THOMAS OBRIEN
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Answar(a) Elad Adams Villain Track: Answar or Answara depending on how well you know him, planned all of this battle plan out before the beginning of my story! Having been passed up on promotion after promotion he will now exact his revenge. I learned my Villain is smarter and much more evil now that he has presented himself to my story. He is becoming more vicious than i could ever have imagined without this class! Plan: Buying out the owner of the Private Security firm that provides armed guards for the AFB. Plan: Controlling all AFB construction contracts. Plan: Extending his influence and infiltrating outside groups and the local government players. Plan: Having the General off base and out of town that weekend. Plan: Planting Nuclear Waste containers inside the infrastructure of the outdoor Amphitheater timed to detonate along with the fireworks display Plan: Sent his operatives after our hero to throw him off track since he was never a part of the plan. Each incident is increasingly more dangerous and harmful to our Hero. Plan: Taking out the Amphitheater and the leading movers and shakers from the guestlist. Showering his enemies and the Center causing an environmental disaster that will forever more be known as: “HOT PROPERTY”. The End but Not so Fast.
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I learned that if you hit reply instead of post that you lose everything and start again. I learned the name of my Antagonist Answar Adams. Dalton Mitchel vs. Answar Adams. Dalton Mitchel’s clear mission is to pick up the badge and gun. Answar’s mother died at child birth. Her last words were “I’m sorry” but they thought that was the name she wanted on the birth certificate. Answar was born with a chip on his shoulder. MOTIVATION FOR THE MISSION: Dalton’s wife’s suicide brings him back to his hometown. He reluctantly takes a job with the sheriff. INCITING INCIDENT: Three climate scientist trespass on the secret Air Force Base. Dalton is sent to do a routine arrest but the 3 disappear. While investigating the missing scientists Dalton unknowingly stumbles on a plot to blow up the new Pagan Worship center. He is promptly escorted off the base.
FIRST ACTION: Dalton is ordered to investigate the backlog of calls then head back to headquarters. The Wolf Sanctuary filed a complaint a week ago about a fire and explosion up in the canyon bordering their ranch. Upon further investigation Dalton finds a model of the Pagan Worship Center at the main ranch. There is evidence of explosives detonating the models. The ranch is deserted except for one lone ranch hand. Dalton learns the ranch owner is in charge of the fireworks display out at the Center opening.
ESCALATION: Dalton responds to a report that cattle are running loose not far from the base. Entering the farm, Dalton is feeling uneasy. He approaches the farm house that looks deserted. The gate is wide open and there are no vehicles in sight. Calling out, he gets no response from the house. He heads over to the barn when two Chinese business type exit from the barn. Dalton gets a glimpse of electronic equipment before the barn doors slam shut. They convince Dalton that they are the new owners and will round up the cows. Two more intimidating characters exit the barn and follow Dalton back to his vehicle.
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What i learned is my Antagonist has got to come out of the Shadows and I don’t know a thing about this Character. Concept: A misfit Deputy is called to action when 3 Climateer’s go missing while trespassing out at the Secret Air Force Base. Mission: Pick up the Badge and Gun again to find the missing Scientists. Escalating Action: Base Security abruptly impedes the investigation and escorts our Hero rudely off the Base.
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TJO Tom O’Brien 3scripts My hope is to Map out my story . Worked on the Space Shuttles