[Paul Davis]

Paul A. Davis- 10 Most interesting things

1.The major hook of the opening scene is : Ms. Louse shows us her special powers by making A man have a seizure by just looking at him, then makes a teenager runs into a truck killing him instantly. Ethan Kills his moms boyfriend. To me it shows the audience they are in for a long thrilling ride.

2. Any Turning Points: The turning point is when Ms.Louse and Ethan does their first killing with each other. Showing the town they will not be bullied no more.

3. Emotional Dilemma: Martha and Ethan is both labeled outcast. So will they be better off teaming up to defend themselves or just deal with people by themselves.

4. Major Twist: When All the kids go over to bring Havoc to Ms. Louse And find out Ethan is on Ms Louse side and Havoc and Danger is coming to them.

5. Reversals: After being wounded Ethan hides out for Five years while everybody thinks he dead. Big surprise:

6.Ms. Louse lives on in spirit. Ethan carries the torch and avenges Ms Louse for ever.

7. The Audience can root for the Villains and Hero’s

8. It’s a Duo of killers

9.The end sets it up for a sequel What is most

10. Unique about your character:

The villain is a shy 14 year old who is over protective of his mom and does he’s first killing at the tender age of The hero is Shy 14 year old girl who is a happy go lucky, sweet girl who when the going gets tough will protect her family by any means necessary.

What I learned today is that you have to put the most entertaining and crucial scenes of your movie in your pitch.

[Paul Davis]

Paul A. Davis

Producer/Manager

I see that a lot of producers are making Horror films right now or remaking old Horror films. And to my knowledge they all are becoming very profitable. Even if the story isn’t that well told . Well I got a Horror screenplay that if it can get made that we will sell a lot of tickets to Movie goers and people who want to cuddle up with there companion at home and watch a great movie. My screenplay introduces two New Horror Icons that could last for years and years. New Original Horror Icons that can build a new franchise. It could be made with or without a notable actor. The whole movie can be made for less than a Million Dollars or a little bit more than that. The movie can be shot in one to three places. I can direct it for you or if you have one in mind that is cool, and I feel it could change all Our lives financially, and Career wise.

How you doing my name is Paul A. Davis and I’m a aspiring Screenwriter who writes Horror films and Drama films. I have a Horror screenplay that can be the next big Horror Franchise. I have two new Original Horror Characters that writers can create movie after movie on. I’m a team player so I can get along with other writers, producers, Etc. My whole focus is getting the movie made successfully and write new screenplays that can sell and become commercially successful films.

What I learned today is that you have to think about what the producer wants . It’s a business and if you can make the producer money then the producer will like to do business with you. Managers can help you a lot but you have to make sure that you can bring money making screenplays to their door. Make a great reputation for yourself throughout the industry and make their lives a little easier with things you can have done before you even walk into their office.

[Paul Davis]

1. Paul A. Davis

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1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

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I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

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[Paul Davis]

Paul A. Davis- Thrash- Horror

Horror, “ Thrash”, The towns most hated Witch befriends a bullied teen and turns him into a ruthless killer.<div>
<div>The thing that is most attractive about my story is that there is a partnership of two type of killers. A women who use supernatural powers, and a teenage boy who is a heartless slasher.</div><div>
</div><div>I will target “Producers” first because they have the power to give my project the green light.</div><div>
</div><div> I learned that writing is just half of the battle. It’s about making the deal and becoming a great salesman in the Movie Business Industry!</div></div>