[Gayle Robinson]

Hi everyone, I’m Gayle and I’m excited about this class. I wrote a 30 min. comedy pilot, sketch comedy script, and a sci-fi romantic feature. I’ve also finished two and half books of a family saga and an inspirational romance novel. This class will help me turn my 5th novel, a thriller, into a feature script.

[Gayle Robinson]

Gayle Herbert Robinson

I agree to the terms of this agreement.

[Gayle Robinson]

Gayle Herbert Robinson

GROUP RELEASE FORM

As a member of this group, I agree to the following:

1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.

I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

This completes the Group Release Form for the class.

[Gayle Robinson]

I agree.

[Gayle Robinson]

<div>What I learned from the assignment? I need to research the unique skills to make them believable within this fictional action comedy realm.</div>

Concept: Four supermodels–fraternal twins with a one in a million trait, a medical prodigy and computer genius who sees coding—are forced to use their phenomenon-born skills to save the American society.

Hero Morally Right:
Protecting women from abduction and helping them survive.

Villain Morally Wrong: Abducting women and implanting them with robotic devices.

Hero

A. Unique Skill Set: Zenobia, Austen and Naia have super human
skills from coma and births. Twin
Zolie MacGuyvers her way out of situations, using industry tools.

B. Motivation: Stop powerful men from manipulating and
attacking women.

C. Secret or Wound: Zenobia was the first failed robotic
implant at age five.

Villain

A. Unbeatable: The
puppet master modeling agent behind the ousted group of officials who are the faces of this sabotage–hired the number
one robotics scientist who developed a robotic device that can’t be hacked
and if intervened, the model is programmed to kill her rescuer, and then herself.

B. Plan/Goal: Use
the mind-controlled soldiers of fortunes to kill the four sheroes before they can get
close to the mind-controlled supermodels.

C. What they lose if Hero survives: The ousted officials don’t get paid by
the secret modeling agent, and she doesn’t control the U.S. government/society,
fulfilling her vendetta to destroy the country that destroyed her father, an
ex-CIA operative.

Impossible Mission

A. Puts Hero in Action:
A best friend, sister and cousin are abducted.

B. Demands They Go Beyond Their Best: Even though the abducted supermodels are
mind- controlled via the devices, they’re still human beings. Sheroes appeal to their human senses
(smell, sight, taste, touch and hearing) to distract and block their evil instructions.

C. Destroy the Villain:
They uncover the modeling agent (evil puppet master) and fight her
and her mind-controlled bookers to the death.