Dawn Bricker
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Agreed.
-Dawn L. Bricker
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Dear Cheryl,
I, Dawn L. Bricker, “Agree to the terms of this [Confidentiality Agreement] release form.”
Now, correct the typo “Leave” to Read.😇
-Dawn L. Bricker
p.s. Love the setup of this course and excited to progress through it! -
Please explain #2, Line 2.
To whom ?
Thank you,
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Greetings Everyone!
Dawn, here.
I have written 5 features, working on a t.v, and hoping to finish a crazy musical.
Life got in the way so hoping to get back on track and get back into the “game.”
Wishing all the VERY BEST to all my fellow classmates!
Knowledge is power so hoping to get as much of that as possible! -
Greetings! I prefer to “do the class privately.” Thank you!😇🤩
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True! I dig the experience Hal has and other classes are NOT as informative!
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We’d get Hal’s attention, and rather quickly 😂, if we requested a 25% refund as we were NOT informed that there would be no interaction with him or his co-hort. We were NOT informed in Hal’s sales pitch on a recorded program, that there would not be interaction. The ruse of sending our homework in is a waste of time. Send it to yourself, it will mean more. Upcoming classes of interest: NOW we are wise!
UpSide: the lessons are a bit long-winded (beating a dead horse), but there is valuable knowledge and Hal’s experience, so what price can we put on this?
In the future, we realize that Hal’s courses are a recording only.
ok, that’s my take, like it or not, my take.😁🦉🦊😎 -
What a name, NOT Why*
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Hi H.B.,
Why a name! You sure you’ve not got a novel in the works?😊😁
These are great classes to craft pitch, hooks, concepts, outlines, bones for marketing.
Best of luck to you! -Dawn -
The belief in a ‘Captain” for our ship, I fear, is little more than a mirage in the desert😂, therefore, we may be marooned! These folks just want to write programs, sell them, then move on to the next screenwriting program. Hence, the request to “not ask questions unless a one-liner”, and days to respond, God forbid, if you do. I figured as much, and can’t complain as I am learning a few things. What the hell😁🦉
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I suppose we lost the personal interaction when we purchased the discounted course😂. Okay, I’ve had my fun, now back to work! Good luck to all!
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Douglas,
Don’t you just click on Forums, then hit, Reply?
At very beginning where the ‘Course” asks us to introduce ourselves, re-read #3 (what are we hoping to get out of the course). It’d be real nice to get a little instructor interaction😂 he! But overall and generally speaking, I am learning a few things and meeting some nice fellow writers💕 -
Hi Douglas, glad to see/have you in our group! Bravo on all the experience! That should serve you well in scriptwriting.
Cheers!,
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I was thinking… One script, “Shit Storm”, and now this one, “Fire Storm.” what is your working title for the action fire-starter one?
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Hi Joe,
Welcome! And hope you meet all your goals with this class!
Cheers!,
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Rene,
The musical is a tragic one but of love, compassion, and hope. A young artist who after yet another gallery rejection is struck by a bus, suffers a traumatic brain injury, abused and mistreated in a mental hospital, yet continues to create art. A compassionate Janitor secretly alerts NY Art scene where a young, beautiful socialite has yet to discover the artist’s true condition.”
I also write music, so am writing the scores. It has some crazy, even a little disturbing pieces, and other warm, gentle, beautiful ones.
The story of the artist is based on a true story, and was told to my mother when I was a child. I never forgot it. Fifty years later, I am on it😇.
What are you working on?
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Hi Rene,
Wow! You must have many lifetimes worth of stories to tell! Re my musical: not sure I will finish this work in this class but have had a future sitcom in mind for years and feel compelled/confident now to develop it! It is very challenging to me, and I think this class is the venue to push me (in all the right [write] places😂. I have a good working title and a concept which may be a high one, not sure yet.
Talk soon! Nice to meet you in the class!
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Hi Rene! Great Bio👍