. Unpredictable: We can’t predict whether Oliver will overcome his fears or succumb to them, and whether he’ll maintain his role as a muse for others.

F. Empathetic: We care about Oliver because he’s talented, emotionally fragile, and his music resonates deeply with the cafe’s visitors.

Dr. Amelia:

A. Role in the show: A psychologist who occasionally visits the cafe to observe and offer guidance.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Dr. Amelia provides professional insights into the patrons’ lives and mental health, becoming a temporary source of healing.

C. Intrigue: Beneath the surface, Dr. Amelia is struggling with her own psychological issues, which she keeps hidden from the patrons.

D. Moral Issue: Dr. Amelia must grapple with whether to remain a silent observer or intervene more directly in the cafe’s patrons’ lives.

E. Unpredictable: It’s unclear whether Dr. Amelia will maintain her professional detachment or become personally involved with the cafe’s visitors.

F. Empathetic: We care about Dr. Amelia because she offers valuable psychological support, but her hidden troubles make her character multi-dimensional and engaging.

Genre = Drama

Concept = Is a drama/thriller series set in a cafe, a place where patrons can meet, share their experiences and past. The cafe serves as a hub to interact with others but it also acts as a place to heal.

Main Characters = Alex, Evelyn, Oliver and Dr. Amelia

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Abdul Rahim. Engaging Main Characters

Assignment: 1

Example Show: Scandal

Lead Character: Olivia Pope

Role in the show: Owner of Olivia Pope and Associates. Her business is Crisis Management in Washington DC.

Unique Purpose/Expertise: Problem Solver? Fixer of Political Situations and Scandals.

Intrigue: The secret beneath the surface is that Olivia was involved in an adulterous relationship with the President of the United States.

Moral Issue: Defending clients that are bad and evil just because they’re in a crisis or scandal.

Unpredictable: Olivia rekindles a romantic relationship with the President of the United States.

Empathetic: Olivia has been lied to by the President about another woman.

Olivia Olivia is a very manipulative and powerful woman

Olivia is multitalented

Olivia is in love with the President of the United States.

What will Olivia do next?

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Abdul Rahim. 3 Circles of Characters

Assignment 2:

What I learned doing this assignment is the more you’re opened to the possibilities the better your chances are of accomplishing what you set out to do. In this case it’s writing something truly Binge Worthy.

A) Main Character Circle

Alex He’s the owner and founder of the Cafe.

Evelyn She’s the owner of the Book Nook inside the cafe.

Oliver He’s a gifted writer who stumbled upon the cafe.

Dr. Amelia She’s a quantum physicist fascinated by the Cafe’s concept.

B) Connected Characters Circle

Lucas

Nina

Professor Jonathan

Aria

C) Environment Character Circle

Barista

Wait Staff

Janitor

Security Guard

Book Restorer

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Abdul Rahim Scandal’s 3 Circles of Characters

Assignment 1:

What I learned doing this assignment is to make your main characters engaging.

A) Main Characters Circles

Olivia Pope

Quin Perkins

Huck

Steven

Harrison

Abby

B) Connected Characters Circles

Fitz President of the United States

Cyrus Bean Vice President of the United States

David US Attorney General

Olivia’s Clients

Billy Chambers Vice President’s Chief of Staff

C) Environment Characters Circles

News Reporter

Secret Service

Marine soldiers

Morris White House Security Guard

The Public

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Scandal 5 Star Model

What I learned doing this assignment is how these Big Picture Hooks must do just that. They must hook you into the characters and their situations, the entirety of the show as well as lay the foundation for all else to be built upon them.

Big Picture Hooks

1) What is the big hook of the show?

Everyone has secrets in this intriguing world. Including the president of the united states having an affair.

2) What makes these main characters interesting and intriguing?

They all have dirty little secrets that we don’t know about yet.

3) What situations causes us to feel both empathy and distress for these characters?

They are all strays that need fixing.

4) What questions are created by this first episode that can only be answered by watching the entire season.

What will happen to Olivia and the President of the United States?

Will Olivia and the President continue their adulterous act?

Will the reporter get a story out of this?

Does the President’s wife find out about the adultery?

What will happen to Olivia’s new client Amanda Tanner?

Will Quinn ever catch on to how things are done at Olivia & Associates?

5) How does this pilot create the need to see every episode?

The open loops it left behind

The empathy and distress it made us feel about the characters

The intriguing characters that’s in the show.

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1. Abdul Rahim

2. I’ve written a feature and nine episodes of a sitcom.

3. I wish to write quality B.W. T.V. shows that audiences rave about.

4. I’m a Diesel Mechanic with a Class A CDL and a Certified Welder for the past 30 years. I’ve turned down career opportunities of a lifetime, for a job with little pay that I abhor in order to have the freedom to pursue my dream of writing and working on Film Sets.

5. I was in the BW 7 class

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