[Angie Sills]

Greetings!
I am a contest reader and script consultant.
My script deals with sexual assault.
If you are interested in trading script reviews, please email me at acsills.scripts@gmail.com

Much obliged,

angie

[Angie Sills]

Greetings!
I am a contest reader and script consultant.
My script deals with sexual assault.
If you are interested in trading script reviews, please email me at acsills.scripts@gmail.com

Much obliged,

angie

[Angie Sills]

I thoroughly enjoyed my rewatch of this flick.
Laugh out LOUD funny. LOVED it.
The reason: The characters said and did unusual things throughout the narrative. MAKE SURE you find time to experience this.

I grew up in this part of NC so the nostalgia was cool for me.

I do wander why the thread of the religious player turning the groupy and marrying her was included. This does not figure in the story at all. I bet it was to appease those offended by the opening voiceover, the direct references to the church of baseball and the comparison to religion.

[Angie Sills]

Thank you for your response. I will appreciate your input. Your story looks interesting. My email is acsills.scripts@gmail.com Do you use google docs? If so, what is your email address that you? use for gdocs

[Angie Sills]

This course has provided the following templates for loglines. A strong narrative comes from a compelling logline and helps to nail down the core of the story. Try these and choose your best effort. Irony in a logline, and in a title, is a plus.

Protagonist (has problem) and (must achieve goal) to solve that problem.

Protagonist has (a goal) but (major obstacle) stands in his/her way.

(Situation) causes (main character) to face (largest obstacle) and (outcome)

“There are two ways to change the world:
words on a page and video on a screen.”

My script deals with rape. Due to the sensitive nature, I do not plan to post on the forums. I would greatly appreciate feedback from both points of view- male and female. If you are interested in partnering, please contact me.

I am a paid reader/analyst/consultant. I enjoy helping writers improve their scripts and skills.

I love questions.

ang

• This reply was modified 3 years, 4 months ago by  Angie Sills.

[Angie Sills]

Call me Angie.

I have completed two features and a pilot. My goal for my writing is to affect social change.

I am a contest reader and work with novel and script writers as an analyst / consultant. I hope to increase my skills and finish a rewrite.

I am over 55 and a serious cosplayer for ten years. I love to experience conventions with four days of scaring children and adults, making people laugh, and flirting with strange men.

I do a traditional and a Steampunk Medusa complete with audio sirens.

I become Sideshow Bob, the maniacal psychopathic killer from The Simpsons.

I’m looking forward to being Rick Sanchez from Rick and Morty at my next Con.

As a teacher I dressed as a Mime and did not speak for the entire day.

[Angie Sills]

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Angie Sills

[Angie Sills]

I LOVED Space: 1999

[Angie Sills]

This story has potential. I really like that it’s not a HEA Happily Ever After ending. Just make sure the ending is satisfying for the audience.

[Angie Sills]

Thank you for your response. I will appreciate your input. Your story looks interesting. My email is acsills.scripts@gmail.com Do you use google docs? If so, what is your email address that you use for gdocs?

[Angie Sills]

Try this:

When a wannabe kid baker is transported back to 1777, her attempts to foil a British plot to end the American Revolution jeopardizes the life of her ancestor.

wannabe kid baker could be more clear but you’re on the right track. Your story has potential.

ang

[Angie Sills]

Greetings!

I really need female points of view on my script but I would never ask anyone to do anything that makes them uncomfortable and will totally understand if you want to pass on partnering up.

FULL DISCLOSURE

My script deals with rape.

I have done a great deal of research on the subject, have been totally shocked at how this is encouraged and tolerated in our culture, what the statistics are, and have been moved to create this narrative in hopes of affecting change or at least starting conversations.

The rape scene in this script is three pages long and is written the same as it was when I paid for a high level review. The analyst did not mention anything about it being particularly graphic but the subject is rape and I would say that even the most “gentle” rape is one of violence.

Much obliged for your consideration,

angie