[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Day 3: Transformational Journeys that Change Lives
Sylvia’s Transformational Journey
What I learned doing this assignment is…the method for putting together the logline is wonderful. It made the refining process easy.
THE TRANSFORMATIONAL JOURNEY
This process starts with a logline that focuses on the transformation of the story. In it, you want to be really clear about three things:
1. Lead character with an issue
A senior traditionalist widow
2. Journey
Must overcome her fears of modern social technology
3. Transformation
Until she discovers her love of life.

LOGLINE FOR THE TRANSFORMATIONAL JOURNEY:
A senior traditionalist widow must overcome her fears of modern social technology until she discovers her love of life.

DEFINE THE OLD WAYS
Traditional in her courtship/relationship ways
Set in her ways
Stubborn
Non-technical
Bored
Sarcastic
Cut off from modern social technology platforms
Single

DEFINE THE NEW WAYS
Open to changes
Technology savvy
Fun-loving
Social Butterfly

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – WIM Module 10 – Lesson 6: Great Pitch 1: High Concepts and Elevator Pitches
Sylvia’s High Concept/Elevator Pitch
What I learned doing this assignment is…I believe I am finally understanding the differences of loglines, HCs and EPs. I can’t thank you enough for this. It will be good for me to practice these exercises with some other screen plays I have written to get them down. The exercises also gets me to think of getting to the core of my story and upping the ante. It’s about raising the stakes and writing a more interesting story. These very much help. Plus, they help in organizing and telling others succinctly the story.
ASSIGNMENT
Tell us your High Concept and Elevator Pitch.
High Concept:

“How do you keep your sanity when your husband is a sex addict, his Madam/pimp is your ex-lover and they both want your identity?”

Elevator Pitch:
“I’m writing a story about stealing your lovers identity.”

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – WIM Module 10 – Lesson 5: Using Hooks to Create Pitches
Sylvia’s Synopsis Hooks
What I learned doing this assignment is…This was an eye opener. Thank you so much. Writing thru the assignments made it much easier to write a first draft synopsis—let alone a synopsis period. These assignments also helped me understand much more about the synopsis and it’s function in telling the essence/hooks of the story.
ASSIGNMENT
Select 6 – 10 hooks that could give an overview of your story.
Organize those hooks into a sequence that makes sense for the story:

1. Identity Crisis
2. Similarity to a box-office success. Inspired by the 1945 movie, “Scarlet Street”
3. Stolen identity-the protagonists ex- takes on her identity in stealing credit for her amazing artwork.
4. Protagonists Husband is having an affair with her brother.
5. The husband and protagonists ex-lover work together to control the protagonist and, in the end, turn on each other.
6. Villain #1: (P’s Ex) Secretly a high powered call-girl Madam.
7. Villain #2 is a sex addict.
Using those hooks as an outline, write a first draft of your synopsis.
Identity Crisis
Genre: Romantic Thriller

A story inspired by the 1945 thriller, Scarlet Street”, an artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.

The protagonists ex- takes on her identity in stealing credit for her amazing artwork. She works together with the protagonists husband who is having an affair with the protags brother. The two villains, the ex- and the husband eventually turn on each other as it is revealed that one is secretly a high powered call-girl Madam that has been fueling the other’s sexual addiction. The protag is in the middle being manipulated with her talent as she no longer knows whom she can trust nor what her role in life is any longer.

Just when her identity in her art world turns upside down, she is given divorce papers and finds her bank accounts are all frozen. She can’t afford legal counsel for the divorce much less get a lawyer to help her get her artifacts back and proof of ownership and creation.

When she hits rock bottom, a shimmering light appears from her brother whom had a suspicion all along that things were not right. To her surprise, he helps her with photo and written proof against the false allegations. The protagonist finds her true self, justice in humanity and begins a new life.
Include your list of hooks.

The 10 Components of Marketability
• A. Unique. Yes, needs to be better/strengthened.
• B. Great Title. YES. “Identity Crisis”
• C. True. N/A
• D. Timely. Perhaps… good question.
• E. It’s a first. N/A
• F. Ultimate. N/A but open to ideas
• G. Wide audience appeal. No, it’s for adults. My thought anyways.
• H. Adapted from a popular book. N/A
• I. Similarity to a box-office success. Inspired by the 1945 movie, “Scarlet Street”
• J. A great role for a bankable actor. I am hoping.
The 10 most interesting things:
• 1-Three-way (plus one!) conspiring and infidelity.
• 2-Stolen identity-the protagonists ex- takes on her identity in stealing credit for her amazing artwork.
• 3-Villain #1: (P’s Ex) Secretly a high powered call-girl Madam.
• 4-The husband and protagonists ex-lover work together to control the protagonist and, in the end, turn on each other.
• 5-Protagonists Husband is having an affair with her brother.
• 6-An art exhibit fire brings the protagonist together with her old flame.
• 7-Hero: An amazing art painter, world renowned.
• 8-Villain #2: (P’s Husband) Clueless about life, things have come too easy for him. Naïve. Thus, he pisses people off and has no clue why or how he does it.
• 9- Protagonists brother was playing as if interested in having an affair with her husband. He suspected foul play. He wants to save her dignity and help her gain her self-respect back.
• 10- Villain #2 is a sex addict.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Day 2: Define The Change
Sylvia’s First Three Decisions
What I learned doing this assignment is…finding the truth in the story by answering these questions is a great exercise. It gives focus to the intent. Great questions/assignment.
ASSIGNMENT:
Give us your three decisions.
1. What is your profound truth?
To find love in others, you must first love yourself.

2. What is the change your movie will cause with an audience?
Empowers the audience to find the humor in intimate relationships.

3. What is your Entertainment Vehicle that you will tell this story through?
Metaphor / Satire–Online dating platform thru the “ages”.
World: Ballroom Dance class mates.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Day 1: What is Profound?
Sylvia’s Analysis of Groundhog Day
What I learned doing this assignment is…every time I see this movie, I see more depth in it. And, with these insight questions, I see yet more.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Hey all, I won’t be exchanging with the group at this Module.

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 11: Time to Exchange Feedback
Sylvia’s Outline Exchange 1

Title: Identity Crisis
Written By: Sylvia Krawczyk
Email address: SMKrawczyk33@earthlink.net
Genre: Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 10: Making Every Scene Fascinating
Sylvia’s Fascinating Scene Outlines!
What I learned from doing this assignment is…more ways to clarify and up the scenes. Also, the difficulty of AI. It took me 3 days as it kept logging me out. Also, it kept telling me I had too long a post. Last, it kept changing my prompt answers to different formats and going off in tangents. More reason that AI is an assistant and we need actual human writers!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
Scene 1
INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT
Description: Bad sex between Hope and Will. Will is mechanical as Hope lays bored.
• Beginning (Uncomfortable Moment): Hope and Will engage in uninspired intimacy. Hope’s blank stare contrasts Will’s perfunctory attempts, creating palpable discomfort.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): Hope’s thoughts wander to Joy as she stares at the ceiling, questioning her emotions and the life she’s built with Will.
• Ending (Suspense): Will rolls over, indifferent, leaving Hope alone in her dissatisfaction. She clutches a tattered letter hidden under her pillow, hinting at her unresolved past.
Scene 2
INT. ART EXHIBIT – EVENING
Description: Hope showcases her older works, smiling. She looks at her wedding ring with a frown and carries a tattered letter. Many people are admiring her artistic ability. One confident woman especially.
• Beginning (Intrigue): The art exhibit is lively and sophisticated, with Hope receiving compliments on her work. A mysterious, confident woman catches her eye, observing Hope from a distance.
• Middle (Mystery): Hope grips her wedding ring, deep in thought, before quickly slipping the letter into her pocket when the woman approaches. Their brief exchange is layered with unspoken tension.
• Ending (Superior Position): The confident woman, revealed to be Joy, introduces herself as the new curator. The audience knows she has a history with Hope that is unknown to everyone else.
Scene 3
INT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Hope and Joy lock eyes and smile. The sight of Joy takes Hope's breath away. Joy is the new art curator that wants to exhibit Hope’s work. Hope rejects.
• Beginning (Intrigue): Hope notices Joy from across the room, and their locked eyes spark a mix of recognition and curiosity.
• Middle (Uncomfortable Moment): Joy approaches Hope, commenting on her work with subtle flattery while bringing up their shared history, creating tension.
• Ending (Mislead/Reveal): Joy offers to curate Hope’s next exhibit, but Hope declines, masking her unease with a polite smile.
Scene 4
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Joy lights up a cigarette. Will runs late to Joy’s art exhibit. Will is charming to all others and cold to Hope. Hope sees a cryptic text on Will’s phone.
• Beginning (More Interesting Setting): Outside the exhibit, Joy’s confident demeanor contrasts with Hope’s visible discomfort as they converse under the flickering streetlights.
• Middle (Mystery): Will arrives late, greets everyone warmly except Hope, and his secretive behavior piques suspicion.
• Ending (Suspense): Hope glimpses a cryptic text on Will’s phone, heightening her unease as he quickly locks the screen.
Scene 5
EXT. MEN'S RESTROOM – CONT.
Description: Will primps himself in the men’s room and takes off his wedding band.
• Beginning (Uncertainty): Will stares at himself in the mirror, fidgeting with his tie as he prepares for something unsaid.
• Middle (Intrigue): He adjusts his appearance meticulously, muttering under his breath about “keeping things clean.”
• Ending (Major Twist): Will removes his wedding ring, slipping it into his pocket before exiting with a steely determination.
Scene 6
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Will sneaks out of the art exhibit. Will texts Hope that he had to go and couldn’t get their groceries.
• Beginning (Suspense): Will slips out through a side door, glancing around nervously to ensure no one sees him.
• Middle (Betrayal): He texts Hope an excuse, while calling someone else with a smile that suggests a hidden agenda.
• Ending (Cliffhanger): The scene ends with Will walking into a shadowed alley, disappearing from view.
Scene 7
INT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Joy comforts Hope after Will’s betrayal.
• Beginning (Uncomfortable Moment): Hope stands awkwardly alone, fielding sympathetic smiles from guests after Will’s departure.
• Middle (Superior Position): Joy approaches with calculated concern, offering kind words while subtly planting seeds of doubt about Will.
• Ending (Intrigue): Hope reluctantly opens up, and Joy’s smile hints at deeper motives as she offers support.
Scene 7.1
INT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: A suspicious fire breaks out. As chaos ensues, Hope instinctively tries to protect her art. Joy reappears, saving Hope.
• Beginning (Suspense): Guests notice smoke curling into the room, and panic spreads as the fire alarm blares.
• Middle (Uncertainty): Hope hesitates between saving herself or her work, ultimately rushing to protect her art.
• Ending (Hero Moment): Joy pulls Hope away from the danger, cementing herself as Hope’s savior amidst the chaos.
Scene 8
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Joy tells Hope she’s changed—a better person—and wants to help Hope rediscover her voice. Joy insists she curate Hope’s next exhibit to make the monies for the repairs. Hope reluctantly agrees.
• Beginning (Intrigue): Joy offers Hope a cigarette, feigning nonchalance while observing Hope’s shaken demeanor.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): Hope wrestles with guilt over her financial losses and doubt about Joy’s intentions but feels cornered into agreeing.
• Ending (Mislead/Reveal): Joy’s triumphant smile is hidden as Hope accepts her offer.
Scene 9
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope struggles to create new art. She stares at a blank canvas, overwhelmed by her stagnant creativity.
• Beginning (Uncertainty): Hope sets up her materials, trying to channel inspiration, but the canvas looms ominously blank.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): Flashbacks of the fire and her marital troubles swirl in her mind, blocking her creativity.
• Ending (Mystery): She leaves the studio with a defeated sigh, leaving behind an empty canvas and unanswered questions.
Scene 10
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – CONT.
Description: Joy visits Hope’s studio. She critiques Hope’s current work, subtly undermining her confidence by being passive-aggressive.
• Beginning (Superior Position): Joy enters, immediately scanning Hope’s unfinished work with a neutral expression, hiding her true thoughts.
• Middle (Uncomfortable Moment): Her critiques begin as helpful but turn passive-aggressive, eroding Hope’s confidence.
• Ending (Intrigue): Joy suggests bold changes, claiming to “see potential,” leaving Hope confused and questioning herself.
Scene 11
INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT
Description: Hope meets Joy for dinner. The atmosphere is charged with sexual tension as they reminisce about their past relationship.
• Beginning (Intrigue): The women exchange pleasantries, but their lingering gazes hint at deeper feelings.
• Middle (Uncomfortable Moment): Their conversation turns personal, and Joy’s playful touches and suggestive remarks heighten the tension.
• Ending (Mislead/Reveal): Hope blushes as Joy leans in close, but Joy abruptly changes the subject, leaving Hope flustered.
Scene 12
INT. HOPE’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
Description: Hope stares at her wedding ring in bed while thinking about Joy. She takes the ring off and hides it in a drawer.
• Beginning (Suspense): Hope twists her wedding ring absentmindedly while staring into the dark.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): Thoughts of Joy clash with memories of her failing marriage, pushing her to a decision.
• Ending (Uncertainty): She slips the ring into a drawer, its absence feeling both freeing and foreboding.
Scene 12.1
INT. BEDROOM – CONT.
Description: Hope stumbles upon evidence of Will’s affair with someone.
• Beginning (Superior Position): Hope rummages through a drawer, searching for something unrelated, as the audience notices an incriminating letter.
• Middle (Suspense): Her hands tremble as she reads the letter, realizing its implications.
• Ending (Cliffhanger): The scene ends with her staring at the letter in shock, her next move uncertain.
Scene 13
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – NIGHT
Description: Will arrives at another one of Hope’s events late and drunk. He avoids Hope and engages in conversation with Michael, becoming overly familiar and flirtatious.
• Beginning (More Interesting Setting): Will stumbles into the exhibit, drawing glances from attendees who whisper about his disheveled appearance.
• Middle (Betrayal): His behavior with Michael becomes inappropriately intimate, sparking rumors.
• Ending (Superior Position): Hope watches from a distance, her expression darkening as she pieces things together.
Scene 14
INT. ART EXHIBIT – LATER
Description: Hope confronts Will about his behavior. Will deflects and dismisses her concerns.
• Beginning (Uncomfortable Moment): Hope corners Will near the bar, her voice low but angry as she demands answers.
• Middle (Misinterpretation): Will accuses Hope of being paranoid and dramatic, skillfully deflecting her accusations.
• Ending (Cliffhanger): Hope storms off, unresolved tension hanging heavily in the air.
Scene 15
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – NIGHT
Description: Hope, emotionally drained, tries to paint but ends up staring blankly at the canvas. Joy sends her a cryptic text: “I can make it all better.”
• Beginning (Suspense): Hope grips her paintbrush tightly, trying to pour her feelings into the canvas, but nothing comes.
• Middle (Mystery): Her phone buzzes with Joy’s cryptic text, its tone both comforting and ominous.
• Ending (Uncertainty): She stares at her phone, torn between replying and ignoring it.
Scene 16
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – NIGHT (LATER)
Description: Hope responds to Joy’s text, agreeing to meet. She closes her phone and gazes at her unfinished work, feeling a mix of dread and excitement.
• Beginning (Suspense): Hope hesitates before typing a response, her fingers hovering over the keyboard.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): She rereads the message multiple times, second-guessing herself.
• Ending (Cliffhanger): She sends the message, the sound of the sent notification echoing in the silence.
Scene 17
INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT
Description: Hope and Joy meet for dinner. Joy is charismatic, seductive, and presses Hope about taking bold risks in her art. The conversation is flirtatious, but there’s an underlying tension.
• Beginning: More interesting setting: The restaurant is upscale but dimly lit, with an abstract painting on the wall mirroring Hope's work. Joy playfully critiques it as "safe," setting the tone for their power play.
• Middle: Uncomfortable moment: Joy leans in, her words dripping with seduction, as she challenges Hope’s artistic choices, subtly questioning her courage. Hope shifts in her chair, struggling between attraction and irritation.
• Ending: Intrigue: Joy leaves Hope with a pointed statement: “Sometimes you have to burn the past to paint the future,” leaving Hope pondering whether it’s encouragement or manipulation.
Scene 18
INT. WILL’S OFFICE – DAY
Description: Will is at work, visibly stressed. He exchanges flirtatious texts with Michael, his tension easing into relief as they plan to meet later. He ignores Hope’s calls.
• Beginning: Superior position: The audience knows about Will’s affair with Michael, but Hope’s incoming call makes us wonder if she suspects it. Will’s agitation heightens suspense.
• Middle: Mislead / Reveal: Will stares at his phone, pretending to be preoccupied with work, but the reveal comes as he eagerly responds to Michael’s suggestive text, his demeanor softening.
• Ending: Mystery: Will’s phone buzzes again, and he smirks. We don’t see the message, but it’s clear his secret life continues to grow, leaving us wondering how long he can keep it hidden.
Scene 19
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope works on a new piece, inspired by Joy’s push for boldness. The painting is raw, chaotic, and aggressive, reflecting her inner turmoil. Joy is the naked subject. She praises Hope’s work, calling it a breakthrough.
• Beginning: More interesting setting: In Hope’s chaotic studio, cluttered with past failures and discarded ideas, she begins painting Joy, the raw intensity of her brushstrokes contrasting with the calm sunlight streaming through the windows.
• Middle: Internal Dilemma: As Hope paints, she feels torn between trusting Joy’s praise and sensing an underlying manipulation. Joy, lounging naked, subtly suggests Hope has never been this bold before, forcing Hope to question her authenticity.
• Ending: Intrigue: Joy casually places a hand on one of Hope’s earlier discarded works, hinting that she sees value in it while emphasizing her control over Hope’s artistic direction.
Scene 20
INT. GALLERY – DAY
Description: Hope’s new paintings are displayed at a private showing organized by Joy. The crowd admires her boldness, but Hope feels disconnected from her work. One painting is of Joy in a seductive pose. Joy basks in the praise.
• Beginning: Suspense: The private showing begins with hushed conversations as attendees approach Hope’s bold new pieces. They pause, mesmerized by the provocative painting of Joy, setting Hope on edge.
• Middle: Misinterpretation: Guests interpret Hope’s work as a reflection of Joy’s influence, praising Joy as her muse. Hope forces a smile but internally questions whether her work is even hers anymore.
• Ending: Betrayal: Joy takes credit for “pushing” Hope into this breakthrough in a toast, leaving Hope feeling overshadowed and used.
Scene 21
EXT. HOPE’S GALLERY – NIGHT
Description: Hope steps outside for air, overwhelmed by the success of the exhibit and her growing doubts about Joy’s role in her life. She notices Will arriving late again, this time with Michael. Will dismisses Hope. Michael is supportive of Hope, which angers Will.
• Beginning: Uncomfortable Moment: Hope leans against the gallery wall, her breathing uneven as she processes the praise and her doubts. Will arrives late, brushing past her without apology.
• Middle: Superior Position: Hope notices Will’s furtive glances toward Michael, sensing their closeness but not fully understanding it yet. Michael warmly compliments Hope’s exhibit, only adding to her confusion.
• Ending: Betrayal: Will coldly dismisses Hope’s unease with an offhand comment, leaving her feeling unsupported, while Michael offers her a meaningful look that hints at deeper truths.
Scene 22
INT. GALLERY – NIGHT
Hope confronts Will about his relationship with Michael. Will tries to deflect, but Hope demands answers. The confrontation escalates, leaving both feeling raw and exposed.
• Beginning: Suspense: Hope observes Will nervously avoiding eye contact as they walk through the gallery after hours. She asks a pointed question about Michael, her tone calm but unnerving.
• Middle: Betrayal: Will dismisses Hope’s accusation, but when she produces a receipt that proves his connection to Michael, his façade cracks. Hope presses harder, her voice rising, while Will struggles to maintain composure.
• Ending: Cliffhanger: Will storms out of the gallery, refusing to give Hope the answers she demands, leaving her standing alone, furious and devastated.
Scene 23
INT. JOY’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Hope arrives at Joy’s apartment, emotionally distraught. She seeks comfort from Joy, but Joy sees this as an opportunity to further manipulate her.
• Beginning: More Interesting Setting: Joy’s apartment is meticulously decorated with her curated collection of art. Hope’s disheveled appearance contrasts starkly with the polished environment, immediately setting her on edge.
• Middle: Intrigue: Joy consoles Hope, asking probing questions about her confrontation with Will. She offers support but shifts the blame subtly, planting the idea that Hope has been too forgiving.
• Ending: Mislead/Reveal: Joy hugs Hope warmly, her face hidden, but her eyes glint with satisfaction, hinting at her ulterior motives as Hope begins to trust her again.
Scene 24
INT. JOY’S APARTMENT – LATER THAT NIGHT
Hope stays over at Joy’s apartment. The atmosphere is intimate but unsettling. They drink wine, and the tension between them grows. Joy continues to subtly criticize Hope’s past choices while praising her current direction.
• Beginning: Uncomfortable Moment: Joy hands Hope a glass of wine, commenting on how “different” she looks from her younger self, stirring feelings of insecurity in Hope.
• Middle: Character Changes Radically: Joy reminisces about their shared past but shifts to critique Hope’s decisions since then. Her tone changes, veering from warm to cold, keeping Hope off balance.
• Ending: Suspense: As the night deepens, Hope grows more introspective while Joy leans in closer, her smile predatory. Hope senses the tension but is too vulnerable to act on her instincts.
Scene 25
INT. WILL’S OFFICE – DAY
Will meets Michael for lunch in his office. Their conversation is casual but increasingly tense as they discuss the future of their relationship.
• Beginning: Mystery: Michael brings lunch, mentioning something cryptic about their “future.” Will freezes, unsure how much Michael intends to push their relationship forward.
• Middle: External Dilemma: Michael presses Will to leave Hope, arguing they can’t continue in secrecy. Will hesitates, torn between protecting his image and pursuing what he wants.
• Ending: Cliffhanger: Michael stands to leave, saying, “If you won’t choose, I will.” Will’s panic rises as he watches him go, uncertain of what Michael might do next.
Scene 26
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Hope tries to work on a new painting but feels blocked. The pressure from Joy’s expectations and her unraveling personal life weighs heavily on her.
• Beginning: Misinterpretation: Hope stares at her blank canvas, imagining Joy’s voice criticizing her, though it’s only in her mind. She flinches, feeling inadequate.
• Middle: Internal Dilemma: Hope debates whether she’s pursuing art for herself or living up to Joy’s expectations. Her creative block deepens as her emotions swirl.
• Ending: Surprise: Her phone rings—it’s her brother. His vague comments about Will push her emotional turmoil to the brink, leaving her paralyzed.
Scene 26.1
INT. HOPE’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Hope acts suspicious, while Will panics internally, fearing she’ll discover his affair with her brother.
• Beginning: Superior Position: Hope quietly watches Will fumble with his phone, unaware that she already suspects him.
• Middle: Intrigue: Will stammers through excuses, trying to gauge how much Hope knows. She toys with him, asking indirect questions.
• Ending: Suspense: Hope leaves the room suddenly, leaving Will with his heart pounding, unsure if she knows the truth.
Scene 27
INT. HOPE’S APARTMENT – CONT.
Hope confronts Will about the affair with her brother.
• Beginning: Uncomfortable Moment: Hope throws her brother’s name into the conversation. Will freezes mid-sentence, realizing he’s been caught.
• Middle: Betrayal: Hope forces him to admit the affair, her voice shaking with anger and pain. Will tries to justify himself, but his excuses only deepen her hurt.
• Ending: Cliffhanger: Hope walks out of the room, leaving Will shattered as he faces the gravity of his actions.
Scene 28
EXT. STREET – NIGHT
Hope walks aimlessly through the city after her confrontation with Will.
• Beginning: More Interesting Setting: The city is dark and desolate, the streets eerily quiet. Hope wanders, feeling utterly alone.
• Middle: Suspense: A shadowy figure follows her briefly but disappears. Hope’s anxiety mirrors her inner turmoil.
• Ending: Cliffhanger: She reaches Joy’s apartment door, hesitating before knocking, unsure if she’s making the right choice.
Scene 29
INT. JOY’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Hope and Joy drink wine. Hope opens up about her confrontation with Will.
• Beginning: Mislead/Reveal: Joy feigns shock and concern as Hope recounts the betrayal, but her subtle comments shift the blame onto Hope.
• Middle: Intrigue: Joy leans in, her tone shifting to one of intimate understanding, encouraging Hope to see herself as the victim.
• Ending: Suspense: Their eyes meet, and Joy’s hand lingers on Hope’s shoulder. The tension builds as Hope wonders if she can truly trust Joy.
Scene 29.1
INT. COURTROOM – DAY
Hope sits in the courtroom watching Will as a confident lawyer. He charms everyone until he sees Hope. He walks past Hope and tells Michael they need to meet for a meeting in his office. Hope cold stares Will as she exits.
Beginning: Superior Position: Will confidently charms the court, unaware that Hope is observing him critically from the back.
Middle: Intrigue: Michael approaches Will during a recess. Their interaction is quiet and loaded with tension, suggesting secrets Hope doesn’t yet fully grasp.
Ending: Uncomfortable Moment: Hope confronts Will with a cold stare as he passes her, the weight of his double life pressing visibly on him.
Scene 29.2
EXT. COURTROOM – DAY
Joy meets up with Hope. Joy acts surprised as Hope confesses that she’s ready to leave Will, her life is a sham. Hope hands Joy a small artwork.
Beginning: Misinterpretation: Joy arrives, pretending she’s there by coincidence, feigning concern for Hope.
Middle: Intrigue: Hope confesses her doubts about her marriage, handing Joy the small artwork as a token of trust.
Ending: Superior Position: Joy hides her satisfaction as she realizes she’s gaining deeper control over Hope’s personal and professional decisions.
Scene 29.3
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – NEXT DAY
Hope notices Joy made subtle changes to her artwork. Joy insists it’s for the better, and Hope, feeling insecure, agrees despite her instincts. She gives Joy control of her old and new artwork.
Beginning: Uncertainty: Hope is unsure about Joy’s input on her work but hesitates to speak out.
Middle: Betrayal: Joy suggests that the changes reflect Hope’s “new vision,” subtly manipulating her into submission.
Ending: Internal Dilemma: Hope reluctantly agrees to hand over control of her artwork, caught between self-doubt and her reliance on Joy’s approval.
Scene 29.4
INT. BEDROOM – EVENING
Hope struggles with confronting Will’s affair.
Beginning: Suspense: Hope sifts through clues, piecing together inconsistencies in Will’s behavior.
Middle: Internal Dilemma: She battles between wanting to confront him and fearing the truth will break her further.
Ending: Cliffhanger: Hope resolves to bring up her suspicions, setting the stage for an inevitable confrontation.
Scene 29.5
INT. LIVING ROOM – CONT.
Phone call: Joy and Will are secretly plotting to control Hope’s career and assets. Hope overhears arguing—doesn’t know about what.
Beginning: Suspense: Hope hears raised voices and moves closer, eavesdropping on the heated conversation.
Middle: Mislead/Reveal: She picks up fragmented dialogue, mistaking their argument as professional tension rather than personal betrayal.
Ending: Cliffhanger: The call abruptly ends, leaving Hope with more questions than answers.
Scene 29.6
INT. JOY’S STUDIO – MORNING
Hope and Joy become romantically involved, and Hope begins working on new, daring artwork with Joy’s encouragement. Joy presents herself as Hope’s collaborator and emotional muse, but she secretly manipulates Hope’s work for her own gain. The lines between love and manipulation blur.
Beginning: Uncertainty: Joy seduces Hope into a deeper emotional and creative connection.
Middle: Intrigue: Joy positions herself as Hope’s artistic equal while making subtle moves to control her work.
Ending: Betrayal: Joy makes small, unnoticed alterations to Hope’s latest piece, solidifying her manipulation.
Scene 29.7
INT. NEW ART EXHIBIT – SATURDAY EVENING
Hope attends her art show to see one of her pieces presented as Joy’s work. Joy is basking in the praise, while Hope is left stunned. Joy begins a takeover, subtly crediting herself for Hope’s creativity, while positioning Hope as emotionally unstable.
Beginning: Major Twist: Hope enters the exhibit to find her work being claimed by Joy.
Middle: Uncomfortable Moment: Guests approach Joy to praise “her” genius, ignoring Hope’s visible discomfort.
Ending: Suspense: Hope confronts Joy, but Joy gaslights her in front of the crowd, further isolating Hope.
Scene 29.8
INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT
Hope discovers Will in bed with her brother Michael, confirming his betrayal. Blowout confrontation.
Beginning: Surprise: Hope bursts into the room, finding Will and Michael together.
Middle: Uncomfortable Moment: The confrontation turns into a raw, emotional outpouring, exposing layers of betrayal.
Ending: Cliffhanger: Hope storms out, leaving Will and Michael to deal with the fallout.
Scene 29.9
INT. JOY’S STUDIO – NIGHT
Hope buries herself deeper into her relationship with Joy, feeling even more dependent on her for emotional and creative validation.
Beginning: Intrigue: Joy comforts Hope, subtly reinforcing her dependence.
Middle: Mislead/Reveal: Joy masks her manipulation with genuine-seeming affection, deepening Hope’s trust.
Ending: Suspense: Hope commits to staying with Joy, unaware of her ulterior motives.
Scene 29.10
INT. COURTHOUSE HALLWAY – DAY
Hope seeks legal advice against Joy and Will. A lawyer warns her about Joy's strong connections in the art world and her husband’s influence as a legal professional. Hope realizes the stakes are higher than she imagined.
Beginning: Suspense: Hope nervously explains her situation to a lawyer, hoping for clarity.
Middle: Mislead/Reveal: The lawyer points out that Joy and Will’s combined influence makes a legal battle risky, leaving Hope disheartened.
Ending: Cliffhanger: Hope decides to start gathering evidence herself, marking a shift in her resolve.
Scene 29.11
INT. HOPE’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Hope searches through Joy’s emails and uncovers documents that confirm Joy has been selling her artwork under Joy’s name. She also finds correspondence between Joy and Will conspiring to institutionalize Hope under claims of emotional instability.
Beginning: Major Twist: Hope stumbles upon the emails while looking for something unrelated.
Middle: Betrayal: The correspondence between Joy and Will reveals their betrayal in stark detail.
Ending: Cliffhanger: Hope realizes she must act quickly before Joy and Will execute their plan.
Scene 29.12
INT. JOY’S STUDIO – EARLY MORNING
Hope confronts Joy about the emails, but Joy denies everything and turns the blame on Hope, painting her as paranoid. Hope leaves, visibly shaken but determined.
Beginning: Suspense: Hope approaches Joy’s studio, rehearsing what she’ll say.
Middle: Uncomfortable Moment: Joy masterfully gaslights Hope, leaving her doubting herself.
Ending: Resolution: Hope steels herself, vowing to find undeniable proof.
Scene 29.13
INT. PRIVATE INVESTIGATOR’S OFFICE – DAY
Hope hires a private investigator to gather evidence against Joy and Will. The investigator advises her to tread carefully, given the power and connections her adversaries have.
Beginning: Mislead/Reveal: The investigator questions if Hope is ready for the fallout of exposing Joy and Will.
Middle: Suspense: Hope provides him with the documents she’s found and explains her suspicions.
Ending: Resolution: The investigator agrees to take the case, promising to dig deeper.
Scene 29.14
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – NIGHT
Hope works on a series of pieces inspired by her pain and betrayal, rediscovering her artistic voice. The pieces are raw and unapologetic, unlike anything she’s ever done before.
Beginning: Internal Dilemma: Hope struggles to channel her emotions into her art.
Middle: Resolution: As the pieces take form, she begins to feel a sense of empowerment.
Ending: Superior Position: Hope decides to debut this series independently, without Joy’s involvement.
Scene 29.15
INT. ART GALLERY – NIGHT
Hope secretly presents her new series under a pseudonym at a small gallery, bypassing Joy entirely. The show is a success, and Joy’s influence over Hope begins to wane.
Beginning: Major Twist: The art world buzzes about the mysterious new artist, unaware it’s Hope.
Middle: Intrigue: Joy arrives at the gallery, suspecting the work might be Hope’s.
Ending: Cliffhanger: Joy confronts the gallery owner, demanding to know the artist’s identity.
Scene 29.16
INT. INVESTIGATOR’S OFFICE – DAY
The investigator presents Hope with damning evidence: financial records showing Joy profiting from Hope’s work and documents tying Will to Joy’s schemes.
Beginning: Major Reveal: The investigator lays out the evidence, confirming Hope’s suspicions.
Middle: Suspense: Hope realizes this is enough to take legal action, but the risk of public fallout looms.
Ending: Resolution: Hope decides to confront Joy and Will head-on.
Scene 29.17
INT. COURTROOM – DAY
Hope testifies in court, presenting the evidence against Joy and Will. The courtroom drama unfolds as Joy’s lies unravel under cross-examination.
Beginning: Suspense: Hope nervously takes the stand, facing Joy and Will.
Middle: Major Twist: Joy falters under cross-examination, her carefully constructed narrative falling apart.
Ending: Resolution: The court rules in Hope’s favor, stripping Joy of her influence and exposing Will’s betrayal publicly.
Scene 29.18
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Hope returns to her studio, finally at peace. She begins a new painting, symbolizing her renewed sense of identity and emotional freedom.
Beginning: Superior Position: Hope reflects on how far she’s come, finding strength in her solitude.
Middle: Resolution: She paints with newfound clarity, her strokes confident and bold.
Ending: Final Image: The painting, vibrant and full of life, mirrors Hope’s transformation.
Scene 29.19
INT. HOPE'S STUDIO – DAY
Hope confronts the art dealer, learning of his betrayal and involvement in the gallery fire. This moment ignites her resolve to fight back.
• Beginning (Intrigue): The art dealer arrives unexpectedly, bringing an ominous presence into Hope’s creative space. He reveals subtle hints about Joy’s larger scheme, making Hope realize how deep the conspiracy runs.
• Middle (Uncomfortable Moment): The dealer taunts Hope, questioning her talent and threatening her future if she exposes Joy. He smugly claims credit for the fire as a necessary evil to "motivate" her.
• Ending (Surprise): Hope punches him in the face, breaking her usual restrained demeanor. She slams the door behind him, fueled by the anger and determination she needs to take Joy down.
Scene 29.20
INT. COURTROOM – NEXT WEEK
Hope uses forensic art evidence to prove Joy’s fraud, revealing a shocking truth to the court.
• Beginning (Suspense): Hope sits calmly while Joy spins her lies to the court. The tension builds as the judge scrutinizes the claims.
• Middle (Mislead/Reveal): Hope dramatically unveils the forensic evidence—a hidden signature beneath the paint layers of the contested pieces. The courtroom reacts with shock as the deception is laid bare.
• Ending (Cliffhanger): Joy’s confident mask cracks as the evidence stacks against her. The judge announces an upcoming decision, leaving the tension unresolved.
Scene 30
INT. COURTROOM – CONT.
The climactic confrontation between Hope and Joy over their identities and futures.
• Beginning (More Interesting Setting): The courtroom transforms into a symbolic battleground, with Hope standing her ground against Joy’s verbal attacks and false tears.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): Hope must decide whether to hold back and preserve her reputation or fully expose Joy, risking her vulnerabilities being used against her. She chooses to push forward.
• Ending (Superior Position): Hope delivers a cutting truth about their relationship and Joy’s theft of her identity, not just her art. Joy’s inability to counter leaves the court with no doubt about her guilt.
Scene 31
EXT. COURTHOUSE – DAY
Hope emerges victorious but emotionally changed, ready to rebuild her life.
• Beginning (Suspense): Hope walks down the courthouse steps, scanning the crowd for familiar faces, unsure if her personal life will ever be the same.
• Middle (Uncertainty): The crowd cheers, but Hope feels the weight of what she’s lost—trust, relationships, and time. A glance at Will signals their unspoken understanding of their broken bond.
• Ending (Surprise): Joy, defeated but defiant, skips down the stairs and kicks Will in the groin before storming off. The absurdity adds a moment of catharsis for Hope.
Scene 32
INT. HOPE'S STUDIO – DAY
Hope reconnects with her art, taking the first steps toward healing.
• Beginning (More Interesting Setting): Hope enters her studio, which looks like a battlefield of unfinished pieces and broken tools, mirroring her inner turmoil.
• Middle (Internal Dilemma): She hesitates to pick up a brush, grappling with fear of failure and the need to reclaim her identity. She finally begins painting.
• Ending (Character Changes Radically): Her brushstrokes grow bolder, reflecting a newfound confidence. She transforms from a victim into an empowered artist.
Scene 33
EXT. ART GALLERY – NIGHT
Hope’s triumphant exhibit showcases her rebirth as an artist.
• Beginning (Mystery): Guests marvel at Hope’s latest work, which contains cryptic imagery tied to her journey. Whispers ripple through the crowd about its meaning.
• Middle (Intrigue): Hope watches from the shadows, content to let her art take center stage. Will arrives but keeps his distance, silently acknowledging her growth.
• Ending (Surprise): Hope leaves unnoticed, slipping away into the night with a quiet smile, free from needing external validation.
Scene 34
EXT. CITY STREET – NIGHT
Hope walks through the city, embodying her newfound freedom.
• Beginning (More Interesting Setting): The bustling city contrasts with Hope’s calm demeanor as she strides purposefully, her freedom evident in her every move.
• Middle (Suspense): She bumps into a mysterious woman from her exhibit. Their conversation hints at future opportunities or connections, leaving Hope curious but cautious.
• Ending (Uncertainty): As Hope gazes at the night sky, the woman’s departure leaves an air of possibility, setting up potential new paths for her journey.
Scene 35
INT. HOPE'S STUDIO – DAY
Hope completes a masterpiece that embodies her journey and triumph.
• Beginning (Intrigue): Hope stands before a half-finished canvas, staring at it as if searching for answers.
• Middle (Major Twist): Her strokes become freer, blending colors and textures she’s never used before. The final piece is bold and unprecedented.
• Ending (Mystery): She steps back, brushing her hand across the vibrant surface. The painting hints at her struggles but also her newfound strength, leaving its full meaning open to interpretation.
Scene 36
EXT. PICTURESQUE OUTDOORS – 6 MONTHS LATER
Hope paints in nature, free and inspired, sharing intimacy with a new romantic interest.
• Beginning (More Interesting Setting): Hope’s outdoor studio is surrounded by lush greenery and vibrant colors, a stark contrast to her previous sterile environments.
• Middle (Uncomfortable Moment): Her new companion flirts as Hope paints, creating a mix of vulnerability and excitement in their dynamic.
• Ending (Surprise): Hope laughs as birds take flight in the distance, her brushstrokes full of life. The sunset casts a golden glow, signaling her emotional and creative liberation.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – WIM Module 10 – Lesson 4: The 10 Most Interesting Things
Sylvia’s 10 Most Interesting Things
What I learned doing this assignment is…Now that the story is in full swing, adding this assignment really ups the game. I especially appreciate Kristin D. and Hal in the video zoom where this was discussed. Hearing the average grow into the phenomenal (I want to see that movie!) was eye opening. I have added a few things on my list that I’ll need to write into my script. And, I plan on upping much more as things move along. Thank you! Talk about an, “AH HA!” Moment.
The 10 most interesting things:
• 1-Three-way (plus one!) conspiring and infidelity.
• 2-Stolen identity-the protagonists ex- takes on her identity in stealing credit for her amazing artwork.
• 3-Villain #1: (P’s Ex) Secretly a high powered call-girl Madam.
• 4-The husband and protagonists ex-lover work together to control the protagonist and, in the end, turn on each other.
• 5-Protagonists Husband is having an affair with her brother.
• 6-An art exhibit fire brings the protagonist together with her old flame.
• 7-Hero: An amazing art painter, world renowned.
• 8-Villain #2: (P’s Husband) Clueless about life, things have come too easy for him. Naïve. Thus, he pisses people off and has no clue why or how he does it.
• 9- Protagonists brother was playing as if interested in having an affair with her husband. He suspected foul play. He wants to save her dignity and help her gain her self-respect back.
• 10- Villain #2 is a sex addict.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

1. Name? Sylvia Krawczyk
2. How many scripts you’ve written? Too many to count, all forms, shapes and sizes…
3. What you hope to get out of the class? Continue my path of becoming a MUCH better writer with depth.
4. Something unique, special, strange or unusual about you? I am a live production event sound engineer/mixer/specialist that also runs Props for a local semi-professional ballet company shows during Nut’ season. (I like a challenge—over 1000s props.). Although, I do fog up the stage with dry ice during the performances and set the cannons with fire extinguisher effects so there’s that… 😉

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia M. Krawczyk
I agree to the terms of this release form.

GROUP RELEASE FORM
As a member of this group, I agree to the following:
1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.
2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.
I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.
3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.
4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.
5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.
6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.
This completes the Group Release Form for the class.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – WIM Module 10 – Lesson 3: What Do Managers and Producers Need?
Sylvia’s Meets Producer/Manager
What I learned today is…how many of the similarities are the same between the two when you think about the main thing is to make the film.
1. How will you present yourself and your project to the producer?
I’d research to make sure my project fit the producer.
I’d make sure my project is beyond ready to be pitched.
I’d have different options in my mind depending on budget.
I’d practice my pitch out loud.
Any physical meetings, I’d get there early and may even drive ahead of time on a different day to make sure I knew where I was going and where to park.
I’d make sure I had at least two other projects (one written and another pitch ready).
I’d not anticipate/expect anything from them.
I’d use this first meeting as a way to pitch me and my project and also plant seeds for the future.

2. How will you present yourself and your project to a manager?
I’d research to make sure my project fit the manager.
I’d make sure my project is beyond ready to be pitched.
I’d have different options in my mind depending on budget.
I’d practice my pitch out loud.
Any physical meetings, I’d get there early and may even drive ahead of time on a different day to make sure I knew where I was going and where to park.
I’d make sure I had at least two other projects (one written and another pitch ready).
I’d not anticipate/expect anything from them.
I’d use this first meeting as a way to pitch me and my project and also plant seeds for the future.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – WIM Module 10 – Lesson 2: The 10 Components of Marketability
Sylvia’s Marketable Components (Business Hooks)
What I learned doing this assignment is…these components are game changers. The certainly get to the heat of the film. I need to up the logline for certain. Perhaps put more details in it to explain it.
Title: Identity Crises
Current Logline: An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Look through the 10 Components of Marketability and pick a few that have the most potential for selling this script.
• A. Unique. Yes, needs to be better/strengthened.
• B. Great Title. YES.
• C. True. N/A
• D. Timely. Perhaps… good question.
• E. It’s a first. N/A
• F. Ultimate. N/A but open to ideas
• G. Wide audience appeal. No, it’s for adults. My thought anyways.
• H. Adapted from a popular book. N/A
• I. Similarity to a box-office success. Loosely based on 1945, “Scarlet Street”
• J. A great role for a bankable actor. I am hoping.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Yay! You fixed this so I can now reply. As work permits, I'll reply my catch-ups…

WIM+AI – WIM Module 10 – Lesson 1: How To Get 50 Script Requests Sylvia’s Project and Market
What I learned today is…
Genre = Romantic Thriller Title = Identity Crisis
Concept = An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Most attractive about this story:
My story shows the depth and fragile state of being human.
I am targeting Managers as I would like to be assisted in making myself marketable on all fronts.

• This reply was modified 8 months, 2 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.
• This reply was modified 8 months, 2 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 9: Scene Requirements
Sylvia’s Scene Requirements
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…interesting how I was able to clear up quite a bit with the first two parts of this assignment and remove the essence. Then, with the required sections, I was able to add back the essences. I haven’t decided on the end so, I have left them here to be decided later.

Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Characters = Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator. She’s jealously power hungry and wants Hope’s identity.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s fiancé from College.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother as he helps Joy.
Outline =
Scene 1
INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT
Description: Bad sex between Hope and Will. Will is mechanical as Hope lays bored.
• Scene Arc: Starts with a disconnection between Hope and Will in bed and ends with Hope's growing dissatisfaction and emotional distance.
• Essence: Show the emotional detachment in Hope’s marriage, setting the stage for her longing for something more.
• Conflict: Internal conflict within Hope—she’s stuck in a loveless marriage, unsure how to break free.
• Subtext: Hope feels trapped in a situation where she can’t express her true emotions or desires. This scene hints that she’s missing passion in her life.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will find the emotional and physical connection she’s missing. We fear she’ll stay stuck in this cold marriage.
Scene 2
INT. ART EXHIBIT – EVENING
Description: Hope showcases her older works. She looks at her wedding ring with a frown and carries a tattered letter.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope trying to present herself as a successful artist, ends with her feeling unsatisfied with her life, symbolized by the wedding ring.
• Essence: Highlight Hope’s discontent with both her art and her marriage.
• Conflict: Hope’s inner struggle—she’s acclaimed for her past, but feels stifled in the present.
• Subtext: The wedding ring represents the weight of her marriage, while the tattered letter may suggest unresolved issues or past regrets.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will rekindle her artistic passion and find a way to feel alive again. We fear she will remain trapped by her current life.
Scene 3
INT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Hope and Joy lock eyes and smile. The sight of Joy takes Hope's breath away. Joy is the new art curator that wants to exhibit Hope’s work. Hope rejects.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope feeling intrigued by Joy’s presence, ends with Hope rejecting Joy’s offer but feeling a spark of something lost.
• Essence: Reintroduce Joy into Hope’s life as a force of potential rekindling but also danger.
• Conflict: External conflict—Joy wants to collaborate, but Hope is hesitant to let her back into her world.
• Subtext: Underneath Hope’s rejection lies the attraction and unresolved feelings for Joy. Joy represents temptation and potential artistic revival.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope might open herself up to this new opportunity with Joy. We fear Joy’s motives are not what they seem.
Scene 4
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Joy lights up a cigarette. Will runs late to Joy’s art exhibit. Will is charming to all others and cold to Hope. Hope sees a cryptic text on Will’s phone. Will acts nervous and strange around Michael (Hope’s brother).
• Scene Arc: Starts with the casual atmosphere of the exhibit, ends with suspicion as Hope notices something off about Will’s behavior.
• Essence: Introduce the growing tension in Hope’s marriage, especially regarding Will’s secret life.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope sees Will’s strange behavior and becomes suspicious, creating friction.
• Subtext: Will’s nervousness around Michael hints at his affair with Hope’s brother. Hope senses something is off but can’t yet identify it.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will confront Will or uncover the truth. We fear Will’s deception will continue and grow worse.
Scene 5
EXT. MEN'S RESTROOM – CONT.
Description: Will primps himself in the men’s room and takes off his wedding band.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Will preparing himself, ends with him symbolically removing his commitment to Hope by taking off his ring.
• Essence: Show Will’s detachment from his marriage and the secrecy he’s maintaining.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Will is juggling his affair and his marriage, trying to appear composed while hiding his betrayal.
• Subtext: The act of taking off his wedding band suggests that Will isn’t committed to his marriage anymore.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Will’s behavior is exposed soon. We fear he will continue to hide his actions and further betray Hope.
Scene 6
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Will sneaks out of the art exhibit. Will texts Hope that he had to go and couldn’t get her groceries.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Will leaving the exhibit secretly, ends with Hope feeling let down again by Will’s lack of care.
• Essence: Show the lack of communication and care in their marriage.
• Conflict: External conflict—Will’s neglect of simple responsibilities highlights his growing emotional distance from Hope.
• Subtext: The text is an excuse, masking the real reason Will left—his affair and avoidance of Hope.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will start to realize Will’s neglect. We fear she will continue to endure the emotional isolation.
Scene 7
INT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Joy comforts Hope after Will’s betrayal.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope feeling abandoned and ends with Joy stepping in as a source of emotional support.
• Essence: Show Joy’s manipulation—she’s positioning herself as a friend but has ulterior motives.
• Conflict: Internal conflict for Hope—she feels comforted by Joy but is also wary of their complicated past.
• Subtext: Joy is using this moment to wedge herself into Hope’s life, setting the stage for her later manipulation.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds some genuine support. We fear Joy’s intentions aren’t pure, and she’s beginning her manipulation.
Scene 8
INT. ART EXHIBIT – CONT.
Description: Joy tells Hope she’s different and wants to help her rediscover her voice. Joy insists she curate Hope’s next exhibit. Hope reluctantly agrees.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Joy's comforting words, ends with Hope agreeing to let Joy back into her life.
• Essence: Show how Joy subtly manipulates Hope into agreeing, playing on her artistic insecurities.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s hesitation about letting Joy curate her work versus Joy’s persistent persuasion.
• Subtext: Joy’s insistence is not only about helping Hope—it’s about controlling her. Joy sees this as an opportunity to take over Hope’s identity.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope’s artistic voice is revived with Joy’s help. We fear Joy will stifle it for her own gain.
Scene 9
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope struggles to create new art. She stares at a blank canvas, overwhelmed by her stagnant creativity.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope trying to create, ends with her frustrated and creatively blocked.
• Essence: Show Hope’s inner turmoil—her artistic identity is stifled, and she’s unable to move forward.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s creative block symbolizes her emotional stagnation and dissatisfaction with her life.
• Subtext: The blank canvas mirrors Hope’s internal void, her need for change and revival.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds a way to break through her creative block. We fear her struggles will only worsen, leaving her in deeper despair.
Scene 10
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – CONT.
Description: Joy visits Hope’s studio. She critiques Hope’s current work, subtly undermining her confidence.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope showing Joy her current work, ends with Hope feeling more insecure after Joy’s critiques.
• Essence: Highlight Joy’s manipulation—she pretends to support Hope but plants seeds of doubt.
• Conflict: External conflict—Joy’s critiques versus Hope’s desire to believe in her work.
• Subtext: Joy is intentionally undermining Hope to increase her dependence on her guidance. Hope’s growing insecurity will make her more vulnerable to Joy’s control.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope sees through Joy’s manipulation. We fear Hope will fall deeper into self-doubt and lean on Joy for validation.
Scene 11
INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT
Description: Hope meets Joy for dinner. The atmosphere is charged with sexual tension as they reminisce about their past relationship.
• Scene Arc: Starts with a tense but friendly dinner, ends with heightened sexual tension and emotional vulnerability.
• Essence: Reignite the romantic and sexual connection between Hope and Joy, while planting the seeds of manipulation.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s unresolved feelings for Joy versus her loyalty to Will.
• Subtext: Joy is aware of the effect she has on Hope and uses their past intimacy to draw her back in. Hope is torn between nostalgia and suspicion.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope is able to set boundaries. We fear Joy will draw Hope into a toxic, manipulative relationship.
Scene 12
INT. HOPE’S BEDROOM – NIGHT
Description: Hope stares at her wedding ring in bed while thinking about Joy. She takes the ring off and hides it in a drawer.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope feeling conflicted in bed, ends with her symbolically removing her commitment to Will by taking off her ring.
• Essence: Show the emotional shift in Hope’s feelings—her connection to Will is deteriorating, while her thoughts about Joy intensify.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope is torn between the life she has built with Will and the emotional pull she feels toward Joy.
• Subtext: The act of removing the wedding ring symbolizes Hope’s growing distance from her marriage.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds clarity about her feelings. We fear she is being drawn into a web of betrayal and manipulation.
Scene 13
EXT. ART EXHIBIT – NIGHT
Description: Will arrives at another one of Hope’s events late and drunk. He avoids Hope and engages in conversation with Michael, becoming overly familiar and flirtatious.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Will’s arrival, ends with Hope feeling even more isolated as Will flirts with her brother.
• Essence: Show the cracks in Will’s façade—his drinking, lateness, and behavior with Michael reflect his disregard for Hope.
• Conflict: External conflict—Will’s inappropriate behavior with Michael versus Hope’s growing awareness of his betrayal.
• Subtext: Will’s actions suggest that he’s more invested in his affair with Michael than his marriage.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will confront Will or the truth will come out. We fear Will’s behavior will continue unchecked, deepening the betrayal.
Scene 14
INT. ART EXHIBIT – LATER
Description: Hope confronts Will about his behavior. Will deflects and dismisses her concerns.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope’s confrontation, ends with Will refusing to acknowledge the problem, leaving Hope feeling dismissed.
• Essence: Highlight the emotional distance and lack of communication in their marriage.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s desire for answers versus Will’s avoidance and defensiveness.
• Subtext: Will’s dismissal suggests he doesn’t care enough to even try to address the issues in their marriage.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope stands up for herself and demands accountability. We fear she will be further gaslighted and dismissed.
Scene 15
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – NIGHT
Description: Hope, emotionally drained, tries to paint but ends up staring blankly at the canvas. Joy sends her a cryptic text: “I can make it all better.”
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope struggling to create, ends with her receiving Joy’s text, which tempts her toward a dangerous alliance.
• Essence: Show Hope at her lowest point, emotionally and creatively drained, and how Joy is positioning herself as the solution to all of Hope’s problems.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s desire to fix her creative block versus her wariness of what Joy represents.
• Subtext: Joy’s text is a power play—she knows Hope is vulnerable and is offering herself as the answer, with strings attached.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will see the danger in relying on Joy. We fear she will fall deeper into Joy’s control.
Scene 16
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – NIGHT (LATER)
Description: Hope responds to Joy’s text, agreeing to meet. She closes her laptop and gazes at her unfinished work, feeling a mix of dread and excitement.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope feeling conflicted, ends with her making the decision to meet Joy.
• Essence: Show how Hope is both drawn to and afraid of the power Joy holds over her, reflecting her inner turmoil.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s desire for creative and emotional revival versus her suspicion that trusting Joy is a dangerous choice.
• Subtext: Hope knows that going back to Joy could lead to something unhealthy, but she craves the validation and emotional spark that Joy offers.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds the strength to navigate this situation without getting hurt. We fear her decision to meet Joy will push her deeper into manipulation.
Scene 17
INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT
Description: Hope and Joy meet for dinner. Joy is charismatic, seductive, and presses Hope about taking bold risks in her art. The conversation is flirtatious, but there’s an underlying tension.
• Scene Arc: Starts with a light, seductive conversation, ends with Joy subtly pushing Hope toward more drastic artistic decisions.
• Essence: Highlight the growing sexual tension and Joy’s manipulation, framing it as “help” when it’s really control.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s curiosity about Joy’s ideas versus her hesitation to let Joy dictate her work.
• Subtext: Joy is using seduction to weaken Hope’s defenses, convincing her that bold risks in art (and life) mean trusting Joy completely.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope recognizes Joy’s manipulation. We fear she will give in to Joy’s persuasion and lose control of her artistic vision.
Scene 18
INT. WILL’S OFFICE – DAY
Description: Will is at work, visibly stressed. He exchanges flirtatious texts with Michael, his tension easing into relief as they plan to meet later.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Will feeling stressed, ends with him relaxed after making plans with Michael.
• Essence: Show how Will finds emotional and sexual escape in Michael, reinforcing the growing distance from his marriage.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Will’s guilt about his affair versus his desire for freedom and comfort with Michael.
• Subtext: Will’s need for control over his personal life is slipping, and his escape with Michael is more about running from his responsibilities than genuine love.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Will might reconsider his actions. We fear he will continue deceiving Hope, deepening the betrayal.
Scene 19
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope works on a new piece, inspired by Joy’s push for boldness. The painting is raw, chaotic, and aggressive, reflecting her inner turmoil. Joy arrives and praises Hope’s work, calling it a breakthrough.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope deep in creative flow, ends with Joy affirming Hope’s new direction.
• Essence: Show Hope’s artistic breakthrough as both liberating and troubling—her art reflects her internal chaos, spurred on by Joy’s manipulation.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope feels a sense of creative release but wonders if she’s losing herself in the process.
• Subtext: Joy’s praise isn’t entirely genuine—she sees Hope’s unraveling as part of her plan to control her and her work.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds genuine inspiration in her work. We fear that Joy is leading her down a path of creative destruction.
Scene 20
INT. GALLERY – DAY
Description: Hope’s new paintings are displayed at a private showing organized by Joy. The crowd admires her boldness, but Hope feels disconnected from her own work. Joy basks in the praise.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope’s new work being celebrated, ends with her feeling hollow and questioning her direction.
• Essence: Show the external success juxtaposed with Hope’s internal dissatisfaction, emphasizing how her artistic voice is being overtaken by Joy’s influence.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s desire to be celebrated as an artist versus her growing discomfort with the direction her work has taken.
• Subtext: Joy is positioning herself as the mastermind behind Hope’s “breakthrough,” feeding her ego at the expense of Hope’s autonomy.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope reclaims her creative voice. We fear she will continue to let Joy dictate her work, losing herself in the process.
Scene 21
EXT. HOPE’S GALLERY – NIGHT
Description: Hope steps outside for air, overwhelmed by the success of the exhibit and her growing doubts about Joy’s role in her life. She notices Will arriving late again, this time with Michael.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope feeling emotionally conflicted, ends with her seeing Will and Michael together, deepening her sense of betrayal.
• Essence: Highlight the emotional weight building on Hope as she questions her art, her marriage, and her choices.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s desire for clarity versus the layers of deceit and manipulation surrounding her.
• Subtext: The sight of Will with Michael reinforces Hope’s feeling that everyone close to her is betraying her trust in some way.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope confronts the truth about her marriage and her relationship with Joy. We fear she will feel more isolated and trapped.
Scene 22
INT. GALLERY – NIGHT
Description: Hope confronts Will about his relationship with Michael. Will tries to deflect, but Hope demands answers. The confrontation escalates, leaving both feeling raw and exposed.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope calmly confronting Will, ends with a heated argument where both their deceptions are laid bare.
• Essence: Highlight the cracks in their marriage, showing how their mutual betrayals have reached a breaking point.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s demand for the truth versus Will’s reluctance to admit his affair.
• Subtext: The confrontation is not just about the affair—it’s about the deeper emotional void between them, their shared failures in the marriage.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds closure or clarity. We fear this confrontation will only lead to more pain and confusion.
Scene 23
INT. JOY’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Description: Hope arrives at Joy’s apartment, emotionally distraught. She seeks comfort from Joy, but Joy sees this as an opportunity to further manipulate her.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope seeking emotional support, ends with Joy positioning herself as Hope’s savior, deepening her hold on her.
• Essence: Show Joy’s power over Hope growing—she comforts her, but there’s an underlying sense that she’s pulling Hope deeper into her web.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s need for emotional support versus her unease about relying on Joy.
• Subtext: Joy is exploiting Hope’s vulnerability, using it as a tool to further bind Hope to her emotionally and creatively.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope realizes she’s falling into Joy’s trap. We fear Joy’s manipulation will become even more dangerous.
Scene 24
INT. JOY’S APARTMENT – LATER THAT NIGHT
Description: Hope stays over at Joy’s apartment. The atmosphere is intimate but unsettling. They drink wine, and the tension between them grows. Joy continues to subtly criticize Hope’s past choices while praising her current direction. Hope feels conflicted, unable to fully trust Joy but craving her approval.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope seeking solace, ends with Joy deepening her manipulation, leaving Hope emotionally dependent.
• Essence: Focus on the toxic push-pull dynamic between Hope and Joy—seduction mixed with emotional manipulation.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s yearning for validation from Joy versus her growing sense that Joy is using her.
• Subtext: Joy frames her manipulation as “truth-telling” under the guise of helping Hope grow, when in reality, she’s breaking her down.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope realizes Joy’s manipulations. We fear she will fall further into emotional dependency on Joy.
Scene 25
INT. WILL’S OFFICE – DAY
Description: Will meets Michael for lunch in his office. Their conversation is casual but increasingly tense as they discuss the future of their relationship. Will wants to keep things secret, but Michael pushes for more commitment, leading to a moment of confrontation.
• Scene Arc: Starts with casual conversation, ends with rising tension as Michael pushes Will for a more serious relationship.
• Essence: Highlight Will’s internal struggle between maintaining control over his life and relationships versus his fear of losing his facade.
• Conflict: External conflict—Will’s reluctance to commit to Michael versus Michael’s desire for more.
• Subtext: Will’s relationship with Michael represents his escape from his responsibilities, but it’s becoming another source of pressure.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Will starts to confront his truth and make honest choices. We fear he will continue hiding, leading to greater personal collapse.
Scene 26
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope tries to work on a new painting but feels blocked. The pressure from Joy’s expectations and her unraveling personal life weighs heavily on her. She receives a call from her brother, who reveals his suspicions about Will’s affair.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope’s creative block, ends with the bombshell revelation that her brother suspects Will’s affair.
• Essence: Hope’s life is spiraling out of control, with both her creative and personal life unraveling.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s inability to focus on her work versus the emotional chaos surrounding her.
• Subtext: The creative block is symbolic of Hope’s loss of identity—she’s no longer in control of her art or her life.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope uses this moment to regain control of her life. We fear this revelation will push her further into crisis.
Scene 27
INT. HOPE’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Description: Hope confronts Will about the affair with her brother. Will initially denies it, but when pressed, he admits to it. Hope is devastated, feeling completely betrayed and isolated. Will tries to justify his actions, but it only deepens the emotional distance between them.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope demanding the truth, ends with Will’s confession and Hope’s devastation.
• Essence: This is the emotional climax of Hope and Will’s relationship—everything is laid bare, and the marriage is shattered.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s need for the truth versus Will’s reluctance to fully admit his betrayal.
• Subtext: Will’s justification is hollow—he’s not apologizing but rather rationalizing his actions, which only furthers Hope’s sense of betrayal.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds the strength to move on from Will. We fear this betrayal will push her deeper into emotional collapse.
Scene 28
EXT. STREET – NIGHT
Description: Hope walks aimlessly through the city after her confrontation with Will. The streets are empty, mirroring her isolation. She ends up at Joy’s apartment, feeling like she has nowhere else to go.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope in emotional turmoil, ends with her arriving at Joy’s apartment, seeking refuge.
• Essence: Highlight Hope’s emotional isolation and desperation, her life in ruins and nowhere left to turn but Joy.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s feelings of betrayal and loss versus her dependence on Joy for emotional support.
• Subtext: Hope’s decision to go to Joy represents her being pulled further into Joy’s control, even though deep down she knows it’s not a healthy choice.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope finds a way to regain her independence. We fear that seeking comfort from Joy will only make things worse.
Scene 29
INT. JOY’S APARTMENT – NIGHT
Description: Hope and Joy drink wine. Hope opens up about her confrontation with Will, and Joy listens, appearing to sympathize but subtly reinforcing Hope’s dependency on her. They share a tense, intimate moment that hints at something more than friendship.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope seeking comfort, ends with a heightened intimacy between her and Joy, pulling her further under Joy’s influence.
• Essence: Emphasize the toxic seduction Joy exerts over Hope, presenting herself as a source of comfort but actually deepening Hope’s emotional dependency.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s need for emotional support versus her awareness that Joy is manipulating her.
• Subtext: Joy is using Hope’s vulnerability to bind her closer, cloaking her manipulation in care and affection.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope realizes the unhealthy dynamic. We fear Joy’s influence will become even more dangerous as the power dynamic shifts further.
Scene 30
INT. COURTROOM – DAY
Description: Hope and Joy face off in court over the ownership of Hope’s work. Joy has manipulated the situation to claim credit for Hope’s recent success, but Hope has gathered evidence of Joy’s deception. This is a climactic moment, as both women fight for control—over the art, their reputations, and their futures.
• Scene Arc: Starts with the legal battle over Hope’s work, ends with Hope exposing Joy’s deception, reclaiming her power.
• Essence: This is the final showdown—an intellectual and emotional battle that reflects the power dynamics of their relationship.
• Conflict: External conflict—Hope’s fight to reclaim her work and her identity versus Joy’s attempt to take credit and destroy her.
• Subtext: This is not just about the art—this is about control, identity, and breaking free from manipulation.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope triumphs and reclaims her autonomy. We fear that Joy’s manipulation has gone too far, and she will come out on top.
Scene 31
EXT. COURTHOUSE – DAY
Description: Hope walks out of the courthouse victorious. She feels a sense of relief but also a weight—her life has been irreparably changed. She is free from Joy’s influence but now faces the task of rebuilding her sense of self, both as an artist and a person.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope leaving the courthouse, ends with her walking into an uncertain future, but with a renewed sense of personal strength.
• Essence: Focus on the bittersweet nature of victory—Hope has reclaimed her power but at great personal cost.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s sense of triumph versus the emotional scars left by Joy’s betrayal and Will’s affair.
• Subtext: Hope’s journey has been about reclaiming her identity, and while she’s won the external battle, the internal healing is just beginning.
• Hope/Fear: We hope Hope will heal and find a new, healthier path forward. We fear the emotional damage has left her too wounded to fully recover.
Continue through the last scene/or change:
Scene 32
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope returns to her studio for the first time since the trial. The space is filled with her unfinished work, representing the emotional chaos of her recent life. She takes a deep breath, picks up a brush, and begins painting. The brush strokes start hesitantly but then become more confident as she loses herself in the creative process.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope uncertain and tentative, ends with her rediscovering her artistic voice and sense of control.
• Essence: This is Hope’s final moment of empowerment—reclaiming her identity not just through external victories, but through reconnecting with her art, which had been stifled by the emotional turmoil.
• Conflict: Internal conflict—Hope’s lingering doubts and emotional scars versus her desire to move forward and reclaim her artistic passion.
• Subtext: The act of painting represents Hope’s rebirth—she’s no longer defined by others, by Joy, or by Will. She is reclaiming her creativity and her future on her terms.
• Hope/Fear: We hope that Hope has truly found the inner strength to heal. We fear that the emotional damage will still haunt her.

Scene 33
EXT. ART GALLERY – NIGHT
Description: Hope’s new exhibit opens to great success. The gallery is filled with attendees admiring her latest work. Unlike previous openings, Hope is not the center of attention, but she doesn’t mind. She’s content, observing from a quiet corner. This time, her art speaks for itself, and she no longer needs external validation. Will shows up briefly, but they share only a nod—no words are needed.
• Scene Arc: Starts with the opening of the new exhibit, ends with Hope content and at peace with herself and her work.
• Essence: This scene represents closure—not just for Hope’s relationship with Will but also for her journey to reclaim her identity as an artist.
• Conflict: External conflict is minimal here, as the focus is on Hope’s internal resolution.
• Subtext: Will’s silent nod acknowledges that the past is behind them, and Hope’s calm demeanor shows that she no longer needs validation from him or anyone else. She’s found peace within herself.
• Hope/Fear: We hope that this marks a new, healthier chapter in Hope’s life. We fear that lingering doubts or scars could resurface, but we sense her resilience has strengthened.

Scene 34
EXT. CITY STREET – NIGHT
Description: Hope walks through the city streets alone, but this time, she walks with purpose. The city is alive around her, but she is calm and focused. She gazes up at the night sky, taking a deep breath as if breathing in her freedom. The world is open to her again.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope walking through the city, ends with her quietly empowered and looking forward to the future.
• Essence: The journey ends with Hope finding peace not through others, but through herself. She has broken free from Joy’s manipulation, Will’s betrayal, and her own self-doubt.
• Conflict: Internal conflict is resolved here—Hope is no longer torn between her past and her present. She’s stepping into her future, free and confident.
• Subtext: The open city represents endless possibilities—Hope is no longer confined or defined by her relationships, and she is ready to embrace her life on her terms.
• Hope/Fear: We hope that this final moment of peace is lasting and that Hope’s journey to emotional freedom is complete.

Scene 35 (Final Scene)
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope stands in her studio, gazing at her latest masterpiece—a strikingly bold and beautiful painting, unlike anything she’s ever created. It represents her journey, her pain, and her triumph. She smiles, brushes her hand over the painting, and the scene fades to black.
• Scene Arc: Starts with Hope reflecting on her latest work, ends with her final moment of personal triumph.
• Essence: This is Hope’s ultimate victory—her art is not just a product of her pain but of her growth. She has transformed her trauma into something powerful and beautiful.
• Conflict: All conflicts are resolved here—Hope has won the external battles and the internal one.
• Subtext: The final painting represents Hope’s rebirth as an artist and a person. She has finally found the balance between her art, her identity, and her emotional freedom.
• Hope/Fear: We end on a note of hope, with the belief that Hope’s journey has led her to a place of fulfillment and peace.
Scene 35 (Final Scene)
INT. HOPE’S STUDIO – DAY
Description: Hope stands in front of a large canvas, staring at the blank space, but with a newfound sense of confidence and purpose. The room is bathed in natural light. A naked woman, serene and comfortable in her vulnerability, poses on a platform at the center of the room. The woman’s body is raw, real, and imperfect, yet Hope sees beauty in the truth of her form.
Hope dips her brush into vibrant paint and begins to sketch the woman’s outline on the canvas. Each stroke is bold, deliberate—there is no hesitation in her movements. She loses herself in the flow of creation, the sounds of the brush against the canvas filling the space.
As Hope continues to paint, the woman’s body transforms into an expression of everything Hope has been through—betrayal, manipulation, desire, and ultimately, liberation. The painting becomes a reflection of her journey: both the woman on the canvas and Hope herself are raw, real, and unguarded, free from judgment.
Hope steps back from the canvas, gazing at the completed work. It is unlike anything she’s ever painted—an unfiltered, fearless expression of truth. A smile crosses her lips, not just for the art she’s created, but for the woman she has become.
• Scene Arc: Begins with Hope confronting the blank canvas and ends with her finishing her masterpiece, which symbolizes her emotional journey and transformation.
• Essence: The painting of the naked woman is not just a piece of art—it represents Hope’s final acceptance of vulnerability and her reclaiming of power through that honesty. She is no longer hiding or censoring her work, her emotions, or her identity.
• Conflict: Internal conflict between Hope’s vulnerability and her strength is resolved here. She now sees her vulnerability as a source of power, rather than a weakness.
• Subtext: The naked woman is both Hope and not Hope. She represents all the pain, truth, and beauty that Hope has finally embraced. This moment ties together her journey—through betrayal, desire, and finally, self-acceptance and artistic freedom.
• Hope/Fear: We hope this final act of artistic creation is the culmination of Hope’s journey toward emotional freedom, and we feel the weight lifted as she fully reclaims herself.

• This reply was modified 9 months, 2 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 8: Depth – Intriguing Moments
Sylvia’s Intriguing Moments
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned doing this assignment is…AI is interesting as it constantly rewrites my own ideas. I must repeat and ask for NEW ideas or for it to write and add other elements such as romance, sex, thriller etc. I thought I had to give it as many details as possible but that does not seem the case. When I get the correct wording, the answers can be enlightening. Now, I get timed out and must wait a certain time if I ask too many things. This is new. I am excited to see what I use from the answers I got from this exercise.

Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Characters = Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator. She’s jealously power hungry and wants Hope’s identity.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s fiancé from College.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother as he helps Joy.
Structure =

• This reply was modified 9 months, 4 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 7: Depth – Emotional Moments
Sylvia’s Emotional Moments
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned doing this assignment is…I extended my original answers and added the AI ideas. I hope I did this correct. I am curious to see how this plays out when I write my first draft.
Objective: Find the big emotional moments in your story and make sure they are as strong as they can be.
You want to have 2 – 4 big emotional moments per Act.

IMPORTANT: A situation is happening to the character. A wound is triggered or they were just surprised or another character sacrificed themselves. Watching a character go through the situation causes emotion for the audience.

ASSIGNMENT
Like the example above, give us a one or two sentence explanation of the emotional moments in each act of your project.
POSITIVE EMOTIONAL MOMENTS
• Surprise: An unexpected occurrence – a moment of wonder or astonishment.
• Bonding: A friendship developing as the result of common or intense experiences.
• Excitement: Experiences that are stirring, thrilling, arousing.
• Courage: Willingness to face difficulty, danger, or pain without exhibiting fear.
• Success/Winning: Accomplishing goals, performing, or achieving.
• Love: Affection for another person; attachment.
NEGATIVE EMOTIONAL MOMENTS
• Wound: A deep emotional injury from their past that haunts the person.
• Emotional Dilemma: Two choices where the person will lose something no matter which they take.
• Betrayal: A character who is trusted turns against the main character.
• Moral issue: The internal conflict that occurs when a person is questioning what is the right or wrong.
• Hidden weakness: A covert or undiscovered inadequacy.
• Distress: Great pain, anxiety, or sorrow; emotional or mental suffering.
• Sacrifice: Giving up something of great value – money, position, life, relationship, etc..
Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Characters = Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator. She’s jealously power hungry and wants Hope’s identity.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s fiancé from College.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother as he helps Joy.
4-Act Structure =
Act 1
Opening:
We meet Hope, a successful artist, showcasing her older work at a glamorous exhibit, but she feels emotionally and creatively stagnant. She’s in a lifeless marriage to Will, a polished lawyer, but internally struggles with her unresolved feelings for her first love, Joy.
Inciting Incident:
A suspicious fire breaks out at Hope’s exhibit. As chaos ensues, Hope instinctively tries to protect her art. In the aftermath, Joy reappears, saving her during the fire and reigniting old emotions.
Turning Point:
Hope stumbles upon evidence of Will’s affair with her brother Michael, shattering her world. Simultaneously, Joy offers emotional support, becoming Hope’s new emotional anchor and sparking a sense of hope for escape.
Act 2
New Plan:
With her marriage crumbling, Hope sees Joy as her savior. She plans to revive her artistic identity by rekindling her romance with Joy, believing it will reignite her creativity and fill the void in her life.
Plan in Action:
Hope and Joy become romantically involved, and Hope begins working on new, daring artwork with Joy’s encouragement. Joy presents herself as Hope’s collaborator and emotional muse, but she secretly manipulates Hope’s work for her own gain.
Midpoint Turning Point:
Hope discovers Will in bed with Michael, confirming his betrayal. Instead of confronting him, Hope buries herself deeper into her relationship with Joy, feeling even more dependent on her for emotional and creative validation.
Act 3
Rethink Everything:
As Joy’s career begins to rise, Hope starts to realize the depth of Joy’s manipulation. Joy has been taking credit for Hope’s work, erasing her contributions and positioning herself as the true artistic genius.
New Plan:
Hope decides to take back control of her life and art. She quietly starts gathering evidence of Joy’s theft, hoping to reclaim her artistic legacy and confront both Joy and Will.
Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Hope’s attempt to confront Joy backfires. Joy discredits Hope, framing her as mentally unstable in both their personal and professional circles. Will, meanwhile, intensifies his legal actions, starting divorce proceedings and aligning with Joy to strip Hope of her assets.
Act 4
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
In a tense courtroom showdown, Hope reveals Joy’s deception. She uses forensic art evidence to prove that Joy stole her work, exposing the layers of lies and manipulation. Joy tries to use their past romance and Hope’s emotional instability as a defense, but Hope’s truth prevails.
Resolution:
Joy’s career collapses as she is exposed as a fraud. Will is forced into a divorce settlement that leaves Hope in control of her assets. With both her antagonists defeated, Hope emerges stronger, reclaiming her artistic identity and emotional security.
Emotional Input Answers:
Act 1: Setting Up the Emotional Dissonance
1. Surprise – Reuniting with Joy: Scene: After the fire at the gallery, as the smoke clears, Hope looks up to see Joy standing before her. Emotional Impact: The sight of Joy takes Hope's breath away, triggering a flood of memories and feelings that she buried for years. Hope is shocked but also invigorated by the unexpected reunion. For a brief moment, she feels alive again, stirring the romantic embers she thought had long burned out. Purpose: This moment awakens Hope emotionally, showing the audience the spark between her and Joy, and setting the stage for their rekindled romance.
2. Triggering Wounds – Will’s Affair with Her Brother: Scene: Hope finds a cryptic text on Will's phone, leading her to investigate. When she stumbles upon concrete evidence of his affair with her brother, she’s shattered. Emotional Impact: The betrayal is too painful to process in one moment. Hope feels a deep, suffocating hurt as she wrestles with feelings of humiliation, anger, and disgust. She’s torn between confronting Will and bottling her emotions, unsure how to navigate the devastation. Purpose: This is the first major emotional blow for Hope, pulling her deeper into emotional turmoil and setting her up to cling to Joy for stability.
3. Bonding – Joy Offering Comfort: Scene: After finding out about Will's betrayal, Hope breaks down in her studio, destroying one of her pieces in a fit of anger. Joy shows up, calming her down and pulling her into an embrace. Emotional Impact: For the first time in a long while, Hope feels seen and comforted. Her connection with Joy feels powerful, almost sacred, and she lets herself fall into Joy's arms. This moment of bonding gives her a sense of peace amidst the chaos, leading her to trust Joy more deeply. Purpose: This bonding reinforces Joy’s influence over Hope and sets up the manipulative dynamic that will unfold.
4. Moral Dilemma – Should She Confront Will? Scene: Hope sits alone, staring at the incriminating evidence of Will’s affair. She struggles to decide whether to confront him or remain silent, feeling emotionally paralyzed. Emotional Impact: Hope’s dilemma is heart-wrenching. She feels she has already lost control of her marriage, but confronting him could lead to further pain and public scandal. This decision tortures her because, deep down, she knows her marriage is beyond saving. Purpose: This moment shows Hope's internal struggle, heightening the tension and the stakes of her emotional journey.

Act 2: Falling into the Trap
1. Excitement – Reviving Artistic Passion with Joy: Scene: Joy challenges Hope to take bold artistic risks, encouraging her to pour her raw emotions into her work. They collaborate closely, and Hope starts creating daring, powerful pieces. Emotional Impact: For the first time in years, Hope feels creatively alive and excited. Her artistic block dissolves, and the passion in her work mirrors the rekindled passion between her and Joy. The emotional high makes her believe that she’s regaining control over her life. Purpose: This moment of excitement represents the false hope that Joy provides, drawing Hope deeper into Joy’s web of manipulation.
2. Emotional Dilemma – Burden of Betrayal: Scene: Hope discovers Will in bed with Michael. She stands there, frozen, watching them in silence before quietly walking away. Emotional Impact: This discovery deepens Hope’s internal conflict. She feels anger, disgust, and betrayal, but also a strange sense of liberation—perhaps this gives her an excuse to fully commit to Joy. However, she also feels guilty for using Joy as an emotional crutch. Purpose: This dilemma intensifies the emotional stakes and complicates Hope’s feelings, making her increasingly dependent on Joy.
3. Sacrifice – Giving Up Her Marriage: Scene: In a conversation with Joy, Hope admits she’s ready to leave Will, realizing that her marriage is beyond repair. Emotional Impact: This is a painful decision, but also a relief. Hope feels like she’s sacrificing stability for the chance at a more passionate and fulfilling life with Joy. She believes that by giving up her marriage, she’s making room for artistic and emotional rebirth. Purpose: The sacrifice cements Hope’s entanglement with Joy, making her more vulnerable to Joy’s manipulation while pushing the narrative toward the inevitable betrayal.
4. Hidden Weakness – Ignoring Red Flags: Scene: Hope notices Joy making subtle changes to her artwork without asking for permission. Joy insists it’s for the better, and Hope, feeling insecure, agrees despite her instincts. Emotional Impact: Hope’s insecurities prevent her from asserting herself. She doesn’t fully trust Joy’s alterations but buries her unease, unwilling to confront the person who has reignited her creativity. Purpose: This moment exposes Hope’s hidden weakness—her need for validation—which Joy exploits to manipulate her further.

Act 3: Confronting the Truth
1. Betrayal – Joy Steals Hope’s Work: Scene: Hope attends an art show, only to see one of her pieces presented as Joy’s work. Joy is basking in the praise, while Hope is left stunned. Emotional Impact: This moment cuts deeply into Hope’s sense of identity. She feels profoundly betrayed, not just as an artist but as a person. Her anger and disbelief cause a whirlwind of emotion, but she’s still hesitant to take action, realizing how deeply Joy has entrapped her. Purpose: This betrayal marks the shift where Hope recognizes Joy as a threat rather than a savior, pushing her toward reclaiming her life.
2. Courage – Gathering Evidence: Scene: Hope begins documenting the changes Joy has made to her work and starts seeking legal counsel. She knows she must prepare for a fight. Emotional Impact: This is Hope’s first step toward regaining control. It requires immense courage, as she’s not only fighting for her art but also confronting the deep emotional wounds Joy has caused. The scene pulses with determination and fear. Purpose: This act of courage shows Hope transitioning from victim to fighter, moving toward the final confrontation.
3. Distress – Being Publicly Discredited: Scene: Hope tries to confront Joy at a public event, but Joy skillfully gaslights her in front of colleagues, making it seem like Hope is mentally unstable. Hope is humiliated and ridiculed. Emotional Impact: This public shaming is devastating. Hope feels emotionally crushed, powerless, and embarrassed. It’s her lowest point, as her credibility is questioned in both personal and professional spheres. Purpose: This failure sets up the climactic need for Hope to expose Joy on a larger scale, escalating the tension for the final act.
4. Moral Issue – Should She Expose Will Too? Scene: As she prepares for the final legal battle, Hope contemplates whether to expose Will’s affair in court. She knows it would destroy him and her brother, but wonders if it’s morally right to use it as leverage. Emotional Impact: Hope is torn between revenge and doing what’s right. Her decision to focus on the artistic theft rather than personal betrayal demonstrates her internal growth and moral fortitude. Purpose: This moment sharpens the conflict between personal justice and moral integrity, highlighting Hope’s character development.

Act 4: Reclaiming Her Life
1. Success/Winning – Exposing Joy’s Deception: Scene: In the courtroom, Hope presents undeniable evidence that Joy stole her work. Joy tries to manipulate the narrative, but Hope’s truth is irrefutable. Emotional Impact: The sense of victory washes over Hope, but it’s not just about winning—it’s about reclaiming her identity. Her artistic and emotional autonomy are restored in this moment of triumph. Purpose: This is the emotional payoff for Hope’s journey, showing her resilience and strength.
2. Sacrifice – Letting Go of Her Past with Joy: Scene: After the court case, Joy attempts to reconcile with Hope, trying to evoke their past romance, but Hope rejects her. Emotional Impact: Hope feels bittersweet relief. She is saddened to let go of the romanticized past she had with Joy but knows it’s necessary for her future. It’s an emotional release, shedding the toxicity from her life. Purpose: This sacrifice solidifies Hope’s growth and independence, closing the chapter on her relationship with Joy.
3. Bonding – Reconnecting with Her Brother: Scene: After the dust settles, Hope meets with her brother. There’s an awkward silence, but they eventually embrace, both acknowledging their mistakes and the pain caused. Emotional Impact: This quiet moment of reconciliation shows Hope’s emotional healing. She’s no longer seeking perfection but accepting life’s complexities. Purpose: This moment of familial bonding reflects the theme of emotional freedom and forgiveness.
4. Love – Rediscovering Her Art: Scene: Hope returns to her studio, painting alone for the first time in a long while. Her strokes are bold, filled with a sense of emotional liberation. Emotional Impact: This final emotional release is cathartic for Hope. She’s rediscovered her love for art, free from manipulation, and it feels pure and empowering. Purpose: This represents Hope’s ultimate success, not just in her career but in finding peace within herself.
Emotional Input Concise Answers:
Act 1: Emotional Dissonance (HOPE)
1. Surprise – Reuniting with Joy: After the fire, Hope is shocked yet exhilarated by Joy’s sudden reappearance, rekindling old feelings.
2. Triggering Wounds – Discovering Will’s Affair: Hope is devastated upon finding evidence of Will’s betrayal with her brother, shattering her world.
3. Bonding – Joy’s Comfort: Joy consoles Hope after the betrayal, and their emotional connection deepens, making Hope trust Joy more.
4. Moral Dilemma – To Confront or Not?: Hope agonizes over whether to confront Will about the affair, emotionally paralyzed by the weight of the decision.
Act 1: Setting Their Plans in Motion
Joy’s Viewpoint
1. Surprise – Seeing Hope Again: Joy is intrigued and excited when she unexpectedly reunites with Hope after the fire, seeing an opportunity to manipulate her old love.
2. Triggering Wounds – Revisiting the Past: Joy feels a mix of resentment and desire when Hope responds warmly to her, recalling how she once lost Hope to Will.
3. Bonding – Offering Support: Joy comforts Hope after Will’s betrayal, using this moment to strengthen their emotional bond and begin her manipulation.
4. Moral Issue – Manipulating Hope: Joy justifies manipulating Hope as a way to reclaim control and power, convincing herself it’s for her own success.
Will’s Viewpoint
1. Distress – Fire at Hope’s Exhibit: Will is worried about the fire at Hope’s gallery, but mainly because of the potential damage to his public image.
2. Hidden Weakness – Fear of Exposure: When Hope starts acting suspicious, Will panics internally, fearing she’ll discover his affair with her brother.
3. Moral Dilemma – Juggling Relationships: Will struggles with guilt over his affair but refuses to confront it, convincing himself he can maintain both relationships.
4. Betrayal – Covering Up the Affair: Will feels he’s betraying Hope, but continues the affair with Michael, compartmentalizing his emotions to avoid facing the consequences.

Act 2: Falling into the Trap (HOPE)
1. Excitement – Reviving Artistic Passion: Hope feels creatively alive again through her collaboration with Joy, mistaking it for personal revival.
2. Emotional Dilemma – Will’s Betrayal Confirmed: Upon catching Will and her brother, Hope is torn between confrontation and escaping into Joy’s arms.
3. Sacrifice – Abandoning Her Marriage: Hope emotionally sacrifices her lifeless marriage, seeing Joy as her only way out.
4. Hidden Weakness – Ignoring Red Flags: Hope overlooks Joy’s manipulations out of insecurity, making her more vulnerable.
Act 2: Strengthening Their Hold
Joy’s Viewpoint
1. Excitement – Gaining Control Over Hope: Joy feels a rush of power as Hope becomes romantically and creatively dependent on her, feeding her ego.
2. Sacrifice – Giving Up Integrity: Joy sacrifices any remaining personal integrity, manipulating Hope’s art to boost her own career.
3. Betrayal – Manipulating Hope’s Vulnerability: Joy exploits Hope’s emotional pain over Will’s affair to deepen her control, using it as leverage to get closer to her.
4. Hidden Weakness – Fear of Losing Control: Joy’s biggest fear is losing her grip on Hope. She becomes paranoid, watching Hope for any signs of resistance.
Will’s Viewpoint
1. Success – Keeping the Affair Hidden: Will feels a twisted sense of success as he continues his affair with Michael, confident Hope hasn’t found out yet.
2. Emotional Dilemma – Guilt over Betrayal: Will feels torn between his secret relationship and his obligation to Hope, but his desire to maintain both outweighs his guilt.
3. Triggering Wounds – Hope Drifting Away: Will feels insecure and threatened as he notices Hope growing closer to Joy, sparking fears of abandonment and inadequacy.
4. Moral Issue – Ignoring the Consequences: Will decides not to address his failing marriage or affair, believing he can avoid accountability and keep both lives intact.

Act 3: Confronting the Truth (HOPE)
1. Betrayal – Joy Steals Her Work: Hope is crushed when she discovers Joy claiming credit for her art, realizing she’s been used.
2. Courage – Gathering Evidence: Hope begins collecting proof of Joy’s theft, determined to fight back and reclaim her work.
3. Distress – Being Publicly Discredited: Hope tries to confront Joy, only to be gaslit and humiliated, sinking into a deeper emotional crisis.
4. Moral Issue – Exposing Will: Hope wrestles with whether to reveal Will’s affair in court, questioning the morality of using it as leverage.
Act 3: Losing Control
Joy’s Viewpoint
1. Betrayal – Hope Gathering Evidence: Joy realizes Hope is turning against her, making her feel betrayed and anxious about her plans unraveling.
2. Courage – Doubling Down on Manipulation: Joy discredits Hope publicly, portraying her as mentally unstable to maintain her control, despite knowing it’s cruel.
3. Success – Publicly Discrediting Hope: Joy feels victorious when she successfully gaslights Hope, protecting her reputation and positioning herself as the true artist.
4. Distress – Losing Grip on Hope: As Hope starts gathering evidence, Joy panics, fearing that her carefully built career and relationship with Hope are crumbling.
Will’s Viewpoint
1. Distress – Hope’s Growing Distance: Will notices Hope pulling away emotionally and creatively, which makes him feel powerless and guilty, though he still hides behind his facade.
2. Moral Dilemma – Should He Align with Joy?: Will wrestles with whether to side with Joy legally, knowing it might further hurt Hope but could also protect his own secrets.
3. Betrayal – Aligning with Joy: Will betrays Hope again by backing Joy during the legal battles, using his legal expertise to strip Hope of her assets.
4. Triggering Wounds – Fear of Public Exposure: Will's greatest fear of his affair coming to light begins to take hold, as Hope’s investigation into Joy threatens to expose everything.

Act 4: Reclaiming Her Life (HOPE)
1. Success – Exposing Joy: Hope triumphs in court, proving Joy’s theft and reclaiming her identity as an artist.
2. Sacrifice – Letting Go of Joy: Hope rejects Joy’s last attempt at reconciliation, finally freeing herself from their toxic relationship.
3. Bonding – Reconnecting with Her Brother: Hope reconciles with her brother, beginning emotional healing after the betrayal.
4. Love – Rediscovering Her Art: Hope finds peace and renewed passion in her art, painting freely for the first time in years.
Act 4: Facing the Consequences
Joy’s Viewpoint
1. Betrayal – Being Exposed by Hope: In the courtroom, Joy feels the full weight of Hope’s betrayal as she’s exposed for stealing her art and manipulating her emotionally.
2. Distress – Career Collapse: Joy is devastated when her career collapses after being exposed, leaving her reputation in tatters.
3. Moral Issue – Desperate Plea to Reconcile: Joy tries to evoke their past romance to manipulate Hope one last time, but when Hope rejects her, she feels the sting of emotional failure.
4. Sacrifice – Losing Everything: Joy realizes she has sacrificed everything—her integrity, career, and relationship with Hope—and is left with nothing.
Will’s Viewpoint
1. Failure – Divorce and Public Humiliation: Will is forced into an ugly divorce settlement, losing his power over Hope and facing public shame for his affair.
2. Distress – Realization of Consequences: Will is hit by the reality of his actions as both his marriage and affair implode, leaving him emotionally hollow.
3. Sacrifice – Losing Hope and Michael: Will is forced to give up both Hope and Michael, his relationships with both irreparably damaged.
4. Hidden Weakness – Fear of Loneliness: Will is left alone, consumed by his insecurities and fear of abandonment, realizing too late the cost of his choices.

• This reply was modified 9 months, 4 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 6: What Do You Reveal and When?
Sylvia’s Reveals!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned doing this assignment is…This was interesting in it helped suss out the main ideas by putting them in order and adding details on how they might happen.

MY OUTLINE 9-30-24 with set-up and reveals
4-Act Structure =
Act 1:
Opening:
Set-up: Hope looks at her wedding band and frowns.
Reveal: Hope is in a loveless marriage.

Set-up: Hope puts up past dated artwork of hers.
Reveal: Hope was a successful artist.

Set-up: Hope carries a tattered love letter.
Set-up: Hope and Joy lock eyes and smile.
LATER REVEAL: Hope seduces Joy.

Set-up: Hope and Joy lock eyes and smile.
Reveal: Joy is still around with eyes for HOPE.

Set-up: Joy is the new art curator that wants to exhibit Hope’s work.
Reveal: Joy is ambitious.

Set-up: Joy lights up a cigarette.
Set-up: Prepping for a fire to Mysteriously Break out-In INCITING INCIDENT.
Later Reveal: Joy and an Art Dealer started the fire.

Set-up: Will runs late to Joy’s art exhibit.
Set-up: Will is charming to all others and cold to Hope.
Reveal: Will is emotionally unavailable for Hope.

Set-up: Will acts nervous and strange around Michael (Hope’s brother).
Set-up: Will primps himself in the men’s room.
Set-up: Will takes off his wedding band.
Set-up: Will is in love with someone else.

Set-up: Will sneaks out of the art exhibit.
Set-up: Will texts Hope that he had to go and couldn’t get her groceries.
Reveal: Will Neglects his marriage.
Inciting Incident:

Set-up: Mysterious Fire Breaks out.

Set-up: Joy saves Hope.

Set-up: Joy pressures Hope that she needs to create new art to pay for the damages.

Turning Point:
Reveal: Hope discovers Will’s affair with her brother, Michael.

Reveal: Hope and Joy get together.
Set-up: Joy encourages Hope to continue creating her art and asks for Hope’s help in her own art.
Set-up: Hope gives a few art pieces to Joy to use as her own to help her financially and assist Joy with her own career.

Set-up: Joy and Will exploit Hope’s emotional vulnerability and her art for their own gain.

Set-up: Will distances himself further from Hope and remains passive.

Act 2:
New Plan:
Set-up: Hope sees Joy as a savior, offering her a chance to revive her creativity and escape her troubled marriage.
Reveal: She gives Joy control of her old and new artwork.

Set-up: Joy’s influence over Hope begins to grow subtly insidious as Joy takes credit for Hope’s work.
Set-Up: Will, detached, is deliberately avoiding confrontation. He smooth talks Hope that he is glad Joy is helping her create art again and encourages it.
Reveal: Joy and Will are secretly plotting to control Hope’s career and assets. Will remains passive, but he and Joy subtly manipulate Hope’s insecurities, isolating her emotionally and financially.

Plan in Action:
Set-up: As Hope begins to create again, she and Joy grow closer—personally and professionally. The lines between love and manipulation blur.
Reveal: Joy begins a takeover, subtly crediting herself for Hope’s creativity, while positioning Hope as emotionally unstable.

Set-Up: She takes subtle credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as the visionary behind Hope’s artistic success. This professional power dynamic begins to shift.
Reveal: Joy becomes the face of their collaboration.
Set-Up: Will remains absent, avoiding any confrontation with Hope.
Set-Up: Will, though emotionally distant, helps Joy from behind the scenes, orchestrating events that further destabilize Hope’s confidence.
Set-up: Hope remains unaware that the two closest people in her life are conspiring against her.

Midpoint Turning Point:
Reveal: Hope catches Will and Michael in bed together, confirming her suspicions and deepening her despair.

Set-up: Around this time, Joy reveals that she’s facing financial ruin and pressures Hope to let her take credit for some of Hope’s newer works to boost Joy’s reputation.
Set-Up: Feeling guilty and confused, Hope agrees.
Set-Up: The stakes rise as Joy continues to emotionally manipulate Hope, pushing her toward isolation. This marks the turning point where Hope is trapped between two betrayals—Will’s infidelity and Joy’s exploitation.
Reveal: Will and Joy’s secret partnership becomes clearer to the audience—Will is financially tied to Joy’s success, and they both stand to gain from Hope’s downfall.

Set-Up: Joy manipulates Hope into sharing her art under Joy’s name, exploiting Hope’s emotions. They argue.
Reveal: Hope begins to realize that Joy's influence is both uplifting and toxic.

Set-Up: Joy rationalizes her actions by exploiting Hope’s vulnerabilities, ensuring that Hope feels indebted to her and unable to break free.
Reveal: Joy’s financial troubles are revealed, and she pushes Hope into letting her take full control of Hope’s artistic output.

Set-Up: Hope and Joy’s relationship intensifies, Will retreats further.
Set-Up: Will uses his relationship with Michael as emotional support.
Reveal: He begins divorce proceedings, aiming to secure as much as possible from the marriage financially.

Act 3:
Rethink Everything:
Set-Up: The tension escalates as Joy’s manipulations become more overt.
Set-Up: Hope begins to see through the deception, realizing Joy is using her for both emotional and professional gain. She doesn’t yet know Will is also involved.
Set-Up: Joy’s rise in the art world intensifies, with the media praising her as a visionary. Joy continues to exploit Hope’s creativity, presenting herself as the genius behind the work while subtly discrediting Hope.
Set-Up: Will, emboldened by his secret alliance with Joy and his affair with Michael, moves forward with divorce proceedings, aiming to strip Hope of her assets, including her artwork. Reveal: Hope is sidelined with the divorce papers. Will begins divorce proceedings, seeking to take control of their shared assets, including her artwork, increasing Hope’s desperation.

New Plan:
Set-Up: Hope tries to reclaim her art and identity but feels trapped and powerless by Joy’s growing influence and Will’s legal claims.
Reveal: The art world, enamored by Joy, largely dismisses Hope, who is seen as yesterday’s news.

Set-Up: Tension mounts as Hope realizes the full scope of their betrayal.
Set-Up: Faced with financial ruin and artistic erasure, Hope struggles to find a way out.
Reveal: Hope’s bank accounts are frozen. She can’t afford an attorney.

Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Set-Up: Hope’s worst fears are realized when Joy fully eclipses her in the art world. Joy takes over Hope’s artistic identity and her persona. Joy becomes the newest star in the art world—claiming Hope’s work.
Set-Up: Hope is sidelined, her name and contributions erased.
Reveal: Hope learns that Joy orchestrated the gallery fire to force Hope back into the spotlight, but under Joy’s control.

Set-Up: Will’s divorce proceedings leave Hope financially devastated. She will lose everything—her creative legacy, her marriage, and her reputation.
Set-Up: Joy walks out on Hope and is seen with Will.
Set-Up: He pushes for a divorce settlement that would leave Hope with little, seeking to capitalize on her weakened position.
Set-Up: Hope thinks about signing the divorce papers and walking away to start a new life.
Reveal: Will and Joy were previously married. She hits rock bottom in ruin and disgust.

Set-Up: Michael backs away from Will.

Set-Up: Hope stalls in signing the divorce papers unless there are changes.
Set-up: Joy walks out on Will.
Set-Up: Hope threatens to expose Joy.
Set-up: Will becomes more aggressive as he realizes he is losing control over Hope, Joy and Michael.
Set-Up: Hope threatens to expose Will to Michael.
Reveal: Will must choose between continuing to manipulate Hope for financial gain or stepping back from the chaos of their relationship. His affair with Michael complicates things further, as he risks losing everything if exposed.

From Act 1: Later Reveal: Joy and an Art Dealer started the fire. The art dealer who pressured Hope to create new work after the fire is secretly working with Joy. He had invested heavily in Joy’s rise to fame and engineered the gallery fire to push Hope into creating new art that Joy could claim.

Set-Up: Hope loses it over all the manipulation tactics.
Set-Up: Hope has nothing further to lose.
Reveal: This gives Hope the spark she needs to fight back!

Reveal: Michael is there to help his sister Hope.

Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Set-Up: Determined to reclaim her identity, Hope and Michael gather evidence of Joy’s theft.

Set-up: She hires a lawyer and sues Joy for copyright infringement and fraud.
Reveal: She exposes Joy’s theft using forensic evidence that reveals Hope’s hidden signature under the layers of paint on every piece Joy claimed as her own.

Set-Up: Joy, in a last-ditch effort, uses her connections and influence to discredit Hope, accusing her of lying and trying to destroy her career out of jealousy. Feeling cornered, Joy tries to discredit Hope, painting her as mentally unstable and vindictive, using personal details from their romantic past against her.
Set-Up: The courtroom drama reaches a fever pitch as Joy’s lies begin to unravel under cross-examination.
Set-Up: Tension builds as Joy tries one last desperate attempt to manipulate the narrative, but Hope’s resolve holds firm.
Reveal: Hope fights back in court, using forensic evidence to reveal that the art Joy claimed is hers. The courtroom battle is a symbolic and literal reclaiming of her identity, as Hope exposes Joy’s deception.
Reveal: With mounting evidence, including testimony from gallery insiders and art experts, Hope triumphs in court, exposing Joy as a fraud.

Set-Up: The situation takes a sharp turn when Hope learns the devastating truth: Will and Joy have been working together from the start.
Reveal: This revelation shatters her emotionally, but it also leads to the beginning of their downfall.

Set-Up: In a thrilling courtroom showdown, Joy and Will’s partnership crumbles as they begin blaming each other to avoid personal ruin.
Set-Up: Joy, growing greedy, starts positioning herself to cut Will out of the picture, seeking to claim everything for herself.
Set-Up: Will, headstrong, starts to throw Joy under-the-bus and as he does he reveals their sinister plans and actions.
Reveal: Their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming and they both keep adding to it.
Reveal: Joy admits she loves Hope but not without power. A deeper layer is uncovered when it is revealed that Hope’s creative block and her tolerance of Joy’s manipulations stem from a subconscious guilt about her own past choices. She has been sabotaging herself as a way of atoning for past wrongs she committed against Joy, such as leaving her without closure in high school.
Reveal: It's revealed that Joy's reappearance in Hope's life wasn't a coincidence. From the beginning, Joy had been plotting her revenge on both Hope and Will for betraying her in the past. Her endgame is not only to steal Hope’s art but to also publicly humiliate Will for breaking off their engagement in college, which she never got over.

Reveal: Will had been aiding Joy in sabotaging Hope from the shadows in exchange for financial gain, knowing that he would likely lose most of his assets in the divorce.

Set-Up: The betrayals deepen Hope’s feelings of being used by everyone around her.
Set-up: In this final battle, Hope publicly reclaims her identity as the true artist behind the work.
Reveal: Joy’s deception is revealed, and her career collapses.
Reveal: This public confrontation is cathartic, as Hope reclaims her identity, both as an artist and as a person.

Set-Up: Will, seeing that he cannot manipulate Hope anymore retreats defeated.
Reveal: He agrees to a divorce settlement that allows Hope to retain her assets. Will gives up everything he had tried to steal.
Reveal: His affair and legal maneuvers are exposed, weakening his position in the divorce.

Reveal: Michael, Hope’s brother, initially seems to be complicit in Will’s affair, but a deeper layer reveals that he has been secretly working to expose both Will and Joy. He is trying to protect Hope, driven by guilt for the affair, but his plan spirals out of control when he underestimates Joy’s ruthlessness.

Resolution:
Reveal: Hope wins her legal battle, reclaiming her name, legacy, her art, and her financial security. She divorces Will, retains her assets, and severs ties with both Joy and the toxic elements of her past.

Reveal: Joy’s career is destroyed.

Set-Up: Will is left with nothing after their toxic partnership implodes.
Reveal: Michael is out of the picture as he helps his sister.

Set-Up: Hope reclaims her art, her name, and her life. She triumphs over both Joy and Will, divorcing the latter and severing ties with the former.
Set-Up: Hope leaves the city to reinvent herself in a new life, free from the emotional and creative oppression she endured. Empowered by her victory, Hope experiences a creative rebirth, inspiration and peace ready to begin anew on her own terms.
Reveal: Hope experiences a creative resurgence, this time unburdened by the emotional baggage of her past as she fly’s off into the sunset.

• This reply was modified 9 months, 4 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 5: Character Action Tracks
Sylvia’s Character Action Tracks!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…this was harder than expected. I had many small details and AI kept reiterating my ideas in different forms. Alas, I think I have some big events to add in. The details will be added later per class recommendation of keeping to the larger picture at this time.
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.

• This reply was modified 9 months, 4 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 4: Basic Plotting
Sylvia’s New Outline Beats!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…inputting my prior assignments in the Acts/Areas they would fit and try not to over think them.

Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
4-Act Structure =
Act 1:
Opening:
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is numb and emotionally disconnected from her life, her work, her marriage to Will, and her creative process. Her latest art exhibit, full of older successful works, symbolizes her creative stagnation and entrapment. The cold, distant nature of her marriage to Will subtly suggests something is wrong, but she’s too emotionally drained to confront it. A growing sense of unease underscores her life. She’s trapped in her past achievements and a loveless marriage suppressing her true desires.
• HOPE PJ: Beginning:
Hope is emotionally disconnected from her art, her marriage, and herself. She feels trapped by her past success and an unfulfilling marriage to Will, carrying guilt for not loving him despite respecting him. Her creative energy is blocked by unresolved feelings for Joy, her first love, who represents both nostalgia and unhealed wounds.
• JOY AJ: Beginning:
Joy is full of life, charming, and magnetic, returning to Hope’s life as a potential savior and catalyst for her creative rebirth. Beneath her vibrant facade, however, Joy is manipulative, driven by her own ambition, and sees Hope as a means to an end.
• WILL AJ-2: Beginning:
Will is emotionally unavailable, neglecting his marriage to Hope while carrying on an affair with her brother, Michael. He avoids responsibility and confrontation, preferring to maintain a polished facade rather than face his internal demons or acknowledge the disintegration of his marriage.
Inciting Incident:
A mysterious fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. The fire appears accidental, but there’s a lingering suspicion— it seems too perfectly timed to push her into action. An art dealer presses Hope to create new art to cover the damages, adding pressure to her already stagnant creativity. She starts questioning the strange circumstances of the fire. Is someone deliberately trying to ruin her? Unbeknownst to her, Will and Joy are working together behind the scenes, manipulating this situation for their own purposes.

Turning Point:
Amid this tension, Hope discovers Will’s affair with her brother, Michael. This revelation shatters her emotionally, driving her into a crisis. During this time, she reconnects with Joy, her first love, who offers Hope comfort and understanding. The chemistry between them reignites instantly rekindling unresolved feelings and passion, pulling Hope back into unresolved passions from her past and deeper into a web of deceit. As Hope’s life unravels, she sees Joy as her escape from her failing marriage, though danger lurks beneath the surface of their reunion. Her passion is reignited with unresolved feelings and complicating her already fragile emotional state. Joy and Will exploit Hope’s emotional vulnerability and her art for their own gain.
• HOPE PJ: Turning Point:
The discovery of Will's affair with her brother, Michael, shakes her emotional foundation. This personal betrayal pushes Hope to reconnect with Joy, seeing her as a potential escape and source of creative inspiration. She starts to believe Joy could reignite her passion for art and life.
• JOY AJ: Turning Point:
Joy successfully seduces Hope emotionally and professionally, convincing her to rely on Joy for validation and inspiration. She starts subtly taking credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as an artistic visionary, using Hope’s talent to further her own career.
• WILL AJ-2: Turning Point:
When Hope discovers his affair, Will is forced to confront his double life. However, rather than taking responsibility, he distances himself further, allowing Joy to manipulate Hope. Will remains passive, letting the chaos of his affair and failing marriage play out.
Act 2:
New Plan:
Joy encourages Hope to create new work and revive her art career, offering support and seduction. Hope, smitten and inspired, begins to focus on her art again, using Joy's validation as fuel to escape her emotional turmoil. Hope sees Joy as a savior, offering her a chance to revive her creativity and escape her troubled marriage. Will is emotionally unavailable. He lets Hope do as she wishes and remains passive.

However, Joy’s influence over Hope begins to grow subtly insidious. Joy encourages Hope to break free from her doubts and embrace her creative potential, but Hope is blind to the fact that Joy is manipulating her emotions for her own gain. Will, detached, is deliberately avoiding confrontation, but there’s a lurking sense of his ulterior motives, adding suspense to the marital dynamic. Joy and Will are secretly plotting to control Hope’s career and assets. Will remains passive, but he and Joy subtly manipulate Hope’s insecurities, isolating her emotionally and financially.

Plan in Action:
As Hope begins to create again, she and Joy grow closer—personally and professionally. Their relationship deepens into a romantic affair, but the lines between love and manipulation blur. Joy starts to position herself as more than just a muse—she wants credit for Hope’s work. Unbeknownst to Hope, Joy begins a takeover, subtly crediting herself for Hope’s creativity, while positioning Hope as emotionally unstable. This deceit sets the stage for future betrayals. Joy begins taking credit for Hope’s artistic vision while positioning herself as a rising star in the art world. She takes subtle credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as the visionary behind Hope’s artistic success. This professional power dynamic begins to shift, as Joy becomes the face of their collaboration. Will remains absent, avoiding any confrontation with Hope. Will, though emotionally distant, helps Joy from behind the scenes, orchestrating events that further destabilize Hope’s confidence. Hope remains unaware that the two closest people in her life are conspiring against her.

Midpoint Turning Point:
Hope catches Will and Michael in bed together, confirming her suspicions and deepening her despair. Around this time, Joy reveals that she’s facing financial ruin and pressures Hope to let her take credit for some of Hope’s newer works to boost Joy’s reputation. Feeling guilty and confused, Hope agrees. The stakes rise as Joy continues to emotionally manipulate Hope, pushing her toward isolation. This marks the turning point where Hope is trapped between two betrayals—Will’s infidelity and Joy’s exploitation. Meanwhile, Will and Joy’s secret partnership becomes clearer to the audience—Will is financially tied to Joy’s success, and they both stand to gain from Hope’s downfall.
• HOPE PJ: Midpoint:
Joy manipulates Hope into sharing her art under Joy’s name, exploiting Hope’s emotions. Hope begins to realize that Joy's influence is both uplifting and toxic. Meanwhile, Will's infidelity becomes undeniable. Hope is caught between two betrayals—one emotional (Will) and one professional (Joy).
• JOY AJ: Midpoint:
Joy’s financial troubles are revealed, and she pushes Hope into letting her take full control of Hope’s artistic output. She rationalizes her actions by exploiting Hope’s vulnerabilities, ensuring that Hope feels indebted to her and unable to break free.
• WILL AJ-2: Midpoint:
As Hope and Joy’s relationship intensifies, Will retreats further. He begins divorce proceedings, aiming to secure as much as possible from the marriage financially, using his relationship with Michael as emotional support.
Act 3:
Rethink Everything:
The tension escalates as Joy’s manipulations become more overt. Hope begins to see through the deception, realizing Joy is using her for both emotional and professional gain. She doesn’t yet know Will is also involved. Joy’s rise in the art world intensifies, with the media praising her as a visionary. Joy continues to exploit Hope’s creativity, presenting herself as the genius behind the work while subtly discrediting Hope. Will, emboldened by his secret alliance with Joy and his affair with Michael, moves forward with divorce proceedings, aiming to strip Hope of her assets, including her artwork. Meanwhile, Hope is sidelined, struggling to maintain her own identity. Will begins divorce proceedings, seeking to take control of their shared assets, including her artwork, increasing Hope’s desperation.

New Plan:
Hope tries to reclaim her art and identity but feels trapped and powerless by Joy’s growing influence and Will’s legal claims. Will, now emboldened by his relationship with Michael, files for divorce, taking a substantial portion of Hope’s assets. The art world, enamored by Joy, largely dismisses Hope, who is seen as yesterday’s news. Faced with personal and professional ruin, on the verge of losing everything—her creative legacy, her financial security, and her personal freedom. Tension mounts as Hope realizes the full scope of their betrayal but struggles to find a way out. Faced with financial ruin and artistic erasure, she contemplates walking away from everything but knows she must fight back to regain her life, dignity and career.

Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Hope’s worst fears are realized when Joy fully eclipses her in the art world. Joy takes over Hope’s artistic identity and her persona. Joy becomes the newest star in the art world—claiming Hope’s work. Hope is sidelined, her name and contributions erased. Will’s divorce proceedings leave Hope financially devastated, and she has lost everything—her creative legacy, her marriage, and her reputation. Will’s divorce proceedings will leave Hope with almost nothing, both emotionally and financially. The betrayal becomes complete when Hope learns that Joy orchestrated the gallery fire to force Hope back into the spotlight, but under Joy’s control. Furthermore, Will and Joy were previously married. She hits rock bottom in ruin and disgust.
• HOPE PJ: Turning Point:
Hope starts to see the full scope of Joy’s manipulation when Joy begins to take full credit for her work, eclipsing Hope in the art world. Hope feels her personal identity and artistic legacy are being stolen from her, and Will’s divorce proceedings further destabilize her life.
• HOPE PJ: Dilemma:
Hope faces a choice: confront Joy and Will at great personal and professional risk, or walk away and let her identity, art, and reputation be erased. Both options seem like losing propositions, but one path offers the chance to reclaim her true self.
• JOY AJ: Turning Point:
As Hope starts to pull away, recognizing the manipulations, Joy doubles down. She begins publicly taking credit for Hope’s work, trying to fully erase Hope from the narrative. Joy’s need for power and recognition outweighs her personal feelings for Hope.
• JOY AJ: Dilemma:
When Hope threatens to expose her, Joy faces the risk of losing her entire career. She must either continue the deceit, risking everything if caught, or back down and admit her fraud. Both choices jeopardize her carefully constructed persona.
• WILL AJ-2: Turning Point:
Will becomes more aggressive as he realizes he is losing control over both Hope and Michael. He pushes for a divorce settlement that would leave Hope with little, seeking to capitalize on her weakened position.
• Dilemma:
Will must choose between continuing to manipulate Hope for financial gain or stepping back from the chaos of their relationship. His affair with Michael complicates things further, as he risks losing everything if exposed.

• The Art Dealer’s Secret Investment:
The art dealer who pressured Hope to create new work after the fire is secretly working with Joy. He had invested heavily in Joy’s rise to fame and engineered the gallery fire to push Hope into creating new art that Joy could claim. This adds an additional layer of external manipulation to Hope's already tumultuous life. This gives Hope the spark she needs to fight back!
Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Determined to reclaim her identity, Hope gathers evidence of Joy’s theft. She hires a lawyer and sues Joy for copyright infringement and fraud. She exposes Joy’s theft using forensic evidence that reveals Hope’s hidden signature under the layers of paint on every piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, in a last-ditch effort, uses her connections and influence to discredit Hope, accusing her of lying and trying to destroy her career out of jealousy. Feeling cornered, Joy tries to discredit Hope, painting her as mentally unstable and vindictive, using personal details from their romantic past against her.

The courtroom drama reaches a fever pitch as Joy’s lies begin to unravel under cross-examination. Tension builds as Joy tries one last desperate attempt to manipulate the narrative, but Hope’s resolve holds firm. With mounting evidence, including testimony from gallery insiders and art experts, Hope triumphs in court, exposing Joy as a fraud.

The situation takes a sharp turn when Hope learns the devastating truth: Will and Joy have been working together from the start. This revelation shatters her emotionally, but it also leads to the beginning of their downfall. In a thrilling courtroom showdown, Joy and Will’s partnership crumbles as they begin blaming each other to avoid personal ruin. The truth of their manipulations comes to light—Joy’s theft of Hope’s work and Will’s financial betrayal. As their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming. Joy, growing greedy, starts positioning herself to cut Will out of the picture, seeking to claim everything for herself. The tension between them grows as they realize there isn’t enough to share between them. The partnership fractures, and the two begin turning against each other, each trying to outmaneuver the other. As their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming.

Will’s Covert Role in Joy’s Scheme:
Will's role in helping Joy is more active and strategic than initially thought. It is revealed that Will had been aiding Joy in sabotaging Hope from the shadows in exchange for financial gain, knowing that he would likely lose most of his assets in the divorce. This betrayal deepens Hope’s feelings of being used by everyone around her.
In this final battle, Hope publicly reclaims her identity as the true artist behind the work. This public confrontation is cathartic, as Hope reclaims her identity, both as an artist and as a person. Joy’s deception is revealed, and her career collapses. Will, seeing that he cannot manipulate Hope anymore retreats defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement that allows Hope to retain her assets.
• Major Conflict:
Hope fights back in court, using forensic evidence to reveal that the art Joy claimed is hers. The courtroom battle is a symbolic and literal reclaiming of her identity, as Hope exposes Joy’s deception.
• Hope's Subconscious Sabotage:
A deeper layer is uncovered when it is revealed that Hope’s creative block and her tolerance of Joy’s manipulations stem from a subconscious guilt about her own past choices. She has been sabotaging herself as a way of atoning for past wrongs she committed against Joy, such as leaving her without closure in high school.
• JOY AJ: Major Conflict:
In court, Joy’s lies and manipulations are exposed. She tries to discredit Hope, using her connections in the art world, but as the evidence mounts, her credibility and career begin to crumble. The conflict escalates as Joy loses control of the narrative.
• Joy's Revenge Plan from the Start:
It's revealed that Joy's reappearance in Hope's life wasn't a coincidence. From the beginning, Joy had been plotting her revenge on both Hope and Will for betraying her in the past. Her endgame is not only to steal Hope’s art but to also publicly humiliate Will for breaking off their engagement in college, which she never got over.

• WILL AJ-2: Major Conflict:
In the courtroom, Will’s manipulations and avoidance are revealed, and he is forced to confront the consequences of his actions. His affair and legal maneuvers are exposed, weakening his position in the divorce.

• Michael’s Double-Cross:
Michael, Hope’s brother, initially seems to be complicit in Will’s affair, but a deeper layer reveals that he has been secretly working to expose both Will and Joy. He is trying to protect Hope, driven by guilt for the affair, but his plan spirals out of control when he underestimates Joy’s ruthlessness.
Resolution:
Hope wins her legal battle, reclaiming her name, legacy, her art, and her financial security. She divorces Will, retains her assets, and severs ties with both Joy and the toxic elements of her past. Joy’s career is destroyed, and Will is left with nothing after their toxic partnership implodes. Michael is out of the picture as he helps his sister. She leaves the city to reinvent herself in a new life, free from the emotional and creative oppression she endured. Empowered by her victory, Hope experiences a creative rebirth, inspiration and peace ready to begin anew on her own terms. Hope experiences a creative resurgence, this time unburdened by the emotional baggage of her past.

HOPE PJ: Ending:
Hope reclaims her art, her name, and her life. She triumphs over both Joy and Will, divorcing the latter and severing ties with the former. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, Hope starts a new chapter, personally and creatively reborn.
• JOY AJ: Ending:
Joy loses her reputation, career, and influence. Once the dominant figure in Hope’s life, she is now a disgraced fraud, her manipulation and deceit laid bare. She fades into obscurity as Hope reclaims her identity and triumphs.
• WILL AJ-2: Ending:
Will retreats, defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement on Hope’s terms, realizing that he cannot maintain control over her. He loses both his marriage and his influence, and Hope moves on without him.

• This reply was modified 9 months, 4 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 3: Beat Sheet Draft 1
Sylvia’s Beat Sheet – Draft 1
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…interesting and fun puzzle. The hard part for me is WHERE to add in the deeper layers that I have put at the bottom of this assignment. The conventions, I was not sure if I should label them out or work them in so, they are written out at the bottom as well. Then, there is the romance. It’s not a rom-com so, I didn’t use them. I’ll need to research on the romance/love tropes.
Definition of Beat Sheet: A short document (2 – 5 pages) that lists out the beats of the story in a way that you can easily work with and improve the flow and feel of the story.
The big key to this is to fill in one component at a time across the entire outline. To start that, today’s outline is about sequencing the big picture decisions.
BEAT SHEET DRAFT 1
In M2 and the beginning of M4, we made 5 key decisions that all fit your High Concept & tell the story. Today, we sequence those events into the 1st version of your Beat Sheet.

ASSIGNMENT
Starting with your 4-Act Structure, add the following components into your story to create the first draft of your Beat Sheet.
• 4-Act Structure
• Protag Journey Structure (PJ)
• Antag Journey Structure (AJ)
• Deeper Layer
• Genre Conventions
THEN, After you fill in the blanks on your Beat Sheet, go back and do a quick pass to make sure they flow well.

Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
4-Act Structure =
Act 1:
Opening:
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is emotionally disconnected from her life, her marriage to Will, and her creative process. At her art exhibit featuring older, successful works, she feels trapped in her past achievements and a loveless marriage suppressing her true desires.

• HOPE PJ: Beginning:
Hope is emotionally disconnected from her art, her marriage, and herself. She feels trapped by her past success and an unfulfilling marriage to Will, carrying guilt for not loving him despite respecting him. Her creative energy is blocked by unresolved feelings for Joy, her first love, who represents both nostalgia and unhealed wounds.
• JOY AJ: Beginning:
Joy is full of life, charming, and magnetic, returning to Hope’s life as a potential savior and catalyst for her creative rebirth. Beneath her vibrant facade, however, Joy is manipulative, driven by her own ambition, and sees Hope as a means to an end.
• WILL AJ-2: Beginning:
Will is emotionally unavailable, neglecting his marriage to Hope while carrying on an affair with her brother, Michael. He avoids responsibility and confrontation, preferring to maintain a polished facade rather than face his internal demons or acknowledge the disintegration of his marriage.
Inciting Incident:
A fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. An art dealer presses her to create new art to cover the damages, forcing her to confront her creative stagnation and self-doubt.

Turning Point:
Hope discovers that Will is having an affair with her brother, Michael. This deepens her emotional crisis. Amid this personal chaos, she runs into Joy, her first love, reigniting unresolved feelings and intensifying her internal conflict. Hope, feeling lost, sees Joy as a potential way out of her stagnant life. Her passion is reignited with unresolved feelings and complicating her already fragile emotional state.
• HOPE PJ: Turning Point:
The discovery of Will's affair with her brother, Michael, shakes her emotional foundation. This personal betrayal pushes Hope to reconnect with Joy, seeing her as a potential escape and source of creative inspiration. She starts to believe Joy could reignite her passion for art and life.
• JOY AJ: Turning Point:
Joy successfully seduces Hope emotionally and professionally, convincing her to rely on Joy for validation and inspiration. She starts subtly taking credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as an artistic visionary, using Hope’s talent to further her own career.
• WILL AJ-2: Turning Point:
When Hope discovers his affair, Will is forced to confront his double life. However, rather than taking responsibility, he distances himself further, allowing Joy to manipulate Hope. Will remains passive, letting the chaos of his affair and failing marriage play out.
Act 2:
New Plan:
Joy encourages Hope to create new work and revive her art career, offering support and seduction. Hope, smitten and inspired, begins to focus on her art again, using Joy's validation as fuel to escape her emotional turmoil. Hope sees Joy as a savior, offering her a chance to revive her creativity and escape her troubled marriage. Will is emotionally unavailable. He lets Hope do as she wishes and remains passive.

Plan in Action:
Hope creates new art and finds herself creatively rejuvenated. Her relationship with Joy becomes romantic, deepening her connection to the past and fueling her creativity. Will remains absent, avoiding any confrontation with Hope. However, Joy begins taking subtle credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as the visionary behind Hope’s artistic success. This professional power dynamic begins to shift, as Joy becomes the face of their collaboration.

Midpoint Turning Point:
The tension escalates when Hope catches Will and Michael together, confirming her worst fears. At the same time, Joy reveals her financial troubles and convinces Hope to allow her to use some of Hope’s artwork under Joy’s name to boost her career exploiting Hope's emotions to serve her own agenda. This marks the moment when Hope is both emotionally and professionally manipulated by the two people closest to her—Will and Joy.
• HOPE PJ: Midpoint:
Joy manipulates Hope into sharing her art under Joy’s name, exploiting Hope’s emotions. Hope begins to realize that Joy's influence is both uplifting and toxic. Meanwhile, Will's infidelity becomes undeniable. Hope is caught between two betrayals—one emotional (Will) and one professional (Joy).
• JOY AJ: Midpoint:
Joy’s financial troubles are revealed, and she pushes Hope into letting her take full control of Hope’s artistic output. She rationalizes her actions by exploiting Hope’s vulnerabilities, ensuring that Hope feels indebted to her and unable to break free.
• WILL AJ-2: Midpoint:
As Hope and Joy’s relationship intensifies, Will retreats further. He begins divorce proceedings, aiming to secure as much as possible from the marriage financially, using his relationship with Michael as emotional support.
Act 3:
Rethink Everything:
Joy’s manipulation grows more aggressive. Hope starts to see through Joy’s manipulations. Joy’s rise to fame, built on Hope’s work, becomes more blatant, and Hope realizes that her own identity and creative legacy are being stolen. Hope begins to feel used and betrayed. She realizes that Joy is not the person she thought she was, but confronting this truth feels overwhelming. Hope is further sidelined in the art world as Joy's star rises. Meanwhile, Will moves forward with divorce proceedings. His passive-aggressive opposition becomes more evident as he seeks to capitalize on the divorce, further complicating Hope’s already fragile life.

New Plan:
Hope tries to reclaim her art and identity but feels trapped and powerless by Joy’s growing influence and Will’s legal claims. Will, now emboldened by his relationship with Michael, files for divorce, taking a substantial portion of Hope’s assets. The art world, enamored by Joy, largely dismisses Hope, who is seen as yesterday’s news. Faced with personal and professional ruin, she contemplates walking away from everything but knows she must fight back to regain her life and career.

Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Hope’s worst fears are realized when Joy fully eclipses her in the art world. Joy takes over Hope’s artistic identity and her persona. Hope is sidelined, her name and contributions erased. Will’s divorce proceedings leave Hope financially devastated, and she is on the brink of losing everything—her art, her marriage, and her reputation. Will’s divorce proceedings will leave Hope with almost nothing, both emotionally and financially. She hits rock bottom.
• HOPE PJ: Turning Point:
Hope starts to see the full scope of Joy’s manipulation when Joy begins to take full credit for her work, eclipsing Hope in the art world. Hope feels her personal identity and artistic legacy are being stolen from her, and Will’s divorce proceedings further destabilize her life.
• HOPE PJ: Dilemma:
Hope faces a choice: confront Joy and Will at great personal and professional risk, or walk away and let her identity, art, and reputation be erased. Both options seem like losing propositions, but one path offers the chance to reclaim her true self.
• JOY AJ: Turning Point:
As Hope starts to pull away, recognizing the manipulations, Joy doubles down. She begins publicly taking credit for Hope’s work, trying to fully erase Hope from the narrative. Joy’s need for power and recognition outweighs her personal feelings for Hope.
• JOY AJ: Dilemma:
When Hope threatens to expose her, Joy faces the risk of losing her entire career. She must either continue the deceit, risking everything if caught, or back down and admit her fraud. Both choices jeopardize her carefully constructed persona.
• WILL AJ-2: Turning Point:
Will becomes more aggressive as he realizes he is losing control over both Hope and Michael. He pushes for a divorce settlement that would leave Hope with little, seeking to capitalize on her weakened position.
• Dilemma:
Will must choose between continuing to manipulate Hope for financial gain or stepping back from the chaos of their relationship. His affair with Michael complicates things further, as he risks losing everything if exposed.
Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Determined to fight back, Hope hires a lawyer and takes Joy to court. She exposes Joy’s theft using forensic evidence that reveals Hope’s hidden signature under the layers of paint on every piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, in a last-ditch effort, uses her connections and influence to discredit Hope, accusing her of lying and trying to destroy her career out of jealousy. The courtroom battle intensifies as Joy’s manipulations and lies come to light, but she loses ground as the evidence mounts against her.

In this final battle, Hope publicly reclaims her identity as the true artist behind the work. This public confrontation is cathartic, as Hope reclaims her identity, both as an artist and as a person. Joy’s deception is revealed, and her career collapses. Will, seeing that he cannot manipulate Hope anymore retreats defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement that allows Hope to retain her assets.
• Major Conflict:
Hope fights back in court, using forensic evidence to reveal that the art Joy claimed is hers. The courtroom battle is a symbolic and literal reclaiming of her identity, as Hope exposes Joy’s deception.
• JOY AJ: Major Conflict:
In court, Joy’s lies and manipulations are exposed. She tries to discredit Hope, using her connections in the art world, but as the evidence mounts, her credibility and career begin to crumble. The conflict escalates as Joy loses control of the narrative.
• WILL AJ-2: Major Conflict:
In the courtroom, Will’s manipulations and avoidance are revealed, and he is forced to confront the consequences of his actions. His affair and legal maneuvers are exposed, weakening his position in the divorce.
Resolution:
With her name and reputation restored, Hope triumphs in court and reclaims her assets. She divorces Will and severs ties with Joy completely. Empowered by her victory, Hope leaves the city to start fresh, embracing her artistic rebirth and newfound emotional freedom. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, she embarks on a new chapter in life, creatively and personally liberated. Hope experiences a creative resurgence, this time unburdened by the
emotional baggage of her past.
• HOPE PJ: Ending:
Hope reclaims her art, her name, and her life. She triumphs over both Joy and Will, divorcing the latter and severing ties with the former. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, Hope starts a new chapter, personally and creatively reborn.
• JOY AJ: Ending:
Joy loses her reputation, career, and influence. Once the dominant figure in Hope’s life, she is now a disgraced fraud, her manipulation and deceit laid bare. She fades into obscurity as Hope reclaims her identity and triumphs.
• WILL AJ-2: Ending:
Will retreats, defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement on Hope’s terms, realizing that he cannot maintain control over her. He loses both his marriage and his influence, and Hope moves on without him.

5 New Plot Layers:
1. Joy's Revenge Plan from the Start:
It's revealed that Joy's reappearance in Hope's life wasn't a coincidence. From the beginning, Joy had been plotting her revenge on both Hope and Will for betraying her in the past. Her endgame is not only to steal Hope’s art but to also publicly humiliate Will for breaking off their engagement in college, which she never got over.
2. Hope's Subconscious Sabotage:
A deeper layer is uncovered when it is revealed that Hope’s creative block and her tolerance of Joy’s manipulations stem from a subconscious guilt about her own past choices. She has been sabotaging herself as a way of atoning for past wrongs she committed against Joy, such as leaving her without closure in high school.
3. Will’s Covert Role in Joy’s Scheme:
Will's role in helping Joy is more active and strategic than initially thought. It is revealed that Will had been aiding Joy in sabotaging Hope from the shadows in exchange for financial gain, knowing that he would likely lose most of his assets in the divorce. This betrayal deepens Hope’s feelings of being used by everyone around her.
4. Michael’s Double-Cross:
Michael, Hope’s brother, initially seems to be complicit in Will’s affair, but a deeper layer reveals that he has been secretly working to expose both Will and Joy. He is trying to protect Hope, driven by guilt for the affair, but his plan spirals out of control when he underestimates Joy’s ruthlessness.
5. The Art Dealer’s Secret Investment:
The art dealer who pressured Hope to create new work after the fire is secretly working with Joy. He had invested heavily in Joy’s rise to fame and engineered the gallery fire to push Hope into creating new art that Joy could claim. This adds an additional layer of external manipulation to Hope's already tumultuous life.

5 New Character Layers for Protagonist (Hope):
1. Fear of True Freedom:
Hope’s emotional stagnation and paralysis stem from a deep-seated fear of true freedom. Despite wanting to break free, she fears that if she truly cuts ties with Will and Joy, she will lose all structure in her life. This subconscious fear keeps her tethered to her toxic relationships longer than it should.
2. Childhood Trauma Related to Control:
Hope’s need to be recognized as an artist and to have control over her work stems from childhood trauma where she was often controlled or manipulated by an overbearing parent. Her need to reclaim her identity in the present is directly tied to a past where her voice was silenced.
3. Love as a Destructive Force:
Hope’s love for both Joy and Will becomes a destructive force in her life. She continually sacrifices parts of herself to make the relationships work, reflecting a pattern of co-dependence. As a result, she struggles with whether her love is genuine or simply a need to be loved in return.
4. Self-Doubt as a Defense Mechanism:
Hope’s creative self-doubt and emotional passivity are defense mechanisms. She keeps herself in a constant state of doubt as a way to avoid taking responsibility for her choices, allowing others (like Joy and Will) to take the lead so she can deflect blame when things go wrong.
5. Unresolved Resentment Toward Her Brother:
Hope harbors deep, unresolved resentment toward Michael, not just for his affair with Will, but for overshadowing her throughout their childhood. This sibling dynamic becomes more apparent as the story unfolds, revealing that her relationship with Will may have been an unconscious attempt to stay connected to her brother.

5 New Character Layers for Antagonist (Joy):
1. Romantic Idealism Turned Cynical:
Joy was once an idealist who believed in the purity of love and art. Her heartbreak from both Hope and Will in her younger years hardened her, turning her into a cynical manipulator. She now believes that control is the only way to avoid being hurt again, which drives her need to dominate Hope’s life and career.
2. Psychological Projection of Her Own Insecurities:
Joy’s obsession with Hope’s art stems from her own insecurities as an art curator. She projects her fear of being irrelevant and forgotten onto Hope, which is why she needs to take credit for Hope’s work. This layer adds a psychological complexity to her villainy, revealing that she doesn’t just want power—she fears irrelevance.
3. Secret Affair with Michael:
In a shocking twist, Joy had a brief affair with Michael during their high school years, unbeknownst to Hope and Will. This secret affair adds a layer of emotional tension and betrayal, complicating Joy’s motivations. It also explains her ability to manipulate both Will and Michael so effectively.
4. Fear of Abandonment:
Joy’s manipulative behavior is driven by a deep fear of abandonment. Her need to control Hope and Will stems from her experiences of being emotionally abandoned in the past. This fear makes her relentless in her pursuit of power and recognition, as she equates success with emotional security.
5. Secret Saboteur of Hope’s Early Career:
It's revealed that early in Hope's career, Joy had sabotaged one of her early opportunities out of jealousy. This hidden act of betrayal shaped their divergent paths and explains Joy's obsession with controlling Hope’s future. Once this is revealed, it reframes their entire relationship from high school to the present.

5 New Character Layers for Antagonist-Third Wheel (Will):
1. Internalized Shame About His Affair:
Will’s affair with Michael isn't just about physical attraction or rebellion—he is deeply ashamed of his sexual orientation due to his conservative upbringing. This internal conflict adds a layer of complexity to his avoidance of confrontation, as he is trying to bury his shame rather than deal with it openly.
2. Fear of Professional Failure:
Will’s passivity in his personal life is mirrored by a deep fear of failure in his professional life. His secret involvement in Joy’s scheme to steal Hope’s art is motivated by a desperation to maintain financial stability and avoid professional ruin. He is willing to sacrifice his marriage and morals to protect his career.
3. Hidden Ambition for Control:
Will’s avoidance of responsibilities is a front for his deeper, hidden desire for control. His manipulation of both Hope and Michael stems from a need to dominate them emotionally, even as he presents himself as passive and uninvolved. This layer reveals that his passivity is a calculated way to maintain power without being overt.
4. Unresolved Romantic Feelings for Joy:
While Will is having an affair with Michael, he also harbors lingering romantic feelings for Joy from their college days. His resentment toward Hope and his passive-aggressive behavior in the divorce is fueled by his jealousy over Hope’s renewed connection with Joy, complicating his motivations in both the affair and the marriage.
5. Sabotaging Hope’s Career for Personal Gain:
Will’s involvement in Joy’s scheme goes deeper than helping her as a friend. He sees Hope’s art as a potential financial windfall in the divorce settlement. By aiding Joy, he is setting up a scenario where he can profit from Hope’s downfall, ensuring his financial security once their marriage ends.
GENRE CONVENTIONS
Thriller:
PURPOSE: To thrill your audience with high stakes, plot twists, and suspense that never lets up until the adrenalin packed climax.
LIFE AND DEATH SITUATIONS. They face danger at every step — either physically, emotionally, or mentally. The hero needs to either be in danger or there is the implication of future danger.
MYSTERY/INTRIGUE/SUSPENSE: There's a mystery that must be solved in order to survive. Intrigue is the underhanded and covert Villain’s plan. Suspense comes from the danger the Hero faces.
HERO: Unknowing, unwitting, but resourceful hero
VILLAIN: Dangerous, devious, and unrelenting. Committed to destroy anyone who gets in their way.
MAIN EMOTIONS: Suspense, intrigue, mystery, tension, anticipation, uncertainty, and surprise.

ROMANCE:
Love Conventions
○ There must be helpers and harmers. Characters in favor of the relationship help unite the lovers and those opposed to it will do anything to destroy it.
○ There are forces opposing the lovers’ relationship, often outside the lovers’ control (time, distance, familial obligations).
○ There is a triangle of relationships that includes a rival for one or both of the lovers (for example, another lover, addiction, or ambition).
○ There is an external need. Something outside the romance is driving the lovers’ actions. Something other than love is also at stake.
○ There are secrets of one or more of the following types:

THRILLER:
**Act 1:**
**Opening:**
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is numb and emotionally disconnected from her work and marriage to Will. Her latest art exhibit, full of older works, symbolizes her creative stagnation and entrapment. The cold, distant nature of her marriage to Will subtly suggests something is wrong, but she’s too emotionally drained to confront it. A growing sense of unease underscores her life.

**Inciting Incident:**
A mysterious fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. The fire appears accidental, but there’s a lingering suspicion— it seems too perfectly timed to push her into action. An art dealer presses Hope to create new art to cover the damages, adding pressure to her already stagnant creativity. She starts questioning the strange circumstances of the fire. Is someone deliberately trying to ruin her? Unbeknownst to her, Will and Joy are working together behind the scenes, manipulating this situation for their own purposes.

**Turning Point:**
Amid this tension, Hope discovers Will’s affair with her brother, Michael. This revelation shatters her emotionally, driving her into a crisis. During this time, she reconnects with Joy, her first love, who offers Hope comfort and understanding. The chemistry between them reignites instantly rekindling unresolved feelings and passion, pulling Hope back into unresolved passions from her past and deeper into a web of deceit. As Hope’s life unravels, she sees Joy as her escape from her failing marriage, though danger lurks beneath the surface of their reunion. In reality, Joy and Will are conspiring to exploit Hope’s emotional vulnerability and her art for their own gain.

**Act 2:**
**New Plan:**
Joy begins encouraging Hope to create new work, offering emotional support and fueling Hope’s romantic feelings. However, Joy’s influence over Hope begins to grow subtly insidious. Joy encourages Hope to break free from her doubts and embrace her creative potential, but Hope is blind to the fact that Joy is manipulating her emotions for her own gain. Will, detached, is deliberately avoiding confrontation, but there’s a lurking sense of his ulterior motives, adding suspense to the marital dynamic. Joy and Will are secretly plotting to control Hope’s career and assets. Will remains passive, but he and Joy subtly manipulate Hope’s insecurities, isolating her emotionally and financially.

**Plan in Action:**
As Hope begins to create again, she and Joy grow closer—personally and professionally. Their relationship deepens into a romantic affair, but the lines between love and manipulation blur. Joy starts to position herself as more than just a muse—she wants credit for Hope’s work. Unbeknownst to Hope, Joy begins a takeover, subtly crediting herself for Hope’s creativity, while positioning Hope as emotionally unstable. This deceit sets the stage for future betrayals. Joy begins taking credit for Hope’s artistic vision while positioning herself as a rising star in the art world. Will, though emotionally distant, helps Joy from behind the scenes, orchestrating events that further destabilize Hope’s confidence. Hope remains unaware that the two closest people in her life are conspiring against her.

**Midpoint Turning Point:**
Hope catches Will and Michael in bed together, confirming her suspicions and deepening her despair. Around this time, Joy reveals that she’s facing financial ruin and pressures Hope to let her take credit for some of Hope’s newer works to boost Joy’s reputation. Feeling guilty and confused, Hope agrees. The stakes rise as Joy continues to emotionally manipulate Hope, pushing her toward isolation. This marks the turning point where Hope is trapped between two betrayals—Will’s infidelity and Joy’s exploitation. Meanwhile, Will and Joy’s secret partnership becomes clearer to the audience—Will is financially tied to Joy’s success, and they both stand to gain from Hope’s downfall.

**Act 3:**
**Rethink Everything:**
The tension escalates as Joy’s manipulations become more overt. Hope begins to see through the deception, realizing Joy is using her for both emotional and professional gain. She doesn’t yet know Will is also involved. Joy’s rise in the art world intensifies, with the media praising her as a visionary. Joy continues to exploit Hope’s creativity, presenting herself as the genius behind the work while subtly discrediting Hope. Will, emboldened by his secret alliance with Joy and his affair with Michael, moves forward with divorce proceedings, aiming to strip Hope of her assets, including her artwork. Meanwhile, Hope is sidelined, struggling to maintain her own identity. Will begins divorce proceedings, seeking to take control of their shared assets, including her artwork, increasing Hope’s desperation.

**New Plan:**
Desperate to regain control, Hope attempts to reclaim her art and identity. But Joy’s influence and control over her career, combined with Will’s legal tactics, leaves her feeling trapped. Hope feels powerless. Her attempts to take back her work are thwarted by Joy’s web of lies and manipulations. Will’s legal attack also weakens Hope’s position, as he manipulates their lives situation to his advantage. Hope finds herself on the verge of losing everything—her creative legacy, her financial security, and her personal freedom. Tension mounts as Hope realizes the full scope of their betrayal but struggles to find a way out. Faced with financial ruin and artistic erasure, Hope must decide whether to give up or fight back.

**Turning Point (Huge Failure/Major Shift):**
Hope’s world collapses as Joy takes full credit for her latest series of works, becoming a star in the art world. At the same time, Will’s divorce proceedings drain her emotionally and financially. She hits rock bottom as Joy publicly assumes Hope’s artistic identity. Hope realizes she has lost everything—her marriage, her reputation, and her creative legacy. The betrayal becomes complete when Hope learns that Joy orchestrated the gallery fire to force Hope back into the spotlight, but under Joy’s control.
**Act 4:**
**Climax (Ultimate Expression of Conflict):**
Determined to reclaim her identity, Hope gathers evidence of Joy’s theft. She hires a lawyer and sues Joy for copyright infringement and fraud. The courtroom becomes a battleground of tension, with forensic art analysis revealing Hope’s hidden signatures beneath the paint layers on each piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, feeling cornered, tries to discredit Hope, painting her as mentally unstable and vindictive, using personal details from their romantic past against her.

The courtroom drama reaches a fever pitch as Joy’s lies begin to unravel under cross-examination. Tension builds as Joy tries one last desperate attempt to manipulate the narrative, but Hope’s resolve holds firm. With mounting evidence, including testimony from gallery insiders and art experts, Hope triumphs in court, exposing Joy as a fraud.

The situation takes a sharp turn when Hope learns the devastating truth: Will and Joy have been working together from the start. This revelation shatters her emotionally, but it also leads to the beginning of their downfall. In a thrilling courtroom showdown, Joy and Will’s partnership crumbles as they begin blaming each other to avoid personal ruin. The truth of their manipulations comes to light—Joy’s theft of Hope’s work and Will’s financial betrayal. As their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming. Joy, growing greedy, starts positioning herself to cut Will out of the picture, seeking to claim everything for herself. The tension between them grows as they realize there isn’t enough to share between them. The partnership fractures, and the two begin turning against each other, each trying to outmaneuver the other. As their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming.

**Resolution:**
Hope wins her legal battle, reclaiming her name, legacy, her art, and her financial security. She divorces Will, retains her assets, and severs ties with both Joy and the toxic elements of her past. Joy’s career is destroyed, and Will is left with nothing after their toxic partnership implodes. Michael is out of the picture as he helps his sister. She leaves the city to reinvent herself in a new life, free from the emotional and creative oppression she endured. Empowered by her victory, Hope experiences a creative rebirth, inspiration and peace ready to begin anew on her own terms. Free from betrayal and manipulation, she is ready to embrace her true artistic potential.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 2: The Deeper Layer
Sylvia’s Deeper Layer!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…this is a great way to add in depth.

Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Protagonist Character Profile =
Character profiles =
Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Antagonist Character Profiles =
Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s best buddy from College. They were engaged.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother, Michael, as he helps Joy steal all that is Hope.
4-Act Structure =
Act 1:
Opening:
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is emotionally disconnected from her life, her marriage to Will, and her creative process. At her art exhibit featuring older, successful works, she feels trapped in her past achievements and a loveless marriage suppressing her true desires.

Inciting Incident:
A fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. An art dealer presses her to create new art to cover the damages, forcing her to confront her creative stagnation and self-doubt.

Turning Point:
Hope discovers that Will is having an affair with her brother, Michael. This deepens her emotional crisis. Amid this personal chaos, she runs into Joy, her first love, reigniting unresolved feelings and intensifying her internal conflict. Hope, feeling lost, sees Joy as a potential way out of her stagnant life. Her passion is reignited with unresolved feelings and complicating her already fragile emotional state.

Act 2:
New Plan:
Joy encourages Hope to create new work and revive her art career, offering support and seduction. Hope, smitten and inspired, begins to focus on her art again, using Joy's validation as fuel to escape her emotional turmoil. Hope sees Joy as a savior, offering her a chance to revive her creativity and escape her troubled marriage. Will is emotionally unavailable. He lets Hope do as she wishes and remains passive.

Plan in Action:
Hope creates new art and finds herself creatively rejuvenated. Her relationship with Joy becomes romantic, deepening her connection to the past and fueling her creativity. Will remains absent, avoiding any confrontation with Hope. However, Joy begins taking subtle credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as the visionary behind Hope’s artistic success. This professional power dynamic begins to shift, as Joy becomes the face of their collaboration.

Midpoint Turning Point:
The tension escalates when Hope catches Will and Michael together, confirming her worst fears. At the same time, Joy reveals her financial troubles and convinces Hope to allow her to use some of Hope’s artwork under Joy’s name to boost her career exploiting Hope's emotions to serve her own agenda. This marks the moment when Hope is both emotionally and professionally manipulated by the two people closest to her—Will and Joy.

Act 3:
Rethink Everything:
Joy’s manipulation grows more aggressive. Hope starts to see through Joy’s manipulations. Joy’s rise to fame, built on Hope’s work, becomes more blatant, and Hope realizes that her own identity and creative legacy are being stolen. Hope begins to feel used and betrayed. She realizes that Joy is not the person she thought she was, but confronting this truth feels overwhelming. Hope is further sidelined in the art world as Joy's star rises. Meanwhile, Will moves forward with divorce proceedings. His passive-aggressive opposition becomes more evident as he seeks to capitalize on the divorce, further complicating Hope’s already fragile life.

New Plan:
Hope tries to reclaim her art and identity but feels trapped and powerless by Joy’s growing influence and Will’s legal claims. Will, now emboldened by his relationship with Michael, files for divorce, taking a substantial portion of Hope’s assets. The art world, enamored by Joy, largely dismisses Hope, who is seen as yesterday’s news. Faced with personal and professional ruin, she contemplates walking away from everything but knows she must fight back to regain her life and career.

Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Hope’s worst fears are realized when Joy fully eclipses her in the art world. Joy takes over Hope’s artistic identity and her persona. Hope is sidelined, her name and contributions erased. Will’s divorce proceedings leave Hope financially devastated, and she is on the brink of losing everything—her art, her marriage, and her reputation. Will’s divorce proceedings will leave Hope with almost nothing, both emotionally and financially. She hits rock bottom.

Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Determined to fight back, Hope hires a lawyer and takes Joy to court. She exposes Joy’s theft using forensic evidence that reveals Hope’s hidden signature under the layers of paint on every piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, in a last-ditch effort, uses her connections and influence to discredit Hope, accusing her of lying and trying to destroy her career out of jealousy. The courtroom battle intensifies as Joy’s manipulations and lies come to light, but she loses ground as the evidence mounts against her.

In this final battle, Hope publicly reclaims her identity as the true artist behind the work. This public confrontation is cathartic, as Hope reclaims her identity, both as an artist and as a person. Joy’s deception is revealed, and her career collapses. Will, seeing that he cannot manipulate Hope anymore retreats defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement that allows Hope to retain her assets.

Resolution:
With her name and reputation restored, Hope triumphs in court and reclaims her assets. She divorces Will and severs ties with Joy completely. Empowered by her victory, Hope leaves the city to start fresh, embracing her artistic rebirth and newfound emotional freedom. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, she embarks on a new chapter in life, creatively and personally liberated. Hope experiences a creative resurgence, this time unburdened by the
emotional baggage of her past.

5 New Plot Layers:
1. Joy's Revenge Plan from the Start:
It's revealed that Joy's reappearance in Hope's life wasn't a coincidence. From the beginning, Joy had been plotting her revenge on both Hope and Will for betraying her in the past. Her endgame is not only to steal Hope’s art but to also publicly humiliate Will for breaking off their engagement in college, which she never got over.
2. Hope's Subconscious Sabotage:
A deeper layer is uncovered when it is revealed that Hope’s creative block and her tolerance of Joy’s manipulations stem from a subconscious guilt about her own past choices. She has been sabotaging herself as a way of atoning for past wrongs she committed against Joy, such as leaving her without closure in high school.
3. Will’s Covert Role in Joy’s Scheme:
Will's role in helping Joy is more active and strategic than initially thought. It is revealed that Will had been aiding Joy in sabotaging Hope from the shadows in exchange for financial gain, knowing that he would likely lose most of his assets in the divorce. This betrayal deepens Hope’s feelings of being used by everyone around her.
4. Michael’s Double-Cross:
Michael, Hope’s brother, initially seems to be complicit in Will’s affair, but a deeper layer reveals that he has been secretly working to expose both Will and Joy. He is trying to protect Hope, driven by guilt for the affair, but his plan spirals out of control when he underestimates Joy’s ruthlessness.
5. The Art Dealer’s Secret Investment:
The art dealer who pressured Hope to create new work after the fire is secretly working with Joy. He had invested heavily in Joy’s rise to fame and engineered the gallery fire to push Hope into creating new art that Joy could claim. This adds an additional layer of external manipulation to Hope's already tumultuous life.

5 New Character Layers for Protagonist (Hope):
1. Fear of True Freedom:
Hope’s emotional stagnation and paralysis stem from a deep-seated fear of true freedom. Despite wanting to break free, she fears that if she truly cuts ties with Will and Joy, she will lose all structure in her life. This subconscious fear keeps her tethered to her toxic relationships longer than it should.
2. Childhood Trauma Related to Control:
Hope’s need to be recognized as an artist and to have control over her work stems from childhood trauma where she was often controlled or manipulated by an overbearing parent. Her need to reclaim her identity in the present is directly tied to a past where her voice was silenced.
3. Love as a Destructive Force:
Hope’s love for both Joy and Will becomes a destructive force in her life. She continually sacrifices parts of herself to make the relationships work, reflecting a pattern of co-dependence. As a result, she struggles with whether her love is genuine or simply a need to be loved in return.
4. Self-Doubt as a Defense Mechanism:
Hope’s creative self-doubt and emotional passivity are defense mechanisms. She keeps herself in a constant state of doubt as a way to avoid taking responsibility for her choices, allowing others (like Joy and Will) to take the lead so she can deflect blame when things go wrong.
5. Unresolved Resentment Toward Her Brother:
Hope harbors deep, unresolved resentment toward Michael, not just for his affair with Will, but for overshadowing her throughout their childhood. This sibling dynamic becomes more apparent as the story unfolds, revealing that her relationship with Will may have been an unconscious attempt to stay connected to her brother.

5 New Character Layers for Antagonist (Joy):
1. Romantic Idealism Turned Cynical:
Joy was once an idealist who believed in the purity of love and art. Her heartbreak from both Hope and Will in her younger years hardened her, turning her into a cynical manipulator. She now believes that control is the only way to avoid being hurt again, which drives her need to dominate Hope’s life and career.
2. Psychological Projection of Her Own Insecurities:
Joy’s obsession with Hope’s art stems from her own insecurities as an art curator. She projects her fear of being irrelevant and forgotten onto Hope, which is why she needs to take credit for Hope’s work. This layer adds a psychological complexity to her villainy, revealing that she doesn’t just want power—she fears irrelevance.
3. Secret Affair with Michael:
In a shocking twist, Joy had a brief affair with Michael during their high school years, unbeknownst to Hope and Will. This secret affair adds a layer of emotional tension and betrayal, complicating Joy’s motivations. It also explains her ability to manipulate both Will and Michael so effectively.
4. Fear of Abandonment:
Joy’s manipulative behavior is driven by a deep fear of abandonment. Her need to control Hope and Will stems from her experiences of being emotionally abandoned in the past. This fear makes her relentless in her pursuit of power and recognition, as she equates success with emotional security.
5. Secret Saboteur of Hope’s Early Career:
It's revealed that early in Hope's career, Joy had sabotaged one of her early opportunities out of jealousy. This hidden act of betrayal shaped their divergent paths and explains Joy's obsession with controlling Hope’s future. Once this is revealed, it reframes their entire relationship from high school to the present.

5 New Character Layers for Antagonist-Third Wheel (Will):
1. Internalized Shame About His Affair:
Will’s affair with Michael isn't just about physical attraction or rebellion—he is deeply ashamed of his sexual orientation due to his conservative upbringing. This internal conflict adds a layer of complexity to his avoidance of confrontation, as he is trying to bury his shame rather than deal with it openly.
2. Fear of Professional Failure:
Will’s passivity in his personal life is mirrored by a deep fear of failure in his professional life. His secret involvement in Joy’s scheme to steal Hope’s art is motivated by a desperation to maintain financial stability and avoid professional ruin. He is willing to sacrifice his marriage and morals to protect his career.
3. Hidden Ambition for Control:
Will’s avoidance of responsibilities is a front for his deeper, hidden desire for control. His manipulation of both Hope and Michael stems from a need to dominate them emotionally, even as he presents himself as passive and uninvolved. This layer reveals that his passivity is a calculated way to maintain power without being overt.
4. Unresolved Romantic Feelings for Joy:
While Will is having an affair with Michael, he also harbors lingering romantic feelings for Joy from their college days. His resentment toward Hope and his passive-aggressive behavior in the divorce is fueled by his jealousy over Hope’s renewed connection with Joy, complicating his motivations in both the affair and the marriage.
5. Sabotaging Hope’s Career for Personal Gain:
Will’s involvement in Joy’s scheme goes deeper than helping her as a friend. He sees Hope’s art as a potential financial windfall in the divorce settlement. By aiding Joy, he is setting up a scenario where he can profit from Hope’s downfall, ensuring his financial security once their marriage ends.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 4 – Lesson 1: Character Journey Structure
Sylvia’s Character Structure
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…the story line seems to get better all the time.

Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Character profiles =
Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s best buddy from College. They were engaged.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother, Michael, as he helps Joy steal all that is Hope.

4-Act Structure =
Act 1:
Opening:
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is emotionally disconnected from her life, her marriage to Will, and her creative process. At her art exhibit featuring older, successful works, she feels trapped in her past achievements and a loveless marriage suppressing her true desires.

Inciting Incident:
A fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. An art dealer presses her to create new art to cover the damages, forcing her to confront her creative stagnation and self-doubt.

Turning Point:
Hope discovers that Will is having an affair with her brother, Michael. This deepens her emotional crisis. Amid this personal chaos, she runs into Joy, her first love, reigniting unresolved feelings and intensifying her internal conflict. Hope, feeling lost, sees Joy as a potential way out of her stagnant life. Her passion is reignited with unresolved feelings and complicating her already fragile emotional state.

Act 2:
New Plan:
Joy encourages Hope to create new work and revive her art career, offering support and seduction. Hope, smitten and inspired, begins to focus on her art again, using Joy's validation as fuel to escape her emotional turmoil. Hope sees Joy as a savior, offering her a chance to revive her creativity and escape her troubled marriage. Will is emotionally unavailable. He lets Hope do as she wishes and remains passive.

Plan in Action:
Hope creates new art and finds herself creatively rejuvenated. Her relationship with Joy becomes romantic, deepening her connection to the past and fueling her creativity. Will remains absent, avoiding any confrontation with Hope. However, Joy begins taking subtle credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as the visionary behind Hope’s artistic success. This professional power dynamic begins to shift, as Joy becomes the face of their collaboration.

Midpoint Turning Point:
The tension escalates when Hope catches Will and Michael together, confirming her worst fears. At the same time, Joy reveals her financial troubles and convinces Hope to allow her to use some of Hope’s artwork under Joy’s name to boost her career exploiting Hope's emotions to serve her own agenda. This marks the moment when Hope is both emotionally and professionally manipulated by the two people closest to her—Will and Joy.

Act 3:
Rethink Everything:
Joy’s manipulation grows more aggressive. Hope starts to see through Joy’s manipulations. Joy’s rise to fame, built on Hope’s work, becomes more blatant, and Hope realizes that her own identity and creative legacy are being stolen. Hope begins to feel used and betrayed. She realizes that Joy is not the person she thought she was, but confronting this truth feels overwhelming. Hope is further sidelined in the art world as Joy's star rises. Meanwhile, Will moves forward with divorce proceedings. His passive-aggressive opposition becomes more evident as he seeks to capitalize on the divorce, further complicating Hope’s already fragile life.

New Plan:
Hope tries to reclaim her art and identity but feels trapped and powerless by Joy’s growing influence and Will’s legal claims. Will, now emboldened by his relationship with Michael, files for divorce, taking a substantial portion of Hope’s assets. The art world, enamored by Joy, largely dismisses Hope, who is seen as yesterday’s news. Faced with personal and professional ruin, she contemplates walking away from everything but knows she must fight back to regain her life and career.

Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Hope’s worst fears are realized when Joy fully eclipses her in the art world. Joy takes over Hope’s artistic identity and her persona. Hope is sidelined, her name and contributions erased. Will’s divorce proceedings leave Hope financially devastated, and she is on the brink of losing everything—her art, her marriage, and her reputation. Will’s divorce proceedings will leave Hope with almost nothing, both emotionally and financially. She hits rock bottom.

Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Determined to fight back, Hope hires a lawyer and takes Joy to court. She exposes Joy’s theft using forensic evidence that reveals Hope’s hidden signature under the layers of paint on every piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, in a last-ditch effort, uses her connections and influence to discredit Hope, accusing her of lying and trying to destroy her career out of jealousy. The courtroom battle intensifies as Joy’s manipulations and lies come to light, but she loses ground as the evidence mounts against her.

In this final battle, Hope publicly reclaims her identity as the true artist behind the work. This public confrontation is cathartic, as Hope reclaims her identity, both as an artist and as a person. Joy’s deception is revealed, and her career collapses. Will, seeing that he cannot manipulate Hope anymore retreats defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement that allows Hope to retain her assets.

Resolution:
With her name and reputation restored, Hope triumphs in court and reclaims her assets. She divorces Will and severs ties with Joy completely. Empowered by her victory, Hope leaves the city to start fresh, embracing her artistic rebirth and newfound emotional freedom. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, she embarks on a new chapter in life, creatively and personally liberated. Hope experiences a creative resurgence, this time unburdened by the
emotional baggage of her past.

Protagonist: Hope
Journey: From emotional repression and creative stagnation to empowerment and artistic rebirth.
• Beginning:
Hope is emotionally disconnected from her art, her marriage, and herself. She feels trapped by her past success and an unfulfilling marriage to Will, carrying guilt for not loving him despite respecting him. Her creative energy is blocked by unresolved feelings for Joy, her first love, who represents both nostalgia and unhealed wounds.
• Turning Point:
The discovery of Will's affair with her brother, Michael, shakes her emotional foundation. This personal betrayal pushes Hope to reconnect with Joy, seeing her as a potential escape and source of creative inspiration. She starts to believe Joy could reignite her passion for art and life.
• Midpoint:
Joy manipulates Hope into sharing her art under Joy’s name, exploiting Hope’s emotions. Hope begins to realize that Joy's influence is both uplifting and toxic. Meanwhile, Will's infidelity becomes undeniable. Hope is caught between two betrayals—one emotional (Will) and one professional (Joy).
• Turning Point:
Hope starts to see the full scope of Joy’s manipulation when Joy begins to take full credit for her work, eclipsing Hope in the art world. Hope feels her personal identity and artistic legacy are being stolen from her, and Will’s divorce proceedings further destabilize her life.
• Dilemma:
Hope faces a choice: confront Joy and Will at great personal and professional risk, or walk away and let her identity, art, and reputation be erased. Both options seem like losing propositions, but one path offers the chance to reclaim her true self.
• Major Conflict:
Hope fights back in court, using forensic evidence to reveal that the art Joy claimed is hers. The courtroom battle is a symbolic and literal reclaiming of her identity, as Hope exposes Joy’s deception.
• Ending:
Hope reclaims her art, her name, and her life. She triumphs over both Joy and Will, divorcing the latter and severing ties with the former. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, Hope starts a new chapter, personally and creatively reborn.

Antagonist: Joy
Journey: From charismatic manipulator to exposed fraud, losing everything in the process.
• Beginning:
Joy is full of life, charming, and magnetic, returning to Hope’s life as a potential savior and catalyst for her creative rebirth. Beneath her vibrant facade, however, Joy is manipulative, driven by her own ambition, and sees Hope as a means to an end.
• Turning Point:
Joy successfully seduces Hope emotionally and professionally, convincing her to rely on Joy for validation and inspiration. She starts subtly taking credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as an artistic visionary, using Hope’s talent to further her own career.
• Midpoint:
Joy’s financial troubles are revealed, and she pushes Hope into letting her take full control of Hope’s artistic output. She rationalizes her actions by exploiting Hope’s vulnerabilities, ensuring that Hope feels indebted to her and unable to break free.
• Turning Point:
As Hope starts to pull away, recognizing the manipulations, Joy doubles down. She begins publicly taking credit for Hope’s work, trying to fully erase Hope from the narrative. Joy’s need for power and recognition outweighs her personal feelings for Hope.
• Dilemma:
When Hope threatens to expose her, Joy faces the risk of losing her entire career. She must either continue the deceit, risking everything if caught, or back down and admit her fraud. Both choices jeopardize her carefully constructed persona.
• Major Conflict:
In court, Joy’s lies and manipulations are exposed. She tries to discredit Hope, using her connections in the art world, but as the evidence mounts, her credibility and career begin to crumble. The conflict escalates as Joy loses control of the narrative.
• Ending:
Joy loses her reputation, career, and influence. Once the dominant figure in Hope’s life, she is now a disgraced fraud, her manipulation and deceit laid bare. She fades into obscurity as Hope reclaims her identity and triumphs.

Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will
Journey: From passive neglect to confrontation and defeat, hiding behind avoidance.
• Beginning:
Will is emotionally unavailable, neglecting his marriage to Hope while carrying on an affair with her brother, Michael. He avoids responsibility and confrontation, preferring to maintain a polished facade rather than face his internal demons or acknowledge the disintegration of his marriage.
• Turning Point:
When Hope discovers his affair, Will is forced to confront his double life. However, rather than taking responsibility, he distances himself further, allowing Joy to manipulate Hope. Will remains passive, letting the chaos of his affair and failing marriage play out.
• Midpoint:
As Hope and Joy’s relationship intensifies, Will retreats further. He begins divorce proceedings, aiming to secure as much as possible from the marriage financially, using his relationship with Michael as emotional support.
• Turning Point:
Will becomes more aggressive as he realizes he is losing control over both Hope and Michael. He pushes for a divorce settlement that would leave Hope with little, seeking to capitalize on her weakened position.
• Dilemma:
Will must choose between continuing to manipulate Hope for financial gain or stepping back from the chaos of their relationship. His affair with Michael complicates things further, as he risks losing everything if exposed.
• Major Conflict:
In the courtroom, Will’s manipulations and avoidance are revealed, and he is forced to confront the consequences of his actions. His affair and legal maneuvers are exposed, weakening his position in the divorce.
• Ending:
Will retreats, defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement on Hope’s terms, realizing that he cannot maintain control over her. He loses both his marriage and his influence, and Hope moves on without him.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 8: Purpose Driven Supporting Characters
Sylvia’s Supporting Characters
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…adding in the supporting characters helps to cement the storyline and its focus.

Supporting characters:
Support 1:
Name: Michael
Role: Hope’s Brother and Will’s secret lover.
Main purpose: Forces Will to acknowledge his marriage situation to Hope.
Value: Gives Will an excuse to divorce Hope and create a new life.

Support 2:
Name: Ashley
Role: Hope’s co-worker
Main purpose: A mirror to Hope to recognize her talent and situation.
Value: Challenges Hope to open her eyes and take chances.

Support 3:
Name: Jess
Role: Hope’s Lawyer
Main purpose: Prove Hope’s innocence
Value: Forces Hope to stand up for herself.

Support 4:
Name: Steven
Role: Joy’s Lawyer
Main purpose: Prove Joy’s innocence.
Value: Shows the stakes Hope is confronted with against her.

Support 5:
Name: Burt
Role: Judge
Main purpose: Keep things level in the Court room so we see both sides of what is and what appears to be truth.
Value: Comedy relief as things get ever more crazy.

Background Characters:
Artistic Lovers
Underground art theft ring
Jury, court personal, other media, courtroom observers, etc..

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 7: Character Profiles Part 2
Sylvia’s Character Profiles Part 2
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…more about the main characters and how interesting and complicated they are becoming that will add to the storyline.

With each of your lead characters, first tell us the following:
A. The High Concept.
Title: Identity Crises
Genre: Romantic Thriller
Concept: An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Main Conflict: The woman she falls for steals her identity when she’s given credit for artwork to help her get her life back on track.

B. This character’s journey.
– **Hope’s Transformation**:
Through the intense opposition from Joy and Will, Hope evolves from a passive, guilt-ridden artist into a confident, assertive woman who reclaims her identity. The external pressures from Joy’s manipulation and Will’s betrayal catalyze her internal transformation.

– **Joy’s Manipulation**:
Joy’s character evolves from an emotional seducer into a full-fledged antagonist, stealing Hope’s creative identity. Her rise in the art world, built on Hope’s talent and Will’s knowledge of Hope, represents the ultimate betrayal when she turns on both of them.

– **Will’s Betrayal**:
Will’s affair with Michael and subsequent divorce proceedings create a two-front conflict for Hope, emotionally and financially draining her. His role as an absentee husband becomes an active force of opposition when he seeks to take her assets in the divorce and with Joy’s help.

C. ACTOR ATTRACTORS
Lead Character Names: Hope, Joy, Will
Role:
Hope (Protagonist) Bored wife/Lifeless artist;
Joy (Antagonist) Art Curator, con-artist;
Will (2nd Antagonist) Greedy, Lost Soul
1. What about this role would cause an actor to want to be known for it?
Hope: self-doubt to powerhouse badass
Joy: devilish, cunning, psycho
Will: handsome, gentile, well-polished, smooth talker
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in your story?
Hope: Her strength shows throughout the film at the ready to boil—until it explodes.
Joy: Her sly, smooth manipulation tactics. Nothing seems to rattle her.
Will: He is so handsome and sexy. A boyish charming, smooth talker. Makes you want to believe his lies, get screwed over and like it.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the script?
Hope: Her finding her strength to put both Joy and Will in their place in Court.
Joy: Her ability to entice and manipulate others to her satisfaction. Her turning on Will in Court.
Will: His sexual growth encounter with Michael where he overcomes his past demons.
4. How was the role introduced in a way that sold it to an actor?
Hope: Force smiling at her art show exhibit. She’s classy/elegant/sweet and shyly helpful. She owns her older artwork shown. This is her element. She argues with a handsome man (her husband Will). She locates a fire just before an explosion causes her to sprint away.
Joy: After the explosion at Hope’s art show, Hope races for safety and slams into this bombshell who grabs her to safety.
Will: At the art show, he is “sexy dancing” to his own beat after the devastating fire started. The fire envelops around him without him noticing and “wakes up” from the explosion.
5. What is this character’s emotional range?
Hope: self-loathing, depressed to dominatrix to empowered badass.
Joy: quiet/demur, cunning sweetness to psychotic
Will: self-centered, confused with painful childhood demons to awareness and sympathy
6. What subtext did the actor play?
Hope subdues her dreams as she fights for her true self to emerge.
Joy is a con that is narcistic and only loves herself.
Will is in pain and makes wrong decisions. He finds strength in Joy as he deals with his own demons.
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character had?
Hope: Her relationship with Joy fulfilling her desires and finding herself.
Joy: Her relationship with herself and how her self-entitlement sets her up for desertion from
Hope and revenge from Will leaving her alone and defeated.
Will: His relationship with Joy and how he is manipulated at his own game.
8. How was this character’s unique voice presented?
Hope: Through contrast (her wanting to build her relationship with her husband while finding truth in women), introspection, experimentation.
Joy: Insecurity, pursuance of manipulation (self-power), and outside perfection perception in herself and with others.
Will charming whit, perfect looks/dress, disloyalty to his wife (Hope), his lover (Michael), his old college buddy (Joy)—in essence to himself to cover his insecurity.
9. What made this character special and unique?
Hope: Her inner strength. How she goes from manipulated to manipulator, depressed to empowered to lead her own life on her own terms.
Joy: Her power tripping. Cold-bloodedness in her tactics–in everything from sex to court jester.
Will: His selfishness. He’s too sexy for “his shirt” and it hurts.
Brainstorm these profile components for each character.
Pick one component answer for each of these. Don’t list every one that could apply because that will reduce precision of designing your character.
7. Character Subtext (From Lesson 3)
Hope – Feels guilty for staying in an unloving relationship. Gives up on art and her dreams.
Joy – Manipulates to fulfill all her desires. Sells others on her ideas as long as they suit her needs.
Will – Helps others as long as he doesn’t have to do much. He is used to getting his own way by using his charm.
8. Character Intrigue: (From Lesson 4)
Hope (Protagonist)
• Hidden Agenda: Hope is secretly creating a series of controversial, avant-garde artworks that portray Will and Joy in unflattering, symbolic forms—these are intended to be her revenge pieces to expose their betrayals publicly at her next exhibit.
• Conspiracy: Hope has a long-lost child from a secret relationship before Will, and she’s been conspiring to secretly funnel money to this child while leading a double life. Joy and Will uncover this and use it to manipulate her.
• Unspoken Wound: As a teenager, Hope was involved in a criminal act of arson with Joy, and the guilt has haunted her ever since. Joy knows this and could expose her at any moment, which keeps Hope under her thumb.
• Secret Identity: Hope sees herself as an artist suppressed by the constraints of societal norms and her marriage, and she dreams of breaking free and rediscovering her artistic brilliance.
Joy (Antagonist)
• Hidden Agenda: Joy’s ultimate goal isn’t just to destroy Hope—she wants to steal Hope’s artistic identity, pretending to be her in the art world, and has been secretly copying and altering Hope’s work to slowly replace her.
• Conspiracy: Joy and Will are actually working for an underground organization that targets successful artists in exchange for financial gain. JOY HAS done this before, and Hope is HER next victim.
• Secret: Joy was engaged to Will in college. This will show up how close they are to work against Hope.
Will (Antagonist-Third Wheel)
• Conspiracy: Will is part of Joy’s conspiracy to destroy Hope, though he believes it will lead him to personal freedom and happiness with Michael, Hope’s brother.
• Conspiracy: Will is a puppet master, secretly controlling a network of lawyers, politicians, and artists in a larger scheme to take down powerful figures in the art world for financial gain. He’s actually the one pulling Joy’s strings.
• Secret: Will is embezzling money from his clients, using Hope’s art career as a cover to hide his financial fraud. He’s building a separate life in a different city under an alias, preparing to vanish with the cash once he ruins everyone.
• Secret: Will was engaged to Joy in college. This will show up how close they are to work against Hope.
9. Flaw: (how they sabotage themselves)
That flaw is going to show up any time they are under stress.
HOPE: Undervalues herself: Hope constantly works harder to prove herself not realizing how talented she is and the life she wants is easily attainable if she would simply be herself.
JOY: Poor Decision Making. Joy is overly motivated to get ahead at all costs that she tends to make bad rash decisions.
WILL: Over-Confidence. Will sees everyone as disposable and himself as Mr. King.
10. Values:
HOPE:
– Family.
–Being your best
JOY:
– Getting the job done.
–Winning
WILL:
–Fame

11. Internal Dilemma:
These are two opposing parts of a person that cause internal conflict. Sometimes, it is the person’s way of compensating for a fault.

HOPE: Please others versus be independent.
JOY: Wealthy versus being a good person.
WILL: Wanting external admiration versus true love.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 6: Character Profiles Part 1
Sylvia’s Character Profiles Part 1
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…The traits I pulled from what I have already written and they showed up there without me realizing it. I was able to define them here.

ASSIGNMENT
With each of your lead characters, first tell us the following:
A. The High Concept.
Title: Identity Crises
Genre: Romantic Thriller
Concept: An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Main Conflict: The woman she falls for steals her identity when she’s given credit for artwork to help her get her life back on track.

B. This character’s journey.
– **Hope’s Transformation**:
Through the intense opposition from Joy and Will, Hope evolves from a passive, guilt-ridden artist into a confident, assertive woman who reclaims her identity. The external pressures from Joy’s manipulation and Will’s betrayal catalyze her internal transformation.

– **Joy’s Manipulation**:
Joy’s character evolves from an emotional seducer into a full-fledged antagonist, stealing Hope’s creative identity. Her rise in the art world, built on Hope’s talent and Will’s knowledge of Hope, represents the ultimate betrayal when she turns on both of them.

– **Will’s Betrayal**:
Will’s affair with Michael and subsequent divorce proceedings create a two-front conflict for Hope, emotionally and financially draining her. His role as an absentee husband becomes an active force of opposition when he seeks to take her assets in the divorce and with Joy’s help.

C. ACTOR ATTRACTORS
Lead Character Names: Hope, Joy, Will
Role:
Hope (Protagonist) Bored wife/Lifeless artist;
Joy (Antagonist) Art Curator, con-artist;
Will (2nd Antagonist) Greedy, Lost Soul
1. What about this role would cause an actor to want to be known for it?
Hope: self-doubt to powerhouse badass
Joy: devilish, cunning, psycho
Will: handsome, gentile, well-polished, smooth talker
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in your story?
Hope: Her strength shows throughout the film at the ready to boil—until it explodes.
Joy: Her sly, smooth manipulation tactics. Nothing seems to rattle her.
Will: He is so handsome and sexy. A boyish charming, smooth talker. Makes you want to believe his lies, get screwed over and like it.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the script?
Hope: Her finding her strength to put both Joy and Will in their place in Court.
Joy: Her ability to entice and manipulate others to her satisfaction. Her turning on Will in Court.
Will: His sexual growth encounter with Michael where he overcomes his past demons.
4. How was the role introduced in a way that sold it to an actor?
Hope: Force smiling at her art show exhibit. She’s classy/elegant/sweet and shyly helpful. She owns her older artwork shown. This is her element. She argues with a handsome man (her husband Will). She locates a fire just before an explosion causes her to sprint away.
Joy: After the explosion at Hope’s art show, Hope races for safety and slams into this bombshell who grabs her to safety.
Will: At the art show, he is “sexy dancing” to his own beat after the devastating fire started. The fire envelops around him without him noticing and “wakes up” from the explosion.
5. What is this character’s emotional range?
Hope: self-loathing, depressed to dominatrix to empowered badass.
Joy: quiet/demur, cunning sweetness to psychotic
Will: self-centered, confused with painful childhood demons to awareness and sympathy
6. What subtext did the actor play?
Hope subdues her dreams as she fights for her true self to emerge.
Joy is a con that is narcistic and only loves herself.
Will is in pain and makes wrong decisions. He finds strength in Joy as he deals with his own demons.
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character had?
Hope: Her relationship with Joy fulfilling her desires and finding herself.
Joy: Her relationship with herself and how her self-entitlement sets her up for desertion from
Hope and revenge from Will leaving her alone and defeated.
Will: His relationship with Joy and how he is manipulated at his own game.
8. How was this character’s unique voice presented?
Hope: Through contrast (her wanting to build her relationship with her husband while finding truth in women), introspection, experimentation.
Joy: Insecurity, pursuance of manipulation (self-power), and outside perfection perception in herself and with others.
Will charming whit, perfect looks/dress, disloyalty to his wife (Hope), his lover (Michael), his old college buddy (Joy)—in essence to himself to cover his insecurity.
9. What made this character special and unique?
Hope: Her inner strength. How she goes from manipulated to manipulator, depressed to empowered to lead her own life on her own terms.
Joy: Her power tripping. Cold-bloodedness in her tactics–in everything from sex to court jester.
Will: His selfishness. He’s too sexy for “his shirt” and it hurts.
Brainstorm the first 6 parts of the profile for each of your lead characters.
1. Role in the Story:
2. Age range and Description:
3. Core Traits:
4. Motivation; Want/Need:
5. Wound:
6. Likability, Relatability, Empathy:
These are the first six Character Profile items. In Lesson 7, we’ll add five more parts. Notice that you’ve already completed #6, so you can just fill that in.
NOTE: These full Character Profiles are just for the lead characters. We’ll use a different model for the supporting characters.

UNDERSTANDING THE COMPONENTS
As you read these explanations, take them one at a time and just fill in what comes to you about your lead characters.
1. Role in the Story:
HOPE: Protagonist: The primary character with the biggest arc.
JOY: Antagonist: The opposition that forces the protag to change.
WILL: Triangle: Key player who connects the Protag and Antag.
Lead Characters =
Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s best buddy from College.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother as he helps Joy.

2. Age range and Description:
Age Range: Give us a simple way to get an idea of the character’s age.
Description: A simple version of what they look like that fits who they are. Don’t go overboard detailing out everything about them. This is big picture only.
Hope: 40’s, athletic, flawless skin, glasses to read and do close-up artwork which shows she needs help,—uses hands a lot when excited, disheveled long hair, usually up, always wears her sparkling wedding band. Has a bright sparkling personality by nature. Has a quick wit when needed.
Joy: 40’s, tall, dirty-blonde, bombshell. Very feminine, larger than life in attitude and attire. High heels, sophisticated yet simple clothing. A tom-boy athletic physic that is not afraid to pummel an ill-placed sycophant. She has hidden tattoos that peep out.
Will: 40’s, Expensive, tight, Italian suits, well shaven/groomed, wears a heel to accentuate his height, medium length hair that needs a good trim due to thinning, a few too many gold jewelry pieces. He has a perfect completion with a scare on his face to show his imperfection. Pooch-dad body with slight belly. He forgets to wear his wedding band. Goes from calm to drama-king at odd times.
3. Core Traits:
These are the three or four main CHARACTERISTICS of the character. They are expressed in both action and dialogue. Most important, they show up every time the character shows up. Express these in one or two words. Each trait is different than the others and the four together make up the majority of how that character shows up.
These traits are the CORE of the character.
Hope: Wife/Artist
Core Traits:
Depressed
Latent Competitive
Survivor
Romantic

Joy: Art Curator/Will’s Ex-Fiancé
Core Traits:
Con Artist
Competitive
Predator
Power Hungry

Will: Husband/Joy’s Ex-Fiancé
Core Traits:
Proud
Competitive
Manipulative
Charming
4. Motivation; Want/Need:
Characters have something they want — their goal — and something they need — their internal requirement to be okay. Often, the two are opposing.
These two drive their actions. Let’s say a character has a goal of getting a woman to marry him, but he needs freedom. That guy would take different actions than a man who needs security or needs respect or needs to be dominant. Same goal with different need = very different actions and conflicts.
Hope
• Want: To be in a loving relationship.
• Need: To be in control of her own destiny and her authentic artistic self.
Joy
• Want: To gain control over Hope’s art and financial assets.
• Need: To be seen as important and powerful.
Will
• Want: To gain control over Hope’s art and financial assets.
• Need: To prove himself to Michael that he is more than a pretty face.
5. Wound: What they can’t face:
Here, you’re looking for that deep seated and unresolved emotional injury that continues to haunt the character. The fear or outcome that would be their worst nightmare. Often, it is the thing they’ll have to face to achieve their goal.
Hope
• Abandonment. She was abandoned at an art festival when she was a small child.
Joy
• Losing everything. She grew up poor in an alcoholic home environment.
Will
• Bullied. He was bullied as a child for being chubby.
6. Likability, Relatability, Empathy (from Lesson 5)
This is three different ways to have audiences connect with the characters.
Likability: Have them do things that make us feel good about them.
Relatability: Put them in universal experiences that the audience has experienced in their lives.
Empathy: Put the character in distressful situations that have us worry about them or feel for their pain.
Brainstorm one or more ways you can present your Protagonist through each of these:
HOPE
• Likability: She is easy going, creative, caring and fun.
• Relatability: She has strong self-doubts about her abilities.
• Empathy: She is stuck in a dead-end relationship.

Give us one or more ways that your Antagonist(s) could be presented through each of these:

Joy
• Likability: She is funny and quick witted in a self-assured way.
• Relatability: She is ambitious and keeps messing up.
• Empathy: (We think) she’s in love.
Will
• Likability: He is handsome and charming.
• Relatability: He over compensates due to his self-doubts.
• Empathy: He is confused with who he is expected to be and who he really is.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 5: Audience Connection to Characters
Sylvia’s Likability/Relatability/Empathy
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…this is a great exercise to specifically get the audience involved emotionally.
ASSIGNMENT
Brainstorm one or more ways you can present your Protagonist through each of these:
HOPE
• Likability: She is easy going, creative, caring and fun.
• Relatability: She has strong self-doubts about her abilities.
• Empathy: She is stuck in a dead-end relationship.
Give us one or more ways that your Antagonist(s) could be presented through each of these:
Joy
• Likability: She is funny and quick witted in a self-ashiered way.
• Relatability: She is ambitious and keeps messing up.
• Empathy: (We think) she’s in love.
Will
• Likability: He is handsome and charming.
• Relatability: He over compensates due to his self-doubts.
• Empathy: He is confused with who he is expected to be and who he really is.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 4: Character Intrigue
Sylvia’s Character Intrigue
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…it’s amazing how much more depth I am adding. I keep being reminded of that movie and how the one thing upped the film: The Sixth Sense. I am excited to see where this goes as it grows…

ASSIGNMENT
For each of your main characters, use this list to brainstorm one or more Intrigue items that might apply. You don’t need all of them; just one or two. (NOTE: as you have read many of these already, I am going to add in new ones to UP_MY_GAME.) Give us an idea of how that character’s subtext might show up in your movie.
Hope (Protagonist)
• Hidden Agenda: Hope secretly plans to leave her marriage and rekindle her love for Joy, but her fear of social judgment and guilt holds her back.
• Hidden Agenda: Hope is secretly creating a series of controversial, avant-garde artworks that portray Will and Joy in unflattering, symbolic forms—these are intended to be her revenge pieces to expose their betrayals publicly at her next exhibit.
• Competition: Hope finds herself competing with Joy not just for love, but also professionally, as Joy's success in the art world eclipses her own.
• Conspiracy: Unbeknownst to Hope, Will and Joy are conspiring against her, undermining her emotional and financial stability.
• Conspiracy: Hope has a long-lost child from a secret relationship before Will, and she’s been conspiring to secretly funnel money to this child while leading a double life. Joy and Will uncover this and use it to manipulate her.
• Secret: Hope is still deeply in love with Joy and keeps this hidden from everyone, especially Will. She also hides her growing resentment towards her art career.
• Deception: She pretends to be content in her marriage and her life, deceiving not just Will but also herself about what she truly wants.
• Unspoken Wound: Hope's self-doubt stems from past trauma—perhaps an emotional betrayal from Joy in their youth—that still haunts her and fuels her insecurities.
• Unspoken Wound: As a teenager, Hope was involved in a criminal act (perhaps arson or vandalism) with Joy, and the guilt has haunted her ever since. Joy knows this and could expose her at any moment, which keeps Hope under her thumb.
• Secret Identity: Hope sees herself as an artist suppressed by the constraints of societal norms and her marriage, and she dreams of breaking free and rediscovering her artistic brilliance.
Joy (Antagonist)
• Hidden Agenda: Joy’s true goal is to destroy Hope emotionally and professionally, all while pretending to rekindle their past love.
• Hidden Agenda: Joy’s ultimate goal isn’t just to destroy Hope—she wants to steal Hope’s artistic identity, pretending to be her in the art world, and has been secretly copying and altering Hope’s work to slowly replace her.
• Competition: Joy sees Hope as her lifelong rival, wanting to outshine her in both love and art, believing that Hope’s success is undeserved.
• Competition: Joy is competing to win a spot on a secretive, elite art collective that takes one member every decade—by destroying Hope, she secures her place, but only one of them can make it. Their lives become a surreal competition for artistic immortality.
• Conspiracy: Joy collaborates with Will in a covert plan to drain Hope of her wealth and happiness, keeping both Hope and Will under her control for personal gain.
• Conspiracy: Joy and Will are actually working for an underground organization that targets successful artists in exchange for financial gain. JOY HAS done this before, and Hope is HER next victim.
• Secret: Joy harbors jealousy towards Hope’s artistic talent and life, which fuels her desire for revenge. She’s also concealing an unfulfilled need for Hope’s love.
• Secret: Joy has been posing as multiple people online, creating fake personas that infiltrate Hope’s art world connections and fanbase, so she can sabotage her from within while pretending to support her in real life.
• Secret: Joy was engaged to Will in college. This will show up how close they are to work against Hope.
• Deception: While pretending to be Hope’s friend and past lover, Joy manipulates events behind the scenes to bring about Hope’s downfall, using their shared past as emotional leverage.
• Deception: Joy never really loved Hope—she’s always been obsessed with power and control. She manipulates her way into people’s lives only to systematically ruin them, and she’s been doing this since high school, with Hope as her longest-standing project.
• Unspoken Wound: Joy’s manipulative nature may stem from childhood abandonment and a deep-rooted fear of being unwanted, making her crave control over others.
• Secret Identity: Joy sees herself as a saboteur, someone who must destroy Hope to validate her own sense of self-worth. Internally, she might imagine herself as the architect of Hope's ruin.
• Secret Identity: Joy is secretly a con artist on a global scale, using art curation as a cover for an international art theft ring. She’s stolen priceless pieces, and the “curator” role is just her way of laundering these works back into the market.
Will (Antagonist-Third Wheel)
• Hidden Agenda: Will is secretly working with Joy to gain control over Hope’s art and financial assets, while simultaneously securing his relationship with her brother.
• Competition: Will feels in competition with Hope, constantly overshadowed by her success and craving validation through his secret relationship with Michael (Hope's brother).
• Conspiracy: Will is part of Joy’s conspiracy to destroy Hope, though he believes it will lead him to personal freedom and happiness with Michael.
• Conspiracy: Will is a puppet master, secretly controlling a network of lawyers, politicians, and artists in a larger scheme to take down powerful figures in the art world for financial gain. He’s actually the one pulling Joy’s strings.
• Secret: Will hides his affair with Michael and his dissatisfaction with his marriage, as well as his past sexual trauma, which complicates his relationship with both Hope and himself.
• Secret: Will is embezzling money from his clients, using Hope’s art career as a cover to hide his financial fraud. He’s building a separate life in a different city under an alias, preparing to vanish with the cash once he ruins everyone.
• Secret: Will was engaged to Joy in college. This will show up how close they are to work against Hope.
• Deception: Will deceives Hope about his fidelity, his intentions regarding their shared life, and his involvement with Joy, all while appearing as the charming, devoted husband.
• Deception: Will faked his own family trauma story—he has no childhood demons. His “pain” is all an act he uses to garner sympathy, making people believe he’s damaged when, in fact, he’s coldly calculating and sees everyone as disposable.
• Unspoken Wound: Will’s unresolved issues with his own sexuality and his fear of rejection or abandonment cause him to seek validation in destructive ways.
• Secret Identity: Will imagines himself as a smooth operator, someone who can navigate any situation with charm, but internally, he’s a lost soul, trying to find self-acceptance through external relationships.

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WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 3: Character Subtext
Sylvia’s Subtext Characters
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…While the subtext appeared throughout the writing, this is a good exercise to focus in on it. This will better it in the writing.

ASSIGNMENT
With your example movie, give us the following answers for the character with the most subtext:
Movie Title: Bound
Character Name:
Violet (Jennifer Tilly)
Corky (Gina Gershon)
Caesar (Joe Pantoliano)
Subtext Identity:
Violet (Jennifer Tilly)-A mob boss girlfriend who wants out.
Corky (Gina Gershon)-A con-artist recovering and wants a new life.
Caesar (Joe Pantoliano)-A mob boss who is power hungry.
Subtext Trait:
Violet (Jennifer Tilly)-sexy and manipulative
Corky (Gina Gershon)-Standoffish and untrusting
Caesar (Joe Pantoliano)-Power hungry, controlling psychotic
Subtext Logline
Violet (Jennifer Tilly)-The mob boss girlfriend who is seducing Corky to find a new life and get away from him.
Corky (Gina Gershon)-Just got out after paying her 5-years of her life and falls in love with Violet. She struggles to get her life back on tract and saving her and Violets life.
Caesar (Joe Pantoliano)-He has control issues and refuses to let anything go—at all costs. He’s cold hearted and values killing to protect his position.
Possible Areas of Subtext:
Violet (Jennifer Tilly)-She plays and manipulates everyone in the story. She’s stubborn in what she wants (out) as she has had enough. She values depth over possessions.
Corky (Gina Gershon)-She struggles with being a loner and her attraction to Violet and their relationship. She wants a clean life. She struggles with being a loner over being with Violet as Violet is thrilling and fun to be with.
Caesar (Joe Pantoliano)-Mob is his life. He values possessions and perception of his position over all else. He really doesn’t love or care for Violet. She simply looks good on his arms when needed. He can care less about human life—especially Violet as she is a woman. He hits typical misogynistic rock bottom embarrassment when he finds out Violet loves Corky who is a woman and not a man.

For your leads, brainstorm these answers:
Character Name:
Hope
Joy
Will
Subtext Identity:
Hope – Amazing artist suppressing her own talent.
Joy – Con-artist that loves to pounce and conquest.
Will – Internal turmoil closet case.
Subtext Trait:
Hope – Guilt, depression, sexual tension, denial in both art and love
Joy – Con on a power trip, manipulates to gain control
Will – Guilt, frustration, anger, lazy and wants to be coddled by woman without ties.
Subtext Logline:
Hope – Feels guilty for staying in an unloving relationship. Gives up on art and her dreams.
Joy – Manipulates to fulfill all her desires. Sells others on her ideas as long as they suit her needs.
Will – Helps others as long as he doesn’t have to do much. He is used to getting his own way by using his charm.
Possible Areas of Subtext:
Hope – She gets involved with Joy that releases her artistic self and finds her self-worth. She’s too trusting.
Joy – She uses Hope to gain her everything and uses Will to help her and had no intention of letting him enjoy any of her gains.
Will – Uses Hope for the lavender marriage he is denying and Joy to help his gain Hope’s riches. He uses Michael to help him come out of the closet. He’s a confused self-entitled puppy that has a hard time taking responsibility and growing up.
Then use this prompt to brainstorm the character subtext with AI.
I am writing a feature film that is [genre] about [concept] with this [character] with these [Actor Attractors]. Can you brainstorm [Character Subtext] for each character?
Character Subtext =
Subtext Identity: An identity that naturally causes subtext.

Subtext Trait: Covert characteristics that cause them to take covert actions.

Subtext Logline: (Name) is a (subtext identity) who (subtext activity)

Possible Areas of Subtext:
– Hiding something
– Afraid to say
– Secret
– Lying
– Luring/seducing
– Withholding
– Being polite
– Plotting
Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = Concept: An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Characters =
Character: Protagonist: Hope
Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s best buddy from College.

Character: Antagonist-Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother as he helps Joy.

Actor Attractors =
Lead Character Names: Hope, Joy, Will
Role: Hope (Protagonist) Bored wife/Lifeless artist; Joy (Antagonist) Art Curator, con-artist; Will (2nd Antagonist) Greedy, Lost Soul
1. What about this role would cause an actor to want to be known for it?
Hope: self-doubt to powerhouse badass
Joy: devilish, cunning, psycho
Will: handsome, gentile, well-polished, smooth talker
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in your story?
Hope: Her strength shows throughout the film at the ready to boil—until it explodes.
Joy: Her sly, smooth manipulation tactics. Nothing seems to rattle her.
Will: He is so handsome and sexy. A boyish charming, smooth talker. Makes you want to believe his lies, get screwed over and like it.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the script?
Hope: Her finding her strength to put both Joy and Will in their place in Court.
Joy: Her ability to entice and manipulate others to her satisfaction. Her turning on Will in Court.
Will: His sexual growth encounter with Michael where he overcomes his past demons.
4. How was the role introduced in a way that sold it to an actor?
Hope: Force smiling at her art show exhibit. She’s classy/elegant/sweet and shyly helpful. She owns her older artwork shown. This is her element. She argues with a handsome man (her husband Will). She locates a fire just before an explosion causes her to sprint away.
Joy: After the explosion at Hope’s art show, Hope races for safety and slams into this bombshell who grabs her to safety.
Will: At the art show, he is “sexy dancing” to his own beat after the devastating fire started. The fire envelops around him without him noticing and “wakes up” from the explosion.
5. What is this character’s emotional range?
Hope: self-loathing, depressed to dominatrix to empowered badass.
Joy: quiet/demur, cunning sweetness to psychotic
Will: self-centered, confused with painful childhood demons to awareness and sympathy
6. What subtext did the actor play?
Hope subdues her dreams as she fights for her true self to emerge.
Joy is a con that is narcistic and only loves herself.
Will is in pain and makes wrong decisions. He finds strength in Joy as he deals with his own demons.
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character had?
Hope: Her relationship with Joy fulfilling her desires and finding herself.
Joy: Her relationship with herself and how her self-entitlement sets her up for desertion from
Hope and revenge from Will leaving her alone and defeated.
Will: His relationship with Joy and how he is manipulated at his own game.
8. How was this character’s unique voice presented?
Hope: Through contrast (her wanting to build her relationship with her husband while finding truth in women), introspection, experimentation.
Joy: Insecurity, pursuance of manipulation (self-power), and outside perfection perception in herself and with others.
Will charming whit, perfect looks/dress, disloyalty to his wife (Hope), his lover (Michael), his old college buddy (Joy)—in essence to himself to cover his insecurity.
9. What made this character special and unique?
Hope: Her inner strength. How she goes from manipulated to manipulator, depressed to empowered to lead her own life on her own terms.
Joy: Her power tripping. Cold-bloodedness in her tactics–in everything from sex to court jester.
Will: His selfishness. He’s too sexy for “his shirt” and it hurts.
From AI
Here are subtext identities, traits, and loglines for each character, along with relevant subtext areas:
Hope (Protagonist)
Subtext Identity: A self-suppressing artist.
• Subtext Trait: Hope hides her guilt about not loving Will and suppresses her passion for art, struggling with her self-worth.
• Subtext Logline: Hope is a self-suppressing artist who masks her true desires and emotional conflicts by living a double life, torn between the artist she once was and the trapped wife she’s become.
• Subtext Areas:
o Hiding something: Her unresolved feelings for Joy.
o Afraid to say: She doesn’t want to hurt Will or admit her indifference to him.
o Withholding: She holds back her artistic brilliance, afraid to fully express herself.
o Being polite: She maintains a facade of contentment in her marriage despite her unhappiness.
Joy (Antagonist)
Subtext Identity: A manipulative narcissist.
• Subtext Trait: Joy hides her true motives behind a mask of charm, using manipulation to control others while craving power and validation.
• Subtext Logline: Joy is a manipulative narcissist who uses her charm and cunning to exploit the weaknesses of those around her for her personal gain.
• Subtext Areas:
o Luring/seducing: She seduces Hope emotionally, drawing her back into their old dynamic while pursuing her own agenda.
o Secret: She’s secretly plotting to dismantle Hope’s life and seize her success.
o Lying: Joy hides her ruthless intentions behind a facade of friendship and love.
o Plotting: She carefully orchestrates events, leading to betrayal and the eventual unraveling of Hope’s life.
Will (Antagonist-Third Wheel)
Subtext Identity: A charming, broken man.
• Subtext Trait: Will conceals his insecurities behind a polished exterior and hides his affair with Hope’s brother while avoiding his responsibilities as a husband.
• Subtext Logline: Will is a charming, broken man who conceals his emotional turmoil and duplicitous life, using his charm to mask the cracks in his marriage and his identity.
• Subtext Areas:
o Lying: He constantly lies to both Hope and himself about his true desires and motivations.
o Withholding: He withholds his true self and his affair with Hope’s brother.
o Afraid to say: He fears admitting his attraction to men and his dissatisfaction with his life.
o Plotting: Behind his easygoing nature, Will is actively working with Joy, secretly aligning against Hope.
This subtext helps bring deeper layers to the characters, amplifying the tension and intrigue in your romantic thriller.

• This reply was modified 10 months, 1 week ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 2: Roles that Sell Actors
Sylvia’s Actor attractors!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…watching the last movie and answering these questions reminded me that this is not just a thriller—it is a romantic thriller. I made a large picture moment note to make certain the romance is shown. Unless, this morphs into a crime thriller which is what Bound is. I figure, I will look at the romantic elements in Rom-Com as they aren’t separated out on the Genre sheet. Another thing is it’s amazing how many details easily come to mind on a regular basis. It makes sense to disregard them as I move forward and only work on the large picture moments as this film morphs. Anything can happen and the details will only delay the writing at this time.
ACTOR ATTRACTORS
Lead Character Name: Hope, Joy, Will
Role: Hope (Protagonist) Bored wife/Lifeless artist; Joy (Antagonist) Art Curator, con-artist; Will (2nd Antagonist) Greedy, Lost Soul
1. What about this role would cause an actor to want to be known for it?
Hope: self-doubt to powerhouse badass
Joy: devilish, cunning, psycho
Will: handsome, gentile, well-polished, smooth talker
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in your story?
Hope: Her strength shows throughout the film at the ready to boil—until it explodes.
Joy: Her sly, smooth manipulation tactics. Nothing seems to rattle her.
Will: He is so handsome and sexy. A boyish charming, smooth talker. Makes you want to believe his lies, get screwed over and like it.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the script?
Hope: Her finding her strength to put both Joy and Will in their place in Court.
Joy: Her ability to entice and manipulate others to her satisfaction. Her turning on Will in Court.
Will: His sexual growth encounter with Michael where he overcomes his past demons.
4. How was the role introduced in a way that sold it to an actor?
Hope: Force smiling at her art show exhibit. She’s classy/elegant/sweet and shyly helpful. She owns her older artwork shown. This is her element. She argues with a handsome man (her husband Will). She locates a fire just before an explosion causes her to sprint away.
Joy: After the explosion at Hope’s art show, Hope races for safety and slams into this bombshell who grabs her to safety.
Will: At the art show, he is “sexy dancing” to his own beat after the devastating fire started. The fire envelops around him without him noticing and “wakes up” from the explosion.
5. What is this character’s emotional range?
Hope: self-loathing, depressed to dominatrix to empowered badass.
Joy: quiet/demur, cunning sweetness to psychotic
Will: self-centered, confused with painful childhood demons to awareness and sympathy
6. What subtext did the actor play?
Hope subdues her dreams as she fights for her true self to emerge.
Joy is a con that is narcistic and only loves herself.
Will is in pain and makes wrong decisions. He finds strength in Joy as he deals with his own demons.
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character had?
Hope: Her relationship with Joy fulfilling her desires and finding herself.
Joy: Her relationship with herself and how her self-entitlement sets her up for desertion from
Hope and revenge from Will leaving her alone and defeated.
Will: His relationship with Joy and how he is manipulated at his own game.
8. How was this character’s unique voice presented?
Hope: Through contrast (her wanting to build her relationship with her husband while finding truth in women), introspection, experimentation.
Joy: Insecurity, pursuance of manipulation (self-power), and outside perfection perception in herself and with others.
Will charming whit, perfect looks/dress, disloyalty to his wife (Hope), his lover (Michael), his old college buddy (Joy)—in essence to himself to cover his insecurity.
9. What made this character special and unique?
Hope: Her inner strength. How she goes from manipulated to manipulator, depressed to empowered to lead her own life on her own terms.
Joy: Her power tripping. Cold-bloodedness in her tactics–in everything from sex to court jester.
Will: His selfishness. He’s too sexy for “his shirt” and it hurts.

• This reply was modified 10 months, 1 week ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 3 – Lesson 1: Characters That Sell Scripts
Sylvia’s Actor attractors for Bound.
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…how much more I can add to my characters in my movie.

ASSIGNMENT
Today is about watching a movie to discover what might cause actors to sign on.
Criteria:
A. In your genre.
B. Has big actors.
C. Is a well-known movie (but not a Marvel or DC movie).
For each lead character, list out the 9 Actor Attractors

ACTOR ATTRACTORS for three Main Characters
Movie Title: BOUND
Lead Character Name: Violet (Jennifer Tilly)
1. Why would an actor WANT to be known for this role? Sexy, mob mistress with badass intentions.
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in the movie? Her sex appeal and seduction powers.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the movie? Outside she shows vulnerability while seducing everyone around her with “slight of hand”.
4. How is this character introduced that could sell it to an actor? “Innocent” 3-way encounter with all three leads. Sub-text and seduction tension galore. Boiling curiosities.
5. What is this character’s emotional range? Quiet and soft sensual to outrageous quick energies and actions.
6. What subtext can the actor play? Seduction, Lies thru her teeth, coercion, sarcasm.
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character has? Her seduction of Corky with her contempt for her lover, Caesar.
8. How is this character’s unique voice presented? She shows how being in a unloving, used relationship with Caesar and how she overcomes this and finds her true being/love in Corky. All while committing murder, covering it up and trying to blame Caesar so she can save her life and move on with Corky. (Definitely not a Disney movie.)
9. What makes this character special and unique? It’s like she is a juxtaposition of what she wants versus who she is. She appears to be the victim as she is the transgressor.
10. (Fill in a scene that shows the character fulfilling much of the Actor Attractor model.)
The bathroom murder/coverup scene.
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Lead Character Name: Corky (Gina Gershon)
1. Why would an actor WANT to be known for this role? Sexy, con-artist with brains and moves.
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in the movie? Sexy, female-blue collar/skilled laborer—ex-con.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the movie? Being seduced by a “dominatrix”.
4. How is this character introduced that could sell it to an actor? “Innocent” 3-way encounter with all three leads. Sub-text and seduction tension galore. Boiling curiosities.
5. What is this character’s emotional range? Easy-going to hot-and-bothered to fight-or-flight
6. What subtext can the actor play? Innocent seductress, sarcasm, fish-out-of-water
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character has? Her relationship with Violet and her coming to her defense against Caesar.
8. How is this character’s unique voice presented? Appears exhausted and wanting to lead a regular life and yet, her nature of being a con artist is challenged as she gets conned by Violet of whom falls in love with her.
9. What makes this character special and unique? She’s an everyday blue collar that finds herself back into her former life of a con with higher stakes than she has ever known.
10. (Fill in a scene that shows the character fulfilling much of the Actor Attractor model.)
The bathroom murder/coverup scene.
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Lead Character Name: Caesar (Joe Pantoliano)
1. Why would an actor WANT to be known for this role? Handsome badass mob-boss
2. What makes this character one of the most interesting characters in the movie? He has a powerful demeaner and is a harsh badass Mafia Boss.
3. What are the most interesting actions the Lead takes in the movie? When his calm demeaner is challenged and his jealous nature comes to surface.
4. How is this character introduced that could sell it to an actor? “Innocent” 3-way encounter with all three leads. He is clueless at the sub-text. Yet, he exudes powerful language and body language. He is not one to be messed with.
5. What is this character’s emotional range? Calm, Jealousy, rage.
6. What subtext can the actor play? Innocence as he knows something is going on but will not let it show until “he does”.
7. What’s the most interesting relationships this character has? The three of them play “ping-pong” with each other.
8. How is this character’s unique voice presented? He makes being a mob boss his own style.
9. What makes this character special and unique? His strength. He is fascinating. One never knows what to expect. He pulls off his character powerfully.
10. (Fill in a scene that shows the character fulfilling much of the Actor Attractor model.)
When he finds out about their women’s love/sexual relationship and he is dog meat.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 6: Build In The Genre Conventions
Sylvia’s Genre Conventions
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned doing this assignment is…it’s interesting how many ideas come to mind in how this can go. It is best at this point to ignore them and let the main picture points grow. The details and twists are non-ending depending on the main points.
ASSIGNMENT
Title: Identity Crises
Concept: An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Genre: Romantic Thriller
List of the conventions for your chosen genre:
Thriller:
PURPOSE: To thrill your audience with high stakes, plot twists, and suspense that never lets up until the adrenalin packed climax.
LIFE AND DEATH SITUATIONS. They face danger at every step — either physically, emotionally, or mentally. The hero needs to either be in danger or there is the implication of future danger.
MYSTERY/INTRIGUE/SUSPENSE: There's a mystery that must be solved in order to survive. Intrigue is the underhanded and covert Villain’s plan. Suspense comes from the danger the Hero faces.
HERO: Unknowing, unwitting, but resourceful hero
VILLAIN: Dangerous, devious, and unrelenting. Committed to destroy anyone who gets in their way.
MAIN EMOTIONS: Suspense, intrigue, mystery, tension, anticipation, uncertainty, and surprise.

Brainstorm ways to deliver the conventions more effectively and build those parts into your
4-Act Structure.

Act 1:
Opening:
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is emotionally disconnected from her life, her marriage to Will, and her creative process. At her art exhibit featuring older, successful works, she feels trapped in her past achievements and a loveless marriage suppressing her true desires.

Inciting Incident:
A fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. An art dealer presses her to create new art to cover the damages, forcing her to confront her creative stagnation and self-doubt.

Turning Point:
Hope discovers that Will is having an affair with her brother, Michael. This deepens her emotional crisis. Amid this personal chaos, she runs into Joy, her first love, reigniting unresolved feelings and intensifying her internal conflict. Hope, feeling lost, sees Joy as a potential way out of her stagnant life. Her passion is reignited with unresolved feelings and complicating her already fragile emotional state.

Act 2:
New Plan:
Joy encourages Hope to create new work and revive her art career, offering support and seduction. Hope, smitten and inspired, begins to focus on her art again, using Joy's validation as fuel to escape her emotional turmoil. Hope sees Joy as a savior, offering her a chance to revive her creativity and escape her troubled marriage. Will is emotionally unavailable. He lets Hope do as she wishes and remains passive.

Plan in Action:
Hope creates new art and finds herself creatively rejuvenated. Her relationship with Joy becomes romantic, deepening her connection to the past and fueling her creativity. Will remains absent, avoiding any confrontation with Hope. However, Joy begins taking subtle credit for Hope’s work, positioning herself as the visionary behind Hope’s artistic success. This professional power dynamic begins to shift, as Joy becomes the face of their collaboration.

Midpoint Turning Point:
The tension escalates when Hope catches Will and Michael together, confirming her worst fears. At the same time, Joy reveals her financial troubles and convinces Hope to allow her to use some of Hope’s artwork under Joy’s name to boost her career exploiting Hope's emotions to serve her own agenda. This marks the moment when Hope is both emotionally and professionally manipulated by the two people closest to her—Will and Joy.

Act 3:
Rethink Everything:
Joy’s manipulation grows more aggressive. Hope starts to see through Joy’s manipulations. Joy’s rise to fame, built on Hope’s work, becomes more blatant, and Hope realizes that her own identity and creative legacy are being stolen. Hope begins to feel used and betrayed. She realizes that Joy is not the person she thought she was, but confronting this truth feels overwhelming. Hope is further sidelined in the art world as Joy's star rises. Meanwhile, Will moves forward with divorce proceedings. His passive-aggressive opposition becomes more evident as he seeks to capitalize on the divorce, further complicating Hope’s already fragile life.

New Plan:
Hope tries to reclaim her art and identity but feels trapped and powerless by Joy’s growing influence and Will’s legal claims. Will, now emboldened by his relationship with Michael, files for divorce, taking a substantial portion of Hope’s assets. The art world, enamored by Joy, largely dismisses Hope, who is seen as yesterday’s news. Faced with personal and professional ruin, she contemplates walking away from everything but knows she must fight back to regain her life and career.

Turning Point: Huge Failure / Major Shift:
Hope’s worst fears are realized when Joy fully eclipses her in the art world. Joy takes over Hope’s artistic identity and her persona. Hope is sidelined, her name and contributions erased. Will’s divorce proceedings leave Hope financially devastated, and she is on the brink of losing everything—her art, her marriage, and her reputation. Will’s divorce proceedings will leave Hope with almost nothing, both emotionally and financially. She hits rock bottom.

Act 4:
Climax/Ultimate Expression of the Conflict:
Determined to fight back, Hope hires a lawyer and takes Joy to court. She exposes Joy’s theft using forensic evidence that reveals Hope’s hidden signature under the layers of paint on every piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, in a last-ditch effort, uses her connections and influence to discredit Hope, accusing her of lying and trying to destroy her career out of jealousy. The courtroom battle intensifies as Joy’s manipulations and lies come to light, but she loses ground as the evidence mounts against her.

In this final battle, Hope publicly reclaims her identity as the true artist behind the work. This public confrontation is cathartic, as Hope reclaims her identity, both as an artist and as a person. Joy’s deception is revealed, and her career collapses. Will, seeing that he cannot manipulate Hope anymore retreats defeated. He agrees to a divorce settlement that allows Hope to retain her assets.

Resolution:
With her name and reputation restored, Hope triumphs in court and reclaims her assets. She divorces Will and severs ties with Joy completely. Empowered by her victory, Hope leaves the city to start fresh, embracing her artistic rebirth and newfound emotional freedom. Free from the toxic relationships that once defined her, she embarks on a new chapter in life, creatively and personally liberated. Hope experiences a creative resurgence, this time unburdened by the emotional baggage of her past.

FINALLY, List your structure from Lesson 5 along with the improvements that come from the Genre Conventions, like I did above.
**Act 1:**
**Opening:**
Hope Harwood, a successful artist, is numb and emotionally disconnected from her work and marriage to Will. Her latest art exhibit, full of older works, symbolizes her creative stagnation and entrapment. The cold, distant nature of her marriage to Will subtly suggests something is wrong, but she’s too emotionally drained to confront it. A growing sense of unease underscores her life.

**Inciting Incident:**
A mysterious fire breaks out at the gallery, damaging some of Hope’s older works. The fire appears accidental, but there’s a lingering suspicion— it seems too perfectly timed to push her into action. An art dealer presses Hope to create new art to cover the damages, adding pressure to her already stagnant creativity. She starts questioning the strange circumstances of the fire. Is someone deliberately trying to ruin her? Unbeknownst to her, Will and Joy are working together behind the scenes, manipulating this situation for their own purposes.

**Turning Point:**
Amid this tension, Hope discovers Will’s affair with her brother, Michael. This revelation shatters her emotionally, driving her into a crisis. During this time, she reconnects with Joy, her first love, who offers Hope comfort and understanding. The chemistry between them reignites instantly rekindling unresolved feelings and passion, pulling Hope back into unresolved passions from her past and deeper into a web of deceit. As Hope’s life unravels, she sees Joy as her escape from her failing marriage, though danger lurks beneath the surface of their reunion. In reality, Joy and Will are conspiring to exploit Hope’s emotional vulnerability and her art for their own gain.

**Act 2:**
**New Plan:**
Joy begins encouraging Hope to create new work, offering emotional support and fueling Hope’s romantic feelings. However, Joy’s influence over Hope begins to grow subtly insidious. Joy encourages Hope to break free from her doubts and embrace her creative potential, but Hope is blind to the fact that Joy is manipulating her emotions for her own gain. Will, detached, is deliberately avoiding confrontation, but there’s a lurking sense of his ulterior motives, adding suspense to the marital dynamic. Joy and Will are secretly plotting to control Hope’s career and assets. Will remains passive, but he and Joy subtly manipulate Hope’s insecurities, isolating her emotionally and financially.

**Plan in Action:**
As Hope begins to create again, she and Joy grow closer—personally and professionally. Their relationship deepens into a romantic affair, but the lines between love and manipulation blur. Joy starts to position herself as more than just a muse—she wants credit for Hope’s work. Unbeknownst to Hope, Joy begins a takeover, subtly crediting herself for Hope’s creativity, while positioning Hope as emotionally unstable. This deceit sets the stage for future betrayals. Joy begins taking credit for Hope’s artistic vision while positioning herself as a rising star in the art world. Will, though emotionally distant, helps Joy from behind the scenes, orchestrating events that further destabilize Hope’s confidence. Hope remains unaware that the two closest people in her life are conspiring against her.

**Midpoint Turning Point:**
Hope catches Will and Michael in bed together, confirming her suspicions and deepening her despair. Around this time, Joy reveals that she’s facing financial ruin and pressures Hope to let her take credit for some of Hope’s newer works to boost Joy’s reputation. Feeling guilty and confused, Hope agrees. The stakes rise as Joy continues to emotionally manipulate Hope, pushing her toward isolation. This marks the turning point where Hope is trapped between two betrayals—Will’s infidelity and Joy’s exploitation. Meanwhile, Will and Joy’s secret partnership becomes clearer to the audience—Will is financially tied to Joy’s success, and they both stand to gain from Hope’s downfall.

**Act 3:**
**Rethink Everything:**
The tension escalates as Joy’s manipulations become more overt. Hope begins to see through the deception, realizing Joy is using her for both emotional and professional gain. She doesn’t yet know Will is also involved. Joy’s rise in the art world intensifies, with the media praising her as a visionary. Joy continues to exploit Hope’s creativity, presenting herself as the genius behind the work while subtly discrediting Hope. Will, emboldened by his secret alliance with Joy and his affair with Michael, moves forward with divorce proceedings, aiming to strip Hope of her assets, including her artwork. Meanwhile, Hope is sidelined, struggling to maintain her own identity. Will begins divorce proceedings, seeking to take control of their shared assets, including her artwork, increasing Hope’s desperation.

**New Plan:**
Desperate to regain control, Hope attempts to reclaim her art and identity. But Joy’s influence and control over her career, combined with Will’s legal tactics, leaves her feeling trapped. Hope feels powerless. Her attempts to take back her work are thwarted by Joy’s web of lies and manipulations. Will’s legal attack also weakens Hope’s position, as he manipulates their lives situation to his advantage. Hope finds herself on the verge of losing everything—her creative legacy, her financial security, and her personal freedom. Tension mounts as Hope realizes the full scope of their betrayal but struggles to find a way out. Faced with financial ruin and artistic erasure, Hope must decide whether to give up or fight back.

**Turning Point (Huge Failure/Major Shift):**
Hope’s world collapses as Joy takes full credit for her latest series of works, becoming a star in the art world. At the same time, Will’s divorce proceedings drain her emotionally and financially. She hits rock bottom as Joy publicly assumes Hope’s artistic identity. Hope realizes she has lost everything—her marriage, her reputation, and her creative legacy. The betrayal becomes complete when Hope learns that Joy orchestrated the gallery fire to force Hope back into the spotlight, but under Joy’s control.
**Act 4:**
**Climax (Ultimate Expression of Conflict):**
Determined to reclaim her identity, Hope gathers evidence of Joy’s theft. She hires a lawyer and sues Joy for copyright infringement and fraud. The courtroom becomes a battleground of tension, with forensic art analysis revealing Hope’s hidden signatures beneath the paint layers on each piece Joy claimed as her own. Joy, feeling cornered, tries to discredit Hope, painting her as mentally unstable and vindictive, using personal details from their romantic past against her.

The courtroom drama reaches a fever pitch as Joy’s lies begin to unravel under cross-examination. Tension builds as Joy tries one last desperate attempt to manipulate the narrative, but Hope’s resolve holds firm. With mounting evidence, including testimony from gallery insiders and art experts, Hope triumphs in court, exposing Joy as a fraud.

The situation takes a sharp turn when Hope learns the devastating truth: Will and Joy have been working together from the start. This revelation shatters her emotionally, but it also leads to the beginning of their downfall. In a thrilling courtroom showdown, Joy and Will’s partnership crumbles as they begin blaming each other to avoid personal ruin. The truth of their manipulations comes to light—Joy’s theft of Hope’s work and Will’s financial betrayal. As their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming. Joy, growing greedy, starts positioning herself to cut Will out of the picture, seeking to claim everything for herself. The tension between them grows as they realize there isn’t enough to share between them. The partnership fractures, and the two begin turning against each other, each trying to outmaneuver the other. As their alliance disintegrates, they each try to save themselves, but the evidence against them is overwhelming.

**Resolution:**
Hope wins her legal battle, reclaiming her name, legacy, her art, and her financial security. She divorces Will, retains her assets, and severs ties with both Joy and the toxic elements of her past. Joy’s career is destroyed, and Will is left with nothing after their toxic partnership implodes. Michael is out of the picture as he helps his sister. She leaves the city to reinvent herself in a new life, free from the emotional and creative oppression she endured. Empowered by her victory, Hope experiences a creative rebirth, inspiration and peace ready to begin anew on her own terms. Free from betrayal and manipulation, she is ready to embrace her true artistic potential.

• This reply was modified 10 months, 2 weeks ago by  Sylvia Krawczyk.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 5: Four-Act Transformational Structure
Sylvia’s 4 Act Transformational Structure
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.

What I learned doing this assignment is…Interesting how AI pretty much wrote the same thing as I did. Not much more added. I’ll play with this one. I am a bit dumbfounded.

ASSIGNMENT
Give us the following:
• Concept: An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
• Main Conflict: The woman she falls for steals her identity when she’s given credit for artwork to help her get her life back on track.
• Old Ways
– Hope is emotionally detached from her current life, particularly in her marriage.
– She feels guilty for her lack of love for Will, which keeps her stuck in an unhappy marriage.
– Hope is reserved and avoids emotional risks, particularly with Joy.
– She feels a deep sense of guilt and unresolved feelings towards Joy, which she suppresses to maintain the status quo.
– Hope is creatively stagnant, using her art as a means of escape rather than self-expression.
– Hope represses her true desires and artistic expression.
-She avoids taking risks or making decisions that would disrupt her current life, leading to a sense of powerlessness.
– She allows Joy to influence her decisions due to old affections.
• New Ways
– Hope becomes emotionally engaged and assertive, confronting her true feelings for Joy and the consequences of their relationship.
– She lets go of the guilt associated with her feelings for Joy, accepting them as part of her journey towards self-discovery.
– She takes control of her life, making bold decisions to reclaim her identity and move
forward through and beyond betrayal without fear.
– Hope experiences a creative resurgence, using her art to express her journey and newfound sense of self.
– She takes decisive actions to distance herself from Joy and her marriage ensuring her personal and professional autonomy.
3. Fill in each of these with the answers you have right now.
Act 1:
• Opening: Art exhibit with Hope showing her older very successful work.
• Inciting Incident: A fire breaks out. Hope is approached to sell new work for profit which will help pay for the fire loses.
• Turning Point: Hope’s husband, Will, has an affair with Hope’s brother, Michael, and avoids Hope. Hope wishes to find her own income. Can’t find her husband, Will. She runs into Joy her high school first love.
Act 2:
• New plan: Hope is encouraged by Joy to go for her dream and start with her artist work again.
• Plan in action: Hope successfully shows her new work. Joy seduces Hope. Will is absent.
• Midpoint Turning Point: Hope finds Will in bed with Michael. Joy says she is strapped for cash and needs her own income and manipulates Hope to give her her own artifacts with Joy’s name on them. Hope is smitten.
Act 3:
• Rethink everything: Hope puts Joys name on a few artifacts and promotes Joy. Joy makes her bills.
• New plan: Joy is made the new queen of art and takes credit for more than she deserves at large galas.
• Turning Point: Huge failure / Major shift: Hope is pushed out of the art scene as Joy dumps her and takes Joys art and persona on as her own. Will files for divorce taking all of Hopes assets. Hope loses everything.
Act 4:
• Climax/Ultimate expression of the conflict: Hope lawyers up and in court reveals her signature make under infrared on all her artistic work revealing she is the artist. Sues Joy and divorces Will.
• Resolution: Hope flies off to a new city to begin her dream life.

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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 4: What’s Beneath the Surface?
Sylvia’s Subtext Plot
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…The subplots are foundations for the main storyline. They help with the clarity of it.

ASSIGNMENT
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.

Sub-plots:
1. Scheme and Investigation
2. Layering
3. Someone Hides Who They Are
4. The Fish Out of Water
5. Superior Position
6. A Major Cover Up
7. Competitive Agendas

TWO CHOSEN: (with a few sentences on how your Subtext Plot will play out inside this story.
1-#### 1. **Scheme and Investigation:**
Joy is hiding the fact that she is a convicted/sought after con-artist ripping off Hope’s identity.
2### 7. **Competitive Agendas:**
Hope and Joy are both trying to get ahead in the artistic community as Joy steals Hope’s artistic identity for her own personal gain. Will wants hope for appearances as he romances Hope’s brother.
Subtext Plots =
1. Scheme and investigation: One character is scheming and another is investigating. This allows for hidden motives, cover ups, lies, setting people up, playing suspects against each other, etc..
2. Layering: Beneath the surface, there’s a different layer of meaning that has been hidden and when revealed, shows us what is really going on.
3. Someone hides who they are: When the plot is about a person who is hiding, it might go through a sequence similar to this: hiding, clues, investigation, discovered, repercussions.
4. The fish out of water: Put the lead character in a place they don’t belong and create situations where they must perform even though they have no idea.
5. Superior Position: The audience knows something that one or more of the characters don’t know. This gives us two experiences at the same time. We get to live the life of the character who knows and the life of the character who doesn’t know.
6. A Major Cover Up: A set of strategies are put in place to cover up a crime, scandal, conspiracy or history of illegal or disturbing actions. The subtext comes from the planning, schemes, lies, and every action they take to do the cover-up.
7. Competitive Agendas: Two people or groups fighting against each other to get their own way. The competition allows for characters to plan, scheme, etc. to out play the other.
• Genre = Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist's unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Major Story Hook = The woman Hope falls for steals her identity when she’s given credit for artwork to help her get her life back on track.
Lead Characters =
• Character: Protagonist: Hope
• Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
• Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband. She’s still in love with Joy.

• Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
• Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
• Unique: Joy was Hope’s first love in High School and Will’s best buddy from College.

• Character: Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
• Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
• Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother.

Transformational Journey =
3 Act Structure =
**Act 1:**
In the vibrant but secretive art scene of a Southern town, Hope Harwood, under the pseudonym "Lila Rayne," allows her high school sweetheart, Joy Sinclair, to use her artwork to stay financially afloat. Their intense reunion breathes new life into Ellie’s dormant passions, but tension mounts when Ellie discovers her husband Will in an intimate moment with her brother Michael, casting shadows over her already complex life.

**Act 2:**
Hope escapes with Joy to a tranquil lakeside retreat, seeking clarity and space to breathe. As they reconnect, Hope's sacrifice becomes a betrayal when Joy begins to claim Hope's entire artistic identity as her own. Back home, Will's hidden emotional connection with Michael surfaces, compounding the betrayals and leaving Hope feeling suffocated by the secrets surrounding her.

**Act 3:**
Returning home to a storm of deceit, Hope confronts the devastating impact of Joy's theft and the unraveling secrets between Will and Michael. Facing these betrayals, Hope chooses to reclaim her life and identity. She and Will part ways amicably as she begins to mend her professional reputation and personal relationships. As the dust settles, Hope rediscovers her voice in the art world, inspired by her journey through love's shadows and the quest for authenticity.

### 1. **Scheme and Investigation:**
– **Subtext:** Hope and Joy’s rekindled relationship is marred by ulterior motives. Joy appears to help Hope recover her passion for art but secretly schemes to steal her identity. Hope, sensing Joy's deception, begins investigating subtle clues: art sales under Joy's name, disappearing sketches, and inconsistencies in Joy’s behavior. The tension lies in their dynamic, where they both hide secrets—Hope’s shame about Will’s affair and Joy’s deeper betrayal.
– **How it plays out:** Hope slowly unravels Joy's plot while keeping her suspicions to herself. As the investigation unfolds, both women manipulate their surroundings, pushing each other to reveal deeper truths.

### 7. **Competitive Agendas:**
– **Subtext:** Hope and Joy are both vying for control—over the art world and their emotional dynamic. Joy seeks to manipulate Hope for her own gain, while Hope, unaware of Joy’s true intent, struggles to regain control of her life. Will also has his own hidden agenda, keeping his affair secret while trying to maintain his marriage for appearances.
– **How it plays out:** Every action in the plot stems from the characters trying to outplay each other. The competition between Hope and Joy escalates until the final confrontation, where both women’s true agendas are exposed, leaving Hope to either triumph or lose everything.

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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 3: The Transformational Journey
Sylvia’s Transformational Journey
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.

What I learned from doing this assignment is…the fulfillment of the layers is fascinating. It’s time consuming and well worth the effort. This is an enlightening exercise.
Only do this assignment for your Protagonist. This is about creating the Transformational Journey for the Hero/Heroin only. This journey is the journey of the entire movie.
2. Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:
• Arc Beginning: Bored, unambitious, self-loather—lost in her meaning for life.
• Arc Ending: Ambitious, sot after Entrepreneur—helping others find their purpose.
3. Give us their Internal/External Journey.
• Internal Journey: From weak and naïve to strong and self-confident
• External Journey: From a trusting artist who is easily manipulated to a well-respected business woman who brings down a narcistic con.
4. Tell us their Old Ways at the beginning of the movie and their New Ways at the end.
• Old Ways: Overly trusting and giving to a fault
• New Ways: Self-Awareness and ability to see through with the strength to stop manipulation tactics

Homework Answers:
Genre =Romantic Thriller
Concept = An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Protagonist = Hope, A well-known artist, is unhappily married to Will.
Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband, nor her life’s situation.

3 Act Structure =
**Act 1:**
In the vibrant but secretive art scene of a Southern town, Hope Harwood, under the pseudonym “Lila Rayne,” allows her high school sweetheart, Joy Sinclair, to use her artwork to stay financially afloat. Their intense reunion breathes new life into Ellie’s dormant passions, but tension mounts when Ellie discovers her husband Will in an intimate moment with her brother Michael, casting shadows over her already complex life.

**Act 2:**
Hope escapes with Joy to a tranquil lakeside retreat, seeking clarity and space to breathe. As they reconnect, Hope’s sacrifice becomes a betrayal when Joy begins to claim Hope’s entire artistic identity as her own. Back home, Will’s hidden emotional connection with Michael surfaces, compounding the betrayals and leaving Hope feeling suffocated by the secrets surrounding her.

**Act 3:**
Returning home to a storm of deceit, Hope confronts the devastating impact of Joy’s theft and the unraveling secrets between Will and Michael. Facing these betrayals, Hope chooses to reclaim her life and identity. She and Will part ways amicably as she begins to mend her professional reputation and personal relationships. As the dust settles, Hope rediscovers her voice in the art world, inspired by her journey through love’s shadows and the quest for authenticity.

– **Act 1:** Sets up Hope’s internal conflicts and external circumstances, introducing the key players (Will, Joy, Michael) and the seeds of betrayal.
– **Act 2:** Delves into the heart of Hope’s internal struggle and external challenges, where betrayals surface, and her old ways are increasingly challenged.
– **Act 3:** Brings Hope’s transformation to the forefront, where she actively confronts and resolves the betrayals, leading to her embrace of the new ways.

Transformational Journey for Hope in “Identity Crisis”
Tell us the Character Arc for your Protagonist:
#### **1. Character Arc:**
– **Arc Begins:*- **Who She Is at the Start:**
Hope is a well-known artist, respected in her community yet emotionally detached from her own life. She lives under the weight of her own unfulfilled dreams and desires. She is unhappily married to Will, and though she respects him, she does not love him. She feels trapped in a marriage that stifles her emotionally and creatively. Hope is guilt-ridden, feeling a sense of duty to her husband despite the lack of true affection. Her life takes a turn when she reunites with Joy, an old flame whose passionate and vibrant approach to life reignites old feelings. Her deep, unresolved feelings for Joy Sinclair, a vivacious art curator who was once her closest friend and first love, remain buried but powerful. The lingering emotional connection with Joy is a source of both excitement and guilt for Hope as it unravels into a sinister stolen identity scheme.
– **Issues and Limitations:**
– Emotional detachment from her current life
– A sense of obligation to her marriage commitment
– Insecurity about pursuing her own happiness
– Creative stagnation due to emotional repression
-Lack of self-confidence in her own decisions
– Guilt over her unresolved feelings for Joy
– Fear of revisiting past romantic feelings

– **Arc Ends:**- **Who She Becomes by the End:**
By the end of her journey, Hope has undergone a profound transformation. She has reclaimed her identity, both personally and professionally. Hope is no longer defined by her marriage or her past but by her own choices and her reawakened passion for her art. She lets go of guilt and embraces her right to happiness, moving past her relationship with Joy who betrayed her trust, finding peace in her decisions and a renewed sense of purpose. She finds solace in her husband of whom was also living the same lie as they form a stronger friendship bond. The betrayal by Joy, who steals her identity, becomes the catalyst for Hope’s ultimate liberation. In reclaiming her identity and artistic voice, Hope emerges stronger, more confident, and ready to live life on her own terms.
– **Changes and Growth:**
– Emotional liberation from guilt
– Self-assurance in her decisions
– Reclamation of her creative identity
– Rejection of destructive relationships
– Independence and confidence
**How to Improve the Character Arc:** To deepen Hope’s arc, emphasize the intense emotional history, vulnerability and connection she has with Joy and how this shapes her journey. This connection should be the driving force behind Hope’s internal struggle and external actions. Illustrate her initial hesitance to reconnect with Joy due to past emotions, evolving into a deep trust, and finally, a profound sense of betrayal and empowerment from overcoming this betrayal.
Give us their Internal/External Journey.
#### **2. Internal/External Journey:**
– **Internal Journey:*- **How She Changes Emotionally and Mentally:**
Hope’s internal journey revolves around her grappling with rekindled feelings for Joy, which forces her to confront her dissatisfaction with her current life. At the start, these feelings are a source of guilt and confusion, but as she reconnects with Joy, they awaken a sense of passion and longing that Hope has suppressed for years. However, this emotional reawakening also brings about a crisis when Joy betrays her. Hope’s internal journey is one of reconciling her love for Joy with the pain of betrayal, ultimately leading her to a place of emotional clarity where she can let go of the past and embrace her own identity.
– **Key Emotional Shifts:**
– From guilt to acceptance of her loveless marriage
– From emotional detachment to passionate reawakening
– From repression to emotional openness
– From heartbreak to emotional empowerment
– From betrayal to self-empowerment
– From dependency to self-reliance

– **External Journey:**- **How Her Actions and Experiences Change:**
Externally, Hope’s journey revolves around her rekindled relationship with Joy, which initially brings excitement and a sense of revival to her life. As their relationship deepens, Hope allows Joy to use her artwork, which she views as an act of love and trust. However, when Joy begins to claim her entire artistic identity, Hope’s external journey shifts dramatically from passive acceptance to active confrontation. Betrayed by the person she trusted most, Hope is forced to fight for her identity, both personally and professionally. This battle leads her to confront not only Joy’s manipulative grasp but also the other unresolved issues in her life, including her marriage to Will.
– **Key Actions and Experiences:**
– Reconnecting with Joy, leading to emotional and creative revival and collaboration
– Discovering Joy’s betrayal and theft of her identity
– Confronting Joy and reclaiming her artwork and reputation
– Publicly reclaiming her artistic identity and separating from destructive relationships
– Addressing the unraveling of her marriage and deciding to move on
**How to Improve the Internal/External Journey:** To strengthen the connection between Hope’s internal and external journeys, ensure that her deep emotional bond with Joy is mirrored in her external actions that reflect her growing independence and strength. For instance, as Hope becomes more emotionally open, show her taking bold steps to protect her art and sever ties with Joy. The betrayal should feel like a personal and professional crisis that shakes Hope to her core, making her ultimate reclamation of self even more impactful.
Tell us their Old Ways at beginning of movie and their New Ways at end.
#### **3. Old Ways/New Ways:**
– **Old Ways:**- **Behaviors, Emotions, and Thinking Patterns at the Beginning:**
– Hope is emotionally detached from her current life, particularly in her marriage.
– She feels guilty for her lack of love for Will, which keeps her stuck in an unhappy marriage.
– Hope is reserved and avoids emotional risks, particularly with Joy.
– She feels a deep sense of guilt and unresolved feelings towards Joy, which she suppresses to maintain the status quo.
– Hope is creatively stagnant, using her art as a means of escape rather than self-expression.
– Hope represses her true desires and artistic expression.
– She avoids taking risks or making decisions that would disrupt her current life, leading to a sense of powerlessness.
– She allows Joy to influence her decisions due to old affections.

– **New Ways:**- **Behaviors, Emotions, and Thinking Patterns at the End:**
– Hope becomes emotionally engaged and assertive, confronting her true feelings for Joy and the consequences of their relationship.
– She lets go of the guilt associated with her feelings for Joy, accepting them as part of her journey towards self-discovery.
– She takes control of her life, making bold decisions to reclaim her identity and move forward through and beyond betrayal without fear.
– Hope experiences a creative resurgence, using her art to express her journey and newfound sense of self.
– She takes decisive actions to distance herself from Joy and her marriage ensuring her personal and professional autonomy.

**How to Improve the Old Ways/New Ways:** To make the transformation more compelling, deepen the emotional stakes in Hope’s relationship with Joy at the beginning of the story. Show her vulnerabilities and how they manifest in her early decisions. This will make the shift to the “New Ways” more powerful, as Hope’s journey will feel like a true emotional awakening and reclamation of her life and identity. Enhance her new ways by showing her taking concrete steps to protect her work and public identity, such as through legal actions or new exhibitions that clearly mark her independent path.

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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 2: Intentional Lead Characters
Sylvia’s Intentional Lead Characters
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.

What I learned from doing this assignment is…this exercise is excellent in refining the main characters without any fluff getting in the way.

Title = Identity Crises

Genre = Romantic Thriller

High Concept = An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.

• Character: Protagonist: Hope
• Logline: A well-known artist, Hope, is unhappily married to Will.
• Unique: Hope is guilt filled that she respects yet does not love her husband.

• Character: Antagonist: Joy is Hope’s old classmate.
• Logline: Full of life, Joy is an art curator.
• Unique: Joy was Hope’s friend in High School and Will’s best buddy from College.

• Character: Third Wheel: Will is Hope’s husband.
• Logline: Will is a family lawyer that avoids responsibilities with his wife, Hope.
• Unique: Will is secretly having an affair with Hope’s brother.

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WIM+AI – Module 2 -Lesson 1: Great Outlines Make Great Scripts!
Sylvia Krawczyk’s Title, Concept, and Character Structure!
My vision from this program is to challenge myself in my writing genre and write my most amazing script to date.
What I learned from doing this assignment is…Interesting about the four types of relationships/character structures. I picked one “with a twist.”
Title: Identity Crises
Concept: An artist’s unexpected reunion with her first love reveals mutual passion that turns to sinister betrayal leading to a crises that unravels her life.
Tell us the Character Structure you’ve chosen.
Romantic Triangle
A man and a woman conflict over the love of a woman and a choice must be made.

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BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 7: Problem/Solution Grid 2

Sylvia Completed P/S Grid #2

What I learned doing this assignment is…I hadn’t introduced all the characters with who they were in the story. The grid helped point that out.

The problems you solved and/or the scenes you improved, and which solution you used:

#3. Character Intros not Strong

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BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 6: Problem/Solution Grid 1

Sylvia Completed P/S Grid #1

What I learned doing this assignment is…this is a great grid to help suss out problems.

The problems you solved and/or the scenes you improved, and which solution I used:

#1 Strengthened the inciting incident

# 8. A stronger cliffhanger

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BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 5: Write Act 4 + 5

Sylvia Has Finished Act 4 + 5

What I learned doing this assignment is… I may have a lopsided script with too much in Act 5. This shall be revealed as I go forward with the assignments.

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BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 2: Write Act 1

Sylvia’s Finished Act 1 First Draft

What I learned doing this assignment is…This is definitely a good way to write this. I have been moving around the Outline HW to make it even faster. On to the next Act…

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HW M4 – L1: Teaser and High Speed Writing

Sylvia’s Teaser

What I learned doing this assignment is…I didn’t get the recommended pages as this teaser is very short. In any case, I dropped my outline into Final Draft and kept the top part as the Outline HW and wrote out the Teaser under it. It helped to keep me focused. It was fast using the skills yet, I am not certain about the amount of pages coming from the prior assignments. So, I’ll keep doing the skills as recommended and see what happens for the entire first draft. My assumption is once it’s done to erase the Outline HW at the top from the first draft so, there will be even less pages. If that’s the case, I can write in more action or dialogue. I am keeping things short and to the point as recommended. And, yet, I meander…LOL!

FADE IN

TEASER

INT. Hotel Ball Room — Evening: MYSTERY

At an elaborate fundraiser, Emily, the Director of Fundraising, sees a child thought to be dead walk across the dance floor. Emily confronts Lily, a Charge Nurse, who denies seeing anything. Emily gets cryptic messages on her phone. No one else notices the child. The child vanishes in thin air.

• Open Loop: Who is the ghost child?

• Mystery: How is a ghost child walking?

• M: Who is sending cryptic messages to Emily?

• Empathy/Distress: Emily thinks she is going crazy/seeing things.

• Payoff:

• Irony:

• Setup: Ghost Child and cryptic messages

High end decorations adorn the walls and dinn’ing tables. There is a huge buffet.

Emily, in a smart dress, engages with attendees. Drinks flow. Food is consumed. Emily has a name tag that states, “Fundraising Director”.

She watches people on the dance floor and notices a small child weaving around the patrons dance steps. The child is unnoticed by anyone else. She looks like a hologram. Emily is in disbelief as she walks towards the child.

EMILY

Emily speaks with Lily and asks her about the child.

LILY

Denies seeing anything and states that the child Emily describes is deceased.

Emily gets a cryptic message on her phone as if someone is watching her.

EMILY AND DR. WHITMAN

There is discussion between the two introducing their characters, who they are and what they are doing.

Emily looks for the child and walks between the guests dancing. She is butted off the dance floor.

Emily runs into Abigail.

EMILY

Emily asks to see Abigail’s notes and her camera.

ABIGAIL

Refuses and there is a discussion about how Abigail has no idea what Emily is speaking about–the ghost child.

Emily sees the child in the distance and leaves Abigail to follow it.

The child vanishes into thin air.

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 9: Setups For Future Episodes

Sylvia’s Setting Up The Future

What I learned doing this assignment is…These exercises are adding a ton of great depth and quick. The long part will be in sorting thru everything, printing and cutting and pasting and rewriting. That’s the part I enjoy the most!

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 8: Building In Empathy/Distress

Sylvia’s Adding Empathy/Distress!

What I learned doing this assignment is got some great ideas. Definitely need to write them into my structure as I get a chance.

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 4: Character Story Lines

Sylvia’s Character Story Lines

What I learned doing this assignment is this took me a bit to grasp in the way it’s written. I like the depth it adds and my story continues to morph. I think bullet points would add to the clarity at this point instead of all the detail in each area. I am curious to see things develop.

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 3: Creating Your Pilot Structure

Sylvia’s Pilot Structure

What I learned doing this assignment is how helpful this process is to bring things together.

Present the first draft of your pilot Acts.

Teaser:

Essence: At a lavish charity gala with the four main characters, Emily Montclair dazzles the crowd, her charm and elegance on full display. As she delivers a heartfelt speech about the importance of the hospital’s pediatric ward, a shadowy figure watches her from afar, unseen.

Turning Point: The shadowy figure leaves a cryptic note for Emily, hinting at dark secrets within the hospital walls, compelling her to investigate.

Act 1:

Essence: Emily’s philanthropic world contrasts sharply with her personal life, showing her yearning for a connection with her estranged daughter, Abigail. Meanwhile, Abigail, an investigative journalist, is seen planning an exposé on the hospital’s pediatric ward.

Turning Point: Emily visits the pediatric ward for the first time and experiences a chilling encounter that suggests something supernatural is at play, hinting at the existence of ghostly guardians.

Act 2:

Essence: Emily delves deeper into the hospital’s mysteries, forming alliances with Lily Hastings and Dr. Daniel Whitman. Together, they begin to notice inexplicable healings among the children.

Turning Point/Midpoint: Emily, with Lily’s reluctant guidance, witnesses a child’s ghostly guardian firsthand. They discover that these guardians can turn lethal when provoked.

Act 3:

Essence: The characters struggle with the reality of the ghostly guardians. Emily tries to understand her connection to these spirits, while Lily faces moral dilemmas about revealing her secret ability. Abigail, unknowingly getting closer to her mother, starts uncovering parts of the puzzle and is determined to reveal them.

Turning Point: Abigail and Emily’s paths cross without recognizing each other, but Abigail discovers evidence linking Emily to the mysterious happenings in the ward, escalating tensions and suspicions.

Act 4:

Essence: As Emily, Lily, and Dr. Whitman search for a way to understand and peacefully coexist with the guardians, their actions inadvertently provoke the spirits, leading to a dangerous escalation.

Turning Point: A ghostly guardian’s reaction results in the disappearance of a child, causing a hospital-wide panic. The event is captured on security cameras, showing Emily at the scene, which makes her actions look suspicious.

Act 5:

Essence: The hospital board, fearing for the children’s safety and the hospital’s reputation, bans Emily from the pediatric ward. Unbeknownst to Emily, a secret society within the hospital, aware of the supernatural elements, reaches out to her, indicating her deep involvement in the ongoing mysteries.

Lock In: The society reveals they’ve been monitoring the ghostly guardians and sees Emily as a key figure in an ancient prophecy, linking her fate with the ghosts. They believe she can bridge the gap between the living and the spectral, but at a great personal cost.

Cliffhanger: As Emily processes her ban and the secret society’s revelations, Abigail, piecing together her mother’s identity and her connection to the ward’s mysteries, confronts Emily, revealing her identity. The episode ends with a ghostly guardian appearing before both, signaling a crucial turning point in their understanding of the paranormal phenomena and their personal relationship.

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BWTV-AI Module 3 – Lesson 1: Pilot Big Picture Components

Sylvia’s Big Picture Components

What I learned doing this assignment is…That I have the information, yet it seems to always grow and need adjusting.

My basic Series Info:

SERIES INFO:

· World: charity galas and hospital Pediatric Patients paranormal activity

· Main Mystery: What are these Ghostly Guardian secrets and their angry attitudes

· Impossible Goal: To prove to others, there are spirit guardians watching over the children in the pediatric ward.

· Main Conflict: The Spirit World versus the Ordinary World.

· Second Mystery: Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with hospital paranormal mysteries. How are they connected?

· Season 1 Arc: A secret chamber has doors that lead to children, thought dead, are still alive in comas.

· Season 1 Protagonist Internal Journey: Emily finds strength in herself that she can make a difference in children’s lives.

2. Tell us the basic Pilot Info:

PILOT INFO:

· Pilot Conflict: How can Emily help the children in the hospital when she’s banned from entering it?

· Characters Introduced:

Emily Montclair

A self-made socialite produces fundraising galas for a pediatric hospital. She now has the means and longs to reunite with her daughter and fix family ties. She gave up her daughter in her youth when her Pastor abandoned her. In her new found wealth and position, others exploit her endeavors and question her sanity due to jealousy hindering to reunification.

Lily Hastings

A nurse that bridges the world of charity galas and a pediatric ward’s supernatural mysteries. With the help of a doctor, admires Emily and distrusts Abigail in helping patients.

Abigail Montclair

Estranged daughter of Emily is a Journalistic Investigator. Uncovers family and hospital mysteries. She is a fish out of water as she tries to unravel what is happening to the children. This causes many misunderstandings and often dangerous situations for the patients as well as rivalry among her peers.

Dr. Daniel Whitman

He is a long time chief pediatric surgeon that has lost respect by his peers due his age and to unexplained paranormal hospital activity even though lives are being saved. He struggles with explaining his hospitals reputation of paranormal activity due to his years of science study.

· Inciting Incident of Season 1: Prove to Emily she has a gift of seeing ghosts when she sees a child that is thought to have disappeared and been dead at a gala.

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BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 12: Creating Beautiful TV Bibles

Sylvia’s Visually Appealing Bible

What I learned doing this assignment is finding pictures and converting them online is ridiculous and time consuming. I must find another way as I like the idea not only for my Pitch Bible but also to keep it in front of me to keep the “feel” of the show aroused.

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BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 11: Editing Your TV Pitch Bible

Sylvia’s Edited TV Pitch Bible

What I learned doing this assignment is continued cleaning up and writing engaging material. I still think it needs work but, it’s getting better all the time.

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Module 2 – Lesson 10: Riveting Episode Titles

Sylvia’s Episode Titles

What I learned doing this assignment is this was a fun exercise. I liked the original titles and this made them stronger. I need to go back to the episodes and clean more up. The titles gave new condensed insight.

1. Do a quick brainstorm session for each of your episodes and seasons. Use the Title Formats to do it.

2. Select the titles that stand out, but be open to even better ideas in the future.

3. Sequence the titles so you can see what story they tell. Replace any titles that create genre confusion.

**Episode 1: “Unveiling Secrets”**

**Episode 2: “Whispers in the Ward”**

**Episode 3: “Healing Hearts, Haunting Shadows”**

**Episode 4: “A Mother’s Dilemma”**

**Episode 5: “Blood Ties to the Rescue”**

**Episode 6: “Hearts Back in Distress”**

**Episode 7: “The Web Unravels Possibilities”**

**Episode 8: “Collateral Damage Finds it’s Savior”**

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BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 9: Make Every Line Intriguing!

Sylvia Presents Non-Stop Intrigue

What I learned doing this assignment is this helped to trim down my Bible. It still needs more trimming. I am moving ahead and will continue to do so as I catch up.

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BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 8: Writing With Intrigue!

Sylvia’s Intrigue Patterns

What I learned doing this assignment is…great ways to up the lines!

Original Line:

“A blame game begins with the hospital board.”

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 7: Investigating Your Show

Sylvia’s TV Pitch Bible Investigation

What I learned doing this assignment is…the layers are endless. It’s a matter of picking which ones to keep. I am still curious as to how specific to write the Bible. Much still seems vague. I am excited to see how this grows.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 6: Opening Summary That Sells the Season

Sylvia’s Show Summary

What I learned doing this assignment is…it works better with AI when you fill in the structure components. The more information you give it the better. Also, AI won’t always do as you ask. In this instance, I had to ask it a second time to write the summary.

See the best summaries from this assignment at the bottom.

The summary is essentially 1) the BW Framework ideas, 2) organized into a sequence, and 3) written to flow well.

1. Choose the Summary Format you like best.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 5: Engaging Episode Descriptions

Sylvia’s Episode Descriptions

What I learned doing this assignment is…The biggest thing I noticed is that when I wrote up the descriptions using only the main character, I combined some of the other characters details with her. This made her a stronger character and I think will deepen the story. I can flush out more details for the others to strengthen her further.

ASSIGNMENT: (Stay away from details and B and C stories.)

1. Check the sequence of episodes you did in Lesson 4 and see if it flows well for you. Feel free to change the sequence in any way that you think might be better as you create the full season of episode descriptions.

2. For each episode, go through the event bullet points and organize them in this fashion.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 2: Compelling Character Descriptions

Sylvia’s Character Descriptions

What I learned doing this assignment is…AI takes many liberties and fills in ideas that have not been suggested. Must always edit. This exercise took a while as it again opened questions that were not yet precise as answered. I had a lot of fun playing with AI in having it give me ideas in multiple ways. It’s crazy how many ways the story can progress and in how it is presented. AI is really an assistant and it’s all about the writer and making decisions. There are so many ways to go it can be overwhelming. Make quick decisions from the heart and move on. Keep your notes as you can always change things. My work was 21 pages so I’m not posting the whole thing.

Emily Montclair

A self-made socialite produces fundraising galas for a pediatric hospital. She now has the means and longs to reunite with her daughter and fix family ties. She gave up her daughter in her youth when her Pastor abandoned her. In her new found wealth and position, others exploit her endeavors and question her sanity due to jealousy hindering to reunification.

While as a government mole to uncover the hospital’s ghost secrets, she finds that her philanthropic efforts inadvertently contribute to the hospital’s supernatural occurrences. Things get dangerous when her lack of nursing knowledge comes into play with the children, she is there to raise monies for. She’s terrified she’ll be instituted as she can’t explain the odd activity by the ghosts and is afraid no one will believe her, let alone her daughter.

Lily Hastings

A nurse that bridges the world of charity galas and a pediatric ward’s supernatural mysteries. With the help of a doctor, admires Emily and distrusts Abigail in helping patients.

She survived a huge trauma as a child because of her supernatural abilities while others perished. She carries its guilt. She knows less than she thinks she does. And, with her

impatience, she pisses off the ghosts which causes dangerous situations.

Abigail Montclair

Estranged daughter of Emily is a Journalistic Investigator. Uncovers family and hospital mysteries. She is a fish out of water as she tries to unravel mysteries. This causes many misunderstandings and often dangerous situations for the patients as well as rivalry among her peers.

She carries resentment towards her mother as she winds through crazy unexplained situations. She butts up with the Charge Nurse Lily and finds her both incorrigible and titillating. She’s addicted to the unexplained atmosphere.

Dr. Daniel Whitman

He is the chief pediatric surgeon that has lost respect by his peers due his age and to unexplained paranormal hospital activity even though lives are being saved. He struggles with explaining his hospitals reputation of paranormal activity due to his years of science study.

He has been accused of needing to retire and that he has lost his mind. He delves into learning more about Eastern Medicine and meditation which causes further rifts with his peers. He forms a unique bond with the Charge Nurse, Lily, that causes him to question his own sanity.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 1: What Makes a Great TV Pitch Bible?

Sylvia’s Intriguing Concept and World

What I learned doing this assignment is…some things were new as in “Audience”—hadn’t written it yet. I knew it would be for adults. So, should I write a further description of the types of adults? I might be missing something and I am looking forward to further exercises.

Also, with regards to the week 7 video replay on this module, Hal mentioned writing in lower levels to gain interest and make sure it’s easily understood. I have heard 10^th grade is good–as in YA novels that adults enjoy as they are an easy read. Hal stated at his former company: 6^th grade. I played with this in AI as you can see below. I got some wonderful insights/answers. (My continuing AI request is in bold.)

Present your concept and world.

1. Present your Concept.

A. Engaging and highly proactive hero or group…

B. …up against a major conflict…

C. …goes on unique transformational journey…

D. …Into an intriguing world.

Logline? Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with hospital mysteries from the paranormal.

Concept: In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital paranormal secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past.

2. Tell us the Intriguing World of this show.

Unique Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients.

Previously unexplored: How you hide the unexplained in plain sight.

The unknown: How charity socialites and hospital staff will react.

The unseen: Hospital’s paranormal secrets save patients.

Unheard of Dangers: Paranormal misunderstandings cause disasters.

Reason to explore it: Working together saves lives.

3. Use this prompt to have AI brainstorm ways to express your concept and intriguing world.

PROMPT: Elevate Concept and Intriguing World

I’m going to give the [concept] and [Intriguing world] for my [Format/Genre] TV Series. Can you brainstorm the concept in 25 words or less, and the Intriguing world to be a maximum of 3 concise sentences in a paragraph that together to describe the world in a way that is intriguing and my [Audience] will love it.

1. Please give me ideas that could make them more interesting and intriguing.

2. Please rewrite the concept and intriguing world in whatever way you think could cause a TV Producer to want to make the show.

Format/Genre = Dramedy

Audience = Adults

Concept = In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital paranormal secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past.

Intriguing World =

Unique Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients.

Previously unexplored: How you hide the unexplained in plain sight.

The unknown: How charity socialites and hospital staff will react.

The unseen: Hospital’s paranormal secrets save patients.

Unheard of Dangers: Paranormal misunderstandings cause disasters.

Reason to explore it: Working together saves lives.

FROM AI:

(For Adult Audiences)

**Concept (25 words or less):**

In a world of charity glam and romantic chaos, a woman unravels hospital paranormal mysteries, battling gossip, a resistant daughter, and unearthing secrets that blur past and present.

**Intriguing World (3 concise sentences):**

Beneath charity soirées lies a spectral realm where ghostly guardians protect pediatric patients. Unexplained phenomena coexist with reality, hidden in plain sight. The clash of socialites, staff, and the supernatural unveils unseen hospital secrets, with collaboration as the key to saving lives.

**Pitch to TV Producers:**

Enter a world where glamour meets ghosts, and philanthropy dances with the paranormal. In our dramedy, a charismatic woman navigates charity galas, romantic missteps, and hospital hauntings, unlocking mysteries that intertwine past and present. Uncover the unique sub-world of spectral guardians safeguarding pediatric patients, hidden in plain sight. As the clash of socialites and hospital staff with the supernatural unfolds, untold secrets surface, with each episode a rollercoaster of revelations. This series promises a fresh blend of humor, heart, and the unexplained, captivating adults seeking a unique and riveting dramedy experience.

Rewrite your answer for 10th graders.

**Concept (25 words or less):**

Imagine a world of fancy parties, love twists, and a mom discovering spooky hospital secrets. Gossip, a tricky daughter, and hidden mysteries blur the past and present.

**Intriguing World (3 concise sentences):**

Beneath posh parties, ghosts guard sick kids. Spooky stuff hides in plain sight, and socialites clash with hospital secrets. Teaming up saves lives in this wild mix!

**Pitch to TV Producers:**

Picture this: a mix of glitz, teen drama, and a mom exploring ghostly hospital mysteries. Parties, crushes, and spooky surprises make every episode a thrilling adventure. It’s a cool and unique show for high schoolers, blending laughs, heart, and some mystery magic!

Rewrite your answer for 8th graders.

**Concept (25 words or less):**

In a world of charity glitz, romance, and mysteries, a mom unveils hospital hauntings. Juggling gossip, a resistant daughter, and spectral secrets, she blurs the lines between the past and present.

**Intriguing World (3 concise sentences):**

Beneath glamorous galas, ghosts guard sick kids, hiding in plain sight. Hospital staff clash with the supernatural, unveiling secrets that spark a rollercoaster of emotions. Collaborative efforts become the key to unraveling paranormal mysteries and saving lives.

**Pitch to TV Producers:**

Step into a world where charity events collide with the supernatural. Our series follows a mom navigating through glamour, teen drama, and hospital hauntings. Each episode weaves humor, heart, and unexpected twists for an engaging experience, appealing to the discerning tastes of eighth-graders.

Rewrite your answer for 6th graders.

**Concept (25 words or less):**

In a world of fancy parties and mom adventures, a girl finds ghostly hospital secrets. Gossip, a tricky daughter, and hidden mysteries mix up the past and now.

**Intriguing World (3 concise sentences):**

Imagine parties with ghosts protecting sick kids. Spooky stuff hides in plain sight, and friends discover secrets at the hospital. Teamwork saves the day!

**Pitch to TV Producers:**

Get ready for a fun ride! Join a girl exploring cool parties and a mom discovering ghostly hospital surprises. It’s a mix of laughs, friendship, and mysteries for awesome sixth-graders!

Rewrite your answer for kindergarten.

**Concept (25 words or less):**

In a world of fun parties and adventures, a nice lady discovers friendly ghosts in a hospital. With friends and laughter, they solve mysteries and help sick kids.

**Intriguing World (3 concise sentences):**

Imagine parties where happy ghosts play with sick kids. Silly surprises hide in plain sight, and friends help each other at the hospital. It’s a happy world of laughter!

**Pitch to TV Producers:**

Join the fun! A friendly lady and her ghost pals have parties, laugh a lot, and help kids at the hospital. It’s a happy, silly show for little ones to enjoy!

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 13: Create Your BW Framework

Sylvia has completed the BW Framework!

What I learned doing this process is…I hadn’t realized all the steps we had taken already. Using this exercise truly brought so much together that is making this story make sense. And, it’s not bad at all. I may have something there. Thank you!

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 Lesson 12: Discovering Irony

Sylvia Creating Irony!

What I learned doing this assignment is I used the main question and then added another by asking specifically for comedy—since this is a dramedy. The individual Irony details are great starting points in scenes and sequences.

HW #1: Example Show: She’s a refined stickler to how chess is played and yet she craves being a rebel and letting lose. She keeps putting herself in compromising situations—smoking too much, drinking to get drunk, sex with multiple partners…

HW#2:

Given the concept, lead characters, and main conflict of your Dramedy TV series, here are some forms of irony that could be incorporated into the show:

1. **Dramatic Irony:**

– The audience knows about Emily’s hidden identity and her connection to the hospital mysteries, but Lily and Abigail remain unaware, creating tension and anticipation.

2. **Situational Irony:**

– Emily, a wealthy socialite organizing charity galas, is emotionally distant from her daughter, while Lily, a pediatric nurse with a tragic past, becomes a surrogate mother figure to the children in the hospital.

3. **Verbal Irony:**

– Lily, who can communicate with “Ghostly Guardians,” is a pragmatic and skeptical character when dealing with the living, often dismissing supernatural explanations. Her disbelief becomes ironic given her unique connection.

4. **Irony of Fate:**

– Abigail, an investigative journalist seeking truth, unknowingly investigates her own family’s secrets, including her mother’s identity and the hospital mysteries.

5. **Situational Irony (Re: Emily and Lily):**

– Despite Emily’s initial skepticism about the supernatural, she becomes deeply involved in the “Ghostly Guardians” mysteries, while Lily, initially dedicated to science, finds herself relying on supernatural help.

6. **Dramatic Irony (Re: Lily and Abigail):**

– Lily, who lost a patient in her past, unknowingly helps “Ghostly Guardians” protect children, while Abigail, unaware of the supernatural occurrences, investigates the hospital’s dark secrets.

7. **Verbal Irony (Re: Abigail):**

– Abigail’s determination to uncover the truth about her family clashes with her ignorance about the intricacies of hospital fundraising and the supernatural events, creating moments of comedic irony.

8. **Irony of Deception:**

– Emily and Lily, both navigating their own deceptions, find themselves relying on each other without knowing the full truth, creating an ironic bond.

9. **Situational Irony (Re: Emily and Abigail):**

– Emily, who organizes charity galas to bring people together, struggles to reconnect with her own daughter, who is investigating her past and the hospital’s mysteries.

10. **Irony of Motivation:**

– Lily, driven by survivor’s guilt, unwittingly becomes the guardian of “Ghostly Guardians,” while Abigail, motivated by resentment, unravels a conspiracy that connects her mother to the hospital’s supernatural events.

Incorporating these forms of irony can add depth, complexity, and humor to your Dramedy TV series, creating a captivating and engaging narrative for the audience.

Certainly! Here are 10 examples of humor-based irony for your Dramedy TV series:

1. **Situational Irony (Re: Emily’s Galas):**

– Emily, the mastermind behind glamorous charity galas, finds herself in comical, mundane situations while organizing the events, like struggling with a malfunctioning champagne fountain or accidentally wearing mismatched shoes to a high-profile gathering.

2. **Verbal Irony (Re: Lily’s Skepticism):**

– Lily, the pragmatic pediatric nurse, delivers deadpan and sarcastic remarks when confronted with supernatural phenomena, creating humorous moments as she reluctantly accepts the reality of “Ghostly Guardians.”

3. **Irony of Identity (Re: Emily’s Secret Identity):**

– Emily’s secret identity for her investigations leads to humorous misunderstandings, as she inadvertently finds herself in awkward situations where people mistake her for someone else, leading to comedic mistaken identity scenarios.

4. **Dramatic Irony (Re: Abigail’s Investigations):**

– Abigail, in her quest for truth, often jumps to wild and incorrect conclusions about her mother’s mysterious activities, creating humorous situations as she fumbles through her investigation.

5. **Situational Irony (Re: Lily’s Communication):**

– Lily’s attempts to communicate with “Ghostly Guardians” sometimes result in amusing misunderstandings, with the supernatural entities interpreting her messages in unexpected and humorous ways.

6. **Dialogue Irony (Re: Abigail and Emily):

– Abigail, unaware of her mother’s involvement in the charity scene, satirically critiques the extravagance of galas, not realizing that her own mother is a central figure in organizing them.

7. **Irony of Competing Agendas:**

– Emily and her philanthropic rivals, unknowingly competing for the same charitable cause, end up hilariously sabotaging each other’s efforts while trying to outdo one another in fundraising creativity.

8. **Verbal Irony (Re: Emily’s Mask):**

– Emily, projecting an image of confidence and control at galas, comically struggles with modern technology or fashion faux pas, revealing her vulnerability in contrast to her public persona.

9. **Situational Irony (Re: Abigail’s Weakness):**

– Abigail, an investigative journalist, ironically becomes the source of unintentional humor as she navigates the hospital world, comically misunderstanding medical jargon and hospital protocols.

10. **Irony of Lily’s Coping Mechanism:**

– Lily, who neglects her own well-being, becomes the unintentional source of humor as she stumbles through scenes, sleep-deprived and caffeine-fueled, creating comical moments amid the more serious hospital mysteries.

These humor-based forms of irony can add a lighthearted touch to your Dramedy TV series, providing comedic relief while maintaining the depth of the overarching plot and character arcs.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 10: Creating Intriguing Layers

Sylvia’s Plot and Character Layers

What I learned doing this assignment is…Definitely an exercise to delve into further and repeatedly.

Assignment 1 Sample Show:

Plot Surface: An orphan girl becomes a world genius chess player as she grows up against all odds.

Layer: Her mother killed herself trying to kill the both of them in a car crash.

Layer: Her adoptive Parents are a mess and adopt her to be the adoptive mother’s “companion”.

Layer: The couple are: Mother is a self-loathing drunk and Father is a self-righteous, selfish arse.

Character Surface: An orphan girl becomes a world genius chess player as she grows up.

Layer: She has an addictive personality.

Layer: She is told to fake her age (to be older) to get adopted.

Layer: She is very independent and does better without those in charge around her.

Assignment 2 My show:

**PLOT LAYERS:**

1. **Major Scheme Revealed:**

– Surface: Emily plans a grand charity gala.

– Layer: Gala serves as a cover for exposing a corrupt hospital executive.

2. **Mystery Revealed:**

– Surface: Abigail investigates a child’s ghost.

– Layer: Ghost reveals a hidden hospital conspiracy involving pediatric patients.

3. **Story Misdirection:**

– Surface: Emily’s fundraising seems straightforward.

– Layer: Fundraising hides a deeper plot involving a secret organization.

4. **Major Shift in Meaning:**

– Surface: Emily aims to mend family ties.

– Layer: Family secrets indicate a more complex and sinister history.

5. **Hidden History:**

– Surface: Emily’s past involves philanthropy and socialite events.

– Layer: A forgotten scandal from Emily’s youth resurfaces, impacting the present.

6. **Hidden Plan:**

– Surface: Emily’s efforts focus on hospital fundraising.

– Layer: Emily’s covert plan involves exposing a powerful figure tied to the hospital’s secrets.

**CHARACTER LAYERS:**

1. **Secret Identity:**

– Surface: Emily, a philanthropist.

– Layer: Emily, an undercover informant for a government agency.

2. **Intrigue Layers:**

– Surface: Abigail reconnects with her mother.

– Layer: Abigail’s true motive is to investigate the hospital’s mysteries.

3. **Hidden Relationships and Conspiracies:**

– Surface: Emily’s friendships seem genuine.

– Layer: One friend is secretly working against Emily due to a personal vendetta.

4. **Hidden Character History:**

– Surface: Emily’s past involves charity work.

– Layer: Emily’s youth includes a period of rebellion and dark secrets.

5. **Hidden Agenda:**

– Surface: Emily’s goal is to reunite with her daughter.

– Layer: Emily has a secondary agenda involving exposing the hospital’s corruption.

6. **Wound:**

– Surface: Emily’s wound is the abandonment by her pastor.

– Layer: The wound is deeper, tied to a traumatic event that reshaped her entire life.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 8: Inviting Obsession Through Mystery

Sylvia’s Show Mysteries

What I learned doing this assignment is…This was great fun. I was surprised at how many ideas came. I am also noticing more in the tv sample.

ASSIGNMENT 1: My Sample Show

Big Picture Mysteries-Car crash at the beginning where Beth survives and her mother dies.

Smaller Mysteries-How is she going to survive the orphanage, become the world chess champion, survive on her own when her adoptive mom dies and dad is a putz and tries to rip her off. How will Beth pay for the house?

ASSIGNMENT 2: My Notes on my show-

1. Create your Shocking Event Mystery and tell us the WWWWW and H, along with the part withheld.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 7: Empathy/Distress

Sylvia’s Show Empathy/Distress

What I learned doing this assignment is—thinking out the details of the empathy/distress is a part of the big picture.

ASSIGNMENT 1:

1. Watch the next episode of your Example Show and focus on the Empathy/Distress that shows up in this episode and throughout the season so far.

2. Notice the difference between Big Picture Empathy/Distress and detail-oriented Empathy/Distress. Big Picture will have an impact across multiple episodes.

ASSIGNMENT 2:

1. Make a list of BIG PICTURE difficult situations and decisions your characters could make because of the main conflict of this series. MY VERSION:

(Just ask yourself: “Knowing the concept, what are the big picture Empathy/Distress situations that could occur?”)

Distress:

A. Undeserved misfortune.-Emily not knowing her daughter

B. External Character conflicts. Emily fights with staff.

C. Plot intruding on life. Not enough sleep makes her crazy.

D. Moral dilemmas. She desperately needs sleep yet her patients need her!

E. Forced decisions they’d never make. Attempted suicide.

Empathy:

A. Put the character in distress. Code blue.

B. Make them relatable. Emotional suffering parents.

C. Universal experiences that are emotional. Ill children needing help.

2. AI VERSION:

**Format/Genre:** Dramedy

**Concept:** In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past. Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

**Conflict:**

– Emily Montclair’s conflict revolves around her desire to reconnect with her estranged daughter, Abigail, while uncovering unsettling hospital secrets tied to supernatural occurrences.

– Lily Hastings faces a conflict related to protecting the “Ghostly Guardians” and pediatric patients from harm while navigating the skepticism of colleagues and the dangers posed by malevolent supernatural forces.

– Abigail Montclair confronts a conflict involving her investigative pursuit of her mother’s secrets, her resentment over being given up for adoption, and the moral dilemmas arising from the hospital’s mysteries.

Now, let’s explore distress and empathy for each lead character:

**Emily Montclair:**

– *Distress:*

– A. Undeserved misfortune: Emily discovers that her philanthropic efforts inadvertently contributed to the hospital’s supernatural occurrences, causing her distress as she grapples with unintended consequences.

– B. External Character conflicts: Emily faces public scrutiny and backlash from rival philanthropists who exploit her estranged relationship with Abigail to tarnish her reputation.

– C. Plot intruding on life: Hospital secrets intrude on Emily’s glamorous social life, causing distress as her charity events become entwined with supernatural mysteries.

– D. Moral dilemmas: Emily is faced with a moral dilemma when protecting her social status conflicts with exposing the hospital’s secrets, forcing her to question her priorities.

– E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Emily is forced to make a decision between sacrificing her social standing or compromising the safety of the pediatric patients and the “Ghostly Guardians.”

– *Empathy:*

– A. Put them in distress: Reveal Emily’s internal struggle with guilt over giving up Abigail and her fear of the consequences of exposing the hospital’s secrets.

– B. Make them relatable: Highlight Emily’s vulnerability in dealing with strained family relationships and the pressure of maintaining a public image while facing personal turmoil.

– C. Universal experiences that are emotional: Explore themes of family reconciliation, guilt, and the complexity of balancing personal relationships with public responsibilities.

**Lily Hastings:**

– *Distress:*

– A. Undeserved misfortune: Lily suffers from supernatural backlash when the malevolent “Ghostly Guardians” target her for meddling in their affairs, causing distress.

– B. External Character conflicts: Lily faces conflicts with skeptical colleagues who question her dedication to the young patients and doubt the existence of the supernatural entities.

– C. Plot intruding on life: Lily’s commitment to her job is compromised as the hospital’s supernatural occurrences disrupt her ability to provide care for the pediatric patients.

– D. Moral dilemmas: Lily is torn between her duty to protect the pediatric patients and the ethical dilemma of concealing the supernatural world from her colleagues.

– E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Lily is forced to make a decision that goes against her compassionate nature to protect the “Ghostly Guardians.”

– *Empathy:*

– A. Put them in distress: Reveal Lily’s internal struggle with survivor’s guilt and the weight of past trauma, making her empathetic to the young patients and the supernatural entities.

– B. Make them relatable: Portray Lily as a dedicated and caring nurse who faces skepticism from others, emphasizing the universal challenge of gaining trust in professional settings.

– C. Universal experiences that are emotional: Explore themes of resilience, coping with trauma, and the emotional toll of navigating a supernatural world hidden from others.

**Abigail Montclair:**

– *Distress:*

– A. Undeserved misfortune: Abigail faces personal setbacks in her investigative pursuit, including threats to her career and reputation, causing distress.

– B. External Character conflicts: Abigail’s rivalry with other journalists intensifies, leading to conflicts that put her in compromising situations.

– C. Plot intruding on life: Abigail’s journalistic endeavors interfere with her personal life, straining relationships and creating distress as she delves deeper into the hospital’s mysteries.

– D. Moral dilemmas: Abigail grapples with the moral dilemma of exposing her mother’s secrets at the cost of potentially harming the hospital and its patients.

– E. Forced decisions they’d never make: Abigail is forced to make a decision that challenges her journalistic ethics, putting her in a position of compromising her principles.

– *Empathy:*

– A. Put them in distress: Reveal Abigail’s internal conflict, torn between her professional duty as a journalist and her personal quest for closure and reconciliation with her mother.

– B. Make them relatable: Showcase Abigail’s determination and vulnerability, highlighting the universal struggle of balancing personal and professional responsibilities.

– C. Universal experiences that are emotional: Explore themes of family bonds, forgiveness, and the emotional toll of uncovering long-buried secrets.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 5: Characters Emotions

“What I learned doing this assignment is…Watching the show, it’s one that if you can make it past the first two episodes… And, with that in mind, the results are that there is only one main character. I thought there were more yet they keep dying off. In that, the emotions have been spoken about during the scenes. Perhaps, I hadn’t caught on from the prior shows. These are written well into the scenes. And, you can think back and see how they were there all the time—growing in manifestation. Very interesting indeed.”

ASSIGNMENT 1: Example Show

Watch the next episode of your Example Show and create an Emotional Profile for two or three main characters in this show.

There is one main character as the rest die off. Her name is Beth.

A. Situational: Hope-She becomes world Champion Chess Player / Fear-She loses to the Russians

B. Motivation: Want-power / Need-Approval by dominating

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion / Public Mask

D. Weaknesses-Refuses to learn more chess tactics, she goes by her instinct and her emotions take over where she can only see what’s in front of her when she loses. It stops her from thinking of various future moves that can happen from her current actions.

E. Triggers-Losing/falling behind in the game

F. Coping Mechanism-Anger/Defensiveness

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ASSIGNMENT 2: Your Show

1. For each of your main characters, brainstorm an Emotional Profile, filling in the following:

My Version:

Character: Emily/Mother

A. Situational: Hope-She can reunite with her daughter / Fear-her daughter will disown her when she finds out her true identity

B. Motivation: Want-Control / Need-Acceptance

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion-Uncertainty / Public Mask-Confidence

D. Weaknesses-Ignorance about the fundraising world

E. Triggers-Seeing children in pain and not getting the care they need.

F. Coping Mechanism-Aggressiveness

Character: Lily/Daughter

A. Situational: Hope Emily will accept her as she is / Fear-Once the truth is revealed, she will be rejected.

B. Motivation: Want to be accepted / Need to be her true self

C. Mask: Base Negative Emotion-weak personality / Public Mask-strength

D. Weaknesses-Ignorant about the hospital and fundraising worlds

E. Triggers-being lied to

F. Coping Mechanism-manipulation

2. AI Version:

Certainly, here are the internal struggles for the main characters in your TV series:

**Emily Montclair**:

A. Situational:

– Hope: Emily hopes for a reunion with her estranged daughter, Abigail.

– Fear: She fears that her past actions will drive Abigail further away.

B. Motivation:

– Want: Emily wants to rekindle the mother-daughter relationship with Abigail.

– Need: She needs to reconcile her guilt over giving up her daughter.

C. Mask:

– Base Negative Emotion: Emily’s base negative emotion is guilt over her past actions.

– Public Mask: She wears a public mask of a confident, philanthropic socialite.

D. Weaknesses:

– Emily’s weakness is her emotional vulnerability regarding her past choices, which can be exploited by others.

E. Triggers:

– Anything related to mother-daughter relationships or her philanthropic work can trigger Emily’s emotional turmoil.

F. Coping Mechanism:

– Emily copes with her guilt and emotional distress by focusing on her charity work, using it as a distraction from her personal pain.

**Lily Hastings**:

A. Situational:

– Hope: Lily hopes to protect the pediatric patients and the “Ghostly Guardians” from harm.

– Fear: She fears the consequences of exposing the supernatural world to the hospital staff.

B. Motivation:

– Want: Lily wants to ensure the well-being of the young patients under her care.

– Need: She needs to reconcile her past trauma and find closure.

C. Mask:

– Base Negative Emotion: Lily’s base negative emotion is survivor’s guilt.

– Public Mask: She presents a strong and confident front as a dedicated pediatric nurse.

D. Weaknesses:

– Lily’s weakness is her guilt, which can make her hesitate when making critical decisions related to the supernatural occurrences.

E. Triggers:

– Anything related to children’s suffering or reminders of her traumatic past can trigger Lily’s survivor’s guilt.

F. Coping Mechanism:

– Lily copes with her survivor’s guilt by channeling it into her dedication to the young patients and her determination to protect the “Ghostly Guardians.”

**Abigail Montclair**:

A. Situational:

– Hope: Abigail hopes to uncover the truth about her past.

– Fear: She fears that her mother’s actions will prove to be morally indefensible.

B. Motivation:

– Want: Abigail wants to expose her mother’s secrets and find closure for herself.

– Need: She needs to come to terms with her abandonment and resentment.

C. Mask:

– Base Negative Emotion: Abigail’s base negative emotion is anger and resentment towards her mother.

– Public Mask: She presents a professional, confident front as an investigative journalist.

D. Weaknesses:

– Abigail’s weakness is her emotional attachment to her mother, which can cloud her judgment.

E. Triggers:

– Anything related to family secrets and mother-daughter relationships can trigger Abigail’s emotional turmoil.

F. Coping Mechanism:

– Abigail copes with her anger and resentment by channeling them into her investigative work, using it as an outlet for her emotions.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 4:

“What I learned doing this assignment is…how AI can keep prior info to speed things up. I don’t have to input/re-input everything. This exercise is fun. Takes time yet it encourages imagination.

ASSIGNMENT 1:

1. Think about your Example Show. Make a list of the places you’ve already seen Character Intrigue in the previous episodes.: Adopted mother’s drinking habits; male character that seemed interested in Beth is gay—has a lover with him in his hotel room; Beth’s addiction/obsession permeates into multiple areas—drugs, chess, drinking, etc.

Character Name: BethRole: Lead/OrphanHidden agendas: To be world chess championCompetition: ChessConspiracies: Doesn’t trust othersSecrets: She wants to dominateDeception: she’s a girl in a boy’s worldWound: Lost Parents—dad left, mom diedSecret Identity: GeniusCharacter Name: AlmaRole: Current Co-lead, adoptive mother to BethHidden agendas: To be seen as glamourous Competition: Wants to outshine other’s that are eliteConspiracies: Doesn’t trust othersSecrets: She wants to be lovedDeception: She puts on AiresWound: Her husband was a bum, she is self-loathingSecret Identity: She is an excellent manager and manages Beth’s affairs

2. Watch the next episode and see how Character Intrigue is being used to create the need to see more episodes.

ASSIGNMENT 2

1. For your Inner Circle characters, fill in any of the Intrigue items that apply.

Character Name: EmilyRole: MotherHidden agendas: Hide her pastCompetition: Her DaughterConspiracies: She’s a Mole for the FBISecrets: She’s in loveDeception: She fights with the one she loves.Wound: She was abandoned as a child by her Pastor—left at a mini-golf arcadeSecret Identity: InformantCharacter Name: LilyRole: DaughterHidden agendas: To expose her mother’s past secretsCompetition: Other gala ladiesConspiracies: She’s a mole for the CIASecrets: She has pictures incriminating Emily as a foreign spyDeception: She has Emily’s actual daughter hidden with a new identityWound: She was switched when she was a child with her nieceSecret Identity: She’s actually Emily’s sister—not daughter

Go to AI and use this prompt to generate the Intrigue items for your main characters:

AI Reply: Intriguing Layers for Main Characters: with bold add…

For each of the [main characters] for this [genre] about this [concept], please brainstorm the [Intriguing Layers] of that character that have the fit this TV series well.

Intriguing Layers = Character Name= Role=

A. Hidden agendas:

B. Competition:

C. Conspiracies:

D. Secrets:

E. Deception:

F. Wound:

G. Secret Identity:

Genre = Dramedy

Concept = In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past.

Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

Main characters = Emily, Lily and Abigail

Intriguing Layers for Main Characters:

**Emily Montclair**:

A. Hidden agendas:

– Emily secretly wants to reunite with her estranged daughter, Abigail, without revealing her true identity, even though she initially presents herself as a philanthropic socialite.

B. Competition:

– Emily competes with other philanthropists and socialites in her circle to maintain her status as the queen of charity galas, which adds tension to her social relationships.

C. Conspiracies:

– Emily gets inadvertently involved in a hospital conspiracy when she discovers strange events related to the “Ghostly Guardians” of pediatric patients.

D. Secrets:

– Emily’s biggest secret is that she gave up Abigail for adoption, a fact she hides from her socialite friends and associates, and which becomes a central plot point.

E. Deception:

– Emily must navigate high-society social events with deception, hiding her true intentions and actions as she delves into the hospital’s mysteries.

F. Wound:

– Emily carries the wound of guilt over giving up her daughter, which drives her philanthropic efforts and fuels her character development.

G. Secret Identity:

– As Emily gets deeper into the hospital’s mysteries, she takes on a secret identity to conduct her own investigations without attracting attention.

**Lily Hastings**:

A. Hidden agendas:

– Lily’s hidden agenda is to protect the “Ghostly Guardians” and the supernatural world of the pediatric ward, keeping it a secret from the adults and medical staff.

B. Competition:

– Lily faces competition from skeptical colleagues who doubt her unique connection with the “Ghostly Guardians” and her involvement in the hospital’s secrets.

C. Conspiracies:

– Lily becomes entangled in the hospital’s supernatural conspiracy when she discovers that not all the “Ghostly Guardians” are benevolent, forcing her to navigate treacherous territory.

D. Secrets:

– Lily’s secret is her ability to communicate with the “Ghostly Guardians,” which she keeps hidden from her coworkers and superiors at the hospital.

E. Deception:

– Lily must deceive her colleagues by concealing her interactions with the supernatural entities, leading to compromising situations.

F. Wound:

– Lily carries the wound of a traumatic childhood experience related to a pediatric patient she failed to save, which fuels her unwavering dedication to her current patients.

G. Secret Identity:

– As Lily delves deeper into the mysteries of the “Ghostly Guardians,” she adopts a secret identity to protect her involvement from the hospital staff.

**Abigail Montclair**:

A. Hidden agendas:

– Abigail’s hidden agenda is to uncover her mother’s past actions while maintaining her journalistic integrity and protecting her personal vendetta.

B. Competition:

– Abigail competes with rival journalists to be the first to break the story of the hospital’s mysteries, creating urgency in her investigation.

C. Conspiracies:

– Abigail suspects a larger conspiracy behind her mother’s actions and uncovers unexpected connections to the hospital’s supernatural occurrences.

D. Secrets:

– Abigail’s secret agenda revolves around her resentment towards her mother and her desire to uncover the truth about her past.

E. Deception:

– Abigail may use deception to infiltrate the hospital and gather information while avoiding detection by both her mother and the hospital staff.

F. Wound:

– Abigail carries the emotional wound of being given up for adoption, driving her determination to uncover her family’s secrets.

G. Secret Identity:

– Abigail might adopt a pseudonym as a journalist to protect her true identity during her investigation, complicating her relationships with her mother and other characters.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 3:

What I learned doing this assignment is: I’m more to the point. AI has interesting detail that’s worth considering.

ASSIGNMENT 1:

Watch the next episode of your Example Show to see any places the lead characters might fit this model.

Tell us the name and Engaging Profile answers for at least one character from your example show.

TV Show (ONE) Character: Alma Wheatley

A. Role in the show: Adopting Mother

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Wanting to be a proper mother. She is excellent at being a manager of Beth.

C. Intrigue: What is secret beneath the surface? She has a longing to be needed

and seen as having an important purpose in life and glamourous.

D. Moral Issue: What moral boundaries are they crossing? Treating Beth as an

adult by sharing her drinking habits and expecting promiscuity.

E. Unpredictable: What will they do next? Her drinking from self-loathing may

hinder Beth’s Chess Competition’s. We wonder if her drinking will get the best of her.

F. Empathetic: Why do we care? We want Beth to win.

Deadline: 24 hours

ASSIGNMENT 2: The process with my show.

My Version

1. Tell us the journey of your show. Will a mother’s philanthropic endeavors reunite her with and ultimately save her daughter.

2. Who are the main characters that will sell your show? Mother and Daughter

3A. Answer these questions for each of those characters.

A. Role in the show: Mother: Healing her past as she tries to reunite with her daughter.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Psychic

C. Intrigue: What is secret beneath the surface? She knows things before they happen.

D. Moral Issue: What moral boundaries are they crossing? She does not want her powers as to her, she is but a human being.

E. Unpredictable: What will they do next? She doesn’t know how to control her thoughts/premonitions.

F. Empathetic: Why do we care? She’s a loving mother that wants to help her patients heal and find her daughter in the process.

3B. Answer these questions for each of those characters.

A. Role in the show: Daughter: Protecting her mother while trying not to expose her mother’s secrets.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Damaged

C. Intrigue: What is secret beneath the surface? She thinks she is going mad.

D. Moral Issue: What moral boundaries are they crossing? She’s afraid to find out if she is psychic like her mother.

E. Unpredictable: What will they do next? She’s frustrated and confused on what paths to take to reunite with her mother.

F. Empathetic: Why do we care? She’s a loving daughter that wants to heal others but needs to heal her inner wounds.

AI Version:

4. Go to AI and use this prompt to generate another version of your characters:

1. Tell us the journey of your show. Will a mother’s philanthropic endeavors reunite her with and ultimately save her daughter.

2. Who are the main characters that will sell your show? Mother and Daughter

3. Answer these questions for each of those characters.

A. Role in the show:

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise:

C. Intrigue: What is secret beneath the surface?

D. Moral Issue: What moral boundaries are they crossing?

E. Unpredictable: What will they do next?

F. Empathetic: Why do we care?

Main Character: Emily Montclair

A. Role in the show:

– Emily Montclair serves as the driving force behind the show. She is the central character and the bridge connecting various storylines, from charity galas to uncovering hospital secrets, and her attempts to reconnect with her estranged daughter.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise:

– Emily’s expertise lies in philanthropy and socialite activities, using her charm and resources to organize charity galas that support the local hospital. Her ability to navigate high society and connect with influential individuals is key to the story’s social dynamics.

C. Intrigue:

– Beneath the surface, Emily hides the secret of having given up her daughter, Abigail, for adoption years ago. This secret haunts her and drives her philanthropic efforts as she yearns to reconnect with her estranged child.

D. Moral Issue:

– Emily faces a moral dilemma as she uncovers the hospital’s secrets. Her involvement in exposing the mysteries may lead her to question her own ethics, particularly if she discovers her own past actions are intertwined with the hospital’s hidden truths.

E. Unpredictable:

– Emily’s actions become increasingly unpredictable as she delves deeper into the hospital’s mysteries and attempts to reconnect with her daughter. She may make impulsive decisions that have both positive and negative consequences.

F. Empathetic:

– Emily’s genuine desire to help the hospital and her inner conflict over her past actions make her a relatable character. Viewers care about her journey to mend her family and make amends for her past mistakes.

Main Character: Abigail Montclair (Emily’s Estranged Daughter)

A. Role in the show:

– Abigail plays a central role as the investigator, uncovering the secrets of her past and her mother’s involvement in the hospital’s mysteries. She serves as a driving force for the mystery elements of the series.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise:

– Abigail’s expertise lies in investigative journalism, making her adept at digging into secrets and uncovering the truth. She uses her skills to infiltrate the hospital and piece together the mysteries surrounding her family and the hospital.

C. Intrigue:

– Abigail’s underlying secret is her deep resentment toward her mother, Emily, for giving her up for adoption. Her quest to uncover the truth becomes intertwined with her personal vendetta, making her motivations complex.

D. Moral Issue:

– Abigail grapples with the moral boundaries of uncovering and revealing secrets that could potentially harm her mother and the hospital. She must decide whether the truth is worth the potential consequences.

E. Unpredictable:

– Abigail’s actions are often unpredictable, driven by her determination to uncover the truth. She may switch between pursuing the truth relentlessly and struggling with conflicting emotions about her mother.

F. Empathetic:

– Abigail’s quest for the truth and her internal struggle between anger and a desire for answers make her a character viewers care about. Her journey to reconcile with her past and her mother adds depth to her character.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

M1 L2 HW Three Circles of Characters

What I learned doing this assignment is: How to specify what you are requesting from AI.

ASSIGNMENT 1:

1–Watch the next episode of your Example Show to see how the characters fit into these three circles and list them:

A. Main Characters Circle: Beth, her adopting mom

B. Connected Circle: The pharmacist

C. Environment Circle: Classmates and Chess Players, dead adopting dad, school admin/teachers

2– ASSIGNMENT 2:

1. Create the three circles of characters for your show.

A. Main Characters Circle:

B. Connected Circle:

C. Environment Circle:

2. Give us a one sentence description of each of the Main Characters.

3. After you create your version, use this prompt with AI to have it create a version:

MY VERSION:

1. Create the three circles of characters for your show.

A. Main Characters Circle: Mother and Daughter

B. Connected Circle: Gossip Loving Friends; bored married men; sons and daughters

C. Environment Circle: charitable people, patents and their parents, hospital staff

2. Give us a one sentence description of each of the Main Characters.

Mother: Philanthropic woman with a mysterious past

Daughter: Stubborn over cautious daughter, protective of her mother, loose lips

AI’s Version:

PROMPT: Please create three groups of characters for my TV Series that is [genre] about [concept] that is set in [sub-world] and are unique to this story.

A. Main Characters: 3 – 5 key characters that the journey is about. Tell us the following: Unique Role: Secret or Intrigue:

B. Connected Characters: These are characters that the main characters interact with during the season. They play a part in the journey in some way and sometimes affect the main character’s actions.

C. Environment Characters: These are background characters that are necessary to fulfill the “standard roles” for your kind of story, but usually don’t do anything significant. List them by their jobs only.

Genre = Dramedy

Concept: In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past.

Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

V A. Main Characters:

1. Emily Montclair

– Unique Role: Emily Montclair is a wealthy socialite with a passion for philanthropy. She is the driving force behind charity galas in the town, using her charm and resources to support the local hospital. However, she harbors a secret desire to reconnect with her estranged daughter, whom she gave up for adoption years ago.

– Secret or Intrigue: Emily’s philanthropic work brings her into the mysterious world of the hospital’s pediatric ward, where she starts to uncover unsettling secrets and supernatural occurrences that have remained hidden for years.

2. Lily Hastings

– Unique Role: Lily is a no-nonsense, dedicated nurse working in the pediatric ward. She’s known for her unwavering commitment to her young patients, often acting as their guardian angel. Lily develops a deep connection with Emily as she helps her navigate the strange occurrences within the hospital.

– Secret or Intrigue: Lily has a unique ability to communicate with the “Ghostly Guardians” of pediatric patients, a skill she keeps hidden from her colleagues and the world at large.

3. Abigail Montclair (Emily’s Estranged Daughter)

– Unique Role: Abigail is a talented investigative journalist who resents her mother, Emily, for giving her up for adoption when she was a baby. She is determined to uncover the truth about her past and her mother’s involvement in the hospital’s mysteries.

– Secret or Intrigue: Abigail secretly infiltrates the hospital to investigate the hospital’s secrets, unaware that she’ll cross paths with her estranged mother in the process.

B. Connected Characters:

4. Dr. Daniel Whitman

– Role: Chief pediatric surgeon at the hospital, Dr. Whitman is initially skeptical of Emily’s involvement but becomes drawn into the hospital’s mysteries. He forms a unique bond with Lily and provides crucial medical insight.

5. Victoria Sinclair

– Role: Emily’s longtime best friend and fellow philanthropist, who gets entangled in the hospital’s secrets. She’s a gossip-loving and influential socialite who often complicates matters.

6. Jacob “Bones” Thompson

– Role: A retired detective with a knack for solving mysteries. Emily hires him to help uncover the truth behind the hospital’s supernatural events, setting him on an unexpected path of discovery.

7. Young Patients and Their Families

– Role: Various children, their parents, and guardians, who interact with Emily and Lily in the pediatric ward. Some of these families have their own connections to the hospital’s secrets, while others are ordinary people caught in the supernatural web.

C. Environment Characters:

1. Hospital Staff (Doctors, Nurses, Orderlies)

2. Gala Organizers and Attendees

3. Local News Reporters

4. Townsfolk and Neighbors

5. Custodial Staff and Maintenance Workers

6. Security Personnel

7. Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients (Supernatural beings who watch over and comfort the young patients in the pediatric ward, invisible to most, but visible to Lily)

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

M1-L1 Homework

SU BWTV AI Alumni

The Queens Gambit Limited Series

What I learned doing this assignment is:

There was much more there to explore even as much as I had a hard time with the child abuse.

From that, make a list of the 5 Star Points for that show.

Big Picture Hooks
Ask this: What is the big hook of this show?

Chess and Drug addiction

Amazing and Intriguing Character
Ask this: What makes these main characters intriguing and interesting?

Beth, her buddy (black girl), Janitor

Empathy / Distress
Ask this: What situations causes us to feel both empathy and distress for these characters?

Alone, lost both of her parents, how to make friends, strange/abusive/fake adults, make all the girls look and act the same—no individuality—no identity—ambition is squashed

Layers / Open Loops
Ask this: What questions are created by this first episode that can only be answered by watching the entire season?

Addiction—how will she overcome it, will she be able to rise above the abuse, will she find her inner strength/voice, she also needs to watch herself so she doesn’t sabotage herself

Inviting Obsession
Ask this: How does this pilot create the need to see every single episode?

Will she move beyond her addiction? Will she be able to play without the hallucinogens? Will she get adopted? By whom? Will she find love in a boy that without narcistic personality? Will she get herself in trouble/pregnant? Will she be able to pursue her genius or will her genius destroy her?

Watch the same first episode A SECOND TIME while looking at your 5 Star Point analysis. This time, your purpose is to see beyond the obvious answers. Assume there is more to learn and discover it!

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

1. Sylvia Krawczyk

2. I’ve written around 20 scripts–all types. I enjoy reading, writing and editing them.

3. I hope to find my AI brainstorming process. It seems wonderful at helping with ideas. I also hope to understand the Binge process as I don’t like most Binge series shows–they bore me. With the ones I do like, it’s the characters I find interesting. Although, most are not worth rewatching as much as a stand alone comedic episodic show. I hope to change that. Last, I think this class will help in writing a book series. I have one I have written–10 volumes, MG. Perhaps this class “binge process” is what I need to bring it together. I am open to write completely outside my comfort zone to learn the strategies taught.

4. I love editing–a lot. I proof read scripts, editorials, copy–for various media. Also, I’m a proud First Class Girl Scout (Senior) Cadet. I am fluent in Swabian–hence, I mix up sentence structure–it’s frustrating. I am a Technical Live Theatre Production Professional–Sound/Audio Specialist–your basic, everyday, over practical nerd. Love doing yard work. Love the outdoors.

5. PS 77

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

I, Sylvia Krawczyk, I agree to the terms of this release form:

As a member of this group, I agree to the following:

1. That I will keep the processes, strategies, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class confidential, and that I will NOT share any of this program either privately, with a group, posting online, writing articles, through video or computer programming, or in any other way that would make those processes, teleconferences, communications, lessons, and models of the class available to anyone who is not a member of this class.

2. That each writer’s work here is copyrighted and that writer is the sole owner of that work. That includes this program which is copyrighted by Hal Croasmun. I acknowledge that submission of an idea to this group constitutes a claim of and the recognition of ownership of that idea.

I will keep the other writer’s ideas and writing confidential and will not share this information with anyone without the express written permission of the writer/owner. I will not market or even discuss this information with anyone outside this group.

3. I also understand that many stories and ideas are similar and/or have common themes and from time to time, two or more people can independently and simultaneously generate the same concept or movie idea.

4. If I have an idea that is the same as or very similar to another group member’s idea, I’ll immediately contact Hal and present proof that I had this idea prior to the beginning of the class. If Hal deems them to be the same idea or close enough to cause harm to either party, he’ll request both parties to present another concept for the class.

5. If you don’t present proof to Hal that you have the same idea as another person, you agree that all ideas presented to this group are the sole ownership of the person who presented them and you will not write or market another group member’s ideas.

6. Finally, I agree not to bring suit against anyone in this group for any reason, unless they use a substantial portion of my copyrighted work in a manner that is public and/or that prevents me from marketing my script by shopping it to production companies, agents, managers, actors, networks, studios or any other entertainment industry organizations or people.

This completes the Group Release Form for the class.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia Krawczyk: Lesson 6: Applying Dialogue Subtext

What I learned doing this assignment is…More ways to add intrigue. I’ll be going over the whole script with these new insights.

Dialogue covers subtext.

Magda picks up a long thin whipping stick and stares at Elsie.

Elsie stares at Magda then, looks away quickly.

MAGDA
The old forest woman lives in the caves below

in the lower forest. She puts children to sleep

and eats poisonous berries, birds and…

Magda gets distracted.

MAGDA (CONT’D)

…butterflies!

She sees a colorful butterfly and swings at it with her stick.

Elsie runs after and pushes Magda.

ELSIE

Stop it!

Dialogue points to subtext.

MAGDA
Better be careful of the old forest

woman.

ELSIE
What old forest woman?

MAGDA
The one that will steal you away.

ELSIE
I’ve already been stolen.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia Krawczyk’s Lesson 5: Applying Action Subtext

What I learned doing this assignment is…

More exercises and experience in adding depth and intrigue.

ELSIE
There’s a bird that needs help! I

saw it but couldn’t reach it!

JUDITH
Elsie, I don’t care about any

birds. You’re a mess! Where are the rest

of my elderberry flowers for tonight’s dinner?

ELSIE

But, Judith…

There’s a tense pause. Judith stares at Elsie.

JUDITH

But, what?

ELSIE

I mean, mother.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia Krawczyk’s Lesson 4 Applying Situation Subtext

What I learned doing this assignment is…I like the definitions and different subtexts listed. It makes me want to brainstorm other ideas to add to each scene in the short.

Write out the Situation Subtext of a scene.

What is the surface and the deeper meaning of the situation?

The surface is there is a kidnapping and the disappearance of a child.

The deeper meaning is the person taking the child is the child’s aunt that is jealous of her own sister. She takes the child to raise her as her own.

OPENING SCENE:

EXT. ROTHENBURG OB DER TAUBER – GERMANY

A dazzling well preserved walled medieval city with cobblestone streets, timber houses and Renaissance and Gothic architectural buildings. Bright floral colors of spring. Bright sun. Active people and small quaint businesses. A typical Germanic modern day touristic city with traffic- reducing measures. Small alley ways give way to pedestrians and outside cafes.

NARRATOR (V.O.)
Once upon a time, about six years

ago, there was a child.

A girl, Elsie (4), short blonde hair, blue eyes, laughs as she skips out of a small toy store with a huge brown teddy bear with a huge pink bow around its neck.

A woman, JUDITH (mid-30s), long brunette hair with brown eyes and a CROOKED NOSE stands at a corner around the shop. She sees the girl, grabs her, picks her up and races off.

The teddy bear rolls on the cobble stones as a woman, the child’s MOMMY (mid-30s), blonde hair and blue eyes races outside the shop.

MOMMY

Elsie!

NARRATOR (V.O.)

And, then, there wasn’t…

EXT. THE HEAVENS – SPRING – PRESENT DAY

FULL MOON in the blue sky filled with white puffs of cotton.

NARRATOR (V.O.)

…or, was there?

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia Krawczyk’s CHARACTER SUBTEXT

L3 Lesson 3– DEFINING CHARACTER SUBTEXT

What I learned doing this assignment is…

This is interesting. I think I will play with this some more to gain more insight and depth. This is my start on this exercise.

Character: Elsie

Character Surface: Daughter, Loving, Positive

Character Subtext: Knows something is different about herself; being polite

How the character subtext might show up in the story:

She knows she’s kidnapped but doesn’t know what to do about it. Her main cover-up is being polite.

Character: Judith

Character Surface: “Mother”; Aunt; Snarky

Character Subtext: Withholding the fact that she’s the kidnapper

How the character subtext might show up in the story:

She holds jealousy and resentment towards her sister and has kidnapped her sister’s daughter to raise as her own. Her main cover-up is being sarcastic and snarky.

Character: Magda

Character Surface: Daughter; Mean

Character Subtext: Jealous of Elsie=insecurity; Controlling

How the character subtext might show up in the story:

She knows there is something odd about herself and Elsie’s relationship but doesn’t know what it is. She is mean because she can’t control the situation.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia Krawczyk’s Environment Subtext

L2 Lesson 2 – Applying Environment Subtext

What I learned doing this assignment is…

I hadn’t thought of the depth of the caves. Doing this exercise added more depth and will as a whole add more to the whole story.

Two main Subtext Environments for my story:

1-Caves:

Overview: The areas on Rosenstein where Frau Holle is met and magic is revealed, explained and trained to Elsie.

Ways the environment delivers the deeper meaning of your story: These are the places Elsie would play in as a child with Frau Holle. Elsie was too young to remember. But she senses this is a “happy place” for her.

2-Wirtschaft am Rosenstein:

Overview: The place and area around it where the story is revealed. It is the family owned, designed and run restaurant that has been in the family for generations.

Ways the environment delivers the deeper meaning of your story: It is the place where Elsie’s parents are met and the kidnapping aunt is exposed. It shows the family history, style, and it has the large wooden carved bear with the red bow to symbolize the long-lost daughter, Elsie. Elsie was kidnapped with her favorite teddy-bear with a red bow.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Sylvia Krawczyk’s Lesson 1: Applying Plot Subtext

What I learned doing this assignment is…This gives a great format to get to the gist of the story. It’s a way to play with different themes.

1. Brainstorm the surface and subtext beneath the surface on a plot level.

Version 1:

Elsie is kidnapped, not knowing that it’s her aunt that kidnapped her.

The aunt raises Elsie as her own, but what is really going on is the aunt is jealous of her own sister.

Version 2:

Setup: What we think the story is about: A kidnapping

Payoff: Major subtext twist that makes this story great! It’s about sibling rivalry where Elsie has magic powers and uses them against her aunt.

Version 3:

Surface Plot: Kidnapping.

Deeper Meaning Plot: Sibling Rivalry.

2. Write out the Plot Subtext of your story.

In the first scene, Elsie is kidnapped.

After that, years later, Elsie is at the family Wirtschaft on a mountain where she finds out she inherited magical powers.

In the end, Elsie finds her true mom and confronts the sibling rivalry where her aunt kidnapped Elsie out of jealousy.

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Can’t reply again so here it is…

BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 4: Write Act 3 First Draft!

Sylvia’s Finished Act 3

What I learned doing this assignment is…I’m not certain if perhaps my outline was too short. I write out what it says using the HSW skills and things o very fast—which I am astonished. But they are not the 10 pages suggested. I move forward to see what happens next…

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Can not post so, I’m putting this here:

BWTV-AI Module 4 – Lesson 3: Write First Draft of Act 2!

Sylvia Finished Act 2

What I learned doing this assignment is…it doesn’t take long at all to extend the act. I do catch myself adding in more and then stop and look back at the outline parts. I work to strengthen it as I extend the page. I am adding more brief dialogue than expected. But it’s making the Outline HW stronger. Each act gets easier and easier as I use the speed writing rules. I am excited to push through until I have time to reread everything to see how/if it makes sense.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 12: Outline With Intrigue

Sylvia’s Outline With Intrigue

What I learned doing this assignment is…the exercises keep bringing in more depth. I am amazed at how much I am learning. It’s also interesting to be a part of the story taking on a morphing life of it’s own.

Beat Sheet

Show Concept: Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with pediatric hospital healing and disappearing paranormal mysteries.

Logline: In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital paranormal secrets and threatens to unveil the mysteries of Pediatric Patients Ghostly Guardians angry attitudes.

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Mod 3 – Lesson 11: Outline Requirements

Sylvia’s Scene Requirements

What I learned doing this assignment is…each step reveals weaknesses that I get to bring together and strengthen. This is an exciting process. It takes time as it is new but I know I can master it through time. The story keeps taking a life of its own. The process is fascinating.

Show Concept: Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with pediatric hospital healing and disappearing paranormal mysteries.

Logline: In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital paranormal secrets and threatens to unveil the mysteries of Pediatric Patients Ghostly Guardians angry attitudes.

TEASER

INT. Hotel Ball Room — Evening

At an elaborate fundraiser, Emily sees a child thought to be dead walk across the dance floor. Emily confronts Lily who denies seeing anything. Emily gets cryptic messages on her phone. No one else notices the child. The child vanishes in thin air.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Emily runs an elaborate pediatric fundraiser gala. All the bigshots are present. Much laughter and smiles with dancing and music from a big band.

· Challenging Situation: Emily sees a child thought to be dead appear walking along the dance floor.

· Conflict: After a disagreement with Lily Hastings, Emily gets cryptic messages on her phone.

· Action: The investors are too drunk and happy to think much of it.

· Finish: The child vanishes in thin air.

ACT 1

INT. Hotel Ball Room – Cont.

Emily walks around greeting the guests and speaks with Abigail. The two over hear whispered rumors about strange occurrences at the hospital.

Dr. Whitman is teased and Lily defends him and spills secrets that nobody believes as they are all drunk. Emily pulls Lily away and questions her about the cryptic messages on her phone.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Emily walks around greeting the guests.

· Challenging Situation: Emily and Abigail overhear whispered rumors about strange occurrences in the hospital.

· Conflict: Dr. Daniel Whitman displays visible discomfort around certain guests. He is referred to as too old and “losing it” by his colleagues.

As Lily Hastings sticks up for him and speaks about a covert conversation with a terminally ill patient’s parents, alludes to a “special treatment” beyond medical science, teasing her connection to the supernatural.

· Action: Emily pulls Lily away mid-sentence saying she needs assistance.

· Finish: Lily speaks of sending Emily cryptic phone texts and passes out as others rush to help catch her.

INT. Hospital Office — Day

Emily explores Dr. Whitman’s office. She hears a noise of the door opening and hides under the desk. The intern places an envelope on the desk and leaves. Emily sees her name scratched off and pauses before deciding to open it. It reveals photos of paranormal activity.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Emily explores.

· Action: Emily hides under the desk when a staff member enters the office and drops a folder on top of the desk and leaves.

· Conflict: Emily sees her name crossed off and Dr. Whitman written on it.

· Challenging Situation: Emily pauses before opening it.

· Finish: Emily’s investigation unveils photo’s detailing the hospital’s century-long history with the paranormal.

INT. Hospital Room — Day

Emily walks in on Lily and confronts her with questions about the pediatric ward. Lily tries to calm Emily and reassure her everything’s okay. Emily grabs Lily by the arms and demands she prove what she knows.

INT. Hospital — Cont.

Lily leads Emily down the hallway.

INT. Hidden Room – Cont.

Lily takes Emily into a hidden room. Emily reviews its contents that unveil a journal detailing the hospital’s century-long history with the paranormal, explicitly tying Emily’s family to its legacy.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Emily walks in on Lily and confronts her with questions about the pediatric ward.

· Challenging Situation: Lily tries to calm Emily and reassure her everything’s okay.

· Conflict: Emily grabs Lily by the arms and demands she prove what she knows.

· Action: Exasperated, Lily takes Emily into a hidden room.

· Finish: Emily reviews its contents that unveil a journal detailing the hospital’s century-long history with the paranormal, explicitly tying Emily’s family to its legacy.

ACT 2

INT. Pediatric Ward — Next Day

Abigail walks around to ask questions for the local newspaper. Abigail witnesses Lily communicating with an apparition. She also sees Dr. Whitman is seen destroying medical records in his office.

INT. Child’s Room – Cont.

Emily and Lily rush to a code blue with Abigail following behind. Emily and Lily are forced to cooperate with Abigail when a patient’s life is saved through unexplainable means, drawing Emily and Lily irrevocably into the paranormal world.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Abigail enters to ask questions for the local newspaper.

· Challenging Situation: Abigail witnesses Lily communicating with an apparition.

· Conflict: Dr. Whitman is seen destroying medical records in his office.

· Action: Emily and Lily rush to a code blue.

· Finish: Emily and Lily are forced to cooperate with Abigail when a patient’s life is saved through unexplainable means, drawing Emily and Lily irrevocably into the paranormal world.

ACT 3

INT. Pediatric Ward – Next Morning

Hospital staff begin to act aloof, with some showing uncanny knowledge of events they shouldn’t know about.

INT. Office – Day

Abigail discovers a locked filing cabinet and breaks it open. It’s filled with records of paranormal healing sessions, suggesting a long-concealed history of supernatural involvement. She hears noises and rushes out of the office. Emily and Dr. Whitman brush by and enter the office.

Dr. Whitman confronts Emily’s philanthropic work as revealed as a facade for her true mission: to uncover the truth about the hospital’s supernatural occurrences.

Emily and Dr. Whitman share a charged conversation about “legacy” and “responsibility.”

INT. Child’s Room – Cont.

Code Blue. Emily, in a daring move to save a child, channels a ghostly entity, fully embracing the paranormal for the first time and revealing her abilities to a shocked Dr. Whitman, Abigail, Lily and Emily herself.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Hospital staff begin to act aloof, with some showing uncanny knowledge of events they shouldn’t know about.

· Action: Abigail discovers a locked filing cabinet and breaks it open. It’s filled with records of paranormal healing sessions, suggesting a long-concealed history of supernatural involvement.

· Challenging Situation: Dr. Whitman confronts Emily’s philanthropic work as revealed as a facade for her true mission: to uncover the truth about the hospital’s supernatural occurrences.

· Conflict: Emily and Dr. Whitman share a charged conversation about “legacy” and “responsibility.”

· Finish: Emily, in a daring move to save a child, channels a ghostly entity, fully embracing the paranormal for the first time and revealing her abilities to a shocked Dr. Whitman, Abigail, Lily and Emily herself.

ACT 4

INT. Hospital – Next Day

Hospital staff read Abigail’s published article on the hospital, igniting public scandal towards the Hospital.

INT. Hospital Room – Cont.

Abigail walks by and sees again, Lily’s supernatural abilities exposed as she saves a life, drawing Abigail’s attention.

INT. Dr. Whitman’s Office – Day

Having secret society emblems and discussing their plans to harness the paranormal for their gain, Lily and Dr. Whitman reveal their dual allegiances.

INT. Hospital Nurses Charge Station – Cont.

Abigail states she will publish a more detailed article on the hospital’s hidden paranormal activities and the rumors of a secret wing/room.

Emily pulls Abigail aside and calmly confronts Abigail revealing Abigail is Emily’s long lost daughter and she too can be implicated.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: Abigail publishes an article on the hospital, igniting public scandal towards the Hospital.

· Conflict: Lily’s supernatural abilities are exposed as she saves a life, drawing Abigail’s attention, risking the exposure of the hospital’s secrets.

· Challenging Situation: Having secret society emblems and discussing their plans to harness the paranormal for their gain, Lily and Dr. Whitman reveal their dual allegiances.

· Action: Abigail threatens to publish a more detailed article on the hospital’s activity and the rumored hidden wing/room

· Finish: The information revealed forces Emily to confront Abigail revealing Abigail is Emily’s long lost daughter and she too can be implicated.

ACT 5

INT. Hospital – Next Day

The Doctors read and speak of a leak of published documents that show the existence of the paranormal activities and a secret society’s involvement. Emily’s deep personal family connection to the hospital’s paranormal history is fully disclosed, showing her as a descendant of the hospital’s founders, who were protectors of its supernatural secrets. Emily denies.

INT. Hospital – Cont.

Characters face personal crises that challenge their beliefs: Emily must choose between her family’s legacy and the safety of her secret, Lily between her humanity and her supernatural duties, and Dr. Whitman between his medical oath and the secret society.

INT. Executive Board Room – Late Afternoon

A conspiracy is presented as the full scope of a secret society’s plans revealed, aiming to manipulate paranormal forces to control life and death, presenting a dire threat to all. Fingers are pointed. Stories denied. The Hospital Executives have the authorities escort Emily out of the hospital.

EXT. Hospital Side Entrance – Cont.

As Emily is escorted out of the hospital, she summons a deity that calms a child that is being rushed into the Emergency entrance full of blood.

PASS 1: Scene Requirements:

· Start: The newest article triggered a whistleblower within the hospital staff, leading to a leak of published documents that show the existence of the paranormal activities and a secret society’s involvement.

· Challenging Situation: Emily’s deep personal family connection to the hospital’s paranormal history is fully disclosed, showing her as a descendant of the hospital’s founders, who were protectors of its supernatural secrets. Emily denies.

· Conflict: Characters face personal crises that challenge their beliefs: Emily must choose between her family’s legacy and the safety of her secret, Lily between her humanity and her supernatural duties, and Dr. Whitman between his medical oath and the secret society.

· Conflict: A conspiracy is presented as the full scope of a secret society’s plans revealed, aiming to manipulate paranormal forces to control life and death, presenting a dire threat to all. Fingers are pointed. Stories denied.

· Action: The Hospital Executives have the authorities escort Emily out of the hospital.

· Finish: As Emily is escorted out of the hospital, she summons a deity that calms a child.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 10: Create a Beat Sheet

Sylvia’s Beat Sheet

What I learned doing this assignment is…this gave me a chance to zone in on the gist of everything I have been putting together. I tried not to put in extra detail as that is forthcoming. It’s interesting how the show is morphing itself.

ASSIGNMENT:

Show Concept: Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with pediatric hospital healing and disappearing paranormal mysteries.

Logline: In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital paranormal secrets and threatens to unveil the mysteries of Pediatric Patients Ghostly Guardians angry attitudes.

Inciting Incident: During the gala, Emily sees a child thought to be dead appear walking along the dance floor. The investors are too drunk and happy to think much of it. The child vanishes.

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[Sylvia Krawczyk]

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 7: Mysteries and Open Loops

Sylvia’s Open Loops and Mysteries

What I learned doing this assignment is confusion again until I rewatched the video and corrected the prompt. This helped. Then, I played with the AI prompts. Things did appear more interesting but needs much more “shock” value for lack of a better word. I have rewritten the Outline yet, some things need to be put back, I think. At the moment the tension and mystery seems to have lost steam. Not sure what caused this. Much more information seems to have muddled things. I am letting go and seeing how this all pans out with the new improvements. Very curious.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 6: Stacking Intrigue

Sylvia Stacks Intrigue

What I learned doing this assignment is fun. Wow! This exercise was truly amazing. I did have to watch the video a few more times to understand the assignment—it’s missing Concept. Yet, once I fix it and understood it, it was fun especially with my AI assistant. I even added comedic elements to push and anti. More re-writing in store.

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BWTV-AI Mod 3 – Lesson 5: Layers and Reveals

Sylvia’s Layers and Reveals

What I learned doing this assignment is I had already added in layers. This added more layers and more depth. I had fun with this. I’ll rewrite the 5 act structure as I now have much more information to add. Also, Chat didn’t put a surface/cover-up layer. I did it a couple times—it used the Surface Layer as more of a “label” for the layer/reveal. Rather odd.

Tell us which Layers, Cover Ups, and Reveals you’ve added to the outline: Secret identities, dilemma’s, blackmail, intervention, Hidden plans, deception, past wounds, etc.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

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BWTV-AI Module 3 – Lesson 2: Pilot As Incredible Inciting Incident!

Sylvia’s Amazing Inciting Incident

What I learned doing this assignment is the power of this type of pilot.

1. The “Inciting Incident” of your series that this pilot needs to deliver powerfully:

Emily, a wealthy socialite, organizes glamourous charity galas for a pediatric hospital, but her life takes a strange turn when she discovers children healing overnight with ghostly guardians in the pediatric ward. As these guardians turn lethal when upset, a secret society links Emily with the ghosts. The Hospital Board bans Emily from entering the pediatric ward fearing she is a part of murdering the disappearing children.

2. The main beats of that Inciting Incident:

· Intriguing Concept: Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with hospital paranormal healing and disappearing mysteries.

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M2 L4: Generating Episode Ideas HW POST

Sylvia’s Episode List Rough Draft (Charity Gala Mysteries)

What I learned doing this assignment is…the more I answer these questions, the more details are revealed within me. AI is fun in helping sus out various ideas.

1. Beginning……………………………………………………………………….Season End/Cliffhanger

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HW BWTV-AI Module 2 – Lesson 3: Easy Way to Five Seasons

Sylvia’s Five Seasons

What I learned doing this assignment is…The depth that these exercises create is amazing.

The arc of the entire journey from Season One to Five.

SEASON 1 START: Emily is a wealthy socialite that raises money for a pediatric hospital when she stumbles upon secret tests being taken on pediatric patients.

SEASON 5 END: Malevolent entities are connected to specific children who underwent experiments and these entities seek resolution for the injustices done to them that Emily must overcome to save the hospital staff administration.

**Season 1: “Beneath the Glittering Gowns”**

– Beginning: Emily Montclair, the socialite, dives into the world of charity galas, but her life takes a turn when she stumbles upon unusual occurrences at the hospital’s pediatric ward during a gala event.

– Stair Steps:

1. **Bigger mystery:** The pediatric ward’s supernatural activities escalate, leaving Lily and Emily questioning the true nature of the ghostly guardians.

2. **Bigger conflict:** Gossip-loving friends threaten to expose Emily’s involvement with the hospital mysteries, creating tension in her social circle.

3. **Bigger opponent:** A mysterious figure emerges as a potential adversary, manipulating both the charity galas and the hospital secrets.

– Ending: Emily and Lily decide to delve deeper into the hospital’s mysteries, setting the stage for a more complex and intertwined journey.

**Season 2: “Hearts Unveiled”**

– Beginning: Emily’s estranged daughter, Abigail, arrives to investigate her mother’s sudden interest in the hospital. She is skeptical but intrigued.

– Stair Steps:

1. **Major layer exposed:** Abigail uncovers a hidden layer of family secrets connected to the hospital, leading to emotional confrontations with Emily.

2. **Exploring more dangerous ground:** The hospital mysteries become riskier, putting the characters in perilous situations that challenge their bonds.

3. **Bigger arena for the fight:** The conflict expands beyond the hospital, involving legal and ethical dilemmas tied to Emily’s philanthropic efforts.

– Ending: Abigail, despite her initial resistance, becomes an integral part of the investigation, forming an uneasy alliance with Emily and Lily.

**Season 3: “Whispers of the Past”**

– Beginning: A mysterious artifact is discovered at a charity gala, linking Emily’s past to the hospital’s secrets, and the trio embarks on a journey to unravel the truth.

– Stair Steps:

1. **Bigger mystery:** The artifact unveils a deeper layer of historical intrigue, connecting the hospital to a forgotten chapter in Emily’s life.

2. **Bigger conflict:** The trio faces opposition from a powerful organization determined to keep the past buried, posing a threat to their investigation.

3. **Bigger opponent:** A charismatic figure emerges as a formidable adversary, with ties to both Emily’s past and the hospital’s mysteries.

– Ending: The trio’s discoveries lead to a shocking revelation that changes the dynamics of their investigation and puts them on a collision course with the powerful organization.

**Season 4: “Shadows of Betrayal”**

– Beginning: The trio’s pursuit of the truth intensifies, but trust issues surface among them, creating rifts that threaten to unravel their collective effort.

– Stair Steps:

1. **Major layer exposed:** Betrayals from unexpected sources come to light, forcing the characters to question their alliances and motives.

2. **Exploring more dangerous ground:** The investigation takes a dark turn, uncovering a conspiracy that not only endangers the trio but also the entire hospital.

– Ending: The trio, despite the betrayals, resolves to continue their quest, setting the stage for a final confrontation with the true mastermind behind the hospital mysteries.

**Season 5: “Reckoning of the Heart”**

– Beginning: The trio faces their most formidable challenge as they race against time to expose the truth, reconcile their differences, and confront the ultimate adversary.

– Stair Steps:

1. **Bigger mystery:** The true nature of the hospital’s supernatural guardians is revealed, tying their existence to a heartfelt mission that transcends the boundaries of life and death.

2. **Bigger conflict:** The final showdown pits the trio against the organization, testing the limits of their resolve and forcing them to make sacrifices for the greater good.

3. **Bigger opponent:** The mastermind behind the hospital mysteries is unmasked, leading to a high-stakes confrontation that will determine the fate of the hospital and Emily’s family.

– Ending: The mysteries are unraveled, the hospital is cleansed of its dark secrets, and the characters emerge transformed, their bonds stronger than ever. The series concludes with a mix of resolution and open-ended possibilities for the characters’ futures.

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List of 5 Seasons into Season Descriptions

**Season 1: “Beneath the Glittering Gowns”**

– **A. High Concept or major hook of the season:** Socialite Emily Montclair stumbles upon supernatural occurrences at hospital galas, intertwining charity events with mysterious pediatric ward happenings.

– **B. Big Picture Season Arc/Journey:** Emily’s glamorous world collides with the haunting mysteries of the pediatric ward, creating a complex web of secrets and relationships.

– **C. Main Conflict:** Balancing the socialite life with uncovering the truth behind the supernatural activities in the pediatric ward while dealing with potential exposure from gossip-loving friends.

– **D. Main Mystery/Layers:** The existence and purpose of the ghostly guardians in the pediatric ward, as well as the connections between the charity events and the hospital’s secrets.

– **E. Cliffhanger:** The emergence of a mysterious figure with a vested interest in both the charity galas and the hospital mysteries, leaving Emily and Lily on the brink of a larger conspiracy.

**Season 2: “Hearts Unveiled”**

– **A. High Concept or major hook of the season:** Emily’s estranged daughter, Abigail, investigates her mother’s sudden involvement in hospital affairs, uncovering family secrets and a deeper connection to the supernatural mysteries.

– **B. Big Picture Season Arc/Journey:** Abigail’s skepticism transforms into collaboration with Emily and Lily as they delve into intertwined family and hospital mysteries.

– **C. Main Conflict:** Abigail’s resistance to her mother’s world and the trio navigating emotional confrontations while dealing with escalating dangers in the hospital mysteries.

– **D. Main Mystery/Layers:** Unraveling hidden layers of family secrets connected to the hospital and exploring riskier aspects of the supernatural occurrences.

– **E. Cliffhanger:** Abigail becomes an integral part of the investigation, forging an uneasy alliance with Emily and Lily, setting the stage for a deeper exploration of the mysteries.

**Season 3: “Whispers of the Past”**

– **A. High Concept or major hook of the season:** A mysterious artifact at a gala links Emily’s past to the hospital’s secrets, leading to a journey uncovering forgotten chapters and historical intrigue.

– **B. Big Picture Season Arc/Journey:** The trio’s investigation expands beyond the present, revealing a deeper connection between Emily’s past, the hospital, and a powerful organization.

– **C. Main Conflict:** Facing opposition from a formidable organization determined to keep the past buried, the trio navigates legal and ethical dilemmas while dealing with heightened danger.

– **D. Main Mystery/Layers:** The artifact unveils a deeper layer of historical intrigue, connecting Emily’s past to the hospital and exposing a powerful organization’s involvement.

– **E. Cliffhanger:** The trio’s discoveries lead to a shocking revelation, changing the dynamics of their investigation and setting them on a collision course with the powerful organization.

**Season 4: “Shadows of Betrayal”**

– **A. High Concept or major hook of the season:** Trust issues surface among the trio as they pursue the truth, unveiling betrayals from unexpected sources and putting their collective effort at risk.

– **B. Big Picture Season Arc/Journey:** The trio faces internal conflicts and external threats as they navigate dark turns in their pursuit of the conspiracy behind the hospital mysteries.

– **C. Main Conflict:** Betrayals strain the trio’s alliances, forcing them to question motives and navigate a conspiracy that endangers the hospital and themselves.

– **D. Main Mystery/Layers:** Unveiling betrayals from unexpected sources and exploring a conspiracy that threatens not only the trio but the entire hospital.

– **E. Cliffhanger:** Despite betrayals, the trio resolves to continue their quest, setting the stage for a final confrontation with the true mastermind behind the hospital mysteries.

**Season 5: “Reckoning of the Heart”**

– **A. High Concept or major hook of the season:** The trio faces their most formidable challenge, racing against time to expose the truth, reconcile their differences, and confront the ultimate adversary.

– **B. Big Picture Season Arc/Journey:** The final showdown pits the trio against a powerful organization, testing their resolve and leading to sacrifices for the greater good.

– **C. Main Conflict:** The ultimate confrontation with the mastermind behind the hospital mysteries, involving a high-stakes battle for justice and the future of the hospital.

– **D. Main Mystery/Layers:** The true nature of the hospital’s supernatural guardians is revealed, tying their existence to a heartfelt mission that transcends life and death.

– **E. Cliffhanger:** The mysteries are unraveled, the hospital is cleansed of its dark secrets, and the characters emerge transformed, leaving the series with a mix of resolution and open-ended possibilities for their futures.

**5 SEASON SUMMARY**

**Season 1: “Beneath the Glittering Gowns”**

Wealthy socialite Emily Montclair stumbles upon supernatural occurrences at hospital galas. As she delves into the mysteries of the pediatric ward, a mysterious figure emerges, hinting at a larger conspiracy that threatens both charity events and hospital secrets. The cliffhanger: A shadowy adversary reveals their influence.

**Season 2: “Hearts Unveiled”**

Emily’s estranged daughter, Abigail, investigates her mother’s mysterious involvement in hospital affairs. Family secrets intertwine with supernatural mysteries as Abigail transforms skepticism into collaboration. The cliffhanger: Abigail forges an uneasy alliance with Emily and Lily, setting the stage for deeper exploration of the mysteries.

**Season 3: “Whispers of the Past”**

A mysterious artifact links Emily’s past to hospital secrets, revealing forgotten chapters and historical intrigue. The trio faces opposition from a powerful organization determined to bury the truth. The cliffhanger: A shocking revelation changes the dynamics of their investigation, setting them on a collision course with the organization.

**Season 4: “Shadows of Betrayal”**

Trust issues surface among the trio as they pursue the truth, unveiling betrayals and navigating a conspiracy endangering the hospital. Internal conflicts and external threats strain alliances. The cliffhanger: Despite betrayals, the trio resolves to continue their quest, setting the stage for a final confrontation with the true mastermind.

**Season 5: “Reckoning of the Heart”**

The trio faces their most formidable challenge, racing against time to expose the truth and confront the ultimate adversary. A high-stakes battle for justice unfolds, involving sacrifices for the greater good. The cliffhanger: The mysteries are unraveled, the hospital is cleansed, and the characters emerge transformed, leaving the series with open-ended possibilities for their futures.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 6: Build Your Character Relationship Map

Sylvia’s “Show Relationship Map”

What I learned doing this assignment is…how temperamental AI is. ChatGPT has been crashing since yesterday so, I used Bard. It’s harder to copy and paste from.

The assignment itself is intriguing. I see much more in the “why” I enjoy the characters. The depth explained is interesting to see how I can transfer the ideas into my own writing.

Assignment #1:

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Assignment #2: AI

M1 L6 AI in Bard Prompt (ChatGPT has crashed 11-8-23)

Create a TABLE showing the relationship between these four [Characters] for a Serial TV series that is [Format / Genre] about [Concept].

Relationship means how these two characters relate or interact or feel about each other within the categories provided.

Please tell us the [Main Character] experience of the other characters in these areas – Common Ground, Relationship Conflict, Relationship History, Relationship Subtext, and Relationship Arc.

Title it “Character Relationships for [Main Character]”. This will compare the Main Character to each of the other characters. Across the top of the table, list the names of [Main Character] in the far left hand box, then [Character 2], [Character 3], [Character 4]. In the left hand column, under the Main Character’s name, present a row for each of these categories — Common Ground, Relationship Conflict, Relationship History, Relationship Subtext, and Relationship Arc. Where each column and row intersect, fill in that part of the relationship between the Main Character and that column’s character.

Format / Genre = Dramady

Concept = In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past.

Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

Main Character = Emily Montclair

– Unique Role: Emily Montclair is a wealthy socialite with a passion for philanthropy. She is the driving force behind charity galas in the town, using her charm and resources to support the local hospital. However, she harbors a secret desire to reconnect with her estranged daughter, whom she gave up for adoption years ago.

– Secret or Intrigue: Emily’s philanthropic work brings her into the mysterious world of the hospital’s pediatric ward, where she starts to uncover unsettling secrets and supernatural occurrences that have remained hidden for years.

Character 2 = Abigail Montclair (Emily’s Estranged Daughter)

– Unique Role: Abigail is a talented investigative journalist who resents her mother, Emily, for giving her up for adoption when she was a baby. She is determined to uncover the truth about her past and her mother’s involvement in the hospital’s mysteries.

– Secret or Intrigue: Abigail secretly infiltrates the hospital to investigate the hospital’s secrets, unaware that she’ll cross paths with her estranged mother in the process.

Character 3 = Unique Role: Lily is a no-nonsense, dedicated nurse working in the pediatric ward. She’s known for her unwavering commitment to her young patients, often acting as their guardian angel. Lily develops a deep connection with Emily as she helps her navigate the strange occurrences within the hospital.

– Secret or Intrigue: Lily has a unique ability to communicate with the “Ghostly Guardians” of pediatric patients, a skill she keeps hidden from her colleagues and the world at large.

Character 4 = Abigail Montclair (Emily’s Estranged Daughter)

– Unique Role: Abigail is a talented investigative journalist who resents her mother, Emily, for giving her up for adoption when she was a baby. She is determined to uncover the truth about her past and her mother’s involvement in the hospital’s mysteries.

– Secret or Intrigue: Abigail secretly infiltrates the hospital to investigate the hospital’s secrets, unaware that she’ll cross paths with her estranged mother in the process.

ANSWERS from Bard:

Tables not transferring…

Anyone know how to upload a PDF from BARD?

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 -Lesson 11: Elevating Character Profiles Sylvia’s Character Profiles

Format/Genre = Dramedy

Concept = Charity galas and romantic mishaps intertwine with hospital mysteries.

Sub-World= Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

Character Profile: Emily Montclair

A. Role: Wealthy socialite, central character bridging galas, hospital secrets, and daughter’s reconnection.

B. Purpose/Expertise: Philanthropy, socialite charm, and resourceful connections drive Emily’s key role in organizing charity galas supporting the local hospital.

C. Intrigue: Discovers unsettling hospital secrets, delves into the world of “Ghostly Guardians” in the pediatric ward.

D. Moral Issue: Uncovering hospital secrets forces Emily to confront moral dilemmas linked to her own past.

E. Unpredictable: Her actions are unpredictable, driven by her pursuit of hospital mysteries and reconnection with her daughter.

F. Empathetic: Desire to help and inner conflict make Emily a relatable character on a journey to mend family ties.

G. Hidden Agenda: Secretly reuniting with estranged daughter, Abigail, without revealing her true identity.

H. Competition: Silent rivalry with other philanthropists for recognition and influence in the charity gala scene.

I. Conspiracies: Inadvertently entangled in a hospital conspiracy involving the mysterious “Ghostly Guardians.”

J. Secrets: Concealing the truth about giving up Abigail for adoption, creating tension as her daughter investigates.

K. Deception: Navigates high-society and hospital scenes with deception to hide true intentions.

L. Wound: Guilt over giving up her daughter fuels philanthropy and becomes a central element in her character development.

M. Secret Identity: Assumes a secret identity to conduct investigations into hospital mysteries discreetly.

N. Situational: Hopes for a reunion with daughter, fears rejection upon revealing true identity.

O. Motivation: Wants to rekindle the mother-daughter relationship, needs reconciliation for past guilt.

P. Mask: Base emotion of guilt, public mask of confidence as a philanthropic socialite.

Q. Weaknesses: Emotional vulnerability regarding past choices can be exploited.

R. Triggers: Emotional turmoil triggered by mother-daughter relationships or philanthropic work.

S. Coping Mechanism: Uses charity work as a distraction to cope with guilt and emotional distress.

Character Profile: Lily Hastings

A. Role in the show: She bridges the world of charity galas and a pediatric ward’s supernatural mysteries.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Communicates with “Ghostly Guardians,” offering emotional support to living and supernatural entities.

C. Intrigue: Carries survivor’s guilt, shaping her unwavering dedication to patients and supernatural balance.

D. Moral Issue: Balances protecting “Ghostly Guardians” with potential harm to living pediatric patients, pushing moral boundaries.

E. Unpredictable: Driven by empathy, Lily takes unconventional steps to connect the living and supernatural worlds.

F. Empathetic: Lily’s struggles, dedication, and challenge navigating the supernatural make her a relatable, emotionally compelling figure.

G. Hidden Agendas: Protects “Ghostly Guardians” secretly, navigating skepticism and hospital secrets.

H. Competition: Faces skepticism from colleagues, questioning her connection and involvement in hospital secrets.

I. Conspiracies: Discovers not all “Ghostly Guardians” are benevolent, navigating a treacherous supernatural conspiracy.

J. Secrets: Conceals ability to communicate with “Ghostly Guardians” from colleagues and superiors.

K. Deception: Deceives colleagues to conceal supernatural interactions, leading to compromising situations.

L. Wound: Lily’s unwavering dedication stems from traumatic childhood failure to save a patient.

M. Secret Identity: Adopts a secret identity to delve into “Ghostly Guardians” mysteries, shielding involvement from hospital staff.

N. Situational: Hope: Protects patients and “Ghostly Guardians.” Fear: Ghost exposure causing panic.

O. Motivation: Want: Ensure patients’ well-being. Need: Reconcile past trauma.

P. Mask: Negative Emotion: Survivor’s guilt. Public Mask: Strong, confident pediatric nurse.

Q. Weaknesses: Cares too much, neglects own health.

R. Triggers: Children suffering and survivor’s guilt reminders.

S. Coping Mechanism: Workaholic dedication to children.

Character Profile: Abigail Montclair: Investigative journalist estranged from her mother.

A. Role: Central Investigator. Uncovers family and hospital mysteries.

B. Unique Purpose / Expertise: Investigative Expert. Her journalism skills reveal hidden truths.

C. Intrigue: Resentful Motivations. Abigail’s quest tied to deep mother-daughter resentment.

D. Moral Issue: Dilemma. Balancing truth-seeking with potential harm dilemmas.

E. Unpredictable Actions: Driven by determination, emotions lead to unpredictability.

F. Empathetic Complexity: Viewers sympathize with Abigail’s quest for answers.

G. Hidden Agenda: Uncovering mother’s past, preserving journalistic integrity.

H. Competitive Edge: Rivalry with journalists adds urgency to her investigation.

I. Conspiracy Unveiling: Abigail links her mother to hospital’s supernatural events.

J. Secrets Unearthed: Abigail’s agenda stems from resentment and family truth.

K. Deceptive Tactics: Infiltrating the hospital, she navigates secrecy and discovery.

L. Emotional Wound: Abigail’s past trauma fuels her quest for familial truth.

M. Pseudonymous Identity: Journalistic secrecy complicates relationships, especially with her mother.

N. Hope and Fear: Hopes for acceptance, fears rejection once truths emerge.

O. Motivational Conflict: Seeks acceptance while embracing her true self.

P. Masked Emotions: Conceals vulnerability with a public facade of strength.

Q. Weakness: Unfamiliarity-Ignorant about hospital and fundraising nuances.

R. Trigger Points: Lies trigger emotional turmoil for Abigail.

S. Coping Mechanism: Channels anger into manipulation and investigative pursuits.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

BWTV-AI Module 1 – Lesson 9: Inviting Obsession Through Open Loops

Sylvia’s Big Picture Open Loops

What I learned doing this assignment is…What’s strange is that I asked AI for more specifics and it gave me more generalities. I love this “loops” thing. I must delve into it more. This is a great and eye opening assignment.

Assignment 1 Sample Show:

Big Open Loops:

How will she survive? Will she get adopted? What exactly happened to her mom? Why is the orphan staff such psychos? What’s will the drugs? Will she get addicted? Her buddy, is she her friend or is she her foe? What’s with the chess? How does she become so great at it? Will she understand boys/girls romantic relationships? Will be compromise herself from her curiosity and get herself “in trouble”?

Assignment 2 My show:

I’m writing a TV Series that is [Format/Genre] about [Concept] and [Conflict] with [Lead Characters]. Can you generate [Open Loops] and setups that could play out over the course of Season

1. Definition of “Open Loops”: Questions that can only be answered in future episodes. An open loop is a rhetorical device to instill curiosity by creating anticipation for what will come next.

Open Loops opportunities:

GOALS: • New goals? • Goals related to the big picture? • Crushed goals? • Competition / conflict around goals?

CONSEQUENCES: • Are they going to be caught? • Problems created from past actions? • Good plans gone wrong?

SOLVING PROBLEMS: • What is the major problem for this character? • What are they trying to solve? • Major change imposed on character? • Previous solutions cause new problems?

RELATIONSHIPS: • Relationships in peril? • New relationships forming? • Conflict inside relationships? • Relationships changing?

DANGER / SURVIVAL / RISKS: • Can they survive X? • Putting themselves in danger / making dangerous decisions? • Who else is pulled into their danger? • Internal dangers (drug addiction, need for medicine, inner demons)?

Format/Genre = one hour/dramedy

Concept / Conflict=In the world of charity galas and romantic mishaps, a woman’s philanthropic journey uncovers hospital secrets, challenges gossip-loving friends, and with her estranged daughter’s resistance, threatens to unveil the mysteries of her past. Sub-World: Ghostly Guardians of Pediatric Patients

Lead Characters =Emily the mother and her daughter Abigail

AI:

**Open Loops Opportunities:**

**GOALS:**

1. New Goals: Abigail starts a charity project but faces unexpected challenges.

2. Big Picture Goals: Emily aims to expose a corrupt hospital executive.

3. Crushed Goals: Abigail’s attempt to reconnect with her mother faces setbacks.

4. Competition/Conflict: A rival philanthropist challenges Emily’s fundraising efforts.

**CONSEQUENCES:**

1. Caught: Abigail risks exposure when digging into the hospital’s secrets.

2. Past Actions Problems: Emily’s past cover-ups lead to a mysterious threat.

3. Plans Gone Wrong: A well-intentioned gala to save the hospital creates chaos.

**SOLVING PROBLEMS:**

1. Major Problem: Emily discovers a child’s ghost seeking justice in the hospital.

2. Trying to Solve: Abigail investigates the ghostly presence, unveiling more secrets.

3. Imposed Change: Hospital management changes, affecting Emily’s charity events.

4. New Problems: Solutions to past mysteries reveal a more significant conspiracy.

**RELATIONSHIPS:**

1. Relationships in Peril: Abigail’s investigation strains her bond with Emily.

2. New Relationships: Emily befriends a nurse with ties to the hospital’s secrets.

3. Conflict Inside Relationships: Gossip-loving friends betray Emily for personal gain.

4. Changing Relationships: Abigail learns a shocking truth about her father.

**DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:**

1. Survival: Emily faces a life-threatening situation during a charity event.

2. Dangerous Decisions: Abigail risks her safety to expose the hospital conspiracy.

3. Pulled Into Danger: Emily’s closest friend becomes entangled in the hospital secrets.

4. Internal Dangers: Abigail struggles with the emotional toll of her discoveries.

ME: Please answer again with more specifics

AI:

**Open Loops Opportunities:**

**GOALS:**

1. New Goals: Abigail launches a charity initiative for pediatric patients.

2. Big Picture Goals: Emily aims to expose financial misconduct within the hospital.

3. Crushed Goals: Abigail’s attempt to reunite at a gala gets disrupted.

4. Competition/Conflict: A rival philanthropist challenges Emily’s fundraising supremacy.

**CONSEQUENCES:**

1. Caught: Abigail’s snooping may attract the attention of hospital authorities.

2. Past Actions Problems: Emily’s cover-ups resurface, jeopardizing her reputation.

3. Plans Gone Wrong: A planned gala to reveal secrets takes an unexpected turn.

**SOLVING PROBLEMS:**

1. Major Problem: Emily encounters a ghost seeking justice for a deceased child.

2. Trying to Solve: Abigail investigates the mysterious ghostly presence.

3. Imposed Change: New hospital management disrupts Emily’s charity plans.

4. New Problems: Resolving past mysteries exposes a more significant conspiracy.

**RELATIONSHIPS:**

1. Relationships in Peril: Abigail’s investigation strains her relationship with Emily.

2. New Relationships: Emily befriends a nurse connected to hospital secrets.

3. Conflict Inside Relationships: Gossip-loving friends betray Emily for personal gain.

4. Changing Relationships: Abigail discovers a shocking truth about her father.

**DANGER/SURVIVAL/RISKS:**

1. Survival: Emily faces life-threatening danger during a high-profile charity event.

2. Dangerous Decisions: Abigail risks personal safety to expose the hospital conspiracy.

3. Pulled Into Danger: Emily’s closest friend becomes entangled in hospital secrets.

4. Internal Dangers: Abigail battles emotional turmoil from her shocking discoveries.

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Yup. Missing mine too. I’ve sent in two CS requests. Darn, I was on a roll too…

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Same here…

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

Hi Renee, I remember you from our PS77 class. Nice to see you here. You were very welcoming and gave great insights. Thank you!

[Sylvia Krawczyk]

I don’t have the BWTV with AI in my classes either–no video. I didn’t have this forum page either until I sent in to Support. Still waiting on the class to show up. I know they can be slow.