[John Livingstone]

I would like to exchange feedback.

Robert Livingstone

[John Livingstone]

What I learned is that irony is commonplace but often unnoticed. Important to know how to create it.

In Breaking Bad, irony abounds.

My Show: Return to Mars

1. Survival vs. Isolation:

   • Situational Irony: Despite the post-apocalyptic world pushing for survival, the facility’s isolation becomes a source of danger and conflict rather than safety.

2. Leadership Rivalry:

   • Dramatic Irony: The audience knows the father’s ambiguous instructions, creating tension as Trevor and Jason vie for leadership, unaware of their father’s intention for them to choose a new leader.

3. Mission Objectives:

   • Verbal Irony: Hank, a pacifist, leads a mission that may involve sacrificing others for Mars’ isolation, contrasting his beliefs and actions.

4. Deceptive Alliances:

   • Situational Irony: Elizabeth and Carl’s manipulative actions, aiming for power, inadvertently contribute to family tensions and jeopardize the facility’s unity.

5. Earth’s Reclamation vs. Mars Isolation:

   • Irony of Fate: The conflict over Earth’s reclaiming mirrors the war they escaped, illustrating how humanity struggles with the same issues, questioning if history is bound to repeat.

6. Romantic Entanglements:

   • Dramatic Irony: Sophia’s belief in controlling Jason contradicts her inability to foresee the consequences of their conflicting interests on the survival mission.

7. Tensions with Mars Society:

   • Situational Irony: The Earth mission faces challenges from Martians, questioning whether the advanced society they sought for help becomes a potential threat.

8. Ethical Dilemmas:

   • Verbal Irony: Characters grapple with the morality of their actions, creating tension between their ideals and the harsh reality of survival in the post-apocalyptic world.

9. Family Dynamics:

   • Situational Irony: The struggle for control within the family contradicts their shared goal of survival, highlighting the internal conflicts jeopardizing their collective future.

10. Colonial Struggles on Mars:

    • Irony of Situation: Earth’s mission to Mars, seeking refuge, becomes a potential threat to Martians, reflecting humanity’s tendency to bring conflict wherever it goes.

11. Psychological Strain:

    • Dramatic Irony: The characters’ internal conflicts, particularly Jasper’s idealism, may reveal the harsh reality of survival, challenging their beliefs and values.

[John Livingstone]

Robert’s Plot and Character Layers

What I learned is that both layers are essential to a multi-season series.

Lead Characters:

1. Walter Hartwell White (Heisenberg): Overqualified chemistry teacher turned methamphetamine producer.
2. Skyler White: Walter’s wife, reluctantly drawn into Walter’s criminal activities.
3. Jesse Pinkman: Walt’s former student and business partner in the meth trade.
4. Hank Schrader: DEA agent and Walter’s brother-in-law.
5. Marie Schrader: Skyler’s sister, Hank’s wife, and a radiologic technologist.
6. Walter White Jr. (Flynn): Walter and Skyler’s teenage son with cerebral palsy.

Plot Layers:

1. Major scheme revealed: The true purpose behind Walter’s meth production is unveiled – a sinister plan that goes beyond providing for his family.
2. Mystery revealed: A hidden connection between one of the lead characters and a major drug lord is exposed, changing the power dynamics.
3. Thought the story was one thing, but it is another: The initial narrative of a struggling family takes a dark turn as a deeper, more complex web of lies and deceit is unraveled.
4. Major shift in Meaning: The moral justification for Walter’s actions takes an unexpected turn, challenging the audience’s perception of right and wrong.
5. Hidden history: Jesse’s troubled past and its impact on his present life are unveiled, adding depth to his character.
6. Hidden plan: Skyler’s secret agenda is revealed, altering the course of events and complicating her relationship with Walter.

Character Layers:

1. Secret identity: A hidden aspect of Walter’s past life comes to light, leading to a reevaluation of his character.
2. Intrigue layers: Jesse’s mysterious connections in the criminal world come to the forefront, exposing him to unforeseen dangers.
3. Hidden relationships and conspiracies: Marie’s involvement in a covert operation is exposed, putting her at odds with her family.
4. Hidden Character history: Hank’s traumatic experiences in El Paso resurface, affecting his pursuit of “Heisenberg.”
5. Hidden Agenda: Skyler’s true motivations for participating in Walter’s criminal activities are unveiled, creating conflict within the family.
6. Wound: Walter Jr.’s emotional scars from his parents’ tumultuous relationship and his discovery of his father’s criminal life impact his actions and decisions.

As these plot and character layers unfold, each turning point and cliffhanger will redefine the narrative and characters, keeping the audience on the edge of their seats.

FOR RETURN TO MARS

Open Loops and Setups for Season 1:

1. New Goals:

   • Jason sets a new goal to establish communication with potential survivor communities on Earth, introducing a new layer of complexity.

2. Conflict Over Mars Mission Objectives:

   • A dispute emerges regarding the primary objective of the Mars mission, leading to a struggle for control over the mission’s goals.

3. Deceptive Alliances Unraveling:

   • Elizabeth and Carl’s deceptive alliances start to unravel, exposing their true motives and sparking internal family conflicts.

4. Ethical Dilemmas Escalate:

   • The ethical dilemmas faced by the characters escalate as they confront the consequences of their past actions, forcing them to question their principles.

5. Tensions with Advanced Martian Society:

   • Tensions with the advanced Martian society escalate, revealing hidden agendas and potential threats that complicate the Earth mission’s goals.

6. Relationships in Peril:

   • Jason’s relationships, especially with Sophia, face jeopardy as personal interests clash with the urgency of the post-apocalyptic world.

7. Dangerous Decisions and Internal Dangers:

   • Characters are forced to make dangerous decisions, putting themselves at risk while also grappling with internal dangers such as addiction and psychological strain.

8. Competing Leadership Visions:

   • Trevor and Jason’s competing visions for the future of the facility intensify, leading to a power struggle that divides the remaining survivors.

9. Colonial Struggles Intensify:

   • Struggles between the Earth mission and the Martian society intensify, involving issues of authority, cultural clashes, and potential alliances or betrayals.

10. Consequences of Faked Lottery:

    • Consequences of the faked lottery and Trevor’s manipulation of the member selection process come to light, causing internal strife and challenges to Trevor’s leadership.

11. Survival Risks:

    • Characters face heightened risks to their survival, both from external threats and internal conflicts, as they navigate the harsh post-apocalyptic environment.

12. Psychological Toll Escalates:

    • The psychological toll on characters, especially Jasper, escalates, leading to internal conflicts and moral dilemmas that impact decision-making.

13. New Relationships and Conflicts:

    • New relationships form within the group, creating both alliances and conflicts that influence the dynamics of the surviving community.

14. Confrontation Over Mars’ Isolation:

    • A confrontation arises between Hank and others over Mars’ isolation, bringing to light the true motivations behind Hank’s desire to keep Mars protected.

15. Secrets from Earth’s Past:

    • Unearthed secrets from Earth’s past come to light, revealing information that challenges characters’ understanding of the world before the nuclear war.

[John Livingstone]

Robert’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned from this exercise is that things can get very complicated very fast.

Breaking Bad: Big Picture Open Loops

Will DEA brother-in-law Hank apprehend Walter?

Will Skylar discover Walter’s involvement in drug dealing?

Will Walter or Jesse face deadly consequences at the hands of the drug lord?

Will the school or DEA uncover the identity of the equipment thief?

Can Walter endure the challenges of the drug world?

Will Walter succeed in obtaining the $2 million to secure his family’s future?

Return to Mars: Big Picture Open Loops

1. New Goals:

   • Jason sets a new goal to establish communication with potential survivor communities on Earth, introducing a new layer of complexity.

2. Conflict Over Mars Mission Objectives:

   • A dispute emerges regarding the primary objective of the Mars mission, leading to a struggle for control over the mission’s goals.

3. Deceptive Alliances Unraveling:

   • Elizabeth and Carl’s deceptive alliances start to unravel, exposing their true motives and sparking internal family conflicts.

4. Ethical Dilemmas Escalate:

   • The ethical dilemmas faced by the characters escalate as they confront the consequences of their past actions, forcing them to question their principles.

5. Tensions with Advanced Martian Society:

   • Tensions with the advanced Martian society escalate, revealing hidden agendas and potential threats that complicate the Earth mission’s goals.

6. Relationships in Peril:

   • Jason’s relationships, especially with Sophia, face jeopardy as personal interests clash with the urgency of the post-apocalyptic world.

7. Dangerous Decisions and Internal Dangers:

   • Characters are forced to make dangerous decisions, putting themselves at risk while also grappling with internal dangers such as addiction and psychological strain.

8. Competing Leadership Visions:

   • Trevor and Jason’s competing visions for the future of the facility intensify, leading to a power struggle that divides the remaining survivors.

9. Colonial Struggles Intensify:

   • Struggles between the Earth mission and the Martian society intensify, involving issues of authority, cultural clashes, and potential alliances or betrayals.

10. Consequences of Faked Lottery:

    • Consequences of the faked lottery and Trevor’s manipulation of the member selection process come to light, causing internal strife and challenges to Trevor’s leadership.

11. Survival Risks:

    • Characters face heightened risks to their survival, both from external threats and internal conflicts, as they navigate the harsh post-apocalyptic environment.

12. Psychological Toll Escalates:

    • The psychological toll on characters, especially Jasper, escalates, leading to internal conflicts and moral dilemmas that impact decision-making.

13. New Relationships and Conflicts:

    • New relationships form within the group, creating both alliances and conflicts that influence the dynamics of the surviving community.

14. Confrontation Over Mars’ Isolation:

    • A confrontation arises between Hank and others over Mars’ isolation, bringing to light the true motivations behind Hank’s desire to keep Mars protected.

15. Secrets from Earth’s Past:

    • Unearthed secrets from Earth’s past come to light, revealing information that challenges characters’ understanding of the world before the nuclear war.

[John Livingstone]

Robert’s Show Mysteries<div>

What I learned doing this exercise is that there are many different possible mysteries.

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A. Opening Shocking Event:

• Shocking Event: A broadcast from an unknown source reveals encrypted signals originating from supposedly desolate areas on Earth, indicating possible survivors.

• B. Secret:

  • Secret: The encrypted signals suggest organized human activity, contradicting Trevor’s belief in Earth’s complete desolation after the nuclear war.

  • C. Investigation:

    • Investigation: Jason stumbles upon the broadcast, sparking doubt about Trevor’s decision to abandon Earth. Jason secretly gathers a team to investigate these signals and locate potential survivors.

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Mystery 2: Mars’ Advanced Society

A. Over-Time Mystery:

• Cover-up:

  • Cover-up: Hank and Alex, his second in command, hide the true capabilities and intentions of Mars’ advanced society from the Earth mission members.

• B. Secret:

  • Secret: Mars’ advanced society possesses technology far beyond Earth’s expectations, including advanced weaponry and knowledge that challenges the mission’s purpose.

  • C. Reveals:

    • Reveals: As the Earth mission reaches Mars, they gradually discover the hidden technology and must navigate the challenges posed by an advanced society, adding a new layer of complexity to their mission.

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[John Livingstone]

Subject Line: Robert’s Empathy/Distress for Return to Mars

What I learned doing this exercise is that there are infinite variables involved in constructing character profiles.

Jason Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Jason hopes to prove to himself and others that he is more than just the carefree, undisciplined son of a powerful man.
• Fear: He fears failing in the leadership role thrust upon him and the consequences it may bring to the survival of the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Jason wants the freedom to continue living carefree, but he realizes the need to step up and take responsibility for the group’s survival.
• Need: He needs to find purpose and meaning beyond his previous carefree lifestyle.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Jason struggles with self-doubt and insecurity, feeling he doesn’t measure up to the expectations placed on him.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of nonchalance and carefreeness to hide his internal struggles and maintain the appearance of confidence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Jason’s weaknesses include impulsiveness, a lack of discipline, and a tendency to avoid confronting serious issues.

E. Triggers:

• The realization of the dire situation on Earth and the responsibility placed on him triggers anxiety and self-doubt in Jason.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Jason copes with his internal struggles through humor and deflecting serious matters, but he gradually learns to confront his fears and take charge.

Trevor Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Trevor hopes to prove his worth as a leader, surpassing his father’s doubts about his capabilities.
• Fear: He fears that his egotistical nature might lead to disastrous consequences for the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Trevor wants recognition and validation, particularly from his father, for his leadership abilities.
• Need: He needs to overcome his ego and learn to collaborate effectively with others.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Trevor battles with his egotism, which often clouds his judgment and decision-making.
• Public Mask: He presents a confident and authoritative demeanor to the group to maintain their trust and confidence in his leadership.

D. Weaknesses:

• Trevor’s weaknesses include impulsiveness, a tendency to dismiss others’ opinions, and a struggle with balancing his egotism and leadership responsibilities.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to his leadership trigger defensiveness and a need to assert his authority, revealing his internal struggles.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Trevor copes with his internal conflicts through assertiveness, but he learns to value collaboration and humility over time.

Hank Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Hank hopes for a peaceful resolution to conflicts, driven by his extreme pacifism.
• Fear: He fears that his inventions, intended for the betterment of humanity, might be misused or weaponized.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Hank wants to ensure the survival of his family and the group through the underground facility.
• Need: He needs to reconcile his extreme pacifism with the harsh realities of the post-nuclear world.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Hank battles with guilt over creating technologies that could be used for harm.
• Public Mask: He maintains a calm and collected exterior, concealing the internal turmoil caused by his pacifist beliefs.

D. Weaknesses:

• Hank’s weaknesses include his overreliance on pacifism, sometimes to the detriment of practical survival strategies.

E. Triggers:

• The threat of violence or harm to the group triggers Hank’s internal conflict between pacifism and the need for self-defense.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Hank copes by focusing on the scientific aspects of his work and the hope that his inventions will contribute to a peaceful future.

Elizabeth Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Elizabeth hopes to ascend to a position of power and influence within the group.
• Fear: She fears losing control and relevance as the dynamics within the group shift.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Elizabeth wants to manipulate the power structure in her favor, sidelining her husband and son.
• Need: She needs to recognize the value of collaboration and genuine connection over manipulation.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Elizabeth struggles with insecurity, masked by her provocative and confident exterior.
• Public Mask: She wears a mask of confidence and manipulation to maintain control and influence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Elizabeth’s weaknesses include her manipulative tendencies, underestimating others, and a lack of genuine connections.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to her influence and attempts to sideline her trigger Elizabeth’s manipulative and controlling behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Elizabeth copes by manipulating those around her, but she gradually learns the value of authentic relationships.

Carl:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Carl hopes to position himself favorably within the group, potentially replacing Trevor as a leader.
• Fear: He fears being exposed as opportunistic and losing the trust of others.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Carl wants to secure a leadership position and further his own agenda.
• Need: He needs to recognize the consequences of his opportunism and prioritize the group’s well-being.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Carl struggles with a sense of entitlement and superiority.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of friendliness and cooperation to further his agenda.

D. Weaknesses:

• Carl’s weaknesses include his opportunistic nature and a lack of genuine concern for the group’s well-being.

E. Triggers:

• Threats to his influence and exposure of his true intentions trigger Carl’s defensive and manipulative behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Carl copes by ingratiating himself with others, but he learns the importance of sincerity and collaboration.

Sophia:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Sophia hopes to control Jason and maintain a stable relationship.
• Fear: She fears losing control and the stability she derives from the relationship.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Sophia wants to maintain control and influence over Jason.
• Need: She needs to recognize the value of mutual respect and shared decision-making in their relationship.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Sophia struggles with insecurity, masked by her attempts to control Jason.
• Public Mask: She wears a mask of confidence and control in her relationship with Jason.

D. Weaknesses:

• Sophia’s weaknesses include her controlling nature and a fear of vulnerability.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to her control over Jason trigger Sophia’s defensive and controlling behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Sophia copes by exerting control, but she learns the importance of trust and collaboration in their relationship.

Jasper:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Jasper hopes to guide the group toward a more spiritually enlightened and morally upright path.
• Fear: He fears the rejection of his ideals and the descent into chaos within the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Jasper wants to establish himself as the moral compass and leader of the group.
• Need: He needs to balance idealism with practicality and recognize the complexities of leadership.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Jasper battles with self-righteousness and a judgmental attitude.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of moral superiority and idealism.

D. Weaknesses:

• Jasper’s weaknesses include his preachy nature, a lack of flexibility, and a tendency to impose his ideals on others.

E. Triggers:

• Resistance to his spiritual guidance triggers Jasper’s defensive and judgmental behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Jasper copes by emphasizing his moral stance, but he learns the importance of understanding diverse perspectives.

Carolyn Jennings:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Carolyn hopes to find purpose and connection within the group.
• Fear: She fears being manipulated and losing her sense of self within the power struggles.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Carolyn wants genuine connections and recognition for her skills as a scientist.
• Need: She needs to navigate the power dynamics while staying true to herself.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Carolyn battles with self-doubt and fear of being overlooked.
• Public Mask: She wears a mask of confidence and independence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Carolyn’s weaknesses include a tendency to doubt herself and a struggle to assert her opinions in a male-dominated environment.

E. Triggers:

• Instances of manipulation and being overlooked trigger Carolyn’s internal conflicts.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Carolyn copes by focusing on her work, but she learns to assert herself and build genuine connections.

William Carlson:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: William hopes to establish himself as a protective leader within the group.
• Fear: He fears the consequences of venturing out and facing the dangers of the post-nuclear world.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: William wants to maintain control and safety within the facility.
• Need: He needs to recognize the importance of exploration and adaptability in their survival.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: William battles with paranoia and a fear of the unknown.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of authority and strength to project an image of security.

D. Weaknesses:

• William’s weaknesses include a tendency to prioritize safety over exploration and a fear-driven decision-making process.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to his authority and the suggestion of venturing outside trigger William’s defensive behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• William copes by enforcing strict safety measures, but he learns the importance of calculated risk-taking.

Alex:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Alex hopes to replace Hank as the leader of the colony.
• Fear: He fears being sidelined and losing influence within the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Alex wants recognition for his leadership abilities.
• Need: He needs to understand the importance of collaboration and shared leadership.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Alex battles with jealousy and a desire for validation.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of cooperation and loyalty to maintain trust within the group.

D. Weaknesses:

• Alex’s weaknesses include a desire for validation, a lack of patience, and a tendency to undermine others.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to his leadership and the rise of competing leaders trigger Alex’s defensive and undermining behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Alex copes by asserting his authority, but he learns the value of collaboration and teamwork.

Ivan:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Ivan hopes to contribute to the survival of the group through his genetically engineered wildlife.
• Fear: He fears the unintended consequences of his creations and the potential harm they may cause.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Ivan wants recognition for his scientific contributions.
• Need: He needs to grapple with the ethical implications of his creations and prioritize the group’s safety.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Ivan struggles with guilt and a fear of the consequences of his creations.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of scientific detachment and confidence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Ivan’s weaknesses include a tendency to prioritize scientific achievement over ethical considerations.

E. Triggers:

• Instances of harm caused by his creations trigger Ivan’s internal conflict and guilt.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Ivan copes by distancing himself emotionally, but he learns to balance scientific ambition with ethical responsibility.

[John Livingstone]

Robert’s Character Emotions

What I learned doing this exercise is that you must continue to probe to get to all of your characters’ emotions.

Jason Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Jason hopes to prove to himself and others that he is more than just the carefree, undisciplined son of a powerful man.
• Fear: He fears failing in the leadership role thrust upon him and the consequences it may bring to the survival of the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Jason wants the freedom to continue living carefree, but he realizes the need to step up and take responsibility for the group’s survival.
• Need: He needs to find purpose and meaning beyond his previous carefree lifestyle.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Jason struggles with self-doubt and insecurity, feeling he doesn’t measure up to the expectations placed on him.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of nonchalance and carefreeness to hide his internal struggles and maintain the appearance of confidence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Jason’s weaknesses include impulsiveness, a lack of discipline, and a tendency to avoid confronting serious issues.

E. Triggers:

• The realization of the dire situation on Earth and the responsibility placed on him triggers anxiety and self-doubt in Jason.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Jason copes with his internal struggles through humor and deflecting serious matters, but he gradually learns to confront his fears and take charge.

Trevor Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Trevor hopes to prove his worth as a leader, surpassing his father’s doubts about his capabilities.
• Fear: He fears that his egotistical nature might lead to disastrous consequences for the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Trevor wants recognition and validation, particularly from his father, for his leadership abilities.
• Need: He needs to overcome his ego and learn to collaborate effectively with others.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Trevor battles with his egotism, which often clouds his judgment and decision-making.
• Public Mask: He presents a confident and authoritative demeanor to the group to maintain their trust and confidence in his leadership.

D. Weaknesses:

• Trevor’s weaknesses include impulsiveness, a tendency to dismiss others’ opinions, and a struggle with balancing his egotism and leadership responsibilities.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to his leadership trigger defensiveness and a need to assert his authority, revealing his internal struggles.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Trevor copes with his internal conflicts through assertiveness, but he learns to value collaboration and humility over time.

Hank Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Hank hopes for a peaceful resolution to conflicts, driven by his extreme pacifism.
• Fear: He fears that his inventions, intended for the betterment of humanity, might be misused or weaponized.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Hank wants to ensure the survival of his family and the group through the underground facility.
• Need: He needs to reconcile his extreme pacifism with the harsh realities of the post-nuclear world.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Hank battles with guilt over creating technologies that could be used for harm.
• Public Mask: He maintains a calm and collected exterior, concealing the internal turmoil caused by his pacifist beliefs.

D. Weaknesses:

• Hank’s weaknesses include his overreliance on pacifism, sometimes to the detriment of practical survival strategies.

E. Triggers:

• The threat of violence or harm to the group triggers Hank’s internal conflict between pacifism and the need for self-defense.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Hank copes by focusing on the scientific aspects of his work and the hope that his inventions will contribute to a peaceful future.

Elizabeth Goldman:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Elizabeth hopes to ascend to a position of power and influence within the group.
• Fear: She fears losing control and relevance as the dynamics within the group shift.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Elizabeth wants to manipulate the power structure in her favor, sidelining her husband and son.
• Need: She needs to recognize the value of collaboration and genuine connection over manipulation.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Elizabeth struggles with insecurity, masked by her provocative and confident exterior.
• Public Mask: She wears a mask of confidence and manipulation to maintain control and influence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Elizabeth’s weaknesses include her manipulative tendencies, underestimating others, and a lack of genuine connections.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to her influence and attempts to sideline her trigger Elizabeth’s manipulative and controlling behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Elizabeth copes by manipulating those around her, but she gradually learns the value of authentic relationships.

Carl:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Carl hopes to position himself favorably within the group, potentially replacing Trevor as a leader.
• Fear: He fears being exposed as opportunistic and losing the trust of others.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Carl wants to secure a leadership position and further his own agenda.
• Need: He needs to recognize the consequences of his opportunism and prioritize the group’s well-being.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Carl struggles with a sense of entitlement and superiority.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of friendliness and cooperation to further his agenda.

D. Weaknesses:

• Carl’s weaknesses include his opportunistic nature and a lack of genuine concern for the group’s well-being.

E. Triggers:

• Threats to his influence and exposure of his true intentions trigger Carl’s defensive and manipulative behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Carl copes by ingratiating himself with others, but he learns the importance of sincerity and collaboration.

Sophia:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Sophia hopes to control Jason and maintain a stable relationship.
• Fear: She fears losing control and the stability she derives from the relationship.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Sophia wants to maintain control and influence over Jason.
• Need: She needs to recognize the value of mutual respect and shared decision-making in their relationship.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Sophia struggles with insecurity, masked by her attempts to control Jason.
• Public Mask: She wears a mask of confidence and control in her relationship with Jason.

D. Weaknesses:

• Sophia’s weaknesses include her controlling nature and a fear of vulnerability.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to her control over Jason trigger Sophia’s defensive and controlling behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Sophia copes by exerting control, but she learns the importance of trust and collaboration in their relationship.

Jasper:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Jasper hopes to guide the group toward a more spiritually enlightened and morally upright path.
• Fear: He fears the rejection of his ideals and the descent into chaos within the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Jasper wants to establish himself as the moral compass and leader of the group.
• Need: He needs to balance idealism with practicality and recognize the complexities of leadership.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Jasper battles with self-righteousness and a judgmental attitude.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of moral superiority and idealism.

D. Weaknesses:

• Jasper’s weaknesses include his preachy nature, a lack of flexibility, and a tendency to impose his ideals on others.

E. Triggers:

• Resistance to his spiritual guidance triggers Jasper’s defensive and judgmental behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Jasper copes by emphasizing his moral stance, but he learns the importance of understanding diverse perspectives.

Carolyn Jennings:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Carolyn hopes to find purpose and connection within the group.
• Fear: She fears being manipulated and losing her sense of self within the power struggles.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Carolyn wants genuine connections and recognition for her skills as a scientist.
• Need: She needs to navigate the power dynamics while staying true to herself.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Carolyn battles with self-doubt and fear of being overlooked.
• Public Mask: She wears a mask of confidence and independence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Carolyn’s weaknesses include a tendency to doubt herself and a struggle to assert her opinions in a male-dominated environment.

E. Triggers:

• Instances of manipulation and being overlooked trigger Carolyn’s internal conflicts.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Carolyn copes by focusing on her work, but she learns to assert herself and build genuine connections.

William Carlson:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: William hopes to establish himself as a protective leader within the group.
• Fear: He fears the consequences of venturing out and facing the dangers of the post-nuclear world.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: William wants to maintain control and safety within the facility.
• Need: He needs to recognize the importance of exploration and adaptability in their survival.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: William battles with paranoia and a fear of the unknown.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of authority and strength to project an image of security.

D. Weaknesses:

• William’s weaknesses include a tendency to prioritize safety over exploration and a fear-driven decision-making process.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to his authority and the suggestion of venturing outside trigger William’s defensive behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• William copes by enforcing strict safety measures, but he learns the importance of calculated risk-taking.

Alex:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Alex hopes to replace Hank as the leader of the colony.
• Fear: He fears being sidelined and losing influence within the group.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Alex wants recognition for his leadership abilities.
• Need: He needs to understand the importance of collaboration and shared leadership.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Alex battles with jealousy and a desire for validation.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of cooperation and loyalty to maintain trust within the group.

D. Weaknesses:

• Alex’s weaknesses include a desire for validation, a lack of patience, and a tendency to undermine others.

E. Triggers:

• Challenges to his leadership and the rise of competing leaders trigger Alex’s defensive and undermining behaviors.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Alex copes by asserting his authority, but he learns the value of collaboration and teamwork.

Ivan:

A. Hope/Fear:

• Hope: Ivan hopes to contribute to the survival of the group through his genetically engineered wildlife.
• Fear: He fears the unintended consequences of his creations and the potential harm they may cause.

B. Want/Need:

• Want: Ivan wants recognition for his scientific contributions.
• Need: He needs to grapple with the ethical implications of his creations and prioritize the group’s safety.

C. Base Negative Emotion/Public Mask:

• Base Negative Emotion: Ivan struggles with guilt and a fear of the consequences of his creations.
• Public Mask: He wears a mask of scientific detachment and confidence.

D. Weaknesses:

• Ivan’s weaknesses include a tendency to prioritize scientific achievement over ethical considerations.

E. Triggers:

• Instances of harm caused by his creations trigger Ivan’s internal conflict and guilt.

F. Coping Mechanism:

• Ivan copes by distancing himself emotionally, but he learns to balance scientific ambition with ethical responsibility.

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[John Livingstone]

What I learned doing this exercise is that the more you look the more you find out about your main characters.

Intriguing Layers of the main character in Breaking Bad:

Hidden agendas: Walter White initially conceals his hidden agenda to manufacture and sell high-quality crystal methamphetamine to secure his family’s financial future after his cancer diagnosis. His ultimate goal is to amass wealth to provide for his family when he’s no longer there.

Competition: Walter White competes with various drug dealers, criminal organizations, and law enforcement agencies as he rises in the drug trade. He faces rivals like Tuco Salamanca, Gus Fring, and even his former student, Jesse Pinkman, for control of the drug market.

Conspiracies: Walter White becomes entangled in various conspiracies, primarily within the drug trade. He conspires with Jesse and others to eliminate rivals, maintain control, and protect their illegal activities. His schemes and plots are central to the series.

Secrets: Walter White harbors many secrets, primarily about his criminal activities in the drug trade. He conceals his identity as the drug kingpin known as “Heisenberg” and the details of his illicit meth operation. He also hides his cancer diagnosis and treatment from his family initially.

Deception: Walter White consistently engages in deception, lying to his family and associates about his actions and motivations. He manipulates others to further his drug business and employs deceit to maintain his double life.

Wound: Walter White’s wound is his terminal lung cancer diagnosis, which serves as the catalyst for his descent into the criminal underworld. The fear of leaving his family financially destitute after his death drives much of his actions.

Secret Identity: Walter White’s secret identity is “Heisenberg,” a ruthless and brilliant drug lord who hides his true persona behind this alias. He adopts a distinctive appearance, including a hat and sunglasses, when operating as Heisenberg to conceal his identity.

Intriguing Layers of the Main Characters in Return To Mars Series:

Jason Goldman:

A. Hidden agendas: Unaware of his father’s true plans for Mars and the facility’s purpose.

B. Competition: Challenges his brother Trevor’s leadership, creating tension within the family.

C. Conspiracies: Uncovers the hidden intentions of his father and brother regarding leadership.

D. Secrets: Carries the secret conviction that pockets of civilization still exist.

E. Deception: Engages in daring actions and defies orders, keeping his true intentions veiled.

F. Wound: Represents the hope and determination for rebuilding society in a post-apocalyptic world.

Trevor Goldman:

A. Hidden agendas: Orchestrates a sham lottery and manipulates the facility’s member selection.

B. Competition: Competes with his siblings for leadership and control of the facility.

C. Conspiracies: Knows his father’s role in Earth’s demise and secrets related to the facility.

D. Secrets: Holds back his doubts about Earth’s status and the true purpose of the facility.

E. Deception: Poses as a democratic leader while functioning as an autocrat.

F. Wound: Struggles with maintaining power and the responsibility thrust upon him.

Hank Goldman:

A. Hidden agendas: Keeps secret his extreme pacifism and willingness to accept war for a greater goal.

B. Competition: Competes for leadership with Jasper, who advocates for sending help to Earth.

C. Conspiracies: Orchestrates plans to discredit Jasper and prevent Earth-Martian interactions.

D. Secrets: Conceals the moral sacrifices he’s made for his beliefs and the true purpose of Mars.

E. Deception: Portrays himself as a good man while engaging in morally questionable actions.

F. Wound: Carries the burden of choosing to escape Earth’s war and accept its consequences.

Elizabeth Goldman:

A. Hidden agendas: Manipulates her family members to pitch them against each other for power.

B. Competition: Challenges her brother Trevor for leadership despite Jason’s departure.

C. Conspiracies: Uses her charisma and charm to create conflict among her family.

D. Secrets: Conceals her true motivations and manipulative nature to gain control.

E. Deception: Switches allegiances based on self-interest and power-seeking.

F. Wound: Strives to gain control and power in a post-apocalyptic world.

Carl Goldman:

A. Hidden agendas: Seeks to replace Trevor as the leader while maintaining a patronizing attitude.

B. Competition: Competes with his wife Elizabeth for power within the family.

C. Conspiracies: Switches sides based on personal advantage and self-interest.

D. Secrets: Conceals his true motivations and manipulative tendencies.

E. Deception: Acts to endear himself to both Jason and Trevor to further his agenda.

F. Wound: Aims to secure power and authority in the post-apocalyptic setting.

Sophia:

A. Hidden agendas: Believes she can control Jason but faces underlying contradictions in their relationship.

B. Competition: Grapples with her inability to influence Jason’s actions.

C. Conspiracies: Navigates the complexities of her relationship and the challenges it presents.

D. Secrets: Hides her true feelings and the limitations of her influence.

E. Deception: Acts like she can control Jason while confronting unforeseen challenges.

F. Wound: Struggles with her role in a challenging relationship in a post-apocalyptic world.

Jasper:

A. Hidden agendas: Gradually moves from a spiritual guide to a potential leader with his own agenda.

B. Competition: Competes with Hank for the hearts and minds of the colony, advocating for help to Earth.

C. Conspiracies: Advocates for a mission to Earth, facing opposition from Hank and others.

D. Secrets: Holds strong beliefs about helping Earth and the future of the colony.

E. Deception: Preaches idealism and the necessity of helping Earth despite the challenges.

F. Wound: Represents the conflict between idealism and pragmatism in the colony’s future.

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[John Livingstone]

What I learned doing this exercise is that the more specific the prompt is the better the response.

BREAKING BAD

A. Role in the Show:

Walter: A 50-year-old teacher who discovers he has terminal cancer with a life expectancy of two years.

Jesse: A 20-year-old drug dealer who received an “F” in Walter’s chemistry class

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise:

Walter: Skills: Proficient in chemistry, crafting 98% pure crystal meth. Motivation: To secure his family’s financial future after his imminent death. Irony: His chemistry prowess goes unnoticed in the classroom, but in the drug trade, he’s hailed as a “god.”

Jesse: Skills: Deep knowledge of the drug trade. Motivation: To become Walter’s partner in their criminal endeavors.

C. Intrigue: What is secret beneath the surface?

Walter: Engaged in the illicit production of crystal meth, criminal activities, and forming alliances with drug cartels, resorting to violence to control the drug empire through his chemistry expertise.

Jesse: Concealing his drug dealing operations from law enforcement, attempting to remain off the DEA’s radar.

D. Moral Issue: What moral boundaries are they crossing?

Walter: Is it morally acceptable to supply the city with pure drugs, resort to violence, deceive his wife, and commit murder, such as with Crazy 8?

Jesse: Will Jesse’s disregard for Walter’s drug use rules lead to their exposure to law enforcement?

E. Unpredictable: What will they do next?

Walter: He progressively embraces greater risks, ultimately culminating in the destruction of the gang’s headquarters by the end of the first season.

Jesse: Prone to recklessness, driven by emotions, occasionally under the influence, and often defiant of authority.

F. Empathetic: Why do we care?

Walter: Faces undeserved adversity, battling inoperable cancer, and maintains a deep commitment to providing for his family, including an unborn child.

Jesse: Jesse’s partner is arrested during the initial drug bust, and Walter coerces him into working together, evoking sympathy for his predicament.

RETURN TO MARS

Jason Goldman:

A. Role in the show: The carefree, undisciplined son of a powerful man, a leader who challenges his older brother’s authority in a post-apocalyptic world.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Brings hope and determination to find survivors in a devastated world.

C. Intrigue: Unaware of his father’s plans, he opposes his brother’s leadership and believes civilization can be rebuilt.

D. Moral Issue: Struggles with the moral boundary of prioritizing survivors’ search over his brother’s isolation strategy.

E. Unpredictable: Takes daring actions to establish bases and defies his brother’s orders.

F. Empathetic: We care because he represents hope, determination, and the potential for rebuilding society.

Trevor Goldman:

A. Role in the show: Assumes leadership in a post-apocalyptic underground facility, guided by his father’s mysterious instructions.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Possesses leadership skills and motivates those under his command.

C. Intrigue: Keeps secrets about the facility’s true purpose and orchestrates a sham lottery.

D. Moral Issue: Crosses moral boundaries by manipulating the truth to maintain power and isolation.

E. Unpredictable: Takes a conservative stance, opposing further exploration and prioritizing facility safety.

F. Empathetic: We care because he’s torn between leadership, manipulation, and protecting the facility.

Hank Goldman:

A. Role in the show: A brilliant scientist and father of Jason and Trevor, who leads the terraforming mission on Mars.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Oversees the Mars terraforming project and opposes Earth’s return.

C. Intrigue: Escapes Earth and may have prevented the war but chose not to act, making sacrifices for his beliefs.

D. Moral Issue: Willing to accept a massive sacrifice to end war forever, causing tension with his children.

E. Unpredictable: Strives to retain leadership and oppose Earth’s return, even conspiring against rivals.

F. Empathetic: We care because he’s a complex character who does questionable things for what he believes is the greater good.

Elizabeth Goldman:

A. Role in the show: Jason and Trevor’s manipulative sister, who vies for leadership and seeks to pitch brothers against each other.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Skilled at manipulating and provoking, striving for leadership.

C. Intrigue: Uses her charisma and seductive charm to manipulate and create conflict among her family members.

D. Moral Issue: Willing to go to great lengths to gain power and control over the facility.

E. Unpredictable: Switches sides when it benefits her, challenging Trevor for leadership.

F. Empathetic: We care because she’s a cunning character with ulterior motives.

Carl Goldman:

A. Role in the show: Elizabeth’s husband, a manipulative individual who seeks to replace Trevor as the facility leader.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Manipulative and tries to endear himself to both Jason and Trevor.

C. Intrigue: Switches allegiances based on his self-interest and plays a role in the family dynamics.

D. Moral Issue: Willing to do whatever it takes to secure power within the facility.

E. Unpredictable: Supports different family members as it benefits him.

F. Empathetic: We care because he’s a shrewd character with his own agenda.

Sophia:

A. Role in the show: Jason’s girlfriend who tries to control him and has a complex relationship with him.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Believes she can influence Jason’s actions and choices.

C. Intrigue: Unearths underlying contradictions in their relationship during crises.

D. Moral Issue: Navigates the moral boundaries in her relationship with Jason.

E. Unpredictable: Reacts to unforeseen challenges and conflicts within their relationship.

F. Empathetic: We care because she grapples with a challenging relationship in a post-apocalyptic world.

Jasper:

A. Role in the show: A psychiatrist and spiritual guide to the colony, later transitioning into a leader.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Driven by idealism and the belief in sending help to Earth.

C. Intrigue: Shifts from a spiritual guide to a potential leader with his own agenda.

D. Moral Issue: Advocates for helping Earth, creating tension within the colony.

E. Unpredictable: Evolves from a guide to a more influential role within the colony.

F. Empathetic: We care because he represents idealism and a potential shift in the colony’s direction.

[John Livingstone]

Binge Worthy TV with AI

What I learned doing this assignment: AI gave me completely different characters.

Breaking Bad

Main Characters Circle: Walt, Jesse, Skylar, and Hank.

Connected Circle: Walt Jr., Skylar’s sister, Crazy 8, Gang leader.

Environment Circle: School teachers, DEA agents, Gang members, chemistry corporation, old friends, etc.

My Series: Bayview Harbor

A. Main Characters:

Sarah Reynolds

Unique Role: Sarah is the investigative journalist at the center of the story. She possesses an insatiable curiosity and an unshakable determination to uncover the truth about her hometown’s buried secrets. Her journalism skills and relentless pursuit of the story make her a formidable force in the town.Secret or Intrigue: Sarah harbors a personal secret related to a traumatic incident from her past, which is one of the main motivations behind her return to the town. As the series unfolds, her past is gradually revealed, adding depth to her character and complicating her quest for the truth.

Mayor Richard Sullivan

Unique Role: Mayor Sullivan is the charming and influential figurehead of the town, known for his philanthropy and charisma. He’s a key player in the network of secrets that Sarah is determined to expose.Secret or Intrigue: Behind the facade of a beloved mayor lies a web of corruption and deception, including his involvement in the town’s darkest secrets. He is adept at maintaining a pristine public image while being deeply entangled in the town’s illicit activities.

Lily Thompson

Unique Role: Lily is Sarah’s childhood friend and a skilled environmental activist, committed to protecting the town’s fragile ecosystem. She plays a crucial role in helping Sarah uncover environmental hazards hidden by powerful figures.Secret or Intrigue: Lily has personal reasons for her environmental activism, stemming from a family tragedy related to the town’s secrets. Her connection to Sarah and the shared secrets of their past bind them together in the pursuit of justice.

B. Connected Characters:

Detective Mark Anderson

Detective Anderson is the town’s dedicated law enforcement officer. He becomes an ally to Sarah as she delves deeper into the town’s mysteries, but he’s torn between his loyalty to the law and his personal respect for her.

Olivia Richardson

Olivia is a wealthy and influential socialite with ties to Mayor Sullivan and the hidden power structure of the town. She crosses paths with Sarah when their interests collide, and her motives remain ambiguous throughout the series.

Dr. Thomas Mitchell

Dr. Mitchell is a brilliant scientist who has conducted research on the town’s environmental hazards. He is initially hesitant to cooperate with Sarah but gradually becomes an essential source of information.

Gary Taylor

Gary is a reclusive historian with extensive knowledge of the town’s history. He possesses valuable documents and stories that shed light on the buried past and secrets that Sarah is uncovering.

C. Environment Characters (Jobs):

Bartender at the local bar

Fisherman

Town librarian

High school teacher

Town council members

Local newspaper editor

Environmental activists and volunteers

Mayor’s administrative staff

Town residents and business owners

[John Livingstone]

What I learned doing this assignment is that there are elements of the drama that can easily be missed or not fully appreciated in the first viewing:

a) The plaque on the wall indicating that Walter H. White was awarded the Nobel Prize in 1985.

b) The speed with which the story progresses.

c) Walter’s transformation in just the first episode.

d) The dramatic change in his sexual appetite.

e) How well all of the main characters are introduced.

f) The two main secrets established early: Walter’s illness and his meth cooking.

g) The transformation in how Walter deals with his wife: “Climb down from up in my ass.”

1. Big Picture Hooks

A 50-year-old chemistry teacher, facing inoperable cancer, dives into the dangerous world of crystal meth to secure his family’s future.

2. Intriguing Character

The enigmatic Walter, driven by desperation, transforms into a legend as he pioneers the creation of an unparalleled crystal meth empire.

3. Empathy / Distress

A heart-wrenching tale unfolds as Walter, battling incurable cancer, races against time to amass $2 million for his family’s uncertain future.

4. Open Loops

The narrative unfolds with multiple threads: the impending threat from his brother-in-law, the risk of his wife finding out, the constant danger of capture or death, and the pressing need to secure $2 million.

5. Inviting Obsession

Walter grapples with a complex web of challenges—escaping the gang’s menace, orchestrating the clandestine distribution of his potent crystal meth, attaining $2 million, safeguarding his family, and making pivotal decisions with his former student—all while facing the harsh reality of a terminal cancer diagnosis.

[John Livingstone]

Robert Livingstone:

I Agree to the Terms of this Release Form.

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[John Livingstone]

1. My name is Robert Livingstone.

2. I’ve written six scripts, one of which is an 8-hour, 8-part limited series; another is a pilot for a 5 season series.

3. I’ve taken both the Bingeworthy TV class and the first AI class. I am interested in seeing and using the prompts that have been created in the context of the BWTV program.

4. I have worked on both sides of the creative/business divide, as a writer and a publisher.

5. I don’t remember the numbers or IDs of the classes I was in. All of the following: Pro Series, Rewrite class, Mini Movie Class, Binge-Worthy Class, and the first AI class.

[John Livingstone]

Hi Jerry,

If you’re stll looking to exchange, I’ll exchange with you. My pilot is for a sci-fit series: Return To Mars. My email address is boblivingstone@msn.com

Bob

[John Livingstone]

Hi Renee,
I finished with Hilton. Ready to exchange with you when you’re ready. My email address is boblivingstone@msn.com
Bob

[John Livingstone]

Hilton,
I sent you an email with my pilot attached — a PDF.
Robert

[John Livingstone]

Renee,
I’d be happy to exhange with you. My email address is boblivingstone@msn.com. Please send me your email address.
Robert