
Deshawn Smith
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Subject Line: Deshawn Smith’s Hero Mission Track
What I learned by doing this assignment how to have a good time coming up with possibilities. It is so fun to come up with more things to put your hero through to make an engaging screenplay.
Motivation: Needs to help his mom save her house that’s been in the family for 100 years and regain his Christian faith.
Inciting Incident:He steals a car to sell for money to save his mom’s house and gets beat up by cops(nephillim).
First Action:He gets saved by Michael and his spirit, and Michael takes him to the demon hangout. By equipping him with armor and guns.
Obstacle:They attack him with 50 Nephilim and look him up. He escapes and kills 50 of the with Michael.
Escalation: They send ten men to his house to kill him. He kills wounds all 10.
Twist: They kidnap his mom.
Overwhelming Odds: he had to go to the police station to find the commissioner and fighting every cop.
New Plan:
Full out Attack: he gets information from the commissioner and him and Michael go to a demonic strong hold to find his mom.
Success:He fights and shoots with Micheal 60 demons and Saves his mom.
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Deshawn Smith Hero and Villain
What I learned doing this assignment is trying to make everything original and extreme.
Hero morally right: Elijah is fighting the LAPD(nephillim) to try and stop the Fallen Angels.
Villain Morally wrong: Lucifer has blackmailed ever government head of state and controls most of the world.
Hero Elijah Williams, High School dropout.
A. Unique skill set: Trained by angels in every form of fighting at birth.
B. Saved his community and country.
C. His mother was abusive.
Villain: Lucifer, Fallen Angel.
A. Unbeatable: One of the most powerful beings in the universe has unlimited resources and minions from within the government agencies and police departments except the military.
B. Plan/Goal: Make his kingdom mirror Heaven to trick souls into believing him.
C. He loses the war in Heaven and is doomed to destruction.
Impossible mission: He must infiltrate LAPD and bring down the nephillims to save his community.
A. Pputs hero in action: He goes through a police compound to take down the Brotherhood of the Blue Shield. Having gunfight/battles, hand to hand combat, and fighting with the works of the spirit.
B. Demands they Go Beyond their best: He has to go against the whole Police Department to bring down the Nephillim and force Lucifer to regroup.
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DeShawn’s Assignment 1.
Concept: A high school dropout and his friends have to go out and try to find a way to save his mother, who is in a coma, and his house before foreclosure, with Angels and Demons fighting a war for him and his anointing.
Hero: A high school dropout who fell out of Christianity because of disbelief.
Demand for Action: He must evade cops (Nephilim) and other dangerous supernatural beings, and his City is under demonic attack.
Mission: To save his mom and their house.
Antagonist: Lucifer is a fallen angel who will stop at nothing to get what he wants and is trying to kill the boy before he gets powerful.
Escalating Action: Every time he doubts, more Nephilim and Demons come to try to kill him.
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DeShawn Smith
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