[Burney Ashley]

Burney’s Subtext Plots

Crucial Destiny is a critically acclaimed billion dollar blockbuster at the box office today.

I have learned to make my movie far more exciting, interesting, and entertaining with subtext plots.

A young couple in the near future with very unique genes will change the destiny and evolution of mankind if they can overcome resistance from the most ruthless organization ever known with conflicting interest before Yellowstone blows it top and puts an end to most of the life on the planet.

Subtext Plot #1 – Layering – “The Doctor” (Gabriel’s supposed father with a leadership role in the state department) received Gabriel and his wife Bianca as remarkable orphan’s to be placed and raised in extraordinary privilege as ordinary children. He raises Gabe as his own and places Bianca with his best friend. Gabe and Bianca are completely unaware of their bizarre origins. As the plot moves along they become aware of their true origin and potential.

Subtext Plot #2 – A Major Cover Up – Vince Hemmler and the Trident Alliance members are extraterrestrials that are thousands of years old and found refuge on earth after escaping a dying planet after due to depleted resources and pollution.

They were the inhabitants of Atlantis who spread out amongst the continents of the globe to enslave mankind from behind the curtains with collusion from the Pharaohs, Czars, Emperors, and Kings, and eventually grabbing control of the Central Banks, Equities and Commodities Market, and having the World Leaders in their pockets.

They also have technology that is sending undetectable brain altering signals to the walled in areas where the extremely poor masses reside to keep them under their thumbs. These facts are revealed as the plot moves forward making the goals of our hero more questionable with every scene.

[Burney Ashley]

Burney”S Intenional Lead Character

MY Vision – Crucial Destiny is a criticall acclaimed billion dollar blockbuster at the box office today.

I learned to begin developing my characters well in advance of oitlinindg and writing my script, so it can come together smoothly and be congruent with the concept.

Gabriel Martin – Protagonist – Gsbriel is a very wealthy genius who will change the desting of the destitute masses that have been placed in walled off areas of the US to protect the 1% .

Gabrial is unaware that his parents are not his birth parents. He is an extraterrestrial hybrid that was brought to dad to guard and nurture.

Antagonist – Vincent Hemmler – Vincent is the narcissistic and ruthless lader of the Trident Commission who must detract and recruit Gabriel within weeks to help him and his cronies get a poldilocks planet before earth is destroyed by the largest volcanic eruption in its histoty.

Vincent is an extraterrestrial who has lived on earth for milenia and has manipulated and contolled humans ever since he and his colleagues came here to escape annihilation from a planet they destroyed.

Dramatic Triangle Character – Bianca Martin – Bianca is a stunning gifted empath who is all in on supporting her husband’s noble cause.

Bianca is also a extraterrestrial hybrid who believes she is a garden variety orphan. She will become the mother odf a superhuman evoutionay offspring who will bring the best of Gabriel’s, Bianca’s, and humanity’s genes together to develop a new branch of the human species.

[Burney Ashley]

Burney’s Title, Concept & Character Structure!

Vision – Crucial Destiny is a critically acclaimed billion dollar blockbuster at th box office today.

I have learned some enhanced outlinng techniques from this lesson that is going to bring my writing to the next level.

Title – Crucial Destiny

Concept – A near future couple have genes that can drive a human superrace, but the most notorious and ruthless organization in history have too much at stake to let it happen.

Character Structure – Dramatic Triangle

[Burney Ashley]

1. Name? Burney Ashley

2. How many scripts you’ve written? 1

3. What you hope to get out of the class? Walk away with a spec

4. Something unique, special, strange or unusual about you? I am a Mortgage Broker in Metro Detroit

[Burney Ashley]

Burnett Ashley

I agree to the terms of this agreement.

GROUP RELEASE FORM

As a member of this group, I agree to the following:

1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.

I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

[Burney Ashley]

I agrre to the terms of thi8s release form.