[SUNIL BATRA]

BWTV MODULE2 LESSSON 9 MAKE EVERYLINE INTRIGUING.

I learned that if the beneath the surface is strong and intriguing you script stand out good. My topic is itself intriguing. But I am not getting pictures at GPT. And it does not discuss mythology. Since it is crucial topic. So, I have to go by my knowledge of script. But GPT is very helpful in improving your language expression. I will use the reverse method after completing the script. I am thinking of writing a movie then writing BWTV IF GPT is not talking about this topic calling it crucial, better way is to express quickly through movie then write BWT

Main intrigue.

I am your god. Britisher my god. Hindu my god! Jewish my messiah! and Muslim my Allah! Christian my Jesus! How many gods are there.

Layer 1. Haridwar India arti going at ganga ghat. People floating Earthen candles one by one. Harry sits on wheel chair. Her fiancée SONIA holds her wheel chair.

Layer 2 harry comes to Usa to join computer technology. But change his mind after meeting JOHN, who bring him from airport, Harry joins THEOLOGY CLASSES.

Layer3 teacher teaching Hindu religion in class. There are so many deities in Hindu religion. John raise hand Are all are God?

Layer 4. After class john says to harry your religion are polytheism. How you handle so many gods. Harry insists john to visit Washington DC temple.

Season 2.

I am your god. Britisher my god. Hindu my god! Jewish my messiah! and Muslim my Allah! Christian my Jesus! How many gods are there.

Layer1 WASHINGTON DC TEMPLE.

HARRY AND JOHN IN THE TEMPLE.

Harry to john you ask anything from God he never denies.

INT. TEMPLE – LORD HANUMAN – MORNING

Layer 1. Safety god. –lord hanuman. he protects us from all evil.

Layer 2 Lord Ganesha. A deity with elephant head.

Lord of wisdom and perfection

Layer 3. Lourdes LAXMI. A goddess of wealth. You can ask for as much money as you want.

As they walk further. john -A bank .

harry- no teller , no locker. John- where is the money?

Harry- have patience Lourdes give. It comes to your house.

Layer 4. Lord Krishna -do right action never ask for fruit.

Layer 4. Lord Rama

This god suffer from the hands of people while performing his duty honestly.

John what we ask from this lord.

Nothing but character like Rama.

John so he is genetic change lords

Harry as close to lord Rama not too perfect.

John so it gives discount

Nothing is perfect in this world.

John -you have so many gods how you please them all.

Harry- we assign day for each lord. But you can ask anything any times.

Layer 5 Lor shiva. He is a lord of destruction

Layer 6. Conclusion by john what he asks from God? Application in real life.

[SUNIL BATRA]

sounds like you’re exploring a fascinating discussion in your theology class in New York City. Let’s break down each point and consider how it might provoke curiosity and engagement among your audience:

1. Gods are many: This statement introduces the concept of multiple deities worshipped by different religious traditions, such as Hinduism, Islam, Christianity, Jainism, and Buddhism. This could spark curiosity about the diversity of religious beliefs and practices around the world, leading to questions about how these various gods are perceived and worshipped by different cultures.

2. Beneath the surface there is only one God: Here, you’re delving into the idea of monotheism, the belief in one supreme deity underlying all religious traditions. This notion challenges students to consider whether different religions are fundamentally worshipping the same divine being in different ways. This could lead to discussions about the nature of divinity, the concept of a universal truth, and the interconnectedness of religious faiths.

3. Is all god say the same or different things: This question invites students to explore the similarities and differences in the teachings and messages of various religious figures and scriptures. It encourages critical thinking about the core principles and values upheld by different faith traditions, as well as the potential for common threads of wisdom and moral guidance across religious boundaries.

Overall, by presenting these thought-provoking questions and perspectives, you’re likely to stimulate lively debate and encourage your audience to delve deeper into their own beliefs and understanding of theology. Keep fostering an atmosphere of open-minded inquiry and respectful dialogue to ensure everyone’s voices are heard and valued in the discussion.

[SUNIL BATRA]

I have learned that creating a curiosity and learn about each step which intrigue audience is the best way to keep audience occupied and attentive.

In New York city class of theology Students are fighting their god is the god of all people. Is there only one God or many?

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1. Gods are many, Hindu god KRISHNA, Muslim Allah, Christian Christ., and Jains Mahavir, bodhi monk mahatma budha.

2. Beneath the surface there is only one God. Then whose god is God. Who are we all?

3. is all god say the same or different things. Which start as the fun class trigger the silence and peace of mind.

[SUNIL BATRA]

It seems like you’ve outlined a complex and multi-layered storyline with various characters, relationships, and themes. Let’s break down each season cliffhanger and explore the layers within the narrative:

1. Season 1 Cliffhanger: Harry, a camp person in India, receives a visa to visit the USA. He meets Asylum, falls in love, and agrees to marry her. However, Asylum’s father insists Harry converts to Islam. Harry agrees but struggles during a religious ceremony in Iran. He flees to the USA, leaving Asylum behind. The season ends with Harry staying with Per, an independent and wise individual, who begins to introduce Harry to theology classes. The cliffhanger leaves the audience wondering about the repercussions of Harry’s decision to leave Asylum and his journey into exploring different religions with Per.

Layers Beneath:

· Cultural and religious clashes between Harry and Asylum, highlighting themes of love, sacrifice, and identity.

· Per’s role as a mentor figure, guiding Harry through theological exploration, reflecting themes of wisdom and intellectual curiosity.

· The introduction of Abel and Kim, representing different cultural backgrounds and religious beliefs, adding depth to the exploration of faith and diversity.

· Foreshadowing of deeper philosophical questions about the nature of religion and humanity’s place in the world.

2. Season 2 Cliffhanger: Harry’s theological studies with Per deepen, leading to discussions about different religious doctrines and beliefs. Tensions rise between Per, John, and Harry as they argue about the similarities and differences between religions. Per suggests that all religions ultimately convey similar messages. The season culminates with a revelation about the ancient city of Indraprastha (modern-day New Delhi) and its connection to various religious myths. The cliffhanger leaves the audience pondering the significance of this revelation and its implications for the characters’ spiritual journeys.

Layers Beneath:

· Deepening exploration of religious and philosophical themes through theological discussions and debates between the characters.

· Uncovering hidden connections between different religious narratives, hinting at a larger, interconnected worldview.

· Development of the relationship dynamics between Harry, Per, and John, as they grapple with their beliefs and worldviews.

· Introduction of the concept of a shared human heritage through the mythological origins of civilizations, foreshadowing a broader exploration of humanity’s collective identity.

3. Season 3 Cliffhanger: The narrative expands beyond Earth as the characters delve into discussions about the origins of humanity and the nature of existence. Their exploration leads them to consider the possibility of extraterrestrial influences on human history. The season ends with a revelation about ancient civilizations on other planets and a mysterious guiding force that may hold the key to understanding humanity’s purpose in the universe. The cliffhanger leaves the audience questioning the true nature of humanity and what lies ahead for the characters in their quest for enlightenment.

Layers Beneath:

· Expansion of the narrative scope to include cosmic and existential themes, pushing the boundaries of the characters’ understanding of reality.

· Integration of science fiction elements with philosophical and religious discourse, creating a rich tapestry of ideas and possibilities.

· Heightened suspense and intrigue surrounding the mysterious guiding force and its significance for the characters’ spiritual and intellectual journey.

· Culmination of character arcs and thematic motifs, setting the stage for a thought-provoking and revelatory conclusion to the series.

You

what will be the plot and layer and cliffhangers of this story

ChatGPT

ChatGPT

Building upon the framework provided, let’s outline a potential plot, layers, and cliffhangers for this story:

Title: “Echoes of Enlightenment”

Plot:

Season 1: Awakening

The story begins with Harry, a young man living in a refugee camp in India, dreaming of a better life. He receives a visa to visit the USA and meets Asylum, a compassionate and devout Muslim woman. Despite their cultural differences, they fall deeply in love. However, Asylum’s father insists that Harry convert to Islam before they can marry. Harry agrees but struggles with the religious ceremony in Iran, ultimately fleeing to the USA, leaving Asylum heartbroken.

In the USA, Harry seeks refuge with Per, a wise and intellectually curious individual who introduces him to theology classes. Through these classes, Harry meets John, a devout Christian, and they engage in passionate debates about religion and spirituality. Harry’s worldview begins to shift as he explores different faiths and beliefs.

Season 1 Cliffhanger: As Harry delves deeper into theological studies with Per and debates with John, he uncovers a hidden connection between ancient religious myths and the origins of human civilization. Meanwhile, Asylum reaches out to Harry, revealing that she is pregnant with his child. The season ends with Harry torn between his newfound intellectual pursuits and his lingering feelings for Asylum, setting the stage for a complex and emotional conflict in the next season.

Layers Beneath:

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[SUNIL BATRA]

i learned it’s easier to write. if you have plot and characters arc. but confused about explaning religion have lot of data but not to create any revolt. want to explain second half first. still thinking of doing so.

[SUNIL BATRA]

You

1. Introduction to characters— 1 HARRY IN INDIA., arti ceremony sitting on wheel chair. Harry flying to Usa. Per friend john received harry. John introduced asylum to harry. Harry met Jewish guy Aaron and his wife Kim. 2. Establish relationship —- With per suffering from psych effective disorder but high level of intelligent. Harry is liberal. Enjoy every religion. Harry relationship with asylum. 3.Conflict emerge—- . While per a silent person. Believe in only Hindu religion. Harry change of religion to Islam. And coming back and refused to marry asylum after he beaten himself on mohrrum 4.personal growth— Harry after coming back from Iran. he tries to away from asylum. While per in class explain Muslim laws. Per came to know about harry previous engagement. He silently mads at harry. 5.Challenges and trials. Lesson going in Christianity. John takes harry and per to the church. Harry convinces but per consistent with Hindu religion. they fought over religion. Aaron remains out of fight. But convince his religion is superb. He knows it and preach. 6.climax Harry friendship and gratitude with per keep john away. Resolution—harry tries to resolve per . and john relationship When per explain we are all brother and sister we have one religion. John convinces. But how? Second season. what you think about plot

ChatGPT

The plot outline you’ve provided seems to focus on the journey of Harry, a character with a liberal outlook on religion, as he encounters various conflicts and challenges related to religious beliefs and personal relationships. Here’s a breakdown of each element:

1. Introduction to characters: The introduction sets the stage by introducing Harry, who is initially in India for an arti ceremony but later travels to the USA where he meets John and is introduced to Aaron and Kim.

2. Establish relationship: Harry forms a close relationship with Asylum, who suffers from a psychological disorder but is highly intelligent. Despite their differences, Harry respects Asylum’s beliefs and enjoys learning about various religions.

3. Conflict emerges: The conflict arises when Asylum, who is a devout Hindu, discovers that Harry has converted to Islam during his travels and refuses to marry her. This creates tension between them due to their differing religious beliefs.

4. Personal growth: Harry’s journey to Iran and his attempts to distance himself from Asylum indicate a period of personal growth and self-discovery for him. He also learns more about Muslim laws and faces consequences for his past engagement.

5. Challenges and trials: The challenges Harry faces include conflicts over religion, particularly with Asylum and John. These conflicts escalate during lessons on Christianity, but ultimately Aaron remains neutral while expressing confidence in his own religion.

6. Climax: The climax occurs when Harry’s friendship with Asylum and his gratitude towards her drive a wedge between John and him. This sets the stage for the resolution.

Resolution: The resolution involves Harry attempting to reconcile with Asylum and mend his relationship with John by emphasizing the universal brotherhood of humanity and transcending religious differences.

Overall, the plot seems to explore themes of religious tolerance, personal growth, and the complexities of interpersonal relationships. It also touches upon the idea of finding common ground and understanding amidst diversity. However, there are some areas where the plot could be further developed or clarified, such as the motivations behind Harry’s conversion to Islam and the depth of his relationships with Asylum, John, and Aaron.

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[SUNIL BATRA]

I have learned before writing if you have a picture of season in front of you it’s easier to trace cliff hangers hangers.

[SUNIL BATRA]

we all are generated. we all have origin. We connected to one soul. This whole universe is circuit of energy.

Should I only prove this statement or explain all the religions. first. And then lastly explain this how we are generated.

Season 1

Ext. Haridwar India

Harry sits on wheelchair while his wife holds the chair. People are floating candle one by one in gages as the universal Arti goes.

Harry gets down from airplane and looks for john. Harry looks for john picture and locate him outside where per ask him to see. He confirms john and sits in his cab. Harry really empress by cleanliness of city. Sooner they start chatting. John tells him that he does two jobs for his collage fee. Harry asks what type of study he do. He tells harry he is attending theology classes. Harry asks what he do in theology. John replies he studies all the religion of world.

Harry- that is interesting. John of course we study your religion, Muslim law. Jewish, about Christianity. Who is your lord? john asks I am liberal. Are you a Sikh. No, I am elder in home and I wear turban and was born 10 years after my parents’ marriage. So, you are Hindu. Yes. You believe in lord Krishna. I believe in all the deities harry replies. My god is the only god. my god is the only god john replies. They reach per working place. John call asylum. asylum meet harry and smile. Asylum takes him in her break room. You can drink from here if you want something takeout from machine. Asylum impress

Harry. They chat for a while. Harry knows that she is also the class of theology. Harry convinces him our god is the creator of this universe. Asylum. No religion is above and low. All teaches something our Mohammad is only Allah. Okay think about that I am going back to work. Harry confuses look and murmur I have to prove our god is the creator. I have to join theology classes. Per comes out of meeting and join harry. Per sorry for not picking him from the airport.

Per house they drink tea and discussing flight and harry tells that he is not joining IT but want to do theology. I can prove our god is the only god. Per smile.

The gods say good things. Do not annoy people and world. Its very delicate subject. Now a days they are start from Hindu religion. Come for interview and join the class. And go pass your driver test I will bring the brochure to read. Harry murmurs my god is only God I have to prove it.

Season 2

1. Harry start driving taxi in New York. John impress by his capability. harry goes to university to get admission. He meets per group. Per introduce him to Jewish friend of per and his Chinese girlfriend, harry express his desire to take him to temple at Washington DC. John says he never been to temple I know my sisters-in-law goes sometimes. We will learn more since now we are in class of Hindu religion, and I have day off. John ready to accompany harry to go to Washington DC, harry explain him all the deity stand for in simple way. per is not happy by his explanation. John impresses by his explanation. They chat about the temple. John its mythology it’s not true. Per smile and says it’s all true like Christianity is true. John what about I take you to church. I am ready.

Season3

Asylum and harry affairs Asylum father first refuses asylum to marry harry.

And then agree on a promise to convert harry to a Muslim. They went to Iran and go under ceremony. the happiness lives for a week. When Morhaim day come. Harry washes his sin by beating himself accompanying by his father in-law. He bleeds and comes home fight with asylum. While john eagerly waiting for harry to take him to church. Harry comes alone. John, you leave asylum Iran. Harry angry and ask him if he wants to go to Iran. john says there is so many good things written in Quran only. Harry every religion says good things why we practice bad things. John, I do not know. Every religion says respect your father and mother. They wash their sin by punishes themselves.

It does not mean you beat me. Harry anger escalating. John reminds him about going to church. Harry tells me beforehand Are you going to beat me. Harry says there is no such things in bible you have to afraid off. Yes ten commandment says respect parents and animal and lowers then you people.do you want me to call asylum. will you stop. harry murmur. So, get ready tomorrow for church. Harry nod. I have A+ in Hindu religion. And I am going to get more marks in Christianity. JOHN SMILE.

Season 4

John and harry are Going to church by walking. John reminds him 10 commandments. The last supper of Christ with his disciples. He is a son of a God. He is coming back. How he is coming back harry asks it is not mythology. harry It is true. He is the recent god not past god like you. It also says respect your father and mother. Are you respect your parents? I do but I am independent at age 16. You people depend on parents till you finish study. Harry and john enter the church. they lit the candle and make a wish put it among lots of candles. Harry takes picture of candles. then plates come to him, and he put the envelope in it. When they are out of church. Harry told him we also lit candle you also lit candle. Jewish also lit candle on Hannukah.

Candles resembles to temple candles. We all lit candles what does it mean. Per we all are one.

Season5

We all have one parent. Who take care of us all. Adams and eves eat a apple means fruit. They are refused by God to eat apple, but they eat means start of universe. They keep on multiplying. A whole universe created. According to Hindu mythology we have one parent. We have 8 planets. All

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[SUNIL BATRA]

BWTV-AI MODULE 2 -LESSON 1

WHAT MAKES a great TV Pitch Bible?

I, Sunil Batra, learned that if we concise each episode of entire show.it created Tv pitch bible.

Genre – religion. ½ hours 6 shows

Audience – all

Concept.

Harry’s world is melting pot of cultures with influences from India, the USA Iran, Jewish and China the tapestry of traditions, belief, and practices that harry encounter and navigate throughout his journey till it prove by per, his roommate, that God is one.

[SUNIL BATRA]

Of course! Please provide the character trait you’d like me to describe, and I’ll be happy to help you with how a character possessing that trait might behave.

You

Character harry Role in show : harry came to USA from India to get admission in computer technology. He is the main character. Unique purpose. :to get degree in theology instead. Expertise. Religious his way of explaining things annoyed some people. Intrigue. Arouse curiosity. Fascinated by the lottery ticket to get fees for school. Moral issue. Flexible, easily change. Unpredictable. Open book Empathetic. Understand and share the feeling of other. Hidden agenda. Has a girl friend or fiancée in india. Competition. He thinks his friend is good he is obliged but give him to much advice Conspiracy. – he makes people irritant by giving direct remark. Secret. – He kept secret he is engaged in india Wound. – Always worry about how he collect fees. Secret identity-. He never told people he comes from the camp people in india. Hope and fear. – To get degree and whether he gets good job Wont/need -money Genera – religion Concept. Religion is many. THE god is one

ChatGPT

Character Trait: Flexible Morality

Behavior:

1. Adaptability: Harry demonstrates a fluid sense of morality, readily adjusting his ethical principles based on circumstances or personal gain. He may justify his actions differently depending on the situation.

2. Moral Dilemmas: Harry faces moral conflicts but doesn’t adhere strictly to conventional moral standards. He might rationalize his decisions based on his own needs or desires rather than universal ethical principles.

3. Empathy: Despite his flexible morality, Harry has a keen understanding of others’ feelings and perspectives. He can empathize with their struggles and may use this understanding to manipulate situations to his advantage.

4. Unpredictability: Others find Harry’s moral stance unpredictable, as he may act in ways that seem contradictory or inconsistent. This unpredictability adds complexity to his character and keeps others guessing about his intentions.

5. Hidden Agenda: Harry’s engagement in India serves as a hidden agenda, suggesting that his flexible morality may stem from personal motivations or obligations that he keeps concealed from others.

6. Confrontational Communication: Harry’s tendency to make direct remarks can irritate others, especially when he challenges their beliefs or actions. His approach to communication reflects his willingness to confront uncomfortable truths.

7. Religious Exploration: While pursuing a degree in computer technology, Harry’s fascination with theology and his desire to study it in the USA instead indicate a deeper interest in religious exploration. This adds layers to his character and hints at a spiritual journey beyond his academic pursuits.

8. Hope and Fear: Harry’s hope to attain a degree and secure a good job contrasts with his fear of failure or financial instability. His willingness to bend moral boundaries may stem from these fears, driving him to prioritize his own success over ethical considerations at times.

Overall, Harry’s flexible morality adds depth and intrigue to his character, shaping his actions and interactions with others throughout the story.

You

can you provide me the character of per.

ChatGPT

Certainly! Here’s a character profile for Per:

Character: Per

Role in the Show: Per is Harry’s close friend and confidant. He provides support and guidance to Harry as he navigates his academic and personal challenges in the USA.

Personality Traits:

1. Loyal Companion: Per is fiercely loyal to Harry, standing by him through thick and thin. He’s always there to offer a listening ear or a helping hand when Harry needs it most.

2. Wise Counselor: Per possesses wisdom beyond his years and often provides insightful advice to Harry. He has a knack for seeing the bigger picture and offering perspective on difficult situations.

3. Steadfast Morality: Unlike Harry, Per has a strong sense of moral integrity and believes in doing what’s right, even when it’s difficult or inconvenient. He serves as a moral compass for Harry, encouraging him to stay true to his principles.

4. Patient and Understanding: Per is patient and understanding, especially when it comes to Harry’s struggles and dilemmas. He listens without judgment and offers support without reservation.

5. Balanced Perspective: Per has a balanced perspective on life, recognizing the importance of hard work and dedication but also valuing the joys of friendship and camaraderie. He helps Harry find equilibrium in the midst of life’s challenges.

6. Reliable and Trustworthy: Harry can always rely on Per to keep his word and honor their friendship. Per is someone Harry trusts implicitly, and their bond is unbreakable.

7. Compassionate Advocate: Per is a compassionate advocate for those in need, often championing causes related to social justice or humanitarian efforts. His empathy and compassion inspire others to follow his lead.

8. Resilient and Resourceful: Per is resilient in the face of adversity and resourceful when it comes to finding solutions to problems. He doesn’t give up easily and is always willing to go the extra mile to help a friend in need.

Per’s character adds depth and richness to the story, serving as a supportive and grounding presence for Harry as he navigates the ups and downs of life in a new country.

You

per character. Role in show. Bought up in USA. Religious and wise classmate of harry. He let harry stay with him till he is independent. Unique purpose. Get degree in theologist. Expertise. Wise man vast knowledge of religion. Intrigue. Very friendly Moral issue. Sober gentle man Unpredictable. Wise talk less. Empathetic. understandable Hidden agenda he is the one who prove give the surprise answer of God. who is a God? Competition. No competition Conspiracy. Some people irritant with him till he proves God is one. Secret. Everybody admires him Wound. Harry sometimes teases him a guru. Secret identity. He never tells people he is intelligent and wise. Hope and fear. Whether people accept his explanation of god Want and need. No need and want Religion is many the god is one. what do you think of per on these traits as above.

ChatGPT

Based on the traits provided for Per, here’s a breakdown of his character:

1. Role in the Show: Per serves as a wise and religious classmate of Harry, providing guidance and support to him as he pursues his degree in theology. He offers Harry a place to stay until he becomes independent.

2. Unique Purpose: Per’s unique purpose is to obtain a degree in theology, reflecting his deep interest and expertise in religious studies.

3. Expertise: Per is depicted as a wise man with vast knowledge of religion, positioning him as a respected authority on spiritual matters.

4. Intrigue: Per’s friendly demeanor intrigues those around him, drawing people in with his approachable nature and warm personality.

5. Moral Issue: Per is portrayed as a sober and gentle man, suggesting a strong moral compass and a commitment to ethical behavior.

6. Unpredictability: Despite his wisdom, Per tends to speak less and is somewhat unpredictable in his actions, adding an air of mystery to his character.

7. Empathetic: Per demonstrates empathy and understanding towards others, allowing him to connect deeply with those around him.

8. Hidden Agenda: Per’s hidden agenda involves revealing the surprise answer to the question of God’s nature, emphasizing his role as a knowledgeable and insightful figure.

9. Competition: Per does not engage in competition with others, as his focus lies more on spiritual enlightenment and sharing his wisdom with those who seek it.

10. Conspiracy: Some people may find Per irritating until he proves the concept of a singular God, highlighting the challenges he faces in conveying his beliefs to skeptics.

11. Secret: Despite his admirable qualities, Per keeps his intelligence and wisdom hidden from others, preferring to remain modest and humble.

12. Wound: Per may feel hurt or teased when Harry jokingly refers to him as a guru, indicating a vulnerability beneath his wise exterior.

13. Secret Identity: Per conceals his true intelligence and wisdom, opting to downplay his abilities and knowledge in front of others.

14. Hope and Fear: Per hopes that others will accept his explanations of God and religious concepts, but he may also fear rejection or skepticism from those who doubt his teachings.

15. Want and Need: Per lacks material wants and needs, focusing instead on spiritual fulfillment and sharing his wisdom with others.

Overall, Per emerges as a complex and intriguing character, blending wisdom, humility, and empathy in his interactions with others as he navigates the complexities of faith and spirituality.

[SUNIL BATRA]

All loops open when Per give hint and open in last part of the series. Who is the God? from where it comes from.

I learned that loops make audience engrossed in the series and tempted them to see the series till the show end.

[SUNIL BATRA]

BWTV- AI MODULE 1- LESSON 8

What I learn that in comedy you need only who ,when, where, what can be explain easily but how is still be explored. Horror is easy to define.

Assignment 1.

Big picture of miseries.

Nick the protagonist a police officer woke up in hospital surrounded by ZOMBIES. He lost the connection with his family. And by passing through various obstacles to meet his family. who Stayed in the farm, group led by another police officer Shane. Once he solved these miseries the challenge was how to escape from zombie who eat the human flesh to reach Atalanta shelter.

Smaller miseries

Nick Group split in to the four. One- nick and his wife, son Carl’s injured and fighting for life and animal doctor who assisting carls to keep him alive. Another group looking for Sophia. While Shane and his group surrounded by zombies going out to get respirator from the dispensary when his partner eaten by zombie’s. fourth group led by Chinese guy took Darek to get antibiotic and got his armed stitched.

Assignment 2

Four students of sociology arguing over religion. Harry comes from India to join technology. Being religious end up in class of sociology. He is open minded and liberal. Wherever he goes faces an obstacle. his own personality makes him sufferer.

He explains Hinduism to john by taking him to temple. Where john take him to church. While Aslam explain him Mohamed laws. He was got struct everywhere. No solution.

Harry girlfriend purpose him to marry. He agrees she introduces him to her father it’s hard for father to accept him. Finally, he agrees to convert to the Muslim. But he suffers.

Shocking event. – when he asked to beat himself. Aslam keep a secret from him.

Who is harry / a sociology student.

What was he doing. Driving cab to carry his study in USA. And have a lottery fixation.

When. He realizes that he cannot depend on only driving taxi.

He takes help from per. A simple and wise scholar.

Where. Its happen while he stays with per to makes both ends meet.

How he solves his problem. When he is always refusing to accept per advice

Concept: God, is one faces are many

Lead characters!

Harry

John

Per

Aslam

Jewish man with Chinese girl.

[SUNIL BATRA]

i. Sunil Batra learned that greater the distress and empathy. more overwhelm the audiences.

Lesson 7 EMPATHY / DISTRESS, THE BINGE WORTHY DRUG

Assignment 2 WALKING DEAD

Main conflict. Crew is escaping from the zombies. The fear is that they will be killed by ZOMBIE, or they will be one of them if attacked. There are three major characters.

Rick, Shane, Lori and carl.

Rick.

Main character.

A. rick and Shane and carl’s looking for Sophia lost while chased by zombie.

B. rick son shot, while rick Shane and Carl’s enjoying watching stag.

C. rick journey to take his son to the doctor.

D. Rick, Shane and doctor family trying their best to save carl’s.

E. Till part of the bullet taken out of the stomach. nick and Lori ‘s did not know that doctor was the vet doctor.

Empathy

A. Rick’s son shot and injured he was in distress to save him.

B. Ricks saving his own sons was in distress/empathy. While his wife Lori was looking for Sophia had no knowledge of her son injured and he was struggling and rick consistently thinking of Lori presence.

C. Nick Being father and Lori being mother were in great distress to save their son, there emotional journey while his son is treated full of empathy.

Lori,

Distress and empathy.

THE group split in to four. While Shane, rick and carl was one group and Lori and Andrea, Sophia’s mother and drake angry man. Was another group looking for Sophia. They couldn’t find Sophia. They don’t want to go till they find Sophia in that area. But night is falling they had to leave. The emotional journey of audience in finding Sophia and curing of carl’s is with Lori and rick.

Lesson with AI

IT TOTALLY DEPEND ON WRITER AND ARC OF THE STORY. HOW LONG, HOW CAN IT AFFECT THE NARRATIVE.

Rick is highly impacted by son injury. And he is now more focused on protecting their families and people he will meet.

Lori feels as guilt, fear and helpless not protecting his son carl’s.

Shane as the protector of the family when rick away. Carl’s illness is Gravely effects Shane. He has his own personal agenda.

[SUNIL BATRA]

I SUNIL BATRA learn that every character has weaknesses and good point in them They suffer because of weaknesses and take controls because of good vibes and coping skills.

RICK –

TAKE CARE OF HIS FAMILY WHEN ATTACK BY JOMBIES. / Fear MIGHT AFFECTED BY JOMBIE

WANT. TO SEE HIS FAMILY ALIVE. /Need to kill zombies

Know internally that his wife betrays her/hide it till episode 6^th’

Emotional/ police officer

Weakness- emotional easily taken over.

Copying skill: shutdown /avoid and persistent.

Trigger: emotionally aggressive.

Lori

Hope; to stay safe, fear hide it from the rick her affair with Shane, a police officer and close friend of rick.

Want/to be in safe place. Need: to be loved

Base negative emotion. Weak lied by Shane that her husband rick died/public mask, warm mother and wife.

Weaknesses: hiding affairs with Shane.

Trigger: hiding affairs.

Shane

Hope: hope rick died/fear killed or arrested.

Want; to have affair with rick wife/need to control emotions!

Base negative emotion cannot have affair with Lori/ public mask -hiding affairs.

Weaknesses. Cannot have Lori.

Trigger: angry, wants to kill rick

Coping skill; shutdown/avoid

[SUNIL BATRA]

LESSON 4 BW T.V WITH AI, walking dead. By Sunil Batra

ASSIGNMENT 1

RICK AND SHANE

Two police officer a very close friend. Shane betrays rick feller……1chapter when rick wounded and Shane took him in a van. Rick gets up among zombie. how?

2.shane and Lori relationship.

3 when rick come back.

4. Shane betray loris rick wife. How?

5. why Lori leaves house and how she believes Shane. Yet to come.

6. RICK still believe in Shane. He has no clue that Shane betrays him.

7. episode 4. Part of the Shane crew kill by zombie.

8. They are moving from there to new place. Left behind one couple. Do they find new safe place or that couple survived or killed by zombies

2^nd assignment.

Each episode has hook and each episode ends in cliffhanger.

ASSIGHNMENT 2.

CHARACTER NAME: Rick and Shane both police officer

ROLE: Police officers and good friends.

HIDDEN AGENDA: Shane loves loris the ricks wife.

COMPITITION: Both Shane and Ricks are police officers with guns.

CONSPIRATES: At one point Shane wants to kill RICK. When group attack by dead people.

SECRETS: Will Shane kill RICKS AND FROM WHERE this Chinese boy come from. And was the dispensary guy looking for old people is real guy. Can the group enter in house scientist doing experiment. Hook and cliffhanger.

Deception: Shane about to kill ricks his friend.

Wound: Shane people killed by ZOMBIES

Secret identity: affairs of Shane with loris, ricks wife.

I LEARNED THAT IF each episode has hook and end in cliffhanger, you curious to see shows again and again to find what happened next.

MY main character is Harry. Join university to become IT but ends up doing classes in religion. He has lack of money for school fees. He drives cab for pulling up his dues.

After going through each religion he ends up in figuring who god is, he is one or there are 10 god. From where these gods come from. He stayed with his friend par a calm, placid man. He gives harry a good advice and interpretive god. But nobody believes him. He goes to church then Hanukkah, Chinese, Where ever harry goes he impressed by that religion. But comes up with horrible experiences. finally, his god punish him. He comes back home. And start as preacher. Will he be able to convince god is one or many.

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CHAPTER 3 ASSIGNMENT 1

THEY RICK FENELLY, DARLY AND CHIENESE GUY ESCAPE IN VAN and GOING TOWARD SHELTER AT ATLANTA. nick find his family and friend Shane and co on his way

RICK FENELLY IS THE most engaging character around whom the story revolved. shane is the cliffhanger and hook is the rick, and the guys.

assignment 2.

story revolved around HARRY.

major roles are muslim girl , john , paru, equally important are Jewish man and his chinese girlfriend.

role in the show. everybody gone through their own religious belief while paru a serious GUY narrating which god tell what and if there is different god or one god.

SECREAT behind. whose god will win.

harry is crossing moral boundary by attempt to marry Muslim girl.

unpredictable , will harry marry muslim girl’. was there any god if there is who is the god

why we care we are in journey to find God in hilarious way.

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ASSIGNMENT 2

MAIN CHARACTER

Harry. main character travelling from India impressed by Christianity to join the school.

connected circle.

Andy, classmate of Harry

Paru classmate plus knowledgeable and religious

—– A Muslim girlfriend of harry.

——A JEWISH BOY

——Chinese girl friend

environmental circle.

teacher, student, preachers,

What I learned from my version it’s easier to write and follow the journey of each character.

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Lesson #2 WALKING DEAD

A. MAIN CHARACTER CIRCLE

1.RICK FENLEY. Major character, a police officer around whom the entire show moves.

2.SHANNE- a friend of rick also a police officer.

3. LORI- Wife of Rick Fenley.

4.CONNECTED CIRCLE

DARY- Rick leaves the keys with Dary to free another invigorating character, Dale.

AMY- LORI sister Amy. trapped in a departmental store.

DALE. – Met rick in episode 2. A quick-witted escaper from zombies.

ENVIRONMENT CIRCLE:

ALL THE ZOMBIE.

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I learned from the 1st episode that more the hooks the lengthier and more engaging compelling is the show.

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There are five hooks in episode one.

1. major hook is Rick the main character emotionally shooting the zombie. why is he doing so and how it happened?

2.Ends up in walking dead people after the gun shot and hospitalize, he woke up among dead people. how has it happened?

3 lost his wife and son carl. he is looking for them. They might be at Atlanta 4shelter.

4.another person and his son Dudley find rick, assumed him as a dead person. Rick helped son and father to escape from the zombie what happened to them, father and son afterwards.

5. gas in the car finished, he ends up finally among zombies the dead people. what happened with rick when the vessel doors slammed, and he escape from the hundreds of zombies.

2. each characters have their own emotional journeys. that made them more interesting.

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I agree to the terms and conditions of this release form.

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I am Sunil Batra, I have done MSC class in 2015 and after that I join various small courses. my purpose with the third screenplay was to understand the meaning of subtext. I realized that its expression of various emotions.

Actually, I gone through reading and listening different books, and videos of religion various question arises who God is and how this world is established, and which direction are we moving? I tried to write a screenplay, but one incident took 50pages. To do justice I thought I should move towards Tv shows. with AI binge worthy TV show. can do justice to the script.

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Lesson 24

Add a scene

Jeff drive and drink. When an accident happens on the other side of the road. Jeff cry and laugh. He stops the van and call the police. Jeff to the injured person

Not this time man I had it before. And he leaves.

2. jeff ends up in kitty house and vomiting, s.o.b asking help. And lie Jeff goes back in a dream he see an accident and gives first aid help to the couple . police arrest him .

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Lesson 23

In climax protagonist come to their old phase

Police bring back jeff to California. Proceeding going on, jeff angry at judge and prosecuted by the court.

While cross examining jeff scream on judge and abusing him.

Jeff

Do you remember me? you punish me for the crime I have not committed.

He holds judge by collar. Police intervene.

Court adjourns.

Matt Robinson comes home.

Jackie

why are you look worried?

Matt Robinson

I don’t know an ordinary prisoner pull my collar in the court and abuse me and blame me for punishing him.

Jackie

You don’t punish people on bases of look. You have to do justice.

Phone ring. Jackie picks up.

Hello mom.

Me Andrew. From Florida.

Jackie crying.

Police officer will bring me to California at morning Proceeding is going on then. I will be home by 12.

Jackie crying

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Lesson 23

In climax protagonist come to their old phase

Police bring back jeff to California. Proceeding going on, jeff angry at judge and prosecuted by the court.

While cross examining jeff scream on judge and abusing him.

Jeff

Do you remember me? you punish me for the crime I have not committed.

He holds judge by collar. Police intervene.

Court adjourns.

Matt Robinson comes home.

Jackie

why are you look worried?

Matt Robinson

I don’t know an ordinary prisoner pull my collar in the court and abuse me and blame me for punishing him.

Jackie

You don’t punish people on bases of look. You have to do justice.

Phone ring. Jackie picks up.

Hello mom.

Me Andrew. From Florida.

Jackie crying.

Police officer will bring me to California at morning Proceeding is going on then. I will be home by 12.

Jackie crying

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Lesson 22

I learned by following step to step instruction. You can expand the script,

Act 4 climax

Police arrests jeff from the shop. Andrew stays home as jeff knows police is chasing him.

Julia beat Andrew for calling police. Andrew convinces her he is not the one.

Andrew sleeping in room and planning now Jeff is gone he can know if my parents alive or not.

Julia opens the Andrew room door in morning ask him to get ready for the shop. Andrew

Continuously following her up to the kitchen. Ask Julia if she wants a tea.

Julia

Sure, make it strong.

Andrew eyes are on phone. Suddenly Julia put the phone back to counter and goes to the bathroom. Andrew steels the phone till he heard the bathroom door closes. Andrew Goes to his room dial his father cell. Bell rings. Andrew put phone back as nobody picks up the phone. He calls his mother cell. She ignores it too Andrew is crying.

Andrew

This means jeff was right my both parents are dead.

He heard the flash sound.

He dials again the phone. shut down and dial again.

Robinson

Someone is desperate.

He picks up the phone.

Andrews overwhelms.

Andrew

Dad it’s me. Andrew

Dad disbelieves. Andrews is narrating story. ROBINSON emotional cannot speaks a word.

Julia looking for phone. Knocks Andrews door.

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LESSON 21

i learned building for climax add more scene for protagonist.

SCENE I

Police chasing jeff a parole prisoner.

Scene 3

Police in search of jeff a prisoner on parole. Jeff tries to kill Andrew by giving poison AS KILLING A DEAD PERSON IS NOT A CRIME. But Andrew rescue by a cat. Will Andrew go back home. Now. Andrew’s steal phone in kitchen. Tries to call dad. He talk to his parents mom and brother.

Police bring Jeff in the court of California and court punishes him for fleeing while on parole. In court jeff tells court. How he is a good citizen. He saves a person in accident while judge Robinson punishes him for the crime.

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Julia starts wailing and put the phone back. Julia call Andrew

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JULIA CRYING

Andrew! Andrew!

Andrew perplexes, comes in. Julia cross questioning him

JULIA

You call police. You said something
to the police.

Andrew is quite and sobs.

KITTY

I told you someday this boy will
put you in the trouble.

JULIA

When did you tell me! You said this
boy is helpful.

KITTY

But I also–

JULIA

What also? Now we wanna starve.

Julia

restless and starts crying.

KITTY

I told you not to marry this man he
would not support the family. Now
you regret.

JULIA (SCREAM)

Will you stop kitty?

Kitty hugs Julia. Both are trying to console each other.

INT. ROOM ANDREW – NIGHT

Andrew looks at roof and cries.

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Lesson 19

I learn for every reaction there is a turning point.

INT. JEFF SHOP – EVENING

When A policeman walks in. Jeff hides and escapes from back door. As he escalates the truck, police man runs outside and follows the truck. Another police car joins him. Jeff truck overturn and he escapes. Police chasing him. Under the flashing light They surrounds Jeff. Police man force Jeff to open the truck, Jeff hesitates first then he opens the truck door and let police man interrogate him.

POLICEMAN

Is this your photo?

JEFF

HESITATES

. No, it’s not my picture It’s written Robert. My name is Jeff.

POLICEMAN

I have a warrant copy to arrest you

. Police man cuffed Jeff and ass him to get into a police car.

Jeff lock Andrew in lock and key. Andrew has no news of jeff escape. Andrew crying thinking of his parents where they will be.

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_{LESSON 18.}

_{I LEARNED, I MIXED LESSON 18 AND 19. PROTAGONIST JOURNEY CONTINUOUS TILL POLICE ENTERED.}

_{POLICE PATROLLING OUTSIDE THE JEFF HOUSE. JEFF CALL JULIA AND PLAN TO} kill Andrew.

Julia,

he is your nephew.

JEFF

No, he is a dead person killing a dead person is not a crime. Who knows he is alive

Julia leaves Jeff.

jeff call Andrew and serve him cereal with poison. Andrew’s Rescue by a cat.

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Lesson 17

I LEARNED THAT EXPOLOTRING RETHINK AND REACTION WHEN THE PROTOGONIST LEFT ALL THE HOPE HE MUST MAKE A NEW PLAN

Rethink and reaction

Andrew thinks about their parents if all dead as jeff says. Then where I go. His mind says at least my mom and brother is alive. Andrew cries when jeff calls him to make a coffee for him. Andrew’s sees the telephone on the kitchen shelf. His eye is on it. Jeff notices. he turns his head around but cannot see what he sees. Ask him to pay attention on while he makes coffee. Andrew gives him coffee and put the phone in his pocket. He hurries to the room. Cell starts ringing he turns of the phone. Jeff looks behind. Then in his pockets. Andrews calling out when jeff snatches the phone. Abuse and beat him. Lock the room.

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I learned climax scene from where you cannot come back. Also, the midpoint.

INT. LEE COUNTY – ANDREW BEDROOM – MORNING Jeff unlock the door and tries to open it. It’s lock from inside. Andrew sobs takes turn and sleeps back. Andrew yawns and give ear to a continuous knock and wakes up with jerk when he sees school bus going. He forgets about the knock. Jeff shouts. JEFF O.S Open the door! I said “open the door”! you m.f

Andrew runs toward the door and unlock the bedroom door while trembling. Jeff abuses Andrew. JEFF, you want to escape again! ANDREW (Sobbing) No, I don’t sir! Jeff slaps on Andrew’s face. Andrew’s almost cries.

EXT. INT. SHOP – LEE COUNTY – MORNING Robinson friends DAVIDSON and SHEILA . They Stop at Jeff shop. They enter the shop and pickup two drinks and cigarette. Sheila looks at the boy. Andrew smiles. Jeff in the corner notice woman. Show knife to Andrew from the corner. He Walks toward counter. JEFF Please go in .clean The bathroom. Andrew follows. Jeff takes money from the couple. The Robinson friend walks out. Jeff watches them going out. He Smokes.

EXT. INT. LEE COUNTY – ROBINSON FRIEND FAMILY CAR – DAY The couple walk out and get inside their car. Sheila opens the drink. They drive off. SHEILA Have you noticed that boy looked exactly like Andrew. May be he is Robinson son, Andrew. He Smile at me. DAVIDSON Their son was died in hurricane. He was also a nicely dressed person not like this boy. SHEILA Maybe I am wrong. But to me he looks like Andrew.

. DAVIDSON No, not possible! He is not a Jesus. If he is Andrew he should talk to us. SHEILA We are going to see Robinson family shortly. DAVIDSON And you are going to tell them your son are alive. He is Jesus Davidson smile.

TURNING POINT.

wife get sick she is admitted to the hospital. Finding nobody at home. Andrew break the front window. pick up money from jeff cupboard and escape. After number of obstacles, he reaches home. Finds stranger in the house. While jeff catches him and bring him back.

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Lesson 15.

Act 2 tp midpoint

I have learned that that first he tries to escape then midpoint he starts using his wit to escape but, remained unsuccessful

Andrew controls emotion and walks towards the truck. While Jeff fixes the wire window and follow him. Andrew sobs. Jeff shows him a knife JEFF (Angry) Quiet! I said, “Be quiet!” Son of b You’re becoming very clever! Andrew exhale as Jeff starts the truck. Jeff drives truck fast and he applies breaks and taking turns. Andrew shakes and touches his shoulder. Jeff pushes him back JEFF (CONT’D) Sit properly! You poppycock ANDREW (DEMURELY) Yes sir! Andrew pushes towards the door and holds it.

INT. JEFF HOUSE – LATE NIGHT Julia calls kitty. A cat tumbles his pot outside. Two cats fighting. There sounds coming inside. JULIA Kitty, Jeff is not home. KITTY He is drinking again. JULIA The shop close at 9 p.m. I was home and lock the shop at 9. KITTY He will be home any time till midnight JULIA I know — Let me go! Someone knocks the door.

EXT. JEFF HOUSE – NIGHT

EXT. JEFF HOUSE – MORNING Andrew listens the harass words of Jeff, He terrorized and immediately gets inside the truck. Andrew exhale. ANDREW (Whisper) Oh Jesus! When will I see my parents. I don’t know my dad is still alive or not. Andrew howls as he sees Jeff walks towards the truck. Andrew picks up the tissue from the Jeff’s box clean up tears and hides the tissue. INT. TRUCK – MORNING Jeff lit the cigarette, blows On Andrew face and start the truck. While driving Jeff truck gets struck in pot hole. His truck tires bust. He stops the truck. A police man standing on side road driving toward Jeff. Jeff confuses. Suddenly policeman flashes his car and crosses Jeff. Jeff takes a deep breath. Andrew helping Jeff to fix the tire.

EXT. DRUGSTORE – EVENING Jeff stops the car in front of drugstore window exchanging words with pharmacist. Andrew sees his friend shopping with mom when he pretends having cramps. JEFF Sit properly! ANDREW I am having pain in the stomach. JEFF Don’t eat too much. ANDREW, Can I go to the Rest room? Jeff opens the gloves compartment and takes out the cramp medicine and gives him. Andrew raises his two figure as Jeff hold the finger and moves it down.

EXT. INT. LEE COUNTY – ROBINSON FRIEND FAMILY CAR – DAY The couple walk out and get inside their car. Sheila opens the drink. They drive off. SHEILA, have you noticed that boy looked exactly like Andrew. Maybe he is Robinson son, Andrew. He Smile at me. DAVIDSON Their son was died in hurricane. He was also a nicely dressed person not like this boy. SHEILA Maybe I am wrong. But to me he looks like Andrew. DAVIDSON No, not possible! He is not a Jesus. If he is Andrew, he should talk to us. SHEILA We are going to see Robinson family shortly. DAVIDSON And you are going to tell them your son are alive. He is Jesus

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Lesson 14 act 2

I learned by writing act 3 and4.every scene has beginning, middle. And end. eliminate some scene which are irrelevant. but not sure you can add subtext or not.

Scene 3

begin

EXT. LEE COUNTY – SHOP – NIGHT

Jeff as he closes shop and leaps toward van, He smokes.

JEFF

Where do you live?

ANDREW

We live in Fort Myers.

Jeff opens van door throws the cigarette. He picks Up the knife from the van seat and hop in.

JEFF

Jump in Andrew?

Andrew shivers seeing the big knife. Andrew hesitates but Jeff dictates. JEFF (CONT’D) Do I have to pick you up. Right Now -hope in. Quick. Andrew leaps in the van.

Jeff uses Andrew for running his shop and he plays card. Jeff leaves, wife Julia watching him. She lock the shop and leave. Andrew tries to escape. He knocks window door. But there is pitch dark. Nobody is there. Truck pass through he yells. His voice lost in truck sound. Andrews hear the car sound and hurry and sits near cash register.

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EXT. LEE COUNTY – JEFF VAN – NIGHT

Jeff about to get accident when a truck gives horn. They turn their trucks sharply. Jeff parks van outside the shop.

INT. JEFF SHOP – NIGHT

Rains pours as Jeff enters the shop and opens the cash register, counting money. Andrew eyes on him.

JEFF (abuses)

Only 400 dollars.

Where is the rest of the money?

ANDREW

That’s all I collected today.

JEFF (uses bad words

) You liar

Jeff slaps Andrew as he exhales high. ANDREW Sir, people don’t show up because of the rain. JEFF Don’t you lie to me. You liar, Lock the door now and come outside.

Scene 4.

Jeff picks up the money and going out. Andrew walks towards bathroom, and he Closes the bathroom door behind. Andrew nabs the pant belt out and pokes the wire gauge window. As he pulls the belt out when he breaks the flowerpot lying over there. Andrew collects the flowerpots pieces to clear the ways when he relocates his shirt gets in the nails. Andrew tries to untangle it. The shirt torn. He tries to jump out of the windowpane, but small hole obstructs him. He fixes the hole again and jumps out. EXT. INT. JEFF SHOP – NIGHT Jeff smokes, stands outside the truck watches for Andrew while looks towards the shop off and on. He gets suspicious, strolls toward shop, opens the door and looks around for Andrew inside the shop. INT. JEFF SHOP – NIGHT Jeff knocks the rest room door. Nobody answers. He Continuous banging the door. Jeff knocks the cigarette on the side wall and throw it away and tries to break the door as it breaks, he bumps in. Jeff sees the wire gauge window dismantle. Jeff peeps out cannot see anybody and he picks up the keys.

Jeff abuses Andrew’s

EXT. JEFF SHOP – NIGHT Jeff closes the shop and sits in the truck and starts the engine after a while he turns of the engine and jumps out of the truck. He is going now the back of the shop. Andrew hides behind the big bush. He is breathing heavily Jeff cross the bush and turns his head when a pot makes sound as rain drops pours on a brass flower plant. Jeff picks up the flowerpot flung it hard. It flies or falls down on the bushes where Andrew’s is hiding. ANDREW Ouch! Jeff hears sound and moves back as he comes near the bushes and hold him hard from hairs. Push him up. Andrew screams. JEFF Where are you going? if You goanna run away. I Will kill you! Jeff seizes his throat. Andrew terrifies as the water Rolls from his eyes. ANDREW, please let me go home. I- I miss, Miss my parents and schoolmates. JEFF How many times

JEFF How many times I told you, your parents died in the storm. You are the only one who survive. ANDREW (SOBBING) Sir Then let me free. Jeff abuses Andrew.

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lesson 13 act 2

I learned that when your ending scene are missing sometimes make movie dull.

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INT.EXT. ROBINSON HOUSE – NIGHT

Strom is dense. Jackie pursuing Robinson to move. He agrees.

Middle

Robinson jump into the water to anchor the boat.

While coming back the water splash on him and he vanishes for a while. Andrew thinks dad drowned.

End. Andrew jumps in water to rescues his dad.

INT EXT. ROBINSON HOUSE – LATE NIGHT

BEGINNING

Andrew swims to locate his father.

Middle

Father back to house. sees Jackie and mike crying as they cannot see Andrew. Dad goes back. but fails to find Andrews. Comes back call police.

End

Andrew drowned. And declared dead by sheriff.

EXT. JEFF’S VAN – MORNING.

Beginning

Jeff loitering on road watches destruction.

middle

come back open the shop and start playing cards. Spank a buyer for not waiting, goes back home.

End.

JEFF’S SHOP – NIGHT

BEGIN

Jeff comes back to shop.

Middle. Counting money, he earns for todays. Andrew up and sees him cover with the bandage.

End

Jeff bring him home and promise to return him.

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LESSON 12.

Place holder.

I LEARED THAT SOME scenes are vary lengthy. Or two much storm description keeps you away from the theme.

<s> </s>1.Opening SCENE

POLICE chasing jeff.

2. introducing Mike and Andrew.

3.introducing matt Robinson, and Jackie

4. Andrew sees jeff van flickering light.

5. Andrews in YMCA defeated by dad Robinson while swimming.

6. introducing KITTY, JEFF’s grandmother.

7.robinson house late evening preparing for storm

8.robinson house severe storm hit the fort Myers.

9.robinson family undecisive to move or stay . 10.Robinson tries to anchor the boat he vanishes in the waves.

11.Andrew tries to save the dad who disappeared in the WAVES

12 Andrews DROWED 13 later declared dead.

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LESSON 11.

OUTLINES.

I have learned by writing the outline we can know what comes next or whether all the scene has inciting incident. And a turning point which evoke audience.

EXT. ROBINSON HOUSE – LATE EVENING

1. Jack pushes the boat. Fixes a anchor to the dock. Helicopter takes the round. Andrew little shaky stands near the boat and trembling.

2. INT. ROBINSON HOUSE – NIGHT

Andrew tries to sleep, looks outside, clouds are dense, Rain pours profusely and trees are chattering. Lights are gone. Mike holds flash light and turns it on. Mom cleans table. Suddenly winds outrages, it rains heavily. Andrew gets up from couch runs and holds dad tightly. Jackie looks out, the water is rising.

3. EXT. ROBINSON HOUSE – LATE NIGHT

4. INT. ROBINSON HOUSE – NIGHT

Jackie scares. Robinson Alert. Children Terrorize as top of the roof flies. They all hold their breath. While all are hugging each other. Water increases, twigs floats, thunder roars and lights up for a while.

EXT. INT. ROBINSON HOUSE – NIGHT

4. The tree uproots. Robinson dismays. Jackie Looks out of the window. Jackie is breathing heavily. Robinson detects his car under the tree. The tree is half bend. He moves out while holding the door. Get inside the car quickly. He accelerates the car and park the car under garage. While coming back the water splashes on him, Andrew perceives, and afraid, suddenly gets up he rushes out of the door– shocks- goes back.

5. Jackie hastens. Andrew already out, jumps in the water and struggling to rescue Dad. Robinson unfocused and tries to come out of water when it propels him back. Andrew fights with water. Jackie clamors. Robinson comes out of the water. See Jacky screeching

6. Robinson Cannot see any hands, he struggles and proceeds in. He cries. Jackie hugs Robinson. Mike sobs.

7. ROBINSON call police. Sheriff declared Andrews dead.

WRITE YOUR ACT1 TURNING POINT.

BEGIN

ANDREW drowned while saving his father life.

Mid-point.

Police find a body completely dismantle not recognizable.

Turning point.

Andrew declared dead.

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I have learned that by doing begin, middle and end in inciting incident. script moves continuously normal. But I confuse where the scene is short no middle but begin and end. And also, how many scenes will be there in first 15-minute movie and how long.

Begin scene 2

INT. ROBINSON KITCHEN – DAY ROBINSON 44 and JACKY his wife both having coffee and reads newspaper. Robinson gets up from dinning chair and fills up another cup of coffee. Jack occupies chair and Gives newspaper to Jackie, Andrew steps in the kitchen, Gives him five to dad and hugs mom. Takes out the bowl and cereal box from cupboard, pour cereal in a bowl. Takes it over to fridge tilt the milk in the cereal bowl.

middle

ROBINSON

Andrew, please get ready after the breakfast.

We are going for swimming.

ANDREW

Again dad.

Andrew sits on the dinning chair and looks at dad, makes faces.

ROBINSON

Any problem, son!

ANDREW

Mike is not going.

ROBINSON

He been to pool yesterday.

Inciting incident.

Andrew

But dad hurricane is coming the Y will be closed’.

Robinson

I called the YMCA its open still.

ANDREW

No! Nup! I am not going.

Robinson stares at Andrew.

ANDREW (CONT’D)

Oki Doki

Jackie pulls the chair back.

JACKIE

I am going for shopping and meet you guys for lunch.

. ROBINSON

Sounds great!

JACKIE

What about you Mike?

2. MIKE

O.S Bring something for me, mom.

Jackie chills as she looks outside from a window.

JACKIE

Weather doesn’t look good, matt.

ROBINSON

They are predicting some sort of hurricane if it changes direction,

it can create devastating damage. Bring some flashlights honey, in case we need some.

Scene 3

begin

INT. ANDREWS ROOM – DAYS

Its pours and twigs move. Andrew sees a van coming faster towards his house. Suddenly stop and take a turn and throw a bottle out of window. Other cars give horn.

middle

JEFF.

s.o.b

end

Andrew closes the curtain.

INT. YMCA – DAY

begin

Robinson and Andrew swimming and take laps back and forth, while compete with each other. ANDREW

I goanna defeat you dad!

ROBINSON (Smile)

Sure!

Robinson wins. Andrew and Robinson stand in the corner of pool.

middle

ANDREW

You know dad, you are bigger and taller than me.

ROBINSON

Some children in state level championship younger than you, Andrew

ANDREW

Are you saying dad, I am not a champ. I am Only 12 years old?

ROBINSON

Not yet, don’t worry one day you will be a champ.

End.

We are hearing blaring thunders sound.

announcement on the microphone.

Due to incremental weather the YMCA is closing early. Please vacate the pool.

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<div>I learned that each scene has beginning, middle and ending.</div>

EXT. FORT MYERS – DAY
Few cars load with luggage, bikes and boats are going on the
road while it’s raining outside.

INT. ROBINSON HOUSE – DAY

MIKE 14 and ANDREW 12 looking outside the window. It’s partly
sunny and raining, tree twigs are flowing back and forth.
Andrew shiver.

ANDREW

Mike, are we going to school
tomorrow?

MIKE

I don’t think so.

This storm will
change into the hurricane.

ANDREW

Is Hurricane dangerous?

MIKE LAUGH

You scary cat!

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FADE IN.

beginning

EXT. LEE COUNTY – FLORIDA – EVENING
Dense cloud covers the horizon when a police car chases van
truck. The van tumbles and sneaks through .When
police lost his way. Jeff accelerates his truck and ends up in
a ditch, he tries to take it out. The engine makes sound

JEFF

S.o.b

middle

Finally able to gets it out of the ditch. police Still
chases van. JEFF escapes as he is sweating and panting
when police cars stop him. Among The flashing lights of
police cars, we see JEFF. Policemen knock the window. The
dog barks.

POLICEMAN

Get out of the car!

end

Jeff smokes cigarette and refuses to open the van door.
Police bang the door and takes of the guns The dog barks on him; Police breaks the van window. Jeff puff on police
officer face and they Ass him and arrest him.

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Lesson 4.

Antagonist.

My name is jeff I am 40-year-old, lives in Lee County FLORIDA. I am emotional but very angry if someone do not listen to me and do justice.

2. I am good person if people behave okay. But if anybody do injustice, I am there to take revenge.

3. I am a poor person. I saved people dying on a road accident. Police came and arrested me.

4.i am taking revenge

5 I am taking revenge

6 Andrew’s dad a judge decided case wrong, and fined me. I did not commit the crime.

7and 8

9. The conflict started when I knew that he was the son of the judge who punished me for no fault of mine. I rescued the couple who hurt in an accident helping him to breath. That was my term to take revenge.by keeping Andrew to my shop. And torture him.

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I have learned that one should be clear about the theme then it is easy to write the journey of antagonist.

LESSON 8

PASS 1

INTERWEAVE THEME

Jeff a antagonist is an emotional and aggressive man. Once punish by judge matt Robinson for saving a person life in a car accident when by law he cannot touch a person if real person is escaped. Jeff finds Andrew fainted and injured in storm. he tries to return him. But jeff keep him to take a revenge from Andrews’s father who punished him for the crime he is not committed.

Pass 2

Antagonist journey.

Police chasing jeff a prisoner on parole and catches red handed. A 12-year-old Andrew who lost his life in hurricane and declared dead by sheriff. Find alive by antagonist jeff.

2. Jeff goes to police station. But after reading causality board. he comes back.

3. jeff put Andrew in his shop and is telling people he is my distant cousin nephew.

4.jeff keep him in lock and key and under pressure that he will kill him if he tries to escape.

5. jeff spanks Andrew for yearning less money on rainy day. Andrew tries to escape from the bathroom window. But caught him again.

6. jeff restrict him ask him not to talk to a stranger.

7. jeff gets sick and hospitalize. Andrew gets a chance to escape.

8. jeff caught Andrew from his home at fort Myer. He finds some stranger in that house who has no knowledge of Andrew’s parents.

9. jeff told him their parents died in storm.

10. police chases jeff. Jeff hides from police.

11. jeff knows someone has complained about him that he keeps a juvenile in a shop.

12.jeff want to poison Andrew. Since killing a dead person is not a crime. But Andrews saved by a cat.

13. police chases jeff. And arrest him. Proceeding held in the court.

14 jeff was punished
by the court. He pulls judge Robinson collar and vomit out. You punish me
before for the crime I have not committed. Thus, a criminal is born.

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ADE IN

INT.EXT. FORT MYER – HOUSE – DAY

Andrew 12 and mike 14 stand near the window looking outside.Winds Blows the tree moves .dark Clouds every where.

Andrew asks mike whether the hurricane are dangerous. Mike laugh at him and tell him the scary cat. Andrew take it to heart. Andrew asks this question from dad matt Robinson 44. He ignores and smiles rubs his back Andrew convince him grandma died in hurricane

Hold.

Not sure how to resolve it after the 4th scene or immediate scene.

INT. YMCA – NOON

Andrew and matt are swimming and taking laps. When dad defeat Andrew. The YMCA closes earlier because of hurricane. Andrew upset and said you are bigger than me. Matts insure him next time you will win.

Transformational journey.

The hurricane intensifies and water covers the boat. Jacky 42 wants to move from the house. While removing’s the anchor. Water splash on matt and Andrew see dad drown jumps in the water and tries to save matt and in process Andrews vanish and later declares dead.

[SUNIL BATRA]

I learned that by keeping the old ways and new waves I can trace the transformation journey and can outline the story.

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Lesson6.

Old ways

1. Andrew 12 and matt Robinson 44 swimming at YMCA when matt defeated Andrew.

2. Andrew did not accept the defeat.

3. On the tv metro logiest predicting fort Myer weather. That storm is coming in 3 hours

4. People start vacating house.

5. Andrew afraid of hurricane.

6. Persisting matt to move from here.

7. Matt decided to stay.

8. Electricity turns of, wind blowing water raised. Jacki Andrew’s mom wants to move from fort Myer

9. Matt Robinson opening the anchor when he is invisible.

10. Andrew tries to save dad and drowned

11. he is declared dead by sheriff.

12.

13.

new way.

1. Andrew found by the jeff alive.

2. Jeff tries to return Andrew.

3. He went to the police station. but change his mind and torture him,

4. Andrew bug him to take him home

5. Instead put him to run Jeff’s shop.

6. Andrew tries to run by opening the shop window

7. But caught red handed.

8. When Andrew’s see his friend he tries to escape. But clever jeff wasn’t let him go.

9. When jeff hospitalize.

10. Andrew’s escaped and caught by Jeff.

11. Police notice a miner work in the shop.

12. Jeff tries to poison him since killing a dead person not a crime

Climax.

Jeff caught red handed.

2. jeff send to the court.

Resolution

. Andrew sent home and jeff prosecuted.

In court jeff accepted he kept the Andrew to punished judge matt Robinson. To take revenge for the crime he is not committed.

[SUNIL BATRA]

first draft of 4act transformational journey

I learn that story can be told in old way and new way and in-between there is a transformation journey of the protagonist through inciting incident and turning point till it reaches climax and then resolution.

concept

Andrews declared dead found up by antagonist. Will antagonist let him go home or torture him.

Main conflict

Jeff wants to return Andrews but kept him later to take revenge.

Old way.

Jeff wants to return Andrews but jeff went to police station. But come back and decided to keep him.

New ways

Jeff keeps him, starts torturing him. while Andrews trying his best to escape.

Act1 opening.

Andrew swimming in YMCA pool with dad and competing each other. Father wins. Andrew upset.

Inciting incident. A hurricane is coming. People evacuating FORT MYER. Mr. Matt Robinson decided to stay.

Turning point. Hurricanes destroy their house and Andrew lost his life in storm while saving his dad .and declared dead.

Act 2

Opening

Andrew found alive by jeff.

Jeff keeps him in his confectionary shop. Andrew Prove profitable. Jeff tries to return him but when he goes to police station, he decided to keep him.

Turning point.

Jeff forces him not to tell anybody otherwise he will kill him. Andrew angry and tries to escape. All his plan deciphered by antagonist.

Act 3

Andrew tries to pursue jeff to let him go home. Every time jeff tells him your parents are died in a storm.

Jeff gets sick and hospitalize. Andrew finds nobody in home, and he escaped and reach home. Strangers open the door. he asks about parents. But caught red handed by jeff.

Act 4

Climax.

People notice a juvenile working in the shop. One of the client informed police. Jeff tries to kill him. since killing a dead person is not a crime.

Resolution

Police take Andrew under custody. And came to know that his parents live in California.

Jeff was punished for kidnapping a child and prosecuted by the court.

[SUNIL BATRA]

first draft of 4act transformational journey

I learn that story can be told in old way and new way and in-between there is a transformation journey of the protagonist through inciting incident and turning point till it reaches climax and then resolution.

concept

Andrews declared dead found up by antagonist. Will antagonist let him go home or torture him.

Main conflict

Jeff wants to return Andrews but kept him later to take revenge.

Old way.

Jeff wants to return Andrews but jeff went to police station. But come back and decided to keep him.

New ways

Jeff keeps him, starts torturing him. while Andrews trying his best to escape.

Act1 opening.

Andrew swimming in YMCA pool with dad and competing each other. Father wins. Andrew upset.

Inciting incident. A hurricane is coming. People evacuating FORT MYER. Mr. Matt Robinson decided to stay.

Turning point. Hurricanes destroy their house and Andrew lost his life in storm while saving his dad .and declared dead.

Act 2

Opening

Andrew found alive by jeff.

Jeff keeps him in his confectionary shop. Andrew Prove profitable. Jeff tries to return him but when he goes to police station, he decided to keep him.

Turning point.

Jeff forces him not to tell anybody otherwise he will kill him. Andrew angry and tries to escape. All his plan deciphered by antagonist.

Act 3

Andrew tries to pursue jeff to let him go home. Every time jeff tells him your parents are died in a storm.

Jeff gets sick and hospitalize. Andrew finds nobody in home, and he escaped and reach home. Strangers open the door. he asks about parents. But caught red handed by jeff.

Act 4

Climax.

People notice a juvenile working in the shop. One of the client informed police. Jeff tries to kill him. since killing a dead person is not a crime.

Resolution

Police take Andrew under custody. And came to know that his parents live in California.

Jeff was punished for kidnapping a child and prosecuted by the court.

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Lesson 3

I learned from this each character has his own drawbacks and values which they manipulate to free themself.

Character profile 2

An innocent child under a gruesome man. His journey home while applying various technique and becoming clever and defeating antagonist.

i. Trait intelligent, clever, risk taking

ii. Subtexts – deflects attack. And politely counter attacks

iii. Flaw. He is innocent and believe in antagonist easily.

iv. Value- truth

v. Irony- even though he is weak person he used his common-sense and become clever.

vi. What make him fit for role. He is 12 years careless, timid, innocent person and easily believe in people change to a clever people and start believing in himself.

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Lesson 2.

I, SUNIL BATRA learned that story can be develop after asking question what the journey of all characters is.

2.Protagonist Andrew 12 year of age playing victim and fighter role as to defeat the villain.

3. antagonist: jeff playing the role of antagonist as authority and predator. Caught by police in the end.

4.supporting actor. Grandmother of jeff the antagonist. To reflect the nature of antagonist and His relationship to another people.

MR ROBINSON playing the role as Andrew’s father. Who later play the role of judge.

5. minor role. Robinson wife and other son mike.

Pick up your genre:

Thriller

A role in the story.

Predator Andrew imprisoned in the house of antagonist who profiling for chance to escape.

b. age range and description

Andrew 12-year-old living securely in home. Life changes after he lost his life in a hurricane and declared dead.

c. Internal journey. Living securely in a house with family. when a hurricane changes his life.

d. external journey: from the solitary confinement to escaping to reach parents.

e. motivation. To escape from the jeff antagonist.

f. wound

antagonist kept Andrew in house arrest and torture Andrew.

G. mission and agenda. To escape.

<font face=”inherit”>h. secret. </font>Judges<font face=”inherit”> punish antagonist jeff. Andrew was the target to take revenge.</font>

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Concept. Criminal is Born

Criminals are not born but originated when society doesn’t do justice. Jeff antagonist a thoughtless, person journey from simplicity to complicity is story of a man, who kept the innocent person Andrew the protagonist without thinking he will be a criminal.

The transformational journey.

Story arc

Old way

Protagonist Andrew journey from home as an immature and carefree child.

New way

Protagonist Andrew journey, lost in storm and picked up by antagonist jeff and Andrew getting clever while applying various tactics to escape.

Arc begins

Andrew at home getting ready for storm.

Arc ending

Andrew gone through various experience of dealing with criminal and try to escape.

Internal journey

Andrew journey from secured home atmosphere to the criminal house

External journey.

Andrew applies various tacti’s to escape and while getting experience how to manipulate criminal.

I learned that story can be told by applying various Tanique through transformational journey.

[SUNIL BATRA]

HI everyone, my name is Sunil Batra, I have written 3 screenplays. my goal is to write a profound religious screenplay one day and I have accomplished half of it. but I want to rewrite my screenplay the ‘criminal is born. ‘ In 30 days. Strange I am running behind. the weird things happen with computer.one day work can take many days depend on the mood of my computer. But I will do it this time. (Spider web)

[SUNIL BATRA]

Hello everyone, my name is Sunil Batra. I am back after more than one year break in writing world. welcome to 2023. I have written 4 scripts 2 are in my junk folder. Two I am retwisting, Rewriting and extending. I want to write about religion ‘the controversy of God’.

[SUNIL BATRA]

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3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

This completes the Group Release Form for the class.

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I, Sunil Batra, agree to the terms of this release form.

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analysis of basic instinct. I Sunil Batra done lesson 1

question 1

dr. Beth seems like helping team to solve the problem. no one clue she is the actual culprit.

nick investigating the case. Everyone believes Cathryne is the real culprit as her book narrate everything what’s happening with victim one after another.

dr. Beth removed and killed everybody who so ever know about the file and suspicious about her.

this movie thrilling because the writer of the book Cathryne seems to be the culprit as her book explain everything which is happening and will happen in future.

QUESTION 2.

whole movie we cross-examined Cathryne without paying attention to dr. Beth since she seems to be a helping to solve the case. its big mystery and intrigue and big suspense

what I learned from this movie that case can be hard to solve if Cathryne plays trick with nick. so, dialogues are superb it conveyed the personality of the person.

[SUNIL BATRA]

LOGLINE.

when the god of death died in 2nd era and very few people left on earth. what happened to Emly and Kyla?

[SUNIL BATRA]

basic instinct.

a great movie with great suspense and dialogue and MIS.

mystery.

Marlene a great writer was suspected of killing john last seen with him.

intrigue.

who killed john if Marlene didn’t kill john., Karan the investigator suspected Marlene because she explains exactly the murderer happen in her book. Karan wants to reach to depth of case. he falls in love with MARLENE. Roxy tries to kill Karan it was a suspense for a while. Roxy the girlfriend of Marlene is lesbian. she killed in while Karan chasing her. Marlene is sad one after another whom she loves dying. Marlene tells Karan about her writing instigation from his collage friend Lisa who tries to imitate her. Karan looking for Lisa Haberman.

suspense

<font face=”inherit”>. </font>A black<font face=”inherit”> cover person </font>killed josh.<font face=”inherit”> </font>Karan<font face=”inherit”> chasing hidden person and come across. dr </font>Gondran. Karan, what are you doing here? dr. gordian to protect you. Karan didn’t believe dr gordian. She asked her to drop the gun she has in pocket. Karan wanted to know what’s is in her pocket.she refuse to take out. Karan chasing dr. gordian and shoot her. in her pocket was screwdriver. Karan regrets. but later karan new who killed all these people when he found Lisa gordian is dr. gordian she gone to same collage where MARLENE GONE. and she hates her. t

[SUNIL BATRA]

Logline.

3000 years ago, bronze era the sun comes near earth. People are dying of plague and sun stroke.to take revenge they killed God of death, where do the soul go.?

MYSTERY: Kyla and Emilly will they survive the sun stroke. will they care for other people? what happen if God of soul died.

INTRIGUE: what happen to Kyla and Emilly. do they survive.

MYSTERY: What happen to people. where they go once the god of death died. will Kyla and Emilly survive.

[SUNIL BATRA]

Sunil Batra, I agree to the terms of this release form.

[SUNIL BATRA]

Hi, Sunil from Richmond, I have written three scripts. one is learning script another is okay script and third halfway is going to be profound script. All credits go to Mr. Hall for teaching us in master class 15. He is right you are not going to change your Baby. Finally, did it and I feel like I have to learn more about the horror scripts

I am slow writer, on top of it my script changes or shifted place in the morning by itself. Have you heard the story of ant who climbs and fall down and try again to climb? very strange. But learn from my life don’t give up.

[SUNIL BATRA]

I agree to the confidentiality of agreement. Sunil Batra

[SUNIL BATRA]

I wasted my 4hours yesterday and 3 hours today. i didn’t get any image. then i asked simple question draw8planets. even then asked me to draw 8 planets yourself and add a picture. it seems like I have to buy chat gpt4. its continuously taking me to chatgpt 3.5 no other prompt to purchase gpt4.ANYBODY KNOWS WHAT HOW TO GET GPT

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GOD sovereignty

What I learned if your title is there you can easily set your boundary to explore topic and stick to the priority information.

class of theology.

1. Introduction

2. Hindu temple

3. Conflict

4. Muslim religion

5. Conflict.

6. Christianity

7. Conflict

8. Jews religion

9. Competition.

10. Per intrusion

11. Resolution

12. Planets

13. Diseases.

14. Distraction

15. Division

16. Christianity

17. Resolution.

18. Cliff hanger

19. What next

20. God ruling

Future of universe.

Cliff hanger.

[SUNIL BATRA]

You

1. Introduction to characters— 1 HARRY IN INDIA., arti ceremony going on Harry sits on wheelchair while his Indian girlfriend hold chair. Harry flying to Usa. Per friend john receives harry. John introduced asylum to harry. Harry meets Jewish guy Aaron and his girlfriend Kim. 2. Establish relationship —- With per suffering from psych effective disorder but high level of intelligent. Harry is liberal. Enjoy every religion. Harry relationship with asylum only subsists if harry covert to Muslim religion. 3.Conflict emerge—- . While per a silent person. Believe in only Hindu re to know about harry previous engagement. He silently mads at harry. 5.Challenges and trials. Lesson going in Christianity. John takes harry and per to the church. Harry convinces but per consistent with Hindu religion. they fought over religion. Aaron remains out of fight. But convince his religion is superb. He knows it and preach. 6.climax Harry friendship and gratitude with per keep john away. Resolution—harry tries to resolve per . and john relationship When per explain we are all brother and sister we have one religion. John convinces. But how? Second season. what you think about plot

ChatGPT

The plot outline you’ve provided seems to focus on the journey of Harry, a character with a liberal outlook on religion, as he encounters various conflicts and challenges related to religious beliefs and personal relationships. Here’s a breakdown of each element:

1. Introduction to characters: The introduction sets the stage by introducing Harry, who is initially in India for an arti ceremony but later travels to the USA where he meets John and is introduced to Aaron and Kim.

2. Establish relationship: Harry forms a close relationship with Asylum, who suffers from a psychological disorder but is highly intelligent. Despite their differences, Harry respects Asylum’s beliefs and enjoys learning about various religions.

3. Conflict emerges: The conflict arises when Asylum, who is a devout Hindu, discovers that Harry has converted to Islam during his travels and refuses to marry her. This creates tension between them due to their differing religious beliefs.

4. Personal growth: Harry’s journey to Iran and his attempts to distance himself from Asylum indicate a period of personal growth and self-discovery for him. He also learns more about Muslim laws and faces consequences for his past engagement.

5. Challenges and trials: The challenges Harry faces include conflicts over religion, particularly with Asylum and John. These conflicts escalate during lessons on Christianity, but ultimately Aaron remains neutral while expressing confidence in his own religion.

6. Climax: The climax occurs when Harry’s friendship with Asylum and his gratitude towards her drive a wedge between John and him. This sets the stage for the resolution.

Resolution: The resolution involves Harry attempting to reconcile with Asylum and mend his relationship with John by emphasizing the universal brotherhood of humanity and transcending religious differences.

Overall, the plot seems to explore themes of religious tolerance, personal growth, and the complexities of interpersonal relationships. It also touches upon the idea of finding common ground and understanding amidst diversity. However, there are some areas where the plot could be further developed or clarified, such as the motivations behind Harry’s conversion to Islam and the depth of his relationships with Asylum, John, and Aaron.

Cha

[SUNIL BATRA]

SEASON 1. I learned that if you first put the episodes in layers it is easier to proceed further. we all are generated. we all have origin. We connected to one soul. This whole universe is circuit of energy. All type of people meditating. EXT. INDIA – EVENING 1.Arti going on. People one by one floating candle 2.harry comes to Usa and join theology classes and stays with per high-level intelligent suffering from psych effective order also a student of theology who Believe in various god. 3.Harry start driving taxi in USA to pull out his college fee. 4. per is down to earth kind hearted, great helper. 5. harry sometimes laugh at him when he talks about once before Jesus this world is distracted, we need messiah now too.

ChatGPT

It seems like you’re outlining the first season of a story or screenplay. Based on the information provided, here’s a breakdown of the scenes and characters:

<hr>

SEASON 1 OUTLINE

Episode 1: “Origins”

• Scene 1:

  • Location: India
  • Description: Arti ceremony taking place, people floating candles.

• Scene 2:

  • Location: USA
  • Description: Harry arrives in the USA and joins theology classes. He stays with Per, who suffers from a psychosomatic disorder and is also a theology student with beliefs in multiple gods.

• Scene 3:

  • Location: USA
  • Description: Harry starts driving a taxi in the USA to earn money for his college fees.

• Scene 4:

  • Description: Per is portrayed as down-to-earth, kind-hearted, and a great helper.

• Scene 5:

  • Description: Harry sometimes finds Per’s beliefs amusing, especially when he talks about the need for a messiah in the current world.

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It seems like you have the beginning stages of a narrative that could explore themes of spirituality, cultural differences, and personal growth. You might want to further develop the plot, character arcs, and conflicts as you move forward with your story.

ChatGPT can make mistakes. Consider checking important information.

[SUNIL BATRA]

From the provided content, it appears you have an outline for the first episode rather than a complete script or detailed plot for the entire season. It’s essential to have a clear outline before diving into writing the full season, as it helps you structure your story and plan for key plot points, character arcs, and thematic developments.

Regarding cliffhangers, they can be a powerful tool to keep viewers engaged and eager to watch the next episode. Including a cliffhanger at the end of your first episode can be effective in enticing viewers to continue watching the series. However, it’s crucial to ensure that the cliffhanger is organic to the story and leaves viewers wanting more without feeling forced or contrived.

As you continue to develop your plot and outline for the first season, consider where a cliffhanger could naturally occur based on the narrative trajectory and character arcs. It could be a revelation, a major conflict, or a turning point that leaves viewers eager to find out what happens next.

Once you have a solid outline for the entire season, including cliffhangers where appropriate, you can begin fleshing out each episode in more detail and writing the scripts accordingly. Remember to maintain consistency in tone, themes, and characterizations throughout the season while building tension and anticipation for future episodes.

ChatGPT can make mistakes. Consider checking important information.

[SUNIL BATRA]

I have learned that keeping outline of each season it’s easy to write.

But confused how long or pages the first episode should be.

EXT. HARIDAWAR GAGES – INDIA

Harry sits on wheelchair’s while his fiancée Pinki holds chair. Arti is going on. Devotee flowing candles in the water. Sounds of fighting coming from distance fight for religion between Hindu and Muslim going on.

Ext. WHITEHOUSE – USA

president discussing about ISRILE war and asking for mutual understanding and peace. Jerusalem is the city created by Israelis While Muslim has their mosque there.

INT. CLASS OF THEOLOGY – N.Y

john, per, Kim, Asylum and Aaron sits on bench. Waits for teacher.

JOHN

OUR RELIGION IS GREAT. MOST PEOPLE BELIEVE IN CHRIST. BECAUSE HE IS THE ONLY SON OF GOD.

PER SMILE

THERE IS NO RLIGION that is the superb. Because we have one GOD . Because who are we? How we originated. who is our god.

Ext. Kennedy airport – USA

Harry gets down from airplane and looks for john. Stand outside with harry name on a board. Harry waves hand to john. And hi five. john help him load the suitcase in the trunk.

JOHN TO HARRY

Per has a meeting he sends me to pick you up.

Harry.

Thanks for picking me up.

Layer 1 harry impressed by john and instead of joining in IT he changes his subject and join theology.

Layer 2 harry stay with per also a theology student. A scholar.

Layer 3 harry usually end up an argument with per. Per is wise and reserve person harry meet asylum a theology student.

While harry is liberal say anything to per.

Layer 3 harry takes john to temple.

Layer 4 they discuss about various deities.

Layer 5. while going back harry ask how he interpretate his journey to temple.

John says what about taking you both to the church. A religion major part of people practicing. Jesus is the only god. Per smile.

[SUNIL BATRA]

I, Sunil Batra, learn that story revolved around harry. each episode starts with hook and passing through intriguing world.’

Harry

<div>Harry is the main character. He is an IT expert but influence by john
get the admission in theology in New YORK, USA. He is liberal in thought and
not afraid of exploring the different religion.</div>

He is morally independent and
secretive as he hides from asylum a girl friend from Iran that he is already
engaged in India before, His Irani girlfriend in the USA.

He impressed by all
the religion from the world. He stayed with per another theology student of a
residence of USA. Harry feels oblige to per as he allows harry to stay with him till,
he is independent.

per is calm and serene and while harry is chatty and gabby.
There is conflict between per and harry quite often. Harry always wins as per
is serene nature.

All the advice from per goes in trash. Harry is harsh toward
per. but per keep quiet and bare insult. Harry later feels and asked for apologies.

Harry takes john to temple. John takes harry to church. Harry is liberal open
to all religion.

He wanted to marry asylum but after he covert to Muslim he
could not pass through the Muharram beating himself for sin. He left asylum.

He
went to Jewish church with other friend Abel and learn Jewish religion.

He used
to tease Chinese girl Chen for not having God.

He confuses and per whom he
calls as simple person explain him our all god is one.

concept.

Harry’s story is a poignant exploration of identity, faith, and the pursuit of truth in a diverse and interconnected world.

harry intriguing world.

Harry’s intriguing world encompasses a vibrant tapestry of intellectual curiosity, spiritual exploration, and interpersonal dynamics.

Within this world, Harry navigates the complexities of belief systems, from his IT background to his immersion in theology, showcasing a diverse range of perspectives and ideologies.

His relationships, both romantic and platonic, add layers of depth and conflict, revealing the intricacies of human connection.

The interplay between Harry’s assertiveness and Per’s serene nature creates a dynamic tension that underscores the journey of self-discovery and growth. Amidst this backdrop, Harry confronts moral dilemmas, grapples with personal identity, and ultimately seeks meaning and understanding in a richly textured and ever-evolving landscape of faith, culture, and human experience.

[SUNIL BATRA]

my email address is sunilgbatra@gmail.com

[SUNIL BATRA]

harry is liberal in thinking. he is engaged in India. visited USA. to join IT but influence by john join religion. he thinks he is good in religion. he easily changeable. when asylum propose him and he took him to Pakistan to change the religion in asylum he is beaten in the day of Mahrrum he left asylum and come to USA back. per with whom he staying as guest and per was supporting him moneywise. he drives taxi to pull up his college fee. and really impressed by lottery ticket. his friend john always laughs at him. john religion was Christianity, and he never goes to church. but being religion student. he took harry to church. and show him how is his religion. harry impressed by church. he has a friend from Jewish community. he reads torah. celebrate Hunka. he explains harry his law. JEWISH GUY has a Chianese Christian girlfriend always irritated by harry when he said your religion is to worship parents. per is a wise guy he listens harry sometimes give harry indirect advice, but he never listen to per. sometimes insult per, but he calmly accepts it he is a wise guy. Harry always rebuts in the class. but per smile always. asylum tries to convince it is one time affair it will never happen again. but he is stubbed and refuse to marry. harry met with accident and he has to come back to India he says sorry to asylum and per. per explaining to class how our all god is one.

ChatGPT

It sounds like Harry is a complex character who is influenced by various religious and cultural experiences throughout his journey. Here’s a summary of his traits and experiences based on the provided information:

1. Liberal Thinking: Harry is described as having a liberal mindset, open to different ideas and experiences.

2. Engaged in India, Visited USA: Harry is engaged in India but has visited the USA, where he initially planned to join the IT industry.

3. Influence of Religion: Harry’s path is influenced by John, leading him to explore and join a religion. He believes he is good in this newfound religion but appears easily swayed and changeable.

4. Encounters in Pakistan: Harry’s experiences in Pakistan, particularly being beaten during Moharram, lead him to leave and return to the USA.

5. Financial Struggles and Impressionable Nature: Harry struggles financially, driving a taxi to pay for his college fees. He is also impressed by the allure of a lottery ticket.

6. Influence of Different Religions: Harry is exposed to Christianity through John and Judaism through his friend. He finds aspects of both religions intriguing.

7. Interactions with Per: Per, a wise individual, offers indirect advice to Harry, who sometimes insults him but Per remains calm and understanding.

8. Rejection of Marriage and Stubbornness: Despite Aslum’s attempts to convince him, Harry refuses to marry, displaying stubbornness.

9. Accident and Reflection: Harry’s accident prompts him to apologize to Aslum and Per, perhaps indicating some level of reflection on his actions and decisions.

10. Unity of God: Per emphasizes the unity of all gods, likely trying to promote harmony and understanding among different religious beliefs.

Overall, Harry’s journey involves grappling with his identity, beliefs, and influences from various cultures and religions, showcasing a dynamic and evolving character.

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please explain harry empathy, distress, cos piracy. deception, emotion, relationship hook, moral Delima, mystery, potential layer and character layers. intrigue etc.

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Certainly! Let’s delve deeper into Harry’s character traits and experiences, focusing on empathy, distress, conspiracy, deception, emotion, relationships, moral dilemmas, mystery, potential layers, and character intrigue:

1. Empathy: Harry demonstrates empathy through his interactions with Per, even though he sometimes insults him. Per’s calm acceptance of Harry’s behavior indicates that Harry’s empathy is not always outwardly expressed but exists within him.

2. Distress: Harry experiences distress when he is beaten during Moharram in Pakistan, prompting him to leave the situation and return to the USA. This distress highlights his vulnerability and the impact of his experiences on his emotional well-being.

3. Conspiracy: Harry’s involvement with Aslum, who tries to convince him to change his religion and refuses to marry, could involve elements of conspiracy. Aslum’s attempts to manipulate Harry’s beliefs and decisions add a layer of intrigue and potential danger to the story.

4. Deception: Harry may be subject to deception, both from external sources like Aslum and potentially from his own internal conflicts and uncertainties about his beliefs and identity.

5. Emotion: Harry’s character is driven by emotion, particularly his desire for financial stability, his search for meaning through religion, and his interactions with others, which are often emotionally charged.

6. Relationship Hooks: Harry’s relationships with John, Per, Aslum, and others serve as hooks that draw the reader into his world. Each relationship adds complexity to his character and drives the narrative forward.

7. Moral Dilemma: Harry faces moral dilemmas throughout the story, such as whether to stay true to his own beliefs or succumb to pressure from others, particularly regarding religion and marriage.

8. Mystery: The mysterious aspects of Harry’s journey, including his sudden change of heart towards religion, his experiences in Pakistan, and his relationships with various characters, create intrigue and keep the reader guessing about his true motivations and intentions.

9. Potential Layers: Harry’s character has potential layers that could be explored further, such as his past experiences, cultural background, psychological motivations, and internal conflicts.

10. Character Intrigue: Harry’s character is inherently intriguing due to his complexity, vulnerability, and the ambiguity surrounding his actions and decisions. Readers are likely to be drawn to unraveling the mysteries of his personality and journey.

By incorporating these elements into Harry’s character and storyline, you can deepen the complexity and intrigue of the narrative, making it more engaging and compelling for the audience.

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1. Empathy: Per demonstrates empathy through his calm demeanor and ability to forgive Harry’s mistakes without losing his temper. His understanding nature allows him to relate to others’ emotions and situations, making him a supportive and compassionate figure.

2. Intrigue: Per’s reserved nature and deep knowledge of religion create an air of mystery around him. His silence and unexpected actions, such as beating another student in reply, pique curiosity and invite further exploration into his character.

3. Relationship Hook: Per’s relationship with Harry is intriguing due to their contrasting personalities. Despite Harry’s tendency to make mistakes, Per remains patient and understanding, hinting at a deeper bond or understanding between them that goes beyond surface-level interactions.

4. Mystery: Per’s silent demeanor and unexpected actions, like beating a student in reply, contribute to an overarching sense of mystery surrounding his character. His knowledge of religion and the cliffhanger in his narration add layers to his enigmatic personality, leaving others curious about his motivations and backstory.

5. Potential Hooks: Per’s character offers various potential hooks for storytelling, such as exploring his past to uncover the reasons behind his reserved nature and deep knowledge of religion. Additionally, his relationships with other characters, including Harry and the beaten student, could be further developed to reveal more about his personality and motivations.

6. Moral Dilemma: Per’s reaction to the challenge in class and his subsequent beating of another student raises moral questions about the use of violence and the limits of forgiveness. This event could spark internal conflict within Per, forcing him to confront his actions and reconsider his approach to handling conflicts in the future.

7. Shocking Event: Per’s unexpected beating of another student serves as a shocking event that challenges perceptions of his character. This action not only surprises the audience but also prompts questions about Per’s underlying emotions and motivations, adding depth to his character.

8. Character Layers: Per’s character is multi-dimensional, with layers that include his calm exterior, deep empathy, knowledge of religion, and capacity for unexpected actions. Exploring these layers can uncover the complexities of his personality and provide insight into his past experiences and motivations.

9. Engaging and Emotional: Per’s character offers both engagement and emotional depth for the audience. His interactions with other characters, his moral dilemmas, and his mysterious nature create a compelling narrative that evokes curiosity and emotional investment from the audience.

Overall, Per’s character presents a rich tapestry of traits and potential story elements that can be explored to create a captivating and emotionally resonant narrative.

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It sounds like Per is a reserved and calm individual who prefers to listen rather than talk excessively. He also seems to have a strong understanding of religious concepts, as evidenced by his knowledge and ability to narrate stories related to it. Despite Harry’s mistakes, Per remains patient and composed, never losing his temper. However, it’s noted that Per is not entirely passive, as seen when he responded to a classmate’s challenge by beating them in a reply, suggesting that he can assert himself when necessary. The mention of a cliffhanger in his narration about “one god” in the second movie adds an intriguing element to his character, leaving the audience curious about what happens next.

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I, SUNIL Batra learned, irony is the most important part of each episode. Without irony show will be dull and audience will not see the show further since they have nothing to explore.

irony episode 11. Walking dead.

Assignment 1. And assignment 2

In walking dead, will people survive in the apocalyptic world or they will be declared as zombie.

Will Shane take revenge or kill rick? (Character irony)

Will Dave comes back and take revenge from Rick for tying him down when the rest of the crew escape when among bomb blast, he survived, character irony,

Will Lori tell rick that she is pregnant or keep on hiding and why,

Will they find Sophia?

Overall, irony often arises from the tension between the character, belief, action and grim realities they face in a world overrun by the undead.

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I Sunil Batra learned that by plotting and layering characters you can write easily and add easily to the story any data

Genre religion

Concept. IS OUR GOD ONE AND HOW?

The Walking dead

ASSIGNMENT 1.

Character LAYER

1. RICK got injured and taken to hospital by his best friend and colleague Shane. he up and found himself among the dead people.

2. He wanted to meet his family.

3. He was surrounded by the dead people. And the car gas finished.

4. He able to reach home find his family is not home.

5. his journey back to Atlanta shelter to find his wife Lori’s and son carl’s

6. rick finds his family living in the

7. Shane shocked to see nick. He, Shane loves his wife Lori and son carl’s

8. Rick is emotionally week while Shane is stronger.

Rick wants to keep his family safe

9. Sophia a little girl in the group of survivals lost when protecting herself from the zombie attack.

10. rick finds himself responsible for that incident.

11. Rick’s sons got hurt while they finding Sophia.

12. Ric looking for doctor to take the bullet out.

13. They reach the shelter and doctor start operating.

14. Equally hurt Shane.

15. Shane help rick to bring antibiotics and respirator.

16. Rick’s son revives and LORI thanks Shane.

17. Rick ‘s wife positive for pregnancy test.

CHARACTER LAYER WITH AI.

PRe -APOCALYPSE

1. Strong sense of duty and morality

2. Family man

Strong family value and protective instincts

3. Waking up to the apocalypse

4. Adaptation

5. Leadership emergence

6. Moral dilemmas. His sense of right and wrong.

7. Struggle for humanity.

8. often emphasizing the importance of empathy. compassion and corporation amidst the chaos.

9. Conflict with Shane

10.Clash over leadership and moral differences. Adding layer of tension and complexity to rick’s character.

11.Loss and grief

12.Father’s son dynamic – rick striving to protect and guide his son while

also recognizing carl’s growing independence resilience

13. Journey toward redemption- he grapples with his past mistake and strives to rebuild a sense of hope and purpose in the midst of devastation.

Plot layer.

1. Rick and shane both worked in same department as police chief.

2. Rick got shot and had a wound and admitted in the hospital and got up among walking dead people.

3. Rick and Shane form separate group and shane staying in the tent with nick wife and son carl’s.

4. Rick escaped from zombies he met other guy both try to solve the problems

5. Rick did not find his family home. He faced zombie meets other group. Took responsibility of that group.

6. They found abandoned house All moved there.

7. Sooner they attacked by zombies. They tried to move from that shelter.

8. Shane was always against rick.

9. They built there house a broken prison

PLOT WITH AI

THE SEQUENCE COVER THE MAJOR EVENT AND DEVELOPMENT IN THE FIRST 11CHAPTERS. OF THE WALKING DEAD SERIES HIGHLIGHTING THE STRUGGLE OF THE SURVIVERS AS THEY FIGHT TO SURVIVE in post- apocalyptic world overrun by Zombies.

my story,

harry. (Harminder) came to USA TO STUDY COMPUTER SCIENCE, very liberal guy, but ends up in religion when he met john who impressed by Hindu religion.

He met Asylum a Muslim girl.

Will he convert religion

Will he marry her.

Harry met another friend from jeruselum

And his Chinese girl friend

Did harry survive in this world obeying god or takeplo it easy as fun.

Plot layer

Harry relationship with an other friends.

Peru a scholar will harry treat him right.

How he will resolve the god is one faces are many

WITH AI

HE TALKS ABOUT DIFFERENT RELIGION HAS THERE BELIEF NO SIGHN GOD IS ONE.

I have to prove it.

PLOT LAYER

HARRY COMES TO USA AND JOIN SCHOOL.

HE DRIVES TAXI FOR LIVING PLUS PER HELP HIM

John take harry to church he is greatly expressed

Harry takes john to temple

Chinese girl irritated by harry

Judish man celebrating Hanukah

Harry reaction to Jewish religion

Prove God is one by per converted in to a saint.

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BWTV WITH AI LESSON 9 Inviting OBSESSION THROUGHT OPEN LOOPS.

ASSIGNMENT 1

THE WALKING DEAD.

2. Every scene ends in cliff hanger and open loops. When Sophia lost. it yet to resolve. Carl’s get injured it moves to three episodes ahead to resolve whether he should be alive or declared dead.

1. Why people are dying and how to resolve this. Difficult for nick to shoot the dead people walking.

Assignment 2

GOALS

Whether we find Sophia and save carl’s. Is the injury to Shane is declared him walking dead,

2.goals related to big picture?

Whether they take control of disease and reach to the safe place.

2. Whether Shane declared dead. Or other were affected.

3. Couldn’t find Sophia

4. Shane and nick are good friend, and police officer. But Shane loves nicks wife.

Consequences

Will they be caught disease?

2. they are catching diseases and dying.

3. Shane and his partner went to get the respirator for carl’s from dead city when Shane lost his partner.

Solving problems:

Major problem. Carl’s need respirator to survive. Sophia is still lost.

They split in to four to get the job done.

Relationship.

Shane being affected. may be new relationship form in next episode.

Carl’s being sick. Both rick and his wife under tension.

DANGER /SURVIVAL/RISK

Can Shane survive or putting him and all in danger. Or he need medicine to survive.

2.

Chapter with AI.

Survival depends on the severity of injury Shane gets.

What is the relationship of Shane with rick in walking dead?

Shane served as father figure to rick’s son carl and has complicated relationship with rick over leadership, morality, and Shane romantic feeling of with rick’s wife LORI.

Another way to relate Shane with rick is as former partners in law enforcement. Shane and rick work together as police officer in same department, forming a close bond through their share experience on the job.

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I Sunil Batra , learned that its easier to write if you have map in front of you for each character and can write subtext easily depend upon their personality.

WALKING DEAD.

ASSIGNMENT 1

Nick is the main character.

Interaction with Shane a police officer, also a good friend of rick underneath a rivalry with nick, because he wants his wife.

Relationship map: rick his wife, Lori. and son. Sophia and his mother. Andrea and his father who killed by zombie in last episode. Amy and Lori sisters Amy died in last episode by zombies.

ASSIGHNMENT 2

Rick and shane.

Surface. Good friend and do care for each other.

Common ground: police officer

Conflict: Shane loved Lori, rick’s wife

History: how to protect each other from zombies

Subtext. Affair of Shane with Lori rick’s wife

Relationship ARC . – LORI is Rick wife and has son carol

2. Lori and son carol

Surface. Lori and carol have close bond

Common ground. Both are week and strong.

Conflict. Lori do not want her child to play with dangerous weapons but Shane encourages him to touch and explore every dangerous thing.

History: Carol learning to cope with the dangerous thing.

Subtext: Shane relationship with the carol

Relationship arc: Shane , rick ,and carol and Lori.

3. Dareck: the elderly person doe or Dereck.

Surface. Accompany Shane group , survival.

Common ground: protect the group from zombies.

Conflict: sentimental person. guide the troop. He is in conflict with Andrea. Sometimes obeyed sometimes not.

History: protect the group from zombie. When got struck in SCIENTIST chamber. Andrea refused to go. He insisted her to go otherwise killed by the fire in the chamber. He did not move until he convince her to go.

Subtext. He knows about the affairs of LORI and Shane. But keep silent and hide the facts.

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I Sunil Batra, learned that it’s easier to write if you have map in front of you for each character and can write subtext easily depend upon their personality.

WALKING DEAD.

ASSIGNMENT 1

Nick is the main character.

Interaction with Shane a police officer, also a good friend of rick underneath a rivalry with nick, because he wants his wife.

Relationship map: rick his wife, Lori. and son. Sophia and his mother. Andrea and his father who killed by zombie in last episode. Amy and Lori sisters Amy died in last episode by zombies.

ASSIGHNMENT 2

Rick and Shane.

Surface. Good friend and do care for each other.

Common ground: police officer

Conflict: Shane loved Lori, rick’s wife

History: how to protect each other from zombies

Subtext. Affair of Shane with Lori rick’s wife

Relationship ARC . – LORI is Rick wife and has son carol

2. Lori and son carol

Surface. Lori and carol have close bond.

Common ground. Both are week and strong.

Conflict. Lori do not want her child to play with dangerous weapons, but Shane encourages him to touch and explore every dangerous thing.

History: Carol learning to cope with the dangerous thing.

Subtext: Shane relationship with the carol

Relationship arc: Shane , rick ,and carol and Lori.

3. Dareck: the elderly person doe or Dereck.

Surface. Accompany Shane group , survival.

Common ground: protect the group from zombies.

Conflict: sentimental person. guide the troop. He is in conflict with Andrea. Sometimes obeyed sometimes not.

History: protect the group from zombie. When got struck in SCIENTIST chamber. Andrea refused to go. He insisted her to go otherwise killed by the fire in the chamber. He did not move until he convince her to go.

Subtext. He knows about the affairs of LORI and Shane. But keep silent and hide the facts.