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  • Huguette Anhalt

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    June 10, 2021 at 3:40 am in reply to: Post Day 2 Assignment Here

    What I learned from this assignment is that Im more interested in the Protagonist thinking than I thought. Rather than see her thinking, show her emotions behind it. Action. Sweep the floor.

    DRAMA/COMEDY

    She is a Dreamer/ Fighter

    She will establish herself in a male dominant world and fight for her rights as a woman barber.

    In barber school some of her male students don’t like a woman a ( man world) She soon learns to sweep her emotions( fear, anger) away by sweeping the floor of hair.

    The Antagonist is Bill the barber. A Change Agent/and love interest. He seduces her into becoming a barber for his own means. He introduces her as a Novelty and gets the press involved.

    Supporting Characters:

    Her uncle ROLLAND and aunt IDA whom she lies with. Her ex husband GARY wants her back. but she has to give up barbering. People are talking about her, not in a nice way.

    Minor Roles:

    KIM 2-3 years old daughter

    NICK the Greek barber

    RED her instructor

    CUSTOMERS/ clients

    HER ROLE in the story is to change herself and her surroundings. Woman Rights about money and abortion.

    She’s cute and flirtatious. A twenty year old single mother with a two year old daughter.

    Internal Journey:

    She’s guilt ridden from her divorce and Catholic upbringing. She has to prove she’s worthy. Wants to be somebody.

    External Journey:

    She believes in herself and her independence.

    .MOTOVATION

    To be the First Lady barber. Succeed at being a good business woman.

    Wound:

    Betral and rape

    MISSION/ AGENDA

    Woman’s Rights. What can she learn from men.

    SECRET

    Rape

    What makes her special?

    A true story about a First Lady Barber in her town and some parts of the U S at the time.

  • Huguette Anhalt

    Member
    June 8, 2021 at 2:43 am in reply to: Introduce Yourself To The Group

    Hello everyone,

    My name is Huguette Anhalt I’ve written five scripts. One I had optioned five years ago for two years. ,,,, they decided not to go further. I cried. It was called NOBODY’S PERFECT. I found people who wanted to do a play with it…. just before covid hit. I didn’t cry. I almost felt relieved. I didn’t write for at least eight months and decided to get out of my emotional slump and went to work on a project I’ve been hemming and thawing for the last thirty years. A story about one of the first female barbers in the 60’s. Got lots of notes and a very very rough script. ( if you can call it that). I’ve been a photographer, actress, singer, dancer and mother. This script is like giving birth to a personality I just found out about. I can’t wait to get started and to know better who this character is.

    I look forward to hearing from you and wish you the best.

    Huguette

  • Huguette Anhalt

    Member
    June 7, 2021 at 4:15 pm in reply to: Post Day 1 Assignment Here

    LADY BARBER

    Memories of the First Lady Barber in a hick town in New Hampshire in 1963. Yogi Bishop a newly divorced single mother struggles to compete with the male barbers in her town. The male barbers gossip and spread rumors about her that aren’t true. Her husband wants her back and wants her to stop barbering. She’s ambitious and determined to succeed. She meets up with successful men who want to help her, but want something in return.

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