[Lisetty Sandoval]

Hi Cheryl, Hal,

I’m a bit confused on this part of the assignment:

3.Write your Bio and add it below the salutation with the word “BIO:” before it.

I followed the directions, but looks a bit odd. So I also wrote another one where the “BIO info” is at the end. Please let me know if that works too.

Subject line: Lisetty Sandoval’s Query Letter

Could you forgive an abuser when he’s still hunting you down to kill you?

Hi (producer’s name),

BIO: Besides getting training at Humber college for Film and television production, Lisetty spent 1 month volunteering with sex trafficked victims at the Manitoulin organization and interviewed an indigenous sex trafficked survivor to write the screenplay PENELOPE’S STORY.

Penelope, an aboriginal teenage girl who wants to be free from her past of sexual slavery, decides to take down her pimp’s empire when another job night turns into an old friend encounter.

In her false intend to escape, she gets blinded by her pimp. In the mist of her misfortune, Penelope

meets Estela, a strong old Christian woman who takes her away. Suddenly, she is now challenged to trust and forgive to recover her sight, but she also challenges Estela to answer why God allows evil on earth.

She has to make a choice, to trust in God and forgive her oppressor or take her life and be free from her pain.

How could forgiveness make you free and take down your oppressor’s empire?

These questions are answered in my script. If you like the concept, I’d be happy to send you a copy.

Let’s connect!

Lisetty Sandoval

Tel: 1-647-336-1144

Email: lisetty.sandoval@gmail.com | Address:

============My other version===============

Hi (producer’s name),

Quick question: could you forgive an abuser when he’s still hunting you down?

Penelope, an aboriginal teenager who wants to be free from her past as a sexual slave, decides to take down her pimp’s empire when another job night turns into an old friend encounter.

In her false intend to escape, she gets blinded by her pimp. In the mist of her misfortune, Penelope meets Estela, a strong old Christian woman who takes her away. Suddenly, she is now challenged to trust and forgive to recover her sight, but she also challenges Estela to answer why God allows evil on earth.

She has to make a choice, to trust in God and forgive her oppressor or take her life and be free from her pain.

How could forgiveness make you free and take down your oppressor’s empire?

These questions are answered in my script. If you like the concept, I’d be happy to send you a copy.

BIO: Besides getting training at Humber college for Film and television production, Lisetty spent 1 month volunteering with sex trafficked victims at the Manitoulin organization and interviewed an indigenous sex trafficked survivor to write the screenplay PENELOPE’S STORY.

Let’s talk!

CONTACT INFO: Lisetty Sandoval

Tel:<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>1-647-336-1144

Email: lisetty.sandoval@gmail.com

Address:

IMDb profile

“What I learned doing this assignment is that I could get experience on my BIO by doing one-one research on the subject matter of my script. It creates credibility even if I don’t have much experience in the industry.”

• This reply was modified 3 years, 7 months ago by  Lisetty Sandoval.

[Lisetty Sandoval]

AGREE,

1. Lisetty Sandoval

2. I agree to the terms of this release

GROUP RELEASE FORM

As a member of this group, I agree to the following:

1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.

I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

[Lisetty Sandoval]

Hello!

1. My name’s is Lisetty Sandoval

2. I’ve written 3 scripts (2 produced) I’m on my 3rd one now.

3. I hope I can get help to refine a killer title for my script and be able to present it to at least 50 producers in my film genre.

4. Something unique, special, strange or unusual about you?

I have a background in business administration so I write my scripts with a producer/ business mindset. That is contained scripts without compromising the message of my story. I’m very imaginative so it’s easy for me to create stories from a simple sentence.

Please let me know if Hal will be answering my forum assignments or if is someone else in the industry? Thank you!