David Shapiro
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Who is the lead character this story is about? see below #2. <div>
What is the improbable goal that character is going for? see below “logline”.
What/who is the opposition? Just about everything including the majority of nations that oppose “soiling” the heavens, the churches (Pope, etc.), most political leaders, friends, parents, Nature, libido, rocket science, etc.
D. What is the interesting world worth exploring?
The moral dilemma of sex as a mortal sin or a celebration of carnal pleasures leading on the path to Hell.
E. What makes this concept unique? Hypocrisy is explored with all of its whims and nuances.Logline: MAKE ME A STAR: A failing space entrepreneur and a desperate porn producer team up to save their companies from bankruptcy by enrolling a drop-dead gorgeous innocent young virgin to have sex with an equally youthful and handsome stud in weightless orbit. The pay-per-view income and the world-wide attention is expected to satisfy everyone’s ambitions.
1. The improbable goals that the characters try to achieve are
Externally – being able to follow their dreams of wealth, fame, power, prestige, notoriety)
Internally – finding satisfaction is proving to others that they have value by accomplishing material achievements
2. Who is your Hero and what is their Character Arc that represents a transformation.
There are four heroes:
the space entrepreneur – sanctimonious to humble
the porn producer – user to savior
the starry eyed girl – guileless to sagacious
the Lothario – pride to reverence
3. What are the Old Ways and New Ways?
Old ways: Internal – Never enough, fear of failure, incognizant of being part of something greater than oneself
Old ways: External – chasing happiness through money, power, and prestige
New ways: Internal – finding satisfaction in service and self-sacrifice
New ways: External: Letting go of control, choosing to be good
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