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  • Dmitry Krasovskiy

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    May 19, 2021 at 2:40 am in reply to: Day 3 Assignments

    Dmitry Krasovskiy. World and character

    1. Big mystery. People are trying to catch signals from outer space from extraterrestrial civilizations. But they are all false, controlled by one system developed by one powerful scientist.

    Big Intrigue. The psychologist needs to protect people from traps and destroy the system of enslavement of the scientist.

    Big suspense. Fear and uncertainty increasingly paralyzes the will of the hero. The trap system could kill him, too.

    2. The artificial intelligence system manipulates the behavior of people. Fear, self-indulgence, distortion of facts in the mass media. Fake news, fake hopes, fake thoughts, fake ideas and fake signals.

    3. Psychologist (main hero)

    A) His skills expose lies, treat injuries, get rid of complexes, help people find themselves and feel the ease of life.

    B) Lies, traps, and fear can kill him. Paralyze his faith and will.

    C) Will he be able to pull himself out of the trap?

    Painter (Red herring) A) What is hidden in his paintings? What does he want from life? Who is offended?

    B) He pretends to be an all-knowing guru, so as not to be deceived. His paintings affect those who manipulate people. Diverts the blow from ordinary people to themselves.

    C) Will he be able to confuse and to save the psychologist?

    Scientist. (main Villain) A) He is able to extract, distort and manipulate data. He builds the world according to the laws that are convenient for him.

    B) Creates false signals, pays money to ordinary people who try to catch them, and plunges humanity into darkness.

    C) Will he be able to destroy the personality? Personal opinion and the sober mind of people.

  • Dmitry Krasovskiy

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    May 16, 2021 at 12:13 am in reply to: Day 4 Assignments

    Day 4. Dmitry Krasovskiy. Assignment 1. Bi stacking suspense.

    I studied what scenes and in what sequence are needed to create tension and reveal the main mystery. I see 42 scenes which has it own finished structure.

  • Dmitry Krasovskiy

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    May 6, 2021 at 9:51 pm in reply to: Day 1 Assignments

    “The Maltese Falcon” thriller conventions.

    Private detective Mr. Spade is involved in a criminal scheme to find a precious thing.

    Dangerous villain: uncovered during his investigation. Several people were killed by him (or her!) and it’s continued.

    High stakes: New suspects appear and the price of the find increases. The hero can be stripped of his license and put in jail.

    Life and death situations: The hero’s partner is killed. The hero is rewarded with weapons. He is poisoned once.

    M. I. S.

    Big mystery: Who killed the partner and why the hero was involved in these cases?

    Intrigue: Will Mr. Spade be able to find the main enemy and will he stay alive?

    Suspence: The hero is hunted by the police and he constantly has to solve complex tasks and get out of dangerous situations.

    This movie is a great thriller because of very mysterious situation gathered all the heroes and pushed them together. Bright subtle dialogues, strong-willed pressure of the hero, rapid rhythm. And a very dangerous hidden villain ms. O’shonnasy

  • Dmitry Krasovskiy

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    May 4, 2021 at 7:50 pm in reply to: Introduce Yourself To The Group

    Hello friends!

    My name is Dimitry Krasovskiy. I’m 40yo. For recent years I’ve been thinking to write 4-5 screenplays. Right now Im expecting to finish 1 of them based on my experience. I hope this class will help me. For development of that idea I’ve been driving a semi truck for 7 years. I was an opera singer (bass voice) and photographer during 20 years.

  • Dmitry Krasovskiy

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    May 4, 2021 at 7:37 pm in reply to: Group Confidentiality Agreement for Thriller 20

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