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  • Bryan

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    August 14, 2022 at 10:01 pm in reply to: Day 4 Assignments

    Bryan’s Villain Track!

    What I learned doing this assignment is answers show up when asked and I put the effort in.

    1. Ask the Villain Track questions to discover your Villain’s plan, decisions, and actions.

    A. What might be the Villain’s plan to accomplish an evil outcome or to annihilate the hero? Villain wasn’t expecting any difficult long-term problems and often comes up with something new on the spot, until it escalates into their HQ. <div>

    B. How many ways can the Villain attack or destroy the hero? Rally, ridicule, shame, gossip, moralize, deplatform, turn family against, etc. Fake videos, blackmail inflation. Then financial bribery, or sanction, freeze accounts, etc. Then escalate to threats of violence, hitmen.

    C. What advantage does the Villain have and how can they exploit that in this movie? They have global intelligence network and lots of paid mercenaries.

    D. What would be a “fitting end” for this Villain where they pay for what they’ve done? Livestream video feed of cowards acting cowardly, revealing their shame, then reversing when they don’t get forgiven and all they hate spills out publicly. They are caged, and “domesticated and farmed.”

    2. Include labels with each step of their plan.

    MISTAKE: During a mission to topple a foreign tyrant- Archons send misinformation, and real information coded, when mistake is discovered they kill off the team, except hero escapes.</div>

    DILEMMA: Hero unsure if he ought to report to any superiors, or pretend to be dead, and continue investigation.

    DECISION: Finds out bigger plan is to take out any national threat to Archon’s Globalist Agenda, continue to enslave humanity.

    PLAN/HIT CONTRACT: Archons turn entire Intelligence Network against Hero.

    PLAN/HIDING OUT: Hero fights off most while gathering more intel and discovering Shadow Agencies. Hero releases files publicly.

    CAPTURE: Hero captured, taken to Archon HQ.

    RETALIATION: In retaliation, Archons tell Hero how they had his grandfather and his father killed. Let him know he only got this far because he’s an Alien hybrid.

    ESCAPE: Hero escapes with help of a few Archon dissidents, and some light body good ETs.

    FITTING ENDING: Livestream video feed of cowards acting cowardly, revealing their shame, then reversing when they don’t get forgiven and all they hate spills out publicly. They are caged, and “domesticated and farmed.”

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  • Bryan

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    August 14, 2022 at 9:23 pm in reply to: Day 3 Assignments

    Bryan’s Hero’s Mission Track

    What I learned doing this assignment is put in the work, fill in the blanks. Try again. More ideas become good ideas.

    1. Ask the Mission Track questions to discover your Hero’s mission.

    A. What is it about this Hero that will have them go straight into the face of the overwhelming odds? Always been a truth seeker, speaker, and actor. He takes RIGHTEOUS ACTION. He visualizes success in seconds. He strategizes through intelligence, but questions corrupted misinformation, and disinformation, especially TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE. <div>

    B. What is the mission that would be an impossible goal? Find and apprehend whoever is commanding US Intelligence.

    C. What strong internal and external motivation could drive the hero? 3 Days of Dark is being used for a Globalist Takeover. His children will become slaves.

    D. Imagine that mission playing out across a story. What could naturally happen if this hero went on this mission against this villain? Villain could try to recruit him, make fun of him, torture him, play cat n mouse with him, brainwash him, threaten to create evil clones of him, send him to be a slave on another planet, kill him.

    2. Use the Mission Steps to outline the mission.

    Clear Mission:

    Motivation: Autistic Intelligence officer dedicated to Truth</div>

    Inciting Incident: Team sent on mission, only to be betrayed.

    First Action: Find out who is responsible Obstacle: Multiple teams sent out to destroy “uncooperative regimes.”

    Escalation: Finding there are Archons in the US Military Complex, finding that Archons have killed his father and grandfather.

    Overwhelming Odds: They have advanced technology, and lots of compromised actors.

    New Plan: Release Apocalypse, the Great Revealing of Classified Information, track who is trying to suppress or counter.

    Full out Attack: Invade Archon HQ and kill their leader.

    Success: Discover similar to “Great Wizard of Oz,” The Archons are manipulative cowards, and Hero’s determined pursuit of Truth, wins.

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  • Bryan

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    August 14, 2022 at 5:44 pm in reply to: Day 2 Assignments

    Bryan’s Hero and Villain

    What I learned doing this assignment is Hero and Villain prompts help to answer the core of the action, and advance the plot.

    Concept:

    Hero Morally Right: Stopping Archon’s plan to oppress humanity.<div>

    Villain Morally Wrong: It’s not oppression, it’s domesticated farming.

    Hero

    A. Unique Skill Set: Hybrid Alien gifts, telepathic, telesomatic, and can use alien weapon technology.</div><div>

    B. Motivation: Discovers his father, and grandfather had been killed.

    C. Secret or Wound: Porn addiction, control freak.

    Villain

    A. Unbeatable: High level of coordination, superior technology, unlimited funds, willing dupes. B. Plan/Goal: Keep timelines in chaos, as to suppress any human victories. </div><div>

    C. What they lose if Hero survives: they lose another planet to species evolution. Humans become “As Gods” and compete with them.

    Impossible Mission

    A. Puts Hero in Action: He’s on a team for the first rogue nation, realizes they are taking out Archon’s enemies. </div><div>

    B. Demands They Go Beyond Their Best: Continues the mission, with a twist.

    C. Destroy the Villain: Realizes the last Archon is within the United States.

    Improved answers, added a bit to some of the sections above.

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  • Bryan

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    August 10, 2022 at 2:36 pm in reply to: Day 1 Assignments

    What I learned doing this assignment is…open up to creative process with lots of ideas, bad ideas make room for good ideas. Don’t get stuck being a perfectionist!

    Concept:Terminal Timeline

    Grandson of a Looking Glass Scientist gets pulled into Elite End time scenarios when probabilities collapse and all desperate measures to survive are unleashed on the world. Elites will do anything to maintain power.

    Conventions

    Hero: Intelligence Officer, who turns out to be an Alien Hybrid.


    Demand For Action: Multiple Agencies want to control the timeline, even creating chaos for more possible outcomes.

    Mission: Remove tyrants in a worldwide sweep with the least amount of collateral damage. Avoid nuclear war.

    Antagonist: Archons and Evil Elites who want to continue enslavement and energy extraction.

    Escalating Action: 5 big tyrants, their henchmen, and a major betrayal back home.

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  • Bryan

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    August 10, 2022 at 12:59 pm in reply to: Confidentiality Agreement

    Bryan Brey

    As a member of this group, I agree to the following:

    1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

    2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.

    I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

    3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

    4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

    5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

    6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

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  • Bryan

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    August 9, 2022 at 5:19 pm in reply to: Introduce Yourself to the Group

    Bryan Nova Brey

    I’ve written upwards of 10 treatments, 3x 40 card storyboards, and zero fully finished scripts. I have yet to type “THE END” and feel the sweet satisfaction.

    Well since I’m doing the ACTION class, I hope to get ACTION BABY! I’d love to develop the chops where I brainstorm ideas, make even better ideas, and even the best ideas. It’s such a thrilling genre, so I hope to level up and get a major superpower.

    Aside from graduating Valedictorian of my high school, I graduated from UCLA in 1995, I was ALMOST picked to Host Mtv’s Singled Out with Jenny McCarthy (swoon,) was a script reader for Zide-Perry Films who did the American Pie series, and was cast for a reboot of CHiPs as the new John, but they didn’t secure funding. I left Hollywood and worked at Yahoo.com, then owned a green real estate brokerage in Las Vegas, then built off-grid cabins in Hawaii for about a decade. During that period, I combined 15 years of personal development, with 5 years of film theory to write an eCourse called: MythMatrix: How to be the Hero in your own life story!

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