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I Bill Kellas As a member of this group, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.
I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.
4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.
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6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.
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I bill Kellas agreed to the release form GROUP RELEASE FORM
As a member of this group, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.
I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.
4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.
5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.
6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.
This completes the Group Release Form for the class.
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I bill Kellas have written 7 books some for others 6 for me I’m learning a new language in writing in the wim ,benge Tv and pro.classes
I had to sell my business as I broke my neck and this is my creative outlet
Look forward to trading ideas with you
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I Bill Kellas As a member of the group agree to the terms of this release form .
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MORNING Troy is playing timed chess with 4 guys at once in the chess club before school and checkmates all of them1.INT. DAY Training gym
Beginning anticipation gruelling training schedule
Middle kids surprise innocence shattered when fellow classmate leaves on a stretcher and then another as though it’s common place.
Ending characters change radically they have hardened their heart and overcome their fear of the danger’s they must overcome .they are now trained KGB agents,dads proud
2.outside day Davos hotel meeting
Beginning anticipation as dad has a great speech to make peace with the west planned.
Middle ext.night hotel twist dad is assassinated and the family must run for their lives as they hide in an earth energy cult.
Ending ext.night anticipation fear /hope mi 6 is chasing them but they stowaway on a ship headed for the USA
3.beginning int.day mom meets an American man fleeing the Italian mafia going to the USA TO TURN into witness protection but needs to look more stable with a family.
Middle exterior day more interesting setting as they agree to get married ON THE SHIP so the family can get USA passports and stay in his room.
End ext.day uncertainty as they dis embarked In America this is the new normal they anticipated that things will never be the same again.
4.beginning ext.day more interesting setting in the San Gabriel Mountains In Monrovia where the family’s placed to avoid the mob. safety,peace and security were in their sight but it was not to be.setup
MIDDLE ext day intrigue step dad sets up his operation at the Santa Anita Racetrack home of Sea Biscuits winning seasons. You can take the man out of the Mafia out of the man,so that’s where the kids see him beat a deadbeat gambler.
Ending int.car anticipation suspense chased away racing from the guys friends who want to kill him for what he did to their friend.
5. Int. day beginning hallway of high school confrontation The three walk into school together and the Quarterback make whistling sounds and cat calls at Amy.
Middle SUSPENSE Cane tells him to knock it off and that’s when they get completely out of control so he gets in their face. The end gets behind him so the QB can push him over but Cane flips over breaking the ends leg and arm of the QB AS THE BELL RINGS.
ENDING int classroom SUSPENSE WITH THE TWO BOYS LAYING ON THE hallway FLOOR IN PAIN now what are the consequences going to be?
6. Beginning int.classroom anticipation The twins are called to the principal’s office. The principal asks what their going to do to fix this?
Middle int day surprise twist principal’s office where the coach walks in and asks the same question but with regards to his football team. How are you two going to replace my QB and his top receiver?
Ending int office intriguing dilemma They are told either they replace them on the team or their going to be expelled,they have a day to give them an answer.
ACT 2 7.INT CAR dilemma HOME Troy says he has been playing chess with a former Ram’s player and maybe he can help.
Middle ext.day surprise it turns out that he is a quarterback coach and if Troy will teach him chess he will teach them football? Deal
Ending ext day field characters change Troy because of his athletic training and photographic memory he picks it up QB real quick AND Cane catches everything thrown at him.
8.beginning ext porch Amy makes friends with Molly the neighbors ,the pastors daughter so they harmonise and write music together.
Middle anticipation the girls practice so they can play at church on Sunday Cane and Molly become a relationship that he soon betrayed with one of the wealthy song girls behind her back.
Int day,church surprise The church was amazed at how amazing their voice graced the chapel when they sang. A judge from Americas got talent was in the audience and got them on the next show.
9.EXT. night lights stadium anticipation their moves and timing patterns proved unstoppable as they waxed the competition.
Middle they did the same thing with all the competition until they met the other undefeated team their crosstown rivals ‘Arcadia high for the final season game.
Int night twist Ending at the awards banquet they got most valuable players and both received scholarships for athletics and Troy for academic’s. What no one realized is Amy was getting kidnapped while they were celebrating.
Turning point 2
10.beginning night home dilemma how do they raise the money Troy Nero lincs into their quantum AI,ML computer AND USE it to solve atomic fusion and protein folding to solve energy and autoimmune desease.
Middle int night conflict step father steps in and uses it instead to shave points of sports betting makes some quick money. With that money he feeds a Ponzi scheme which raises a lot of money quickly until it collapsed.
End night dilemma Amy gets away and now the mafia,cartel and security’s commission are after him so he runs to New Zealand. Suspense and Fearing the worst the family gives an all family hug as they get in the car and run again.
Act 3
11.int car night beginning they are running away when a major twist a van out of nowhere hits them. This ends up breaking Canes limbs moms neck and leaving Troy’s eyesight gone.
Middle ext. anticipation they pull Cane out as the only one they believe they can help . It turns out they are from an offshoot NGO of DARPA controlled by a very powerful man.
End cliff hanger Troy finds his mom and she tells him her neck is broken and gives him her cross to protect him as he and his sister are taken away their mon goes unconscious.
12 begins morning light suspense Amy and Troy wake up in the hospital but can’t find their mom or any sign of her.
Middle int.day mystery where is mom they check out of the hospital and go home and Mollys family takes them into the church
Ending ext.day uncomfortable moment Troy is getting frustrated with his clumsy movements without vision and Molly say I know someone who can make you better but only if your willing to submit and obey him. I will but as lng as I don’t have to do anything illegal, wrong or immoral will I? No of course not. Just tell God you can’t do this without him and ask Him for spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies. The Holy Spirit came on Troy in a powerful way giving him all the powers of the Bible Sampsons strength,Solomons smarts and the discernment of §the future of Elisha. Amy asked for the same power and God equiped her for her journey.
13 begin int day Anticipation church gymnastics Troy trains until he is superior to where he used to be but he had to protect his head with a helmet with night vision .Molly starts falling for Troy as they both think Cane is dead and Amy tells her what Cane did behind her back.
Middle cane is developing combat skills using AI,ML,QUANTUM COMPUTER NEURO LINC WITH HIVE CONTROL OF ROBOTICS drone and rocket packs with armaments. Cane was the ideal soldier as he could kill without regret.
End The queen of the hive had taught him and his transhuman solders every thing she could like a mother preparing her sons for the last battle with the insurgents. The dragon of old decided to run the battle himself.
14.ext.night light stadium superior knowledge
Beginning Troy and his freedom loving Christian brothers are the only ones that will stand up against the transhuman army. Sooo they meet for the final battle with nether side knowing who they are really going to fight.
Middle twist the battle rages back and forth until finally Troy is hit in the back and dies. The girls Amy and Molly run down to Troy’s side and take off his helmet . That’s when Cnae and his mom discovered who they have been fighting against and how the Dragon has deceived them.
End reconciled mom and Cane repent and Jesus Christ comes down from heaven and raised Troy from the dead and they all go against Satan the Dragon of old.
Next story begins As the battle of Armageddon begins we go to the Edupod space training center for ww3 the war of three worlds begins.
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Bill Kellas I have and action thriller called Satans Sons Secrets about twins that become warriors one a transhuman the other spiritual . They battle for the future of the world,I’m ready for feed back
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Fwd: SSS 10trigue. Subject: Trilogy 2 Satans son’s secrets
1.BIG PICTURE BEGINNING SCENE ARCH this is the set up from smarter than God ,Satans story where the Kids are innocent but go through a gruelling Training in MIDDLE The Soviet school for spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR. ENDING All innocents is gone after this experience,dads proud with his kids success.
SINCE THE KIDS ARE REALLY TRAINED KGB AGENTS THEY ARE TOUGHEN UP FOR ALMOST ANYTHING EXCEPT
Insighting insident
When their father is TWIST Murdered at Davos where their father was trying to make peace with the west he is killed in an assassination plot by a globalists hit squad. After his death they flee escaping first into an Italian earth energy cult called Damanhur at the foot of the Alps. This Reveals and huge emotional loss of the person who really believed in the kids as with all family hugs and how he trusted their judgement and cheered for all their performances. SURPRISED
DAYTIME INSIDE MEETING ROOM THEIR REAL FATHER WAS A HIGH POWERED LEADER OF THE KGB.CLIFFHANGER ENDING WILL THEY MAKE IT OR WILL THE MI 6 GET THEM?
2. NIGHT OUTSIDE RAINING THE BEGINNING SUSPENCE on the run The MI 6 was after them so the Family was forced to Flee to America where mom met a man who needed a family like she needed a husband to get and American citizenship. MIDDLE So she married a mafia hit man after he turned states evidence so she could get citizenship and he could get his cover.
He however was never the same as their real father. Loss of relationship.
THERE Was ALWAYS TENSION BETWEEN THE MAFIA WAY AND THE KGB WAY AND WHYS.
INSIDE HOME Family was shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program and peace and security were in their sight,but it was not to be.
DAY LIGHT Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack. Setup
YOU CAN TAKE THE MAN OUT OF THE MAFIA BUT YOU CANNOT TAKE THE MAFIA OUT OF THE MAN.
That’s Where he beats a dead beat gambler is almost beat to death who didn’t pay him his gambling debts.reveal emotions lack of security and safety if they cross him.ENDING ANTICIPATION UNCERTAINTY
3.INSIDE DAYLIGHT Before school Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all . That is until a bad looser tossed the chessboard and try’s to confront him. The sore loser is taken down verbally and then held in check physically by Cane. TROY IS A MILD INTROVERT GENESIS BUT BECAUSE OF HIS KGB SKILLS WONT BE BULLIED
Troy says I hate mind less bully’s ,gangs and mobs.
Turning point 1
4.DAYLIGHT HALLWAY BEGINNING CONFRONTATION.First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players saying unsavory comments about his sister while trying to hit on her.
THE TWINS HAVE BEEN TRAINED BY DAD TO COVER EACH OTHERS BACK ALWAYS
MIDDLE CONFLICT Cane uses his courage to confront the quarterback a player slips behind Cane so the QB can push Cane over him . However Cane then flips over him and breaks one players leg and the QBs arm in the process.
CANE IS BOTH A TRAINED IN GYMNASTICS AND MARTIAL ARTS.
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him sent to the principal’s office.ENDING SUSPENSE
5. INSIDE DAYLIGHT OFFICE BEGINNING However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are called out of class to the principal’s office for a unexpected fortuitous meeting. MIDDLE TWIST That’s where they first met the man who could change their lives the football teams head coach. It is he who gives them the new real the consequences the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that ether they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game.setup
ATHLETIC TRAINING IS A WAY OF LIFE SO THEY CATCH ON TO IT AS QUICKLY AS A FISH Takes to WATER . ENDING ANTICIPATION CLIFFHANGER
Act 2
They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams. BIG PICTURE HE HAS BOTH COLLEGE AND PRO CONNECTIONS
6. INSIDE MOLLYS BEDROOM Concurrently Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which kickstarts their music career .
7. BEGINNING Outside light characters change by growing into real Americans as Troy-becomes Quarterback and Cane a receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone in high school could defend.
IN CAR DARK MIDDLE CHARACTER BETRAYAL Cane starts relationship with Molly but is seduced by One of the wealthy song girls unbeknownst to Molly
Sooo SUBTEXT Amy IS UPSET WITH CANES CHARACTER AND HAS A INTERNAL CONFLICTH DILEMMA BUT FINALLY she introduced her to her other introverted brother Troy who has moral character that she can trust. Due to the boy’s football relationship and Troy’s honor they keep Molly and Troy’s relationship as just friends for now on the QT.ENDING ANTICIPATION
8.FRIDAY NIGHT LIGHTS ARC BEGINS An undefeated season so far ensues. Then after overcoming tough competition the undefeated MIDDLE CONFLICT MONROVIA WILDCATS FACE THE ALSO UNDEFEATED ARCADIA APACHIES CROSS TOWN (rivalry games where they show the courage to face and overcome their personal demons as they win in the last second and become coplayers of the year ) By the end of the season they each receive college’s scholarships offers for both athletic and for Troy academic also .reveal THERE IS ALWAYS AN UNSPOKEN TENSION AS TROY KNOWS WHAT CANE WHO THINKS HE HAS GOTTEN AWAY WITH CHEATING ON MOLLY BEHIND HER BACK ENDING CONFLICT.
9.NIGHT RESTAURANT AWARDS DINNER BEGINS However After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship and awards REVEAL MIDDLE they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is asking 5 million dollars.reveal
POSSIBLE ENDING TWIST AMY IS A TRAINED KGB AGENT AND KNOWS HOW TO SURVIVE
Turning point 2
Sooo mom and the boys especially Troy start trying to figure how to raise Amy’s ransom money somehow . ENDING ANTICIPATION MYSTERY SUSPENSE
10.BEGINNING BIG PICTURE EXTERNAL DILEMMA Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could legally in business make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime.MIDDLE Reveal CONTENTIOUS COMPETITION ENSUES AS KGB SECRETS ARE BEHIND THESE DISCOVERIES
While DARPA gets wind of their work and wants JPL to license to them the fusion reactor to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.setup
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.setup
However Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .ENDING CONFLICT11. HOME DINNER TIME NIGHT DUSK Their step father gets wind of what this can do and overrides them and uses it to run probability programs to shave off points on the game’s to beat the odds and win money. After that he pretends to launder but really invests the cartels drug money in a MIDDLE CONFLICT Ponzi sceme He does this by taking slices off every stock trade investing their funds in the process corners the cripto currencies funding his own brokerage. THE MAFIA WINS SHORT TERM
After overshooting the 5 million dollar ransom and preparing to make the payoff. Amy escaped and they get their sister back a little worse for the wear with some surprised kidnappers.ENDING TWIST
Stepdad goes on to make money but because step dads carelessness dishonesty and greed lose billions when his Ponzi scheme gets hacked. ENDING SURPRISE LOOSING EVERYTHING AND MORE
12.IN HOME DARK BEGINNING ARC ESSENCE THEY ARE RIGHT BACK WHERE THEY STARTED FINANCIALLY EXCEPT NOW THEIR ON THE RUN AGAIN.
However because the cash stops flowing like all Ponzi Schemes do that’s when the chase begins. MIDDLE TWIST This now blow’s up and the complaints gets the attention of the federal government SEC-and IRS . The loss of cash flow to the investors the Mexican drug cartel and the mafia. They are now all after them not only for their crooked stepdad’s rackets but now for all kinds of reasons . IN THE END THE PAST STARTS CATCHING UP AS THE TRUTH STARTS UNRAVELING THEIR STORY AND THEY COULD GET CAUGHT AND DEPORTED OR EVEN INCARCERATED IN PRISON. ANTICIPATION SUSPENSE AND FEAR
Act 3
13. ARC BEGINNING UNDER THE COVERING OF DARKNESS THE CHASE BEGINS.Sooo step dad ditched the family and runs . They give an all family hug as they are now also on the run again fleeing the safety of their home. MIDDLE Once on the street Out of nowhere a van hits them causing damage to the family. The first one hurt is mom who broke her neck, revealing this as not an accident but an on purpose. THE VAN IS CONTROLLED BY A CLANDESTINE GROUP OF RAIDERS WITH A PURPOSE.
The Car CRASH MIDDLE sets up Troy to loose his sight as Cane breaks both his arms and legs trying to stop himself from going through the front windshield. reveal They take Cane off in the van leaving mom and Troy as to damaged to save. Mom who now is losing consciousness from her decapitated neck she gives Troy her cross which has protected her all her life, then she explained it’s powers and then passes out. ENDING SUSPENSE ANTICIPATION THE HIDDEN POWERS OF MOMS CROSS START GETTING REVEALED HERE setting up the rest of the story.
Turning point
14.BEGINNING NIGHT TWIST That’s when The Raiders in the van take Cane. Where they finish the job his mother and brother started. It turns out they are a renegade part of DARPA NGO. They did this by equiping him with the physical robotics,thermal eyes , a hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through a neurological link like Troy was hooked up to. This augmentation along with armaments and the jet pack drone gave Cane flying capabilities that would make Cane the perfect hive solder. MIDDLE INTRIGUE CANE THINKS THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT HIS PAST, BUT THATS WHY THEY PICKED HIM. HE STILL DOESN’T KNOW WHOS THE POWER IS REALLY BEHIND THEM.
Since Troy lost his vision and couldn’t find where his mom and Cane went. Troy and his mentor checked all the morgues and hospitals it’s as though they vanished . ENDING SUSPENSE LITTLE DO THEY KNOW THEY WILL MEET AGAINI
15.BEGINNING ARC TRYING TO REUNITE WITH HIS FAMILY HES LOST.
Sooo he goes back home where he meets up with his sister who is staying with Molly the pastors daughter.MIDDLE DILEMMA Molly who has lost Cane FINALLY start’s falling for Troy and she leads both he and his sister to the lord. ENDING ANTICIPATION OUT OF LOYALTY TO CANE TROY BECOMES JUST FRIENDS,FOR NOW
After repentance and praying For God to give him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies. God grants him spiritual eyesight and all the powers in the Bible plus all his other senses become enhanced. GOD HAS A PURPOSE FOR TROYS LIFE NOW TROY IS STARTING TO SEE IT TOO.
While Troy still had a hard time seeing where people were but now he could discern who and what they were which was much more valuable. ENDING THIS IS HOW TROY BECOMES A WALKING HUMAN LIE DETECTOR THIS WILL COME IN HANDY IN THE FUTURE MYSTERY
16.BEGINNING ARC DAY AT THE CHURCH GYM Act 4 preparing for battle MOLLY AND TROY BOTH START TO CHANGE THEIR TUNE ON LOYALTY AS CANE SEEMS TO HAVE VANISHED TROY AND MOLLYS RELATIONSHIP GROWS
Meanwhile Molly and Amy write more songs . While they help Troy develop the gifts God gave him . That’s when the lady’s designs a suit for him that hides his eyes. Amy and Molly starts believing Cane will never return. That’s when Amy shares the story of Cane infidelities so Molly and Troy can get together. Then they trane Troy to be more capable than he ever was in the churches gym and training room training with his mentor and the seal team .
They help Troy recover as he puts to use and training by using the lords promised powers of the scriptures to grow in his walk with God. With the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders ,prophecies and do miracles like in the Bible. MIDDLE HOPE ANTICIPATION Troy develops the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and the faith of a prophetic wonder worker like Elijah . Through his mentor Troy becomes a force for good in God calling . ENDING GODS PLAN IS WORKING TROY IS BECOMING THE WARRIOR HE WILL HAVE TO BE AS THE FINAL CONFLICT TURNS DEADLY.
When working out Troy’s punch bursts the body bag and beats the gyms top warriors all at once.ANTICIPATION
17.BEGINNING UNDERGROUND ARC In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the as a cult like organisation makes him the beast’s transhuman hive gladiator warrior. MIDDLE ANTICIPATION Cane is having the same kind of success in his training as Troy unbeknownst to ether.
THE MEETING IS COMING NEITHER WILL HAVE A CLUE WHERE THE OTHER WENT AND WHAT THEIR DOING NOW.setup
Canes and his team are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen who is forced to work for the beast to conquer the worlds nations. Setup
Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane’s army still has no idea it is His brother as the final battle is coming. That’s when Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.reveal ENDING TWISTS HIS MOTHER AND TROY NEVER KNOW UNTIL ITS TO LATE
18. NIGHT LIGHTS IN THE COLISEUM SUSPENSE Cane is forced to battle not under his own control but the hives control for the future of the worlds inhabitants under the control of the BEAST himself. Now the question for the ages will finally be answered . MIDDLE DILEMMA Are we to becomespiritual ,mechanical or technological?
MIDDLE Reveal Troy is killed in the battle. That’s When Molly and Amy come forward crying to claim the body where they pray for Gods help in the middle of the Coliseum
Sooo That’s when Cane and his mother learn at last that the warrior was Troy.
Reveal They had been deceived by the beast TO BELIEVE their national duty to protect and defend their country.This breaks their heart bringing the two to their knees to repent praying and asking God for forgiveness. ENDING RESOLUTION MOMS FORMER FAITH RETURNS AS THE VAIL IS LIFTED FROM THEIR EYES THEY NOW SEE HOW THEY HAVE BEEN DECEIVED AND BETRAYED BY THE BEAST.
20.BEGINNING ARC STARTS WITH HOPE AS Sooo God resurrected Troy and brings the family back together for an all family hug.
MIDDLE ESSENCE COLISEUM NIGHT However The evil force that caused this all to happen the BEAST is really controlled by the DEVIL/Dragon of old who then shows up and ENDING released his power by turning the whole hive army against the family.
21.BEGINNING HOPE ARC Sooo Out of the sky Christ and his angels return to ENDING MORE THAN balance the equation and help his family overcome the Evil one.
22. BEGINNING ESSENCE,SUBTEXT,HOPE FEAR ANTICIPATION ARC Then as the real powers line up to face each other as Armageddon begins we Segway to the kids on space education pod as the start of ww3 begins the war of three worlds ,the third story of the trilogy. Setup for the rest of the story. ENDING THE KIDS HAVE A BIRDS EYE VIEW OF THE REST OF THE SHOWDOWN THE REAL POWERS HAVE THE FINAL SHOW DOWN.
1.Smarter than God —Lucifer’s story
2.Satans son’s secrets— the twins revolution
3.World war 3 the war of three worlds —preparing for the next world .
Armageddon
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Subject: Trilogy 2 Satans son’s secrets
Beginning this is the set up from smarter than God ,Satans story
Dark days setting the b story that will make sense of the drama to follow.
Kids Trained in Satans Soviet school for spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR.
The beautiful Alps in the background set the stage for the hope of a better life.
After the fall they escape into Italian earth energy cult called Damanhur at the foot of the Alps.setup
Insighting insident
Inside the meeting rooms the globalists stop their father from freeing his people.After Murder at Davos where their father is killed in an assassination plot. Reveal emotional loss of the person who really believed in the kids as all family hugs and trusted their judgement and their performances. The family’s left with fear and loss
Outside on a ship The Family is forced to Flee to America where mom married a mafia hit man who turned states evidence so she could get citizenship . He however is never the same as their real father. Loss of a loving relationship and security of the known for the insecurity of the unknown.
Out doors up against the San Gabriel mountains Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program . This sure seems like a witness the world needs protection from.
Out doors at the race track .Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack.
In the bath room conflict and fear. That’s Where he beats a dead beat gambler almost to death who didn’t pay him his gambling debts.
Revealing cruel temper leaving the kids with fear and emotions lack of safety if they cross him.
Inside classroom Before school . The day starts out cerebral and ends up confrontational as Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all . That is until a bad looser tossed the chessboard and try’s to confront him. Troy shakes his head and walks away as the sore loser is taken down verbally by Cane and then held in check physically.
Troy wipes his hands as he says I hate mind less bully’s ,gangs and mobs.
Turning point 1
Inside hallway First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players going disrespect by saying unsavory comments about his sister while trying to hit on her.
Confrontation in the hallway ensues as Cane essentially demands respect for his family and ways. Cane uses his courage to confront the quarterback a player slips behind Cane so the QB can push Cane over him . However Cane then flips over him and breaks his leg and the QBs arm in the process.reveal
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him sent to the principal’s office.setup
Inside day.However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are in the principal’s office for a unexpected fortuitous meeting. That’s where they first met the man who could change their lives the head coach. It is he who gives them the new real the consequences the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that ether they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game. Fear of getting caught turn into hope as they are both good athlete’s.
Act 2
Out side Cane starts out throwing the football but the Former Ram says Canes faster but Troy can throw and read the field better.They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.setup
Inside Mollys bedroom Concurrently Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which starts a music career for both. Showing both Amy and Molly are smart have talent and charm.
Troy becomes Quarterback and Cane a receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone in high school could defend.
Car at night subtext who Cane is comes out. Cane starts relationship with Molly but is seduced by one of the wealthy song girls betrays Molly .
Inside Mollus home subtext. Sooo Amy introduced her to her other introverted brother Troy who has moral character that she can trust. Due to the boy’s football relationship they keep Molly and Troy’s relationship as just friends on the QT.
An undefeated season ensues. Then after overcoming tough competition (rivalry games they show the courage to face and overcome their personal demons as they become coplayers of the year ) By the end of the season they each receive college’s scholarships offers for both athletic and for Troy academic also.
Inside awards ceremony However After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship setup ,they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is 5 million dollars. Hope turns to dredge and fear for their sisters life
Turning point 2
Inside on the kitchen table fear turns to problem solving as Troy and mom want to solve and Cane wants revenge.Sooo mom and the boys start trying to figure how to make ransom money somehow .
Inside the garage thess set up a new lab. Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could legally in business make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime. This starts as a conflict but when he pulls a gun they yielded to his will,for now with mom’s guidance.
Inside at the pentagon subtext.While DARPA wants JPL to license to them the fusion reactor to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.
However Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .Day time conflict their step father unveiled his plan and overrides them and uses it to run probability programs to shave off points on the game’s to beat the odds and win money. After that he pretends to launder but really invests the cartels drug money in a Ponzi sceme He does this by taking slices off every stock trade investing their funds in the process corners the cripto currencies funding his own brokerage.
Day time fear turns to joy. After overshooting the 5 million dollar ransom getting ready to make the payoff they get a knock on the door and their sister back a little worse for the wear.
Night at the Casino. Stepdad has to big deal it as he goes on to make a fortune but it’s all a house of cards. All because step dads carelessness dishonesty and greed lose billions when their Ponzi scheme is hacked.
However because the cash stops flowing like all Ponzi Scheme do that’s when the chase begins.This now blow’s up and the complaints gets the attention of the federal government SEC-and IRS . The loss of cash flow to the investors the Mexican drug cartel and the mafia. They are now all after them because of their crooked stepdad’s rackets but all for different reasons . Stepdad runs and the family has to flee again under cover in the dark of the night.
Act 3
Night fear .Sooo as step dad runs . They give an all family hug as they are now also on the run again fleeing their home. Out of nowhere a van hits them damage to the family first causing mom to break her neck.
Night intersection crash . The Car accident sets up Troy to loose his sight and Cane breaks both his arms and legs trying to stop himself from going through the front windshield. reveal They take Cane off in the van leaving mom and Troy as to damaged. Mom who now is losing consciousness from her decapitated neck she gives Troy her cross which has protected her all her life, then she explained it’s powers and passes out.
Turning point
That’s when The people in the van take Cane. Where they finish the job his mother and brother started. They did this by equiping him with the physical robotics,thermal eyes , a hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link like Troy was. This augmentation along with armaments ,jet pack and drone like flying capabilities would make Cane the perfect hive solder.setup
Night fear Troy’s life gets a new normal.Since Troy lost his vision and couldn’t find where his mom and Cane went . Sooo he calls his sister to get him and goes back home where he meets up with Mollys family. Amy was staying with Molly the pastors daughter.
Night and in desperation Molly leads both he and his sister to hope through the lord. After repentance and praying For God to give eyes. However God had other plans and said my grace is sufficient for you and gave him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies.
As the sun rises hope is enhanced with faith as with these gifts God grants him spiritual eyesight and all the powers in the Bible plus all his other senses become enhanced. While Troy still had a hard time seeing where people were ,he could discern who and what they were which was much more valuable where he was going essentially.
Act 4 preparing for battle
Daytime training at the church subtext both spiritually and physically.Meanwhile Molly and Amy write more songs and helped Troy develop the gifts God gave him. Amy and Molly introduce mentor to train Troy to be more capable than he ever was in the churches gym and training room.Day confidence grew in the gym as mentor introduced Troy to the seal team.They help Troy recover as he puts to use and training by using the lords promised powers of the scriptures to grow in his walk with God.
Day break give Troy trust in the lord .With the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders ,prophecies and do miracles like in the Bible. Troy develops the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and the faith of a prophetic wonder workings of Elijah. Troy’s gifted with much more as we will see as he becomes a force for good in God.
When working out Troy’s punch bursts the body bag and beats the gyms seal team and all the top warriors all at once. Preparing to fight Satans warriors.
Dark underneath the pentagon In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the CIA /DARPA that has been making him a transhuman hive warrior. Cane is having the same kind of success in his training as Troy unbeknownst to ether.
Canes and his team are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen who is forced to work for the beast as they call him to conquer the worlds nations.
The Coliseum at dusk Troy and Cane are the only humans that can stand up to Either of them but still neither has any idea it is their brother as the final battle is coming. That’s when Troy has an inkling that he might know the queen as she executed strategies he learned in his youth .
Under the Bright lights of the Coliseum the conflict of a lifetime as Cane is forced to battle not under his own control but the hives control for the future of the worlds inhabitants controlled by the beast himself. The beast has plans for the spectators. Now the question for the ages will finally be answered . Are we to become spiritual ,mechanical or technological?
In the bright lights The broken-hearted lady’s come forward as Troy is killed in the battle. That’s When Molly and Amy come forward crying to claim the body.
Sooo Cane and his mother learn at last that the warrior was Troy.
Reveal This breaks their heart bringing the two to their knees to repent praying and asking God for forgiveness.
An earthquake,Thunder and lightning explodes in the sky as God resurrected Troy and brings the family back together for an all family hug.
However The evil force that caused this all to happen the Beast of old then shows up and released his power and turns all his whole hive army against the family.
Like lightning Out of the sky Christ and his angels return to more than balance the equation and help his family overcome the Evil one.
Then as the real powers line up to face each other as Armageddon begins we Segway to the kids on space education pod as the start of ww3 begins the war of three worlds ,the third story of the trilogy. Setup for the rest of the story.
1.Smarter than God —Lucifer’s story
2.Satans son’s secrets— the twins revolution
3.World war 3 the war of three worlds —preparing for the next world .
Armageddon
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2. Give us a one sentence explanation of the intriguing moments in each Act of your project. Like the example above.
IntrigueSecretCovert agendaHidden identityConspiracySchemeSuperior positionCover upMystery
3. For any Acts that don’t have at least two intriguing moments, brainstorm how you could create more for that Act.
Use Process 2 above to turn drama into intrigue. Subject: Trilogy 2 Satans son’s secrets
Beginning this is the set up from smarter than God ,Satans story
Kids Trained in Satans Soviet school for spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR. After the fall they escape into Italian earth energy cult called Damanhur at the foot of the Alps.setup
KIDS ARE REALLY TRAINED KGB AGENTS
Insighting insidentAfter Murder at Davos where their father is killed in an assassination plot. Reveal emotional loss of the person who really believed in the kids as all family hugs and trusted their judgement in their performances.
THEIR REAL FATHER WAS A HIGH POWERED LEADER OF THE KGB.
The Family is forced to Flee to America mom married a mafia hit man who turns states evidence so she could get citizenship . He however is never the same as their real father. Loss of relationship.Setup
THERE IS ALWAYS TENSION BETWEEN THE MAFIA WAY AND THE KGB WAY AND WHYS.
Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program
Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack. Setup
YOU CAN TAKE THE MAN OUT OF THE MAFIA BUT YOU CANNOT TAKE THE MAFIA OUT OF THE MAN.
That’s Where he beats a dead beat gambler almost to death who didn’t pay him his gambling debts.reveal emotions lack of safety if they cross him.
Before school Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all . That is until a bad looser tossed the chessboard and try’s to confront him. The sore loser is taken down verbally and then held in check physically. TROY IS A MILD GENESIS BUT BECAUSE OF HIS KGB SKILLS WONT BE BULLIED
Troy says I hate mind less bully’s ,gangs and mobs. Setup
Turning point 1
First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players saying unsavory comments about his sister while trying to hit on her.
THE TWINS HAVE BEEN TRAINED BY DAD TO COVER EACH OTHERS BACK ALWAYS
Cane uses his courage to confront the quarterback a player slips behind Cane so the QB can push Cane over him . However Cane then flips over him and breaks one players leg and the QBs arm in the process.reveal
CANE IS BOTH A TRAINED IN GYMNASTICS AND MARTIAL ARTS.
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him sent to the principal’s office.setup
However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are called out of class to the principal’s office for a unexpected fortuitous meeting. That’s where they first met the man who could change their lives the football teams head coach. It is he who gives them the new real the consequences the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that ether they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game.setup
ATHLETIC TRAINING IS A WAY OF LIFE SO THEY CATCH ON TO IT QUICKLY AS A FISH IN WATER
Act 2
They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.setup BOTH COLLEGE AND PRO CONNECTIONS
Concurrently Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which starts a music career for both.setup
Cane becomes Quarterback and Troy receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone in high school could defend.
Cane starts relationship with Molly but is seduced by One of the wealthy song girls unbeknownst to Molly
Sooo Amy introduced her to her other introverted brother Troy who has moral character that she an trust. Due to the boy’s football relationship they keep Molly and Troy’s relationship as just friends on the QT.
An undefeated season ensues. Then after overcoming tough competition (rivalry games they show the courage to face and overcome their personal demons as they become coplayers of the year ) By the end of the season they each receive college’s scholarships offers for both athletic and for Troy academic .reveal THERE IS ALWAYS A TENSION AS TROY KNOWS WHAT CANE IS DOING TO MOLLY BEHIND HER BACK
However After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship setup ,they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is asking 5 million dollars.reveal
AMY IS A TRAINED KGB AGENT AND KNOWS HOW TO SURVIVE
Turning point 2
Sooo mom and the boys start trying to figure how to make ransom money somehow .setup
Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could legally in business make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime. Reveal CONTENTIOUS COMPETITION ENSUES AS KGB SECRETS ARE BEHIND THESE DISCOVERIES
While DARPA gets wind of their work and wants JPL to license to them the fusion reactor to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.setup
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.setup
However Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .Their step father overrides them and uses it to run probability programs to shave off points on the game’s to beat the odds and win money. After that he pretends to launder but really invests the cartels drug money in a Ponzi sceme He does this by taking slices off every stock trade investing their funds in the process corners the cripto currencies funding his own brokerage. THE MAFIA WINS SHORT TERM
After overshooting the 5 million dollar ransom and preparing to make the payoff. Amy escaped and they get their sister back a little worse for the wear.
Stepdad goes on to make and because step dads carelessness dishonesty and greed lose billions when their Ponzi scheme is hacked. setup
However because the cash stops flowing like all Ponzi Schemes do that’s when the chase begins.This now blow’s up and the complaints gets the attention of the federal government SEC-and IRS . The loss of cash flow to the investors the Mexican drug cartel and the mafia. They are now all after them because of their crooked stepdad’s rackets but all for different reasons . THE PAST STARTS CATCHING UP AS THE TRUTH STARTS UNRAVELING THEIR STORY AND THEY COULD HET CAUGHT AND DEPORTED
Act 3
Sooo step dad runs . They give an all family hug as they are now also on the run again fleeing their home. Out of nowhere a van hits them damage to the family first causing mom to break her neck.setup &reveal THE VAN IS CONTROLLED BY A CLANDESTINE GROUP OF ANARCHISTIC RAIDERS
The Car accident sets up Troy to loose his sight and Cane breaks both his arms and legs trying to stop himself from going through the front windshield. reveal They take Cane off in the van leaving mom and Troy as to damaged to save. Mom who now is losing consciousness from her decapitated neck she gives Troy her cross which has protected her all her life, then she explained it’s powers and then passes out.THE HIDDEN POWERS OF MOMS CROSS START GETTING REVEALED HERE setting up the rest of the story.
Turning point
That’s when The people in the van take Cane. Where they finish the job his mother and brother started. They did this by equiping him with the physical robotics,thermal eyes , a hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link like Troy was. This augmentation along with armaments and drone like flying capabilities would make Cane the perfect hive solder.setup CANE THINKS THEY DONT KNOW ABOUT HIS PAST, BUT THATS WHY THEY PICKED HIM. HE DOESN’T KNOW WHOS THE POWER REALLY BEHIND THEM.
Since Troy lost his vision and couldn’t find where his mom and Cane went. They checked all the morgues and hospitals it’s as though they vanished . LITTLE DO THEY KNOW THEY WILL MEET AGAIN
Sooo he goes back home where he meets up with his sister who is staying with Molly the pastors daughter. Molly who has lost Cane start’s falling for Troy and leads both he and his sister to the lord. OUT OF LOYALTY TO CANE TROY BECOMES JUST FRIENDS,FOR NOW
After repentance and praying For God to give him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies. God grants him spiritual eyesight and all the powers in the Bible plus all his other senses become enhanced. GOD HAS A PURPOSE FOR TROYS LIFE NOW TROY IS STARTING TO SEE IT TOO.
While Troy still had a hard time seeing where people were but he could discern who and what they were which was much more valuable.setup HOW HE IS LIKE A WALKING LIE DETECTOR THIS WILL COME IN HANDY IN THE FUTURE
Act 4 preparing for battle MOLLY AND TROY BOTH CHANGE THEIR TUNE ON LOYALTY CANE , TROY AND MOLLYS RELATIONSHIP
Meanwhile Molly and Amy write more songs and help Troy develop the gifts God gave him. Amy and Molly starts believing Cane will never return. That’s when Amy shares the story of Cane infidelities so Molly and Troy can get together. That’s when they train Troy to be more capable than he ever was in the churches gym and training room training with the seal team . setup
They help Troy recover as he puts to use and training by using the lords promised powers of the scriptures to grow in his walk with God. With the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders ,prophecies and do miracles like in the Bible. Troy develops the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and the faith of a prophetic
wonder worker like Elijah . Through his mentor Troy becomes a force for good in God. GODS PLAN IS WORKING TROY IS BECOMING THE WARRIOR HE WILL HAVE TO BE AS THE FINAL CONFLICT TURNS DEADLY.
When working out Troy’s punch bursts the body bag and beats the gyms top warriors all at once.setup
In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the Satanic cult that is making him an Antichrist atheist beast transhuman hive warrior. Cane is having the same kind of success in his training as Troy unbeknownst to ether.
THE MEETING IS COMING NEITHER WILL HAVE A CLUE WHERE THE OTHER WENT AND WHAT THEIR DOING NOW.setup
Canes and his team are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen who is forced to work for the beast to conquer the worlds nations. Setup
Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane’s army still has no idea it is His brother as the final battle is coming. That’s when Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.reveal HIS MOTHER AND TROY NEVER KNOW UNTIL ITS TO LATE
Cane is forced to battle not under his own control but the hives control for the future of the worlds inhabitants by the Chinese dragon himself. Now the question for the ages will finally be answered . Are we to becomespiritual ,mechanical or technological.
Troy is killed in the battle. That’s When Molly and Amy come forward crying to claim the body.setup
Sooo Cane and his mother learn at last that the warrior was Troy. Reveal
Reveal This breaks their heart bringing the two to their knees to repent praying and asking God for forgiveness. MOMS FORMER FAITH RETURNS AS THE VAIL IS LIFTED FROM THEIR EYES THEY NOW SEE HOW THEY HAVE BEEN DECEIVED AND BETRAYED BY THE DRAGON.
Sooo God resurrected Troy and brings the family back together for an all family hug.
However The evil force that caused this all to happen the Dragon of old then shows up and released his power and turns all his whole hive army against the family.
Out of the sky Christ and his angels return to MORE THAN balance the equation and help his family overcome the Evil one.
Then as the real powers line up to face each other as Armageddon begins we Segway to the kids on space education pod as the start of ww3 begins the war of three worlds ,the third story of the trilogy. Setup for the rest of the story. THE REAL POWERS HAVE THE FINAL SHOW DOWN.
1.Smarter than God —Lucifer’s story
2.Satans son’s secrets— the twins revolution
3.World war 3 the war of three worlds —preparing for the next world .
Armageddon
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Subject: Fwd: Sss2. Like the example above, give us a one or two sentence explanation of the emotional moments in each act of your project.
Positive Emotions
SurpriseBondingExcitementCourageSuccess/WinningLove
Negative Emotions
WoundsEmotional DilemmaBetrayalMoral issueHidden weaknessDistressSacrifice
Subject: Trilogy 2 Satans son’s secrets
Beginning this is the set up from smarter than God ,Satans story
Kids Trained in Satans Soviet school for spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR. After the fall they escape into Italian earth energy cult called Damanhur at the foot of the Alps.setup
Insighting insident
After Murder at Davos where their father is killed in an assassination plot. Reveal emotional loss of the person who really believed in the kids as all family hugs and trusted their judgement in their performances.
The Family is forced to Flee to America mom married a mafia hit man who turns states evidence so she could get citizenship . He however is never the same as their real father. Loss of relationship.Setup
Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program
Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack. Setup
That’s Where he beats a dead beat gambler almost to death who didn’t pay him his gambling debts.reveal emotions lack of safety if they cross him.
Before school Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all . That is until a bad looser tossed the chessboard and try’s to confront him. The sore loser is taken down verbally and then held in check physically.
Troy says I hate mind less bully’s ,gangs and mobs. Setup
Turning point 1
First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players saying unsavory comments about his sister while trying to hit on her.
Cane uses his courage to confront the quarterback a player slips behind Cane so the QB can push Cane over him . However Cane then flips over him and breaks his leg and the QBs arm in the process.reveal
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him sent to the principal’s office.setup
However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are in the principal’s office for a unexpected fortuitous meeting. That’s where they first met the man who could change their lives the head coach. It is he who gives them the new real the consequences the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that ether they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game.setup
Act 2
They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.setup
Concurrently Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which starts a music career for both.setup
Cane becomes Quarterback and Troy receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone in high school could defend.
Cane starts relationship with Molly but is seduced by One of the wealthy song girls betrays Molly who says she will never trust him again. He is broken hearted and throws himself into the in crowd and football.
Sooo Amy introduced her to her other introverted brother Troy who has moral character that she an trust. Due to the boy’s football relationship they keep Molly and Troy’s relationship as just friends on the QT.
An undefeated season ensues. Then after overcoming tough competition (rivalry games they show the courage to face and overcome their personal demons as they become coplayers of the year ) By the end of the season they each receive college’s scholarships offers for both athletic and for Troy academic .reveal
However After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship setup ,they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is 5 million dollars.reveal
Turning point 2
Sooo mom and the boys start trying to figure how to make ransom money somehow .setup
Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could legally in business make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime. Reveal
While DARPA wants JPL to license to them the fusion reactor to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.setup
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.setup
However Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .Their step father overrides them and uses it to run probability programs to shave off points on the game’s to beat the odds and win money. After that he pretends to launder but really invests the cartels drug money in a Ponzi sceme He does this by taking slices off every stock trade investing their funds in the process corners the cripto currencies funding his own brokerage.
After overshooting the 5 million dollar ransom and making the payoff they get their sister back a little worse for the wear.
Stepdad goes on to make and because step dads carelessness dishonesty and greed lose billions when their Ponzi scheme is hacked. setup
However because the cash stops flowing like all Ponzi Scheme do that’s when the chase begins.This now blow’s up and the complaints gets the attention of the federal government SEC-and IRS . The loss of cash flow to the investors the Mexican drug cartel and the mafia. They are now all after them because of their crooked stepdad’s rackets but all for different reasons .
Act 3
Sooo step dad runs . They give an all family hug as they are now also on the run again fleeing their home. Out of nowhere a van hits them damage to the family first causing mom to break her neck.setup &reveal
The Car accident sets up Troy to loose his sight and Cane breaks both his arms and legs trying to stop himself from going through the front windshield. reveal They take Cane off in the van leaving mom and Troy as to damaged. Mom who now is losing consciousness from her decapitated neck she gives Troy her cross which has protected her all her life, then she explained it’s powers and passes out.
Turning point
That’s when The people in the van take Cane. Where they finish the job his mother and brother started. They did this by equiping him with the physical robotics,thermal eyes , a hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link like Troy was. This augmentation along with armaments and drone like flying capabilities would make Cane the perfect hive solder.setup
Since Troy lost his vision and couldn’t find where his mom and Cane went . Sooo he goes back home where he meets up with his sister who is staying with Molly the pastors daughter. Molly leads both he and his sister to the lord. After repentance and praying For God to give him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies. God grants him spiritual eyesight and all the powers in the Bible plus all other senses become enhanced. While Troy still had a hard time seeing where people were he could discern who and what they were which was much more valuable.setup
Act 4 preparing for battle
Meanwhile Molly and Amy write more songs and help Troy develop the gifts God gave him. Amy and Molly train Troy to be more capable than he ever was in the churches gym and training room.setupThey help Troy recover as he puts to use and training by using the lords promised powers of the scriptures to grow in his walk with God. With the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders ,prophecies and do miracles like in the Bible. Troy develops the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and the faith of a prophetic
wonder workings of Elijah Troy becomes a force for good in God.
When working out Troy’s punch bursts the body bag and beats the gyms top warriors all at once.setup
In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the Satanic cult that is making him an Antichrist atheist beast transhuman hive warrior. Cane is having the same kind of success in his training as Troy unbeknownst to ether.
Canes and his team are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen who is forced to work for the beast to conquer the worlds nations. Setup
Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane’s army still has no idea it is His brother as the final battle is coming. That’s when Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.reveal
Cane is forced to battle not under his own control but the hives control for the future of the worlds inhabitants by the dragon himself. Now the question for the ages will finally be answered . Are we to becomespiritual ,mechanical or technological. When Molly and Amy come forward to claim the body.
Troy is killed in the battle. That’s When Molly and Amy come forward crying to claim the body.setup
Sooo Cane and his mother learn at last that the warrior was Troy.
Reveal This breaks their heart bringing the two to their knees to repent praying and asking God for forgiveness.
Sooo God resurrected Troy and brings the family back together for an all family hug.
However The evil force that caused this all to happen the Dragon of old then shows up and released his power and turns all his whole hive army against the family.
Out of the sky Christ and his angels return to balance the equation and help his family overcome the Evil one.
Then as the real powers line up to face each other as Armageddon begins we Segway to the kids on space education pod as the start of ww3 begins the war of three worlds ,the third story of the trilogy. Setup for the rest of the story.
1.Smarter than God —Lucifer’s story
2.Satans son’s secrets— the twins revolution
3.World war 3 the war of three worlds —preparing for the next world .
Armageddon
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Satans son’s secretsLesson 4: What’s beneath the surface?Lesson 5: 4-Act Structure – Turning Points
Module 3:
Lesson 3: Characters for SubtextLesson 4: Character IntrigueLesson 6: Character Profiles
3. Using that info, make a list of your answers to these four questions:
Question 1: What will you reveal? Question 2: When will the reveal show up in the story? Question 3: What setups need to be in place to have each reveal work? Question 4: Where in the story do those setups belong?
4. Build all of those into your outline, making sure there are setups for each reveal and that you have reveals in every Act
: Satans son’s secrets Screenwriting classes
Subject: Trilogy 2 Satans son’s secrets
Beginning this is the set up from smarter than God ,Satans story
Kids Trained in Satans Soviet school for spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR. After the fall they escape into Italian earth energy cult called Damanhur at the foot of the Alps.setup
Insighting insident
After Murder at Davos where their father is killed in an assassination plot. Reveal
The Family is forced to Flee to America mom married a mafia hit man who turns states evidence so she could get citizenship . Setup
Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program
Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack. Setup
That’s Where he beats a dead beat gambler almost to death who didn’t pay him his gambling debts.reveal
Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all a bad looser try’s to confront him and is taken down verbally and then physically.
Troy says I hate mind less bully’s ,gangs and mobs. Setup
Turning point 1
First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players saying unsavory comments about his sister while trying to hit on her.
Cane confronts the quarterback a player slips behind Cane so the QB can push Cane over him . However Cane then flips over him and breaks his leg and the QBs arm in the process.reveal
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him sent to the principal’s office.setup
However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are in the principal’s office where they meet the head coach who gives them the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that ether they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game.setup
Act 2
They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.setup
Cane becomes Quarterback and Troy receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone in high school could defend.A undefeated season ensues after overcoming tough competition the college offers follow.reveal
However After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship setup ,they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is 5 million dollars.reveal
Turning point 2
Sooo mom and the boys start trying to figure how to make ransom money somehow .setup
Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime. Reveal
While DARPA wants to use the fusion reactor to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.setup
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.setup
However Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .Their step father uses it to run probability programs to shave off points on the game’s to beat the odds and win money. After that he pretends to launder but really invests the cartels drug money. He does this by taking slices off every stock trade investing their funds in the process corners the cripto currencies funding his own brokerage.
After overshooting the 5 million dollar ransom they go on to make and because step dads greed lose billions.setup
However This gets the attention of the federal government,Mexican drug cartel and the mafia which are now all after them for different reasons.
Act 3
Sooo They give an all family hug as they are on the run again fleeing their home , when a van hits them causing mom to break her neck.setup &reveal
This sets up Troy to loose his sight and Cane breaks both his arms and legs trying to stop himself from going through the front windshield.reveal
Turning point
That’s when The people in the van take Cane. they finish the job his mother and brother started. They did this by equiping him with the physical robotics,thermal eyes , a hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link like Troy was. This along with armaments and drone like flying capabilities would make Cane the perfect solder.setup
Since Troy lost his vision and couldn’t find where his mom was . Sooo he goes back home where he meets up with the pastors daughter Molly who leads he and his sister to the lord. After repentance and praying For God to give him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies. God grants him spiritual eyesight and all the powers in the Bible plus all other senses become enhanced.setup
Act 4 preparing for battle
Meanwhile Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which starts a music career for both.setupThey help Troy recover as he puts to use and training by using the lords promised powers of the scriptures to grow in his walk with God. With the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders ,prophet and do miracles like the Bible. Troy develops the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and the faith of a prophetic
wonder workings of Elijah Troy becomes a force for good in God.
When working out Troy’s punch bursts the body bag and beats the gyms top warriors all at once.setup
In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the Satanic cult that is making him an Antichrist atheist beast transhuman warrior. Cane is having the same kind of success in his training as Troy unbeknownst to ether.
Canes and his team are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen who works for the beast to conquer the worlds nations. Setup
Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane as the final battle is coming. That’s when Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.reveal
Cane is forced to battle not under his own control but the hives control for the future of the worlds inhabitants if they are to be spiritual ,mechanical or technological.
Troy is killed in the battle setup that’s when Cane and his mother learn that the warrior was Troy. Reveal This brings the two to their knees to repent praying and asking God for forgiveness.
Sooo God resurrected Troy and brings the family back together for an all family hug.
The evil force that caused this all to happen the Dragon of old then shows up and released his power and turns all his army against the family. That’s when Christ returns to balance the equation and help his family overcome the Evil one.
Then as the real powers line up to face each other as Armageddon begins we Segway to the kids on space education pod as the start of ww3 begins the war of three worlds ,the next story of the trilogy. Setup for the rest of the story.
1.Smarter than God —Lucifer’s story
2.Satans son’s secrets— the twins revolution
3.World war 3 the war of three worlds —preparing for the next world .
Armageddon noun
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Ar·ma·ged·don | \ ˌär-mə-ˈge-dᵊn \
Definition of Armageddon
1a: the site or time of a final and conclusive battle between the forces of good and evil
b: the battle taking place at Armageddon
2: a usually vast decisive conflict or confrontation
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Subject: Lesson 5: Character Action Tracks – Screenwriting classes
Subject: Trilogy 2 Satans son’s secrets
Beginning
Kids Trained spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR escape into Italian earth energy cult called Damanhur .
Insighting insident
After Murder at Davos where their father is killed in an assassination plot.
The Family is forced to Flee to America mom married a mafia hit man who turns states evidence so she could get citizenship .
Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program
Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack. Where he beats a dead beat gambler almost to death who didn’t pay his gambling debts.Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all a bad looser try’s to confront him and is taken down verbally and then physically.
Troy says I hate mind less bully’s ,gangs and mobs.
Turning point 1
First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players saying unsavory comments about his sister while trying to hit on her.
Cane confronts the quarterback a player slips behind Cane who then flips over him and breaks his leg and the QBs arm in the process.
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him sent to the principal’s office.
However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are in the principal’s office where they meet the head coach who gives them the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that ether they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game.
Act 2
They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.
Cane becomes Quarterback and Troy receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone in high school could defend.A undefeated season ensues after overcoming tough competition the college offers follow.
However After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship ,they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is 5 million dollars.
Turning point 2
Sooo mom and the boys start trying to figure how to make ransom money somehow .
Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime.
DARPA wants to use the fusion reactor it to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.
However Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .Their step father uses it to run probability programs to shave off points on the game’s to beaT the odds and win money. After that he pretends to launder and invest the cartels drug money. He does this by taking slices off every stock trade investing their funds in the process corners the cripto currencies funding his own brokerage.
After overshooting the 5 million dollar ransom they go on to make billions.
However This gets the attention of the federal government,Mexican drug cartel and the mafia which are now all after them for different reasons.
Act 3
Sooo They give an all family hug as they are on the run again fleeing their home , when a van hits them causing mom to break her neck.
This sets up Troy to loose his sight and Cane breaks both his arms and legs trying to stop himself from going through the front windshield.
Turning point
That’s when The people in the van take Cane and equip Him with the physical robotics,thermal eyes , a hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link like Troy was. This along with armaments and drone like flying capabilities make Cane the perfect solder.
Since Troy lost his vision and can’t find where his mom is he goes back home where he meets up with the pastors daughter Molly who leads he and his sister to the lord. After repentance and praying For God to give him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies. God grants him that and all the powers in the Bible plus all other senses enhanced.
Act 4 preparing for battle
Meanwhile Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which starts a music career for both.They help Troy recover as he puts to use and trains using the lords promised powers of the scriptures to grow in his walk with God. With the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders and do miracles like the Bible. Troy develops the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and the faith of a prophet with the
wonder workings of Elijah Troy becomes a force for good in God.
When working out Troy’s punch bursts the body bag and beats the gyms top warriors all at once.
In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the Satanic cult that is making him atheist best transhuman warrior. Cane is having the same kind of success in his training as Troy unbeknownst to ether.
Canes team are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen who works for the beast to conquer the worlds nations.
Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane as the final battle is coming. That’s when Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.
Cane is forced to battle not under his own control but the hives control for the future of the world if it’s to be spiritual ,mechanical or technological.
Troy is killed that’s when Cane and his mother learn that the warrior was Troy. This brings the two to their knees to repent praying and asking God for forgiveness. That’s when God resurrected Troy and brings the family back together for an all family hug.
The evil force that caused this all to happen the Dragon of old then shows up and released his power and turns all his army against the family. That’s when Christ returns to balance the equation and help his family overcome the Evil one.
Then as the real powers line up to face each other as Armageddon begins we Segway to the kids on space education pod as the start of ww3 begins the war of three worlds ,the next story of the trilogy.
1.Smarter than God —Lucifer’s story
2.Satans son’s secrets— the twins revolution
3.World war 3 the war of three worlds —preparing for the next one.
Armageddon noun
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Ar·ma·ged·don | \ ˌär-mə-ˈge-dᵊn \
Definition of Armageddon
1a: the site or time of a final and conclusive battle between the forces of good and evil
b: the battle taking place at Armageddon
2: a usually vast decisive conflict or confrontation
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Subject: Lesson 5: Character Action Tracks – Screenwriting classes
Subject: Sss
Kids Trained spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR escape into Italian cult.
After Murder at Davos where their father is killed in an assassination plot .
The Family is forced to Flee to America mom married a mafia hit man who turns states evidence so she could get citizenship .
Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection program
Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack. Where he beats a dead beat gambler who didn’t pay his debts.Troy is playing 4 timed chess matches at the same time and wins them all a bad looser try’s to confront him and is taken down verbally and then physically.
Troy says I hate brainless bully’s ,gangs and mobs.
First day at new school Cane is confronted by football players saying unsavory comments while trying to hit on his sister .
Cane confronts the quarterback a player gets behind Cane who flips over him and breaks his leg and the QBs arm.
It turns out he broke the receiver’s leg and QB s arm that gets him set to the principal’s office.
However because ~Cane and Troy demolished the QB and star receiver they are in the principal’s office where they meet the head coach who gives them the ramifications of their actions.
They’re informed that they must replace them and learn to play football or face expulsion before the first game.
They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.
Cane becomes Quarterback and Troy receiver as they developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone could defend.A undefeated season ensues after overcoming tough competition the college offers follow.
After the joy of celebrating their winning the championship ,they discovered that during the festivities their sister was kidnapped and ransom is 5 million dollars.
Sooo mom and the boys start trying to make ransom money somehow .
Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art quantum computer to solve problems like atomic fusion that could power the grid. Troy’s computer also solved the unfolding of proteins that helped solve many genetic autoimmune diseases both could make a king’s ransom but step dad wants to use it for crime.DARPA wants it to power a Cyborg army that normally would be used in warfare.
While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.
Troy wants to use it to designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .Their step father uses it to shave points off game’s to win money. Then he pretends to launder and invest the cartels drug money. He does this by taking slices off every stock trade and corners the cripto currencies by setting up a brokerage.
After overshooting the ransom they go on to make billions.
This gets the attention of the federal government,Mexican drug cartel and the mafia are now all after them.
Sooo They flee their home when a van hits them causing mom to break her neck, Troy to loose his sight and Cane to break both his arms and legs.
That’s when The people in the van take and equipped Cane with the physical robotics,hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link like Troy was. This along with armaments and drone like flying capabilities make Cane the perfect solder.
Since Cane lost his vision and can’t find where his mom is he goes back home where he meets up with the pastors daughter Molly who leads he and his sister to the lord. After praying God gives him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies.
Molly and Amy write and make songs first for church and then go on to win America has talent which starts a music career for both.
They help Troy recover as he is promised all the powers of the scriptures and grow in the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders and do miracles like the Bible.
With the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and for the faith of a prophet and wonder workings of Elijah Troy becomes a force for good in God. Troy bursts the body bag and spares in the gym with the top warriors and beats them all. At once.
In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the Satanic cult that is making him atheist best transhuman warrior.
They are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the inventor queen to conquer the world.Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane as the final battle is coming. Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.
Cane is forced to battles Troy for the future of the world if it’s spiritual ,mechanical or technological.
Troy is killed causing Cane and his mother to repent pray and ask God for forgiveness as Troy is then resurrected.
The force that caused this all to happen the Dragon of old shows his power and faces all the army against the family when Christ returns.
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Subject: Sss
Kids Trained spy’s,assassins and analysts before the fall of USSR escape into Italian cult.
Murder at Davos father killed .
Family Flee to America mom married a mafia hit man who turns states evidence so she could get citizenship .
Family shipped to Monrovia California under witness protection.
Step dad becomes a bookie for sports gambling and works out of Santa Anita Racetrack.First day at new school confronted by football players hitting on sister
Cane and Troy demolished them and are called to the principal’s office where they meet the head coach.
They’re informed that they must play football or face expulsion.They learn to play with help from a neighbor who played for the Rams.
They become Quarterback and receiver and developed both moves and timing patterns that knowone can defend.
After winning the championship they discovered that their sister was kidnapped and ransom is 5 million dollars.Sooo mom and the boys start trying to make ransom money somehow .
Mom a scientist at JPL in Pasadena and Troy a genius developed state of the art transhuman cyborg that normally would be used in warfare.While Troy is hooked to the state of the art quantum computer for problem solving and emulating systems.
They designed a plan To raise the money for Amy’s ransom .They shave points off game’s to win money,pretend to launder and invest the cartels drug money taking slices off every stock trade and corner the cripto currencies by setting up a brokerage.
After overshooting the ransom they go on to make billions.This gets the attention of the federal government,drug cartel and the mafia are now all after them.
Sooo They flee their home where a van hits them causing mom to break her neck, Troy to loose sight and Cane to break both his arms and legs.
That’s when The people in the van take and equipped Cane with the physical robotics,hive connection to a massive quantum computer network through neurological link. This along with armaments and drone like flying capabilities make Cane the perfect solder.
Since Cane lost his vision and can’t find where his mom is he goes back home where he meets Molly who leads he and his sister to the lord. After praying God gives him spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies.
Molly an Amy write and make songs first for church and then wins America has talent which starts a music career for both.
They help Troy recover and grow in the lord’s power to be able to enhance his other senses and see signs and wonders and do miracles like the Bible.
With the strength of Samson,the brains of Solomon and for the faith of a prophet and wonder workings of Elijah.
In the mean time Cane is getting his Cyborg capabilities up to speed by the Satanic cult that is making him a transhuman warrior.
They are building and army of transhuman soldiers who sink up as a hive controlled by the queen to conquer the world.Troy is the only human that can stand up to Cane as the final battle is coming. Troy finds out the queen that they rebuilt is actually his long lost mom.
Cane battle Troy for the future of the world if it’s spiritual ,mechanical or technological.
Troy is killed causing Cane and his mother to pray and ask God for forgiveness as Troy is resurrected.
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Module 4 — Lesson 3: Beat Sheet Part 1
My goal to have a show run at least 5 seasons and a movie both getting people choice.
Big picture helps clarify small parts.
2. Starting with your 4-Act Structure, add the following components into your story to create the first draft of your Beat Sheet.
4-Act Structure
THE 4-ACT STRUCTURE FOR LEAD CHARACTERS
Look at the story and who your character is in order to create their unique structure.
Beginning: Where does the character start?
Troy start as a quiet genius his love for Molly , his brother Cane animosity and loosing his mother and eyesight in a car accident changes everything.
Inciting incident: What propels them on their journey?
his love for Molly , his brother Cane animosity
Turning Point 1: A major twist that locks them into a conflict.
Canes animosity goes from best friend brother to worst enemy ,always critical ,arrogant ,attacking and putting him down in front of crowds.
Act 2: The character has a “normal response” to this change in their lives.
Troy avoids conflict by spending time with Molly and his sister Amy which make Cane even more upset.
Turning Point 2 / Midpoint: A twist that causes everything to change but keeps the character on the same journey.
Troy’s accident loosing his mother and eyesight in a car accident changes everything.
Act 3: The character rethinks their journey and makes a real change to solve things.
His brother leaves to be rebuilt as a transhuman and Troy has to learn how to overcome the world without his fleshly vision.
Turning Point 3: Another major twist that takes them to the biggest conflict.
Cane returned and acted like he was Troy and did things that hurt his relationship with Molly.
4th Act Climax: The ultimate experience/expression of this conflict.
Troy and Cane battle for Molly and the world’s future Cane kills Troy and regrets his destructive journey and bagging all for forgiveness starts the healing.
Resolution: Their world has changed. How did they end up after going through this journey?
Troy is resurrected and peace comes between the forces as God removes the deceiver,destroyer ,accuser who divided mankind. He stole their birthright of dominion,murdered as many as he could and destroyed their peaceful relationship’s.
Protag Journey Structures I see 5 year plus season and peoples choice award.
I learned that because the protagonist and the antagonist start out on the same team to hard to separate the twins.
Start with the Protagonist and your source material. Create a beginning, middle, and end of the character’s story.
3. Add the rest of the structure to the characters to the script. Try to get to the point as we’ve done in the Iron Man example above.
Beginning:Troy opens playing 4 people in chess on the clock when he is informed he is the youngest man to ever win the coveted Fields metal for math problem solving by resolving quantamagazine.org/a-path-less-taken-to-the-peak-of-the-math-world- Cane says they have to get to school so they leave.Inciting Incident:Troy ,his brother and sister enter the new high school as some football players make unwanted whistles and comments about their sister Joy Cane thefuture antagonist jumps in and tells them to take it back. One of they ball players sneaks behind Cane and the quarterback try’s to push him Cane flips over and takes them all down . One big line backers try’s to get involved Troy trips him and the bell rings as the vice principal walks up. They all scurry to class.Turning Point 1: The VP and coach are talking about this new remarkable family telling the coach you should have seen these kids. The brother Troy’s the brains,Cane is the Braun and Joy is the beauty. We must get them to come out and play for us.Act 2:Turning Point 2 / Midpoint: the boys both like the next door neighbor MOLLY. When she chooses Troy it starts the twins splitting apart The family is driving in moms car and gets into a life changing accident that separates them from each other physically,emotionally and spiritually . They become at odds with each other on everything as Cane becomes Troy’s nemesis.Act 3: Turning Point 3:as Cane is being fix with technology’s best Troy is receiving powers from God Act 4 Climax: They meet for all the marbles as both the fate of the world and mankind will be decided by the outcome Resolution 4. The boy’s make amends and the world is a better place as they go after the powers that sought to divide them and pit them against each other.
Antag Journey Structure
Cane is the natural leader smart,good looking and a great athlete.He’s used to getting his way up until loosing Molly to Troy. That and the car accident that broke his limbs changed him from dominate take charge to a victim vengeance bully driven man.
Deeper Layer
All the family has been trained in the USSR as scientist,spy,analyst and assassin. Each one and their real mission will be revealed before we are done .
Genre Conventions action thriller mystery
3. After you fill in the blanks on your Beat Sheet, go back and do a quick pass to make sure they flow well.
4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
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I see 5 year plus season and peoples choice award.
I learned that because the protagonist and the antagonist start out on the same team to hard to separate the twins.
Start with the Protagonist and your source material. Create a beginning, middle, and end of the character’s story.
3. Add the rest of the structure to the characters to the script. Try to get to the point as we’ve done in the Iron Man example above.
Beginning:Troy opens playing 4 people in chess on the clock when he is informed he is the youngest man to ever win the coveted Fields metal for math problem solving by resolving quantamagazine.org/a-path-less-taken-to-the-peak-of-the-math-world- Cane says they have to get to school so they leave.Inciting Incident:Troy ,his brother and sister enter the new high school as some football players make unwanted whistles and comments about their sister Joy Cane thefuture antagonist jumps in and tells them to take it back. One of they ball players sneaks behind Cane and the quarterback try’s to push him Cane flips over and takes them all down . One big line backers try’s to get involved Troy trips him and the bell rings as the vice principal walks up. They all scurry to class.Turning Point 1: The VP and coach are talking about this new remarkable family telling the coach you should have seen these kids. The brother Troy’s the brains,Cane is the Braun and Joy is the beauty. We must get them to come out and play for us.Act 2:Turning Point 2 / Midpoint: the boys both like the next door neighbor MOLLY. When she chooses Troy it starts the twins splitting apart The family is driving in moms car and gets into a life changing accident that separates them from each other physically,emotionally and spiritually . They become at odds with each other on everything as Cane becomes Troy’s nemesis.Act 3: Turning Point 3:as Cane is being fix with technology’s best Troy is receiving powers from God Act 4 Climax: They meet for all the marbles as both the fate of the world and mankind will be decided by the outcome Resolution 4. The boy’s make amends and the world is a better place as they go after the powers that sought to divide them and pit them against each other.
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THE 4-ACT STRUCTURE FOR LEAD CHARACTERSLook at the story and who your character is in order to create their unique structure.
Beginning: Where does the character start?
Troy start as a quiet genius his love for Molly , his brother Cane animosity and loosing his mother and eyesight in a car accident changes everything.
Inciting incident: What propels them on their journey?
his love for Molly , his brother Cane animosity
Turning Point 1: A major twist that locks them into a conflict.
Canes animosity goes from best friend brother to worst enemy ,always critical ,arrogant ,attacking and putting him down in front of crowds.
Act 2: The character has a “normal response” to this change in their lives.
Troy avoids conflict by spending time with Molly and his sister Amy which make Cane even more upset.
Turning Point 2 / Midpoint: A twist that causes everything to change but keeps the character on the same journey.
Troy’s accident loosing his mother and eyesight in a car accident changes everything.
Act 3: The character rethinks their journey and makes a real change to solve things.
His brother leaves to be rebuilt as a transhuman and Troy has to learn how to overcome the world without his fleshly vision.
Turning Point 3: Another major twist that takes them to the biggest conflict.
Cane returned and acted like he was Troy and did things that hurt his relationship with Molly.
4th Act Climax: The ultimate experience/expression of this conflict.
Troy and Cane battle for Molly and the world’s future Cane kills Troy and regrets his destructive journey and bagging all for forgiveness starts the healing.
Resolution: Their world has changed. How did they end up after going through this journey?
Troy is resurrected and peace comes between the forces as God removes the deceiver,destroyer ,accuser who divided mankind. He stole their birthright of dominion,murdered as many as he could and destroyed their peaceful relationship’s.
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THE 4-ACT STRUCTURE FOR LEAD CHARACTERS
Look at the story and who your character is in order to create their unique structure.
Beginning: Where does the character start?Inciting incident: What propels them on their journey?Turning Point 1: A major twist that locks them into a conflict.Act 2: The character has a “normal response” to this change in their lives.Turning Point 2 / Midpoint: A twist that causes everything to change but keeps the character on the same journey.Act 3: The character rethinks their journey and makes a real change to solve things.Turning Point 3: Another major twist that takes them to the biggest conflict.4th Act Climax: The ultimate experience/expression of this conflict.Resolution: Their world has changed. How did they end up after going through this journey?
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Bill Kellas Satans son’s secrets
My Goal is to influence values in the world leave us better off than where we now are,and win a peoples choice award doing it.
I learned that until I am willing to strike out I will never hit a home run. This is just Another day of Failing my way to success!
SSS2. With each of your lead characters, first tell us the following:
A. The High Concept.twins who were best friends gone wrong over their neighbors Molly end up in a fight that will dictate the future of man kind.B. This Character’s Journey.Troy takes the painful road less traveled where character is made while Cane takes the six million dollar man rebuilding both his brain and body but losing his soul in the process.C. The Actor Attractors for this Character Troy is an introvert analyst scientist and man of high character,Cane is an extrovert smart mouth quick to react slow to repent and retreat. They both are hiding something and the mysterious events bring it out.
3. Brainstorm these profile components for each character.
7. Character Subtext:
Troy is hiding his training and past secrets thus holding back with people. Cane is out there but masking the truth concealing who he really is and why he’s here with his outgoing personality
8. Character Intrigue:
While Troy has a hidden identity ,secret purpose and unspoken history his motivation is more pure. Cane is competitive sibling rivalry and has a secret identity conspiracy deception with veneer of bravado to cover it up.
9. Flaw:
Troy’s flaw is he undervalues himself is afraid to take risks thus over analyzes everything.
Cane’s flaws is the opposite he is overconfident ,says the wrong thing and can make bad choices.
10. Values:
While Troy’s values re family,honesty ,loyalty and duty. Cane’s are beating not just winning but being the best,feared and egotistical self centered.
11. Character Dilemma:
Troy loves and cares deeply but can’t show it ,knows a lot but doesn’t say it ,takes a backseat when he is qualified to take charge.
Cane takes charge when he’s not qualified ,center of attention won’t ever take a back seat,fighting for everything as though it’s life or death even when it costs him everything even Molly.
4. Add those to your Character Profile from Lesson 6.
We can like and relate to both characters as some of both are in all of us. Circumstances ,opportunities and expectations keep some on display until they change.
5. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
6. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
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Module 3 — Lesson 8: Purpose Driven Supporting Characters
Bill kellas sssWhat I learned is you can’t hit a grand slam without three others on base.
2. Tell us your supporting and background characters.
Supporting Characters: joy Ann Molly and momBackground Characters: joy Ann is the twins sister, Molly their love interest,and mom
3. Focusing on those supporting characters, fill in the basic profile for each.
Support 1:
Name:Joy Ann Role:sister Main purpose as a sounding board bring the brothers together :Value:United they stand
Support 2:
Name:MollyRole:love interest Main purpose: separates the boys and influence TroyValue:changes Troy’s relationships with his brother
Mom is the scientist who teaches Troy how to to build the 21 st century man
Sounding board
Guiding light
Supply’s values and central family relationships
Etc.
4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
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Bill kellas Satans son’s secrets
Writing at least 5 years of binge tv and a movie which changes world view and wins peoples choice award.I learned that simplest way is the most time consuming.
SSSActivity: …to create engaging character profiles.
2. With each of your lead characters, first tell us the following:
A. The High Concept.
Troy brilliant introvert analytical problem solver follower who wants to serve peoples needs and hates bully’s
Cane quick extrovert with an in your face smart mouth who takes charge and uses people to attain his goals can be a bully.
Joy younger sister beautiful entertaining singer and musician. She flirts with the boys but let’s them know their place, loves both brothers as they love and protect her.
Mom a former USSR scientist who can design and build almost anything. She has taught Troy and developed parts to enhance her kid’s experience pursuing their dreams and her family’s plan.
Molly the change agent next door neighbor beauty queen who plays and sings for her dads church while leading bible study. Both Cane overtly and Troy covertly fall for her . She sees right thru Cane flattery and makes friends with Troy and invites him to her Bible study. All this while writing and playing musics with Joy.
Dad was a former assassin now hit man for the mob and a sports bookie. He was involved with all kinds of corruption out of the Santa Anita racetrack .
B. This character’s journey.
Troy became the leader of the rebels against Satans demonic army of bully’s to save the world.
Cane became the commander of Satans army of Transhuman bully’s.
Amy gained confidence after the car accident and singing in Mollys church.
Mom broke her neck and hooked up through the nero lync to run her cyborg robotics controlled by her ‘quantum AI/ML COMPUTER POWERED by the first atomic fusion for her Many motor’s.
Molly married Troy and had 3 kids that went to her dads church together.
Dad got picked up by the Feds on racketeering .
C. The Actor Attractors for this character
SINCE one actor can showcase their range by playing both Troy and Cane he needs virsitality to be able to keep up with the diversity of their roles.
Joy can showcase her singing,dancing and acting as can Molly.
Mom and dad can show their acting capabilities throughout
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3. Brainstorm the first 6 parts of the profile for each of your lead characters.
Role in the Story: Troy and Cane sibling relationship in and out of phases Age range and Description: teenagers tall good looking boys Core Traits:Troy introvert loyal damaged by his brother’s loss supportive Cane extrovert selfish devious cold takes charge Motivation; Want/Need: Troy wants purpose Cane want prosperity Wound: they lost their older brother in the USSR spy ,assassin etc.TRAINING CAMP where he was a trainer.Likability, Relatability, Empathy:
4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
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Bill Kellas SMARTER THAN God the rise and fall of Satans Soviet Empire.Without and accountability to God any gruesome terror is a part of our toolbox good for making us the strongest state.ACT 1 — SET UP FOR HORROR setting USSR training school for the best and the brightest were trai to be subductive spy’s,their handlers,assassins and their analysts.
Atmosphere of Evil establishedOpening of The first scene they kill a trainee for having compassion and not killing the one they beat on the mat.Connect with the characters you see that even the victorious are victims in the kremlin’s English training school. The only thing that counts is the state conquest of the world any way you can.The characters are warned not to do it.The first rule is obedience to the states trainers . Anyone caught holding back not giving up everything for the state,they and their families will be punished.Denial of HorrorThat trainee was killed because he disobeyed and was wrong not life has no meaning to the leadership of the communist party.Safety taken awayWhen their older brother who protected them is taken out they are on their own in fear of everyone that’s not their family.Monster: The nature of the beast.The trainer rarely sticks in the daytime but puts trainees on death drill every night and some never return to be replaced the next day.ACT 2 — THE POINT OF NO RETURNIsolated / Trapped / AbductedO God The death drills are fight to the death and someone normally dies with no escape.One of us killedAfter my older brother was taken out I was put against my teammate partner and best friend to fight to the death.tMIDPOINT: The monster is worse than we thought!Full pursuit by the killerAfter we would do whatever hey old us the mask came off and they showed their real purpose was to thin out the Hurd of anyone who would not sacrifice everything for the state.Terrorized Then the final night of terror where only the strongest would survive ACT 3 — FULL OUT HORRORFight to the deathYou ether killed and graduated or were killed in death campHysteria all against all The thrilling escape from death we made it by helping each other when we could.Death returns to take one or more.They caught us helping each other so one of us had to kill the other.Resolution The wall came down and the evil empire collapsed
2. Answer the question “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
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4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
At least 5 year binge tv series that win peoples hearts and minds and awards
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
Good or bad can both be likable,relatable and under stress even empathetic empathy identify with understand how they feel vs. sympathy feel how you feel.
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The ability to identify with or understand another’s situation or feelings: synonym: pity.The attribution of one’s own feelings to an object.the intellectual identification of the thoughts, feelings, or state of another person vs.Sympathy is feeling bad for someone else because of something that has happened to them. We often talk about it and feel sympathetic when someone has died, or something bad has happened, saying ‘ Give them my sympathy ‘, or ‘ I really feel for them ‘. As a concept, sympathy is closely connected to both empathy and compassion.
2. Brainstorm one or more ways you can present your Protagonist through each of these:Troy’s
Likability: Troy has compassion he feels peoples pain and wants to stop it sometimes by hurting another person especially hate bully’s who cause pain to others.Troy listens and considers before he speaks,he is compassionately likable although not demonstratively so. He is loyal and trustworthy and wouldn’t lie to you.Relatability: yet there is something that can mix with people without having to dominate the conversation or relationship,everyone’s best friend willing to support and protect you rather than having to compete with you.Empathy:his brother Cane is always putting him down and trying to one up him until he finally reaches his boiling point at the last battle where his secret is revealed
3. Just to get the experience, give us one or more ways that your Antagonist could be presented through each of these:
Likability: Cane is outgoing,fearless,playful and funny. He is the most entertaining guy with his quick wit and self effacing humor on the surface.However Cane will flatter,suduce but inside he is a deceiver as cold as ice and can come off as a bully.Relatability: Cane is competitive but keeps a stiff upper lip no matter how much pain he’s in ether physically,mentally or emotionally,he holds it that is up until Molly. His unspoken wounds sets up.Empathy:when he looses Molly,his sister and later his mom he finally can’t take it and breaks down confiding in the wrong person,who turns it against him to turn Cane against his family. This sets up the final confrontation
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Even the good guy must have flaws or we won’t identify with him as he hits his change agent and adjusts his arch.
For each of your main characters, use this list to brainstorm one or more Intrigue items that might apply. You don’t need all of them; just one or two.
Character Name Troy and Cane: Role: protagonist,antagonist Hidden agendas:beyond sibling rivalry subtle but hostile Competition: STAR QB AND RECIEVER how does Cane beat Troy and still win the game,girl etc.Conspiracies:mom has been working with Troy to develop the first QUANTUM computer that you can download and solve the challenges of mankind.Secrets: they and their sister are all trained at the USSRs school of assassins HimhDeception:bothers look alike but act totally different and use that to deceptive people especially on tests.Unspoken Wound: the fall of the USSR effected Cane much more than the rest of the family because he lost his love.Secret Identity: assassins,program developers that infiltrates the west to bring it down until Molly .
3. Give us an idea of how that character’s subtext might show up in your movie. Troy is a straight shooter who Cane is always getting in trouble until the accident that changes Troy’s character from introvert to extrovert
4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
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Bill kellas SMARTER THAN GOD SATANS STORY
I learned that terrorizing can motivate.fear of the lord is the beginning of wisdom.
1. Tell us what or who your monster is. My monster is Satan ,his demons and Titans Nephilim
The Nephilim are mysterious beings half Devine democratic half human in the Hebrew Bible who are large and strong. The word Nephilim is loosely translated as giants in some translations of the Hebrew Bible,
2. Give us a few sentences for each of the following for your monster:
Their Terror: is they seduce their prey by their desires and use that to destroy them closing of their minds from hearing or seeing the truth,replacing them from the inside out.<div>
</div><div>Their Mystery:how they know us so well and can toy with our emotions so effectively like a mouse trap.</div><div>
</div><div> Their Fear Provoking Appearance: Beautiful exterior surround by a Terrifing horror look that their prey must spend eternity with now.</div><div>
</div><div>Their Rules:the prey must willingly agree to the swap where they trade the life they cannot keep for what they wish they hadn’t.</div><div>
</div><div>Their Mythology:Lucifer proud and beautiful was Gods worship leader until God made man in his image to have dominion over the earth’s and its bounty. Satans job was to be the accuser and so he entrapped man to show they were unworthy of life. That’s when Satan could take the victims life to extend his own .this was unless he took an innocent man’s life than he would have to become the Devil hells prisoner.</div><div>3. Answer the question “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
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Bill kellas What I learned is the main characters must have depth and multiple levels of substance.
1 – Actor notoriety – Wants to be known for this part the range of emotions it so vast that it will be a challenge for even the best actor
2 – Character that is most interesting in movie. Troy because his character arch is the most dramatic as he who avoided conflict must now embrace it to save his mother the scientist who taught him.
3 – Takes most interesting actions in the story. The build up to the final cage fight preparing,emotional and stages of internal and external change they both must overcome.
4 – Outstanding Introduction. First day at school they disassembled the football team that were offensive to their sister Amy.
5 – Range of emotions the actor can play. Since Cane and Troy are twins the same actor can play both parts Canes outgoing personality, quick caustic wit physical quickness makes him a natural leader. Troy on the other hand is an introvert as an analyst projects are more interesting than people he is not quick to respond but he has more of a measure twice cut once approach I’ll have to think it over is his phrase that drives Cane crazy. Amy has been genetically altered for subduction she can dance,sing and is beautiful but like her brothers deadly.
6 – Subtext the actor can play. All 3 kids had superior blood lines,inhanced training that they must hide and yet sibling rivalry was alive and well in Cane the flashiest of the three. So 3,5,and 7 are in play as subtext
Scheme and InvestigationLayeringSomeone Hides Who They AreThe Fish Out of WaterSuperior PositionA Major Cover UpCompetitive Agendas
7 – Relationships that are interesting. Troy and Cane are the most interesting they and their sister Amy were trained assassins by the USSR before it broke up. Troy and Amy were biologically enhanced Cane was technically improved. They all were tied into a hive quantum computer communication system that allowed them to sync and anticipate what was going to happen next. That was until the car accident that required blood transfusion and changed Troy’s demonicly superior Titan blood to human blood and he became compassionate for the first time.
8 – Unique Voice expressed through dialogue and action.9 – Something truly special about this character cold on the outside but warm on the inside as you get to know Troy. While Cain is warm on the outside but cold on the inside this is why Molly their love interest chose Troy.
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SMARTER THAN GOD
It’s a nasty world scary if you tap into it alone.
Title / Concept: the fly
SmSmarterTerrorize The Characters:the scientist and the fly terrorized his wife,brother and thepolice inspector.
Isolation:downstairs in his lab
Death:for him the fly and the spider
Monster/Villain:sciencethe machine and the spider<br>High Tension: when he scared his wife and when the spider was going after the fly man.<br>Departure from Reality:the transition from the disassembler to the reassembler .<br>Moral Statement:the abnormal must die<br>3. Anything else you’d like to say about what made this movie a great horror film?<br><br>When I was young it scared me . I had to sneak in my mother wouldn’t let me see it.<br><br>4. With your concept, fill in each of these Conventions for your story. SMARTER THAN GOD<br><br>Concept: seeing the world thru spiritual eyes.</p>Terrorize The Characters: Satan ,his Demons and their half sons the Titans/naphthalene.<p><br>Isolation:he seduced the congressmen and then replaced them one at time by appealing to their arrogance,greed an lust for power.</p><p><br>Death:we each must die in our own sin nature way or repent .</p><p><br>Monster/Villain:Satan,Demons and Titans/naphthalene.</p><p><br>High Tension: as some resistance is found inthe pure ones as they fight against USAs destruction.Departure from Reality: spiritual eyes
Moral Statement:their is no one innocent and few pure.
5. Answer the question “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
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Satans son’s secrets
This shapes the sequences and turning points2. Tell us the following:
Title: Satans son’s secretsConcept: twin brothers have to overcome kidnapping,accident and finally battle for the fate of the worldGenre: action thriller
3. Make a list of the conventions for your chosen genre, like this:
Example for Action:
Purpose: Adrenaline-stirring / fast paced —Demand for Action: Mission: Escalating Action: Hero: Antagonist:
4. Brainstorm ways to deliver the conventions more effectively and build those parts into your 4-Act Structure. Act 1:
Opening Davos murder Inciting Incident rapeTurning Point family fleeing the police
Act 2:
New plan relocation in California Plan in action new school enrollment protect sister Midpoint Turning Point new girl,auto accident loose sight and needs a transfusion changing Troy’s DNA
Act 3:
Rethink everything Cane goes for robotics Troy turns to GodNew plan develope new skills Turning Point: Huge failure / Major shift loose balance in matches
Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate expression of the conflict turns to God for strength Resolutionmakes peace with his brother during combat and they unite against the Accuser
Murder in Davos starts the fleeing for their life through the Mexican border to Monrovia California
The kids enter the new school where the QB try to hit on the twins younger sister with graphic words ,he and his teamgets destroyed by the boys
5. List your structure from Lesson 6 along with the improvements that come from the Genre Conventions, like I did above.
6. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
7. Answer the question “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
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Satans son’s secrets
This shapes the sequences and turning points2. Tell us the following:
Title: Satans son’s secretsConcept: twin brothers have to overcome kidnapping,accident and finally battle for the fate of the worldGenre: action thriller
3. Make a list of the conventions for your chosen genre, like this:
Example for Action:
Purpose: Adrenaline-stirring / fast paced —Demand for Action: Mission: Escalating Action: Hero: Antagonist:
4. Brainstorm ways to deliver the conventions more effectively and build those parts into your 4-Act Structure. Act 1:
Opening Davos murder Inciting Incident rapeTurning Point family fleeing the police
Act 2:
New plan relocation in California Plan in action new school enrollment protect sister Midpoint Turning Point new girl,auto accident loose sight and needs a transfusion changing Troy’s DNA
Act 3:
Rethink everything Cane goes for robotics Troy turns to GodNew plan develope new skills Turning Point: Huge failure / Major shift loose balance in matches
Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate expression of the conflict turns to God for strength Resolutionmakes peace with his brother during combat and they unite against the Accuser
Murder in Davos starts the fleeing for their life through the Mexican border to Monrovia California
The kids enter the new school where the QB try to hit on the twins younger sister with graphic words ,he and his teamgets destroyed by the boys
5. List your structure from Lesson 6 along with the improvements that come from the Genre Conventions, like I did above.
6. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
7. Answer the question “What I learned doing this assignment is…?” and put it at the top of your work.
8. Post your assignment in the forums at http://ScreenwritingClasses.com/forums
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Pitch
We’re We in the last days as we could no longer ignore the signs as plagues, famine’s, pestilence wars and rumors of wars from ancient prophecys for they had they now all come upon us?
While Our leaders wanted unaccountable authority. They wanted all the power but none of the responsibility.
Was The worlds mass confusion from Satan as the master magician’s misdirection?
As The crowd focused on bread and circus’s their empire collapsed in to a one world government.
That was until a freak car accident seem to shattered the boy’s dream’s only to fulfill them.
From it Cane became the worlds most powerful cyborg while Troy assented to be Gods man as he prayed for spiritual eyes to see through a world of deception and lies.
Join us as we track their divergent journeys finely to converge to decide the fate of the world in Satans son’s secrets.
WIM] Module 2 — Lesson 1: Great Outlines Make Great Scripts!
ASSIGNMENT
1. Start this assignment by empowering yourself using our State-To-Activity empowerment process.
State: I am really good at…Activity: …creating an outline that turns into an amazing story!
2. Post your Title, and Concept to claim ownership of it.
Satans spawns/son’s secret
This is a story of an acrobatic family who toured the world as high wire gymnastics but really were kgb assassins from the old ussr. They tried to live a normal life in the USA after the fall of Russia but their past kept catching up with them.
Mom was a nuclear physicist dad was KGB they had twin boys one extrovert liar ,the other introvert who can only tell the truth and a daughter that was both beautiful and entertaining.
They were fleeing a murder in Davos Switzerland as mom got a job with jpl in Pasadena California and dad became a sports bookie out of Santa Anita racetrack in Arcadia .
Their first day at Monrovia high school some of the football players we’re making comments and whistles at their sister. Cane asked them to stop the QB said who’s going to make me? That’s when they found out as the two brother’s mop-the floor with them earning a reputation as a family you don’t mess with.
They play sports and academics excelling in both until their sister got cancer and they had to raise over 1 million to give her a chance to heal.
The family starts trying to raise money from legitimate and illegitimate means. This gets the cartel,law Enforcement and even their employer’s after them . This turns into a chase where their car gets hit breaking their mother neck. Troy gets blinded and Caine breaks his arms and legs trying to stop the impact his collision.
Two different groups take them away and that’s where they’re being mended differently one through technology and the other by praying to God. This starts them on a collision course as they compete for the same girl next door the pastors daughter Molly.
Troy can’t track his mother down in the hospital. They said she was never admitted. Sooo he starts a journey with joy his sister to find their mother.
They end up having to overcome many Demons but none as difficult as the ones inside. Finding mom and brother at the worst place,in the enemies castle. Their bodies were rebuilt by the antagonists technologies like AL,ML,ROBOTICS,QUANTUM COMPUTER THAT WAS NERO LINKED into a hive of Cyborg’s under Satans control.
THE Devil had to have his army in place for when Jesus Christ returned after the 3d day since Jesus death in 33 now 2033.
This opened the door for a cage fight for two brothers and their families . Winner take all to the death if need be.
3. Tell us the Character Structure you’ve chosen.
Action thriller
4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for
your success from this program.
Getting picked up as a successful addictive TV series for at least 5 years
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
6. Post on the forums at http://ScreenwritingClasses.com/forums
Subject Line: (Your name’s) Title, Concept, and Character Structure!
Deadline: 48 hours
ASSIGNMENT 4.established characters so that everyone can identify with at least one of them.
5 .it’s the different ways they interact and how we identify at they grow to overcome the challenges that the change agent’s give them that makes they story arch work.
1. Start this assignment by empowering yourself using our State-To-Activity empowerment process.
State: I am completely committed to…intriguing characters that do the unexpected Activity: …having my lead characters deliver powerfully on my concept.
2. Give us a logline (one sentence answer) for your protagonist, antagonist, and triangle character (if you have one) to the question, “What makes this character fit my concept and title powerfully?”
3. Tell us what makes each of these characters unique. These two steps will look like this:
Character: Troy a genius with Aspergers ADHD.OCD,photographic memory inventor who Can’t lie.Logline: Troy is an introvert handsome shy guy who likes Molly next door in competition with his extrovert brother Cane Unique: Troy will need all of his abilities and more to overcome his challenges
4. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
5. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
6. Post on the forums at http://ScreenwritingClasses.com/forums
Subject Line: (Your name’s) Intentional Lead Characters
Subject: [WIM] Module 2 — Lesson 3: The Transformational Journey
. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
To write,produce an addictive series that earns an Emey
6. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
The journey is the destination
2. Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:
Arc Beginning:
A.Troy’s sensitive to light ,sounds,even smells
, temperature and touch bother him.
B.He is and introvert likes projects ,finds people draining.
C. Avoidance of new circumstances especially relationships is his normal course.
Arc Ending
A. Troy gets the girl Molly and changes his sensitivity after his car accident where he picks up spiritual eyes that can read peoples motive.
B. He gains power after his mother gives him her hidden cross from the USSR days
C. The chosen one he becomes to recover his family and save the world.
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3. Give us their Internal/External Journey.
Internal Journey:
Troy change’s his sense of belonging being chosen by the master ,judgement/wisdom , problem solving mental competence and confidence self worth to be able to overcome his journeys challenges .
External Journey:
Troy built his physical skills like martial arts,boxing balance ,stamina,speed and strength to overcome his challenges.
4. Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
Old Ways:
Avoiding people,conflict and developed computer,math and science understanding so he could invent solutions to the worlds most difficult problems.
New Ways:
Confront the difficulties first listing the challenges inventing a quantum computer AI ML to solve energy needs using atomic fusion, adding robotics for power and neurolinc to communicate with the hive and internet. Troy installs it on his brother Cain who becomes arrogant and dangerous after Molly and the accident.
5. At the top of the page, tell us your one-sentence vision for your success from this program.
6. Under your vision, answer the question, “What I learned from doing this assignment is…?”
7. Post in the forums at http://ScreenwritingClasses.com/forums
Subject Line: (Your name’s) Transformational Journey
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Bill Kellas
I’ve cowritten five books on healthcare and am known as a Dr House kind of problem solver .
I’ve been in Hal’s courses since 2012 and am now switching my problem solving approach to TV & movies as the twisted action thriller is my wheelhouse. I’m Dyslexic. Sooo I’m good at
increasing the tension and misdirecting until the character arch becomes almost impossible climb,like life sometimes.
Looking forward to travelling together and learning from all of you also,
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1. Your name.GROUP RELEASE FORM
As a member of Writing Incredible Movies, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications,
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As a member of Writing Incredible Movies, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, through social media, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, videos, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.
I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.
4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.
5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.
6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.
This completes the Group Release Form for the class. WR KELLAS
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: Smarter than God TV series The hitmans holidayOur family flees Detroit into witness protection in Monvovia California after my dad the sole witness when the mob executed a hit on his boss the head of the teamsters union.
My two big brothers and I entered Monrovia high school one of the ball players whistled and tried to hit on me as he grabbed my guitar case. That was when out of nowhere when my big brother Cane got in his face and stopped him in his tracks. It was obvious no one had ever stood up to this guy before
Since this guy was the teams QB he was a BMOC so his posy tried to set Cane up. Just as one of the linemen knelt behind Cane the QB went to push Cane ,who then did a back flip over the top pulling the QB down over his own lineman.
Just as fast as he could the big defensive linebacker stepped in to help his QB who was now clearly in trouble. That’s when my other big brother Troy knocked him out cold with one punch.
Troy asked if their was going to have any more problems? The answer was a collective no as both the team and crowd dispersed as we all got to our prospective classes.
So many questions. Everyone was asking who were these guys ,where did learn to do that and what brought them here in the first place?
One thing was for certain Monrovia high would never be the same again now that the Adamoich family had come to their town.
The mystery They would soon to find out however how much that was going to be the understatement of all time.
The intriguing part is how many people want their family dead and the things they would and have to do just to survived to complete their suspense of their missions.
Cane says about Troy me you should respect him you should fear,I’m HIGH action he’s HIGH IQ. MY sister can perform moms a nuclear doctor at Huntington hospital,dads a former USSR admiral. We are talent for a purpose on assignment.
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Die hard John McLain
Reluctant hero
Mystery is why are the robbers there?
Intriguing how will John stop them ?
Suspense is will the they get away with it?
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Bill kellas I agree to the terms of the release form
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Farrin I have an action thriller and would like t§§o exchange bill Kellas
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Send your email to lbkellas@sbcglobal.net if you want to exchange outlines
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Bill Kellas I’m ready for feedback I have twin brothers who change the world. Action thriller
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Lori I would be interested in an exchange as we both are using AI in our story . I need a different take on my work and having raised a family yours interested me